From 3c2dcf3e5f0582062e21e00e3d32c0d9cb6b4899 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Sat, 6 May 2023 15:45:52 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy | 34 ++++---- .../cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 86 +++++++++---------- game/scripts/characters/cho/events/intro.rpy | 58 +++++++------ game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy | 4 +- .../scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy | 28 +++--- game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy | 52 +++++------ .../hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 12 +-- game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy | 6 +- 8 files changed, 138 insertions(+), 142 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy index c591a3d7..7da66e4e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy @@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ label cho_chitchat: cho "The Tutshill Tornadoes is my favourite team, and I hope I'll get to where they are one day..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: - cho "I couldn't believe it when they appointed me as a seeker for the Ravenclaw try outs." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho "It's the most important role in Quidditch! Without a good seeker the game literally wont end." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "I couldn't believe it when they appointed me as a seeker for the Ravenclaw try-outs." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "It's the most important role in Quidditch! Without a good seeker, the game literally won't end." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "Most students complain about all the walking they have to do to get to their classes." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "Lazy is what they are... I've already been up for hours before they even manage roll out of bed." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "Lazy is what they are... I've already been up for hours before they even manage to roll out of bed." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: cho "But she's never taken any points off Gryffindor even though some of their team members have arrived late multiple times." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: - cho "Why don't we learn much about history of Quidditch in this school?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "Why don't we learn much about the history of Quidditch in this school?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Although I suppose it wouldn't be history of magic if we focused on something that students actually care about." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") block: @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "As a seeker, it is very important that I keep in shape." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Even though I spend most of the game searching for the snitch, the required effort to catch that thing is way higher than anything the other players has to endure." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "Even though I spend most of the game searching for the snitch, the required effort to catch that thing is way higher than anything the other players have to endure." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "I've had a pair of panties go missing after a recent practice game..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "Not my lucky pair though fortunately... I only wear those during the official matches." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + cho "Not my lucky pair though, fortunately... I only wear those during the official matches." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") block: cho "I sent an owl telling my parents about our win against Hufflepuff, they couldn't believe it!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: cho "I thought wearing a skirt on a broom would've been terrible, but it wasn't as bad as I had imagined..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") block: - cho "I was quite surprised when you showed so much interest about getting involved with quidditch..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I was quite surprised when you showed so much interest in getting involved with quidditch..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I don't think even our team captain shows as much enthusiasm." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "People skirting the rules in Quidditch is more common than most people think." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Illegal broom tampering... Jinxing off the other teams robes..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + cho "Illegal broom tampering... Jinxing off the other team's robes..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho "I'm surprised that you found there's nothing rule breaking about adjustments to your own clothing." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "[name_genie_cho], can you do anything about those Slytherins?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Ever since my match against them they don't seem to be able to take their eyes off my ass!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Ever since my match against them, they don't seem to be able to take their eyes off my ass!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: cho "I've been asked a lot about my exercise routines lately." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -153,14 +153,14 @@ label cho_chitchat: random: block: cho "I wake up earlier than my fellow teammates so that I can be naked when I do my stretching at the pitch." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "Of course Madam Hooch is there setting things up for the day but she doesn't mind." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Of course Madam Hooch is there, setting things up for the day, but she doesn't mind." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") block: cho @ cheeks blush "I wonder how many others have adopted Hooch's flying techniques after that last match." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "Hopefully they won't ban it... It is quite literally a game changer..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: - cho "Madam Hooch let me keep her broom which I'm very thankful for." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Madam Hooch let me keep her broom, which I'm very thankful for." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Although perhaps it's time I do some personal adjustments..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") block: @@ -172,10 +172,10 @@ label cho_chitchat: block: cho "Does your bird always have such a blank look on its face?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") - cho "I suppose when you're constantly reborn you must've seen anything and everything there ever is to see." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho "I suppose when you're constantly reborn, you must've seen anything and everything there ever is to see." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") block: - cho "Robes sure are useful don't you think?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Robes sure are useful, don't you think?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "As long as I keep them closed I could be wearing nothing underneath and nobody would ever know..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") block: @@ -183,17 +183,17 @@ label cho_chitchat: cho "I suppose since they didn't make the finals, they were at least happy seeing Gryffindor lose." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: - cho "The one who was the most mad about Gryffindor loosing the Quidditch cup was probably Hermione." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "The one who was the maddest about Gryffindor losing the Quidditch cup was probably Hermione." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "The girls on the Gryffindor Quidditch team were more interested in borrowing my broom than holding any sort of grudge." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: cho "So... How about we make this office a clothes free zone?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "Like enchant the door so you can't enter if you got clothes on, or something." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") - cho "I'm sure some bitter old witch or wizard must've invented a spell like that so people wouldn't wander into their house with their shoes on..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Like enchant the door, so you can't enter if you got clothes on, or something." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") + cho "I'm sure some bitter old witch or wizard must've invented a spell like that, so people wouldn't wander into their house with their shoes on..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") block: cho "I read somewhere that ejaculate is a good source of protein." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "There's even a cook book!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "There's even a cookbook!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "The things you find hidden in the library..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index b77d8d4d..00d1ea0d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -55,10 +55,10 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1: cho "What would you like to talk about?