diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy
index d501f758..e814594d 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy
@@ -214,48 +214,53 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
     her "*Ehm*... Sort of..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
     gen "Sort of?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Yes... *Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    her "Well, I decided to try and flash them to this Hufflepuff boy..."
+    her "Well, I've had my eyes on this Hufflepuff guy for a while and decided he could potentially be the someone that I try it on..."
+    gen "You've \"had your eyes on him\" have you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    her "Yes, as he's always the person to arrive to his classes first, I made the assumption I might be able to catch him alone."
+    gen "Right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     show her_flash_public eyes_open_right mouth_frown zorder 15 as cg
     hide hermione
     with fade
 
-    her "I've been waiting for the right moment..."
-    her "I was worried that something would go wrong..."
-    her "And, of course, everything that could - did..."
-    her "I've noticed a guy from Hufflepuff heading in my direction."
+    her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff common-room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..."
+    her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..."
+    her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..."
+    her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..."
+    her "Well... All my plans sort of fell apart."
 
     show her_flash_public mouth_soft eyes_open_forward npc_pose1 as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "\"Excuse me...\" I said to get his attention."
+    her "Once he got close enough, the only thing I managed to let out was a small stutter to try and get his attention."
 
     show her_flash_public as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "He turned around, looking at me questioningly."
+    her "Fortunately for me, it was enough, and he stopped to look at me questioningly."
 
     show her_flash_public npc_pose2 hermione_pose2 mouth_smile effects_question as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "At first I only pulled up my vest..."
+    her "I wasn't really sure what to say, so I just put on a smile and went for it."
+    her "Albeit in my nervousness, I only managed to pull up my vest..."
 
     show her_flash_public hermione_pose3 eyes_open_left effects_questions as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "Then I tried to pull my shirt up as well..."
+    her "In this moment of confusion, I quickly took the opportunity to try and correct my mistake."
 
     show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose4 eyes_clenched blush_heavy effects_exclamation as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "And one of my breasts got entangled in the fabric and was pulled up along with the shirt..."
-    her "So only one of my breasts was naked and I was desperately trying to free the other one."
+    her "But even then, I only managed to free one of my breasts..."
+    her "And as I desperately tried to free the other one--"
 
     show her_flash_public npc_pose4 eyes_open_right mouth_soft as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "I've heard other students around the corner."
-    her "So I had to fix my clothes back into place quickly..."
+    her "We were suddenly interrupted by the sounds of the other Hufflepuff students footsteps around the corner."
+    her "So, before even got to properly take in his reaction, I had to put my clothes back into place, and quickly."
 
     show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose3 eyes_clenched mouth_soft as cg
     with d5
@@ -263,7 +268,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
     pause 1
 
     # TODO: Man running sounds
-    show her_flash_public -npc_pose3 -effects_exclamation hermione_pose2 eyes_clenched as cg
+    show her_flash_public -npc_pose3 -effects_exclamation eyes_clenched as cg
     with d5
 
     pause 1
@@ -276,20 +281,22 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
     show her_flash_public npc_pose5 effects_herquestion eyes_open_forward mouth_frown as cg
     with d5
 
-    her "But before I could even finish, the guy was gone..."
+    her "And neither did I get one afterwards... Once I finished, he was already gone."
 
     hide cg
     with fade
 
     gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "What about the boy? Did he see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Well, I think he may have seen one of them..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    her "But from the way he was looking at me..."
-    her "I doubt that he understood that the whole commotion was for his benefit."
+    gen "So, did the guy even see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    her "Well, I think he may have seen the one..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
+    her "Although, from the way he was looking at me..."
+    her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit."
     her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
     her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
+    gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     show screen blktone
     with d3