From 309aa12e1ef55f6b20c52279f6ac487227eec046 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Sat, 18 Mar 2023 16:14:56 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Writing improvements and fixes * Improved Cho Gryffindor match leadup public favours. * Fixed some calls showing multiple ">". * Removed bld and blktone in some places where it's replaced by inner thought and narrator character. * Changed Hermione calling lollipops "Candy" since she's not American. --- game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy | 3 - .../cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy | 113 +++++++------- .../cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy | 142 +++++++++--------- .../cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy | 32 ++-- .../cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy | 38 +++-- game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy | 3 - .../hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy | 10 +- game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy | 19 +-- game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy | 3 - game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy | 2 +- 10 files changed, 172 insertions(+), 193 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy index 24c93254..0afe453b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy @@ -515,8 +515,6 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): label ast_mood(value=0): - show screen blktone - with d3 if value > 0: if value == 1: @@ -536,5 +534,4 @@ label ast_mood(value=0): call describe_mood_after_gift(was_negative, ast_mood, value) - hide screen blktone return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy index c3f0c00b..9bd921ad 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy @@ -187,13 +187,13 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: gen "Sort of... He won't be the main goal of this operation." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Then, what is?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Miss Granger is quite protective of her friends isn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I guess... The few times I've seen them without her she's usually just around the corner talking to some teacher or another." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + cho "I guess... The few times I've seen them without her, she's usually just around the corner talking to some teacher or another." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") gen "Then use those moments to your advantage... Miss Granger is also part of the game isn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If you can somehow spark that jealousy or protectiveness of her friends..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Angering her enough could transfer to the game... And since she'll be stuck in the commentator booth the whole time she won't be able to pull them away from you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Angering her enough could transfer to the game... And since she'll be stuck in the commentator booth the whole time, she won't be able to pull them away from you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("mad", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "That might actually work..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "R") - cho "If anything it gives me an excuse to piss her off..." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "If anything, it gives me an excuse to piss her off..." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Not that I've needed one previously." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") #smirk gen "Then it's settled, report to me in the evening as usual." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Will do!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: cho "..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") #annoyed gen "*Ahem*... Yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Try and really get under her skin this time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "That shouldn't be very hard seeing how she reacted last time..." ("smile", "base", "raised", "R") + cho "That shouldn't be very hard, seeing how she reacted last time..." ("smile", "base", "raised", "R") cho "Wish me luck!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Good luck." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_ron: gen "Great, let's hear it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I found the perfect opportunity to approach him after practice as Hermione was arguing with Madam Hooch about some rule or another." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") cho "So as she was busy, I went up and praised him on his excellent goal keeping." ("smile", "base", "raised", "mid") - cho "He was quite taken aback by this at first and I doubt he ever recie--" ("smile", "narrow", "raised", "R") + cho "He was quite taken aback by this at first, and I doubt he's ever recie--" ("smile", "narrow", "raised", "R") gen "Surely you didn't just compliment him... That won't be enough to annoy Miss Granger!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course not!" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "The goal was for him to check me out... Which I soon caught him doing." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -835,19 +835,19 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_ron: cho "I know!" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Getting caught checking someone out that quickly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "Anyhow, it was if he was trying to stare through my clothing and he was barely paying any attention." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "Anyhow, it was as if he was trying to stare through my clothing... He was barely paying any attention." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Been there, done that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah, no wonder Hermione is so annoyed at him all the time..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") cho "It was at that point Madam Hooch turned and walked away from Hermione." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - cho "So without any warning I grabbed and planted Ron's hands on my breasts." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "So without any warning, I grabbed and planted Ron's hands on my breasts." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Nice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "He was so taken aback by this he just froze." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "He was so taken aback by this, he just froze." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "You should've seen Hermione's expression as she turned and noticed us! It was if someone had flipped a switch in her brain." ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Jealousy no doubt..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah right, as I said there's no way anything is going on between those two." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I wasn't talking about...{w=0.4} Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Please, continue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Before I could even blink she has rushed up next to us..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Before I could even blink, she had rushed up next to us..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "And then she smacked Ron right across the face!" ("smile", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "*Hah*!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean... How could she hit another student like that?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_ron: gen "Excellent work!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Thank you." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") #blushes gen "Hopefully we can remind her about this during the game, spark that jealousy once more." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "If it annoys Hermione then I'm all for it..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "R") + cho "If it annoys Hermione, then I'm all for it..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "R") gen "Anything else to report?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No, that's about it." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Great, then that will be all for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -883,9 +883,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_harry: gen "Welcome back...{w=0.3} Mission success?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes!" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "I've been stalk--{w=0.4} eh...{w=0.2} following them... And sure enough, I managed to find the perfect opportunity!" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - cho "I was flying by the divination tower and noticed that Hermione and her friends were talking at one of the windows." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "With Ron and Hermione's backs turned towards me it was easy enough to grab Harry's attention." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "I've been stalk--{w=0.4} *Ehh*...{w=0.2} Following them... And sure enough, I managed to find the perfect opportunity!" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + cho "I was flying by the divination tower and noticed that Hermione and her friends were standing by one of the windows." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Luckily Ron and Hermione's backs were turned towards me, so it was easy to grab Harry's attention without them noticing me." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Nice, gave him a bit of a show then I presume?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course..." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R") #smirk cho "And I found something out." ("crooked_smile", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -905,8 +905,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_harry: gen "Whoa!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*U ikhe*?" ("open_wide_tongue", "wink", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Tongue still out gen "Very much...{w=0.4} But what about Potter?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Naturally he completely lost focus on their conversation and Hermione soon followed his gaze, noticing me out the window." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") - cho "And after staring daggers at me, she yanked the boys away by their robes almost making them tumble down the stairs." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Naturally he completely lost focus on their conversation, so Hermione followed his gaze and finally spotted me through the window." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") + cho "And after staring daggers at me, she yanked the boys away by their robes, almost making them tumble down the stairs." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Looks like you have her well jealous at this point!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #This is a bit of a British slang gen "Hopefully this should be enough to affect her during the finals." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Let's hope so..