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Do you have a boyfriend, Miss Chang?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Excuse me?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) # Shocked - gen "I asked if you have boyfriend. Anybody you fool around with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I asked if you have a boyfriend... Anybody you fool around with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Me? sir? Ha--{w=0.4} hav--{w=0.4} a boyfriend?" ("open", "wide", "base", "R") # Reluctant, Embarassed gen "Or a girlfriend! That would be even better, now that I think about it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Sir that's--{w=0.3} that's not something a headmaster should be concerned about." ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "L") + cho @ cheeks blush "Sir, that's--{w=0.3} that's not something a headmaster should be concerned about." ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "L") cho @ cheeks blush "And I don't see how this information would be of importance for my training." ("open", "wide", "raised", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "Why would it matter if--{w=0.5} Even if I did I'd--" ("soft", "wide", "base", "down") gen "So you don't have one?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1: gen "Sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "We should have it every year if you were to ask me!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(A cosplay tournament is what this school needs...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Sir that would be great!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Sir, that would be great!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "(Wait, wait!{w=0.8} A \"nude\" cosplay tournament!{w=0.6} Even better!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Is it even cosplay if they're naked?)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And with new contestants every month! You've got to do this, Sir!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1: cho "No!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "I could've sworn I read that somewhere..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Are you sure he's still around?{w=0.6} What if he {b}did{/b} die, but then he returned from the dead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "For all you know he could be a vampire!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "For all you know, he could be a vampire!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, you're talking nonsense..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "Please don't joke about your student like that. It's so unlike you..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "He's one of your bests! The best student Hufflepuff has ever seen!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1: gen "Who else did you do it with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Do it with?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") # Shocked gen "Smooching, kissing, snogging...{w=0.8} whatever you call it nowadays..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "With all due respect sir, it's very odd that you'd ask me about those sort of things..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho "With all due respect sir, it's very odd that you'd ask me about these sorts of things..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "But... you {b}are{/b} helping me.{w=0.8} So I guess I owe you that much..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") gen "That's what I wanted to hear." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E1: cho "She was one of the students from Beauxbatons." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "A French girl." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") - gen "I hope you {i}frenched{/i} that french girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I hope you {i}frenched{/i} that French girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Ehm*..." ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") # Super embarrassed cho "(Why am I telling him this?)" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "Tell me more about this girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E2: cho "I'm not sure I understand..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure you'll find out in due time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Boast-": - gen "Ah... Yes... Albin the great, that's me alright!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Ah... Yes... Albin the great, that's me, alright!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I hope you realise how lucky you are to get the opportunity to experience my greatness first hand." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, of course [name_genie_cho]! Thank you again, [name_genie_cho]!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "And perhaps one day, you'll get the privilege to experience my greatness {i}first mouth{/i}." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E2: cho "I don't--" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Speaking of your team...{w=0.4} You're getting along with them well, I hope?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'd say so...{w=1.0} Although there was a time when--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "Let's just say it was a bit difficult for me at first. After all Quidditch is largely dominated by men..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + cho "Let's just say it was a bit difficult for me at first. After all, Quidditch is largely dominated by men..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") cho "Getting accepted into our Quidditch team was a challenge. I really had to prove I was worth it." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "And how exactly did you manage that? Mind spilling the beans?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Through diligence, expertise, and determination!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E2: cho "Very few teams have allowed a female player into their ranks over the past years." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "And I've been the only female seeker at this school in over half a century!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "Can you even believe that, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "(Half a century? That's like a coffee break for me girl...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Half a century? That's like a coffee break for me, girl...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I don't want to brag, [name_genie_cho], but the role of a seeker is {b}the{/b} most important position in a team by far!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "If you don't have a good seeker, you have no chance of winning!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "No wonder you need my help so badly then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E2: if states.gen.masturbating: gen "{size=-4}(Yes! Yes! And they all would like to have their way with you!){/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "(Quite a sausage-party this Quidditch I have to admit.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Quite a sausage-party this Quidditch, I have to admit.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Maybe telling Hermione off was a bad idea after all...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(An \"all female\" team would be more fun to watch...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Always feeling their gaze behind my back..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down") @@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_intro_E2: gen "No, no! I'm..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'm done.{w=0.3} Let's get back to the topic." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Which was?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "You taking showers with your \"teammates\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You, taking showers with your \"teammates\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "(...)" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") # Annoyed gen "Don't you think, the fact that they've seen you naked hasn't affected any of their actions?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_E3: else: gen "*Ha!* Called it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "It was a little bit creepy how often he tried to look up my skirt..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") - cho "I mean who would do such a thing?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I mean, who would do such a thing?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, yes... how terrible of him..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: @@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_E3: cho "Sir, would it be alright if I head off now?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Already? Do you have to be somewhere?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Did our little talk about panties maybe... excite you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "What? No of course not!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "What? No, of course not!