From 6409b2b7d89a506470a5d99653c8439c8d7d4c3e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Sun, 16 Apr 2023 18:25:21 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- .../hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy | 43 ++++++++++--------- .../hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy | 8 ++-- .../hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy | 12 +++--- .../events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy | 4 +- .../favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy | 6 +-- .../hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 40 ++++++++++------- .../events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy | 18 ++++---- .../events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy | 12 +++--- .../events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy | 2 +- .../events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy | 10 ++--- .../hermione/events/requests/kiss_a_girl.rpy | 22 +++++----- .../events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy | 6 +-- 12 files changed, 96 insertions(+), 87 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy index 164fba56..e23ac788 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: gen "[name_hermione_genie], I need you to dance for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Again, [name_genie_hermione]...?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "You will get paid accordingly of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You will get paid accordingly, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............................" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "And you expect me to--{w=0.2} *Ehm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Take your clothes off. Naturally." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: her "Here it goes!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") "\"You need to calm down, [name_hermione_genie].\"": her "Well, {size=+7}EXCUSE ME{/size}, [name_genie_hermione]!" - her "You told me to strip for you, but you never told me your preferences in regards to the pace!" + her "You told me to strip for you, but you never told me your preferences regarding the pace!" gen "Well, I'm telling you now, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Too late!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: gen "{size=-4}(Maybe it was still too early to--){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Clothes?!!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "{size=+9}I don't need them!{/size}" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") - if hermione.is_worn("bra"): #Should be on at this level but might as well have the check + if hermione.is_worn("bra"): #Should be on at this level, but might as well have the check nar "Hermione keeps dancing angrily, and then..." her "" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" @@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: call kiss_her her "" ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") pause.2 - gen "{size=-4}(Yes, motor boating these titties is be the best!){/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{size=-4}(Yes, motor boating these titties is the best!){/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("shock", "wide", "worried", "shocked") pause.2 @@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: gen "There it is!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "There, can I get paid now?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... Well I'm not sure we're quite done here yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... Well, I'm not sure whether we're quite done here yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("upset", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") $ hermione.strip("clothes") @@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_E2: gen "[name_hermione_genie], how about another strip?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".............." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft", xpos="base", ypos="base") her "I would really rather not, [name_genie_hermione]..." - gen "Why? You are getting quite good at it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why? You're getting quite good at it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "........................." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "{number=current_payout} house points..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Sure! The usual rate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -909,7 +909,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_watch: menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "{size=-3}\"Good job, [name_hermione_genie]! You sure know how to dance!\"{/size}": + "{size=-3}\"Good job, [name_hermione_genie]! You certainly know how to dance!\"{/size}": her ".............." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "You have a lot of talent for this!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you [name_genie_hermione]." ("soft", "base", "worried", "R", emote="sweat") @@ -1014,7 +1014,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_intro_E2: her "Oh... Well, I've been practising a bit more, so I won't make a fool out of myself." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Very good... I'd love to see your progress." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bottom", "panties", "bra"): - gen "You've practised taking you clothes off?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've practised taking your clothes off?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, I've been practising dancing..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well then, let me see your progress." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1206,7 +1206,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4: her "I'm one of your students!" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her "And you're older than my father!" ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") gen "{size=-4}(You have no idea, girl.){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Surely you must be looking at in in a scientific way, where \"love\" is described as nothing but a chemical reaction..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Surely you must be looking at in scientifically, where \"love\" is described as nothing but a chemical reaction..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her "Since I've been causing you to experience sexual arousal, you must've had an increase in endorphins-- Hormones-- Testosterone-- Estrogen--" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "[name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1260,7 +1260,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_watch: nar "Hermione begins taking off her panties..." play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("panties") - nar "Once past her hips, she lets them go and they slide down to her feet..." + nar "Once past her hips, she lets them go, and they slide down to her feet..." play sound "sounds/cloth_sound4.ogg" nar "After flicking them off the table, she resumes her dancing..." else: @@ -1271,10 +1271,10 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_watch: else: nar "Just as Hermione is about to move on to the next part of her dance, your focus shifts towards her lower lips..." - nar "Noticing your stare, Hermione's body become slightly more tense, yet she still tries to push on, in an attempted seductive manner..." + nar "Noticing your stare, Hermione's body becomes slightly more tense, yet she still tries to push on, in an attempted seductive manner..." nar "Set on finishing her task, she does her best to avoid looking directly at you..." - nar "You can see that she is doing her best to be graceful... But in her attempts at avoiding your gaze, she periodically stumble on her own feet..." - gen "*Hmm*... Perhaps I spoke to soon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + nar "You can see that she is doing her best to be graceful... But in her attempts at avoiding your gaze, she periodically stumbles on her own feet..." + gen "*Hmm*... Perhaps I spoke too soon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "She'd never get any tips at this rate..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "Oh, did I say that out loud?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1319,7 +1319,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_watch: menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "{size=-3}\"Good job, [name_hermione_genie]! You sure know how to dance!\"{/size}": + "{size=-3}\"Good job, [name_hermione_genie]! You certainly know how to dance!\"{/size}": her "Really?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Yes! You have a lot of talent for this!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you [name_genie_hermione]." ("silly", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") @@ -1391,15 +1391,15 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: else: nar "Just as Hermione is about to move on to the next part of her dance, your focus shifts towards her lower lips..." - nar "As if feeling your stare, Hermione finally gives in and looks down, and moving past your face, her gaze locks onto your rock hard cock..." + nar "As if feeling your stare, Hermione finally gives in and looks down, and moving past your face, her gaze locks onto your rock-hard cock..." play sound "sounds/gasp.ogg" her "*Gasp*" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") her "" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") nar "Catching herself in the act, she quickly looks back up at your face..." nar "You stare into her eyes, while still furiously beating yourself off..." - nar "Doing her best to try and brush past her moment of weakness, she gives you a half hearted smile, in an attempted seductive manner." + nar "Doing her best to try and brush past her moment of weakness, she gives you a half-hearted smile, in an attempted seductive manner." nar "Set on finishing her task, she does her best to avoid looking directly at you." - nar "You can see that she is doing her best to be graceful... But in her attempts at avoiding your gaze, she periodically stumble on her own feet." + nar "You can see that she is doing her best to be graceful... But in her attempts at avoiding your gaze, she periodically stumbles on her own feet." call ctc nar "Nonetheless, you decide to show her some appreciation..." @@ -1413,8 +1413,9 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: call ctc gen "{size=-4}(Did she practise this?){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You can't help but feeling entranced by her movements, and without realising, your strokes slowly starts syncing up with Hermione." + nar "You can't help but feel entranced by Hermione's movements." her "{size=-5}(Three-two-one... Three-two-one... And step!){/size}" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + nar "You almost feel in sync with Hermione's dancing, and you begin stroking your dick along with her movements." gen "{size=-5}(One-two-three... One-two-three... And edge!){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pause.5 @@ -1423,9 +1424,9 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: nar "If not for her naked tits bouncing all over the place." gen "Yes, dance for me, you little whore!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Either it be due to wanting to finish things quickly, or being excited by your words, Hermione starts putting even more effort into her dance." + nar "Either due to wanting to finish things quickly, or being excited by your words, Hermione starts putting even more effort into her dance." nar "Her every motion now comes across as purposeful and natural, and you can't help but almost getting hypnotized by her perky nipples..." - nar "And after few more movements, a couple of gestures and a little curtsy bow to the imaginary public--" + nar "And after a few more movements, a couple of gestures and a little curtsy bow to the imaginary public--" show screen blkfade with d5 @@ -1511,7 +1512,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: "\"You get one extra point.\"": play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME. her "One extra point?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "One meagre point for allowing you do defile me like this?" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "One meagre point for allowing you to defile me like this?" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "Now, that is just insulting, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "One extra point, [name_hermione_genie]. Take it or leave it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call her_chibi("sit_naked","on_desk","on_desk") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy index 15fe9142..b688a36b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope: her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") if game.daytime: - her "Now if you don't mind, I'd better go. My classes are about to start." + her "Now, if you don't mind, I'd better go. My classes are about to start." else: her "I'd better go now. It's getting pretty late..." @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_intro_E1: her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "How would you like to earn some house points today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And what would I need to do to earn them?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Oh nothing too out of the ordinary." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, nothing too out of the ordinary." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You'd just have to stand here, while I grope you for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]... I'd prefer it if you wouldn't make me such offers..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Why? Too hard to resist?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -296,9 +296,9 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_E1: ### Tier 4 ### -# Event 1 (i) - Hermione ejoys it. +# Event 1 (i) - Hermione enjoys it. # Event 2 (i) - Hermione asks if you are going to grope her tits or her ass. -# Event 2 (i) - Hermione ejoys it. +# Event 2 (i) - Hermione enjoys it. label hg_pf_grope_T4_intro_E1: gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy index a9f3b9c0..8baada4a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_continue: gen "Yeah, sure, I'm researching... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well, you wouldn't understand, this is some pretty advanced wizardry stuff..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I see..." ("soft", "wide", "base", "stare") - her "Well, if it is for research then I am glad to be of help..