From 5e76ca2cb275dce7aa0634f910ab9b8dc90241c4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LoafyLemon <loafylemon@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2022 18:54:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Bugfixes

* Fixed leaking menu option (dev)
* Proofreading (dev)
---
 .../hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy       | 19 ++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy
index 3f80cc94..23db65eb 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy
@@ -298,30 +298,39 @@ label hg_vibrators:
     menu:
         "-Send her out-" if not _temp_lockout and game.daytime:
             jump hg_vibrators_public
+
         "-Send her out-" (style="disabled") if _temp_lockout and game.daytime:
             gen "She already said no..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
             jump .choices
+
         "-Send her out-" (style="disabled") if not game.daytime:
             her "But it's already past curfew..."
             gen "Oh, right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             nar "This option is only available during the day."
-        "-That shall do for now-" if _temp_lockout or not game.daytime:
+
+            jump .choices
+
+        "-Finish early-" if _temp_lockout or not game.daytime:
             jump her_vibrators_nevermind
+
         "-Have her stay for a personal session-":
             jump hg_vibrators_personal
+
 label her_vibrators_nevermind:
     gen "In that case, that shall do for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Really?!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
+
     if not game.daytime:
-        gen "Yes, I've realised that my options are too limited at night." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Yes, I've realized that my options are too limited at night." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Options?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
         gen "Yes, I know. It's a difficult concept, but I do in fact have options at times." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid")
-        gen "You can leave the vibrators here on my desk." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "You can leave the vibrators here, on my desk." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Off you go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     else:
         gen "Yes, you can leave the vibrators with me, if you like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+
     if her_tier >= 5: #wants to keep them
         her "Oh... *Ehm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Or you could keep them, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -337,10 +346,10 @@ label her_vibrators_nevermind:
     pause 1
 
     if game.daytime:
-        her "Good day then, [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+        her "Good day to you, [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Until next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     else:
-        her "Good night then, [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+        her "Good night, [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Good night, [hermione_name]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     call her_walk(action="leave")