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") if game.daytime: cho "I simply have to go to my next lesson..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -607,10 +607,10 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T1_E3: jump end_cho_talk_event else: - cho "He'd always walk behind me when we went up the stairs, to get a better view I bet..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "He'd always walk behind me when we went up the stairs, to get a better view, I bet..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Did you ever show them to him on purpose?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "My panties?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "No, your good manners...{w} Yes your panties!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, your good manners...{w} Yes, your panties!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Why would I do that?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "What kind of girl doesn't show her panties to her beloved?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I beg your pardon?!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") @@ -695,14 +695,14 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_intro_E1: cho "However, Hufflepuff only had one really good player. Which was Cedric." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") cho "Slytherin on the other hand, they are almost unbeatable!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "They might even be better than Gryffindor..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "up") - gen "You don't say. So why are they next and not Gryffindor?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You don't say. So, why are they next and not Gryffindor?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Because of their seeker, Sir." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "He's so...{w=0.6} so bad!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Who is their seeker?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Draco Malfoy, Sir." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(The cocky fella! Snape mentioned him before...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They've been continuously harassing my team..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - cho "Well, mostly me actually." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downR") # Embarrassed + cho "Well, mostly me, actually." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downR") # Embarrassed menu: "-Jerk off while she's talking-": @@ -741,7 +741,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_intro_E1: cho "Of course not, Sir." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I'm so proud!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "After all I'm only a small, helpless girl{w=0.6}, and they are a group of strong, ruthless alpha males!" ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "After all, I'm only a small, helpless girl{w=0.6}, and they are a group of strong, ruthless alpha males!" ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") cho "Their attempts are pathetic!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "They are pathetic!!!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid", trans=hpunch) cho "Trying to lift my skirt with first-year spells..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_intro_E1: cho "Classes are about to start, and I'm already late for them..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "I hope it would be okay if I leave?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: - cho "It's getting late and I have to go and get some sleep..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "It's getting late, and I have to go and get some sleep..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "I hope you don't mind, Sir?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Not at all.{w=0.3} You may go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -908,7 +908,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_intro_E2: cho "She announced several times that Hufflepuff was leading in points, when they actually weren't!" ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Which resulted in Hufflepuff playing far more defensively, when they should have been aggressive!" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") if states.gen.masturbating: - gen "{size=-4}Oh you are one of those girls! I like going aggressive!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{size=-4}Oh, you are one of those girls! I like going aggressive!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I caught the Snitch at just the right time!{w=0.6} If Hufflepuff had gone too far in the lead, we would have lost!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "I really need to thank Granger the next time I see her.{w=0.6} I owe her a great deal..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") if states.gen.masturbating: @@ -1127,7 +1127,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_E3: cho "To be frank with you, Sir...{w=0.6} I would be disappointed if it wasn't." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Why don't you tease him a bit more then? Get him hooked on it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It would be to our benefit, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Hmm*{w=0.3} Yes I could give him a peak once or twice." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + cho "*Hmm*{w=0.3} Yes, I could give him a peak once or twice." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") cho "For as long as I don't have to let him touch it." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anything else you could tell me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1160,7 +1160,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_E3: cho "They aren't even allowed to make use of any Quidditch equipment outside the Quidditch pitch area!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Aren't you a bit too harsh on them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, since when is sexual harassment tolerated at this school?" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "I bet there are many girls that enjoy the occasional spanking..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I bet there are many girls who enjoy the occasional spanking..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Next time you should ask one of those girls..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Why would anyone enjoy that?{w=0.6} How ridiculous." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -1249,7 +1249,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_E3: cho @ cheeks blush "Rubbish..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Girl, you are in denial!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I am not!" ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") - cho "Sir are we done here?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Sir, are we done here?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") if game.daytime: cho "I'm late for class." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T2_E3: # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") - gen "(Well that was weird.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Well, that was weird.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(That girl has a very wild imagination, I've got to say...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Although I have to admit, I'm a bit of a fanboy now...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Go! Go! Ravenclaw!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1333,20 +1333,20 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E1: gen "It would make things go so much quicker." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Alright then..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") "*fap* *fap* *fap*" - cho @ cheeks blush "Well I suppose they're pretty good looking." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well I suppose they're pretty good-looking." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") gen "Describe them to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Hmm... Well one's a redhead, lots of freckles, the other is raven-haired, and quite skinny." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Nice! I fucking love redheads!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "*Fap* *Fap* *Fap*..." gen "Does the carpet match the drapes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I don't know, I don't exactly ask random dudes to drop trou for me." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, well that's understandable--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, well... That's understandable--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hold on, did you say dudes?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah, they're both guys." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Why didn't you say so?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You didn't ask." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Does she not have any hot girlfriends you could tell me about instead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Girlfriends? Well there's Ginny--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Girlfriends? Well, there's Ginny--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "Hey! Don't think I don't know what you're trying to achieve here!