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "R") @@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "I'm in quite a pickle... A student was tricked into eating one of the weasel twins' sweets." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A sweet?" gen "Yes, or a candy... whatever you'd call it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "The sweet in question made her turn blue and swell up like a balloon, ruining her clothes in the process." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The sweet in question made her skin turn blue and swell up like a balloon, ruining her clothes in the process." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I see... that's an unfortunate situation indeed." gen "So I require a Female Ravenclaw school uniform." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Let's see...{w=0.5} Female Ravenclaw uniform...{w=0.4} Looks like I'm running a bit low on those at the moment, what size is she?" @@ -997,7 +997,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "No-no, she's a Human. That's her size." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I require her clothing measurements..." gen "Oh, I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Or the name of this student, If I've had her fitted before I'll have it stored in my records." + maf "Or the name of this student, If I've had her fitted before, then I should have her measurements stored in my records." gen "Cho Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/pageflip.ogg" maf "Cho Chang..." @@ -1019,27 +1019,27 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: menu: gen "In that case I'll have the..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "-Slytherin outfit-": + "-Slytherin uniform-": $ d_flag_02 = 1 maf "Are you sure?" gen "Absolutely, she'll look great in green!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But just so I know... how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw outfit ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But just so I know... how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw uniform ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "-Gryffindor outfit-": + "-Gryffindor uniform-": $ d_flag_02 = 2 maf "Are you sure?" gen "Of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She's best friends with Miss Granger so I'm sure she wouldn't mind." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But just so I know... how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw outfit ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She's best friends with Miss Granger, so I'm sure she wouldn't mind." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But just so I know... how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw uniform ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "-Hufflepuff outfit-": + "-Hufflepuff uniform-": $ d_flag_02 = 3 maf "Are you sure?" gen "Seems like the safest option all things considered." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "How long will it take to get the Ravenclaw outfit ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How long will it take to get the Ravenclaw uniform ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-\"perfect\" Outfit-" if d_flag_01: $ d_flag_02 = 4 @@ -1048,14 +1048,14 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It looks as if it was made just for her." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, you're the judge here." - gen "One more thing, how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw outfit ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "One more thing, how long will it take to get the Ravenclaw uniform ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Ask for another option-" if not d_flag_01: # Genie finds a smurfette costume $ d_flag_01 = True gen "I don't think she'd be so keen on wearing another house's colours." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Well, I don't recommend it but if that's the case you can have a look through the pile over there." + maf "Well, I don't recommend it, but if that's the case, you can have a look through the pile over there." maf "I have a few miscellaneous pieces lying around that she could borrow for the time being." maf "There's not a lot to pick from, but you can take anything you need from it." gen "Great." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1075,11 +1075,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: maf "I'll have it done and delivered by tomorrow morning." gen "Great, that will be all then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "Until next time..." call blkfade - maf "Until next time..." - # Add smurfette outfit to the shop if was not picked during the event if not d_flag_01: $ cho_outfit_smurfette.price = 100 @@ -1102,7 +1101,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "Finally..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid", trans=d3) if not fire_in_fireplace: - cho "I've been freezing my butt off and I couldn't figure out how to light the fire." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "I've been freezing my butt off, and I couldn't figure out how to light the fire." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Can't you use some spell for that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Where do you think I keep my wand?" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Well, most people hide it in their night stand or a drawer or something." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1119,10 +1118,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Got it right here, brings out the colour of your eyes for sure!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - call blktone play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" - nar " You hand the Slytherin uniform to Cho." - call hide_blktone + nar "You hand the Slytherin uniform to Cho." cho "Such a charmer..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") cho "I was worried that you'd pick out something--" ("open", "base", "base", "down") @@ -1213,9 +1210,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Speaking of colour..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You're not blue anymore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Finally..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "Hopefully everyone's gone to bed by now and I can sneak my way past without anyone noticing." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") + cho "Hopefully everyone's gone to bed by now, and I can sneak my way past without anyone noticing." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") cho "So, what do I do about my normal uniform?" ("open", "base", "base", "down") - gen "I've sorted it, Mafkin will have a new set delivered to your room in the morning." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've sorted it... Mafkin will have a new set delivered to your room in the morning." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh..." ("open", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "Thanks..." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR") cho "Good night then." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1226,12 +1223,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: # Gryffindor gen "Got it right here!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size so I took the next best thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size, so I chose the next best thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - call blktone play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" - nar " You hand the Gryffindor uniform to Cho." - call hide_blktone + nar "You hand the Gryffindor uniform to Cho." cho "Next best--" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Is that a Gryffindor uniform?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") #shocked @@ -1239,15 +1234,15 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "I...{w=0.5} I don't like Gryffindor!" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "downR", cheeks="blush") gen "What... but I thought Hermione was like your bestie." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Bestie?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid") - cho "She...{w=0.4} is...{w=0.4} not!" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "She...{w=0.4} Is...{w=0.4} Not!" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Oh..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: - "\"I could go back and fetch the Slytherin one instead\"": + "\"I could go back and fetch the Slytherin one instead...\"": cho "No!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "I mean... it's fine... you've already gone out of your way." ("angry", "wide", "base", "downR") + cho "I mean... It's fine... You've already gone out of your way." ("angry", "wide", "base", "downR") gen "You sure? It's not that far--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Yes... just hand me the clothes." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "Yes... Just hand me the clothes." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") show screen blkfade with fade @@ -1262,7 +1257,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "What do you think, do I pull off the red as well as...{w=0.6} Do I pull off the red?" ("open", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") gen "Looks great!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "They look a bit tight around the chest area, did I end up with a size too small?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Oh... no, it's fine... I'm just a bit cold still." ("horny", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") #Embarrassed + cho "Oh... No, it's fine... I'm just a bit cold still." ("horny", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") #Embarrassed gen "You do look a bit blue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Wait, I'm still..." ("upset", "wide", "angry", "down") @@ -1275,8 +1270,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "Good night..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") call cho_walk(action="leave") - "\"I'm sure none of the Gryffindors will spot you\"": - cho "If that's the case then why wear any clothes at all?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + "\"I'm sure none of the Gryffindors will spot you...\"": + cho "If that's the case, then why wear any clothes at all?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "That is an option..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "Give me those..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1298,18 +1293,16 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: call gen_chibi(flip=True) gen "Come ba--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Damn...{w=0.4} well at least she isn't angry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Damn...{w=0.4} Well at least she isn't angry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif d_flag_02 == 3: # Hufflepuff gen "Got it right here!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size so I went wish something mellow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size so I went with something mellow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - call blktone play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" - nar " You hand the Hufflepuff uniform to Cho." - call hide_blktone + nar "You hand the Hufflepuff uniform to Cho." cho "Mellow?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Wait, you don't mean..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") #Worried @@ -1323,10 +1316,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: menu: "\"So what?\"": cho "So what?!?" ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") - gen "You didn't have any problems using his weaknesses during the game so why do you care if he gets in trouble with his house?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You didn't have any problems using his weaknesses during the game, so why do you care if he gets in trouble with his house?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's different..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "How is it different?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'm sure his teammates weren't happy with him losing focus like that... fraternizing with the enemy..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm sure his teammates weren't happy with him losing focus like that... Fraternizing with the enemy..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "down") gen "They might already think he threw it on purpose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Whatever, just give me the clothes." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -1339,7 +1332,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: hide screen blkfade with fade - cho "I can't believe you turned this around on me like that... you're the one that made me do those things to begin with..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "downR") + cho "I can't believe you turned this around on me like that... You're the one that made me do those things to begin with..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "Don't hate the player, hate the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "R") cho "I'm leaving." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -1350,7 +1343,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "What!?" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "You heard me, make like a bee and buzz off!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And you better hurry up before those sweets wear off or you'll find it even harder to explain your current state." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "But... surely you can't be serious!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "But... Surely you can't be serious!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "I am neither Shirley nor Sirius..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Grrr*... I can't believe you!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -1369,13 +1362,13 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: $ cho_mood += 10 gen "So ungrateful..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "\"I'm sure none of the Hufflepuffs will spot you\"": + "\"I'm sure none of the Hufflepuffs will spot you...\"": cho "How can you be so sure about--" ("soft", "base", "angry", "downR") cho "Actually, you're right...{w=0.3} You're a genius!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I am?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course!" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid") cho "You know this castle inside out, it's very unlikely any Hufflepuff student would be anywhere near the route to the Ravenclaw dorm." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Oh yes... that's it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh yes... That's it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You know me, always got an ace up my sleeve!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ cho.set_body_hue(0) @@ -1406,15 +1399,13 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Got it right here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - call blktone play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" - nar " You hand the clothes to Cho." - call hide_blktone + nar "You hand the clothes to Cho." cho "Thank you, I knew I could count on--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "What is this?" ("open", "wide", "base", "down") gen "I know right!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I couldn't believe it when I found it. The perfect outfit for you!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I couldn't believe it when I found it. It's the perfect outfit for you!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You... are you serious? You actually expect me to wear this?" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Wait, don't tell me you don't like it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "down") @@ -1447,7 +1438,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "I'll just keep the wig for later then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ cho_mood += 10 - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", cho_outfit_smurfette) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", cho_outfit_smurfette) $ cho.equip(cho_outfit_last) $ cho.set_body_hue(0) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy index 010e135a..e1337d8e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy @@ -21,24 +21,25 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_start: jump cho_requests_menu - gen "I think it's time to manipulate the female members of the enemy team a bit and see if we can find some way to distract them during the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I think it's time to manipulate the female members of the enemy team a bit, and see if we can find some way to distract them during the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And how do you suggest we do that?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Well, the Slytherin \"brutes\" seemed to think they had a pretty good chance to get with you during the last game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They're idiots though, I barely had to do anything." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Which means it's even more important to try and entice those girls before the match itself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "raised", "down") - gen "It's all about throwing them off their game, like you said... if the girls won't get thrown off by you wearing some outfit then maybe an emotional... bond... would be more appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It's all about throwing them off their game, like you said..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If the girls won't get thrown off by you wearing some outfit, then maybe an emotional... Bond... Would be more appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Don't you think we'd have an easier time focusing on the boys?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "Sometimes the hard route is the right one to take... you shouldn't dismiss it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sometimes the hard route is the right one to take... You shouldn't dismiss it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Since those girls sound freaky...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "But Harry is the seeker and Ron is the keeper... wouldn't it be more useful if--" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "But Harry is the seeker and Ron is the keeper... Wouldn't it be more useful if--" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "I'm certain my reasoning is correct here, are you questioning your trainer?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") cho "No..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Great, then off you go..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Time to make your team proud!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Pride is important!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "...{w}I suppose..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "...{w} I suppose..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Wish me luck..." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Good luck..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -69,7 +70,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_start: cho "So, we're still set on targeting the girls?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Of course, I'm sure we got but a taste last time...{w=0.4} No pun intended." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "I hope you've remembered what you learned from her. This girl likes being treated rough so show some assertiveness with her and I'm sure she'll fall for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I hope you've remembered what you learned from her. This girl likes being treated rough, so show some assertiveness with her, and I'm sure she'll fall for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Okay..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") #looking down a bit worried gen "Assertiveness!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") #Changes from worried looking down to looking at genie @@ -106,16 +107,16 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_start: jump cho_requests_menu - gen "You seem to have gotten to know the Gryffindor girls quite well by now [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If you're not careful you might turn into one yourself." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You seem to have gotten to know the Gryffindor girls quite well by now, [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you're not careful, you might turn into one yourself." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "As if... Ravenclaw always comes first!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "You do? No shame in that!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So...{w=0.4} Today we're up against their team Captain, Angelina Johnson." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Once you've managed to bond with her you'll have no problem winning the cup." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Once you've managed to bond with her, I'm sure you'll have no problem winning the cup." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "We're so close I could almost taste it!" ("horny", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + cho "We're so close, I can almost taste it!" ("horny", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure you will!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Now go get her..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now, go get her..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes [name_genie_cho]!" ("smile", "base", "base", "R") else: # Repeatable events. @@ -159,16 +160,16 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_alicia: cho "So, I gestured her to come over to me as the other two entered the changing room..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Nicely done. Splitting up the group makes it less likely they'll gang up on you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's what I thought... and I felt pretty confident in my plan as she approached me." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "But before I even got a word out she had come up and kissed me on the lips!" ("quiver", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "But before I even got a word out, she had come up and kissed me on the lips!" ("quiver", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Whoa, wait what?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I thought the plan was for you to make the advances here..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You and me both!" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Do you know why she just came up and kissed you like that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, apparently she saw me when I entered the girls bathroom..." ("horny", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") - cho "And assumed I had followed her in there because I wanted to get in on the action..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Well, apparently she saw me when I entered the girls' bathroom..." ("horny", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") + cho "She must've assumed that I had followed her there to get in on the action..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Smart girl. She figured out you were perving on her!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'm not perving on anybody! I only followed her into that bathroom to gather information!" ("horny", "happyCl", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "But I'm sure you liked sneaking a peek at her moist muff regardless." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But I'm sure you liked sneaking a peek at her moist muff, regardless." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "How was I to know she wasn't wearing any panties..." ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") # annoyed gen "Be that as it may, this Alicia girl seems to be one step ahead of us..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, what happened next B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -199,7 +200,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_alicia: gen "And now I'd like you to entice the other two as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sure, no problem... I'll just walk up to one of them and they'd throw themselves at me, just like Spinnet did!" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") #Sarcastic gen "Great plan!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But for now you better get some rest and ready yourself to take on the other two." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But for now, you better get some rest and ready yourself to take on the other two." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Don't look so dejected, [name_cho_genie]. You had a beautiful girl kiss you today... surely you can't be disappointed by that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "It's...{w=0.4} it's not that...{w=0.4} I'm just used to it being me who..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -230,30 +231,30 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho "Of course..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Then how did it go? Tell me all the details!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "All the details..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") - cho "So...{w=0.4} Much like before, my plan was to follow Katie as she wandered off away from the others." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "So...{w=0.4} Much like before, my plan was to follow Katie as she wandered off, away from the others." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "And to no surprise... She was once again making her way down towards the lake." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") cho "So I ran up to her and questioned her on where she was headed, and she responded that she was just going for a walk to clear her head." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Yeah right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's what I said..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") - cho "So to try and catch her off guard I bluntly asked her if she wasn't going for another round with those tentacles." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "So, to try and catch her off guard I bluntly asked her if she wasn't going for another round with those tentacles." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Whoa, right to the point!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Yes, although she didn't even respond to it and just started walking again..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "So I pushed her further and asked what the Gryffindor house would think if they knew..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Yes, although she didn't even respond to it, and just started walking again..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "So I pushed her further, and asked what the Gryffindor house would think if they knew..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "But she just kept walking, completely ignoring me." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "I wasn't able to get through to her at all until I said that I would snitch to her captain unless she did something for me." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "I wasn't able to get through to her at all until I said that I would snitch to her captain, unless she did something for me." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "That's when she stopped in her tracks, eyed me up and down and asked what her punishment was going to be." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Such a naughty girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I know! That's not at all where I was going with the conversation." ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "What I hadn't realised during my failed attempts at confronting her she had been leading me off the path." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "What I hadn't realised during my failed attempts at confronting her, it that she had been leading me off the path." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "Because just as I was about to reply, I felt something tighten around my waist and suddenly I found myself dangling several feet off the ground!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "That's when I realised, she had led me all the way to the Whomping Willow!" ("clench", "happyCl", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "The whomping what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "That darn tree students are told to stay away from..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "It had grabbed both Katie and I, lifting us into the air... I thought we were done for." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "And for a brief moment we just dangled there until the silence was cut short by a loud snapping sound and a yell." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "That darn tree, students are told to stay away from..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "It had grabbed both Katie and I, and then lifted us into the air... I thought we were done for." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "And for a brief moment, we just dangled there, until the silence was cut short by a loud snapping sound and a yell." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Terrifying!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "It was! Until I realised the tree wasn't even trying to kill us..." ("upset", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "It had started to vigorously lash its branches about, smacking Katie...{w} and to my horror she was thoroughly enjoying the whole thing." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "It had started to vigorously lash its branches about, smacking Katie...{w} and to my horror, she was thoroughly enjoying the whole thing." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "A spanking tree? Seriously?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes!{w=0.4} And I'm sure this wasn't her first time doing this!" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "I couldn't believe what I was seeing, I just stared at her in disbelief..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -261,10 +262,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho "Smacked one of its branches across my breasts and stomach..." ("clench", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Surely a little bit of spanking wouldn't bother a girl as tough as you, would it?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course it doesn't! I've taken plenty of bruises playing Quidditch, I was just taken by surprise..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Once I got over that initial shock the tree swiftly moved me right up next to Katie." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "Once I got over that initial shock, the tree swiftly moved me, right up next to Katie." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "And I watched as it continuously smacked her with its branches..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "I bet she knew you were looking." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Obliviously, no doubt she was enjoying it even more than the spanking." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Obliviously... No doubt she was enjoying it even more than the spanking." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "And seeing that she was enjoying the attention so much, I decided to revert back to the original plan..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") cho "Your plan..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -276,7 +277,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho "Whomping, Sir." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "And I just took it for what it was... Endurance training! There's nothing wrong with that..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") gen "Whatever you want to call it, I do it at least once or twice a day myself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Anyhow... After a couple more minutes the tree finally stopped smacking us, and I was able to catch my breath..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Anyhow... After a couple more minutes, the tree finally stopped smacking us, and I was able to catch my breath..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Sounds like a great workout." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, it was a workout and a half that's for sure!" ("horny", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Then maybe we should incorporate it into your training." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -290,7 +291,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho "She tricked me into this!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I bet I ruined it anyway..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") - cho "Because as soon as the tree lowered us back to the ground Katie rushed off." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "Because as soon as the tree lowered us back to the ground, Katie rushed off." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "So I couldn't even talk to her..." ("clench", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "You kidding me? Talking would've just ruined it at that point!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You just had an amazing experience together, and didn't exchange a word throughout the entire thing. There's no better emotional bonding than that..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -323,9 +324,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: cho "If your goal was to get my ass red raw again then sure, plenty of progress..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "Progress is progress... So, what went down today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I followed Katie again... just as you wanted..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - cho "I attempted to strike up another conversation but just like last time, she wasn't really up for chatting..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "So since she was giving me the silent treatment I asked her if this was another attempt of hers to trick me again." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "But she simply shrugged and said that if I was to join her again then I should just be quiet and follow her..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "I attempted to strike up another conversation, but just like last time, she wasn't really up for chatting..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "So, since she was giving me the silent treatment, I asked her if this was another attempt of hers to trick me again." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "But she simply shrugged and said that if I was to join her again, then I should just be quiet and follow her..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "And, did you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, yes..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "Since she put it like that, how could I refuse? I'd look like a total wimp!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -334,7 +335,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: cho "Maybe Katie jinxed it this time around... or she forgot to jinx it... who knows." ("soft", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "It yanked us into the air with such speed, even I wasn't ready for it!" ("angry", "base", "raised", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "I had to fight its grip, to at least get some form of control back..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") - cho "But that was easier said than done as the tree had already snaked some of its branches underneath my clothes... sliding them right off my body." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + cho "But that was easier said than done, as the tree had already snaked some of its branches underneath my clothes... sliding them right off my body." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Nice! Just like that?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well I tried to grab them... but it had already moved its branches away from me..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "What happened to your reflexes... Are you being bested by a tree now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -345,7 +346,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: gen "Yes?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The tree threw one of its branches about and swung it at us, smacking our butts..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Got to bless mother nature!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "And It just kept doing it over and over until our cheeks turned all red..." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "And It just kept doing it, over and over, until our cheeks turned all red..." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "It was as if my body was on fire!" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "As it continued, Katie looked up at me and reached out to grab my hand..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "And as I finally managed to grab it, the tree smacked us hard across our cheeks." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") @@ -357,8 +358,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: gen "Never mind... did anything else happen after that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Not much, as far as I recall..." ("base", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "All I remember is the tree lowering us to the ground and the sound of Katie's breathing..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "I just laid there for a while catching my breath, until the only thing I could hear was the sound of the forest around me..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Once I recovered, I turned to face Katie but again she was already gone..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + cho "I just laid there for a while, catching my breath, until the only thing I could hear was the sound of the forest around me..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + gen "Almost sounds poetic." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Once I recovered, I turned to face Katie, but once again, she had already gone..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Now that's how it's done!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Thank you!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "That shall be all for today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -390,28 +392,28 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina: gen "You look soaked." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, yes... I guess my clothes ended up a little wet..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") #Blushing gen "How? It's not even raining!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Ehm*...." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "*Ehm*..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "So, do you have that report for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I...{w=0.3} yes..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") gen "I'm waiting [name_cho_genie]... give me the {i}deets{/i}." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course!" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "Well...{w=0.4} I went to see if I could catch Angelina talking to Madam Hooch again." ("soft", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - cho "Determined to get the full context of what was going on this time!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "I was determined to get the full context of what was going on this time!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "I immediately went and hid in the boys changing room as soon as they had gone for lunch to listen in." ("soft", "base", "base", "L", cheeks="blush") - cho "Although I got there a bit early and they were still in the showers, touching each other and gossiping.." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Although I got there a bit early and they were still in the showers, touching each other, and gossiping.." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Hooch and Johnson?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "No, the Gryffindor team!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "No, the girls on the Gryffindor team!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "So, doing my best to eavesdrop on their conversation, I went up to that hole I told you about." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "After a while, as Angelina brought up the subject of spying to the other two, Alicia replied that she was already aware." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Katie then chimed in, saying she knew about it as well." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "Which seemed to surprise Angelina at first but she then moved on saying that they need to form some sort of plan." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I bet Miss Johnson didn't think they kept anything secret from her..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Which seemed to surprise Angelina at first, but she then moved on, saying that they need to form some sort of plan." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "I bet Miss Johnson didn't think her friends had been keeping anything secret from her..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "For sure..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "So, did they come up with a plan?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, sort of..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho "Katie had obviously already thought about it as she immediately responded that she knew exactly how to deal with it..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Katie had obviously already thought about it, since she immediately responded that she knew exactly how to deal with it..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho "But as I waited to find out what it was, they suddenly went quiet, and I couldn't hear any of them." ("angry", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Left for the changing room?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's what I thought, until I removed my ear from the hole to have a look..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -423,66 +425,66 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina: gen "There goes our plan to separate them from each other..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Let me finish!" ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Once I got in there and before Angelina got a chance to do anything, Spinnet came up to me..." ("upset", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + cho "Once I got in there, and before Angelina got a chance to do anything, Spinnet came up to me..." ("upset", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "And just like before, she leaned in and kissed me!" ("normal", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "Nice, and you kissed her back?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Nice! And you kissed her back?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course! I wasn't about to blow my cover, was I?" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Of course..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "As she kissed me, Angelina shouted at her, asking what the hell she was doing." ("mad", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "Alicia then broke off the kiss and turned to her, asking what the problem was..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") - cho "Angelina just sort of stared dumbfounded at us until she shouted that I'm the seeker of an enemy team." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Angelina just sort of stared, dumbfounded at us, until she shouted that I'm the seeker of an enemy team." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I honestly thought it was over at that point but that's when Katie joined in..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - cho "Telling Angelina off for being mean, saying how it's unfair that I don't have a group of girls to play with after practice like she does." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "I honestly thought it was over at that point, but that's when Katie chimed in--" ("soft", "closed", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + cho "--Telling Angelina off for being mean. And saying that it's unfair that I don't have a group of girls to play with after practice like she does." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") gen "Nice... you got both Spinnet and Bell on your side! Told you that bonding with them would do it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I...{w=0.3} I suppose so." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Smiles - cho "Angelina still didn't look convinced though and just stood there with her arms crossed staring at me..." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "Angelina still didn't look convinced though, and just stood there with her arms crossed, while staring at me..." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "So as an attempt at convincing her... I grabbed Alicia's head and pressed her lips against mine..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Which was enough to grab Katie's attention, as she then moved up behind me to try and pull my top off." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Which was enough to grab Katie's attention, and she moved up behind me to try and pull my top off." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Nicely done!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course I didn't let her..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="heavy_blush") gen "Why not? What about your cover?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Because...{w=0.3} I...{w=0.4} Well, I didn't blow it okay!" ("open", "base", "angry", "downR", cheeks="blush") - cho "I wasn't going to let her undress me like that... so instead I grabbed her hands and put them under my bra to let her play with my breasts." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + cho "Because...{w=0.3} I...{w=0.4} Well, I didn't blow it, okay!?" ("open", "base", "angry", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "I wasn't going to let her undress me like that... Instead, I grabbed her hands and put them under my bra to let her play with my breasts." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") cho "Luckily she didn't seem to think much of it and began massaging them." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "Angelina on the other hand was not convinced... telling the other girls to step aside..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - cho "Which they did...{w=0.4} both Alicia and Katie jumped back as Angelina walked up, staring me down." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Which they did...{w=0.4} Both Alicia and Katie jumped back when Angelina approached me, while staring me down." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Scary..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I don't think I've ever had a girl scrutinize me like that..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Especially a naked one..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "She then smirked at me, saying I must truly be something special if her girls would just throw themselves at me as eagerly as they did." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") - cho "I didn't really know how to respond to that so I instinctively took a step back against the wall just as she leaned in and pressed her lips against mine..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Which took me by such surprise I tripped and slid down onto the wet floor." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "She then smirked at me, and said that I must truly be something special if her girls would just throw themselves at me as eagerly as they did." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") + cho "I didn't really know how to respond to that, so I instinctively took a step back against the wall just as she leaned in and pressed her lips against mine..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Which took me by such surprise, I tripped and slid down onto the wet floor." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Ouch..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Those Lionesses are animals!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "She didn't even apologize and just looked down at me, telling me I kiss like a high-schooler..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "She didn't even apologize, and just looked down at me, telling me I kiss like a high-schooler..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "That said... didn't stop her from crouching down for another... although this time she put her tongue in there." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Straight in there!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I hope you returned the favour!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I tried to... but as I attempted it, she stopped and stood back up." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") - cho "And as I steadied myself to get up as well, she put her foot beneath my skirt and pressed it against my panties which made me slide back down onto the floor." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "So I tried doing the same, but when I steadied myself to get up, she put her foot beneath my skirt and pressed it against my panties which made me slide back down onto the floor." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Then, turning back to the others she started chastising them even further, saying she was still mad about what they did..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Then, turning back to the others, she started chastising them even further, about how she was still mad at them for doing what they did..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") cho "But when doing so, she also started rubbing her foot up and down against my panties." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - cho "Both Katie and Alicia didn't seem to notice as they had turned towards Angelina to defend themselves." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + cho "Both Katie and Alicia didn't seem to notice, since their focus was on defending themselves." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") cho "I don't remember exactly what they were saying at that point..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "(not surprising...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "She just kept rubbing me more and more as they were arguing and..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "I just...{w} couldn't...{w} hold it in at that point!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #ahegao? - gen "She made you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "During their argument, She just kept rubbing me, more and more, until... Well..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "I just...{w} couldn't...{w} hold it in any more!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #ahegao? + gen "Don't tell me she made you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "She made me orgasm as I lay there on the ground!" ("horny", "base", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") - cho "Which they all realised as they stopped arguing to look at me..." ("clench", "base", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") - cho "Angelina's expression quickly changed into a smile as she pressed her foot down even harder, telling me I'd been a naughty girl..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") + cho "Which they all soon realised, and they suddenly stopped arguing to look at me..." ("clench", "base", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") + cho "Angelina's expression even changed into a smile, and she pressed her foot down even harder, telling me I'd been a naughty girl..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") cho "And that the other two shouldn't have been so selfish to keep me all for themselves." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") - cho "She then stepped off me and made her way out of the showers, beckoning the other two to come with her." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "And they just looked at me, giggled, then proceeded to follow her." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "She then stepped off me, and made her way out of the showers, beckoning the other two to come with her." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Which they did... Although before doing so, they caught a last look at me, and giggled happily." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Nice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "What do you mean nice?" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") #large text + cho "What do you mean, nice?" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") #large text cho "She humiliated me!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") #large text gen "She was testing you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "She was..." ("clench", "wide", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Yes...{w=0.4} Not only that...{w=0.4} I think you passed!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Maybe I underestimated those girls... they aren't easy to boss around that's for sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Maybe I underestimated those girls... they aren't easy to boss around, that's for sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But no matter..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("upset", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #pout gen "We shall see soon enough what comes from this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy index b946eec6..8e858687 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: cho "C? Is that some sort of spy name?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yep! C is the perfect spy name for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Where do you get all these ideas from... seriously." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "That's your cup-size is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's your cup-size, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") #Blushes cho "You're such an old pervert, you know that right?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") cho "And it's B cup actually..." ("open", "base", "base", "downR") #Blushes and glances to the side @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: gen "No ass left untouched!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Merlin's beard..." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "downR") # Facepalm - gen "Merlin's beard.... that's a pretty good codename, I like it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Merlin's beard.... That's a pretty good codename, I like it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "But I was..." ("mad", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes... Merlin's beard." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") @@ -56,12 +56,12 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: gen "Today's mission, if you choose to accept it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And by choose I mean there's not really much choice in the matter." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") #rolls eyes, bit pissed off - gen "I'd like you to spy on the beaters.... those {i}Weasel{/i} twins." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'd like you to spy on the beaters... Those {i}Weasel{/i} twins." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Weasley..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah, that!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'd like you to follow them and see what they are doing, find out if there's anything we could use against them during the match." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You want me to follow them around the entire day?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Of course, that's what a spy does isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course, isn't that what a spy is supposed to do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah, it's not like I have school or anything important to do." ("upset", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "Great!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Report back to me this evening as usual B!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -156,15 +156,15 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_twins: cho "How is that funny!?" ("angry", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "What if the girl was Hermione?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "I suppose...{w=0.4} no...{w=0.4} no it's still..." ("soft", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") + cho "I suppose...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} No it's still..." ("soft", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") gen "She'd look like a blueberry with a huge wig draped on top of it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Giggles*" ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - cho "Anyhow... it completely ruined her clothes and as she deflated she quickly ran off stark naked and crying to her dormitory." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + cho "Anyhow...{w=0.4} It completely ruined her clothes, and as she deflated she quickly ran off stark naked and crying to her dormitory." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Wait, so the clothes didn't expand as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "It's not a spell... she ate it so why would her clothes be affected?" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Sounds like amateurish magic to me, if they just imbued those sweets with some sort of effect which allows the consumers sweat to permeate their clothes then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "It's not a spell... she ate it, so why would her clothes be affected?" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") + gen "Sounds like amateurish magic to me... If they just imbued those sweets with some sort of effect which allows the consumers sweat to permeate their clothes then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "wide", "angry", "mid") - gen "Oh yes...{w=0.4} very bad, I'll have a word with those two..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} I suppose I better have a word with those two..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Please do..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Anyhow, I'm sure we'll find something we can use against some of the other players." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_twins: gen "Then that will be it for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Okay then." ("open", "base", "base", "R") cho "Good night." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Good night miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good night Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -200,14 +200,14 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_ron: cho "Well, I'm certain about one thing... That boy is a perv." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Before Hermione caught me, I could tell he was checking her out any time he could." ("open", "base", "angry", "downR") cho "It's quite sad really, you could tell from a mile off that she has no interest in him whatsoever." ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "Maybe he's not mature enough for his age but once his character develops then love and attraction could unexpectedly come into fruition." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Pfff* What kind of soppy romance novels have you been reading?" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") - cho "In any case, he come off as the clingy type... If anything ever happened between them it'd probably be out of pity on Hermione's part..." ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "Maybe he's not mature enough for his age, but once his character develops then love and attraction could unexpectedly come into fruition." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "*Pfff*... What kind of soppy romance novels have you been reading?" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "In any case... He comes off as the clingy type... If anything ever happened between them, it'd probably be out of pity on Hermione's part..." ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "And here I thought you'd make the assumption Miss Granger is sleeping with her friends." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("clench", "base", "base", "down") #Blushing cho "Why would you think that?" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "downR") gen "No reason..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Anyhow... We'll find our way in at some point I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Anyhow... We'll find our way in at some point, I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "downR") #Blushing gen "Our mission continues..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_harry: cho "This is such a waste of time..." ("open", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "I gather you didn't get any useful information?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "downR") - cho "I've been hiding in the boys bathroom trying to listen in on Harry and Ron." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "I've been hiding in the boys bathroom, trying to listen in on Harry and Ron." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Why in the boys bathroom?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's the only time Hermione isn't around..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "I see, then what were they talking about?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_harry: cho "It's like regular chess except the pieces move on their own." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Sounds as dull as regular chess." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anything else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Harry was talking a bit about quidditch but it was mostly bragging about some previous win of his." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Harry was talking a bit about quidditch, but it was mostly bragging about some previous win of his." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "Honestly, that boy could learn to be a bit more humble... I have no idea why Hermione hangs around with him." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "downR") cho "Quidditch seems to be the only thing that he has going for him..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Looks like you two have a lot in--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy index 104b35c7..5ab32d6b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy @@ -17,26 +17,27 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_start: gen "For this mission -- I'd like you to spy on the girls of the Gryffindor team." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "When they're alone..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "When they're alone, [name_genie_cho]?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - cho "I can't get into their common room... you should know that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "I can't get into their common room... You should know that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "There are plenty of other places where girls hang out and gossip..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Want to know the place I'm thinking of?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Want to make a guess of where I'm thinking of?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Blushes gen "That's right, the women's changing room!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Fine... I'll see what I can do." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "Fine...{w=0.4} I'll see what I can do." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Excellent!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Report back to me as usual, C." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "\"C\", [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "It's your spy name!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "My spy name, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "The C stands for my Cho, I presume?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "The C stands for \"Cho\", I presume?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "No, not your name... I'm not that unimaginative..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, not your name...{w=0.4} I'm not that unimaginative..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "C is your cup-size, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "My cup-size?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + gen "That's right." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "But that's not even correct! Mine is--" ("disgust", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="heavy_blush") - cho "I mean... where do you get all these ideas from... seriously!?" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") + cho "I mean...{w=0.4} Where do you get all these ideas from... Seriously!?" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "So what's your actual size then?{w} B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") #Blushes cho "Yes it's B..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "downR", cheeks="heavy_blush") #Blushes and glances to the side @@ -49,7 +50,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_start: gen "Time for some more espionage..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "This time we'll be targeting the girls!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The girls? Anyone in particular you want me to spy on, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "Why one of them when you could do all at once?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why one, when you could do all of them at once?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "All at once?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's what I said..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Their changing room should be a good place to start." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -110,12 +111,10 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_start: call cho_walk("door", "base") - call bld gen "Oh, wait... I forgot about the gadgets!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call cho_walk(action="leave") - call bld gen "(Damn, she must've not heard me...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # End early, cho already left! @@ -192,7 +191,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_showers: cho "They were too preoccupied with kissing, and touching each other." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "I knew it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmph*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") #annoyed - gen "Makes you wish you had those girls on your own team, doesn't it?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Makes you wish those girls were on your own team, doesn't it?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah right..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "downR", cheeks="heavy_blush") #annoyed glancing to the right #blush gen "What else did they do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Not a lot to be honest..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -242,7 +241,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_alicia: cho "She's been assisting the Weasley twins -- by drawing in more customers to their shop." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "How kind." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I wouldn't call it that..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "The only reason she's assisting them is because they promised they'd behave during Quidditch." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "The only reason she's assisting them, is because they promised they'd behave during Quidditch." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") # Has player sent Hermione to work with the Twins, promoting the cardgame? if not first_time_cardgame_work: @@ -258,14 +257,14 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_alicia: gen "She's not using that im-perv-ius curse, is she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The Imperius curse?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "That's what I said..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Of course not. That spell is illegal!{w=0.8} She'd be thrown into Azkaban for it..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Of course not. That spell is illegal!{w=0.8} She'd be thrown into a cell in Azkaban for it..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "That's-- *Ehm*...{w=0.3} correct.{w=0.5} Straight into prison..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "But No... I haven't seen her with a wand in hand..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "But no... I haven't seen her with a wand in hand..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") else: cho "That's why I said, \"if I didn't know any better\"..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "I saw her whisper something into another student's ear..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "And as if on command -- they immediately followed her into the girls toilets." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "And as if on command -- they immediately followed her into the girls' toilets." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "A girl that takes what she wants... I respect that." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "So, what was she doing with them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -278,10 +277,10 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_alicia: gen "Such as?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "So predictable..." ("disgust", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "Well, since I knew you'd ask... I did sneak in after her, and got a glimpse of her kneeling inside one of the stalls..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - cho "And whoever was in there with her wasn't being quiet... that's for sure." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") + cho "And whoever was in there with her wasn't being quiet... That's for sure." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "I should get her number." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Her what?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Never mind... {w=0.4} So is that all you saw?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Never mind...{w=0.4} So is that all that you saw?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Ehm*... Yes...{w=0.5} That was it..." ("quiver", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") #Blushing cho "As I said, I could only see her bottom, from underneath that stall..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") #Blushing gen "Your face says otherwise... Is that really everything you saw?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -305,7 +304,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_alicia: pause .8 call bld gen "Changed your mind?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "N-- no, Good night!" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") # head + cho "N-- No, Good night!" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", xpos="base", cheeks="blush", flip=True) # head # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -367,7 +366,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_katie: cho "Then I watched another tentacle slip through her legs -- which was enough to bring her over the edge, I think." ("mad", "narrow", "raised", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Impressive..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sounds to me like a mission accomplished!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Mission... what?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Mission... What?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "I'm sure you've just learned more about her than even her closest friends." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "She's a girl who likes it dirty, and takes it rougher than even the toughest sea dog can muster!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -428,14 +427,13 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_angelina: cho "So... are we done here?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") #smiles and focuses on genie gen "Yes, mission successful, [name_cho_genie]!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "We'll have that girl wrapped around our--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I mean... around your finger soon enough..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean... around your finger, soon enough..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Counting on it!" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "Good night, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") #cho leaves call cho_walk(action="leave") - call bld gen "(Wrapped around your finger...{w} good one...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if cho_reputation < 12: # Points til 12. diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy index fd3b1968..5cc50cbb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy @@ -548,8 +548,6 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): return label cho_mood(value=0): - show screen blktone - with d3 if value > 0: if value == 1: @@ -569,5 +567,4 @@ label cho_mood(value=0): call describe_mood_after_gift(was_negative, cho_mood, value) - hide screen blktone return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy index 8c738c7e..f9b4d07d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy @@ -1500,7 +1500,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: call her_walk("desk", "base") pause 0.5 hide vibrators_floor - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) her "{size=-5}Thank you...{/size}" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -1535,7 +1535,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: call her_walk("desk", "base") pause 0.5 hide vibrators_floor - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) her "{size=-5}Thank you...{/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -1774,7 +1774,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: pause 0.5 hide vibrators_floor $ hermione.hide() - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) gen "Have fun, and try to not to overdo it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or you might end up blind." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -3656,7 +3656,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: hide vibrators_floor with d5 - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) her "So... How do these things work, exactly? Do I need to charge them or...?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "... These are magical items, they use magic, not volts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -3811,7 +3811,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: hide vibrators_floor with d5 - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) gen "Don't mention it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy index 4c0c3f28..e5e9c2a9 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy @@ -11,24 +11,24 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): if gift_item == lollipop_ITEM: if her_whoring < 6: # Lv 1-2. her "A lollipop?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - call give_gift("You give the candy to Hermione...",gift_item) + call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) elif her_whoring < 12: # Lv 3-4. - her "Candy?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Candy is for kids, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - call give_gift("You give the candy to Hermione...",gift_item) + her "A lollipop?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Sweets are for kids, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") call her_mood(-5) elif her_whoring < 18: # Lv 5-6. - her "Candy?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") - call give_gift("You give the candy to Hermione...",gift_item) + her "A lollipop?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") + call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "*Ehm*... Sure, thanks..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) else: # Lv 7+ her "A lollipop?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Clever girls use candy like this as a \"weapon\"." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") - call give_gift("You give the candy to Hermione...",gift_item) + her "Clever girls uses sweets like these as a \"weapon\"." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") + call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) @@ -603,8 +603,6 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): return label her_mood(value=0): - show screen blktone - with d3 if value > 0: if value == 1: @@ -624,5 +622,4 @@ label her_mood(value=0): call describe_mood_after_gift(was_negative, her_mood, value) - hide screen blktone return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy index fb0f1c8d..27e560f8 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy @@ -165,8 +165,6 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): return label ton_friendship(value=0): - show screen blktone - with d3 if value > 0: if value == 1: @@ -182,5 +180,4 @@ label ton_friendship(value=0): "Tonks' friendship towards you hasn't changed much." $ ton_friendship = max(min(ton_friendship+value, 100), 0) - hide screen blktone return diff --git a/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy index 7f091789..60779568 100644 --- a/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ label purchase_item(item): elif item == poker_outfit_ITEM: $ item.used = True - call unlock_clothing(">Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_poker) + call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_poker) play sound "sounds/money.ogg"