diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy index b0ccc899..432a73ca 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy @@ -776,7 +776,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes...{w=0.4}*Ah*..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up") her "[name_genie_hermione]{heart}... I'm--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I'm cumming!{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead") - her "{heart}{heart}{heart}!!!{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead") + her @ cheeks blush "{heart}{heart}{heart}!!!{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead") with kissiris with hpunch play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg" @@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post") - her "*Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart}...{heart}" ("grin", "squint", "worried", "ahegao") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart}...{heart}" ("grin", "squint", "worried", "ahegao") with kissiris with hpunch play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg" @@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post") - her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead") $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_transition") with kissiris with hpunch @@ -803,8 +803,8 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post") - her "*Mmmmmmh*!!!" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - her "........................" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "up") + her @ cheeks blush "*Mmmmmmh*!!!" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") + her @ cheeks blush "........................" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "up") stop background nar "You take your hands off Hermione pussy and then wipe her love-juices across the side of her leg." @@ -816,27 +816,29 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: if _time_difference < 60: gen "I'm not sure how you did it, but you finished in less than a minute." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Whoa... Really?" + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Really?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes... If I didn't see it happen myself, I would've thought you cheated somehow..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif _time_difference < 360: - gen "You finished in under six minutes... Very impresive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - elif _time_difference <= 720: - gen "Looks like you finished under your average time... Congratulations" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh... *Ehm*... Thank you..." + gen "You finished in under six minutes... Very impressive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + elif _time_difference < 720: + gen "Looks like you finished under your average time... Congratulations." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") elif _time_difference < 3600: - gen "Although... it appears you didn't beat your average time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh..." - gen "No worries... There's always next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "That said... it appears you didn't beat your average time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "Oh..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + gen "No worries...{w=0.4} There's always next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "I'm not exactly sure how this happened..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But you were masturbating for over an hour..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Ah*... But... How is that even possible?" - gen "I'm not sure... Maybe they just left for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Who's they, [name_genie_hermione]?" + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} But--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} How is that even possible?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "I'm not sure... Maybe the player just left for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Who--{w=0.2} Who are you talking about, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Don't worry about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Alright then, [name_hermione_genie]... If you're finished..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "dead") her @ cheeks blush "Yes...{w=0.4} yes, [name_genie_hermione]...{w=0.4} Just give me a moment...{heart}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") her @ cheeks blush "(How will I ever be able to achieve this... on my own...{heart})" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy index 9dd2bee1..051729cd 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt: else: if _events_filtered_completed_any: gen "I need you to go make some new friends at the Slytherin house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again [name_genie_hermione]?" + her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again, [name_genie_hermione]?" gen "That's exactly what I need you to do today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Just do it properly this time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Must I really do this [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E2: her "He called me a \"Patronising Gryffindor Whore\", [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") gen "Did you threaten to report him as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "*sigh*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Sigh*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anything else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, there was one more incident but the outcome was pretty much the same..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "\"Gryffindor whore\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E3: her "And one of them even exposed herself inappropriately to the players, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "I cannot believe our school accepts such behaviour..." gen "So... how did this captivating drama end?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I just left [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "I just left, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") menu: gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy index 4c8ce97a..2bf5175d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_intro: her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Did you complete your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I did as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..." + her "I did as you asked, [name_genie_hermione]..." if _events_completed_all: # If you have seen all events in this tier once, you get the choice to skip it. menu: @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick "\"Here are your points though.\"": gen "Know that I am a merciful master-- I mean a headmaster." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Really?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") - her "Thank you so much [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + her "Thank you so much, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") "\"No points for you!\"": diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/have_sex.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/have_sex.rpy index c2ae26b2..476803f2 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/have_sex.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/have_sex.rpy @@ -91,14 +91,9 @@ label end_hg_pr_sex: # Inner monologue if _events_completed_all: - show screen blktone - with d3 her "(I did it... I finally did it.)" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=d3) - hide screen blktone - with d3 - call her_chibi("leave") label .quick_end: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy index c9651f18..37a6c1c4 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy @@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ label hermione_favor_menu: pass else: if states.sna.level <= 10: - gen "What do you mean in the lead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What do you mean \"in the lead\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Explain yourself, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "With the current points distribution, I am certain getting the house cup for Gryffindor will be just a formality." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione], but I don't need any more points." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")