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Would you please just focus for a minute? Without interrupting me?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") "*Fap* *Fap* *Fap*..." @@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E1: gen "Just let me take it out of my--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You'll get me the firebolt?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Get you a what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "The firebolt! Surely you must have seen Potter's?" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "The firebolt! Surely, you must have seen Potter's?" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I most certainly have not!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'm sure if you could get me a broom like that it would assure my--, I mean, our victory!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Wait... A broom? That's what all of this is about?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E2: cho "Really?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "No." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You know, there are a whole bunch of girls who take Quidditch seriously, just like I do!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "And I've yet to meet a single one. Except for you of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And I've yet to meet a single one. Except for you, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Besides, didn't you and Granger make a huge deal out of it? The lack of acceptance for female players and all that jazz?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You both made it seem as if it was a hopeless endeavour to be taken seriously as a female player..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That doesn't mean there aren't exceptions." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1507,7 +1507,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E2: gen "Five girls?!?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What... No... There's three of them." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "But you just said--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "There's Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and his two older twin brothers Fred and George." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "There's Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and his two older twin brothers, Fred and George." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") if item_store_intro_done: gen "Of course... The twins..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1519,7 +1519,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E2: gen "Their parents must've been some busy... Weasels." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anyhow, enough about them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Tell me everything you know about the girls!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "What are their shoe sizes?{w=0.5} No actually, cup sizes... What are their cup sizes?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What are their shoe sizes?{w=0.5} No, actually, cup sizes... What are their cup sizes?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "How do you expect me to know?!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You're right, I'm getting ahead of myself...{w=0.4} One thing at a time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let's start with their names. What are their names?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1527,7 +1527,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E2: gen "What? I thought the Potter boy was?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Pfff*... What? Don't make me laugh..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Angelina Johnson has been their captain ever since she took over after Oliver Wood." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I see... So the requirement is that your last name has to be an innuendo for male genitalia... Got it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see... So, the requirement is that your last name has to be an innuendo for male genitalia... Got it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What about the other girls? What are their names?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Katie Bell and Alicia Spinnet." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Anything important I should know about them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1561,7 +1561,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_intro_E2: gen "Trust me, they're doing it alright." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And that's great news for us!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Why on earth would that be--" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Why there's plenty of ways to take advantage of that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why there are plenty of ways to take advantage of that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_cho]?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") #shocked gen "Just a thought..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "In any case, you'll have to tell me more about them later... I'm sure we've only scratched the surface regarding those three." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1589,7 +1589,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: gen "Let's discuss those girls again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What girls?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "The ones on the Gryffindor team of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The ones on the Gryffindor team, of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, okay then!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") $ _selected = [False, False, False] @@ -1607,7 +1607,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: $ _selected[0] = True cho "I'm surprised you remembered her name." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Of course, she's the one with the Johnson wasn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course, she's the one with the Johnson, wasn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Her name is Johnson." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "That's the one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So what more can you tell me about her--{w=0.2} I mean, Miss Johnson." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1620,13 +1620,13 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: gen "So there's no synergy between the boys and the girls of their team then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Not really." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Then how the hell did they make the finals?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, As long as the chasers and beaters have good synergy between each other then you'll probably be fine." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "The girls all play extremely well together and so does the twins." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "The Keeper and seeker sort of does their own thing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Well, As long as the chasers and beaters have good synergy between each other, then you'll probably be fine." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "The girls all play extremely well together and so do the twins." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "The Keeper and seeker sort of do their own thing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Right... Miss Grangers friends..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Yes... To be honest I doubt Harry and Ron would still be on their team if it wasn't for Angelina's lack of interest in training them..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Yes... To be honest, I doubt Harry and Ron would still be on their team if it wasn't for Angelina's lack of interest in training them..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Granger is quite protective of her friends but still let them play despite having a female captain." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Granger is quite protective of her friends but she still lets them play despite having a female captain." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "She bosses them around a lot, and would probably feel threatened if Angelina actually did her job properly." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "*Hmm*... Interesting..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1657,7 +1657,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: "\"Tell me about Alicia Spinnet.\"" if not _selected[2]: $ _selected[2] = True - cho "Well, honestly I find it difficult to dislike her." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Well, honestly, I find it difficult to dislike her." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Why is that, isn't she your enemy?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmm*... Then let's just say she has my respects." ("base", "base", "base", "downR") cho "Whilst Angelina is the captain, she doesn't pay enough attention to the boys--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: cho "He's the winning type of guy." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "So you say you don't know?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "As I have mentioned before, I haven't been able to talk with him one on one because of Granger..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho "All I know is that he's really competitive, his father used to be a great chaser so I suppose it runs in the family." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "All I know is that he's really competitive, his father used to be a great chaser, so I suppose it runs in the family." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Fair enough." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump .choices_male @@ -1736,7 +1736,7 @@ label cc_pf_talk_T3_E3: cho "That's one of the Weasley brothers... Ron Weasley..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Wrong Weasley you say..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Ron, [name_genie_cho]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, sorry then what did you say his name was?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, sorry... What did you say his name was?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "...{w} His name is Ron." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Right...{w} So what do you know about him?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Not much aside from the fact that he's one of Granger's friends..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/intro.rpy index b08a0d3c..f228a2b1 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/intro.rpy @@ -3,10 +3,14 @@ ### Cho Intro ### ### Event 1 ### -# Cho first events your office, complaining about Hermione. -# Hermione enters and they have a fight. +# Fist visit of Cho, complains about Hermione. +# Hermione enters, and they have a fight. label cho_intro_E1: + + # Force default outfit for first event. + $ cho.equip(cho_outfit_default) + stop music fadeout 1.0 play sound "sounds/knocking.ogg" call bld @@ -23,7 +27,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: play sound "sounds/knocking.ogg" "*Knock-knock-knock*" gen "Please, give me a moment..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I just need to--{w=1.0} *urgh*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I just need to--{w=1.0} *Urgh*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" gen "Adjust my pants...{w=1.0} There we go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -35,7 +39,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: call bld cho "Cho Chang, Sir." - gen "(Such a cute name... please be hot, please be hot...!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Such a cute name... Please be hot, please be hot...!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "May I come in?" gen "Please have nice tits!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir?" @@ -66,7 +70,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: cho "*Uhm*..." ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, I'd much prefer not to be called nicknames." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Mutual respect is very important for a student-teacher relationship to work." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - gen "(She must be fun at parties..)" + gen "(She must be fun at parties...)" cho "I'd much prefer if you called me Cho, or Miss Chang..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "And how is that any different..." cho "It's my name, Sir!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -93,13 +97,13 @@ label cho_intro_E1: cho "What? Professor how dare you suggest I--" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Hold on!" - gen "Silly me I forgot where I put my glasses." + gen "Silly me, I forgot where I put my glasses." cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "You have to excuse my poor eye-sight." gen "I'm very,{w} very,{w} very,{w} very old." gen "You're clearly \"not\" a boy..." gen "(Smooth...)" - cho "Right... well since you seem unable to see very well..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + cho "Right... Well, since you seem unable to see very well..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") gen "..." cho "It's Cho Chang." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Ah, Miss Chang..." @@ -154,13 +158,13 @@ label cho_intro_E1: gen "(Quidditch? What a stupid name for a sport.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The movements' goal is to grant a larger portion of our female students the ability to play." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "And...{w} that's a bad thing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Her way of going about to achieve it is..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "What she is doing to try and achieve it is..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "Granger is trying to separate us into male and female teams." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "mid") cho "She believes it would put girls on an equal playing field against other girl teams." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") cho "But what she's forgetting is that all the female players who made it into a team are already considered a valuable asset -- or they wouldn't be there!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "I worked hard to be at the same level as my fellow teammates..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "downR") cho "Splitting us up into a male and female league would just bring on girls that are just there to flaunt their bodies, instead of taking the sport seriously..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "downR") - gen "Doesn't sound like the worst idea honestly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Doesn't sound like the worst idea, honestly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir... I've trained all my life to be where I'm at." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Just as hard as all the other great female Quidditch players of history!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "They played side by side with men... Earning their place amongst the best!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "down") @@ -171,7 +175,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: cho "Sir... This would destroy the foundations of the entire sport, traditions going back centuries..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "down") gen "Now, I think you're being a bit overdramatic Miss--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'd get even less attention as one of the few girls in the league!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Ah... So that's where the problem lies." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Ah... So, that's where the problem lies." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, could you please talk to her? I'd be very grateful if you did." ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") cho "I would be forever in your debt." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -190,7 +194,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: call her_chibi("stand", "door", "base") with d3 - her "Professor I'm sorry to bother you, but I wanted to..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False) + her "Professor, I'm sorry to bother you, but I wanted to..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False) her "!!!" ("normal", "wide", "base", "stare", trans=hpunch) call her_walk(570, "base") @@ -242,7 +246,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: nar "You pull your cock out and begin masturbating... focusing on the now heated argument between the two girls in front of you." cho "" (trans=d3) - her "Oh yeah, well... I bet it can't be anything good seeing how you usually act around men..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "L") + her "Oh yeah, well... I bet it can't be anything good, seeing how you usually act around men..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho "What's that supposed to mean?!?" ("clench", "base", "angry", "R") her "You know exactly what I mean..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") her "I heard about how you were flaunting those... \"things\" of yours at Seamus Finnigan." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") @@ -252,9 +256,9 @@ label cho_intro_E1: her @ cheeks blush "Well yours hardly qualify as such..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho "How dare you!" ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "And so what? What's wrong with being confident about your body..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "down") - cho "You should try it some time... You might even get a boyfriend one day..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "You should try it sometime... You might even get a boyfriend one day..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "Though what do I know..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "I didn't need to get my teeth shortened so I wouldn't be confused for a rabbit!" ("grin", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "I didn't need to get my teeth shortened, just so I wouldn't be confused for a rabbit!" ("grin", "closed", "angry", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "down") cho "Not that anyone would even see them through that horribly bushy hair of yours..." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Well, I heard that you were caught snogging someone in one of the carriages after the triwizard tournament." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -325,7 +329,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: cho "I'm sure that Hermione's reasons for interrupting are totally valid..." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "And I'm sure Cho wasn't just coming here to flaunt her body..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") cho "What's that supposed to mean?!?" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "R", trans=vpunch_repeat) - gen "(I guess I'll just have to wait this one out..)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I guess I'll just have to wait this one out...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Black screen call hide_characters @@ -351,7 +355,7 @@ label cho_intro_E1: gen "*Grunt* {size=-4}Huh, what?{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I always have a valid reason for coming here, don't I?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Of course you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Always? So you \"do\" come here often!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Always? So, you \"do\" come here often!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") her "So what..." ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Ladies, I think it's time to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Don't worry about it Sir, I was just about to leave anyway..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -519,7 +523,7 @@ label ss_he_cho_E1: "\"Her name was Cho Chan.\"": sna "Cho Chang?" ("snape_01") gen "No, I'm sure it was \"Chan\"." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I know my students names, Genie." ("snape_04") + sna "I know my students' names, Genie." ("snape_04") "\"I can't remember. I got too distracted by her legs...\"": sna "Can you describe her?" ("snape_05") @@ -606,8 +610,8 @@ label ss_he_cho_E1: sna "(...)" ("snape_12") if not d_flag_02: - sna "So, that's in then? You're staking both your money and the chance at getting in this girls panties on Ravenclaw winning the cup?" ("snape_01") - gen "You bet I-- No wait! Of course that's not all of it!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + sna "So, that's it then? You're staking both your money and the chance at getting inside this girl's panties on Ravenclaw winning the cup?" ("snape_01") + gen "You bet I--{w=0.2} No wait! Of course, that's not all of it!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Oh! I'm also planning to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -698,7 +702,7 @@ label cho_intro_E3: $ states.cho.ev.intro.e3_complete = True gen "I got some word about you that needs to be addressed..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "About what? I'm not in any trouble or anything am I?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") + her "About what? I'm not in any trouble or anything, am I?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Miss Chang..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "up") her "What about her?" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -734,14 +738,14 @@ label cho_intro_E3: her "You'd be surprised just how few female--" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I'll give you ten house points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Ten points?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "stare", trans=hpunch) - her "Sir do you even realise how much time it took me to do all that research?" ("angry", "squint", "angry", "mid") + her "Sir, do you even realise how much time it took me to do all that research?" ("angry", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "Twenty?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "One hundred!" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "One hundred? Are you nuts?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And just points isn't going to cut it..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Then what else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Uhm*..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") - gen "You're testing my patience Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're testing my patience, Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, I know!{w=0.5} I want a seat in the teacher stands during the Quidditch matches!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") her "Cho would be so jealous if she saw me sitting near the commentator and teachers..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "So, you want both one hundred points and a seat in the teacher stands..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -800,7 +804,7 @@ label cho_intro_E3: her "I'll tell you what I want!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "What I really, really want!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "{size=-4}Nice!{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I'd like a seat in the teacher stands, during the Quidditch matches.." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "I'd like a seat in the teacher stands, during the Quidditch matches..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Is that all?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, and a hundred points for Gryffindor..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -838,7 +842,7 @@ label cho_intro_E3: if states.her.level < 18: her "It's the most prestigious award one could earn for your house!{w=0.6} The Quidditch cup is nothing in comparison..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Surely there's better ways to spend your time than participating in this silly sports game." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "Surely there are better ways to spend your time than participating in this silly sports game." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "(My irony senses are tingling...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 8: @@ -945,7 +949,7 @@ label cho_intro_E3: cho "During our last meeting he brought up wanting to add stripes to our Quidditch Robes." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Believing that doing so would somehow make us go faster..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Sorry, sir... I've already taken up enough of your time... Surely you've got more important things--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Sorry, sir... I've already taken up enough of your time... Surely, you've got more important things--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") play music "music/fuzzball-parade-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1 if_changed @@ -961,11 +965,11 @@ label cho_intro_E3: cho "I suppose so, but--" ("open", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Well, as soon as you first stepped through that door I could tell that this girl has got what it takes to make it big." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "...{w} You could tell that just by looking at me?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Indeed, there's no doubts about it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Indeed... No doubts about it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or are you telling me that I'm wrong?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Of course not, but--" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Great!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Then I shall summon you shortly so we can further discuss this arrangement." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Then I shall summon you shortly, so we can further discuss this arrangement." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "(Arrangement?)" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "That will be all for now Miss Chang, you may leave." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "...{w} Alright then, sir." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy index 60b0c00c..e5e4f39d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy @@ -154,10 +154,10 @@ label name_cho_genie: if states.cho.tier <= 3: cho "Princess?!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, is that a problem?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "It's... It's a bit girly don't you think?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "It's... It's a bit girly, don't you think?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You're a girl, I see nothing wrong with it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "Yes I suppose I am." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, I suppose I am." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Fine..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") else: cho @ cheeks blush "You want to call me..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy index 66a595cc..af75c81c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") block: - her "So far professor Trelawney did not teach me a single piece of any actual knowledge, sir." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "So far, Professor Trelawney did not teach me a single piece of any actual knowledge, sir." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: - her "I am sorry sir, but I don't really have time for idle chat chats..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "I am sorry sir, but I don't really have time for idle chit-chats..