Proofreading

game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ label sus_reaction_unequip_fail(item):
         sus @ cheeks blush "I'm N--{w=0.2} not comfortable with that, [name_genie_susan]..." ("open", "happy", "sad", "right")
 
     elif item.type == "bra":
-        sus @ cheeks blush "P--{w=0.2} please, I can't be D--{w=0.2} doing that [name_genie_susan].." ("soft", "happy", "worried", "down")
+        sus @ cheeks blush "P--{w=0.2} please, I can't be D--{w=0.2} doing that, [name_genie_susan]..." ("soft", "happy", "worried", "down")
 
     elif item.type == "top":
         sus @ cheeks blush "I don't know if this is a good idea..." ("annoyed", "happy", "sad", "mid")
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
     ## Muggle Casual Outfit ##
     ##########################
     elif item == sus_outfit_muggle_casual1:
-        gen "Could you put on your normal clothing for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Could you put on your normal clothing for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         sus "What do you--{w=0.2} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Which clothing, [name_genie_susan]?" ("soft", "happy", "raised", "mid")
         gen "The boring sweater one, and the jeans." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         sus "My muggle clothing?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid")
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
         gen "How about you put on this Priestess outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         sus @ cheeks blush "A--{w=0.2} A Priestess outfit, [name_genie_susan]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid")
         gen "Indeed." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        sus @ cheeks blush "Why would you-- I mean... Sorry but I'm a bit confused." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down")
+        sus @ cheeks blush "Why would you-- I mean... Sorry, but I'm a bit confused." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down")
         gen "Luckily, you've got me here for guidance." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Now put the dress on." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         sus @ cheeks blush "Oh--{w=0.2} Okay then..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid")
@@ -269,11 +269,11 @@ label sus_reaction_blacklist(item):
 
     if "panties" in item.blacklist and susan.is_worn("panties"):
         sus @ cheeks blush "M--{w=0.2} My panties..." ("angry", "happy", "sad", "down")
-        gen "Oh, right... Yeah you'd need to do something about those..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Oh, right... Yeah, you'd need to do something about those..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         sus @ cheeks blush "I'd have to--{w=0.4} To..." ("soft", "happy", "sad", "downR")
 
     gen "How about just giving it a try?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "If you don't like it you can always change back, would that be okay?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "If you don't like it, you can always change back, would that be okay?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sus @ cheeks blush "Alright..." ("base", "happy", "base", "down")
     sus @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid")