Fixes and improvements

* Improved parts of the Susan/Astoria writing.
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Johnny28 2023-03-24 16:38:38 +01:00
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@ -129,7 +129,6 @@ label spell_not_known:
label astoria_talk:
menu:
"-Ask about Slytherin Quidditch Team-" (icon="interface/icons/small/quidditch.webp") if cho_tier == 2 and cho_quid.lock_practice and cho_quid.E6_complete and not cho_quid.E8_complete:
# TODO: Posing
gen "Could you help me with something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Depends what it is." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid")
ast "And what's in it for me..." ("smile", "closed", "angry", "mid")
@ -137,15 +136,15 @@ label astoria_talk:
ast "And?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "I was wondering if there's something you could do about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Like what?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid")
gen "I don't know... ask them nicely?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I don't know... Ask them nicely?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Yeah right, those guys would never listen to me..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R")
ast "And can't you do something about it? You're the headmaster!" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid")
gen "Well, I can't technically force them to do anything. If I could then that would make things way easier..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Well, I can't technically force them to do anything. If I could, then that would make things a lot easier..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Ask Snape then, he's the head of Slytherin... If they'd listen to anyone it'd be him." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
if cho_quid.E9_complete:
gen "I already did..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "(If only he'd listen to me...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
else:
gen "I could..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "(I suppose, if there's no other option...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Well, I'll try and think of something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "You do that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
@ -180,7 +179,7 @@ label astoria_talk:
ast "That's so cool!" ( face="happy")
gen "(Oh right. Nobody is supposed to know that.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "It's just my name, [name_astoria_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Oh... okay, [name_genie_astoria]." ( face="neutral")
ast "Oh... Okay, [name_genie_astoria]." ( face="neutral")
jump astoria_talk
"-Lord Voldemort-":
label .lord_voldemort:
@ -215,13 +214,13 @@ label astoria_talk:
"-Master-" if ast_whoring >= 18:
label .master:
$ name_genie_astoria = "Master"
ast "*Ha-ha-ha-ha*-- you want me to call you master?" ( face="happy")
ast "*Ha-ha-ha-ha*-- You want me to call you master?" ( face="happy")
ast "That's so silly!" ( face="happy")
gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Well alright... M-master--" ( face="happy")
ast "*Ha-ha-ha-ha*--{w=1.0}{nw}" ( face="happy")
with hpunch
gen "Shut it... or there will be consequences!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Shut it... Or there will be consequences!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "I'm sorry... It won't happen again, master..." ( face="neutral")
jump astoria_talk
"-Custom Input-" (style="disabled") if ast_whoring < 18:
@ -240,7 +239,7 @@ label astoria_talk:
jump astoria_talk
else:
$ name_genie_astoria = temp_name
ast "*Uhm*... ok. I will call you [name_genie_astoria]." ( face="neutral")
ast "*Uhm*... Okay... I will call you [name_genie_astoria]." ( face="neutral")
jump astoria_talk
"-Never mind-":
jump astoria_talk
@ -308,7 +307,7 @@ label astoria_talk:
$ name_astoria_genie = temp_name
ast "That's a bit much, don't you think, [name_genie_astoria]?" ( face="disgusted")
gen "Not at all!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I will only call you that when we are alone, promised!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I will only call you that when we are alone!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ast "Well... Okay then..." ( face="neutral")
jump astoria_talk
"-Never mind-":