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") ### WHORING LEVEL 02 ### @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") block: - her "As one of the top students in this school I have a reputation to keep..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + her "As one of the top students in this school, I have a reputation to keep..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "People look up to me..." her "... So, your discretion is very appreciated, sir." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: her "I dislike the entire house of Slytherin with all my heart, sir." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") block: - her "Do you remember when you asked me to show you my panties for the first time sir?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Do you remember when you asked me to show you my panties for the first time, sir?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "I was so furious with you then..." her "Now I see that I was just being selfish..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "After all, the honour of my house is at stake here..." @@ -138,16 +138,16 @@ label hermione_chitchat: block: her "Hogwarts has really become a second home to me lately..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I don't even miss my parents nearly as much anymore..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "Come to think of it I don't miss them at all..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") + her "Come to think of it, I don't miss them at all..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "I'm an awful daughter..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") block: her "*Yawn*! I read about this technique that supposedly allows you to cut your sleep time in half..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - her "It don't think it's working though.... *Yawn*!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "I don't think it's working though... *Yawn*!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") block: - her "Even after I graduate from Hogwarts I plan to keep on working hard." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her "If I give it my all I can make this world a better place, I know it!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Even after I graduate from Hogwarts, I plan to keep on working hard." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "If I give it my all, I can make this world a better place, I know it!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: block: her "I've been spending so much time in your office lately, sir..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") - her "If I'm not careful some people may think that I have become your pet..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") + her "If I'm not careful, some people may think that I have become your pet..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I meant to say the teacher's pet..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") her "" ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: block: her "My father used to say: \"Magic is just science we don't understand yet\"." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "He couldn't be more wrong of course..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + her "He couldn't be more wrong, of course..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") block: @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: block: her "I barely study at all anymore..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") - her "Despite that my popularity among the other students seems to be growing..." + her "Despite that, my popularity among the other students seems to be growing..." her "*Hmm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") block: @@ -357,8 +357,8 @@ label hermione_chitchat: her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") block: - her "Add Ashwinder's egg to cauldron..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her "Then add horseshoe reddish and heat..." + her "Add Ashwinder's egg to the cauldron..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Then add horseshoe reddish and heat it up..." her "Then juice a squill bulb..." her "Or was it a dash of thyme first?" ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her ".............." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") @@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: block: her "I am sorry to bother you with this, sir..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "But do you have any condoms?" - her "Sadly the ones I've bought are already gone..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") + her "Sadly, the ones I've bought are already gone..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R") block: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy index 006ac658..c24e46af 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ label hermione_change: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R") elif states.her.level >= 17: - her @ cheeks blush "I guess if you have to call me that sure..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "I guess if you have to call me that, sure..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") elif states.her.level >= 19: her @ cheeks blush "I don't mind..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") elif temp_name == "Cumslut": @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ label hermione_change: her "" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "In fact, from this point forward you don't have to call me [name_genie_hermione] or exchange any favours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", emote="confused") - gen "Let's just void this whole... deal of yours shall we." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let's just void this whole... deal of yours, shall we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "B-but, [name_genie_hermione]?!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid", emote="shocked") her "" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I must apologise {b}Miss Granger{/b}, I thought we had come to some kind of agreeable arrangement by now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ label hermione_change: gen "Negotiations..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You..." ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "That's not an answer..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "{size=-10}Okay..{/size}" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "{size=-10}Okay...{/size}" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "What was that? I didn't hear you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I said yes, you can call me a Slytherin whore... or whatever." ("normal", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Happy now?!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") @@ -483,10 +483,10 @@ label hermione_change: $ states.her.mood += 15 elif states.her.level >= 21: her "Please, [name_genie_hermione], couldn't you call me something else instead?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "But where's fun in that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But where's the fun in that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Why do I even bother... *sigh*" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") elif temp_name == "Mudblood": - if states.her.level >= 21: + if states.her.level >= 21 and states.her.status.sex: her "A{w=0.5}...{w=0.5} {size=+6}{b}{cps=20}mud{w=0.5}blood{/cps}{/b}?!{/size}" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "Did I hear you right, [name_genie_hermione]?!" ("normal", "wide", "base", "mid") menu: @@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ label hermione_change: pass "-!!!{b}ABORT ABORT ABORT{/b}!!!-{#LINT_IGNORE}": gen "What? Of course not!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I said.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I said..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I have to think fast)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: "-Mass flood-": @@ -509,9 +509,9 @@ label hermione_change: gen "Of course I am." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "So what did you want to talk about?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") else: - her "[name_genie_hermione], but it's not raining.." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "[name_genie_hermione], but it's not raining..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Last time I had my dick in you it felt like a mass flood." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Last time I had my dick in you, it felt like a mass flood." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "What? It's true, I swear!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -519,24 +519,22 @@ label hermione_change: gen "I said mad stud!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Mad stud?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "My dick, your ass, bud." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "really..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + her @ cheeks blush "Really..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her @ cheeks blush "You can be so childish sometimes, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") - #"-Leaf bud-": - # jump hermione_talk jump hermione_talk - her "Why would you even suggest calling me such a thing.." ("scream", "squint", "angry", "mid") + her "Why would you even suggest calling me such a thing..." ("scream", "squint", "angry", "mid") her @ tears soft "It's like the most offensive thing you could call someone like..." ("shock", "squint", "angry", "mid") - her @ tears soft_blink "like..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her @ tears soft_blink "Like..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ tears mascara_crying "Someone like..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her @ tears mascara_soft "me..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her @ tears mascara_soft "Me..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ tears mascara "" ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") menu: "-Try to calm her down-": her @ tears mascara "" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Now, now, there's no need to cry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Do you know why I call you these things miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "... no?" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") - gen "It's so that you'll come to know that words are just words and they only hurt if you let them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Do you know why I call you these things, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ tears mascara "... No?" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") + gen "It's so that you'll come to know that words are just words, and they only hurt if you let them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara "..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Once you truly understand that nothing will hold you back." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And you'll be at your utmost potential." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -545,9 +543,8 @@ label hermione_change: gen "Yes, in fact I do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ tears mascara "I can do it, I know I can." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") - $ states.her.mood = 0 "-Tell her she deserves it-": - gen "You deserve to be called a slut, a whore and a mudblood... just look at you." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You deserve to be called a slut, a whore and a mudblood... Just look at you." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara_soft_blink "..." ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ tears mascara_soft "" ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "You walk into my office and sell your body for the sole reason that it will make Gryffindor happy to win the house cup." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -555,25 +552,20 @@ label hermione_change: her @ tears mascara_soft "" ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Bending over onto my desk and let yourself be taken like a some common harlot..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara_soft "I..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") - gen "Letting your headmaster thrust himself upon you and taking my load like your life depended on it..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Letting your headmaster thrust himself upon you, and taking my load like your life depended on it..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara_soft "..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ tears mascara "" ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "I bet you don't even care about the points anymore..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "Well..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her @ tears mascara "I..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ tears mascara "" ("normal", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "You are nothing more than a whore..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "" ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") + her @ tears mascara "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "{size=+4}{b}MY{/b}{/size} whore!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") + her @ tears mascara "" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "up") gen "And I {b}will{/b} call you however I want!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "Yes, [name_genie_hermione], I understand." ("silly", "narrow", "base", "up") - her @ tears mascara "I am your toy{w=0.6}, your fuckslut{w=0.6}, your cocksleeve, your--" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") - gen "Yes, that you are but it's enough..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "I fully belong to you... [name_genie_hermione]." ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead") - her @ tears mascara "" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") - $ states.her.mood = 0 + her @ tears mascara "...." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "up") else: #Custom/fallback - her "Bit odd but sure, you can call me that..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "That's a bit odd... But sure, you can call me that." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") $ name_hermione_genie = temp_name jump hermione_talk diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index e271b81b..5395c66c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -298,9 +298,9 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "I'm afraid not, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Okay then... Let me just change it real quick." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") - ######################################################## - ## Clear Night (Jeans and muggle top with vest) ## - ######################################################## + ################################################## + ## Clear Night (Jeans and muggle top with vest) ## + ################################################## elif item == her_outfit_s_clearnight: gen "Could you wear your normal clothing, the one with jeans and the top with the vest?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 4: @@ -385,15 +385,15 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Rainy (School outfit with cloak)## ##################################### elif item == her_outfit_s_rain: - gen "Could you put on your regular school outfit, and your cloak as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Could you put on your regular school uniform, and your cloak as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 4: her "I wanted to talk to you about this actually..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(Oh, here we go...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "The cloak doesn't cover the head, so when it rains it just ends up in your hair." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "I always end up having to dry it using magic, making it go all frizzy." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "I always end up having to dry it using magic, which makes it go all frizzy." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Isn't your hair already--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "I mean... great point [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean... Great point [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Now. can you put it on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "...{w=0.4} Fine..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy index dbe20e10..26ad1325 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ label luna_chitchat: random: block: lun "We were brewing a Draught of Peace during today's potions lesson, which reminded me of an article in The Quibbler about Valerian root." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "It described the roots calming properties and how when you chew on it, it will produce the same effect as the potion." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "It described the root's calming properties and how when you chew on it, it will produce the same effect as the potion." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") lun "I brought this fact up to professor Snape, but he just laughed and prompted me to have at it." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") lun "So I tried chewing on one... And let me tell you... I've never felt so relaxed in my life." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label luna_chitchat: block: lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} There's something I've been meaning to ask you." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "Could we avoid putting up so many mistletoe's during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "Could we avoid putting up so many mistletoes during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") lun "It would highly decrease the risk of a Nargle infestation." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ label luna_chitchat: block: lun "I'm still not so sure I'll ever be able to get rid of these spurts myself..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - lun "If it requires a lot of focus that is...{w=0.4} I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + lun "If it requires a lot of focus, that is...{w=0.4} I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") block: lun "Are you sure we shouldn't clean your desk, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid")