From 0ec1c4e4e83c32f6db716ab2c2a7aadab445b95b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2022 01:38:55 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Public Request - Flashing Writing * Improved dialogue and pacing further to go along with new art. --- .../events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy | 47 +++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy index d501f758..e814594d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy @@ -214,48 +214,53 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: her "*Ehm*... Sort of..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Sort of?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... *Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Well, I decided to try and flash them to this Hufflepuff boy..." + her "Well, I've had my eyes on this Hufflepuff guy for a while and decided he could potentially be the someone that I try it on..." + gen "You've \"had your eyes on him\" have you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Yes, as he's always the person to arrive to his classes first, I made the assumption I might be able to catch him alone." + gen "Right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_flash_public eyes_open_right mouth_frown zorder 15 as cg hide hermione with fade - her "I've been waiting for the right moment..." - her "I was worried that something would go wrong..." - her "And, of course, everything that could - did..." - her "I've noticed a guy from Hufflepuff heading in my direction." + her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff common-room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..." + her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..." + her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..." + her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..." + her "Well... All my plans sort of fell apart." show her_flash_public mouth_soft eyes_open_forward npc_pose1 as cg with d5 - her "\"Excuse me...\" I said to get his attention." + her "Once he got close enough, the only thing I managed to let out was a small stutter to try and get his attention." show her_flash_public as cg with d5 - her "He turned around, looking at me questioningly." + her "Fortunately for me, it was enough, and he stopped to look at me questioningly." show her_flash_public npc_pose2 hermione_pose2 mouth_smile effects_question as cg with d5 - her "At first I only pulled up my vest..." + her "I wasn't really sure what to say, so I just put on a smile and went for it." + her "Albeit in my nervousness, I only managed to pull up my vest..." show her_flash_public hermione_pose3 eyes_open_left effects_questions as cg with d5 - her "Then I tried to pull my shirt up as well..." + her "In this moment of confusion, I quickly took the opportunity to try and correct my mistake." show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose4 eyes_clenched blush_heavy effects_exclamation as cg with d5 - her "And one of my breasts got entangled in the fabric and was pulled up along with the shirt..." - her "So only one of my breasts was naked and I was desperately trying to free the other one." + her "But even then, I only managed to free one of my breasts..." + her "And as I desperately tried to free the other one--" show her_flash_public npc_pose4 eyes_open_right mouth_soft as cg with d5 - her "I've heard other students around the corner." - her "So I had to fix my clothes back into place quickly..." + her "We were suddenly interrupted by the sounds of the other Hufflepuff students footsteps around the corner." + her "So, before even got to properly take in his reaction, I had to put my clothes back into place, and quickly." show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose3 eyes_clenched mouth_soft as cg with d5 @@ -263,7 +268,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: pause 1 # TODO: Man running sounds - show her_flash_public -npc_pose3 -effects_exclamation hermione_pose2 eyes_clenched as cg + show her_flash_public -npc_pose3 -effects_exclamation eyes_clenched as cg with d5 pause 1 @@ -276,20 +281,22 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: show her_flash_public npc_pose5 effects_herquestion eyes_open_forward mouth_frown as cg with d5 - her "But before I could even finish, the guy was gone..." + her "And neither did I get one afterwards... Once I finished, he was already gone." hide cg with fade gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "What about the boy? Did he see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, I think he may have seen one of them..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "But from the way he was looking at me..." - her "I doubt that he understood that the whole commotion was for his benefit." + gen "So, did the guy even see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Well, I think he may have seen the one..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Although, from the way he was looking at me..." + her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit." her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show screen blktone with d3