Bug fixes

* Fixed sprite positioning in some events
* Fixed story inconsistencies, spelling mistakes, and grammar in some events
* Fixed leading house checks in some events

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy

@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ label hg_pf_sex_T6_intro_E1:
     her "Of course, I mind, [genie_name]!" ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid")
     her "I am not a prostitute!"
     gen "But you'll do it anyway??" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    if gryffindor < hufflepuff or gryffindor < slytherin or gryffindor < ravenclaw:
+    if not is_in_lead(gryffindor):
         her "Gryffindor is falling behind again..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
     else:
         her "I have to make sure Gryffindor stays in the lead..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1:
     call play_music("chipper_doodle")
 
     gen "Alright then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "Just tell me some news about you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Just tell me some news about yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "*Ehm*... Alright..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
     her "I just stand here and talk then...? Like this?" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     pause.8
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T1_E1:
     call play_music("chipper_doodle")
 
     gen "Alright then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "Just tell me some news about you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Just tell me some more news about yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Here in the middle, right? I remember..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     pause.8
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy

@@ -1053,7 +1053,7 @@ label nt_he_hermione_E1:
     ton "Now that's surprising." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R")
     gen "No he literally couldn't believe it... He thought I was lying at first." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Although after he stopped laughing like a maniac..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "He did figure out quite quickly that the ministry probably wouldn't have sent a full fletched auror for something like this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "He did figure out quite quickly that the ministry probably wouldn't have sent a full-fledged Auror for a minor case like this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "Well, what can I say... I'm an open book." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
     ton "I'm sure you'll both find out the benefits of having me around soon enough..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "R")
     gen "I'm sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ label nt_he_hermione_E1:
     ton "Maybe I can be of help with her?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
     ton "I can be very convincing." ("horny", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "What are you suggesting?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    ton "To persuade her into having a try of it herself, for a start..." ("open", "base", "base", "R")
+    ton "To persuade her into giving it a try before being judgemental, for a start..." ("open", "base", "base", "R")
     ton "Convince her that trading favours isn't all bad." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "That would indeed be very helpful. She's stubborn in that regard." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "You don't have to tell me. She's been lecturing me about those \"sexual favours\" since the very day I got here..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R")
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E6:
     gen "What is it, miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Well... *Ehm*." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
 
-    if gryffindor < slytherin:
+    if not is_in_lead(gryffindor):
         her "You see... The Gryffindor house is not in the lead anymore..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
     else:
         her "You see... The Gryffindor house is struggling with points..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
@@ -1166,6 +1166,8 @@ label hermione_intro_E6:
     $ renpy.music.set_pause(False, channel="music")
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 1.0)
 
+    gen "(Way to go Tonks!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+
     menu:
         "\"You mean like a sexual favour?\"":
             her "*Ehm*... I'm not sure..." ("angry", "wink", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
@@ -1433,20 +1435,20 @@ label hermione_intro_E6:
     with d3
 
     if current_favor == "show_tongue":
-        her "{size=-4}(*Hmm*...){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+        her "{size=-4}(*Hmm*...){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
         her "{size=-4}(Students show teachers their tongues all the time...){/size}" ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
         her "{size=-4}(Although that's usually when the teacher is not looking...){/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "R_soft")
         her "{size=-4}(But there is nothing wrong with what I did today...){/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "L")
         her "{size=-4}(I earned my house extra points...){/size}" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
     elif current_favor == "stand_there":
-        her "{size=-4}(I can just stand there and let the professor look at me...){/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+        her "{size=-4}(I can just stand there and let the professor look at me...){/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
         her "{size=-4}(There is nothing wrong with that... nothing at all...){/size}" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid")
     elif current_favor == "silly_face":
-        her "{size=-4}(Stupid face...){/size}" ("silly", "base", "base", "squint", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+        her "{size=-4}(Stupid face...){/size}" ("silly", "base", "base", "squint", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
         her "{size=-4}(Stupid face...){/size}" ("disgust", "happy", "base", "squint")
         her "{size=-4}(I need to practise this.){/size}" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
     elif current_favor == "bad_girl":
-        her "{size=-4}(I'm a bad girl...){/size}" ("angry", "base", "angry", "stare", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+        her "{size=-4}(I'm a bad girl...){/size}" ("angry", "base", "angry", "stare", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
         her "{size=-4}(I am a very bad girl...){/size}" ("base", "base", "angry", "stare")
         her "{size=-4}(Yes, I can say things like that easily...){/size}" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
         her "{size=-4}(I guess I'm a born actress...){/size}" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/tutoring.rpy

@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ label hg_tutor_E2:
     gen "Miss Granger, time for your first lesson." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Yes, professor." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
     gen "Have you thought about what we discussed?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Not really, I'm not sure what you mean by \"emotions\"." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
+    her "Not really, I'm not sure what you meant by increasing magic ability through \"emotions\"." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "{size=-2}(You'll learn soon enough, girl.){/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "For example, what was your state of mind when you heard those rumours about the Slytherin girls?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Please don't bring that up, sir! it really makes me mad!" ("clench", "base", "worried", "stare")
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ label hg_tutor_E2:
     gen "Knowledge, Miss Granger, knowledge..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "I am by far the most knowledgeable of my peers, professor. What more can you ask?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
     gen "......{w=0.5}Miss Granger, did we not discuss this already? You need to accept you still have much to learn." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "I'm tired if repeating myself, let's finish it for tonight." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "I'm tired of repeating myself, let's finish it for tonight." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "What? So soon?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "There are other students requiring my attention, you're not the only one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Don't tell me you're planning on tutoring one of those harlots from Slytherin, professor?" ("normal", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -210,8 +210,9 @@ label hg_tutor_E2:
 
     call her_walk("door", "base")
 
-    her "{size=-4}(Filthy whores...){/size}" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+    her "{size=-4}(Filthy whores...){/size}" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
-    her "{size=-4}(Oh, I should not talk like that...{w=0.5} but it feels so good!){/size}" ("base", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "{size=-4}(Oh, I should not talk like that...{w=0.5} but it feels good to let my emotions out!){/size}" ("base", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "{size=-4}(Maybe professor is onto something, after all...){/size}" ("soft", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
 
     call her_chibi("leave")
 
@@ -250,7 +251,7 @@ label hg_tutor_E3:
 
     call her_walk("door", "base")
 
-    her "{size=-4}(*Hmm*... I wonder what he {b}was{/b} thinking about.){/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
+    her "{size=-4}(*Hmm*... I wonder what he {b}was{/b} thinking about.){/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush", xpos="far_right", ypos="head", flip=True, trans=d3)
     her "{size=-4}(Probably all the problems caused by those harlots.){/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush")
     her "{size=-4}(Well, I will never be like them, so no need to worry.){/size}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush")
 

game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy

@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E2:
     gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "You talking about Mad-eye?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid")
     gen "I can see perfectly fine, dear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    ton "Alastor Moody is the auror that taught me." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
+    ton "I'm talking about Alastor Moody, my mentor." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "Oh, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "(His parents must have hated him...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     #gen "(What's wrong with a normal name... like Will Smith, or Robin Williams?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -325,12 +325,12 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E2:
     gen "So...{w=0.3} He's a racist?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "No, but he's old... I think he should just retire to be honest." ("open", "base", "base", "downR")
     ton "His methods have gotten progressively more nefarious..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R")
-    ton "Some would argue he should be locked up himself, for all the things that he did to catch his targets..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down")
+    ton "Some would argue he should lock up himself, for all the things that he did to catch his targets..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down")
     gen "And you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "Me? What about me?" ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "You wouldn't say what we do is unethical as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "Did you start drinking before I got here?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "L")
-    gen "I never stop..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "I never stopped..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     ton "..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "up")
 
     jump end_tonks_hangout

game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy

@@ -793,11 +793,11 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E2:
     sna "Why would the Ministry have sent a full-fledged Auror, to deal with some eccentric insinuations made by some petty student..." ("snape_16")
     gen "Shouldn't they?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Just because of some silly rumour about teachers having sexual intercourse with their students?" ("snape_34")
-    gen "And that's not a reasonable enough concern to send somebody to look into?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "And that's not a reasonable enough concern to send somebody to look into it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "It's the Ministry we're talking about...{w=0.8} They don't give a shit..." ("snape_30")
     sna "They wouldn't even believe it if \"you-know-who\" were to make a return..." ("snape_31")
     gen "Who?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    sna "That Tonks had to be the only Ministry personnel that saw some truth in Granger's letters..." ("snape_35")
+    sna "That Tonks had to be the only Ministry personnel seeing some truth in Granger's letters..." ("snape_35")
     sna "What if she specifically requested to be sent here to investigate?" ("snape_03")
     gen "She might have..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "So...{w=0.4} what does she want?" ("snape_04")
@@ -810,13 +810,13 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E2:
     sna "How exactly did you end up in this situation with her?" ("snape_04")
     gen "I don't know... It just... happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "She pretty much figured everything out by herself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "Straight away even guessed that I'm a Genie..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Straight away. She even guessed that I'm a Genie..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "So she knows everything? How did she--" ("snape_03")
     gen "It appears the \"illusion charm\" wasn't perfect. She momentarily got a glimpse through it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "That's impressive... perhaps I didn't give her enough credit..." ("snape_01")
 
-    sna "If what you're telling me about her intentions are true..." ("snape_03")
+    sna "If what you're telling me about her intentions is true..." ("snape_03")
-    sna "Maybe she could even be persuaded to help with the Granger situation..." ("snape_05")
+    sna "Maybe she could be persuaded to help with the Granger situation..." ("snape_05")
 
     #if nt_he.hermione_E1:
     #    gen "Way ahead of you!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -828,7 +828,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E2:
     sna "What a wicked bitch!" ("snape_13")
     sna "If only we were selling favours back then..." ("snape_46")
     sna "You know what they say about students from Hufflepuff..." ("snape_20")
-    sna "They are quite the \"hard-working\" bunch!" ("snape_21")
+    sna "They always come last!" ("snape_21")
     gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "I'm calling dibs on her!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "You do what?" ("snape_14")