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "Well, if it is for research, then I am glad to be of help..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") "-Just squeeze her butt cheeks tighter-": nar "You give Hermione's butt cheeks a couple of extra firm squeezes." @@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_continue: pass "-Slide your hands across her pussy-" if not hermione.is_worn("panties"): - nar "You slowly slide one of your hands across her pussy.." + nar "You slowly slide one of your hands across her pussy..." her "[name_genie_hermione]... What are you...?" ("mad", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush", ypos="head", flip=False) gen "That's alright, just think about those {number=current_payout} points your house is about to receive..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_continue: menu: "-Prod her pussy with one of your fingers-": - nar "You slide one of your fingers down and place it against the girls slit..." + nar "You slide one of your fingers down and place it against the girl's slit..." her "[name_genie_hermione]? No! What are you...?" ("mad", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") nar "Hermione tries to pull away from you..." $ states.her.mood += 3 @@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T4_back: nar "You spread your hands out and then suddenly tighten them firmly around Hermione's Butt cheeks..." her "!!!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") gen "Be careful what you wish for, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Giving me free reign might show you just how greedy I can be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Giving me free rein might show you just how greedy I can be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "Although perhaps if you're lucky enough, you could also receive some of my well known generosity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Lessening your grip on her cheeks slightly, you then move down towards her inner thighs, and gently begin massaging her with your thumbs..." @@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T4_back: her "!!!!!!!!!!!!!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") - gen "Did you not just say it didn't matter to you how I wanted it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Did you not just say that it didn't matter to you how I wanted it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... But--" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "{size=+5}BUTT!{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T4_continue: her "*Ah*..." ("silly", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") nar "With no more objections, you move your index finger across her clit and begin rubbing it gently..." her "..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - nar "Completely lost in the moment, Hermione's body reacts and she grinds on your fingers slightly, as you massage her." + nar "Completely lost in the moment, Hermione's body reacts, and she grinds on your fingers slightly, as you massage her." nar "In response to her movement, you start rubbing her faster, and as you do so, she squeals and lets out a gentle moan." her "*Hnnngh*" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") #still has eyes closed her "...." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") #Opens her eyes wide diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy index 22482ab3..ce95cd63 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy @@ -64,13 +64,13 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T2: nar "You keep massaging her tits..." nar "You give one of her breasts a few pinches trying to locate the nipple..." her "[name_genie_hermione]... You're pinching me...?" ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - nar "Your attempts prove to be fruitless though. The fabric of her clothes is quite thick..." + nar "Your attempts prove to be fruitless, though... The fabric of her clothes is quite thick..." her "Gryffindor........." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") jump end_hg_pf_grope "-Let her go and give her the points-": - gen "Well if you're going to make a drama out of this, you might as well leave..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, if you're going to make a drama out of this, you might as well leave..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You unhand the girl's breasts..." her "Thank you..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "But you didn't earn it today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy index 0452b931..f19ece98 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy @@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_masturbate: # Call label call ctc if states.her.level < 17: - her "[name_genie_hermione], actually I never agreed to this..." ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "[name_genie_hermione], I never actually agreed to this..." ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "What are you complaining about, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'm not even touching you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, but you are... touching yourself, [name_genie_hermione]." ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_masturbate: # Call label her "Not to... *Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") her "Not to discharge..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") her "Not on me, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") - gen "Not on you, you say... So you still don't mind if I finish!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not on you, you say... So, you still don't mind if I finish!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You nasty little--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Fine, whatever..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_masturbate: # Call label her "Not to... *Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") her "Not to cum on me, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") gen "If that's what you want..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But whether I finish or not, wont be up to you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But whether I finish or not, won't be up to you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "......................." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") nar "You begin stroking your cock even faster..." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 7feedb33..3d62bf45 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: her "Of course, not a single muggle-born found it funny... Until Professor Burbage brought out what she actually believed to be a back massager..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "Isn't that what it says on the box?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, but--" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "Wait, so you're saying that you're aware of what people actually usually use them for?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Wait, so you're saying that you're aware of what people actually use them for?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "wide", "worried", "shocked", cheeks="blush") gen "Well?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -645,7 +645,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "Is there some sort of special circumstance as to why the two of you summoned me here?" ("base", "base", "raised", "mid", hair="basic") gen "More or less." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I think the three of us should have a bit of a chat..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Miss Granger, you didn't cause any trouble I hope?" ("open", "base", "base", "L") + ton "Miss Granger, you didn't cause any trouble, I hope?" ("open", "base", "base", "L") her "Me? Of course not!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "Having some \"DADA\" issues? I could tutor you, if you'd like..." ("horny", "base", "base", "L", hair="horny") her "That's not--" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "I... Yes, I believe so... And the morale amongst my friends has risen substantially." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") ton "Excellent." ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") else: - ton "Well, I'm sure your male friends appreciates the fact that you've been making up for their shortcomings..." ("base", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") + ton "Well, I'm sure your male friends appreciate the fact that you've been making up for their shortcomings..." ("base", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") her "It's not their fault that the teachers aren't as interested in buying favours from them." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "Yes... The women earning more than the men is a complex dilemma, that's for sure..." ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") ton "Well, at least they can sleep easy, knowing that they've got you out there doing what is necessary for the sake of your house, right?" ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") @@ -885,9 +885,9 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "I'm not sure what you mean, Professor..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") ton "I think what your headmaster is getting at..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") if not _yourself: - ton "Is there any other... uncouth behaviour going on, in regards to your fellow students or teachers?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") + ton "Is there any other... uncouth behaviour going on, regarding your fellow students or teachers?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") else: - ton "Is there any other... uncouth behaviour going on, outside of the dungeons?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") + ton "Is there any other... uncouth behaviour going on, outside the dungeons?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") ton "You've only mentioned potions and alchemy class thus far." ("base", "base", "base", "L") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(Where did those bad teachers touch you?)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -907,16 +907,24 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "It's not even just the Slytherins doing it!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "Oh really?" ("base", "base", "raised", "L") her "Yes, that girl from Ravenclaw...{w=0.6} Cho Chang..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "She was using some pretty dirty tactics - during the first Quidditch match of the season!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + if states.cho.tier >= 4: # After winning the cup. + her "She used some pretty dirty tactics, just so that Ravenclaw could win the Quidditch cup this season!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + else: + her "She's been using some pretty dirty tactics during Quidditch this season!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "(Yes, very dirty indeed...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You could clearly see her panties at one point..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "Surely she dressed that way just to distract the other team..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "You could clearly see her panties during the match between Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") + if states.cho.tier >= 3: # After winning against Slytherin + her "And there are no doubts in my mind that she was wearing those trousers during her match against Slytherin so that she could egg on their beaters." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "Why is she even playing the game if the only thing she's good at is distracting the enemy team..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(I'm sure it distracted the commentator as well...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "Were you looking, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just the enemy team, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", cheeks="blush") - ton "*Hmm*... Sounds like watching Quidditch has gotten a lot more interesting since I was a student." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") + if states.cho.tier >= 4: + ton "*Hmm*... Yes, she certainly did use some quite interesting tactics..." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") + else: + ton "*Hmm*... Yes, she certainly has been using some quite interesting tactics thus far..." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") her "I wouldn't use the word \"interesting\" to describe it..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") ton "I'll make sure to show up to the next match, to see what's going on for myself." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Thank you professor..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -954,7 +962,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: block weight 0.9 if states.ast.unlocked: # After Astoria got caught. her "That Astoria girl, casting imperio on a student, and making her lift her top..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") - ton "Ah, yes that was unfortunate..." ("normal", "base", "worried", "R", hair="basic") + ton "Ah, yes... That was unfortunate." ("normal", "base", "worried", "R", hair="basic") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(And hot...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I take it that has been dealt with?" ("normal", "base", "base", "R") @@ -985,8 +993,8 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: if states.gen.masturbating: her "She was shaking it up and down... Which was only agitating it a bit initially." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "(Yes I bet you'd love to do that with my cock.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "But then she really got going, and it got to the point where it could blast off at a moments notice..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "(Yes, I bet you'd love to do that with my cock.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "But then she really got going, and it got to the point where it could blast off at a moment's notice..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Yes, any minute now...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I was just about to call her out on her disgraceful behaviour, when suddenly the Skrewt started shaking violently." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "(Yes, any second now...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1022,7 +1030,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "Well, then... I think we're done here..." ("base", "narrow", "raised", "R") her "..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") if game.daytime: - ton "I'll leave you two to it, have a good day, Miss Granger." ("base", "base", "base", "L") + ton "I'll leave you two to it, have a lovely day, Miss Granger." ("base", "base", "base", "L") her "Good day, professor." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") else: ton "I'll leave you two to it, have a good night, Miss Granger." ("base", "base", "base", "L") @@ -1069,7 +1077,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "My lips are sealed. {heart}" ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") her "Professor..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Miss Granger, your professor asked you a question..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "But, I thought it was supposed to stay between just you and I..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + her "But, I thought it was supposed to stay between just you and me..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") menu: "\"That's true\"": @@ -1187,7 +1195,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "I'm sure your house benefited greatly from his enjoyment." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") her "I suppose..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") ton "Well, I do believe we're done here..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", hair="basic") - ton "Thank you for sharing these things with me Miss Granger... I can see that you've put a lot of effort into helping your house." ("open", "base", "base", "L") + ton "Thank you for sharing these things with me Miss Granger... I can see that you've put significant effort into helping your house." ("open", "base", "base", "L") ton "They should be proud to have you." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Thank you, Professor..." ("base", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy index 26df2dd1..294b6174 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash: her "I am getting paid for this, am I not?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Why would I complain about a simple task like this then?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "{number=current_payout} house points is a fair prices for a few seconds of excitement... *Err*..." + her "{number=current_payout} house points is a fair price for a few seconds of excitement... *Err*..." her "... I mean, embarrassment." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "{size=-3}(She changed this much already?){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{size=-3}(I'm so good at this training thing that it's starting to get creepy!){/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: her "*Ehm*... Sort of..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Sort of?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... *Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Well, I've had my eyes on this Hufflepuff guy for a while, so I decided he could potentially be the someone that I try it on..." + her "Well, I've had my eyes on this Hufflepuff guy for a while, so I decided he could potentially be the \"someone\" that I try it on..." gen "You've \"had your eyes on him\" have you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, as he's always the person to arrive to his classes first, I made the assumption I might be able to catch him alone." gen "Right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: show her_flash_public hermione_pose3 eyes_open_right effects_questions as cg with d5 - her "In this moment of confusion, I quickly took the opportunity to try and correct my mistake." + her "During this moment of confusion, I quickly took the opportunity to try and correct my mistake." show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose4 eyes_clenched blush_heavy effects_exclamation as cg with d5 @@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T4_E1: her "I never said \"sexual\"..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Nevertheless, you can stop selling me these favours at any moment, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "And yet you keep on coming back..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And yet, you keep on coming back..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............................" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I think you may actually be taking some twisted form of pleasure from this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T4_E2: her "So he... He--" ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") her "He grabbed one of my breasts, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "mid") her "And he squeezed it like his life depended on it, and wouldn't let go..." ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - gen "Sounds like a clear cut case of childhood trauma." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sounds like a clear-cut case of childhood trauma." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "He even tried to make me promise to meet him after my classes finished for the day..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "And let him..." her "\"Play with my tits\" some more..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T4_E2: gen "So... Did you promise to meet him or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I didn't utter a word to him once he started treating my breast like some sort of squeeze toy..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") her "That said, I am planning to turn up, and give him a piece of my mind after we are done here, [name_genie_hermione]." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "A piece of your body more like..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A piece of your body, more like..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What, I'd never--" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Well... Shouldn't keep him waiting." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T4_E3: her "So I didn't really have the time to perform your task properly, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") gen "*Hmm*...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music - her "Instead I just went to the library window, and..." + her "Instead, I just went to the library window, and..." her "... I just pulled my shirt up and pressed my bare chest against the glass..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "I stood there like that for several seconds..." her "To make sure that at least someone would see them from the outside..." @@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T4_E3: her "I am not sure, [name_genie_hermione]... A couple maybe...?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "\"Maybe\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I don't know, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",cheeks="blush") - her "To be honest I kept my eyes closed..." + her "To be honest, I kept my eyes closed..." gen "How do you know that anyone saw you at all then, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh! I heard someone shout, \"Look! At that window over there!\"." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid",cheeks="blush") her "That's when I covered up and sprinted out of there..." @@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T5_E1: her "Well... I had to spend a big portion of the day in the school library..." ("upset", "wink", "base", "mid") her "So I didn't really have the time to perform your task properly, [name_genie_hermione]..." gen "*Hmm*...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Instead I just made sure there were no teachers around..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Instead, I just made sure there were no teachers around..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music her "Pulled my shirt up..." her "And then I just sat there like that for a while..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy index 1b18ff13..7b190590 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt: her "But why must I do this at all?" gen "Nobody is forcing you, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You don't need to remind me of that, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "Alright if I must... [name_genie_hermione]..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") + her "Alright, if I must... [name_genie_hermione]..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") else: gen "I need you to go make some new friends at the Slytherin house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again, [name_genie_hermione]?" @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E1: gen "I told you to flirt with boys {size=+5}your{/size} age!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I wanted to at first, but..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "I guess I got scared..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "I mean I despise those Slytherins way too much to flirt with them, [name_genie_hermione]!" + her "I mean, I despise those Slytherins way too much to flirt with them, [name_genie_hermione]!" her "I would have to fight my gag-reflex the entire time!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") menu: @@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E2: "\"Well, at least you are trying.\"": her "I truly am..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "But Apparently flirting is not my forte..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "down", emote="sweat") - her "" ("base", "base", "worried", "mid",) + her "" ("base", "base", "worried", "mid") "\"Favour failed! No points for you!\"": stop music fadeout 1.0 @@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E2: "\"The almighty hat is never wrong!\"": her "Yes, of course... Everybody knows that..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - gen "(What hat again? I have no fucking clue what's she's blabbing about.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(What hat again? I have no fucking clue what she's blabbing about.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Doesn't hurt playing along...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Could what make what?\"": @@ -399,12 +399,12 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T3_E1: her "Then those three guys..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Then one more right before the last period..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") her "And finally this last guy that walked me right to your tower, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - gen "So, eleven then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So, eleven, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Those Slytherin boys are really starting to like you, *huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose so..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") her "Well, not all of them were nice to me at first..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "But I used this one trick to \"tame\" them." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "A trick you say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A trick, you say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... Whenever a boy from Slytherin is being mean to me, or calls me names..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "I just swallow my pride and smile in response." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy index d00468d6..06d48793 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick her "So, I made my way to the front of the class, next to Professor Flitwick, and began casting the spell, making a feather float in the air." her "But, as I was explaining the proper swishing and flicking motions, it is when I realized--" gen "You weren't getting praised enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I had already showed the class how to cast that particular spell ages ago." + her "I had already shown the class how to cast that particular spell ages ago." her "It made me think, there must've been some ulterior motive as to why Professor Flitwick would have me do it again." gen "Maybe he's just forgetful? I forget to take my medication all the time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #unspecified medication makes it funnier her "I am sure he did it to take advantage of me, but unfortunately for him, \"forgetting\" that we've already learned that spell made it very clear to me!" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy index a4a1d2e4..be749479 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ label hg_pr_handjob_T4_E1: her "Please, just let me have my points now, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I did not tell you to \"go and touch a boy's penis\", [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I told you to give one of your classmates a handjob." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, yes... That's what I meant of course..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "Well, yes... That's what I meant, of course..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Did you make him cum, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Did his \"wee-wee\" shoot white stuff at you, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ label hg_pr_handjob_T4_E1: her "Oh...?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Is that a Problem, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "N-No [name_genie_hermione]... It's only fair I suppose..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "N-No [name_genie_hermione]... It's only fair, I suppose..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Of course it is!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Well, you did try. Here are your points.\"": @@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ label hg_pr_handjob_T4_E2: play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music her "It went well, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "I asked one of the Gryffindor boys to let me do \"it\" for him..." - her "To my surprise he agreed eagerly." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "To my surprise, he agreed eagerly." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Shocker..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "So we hid behind one of those huge tapestries in the east wing..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "And I... Wanked him until he came..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") @@ -275,11 +275,11 @@ label hg_pr_handjob_T4_E3: hide screen blkfade with d3 - gen "*Hmm*... So I suppose you have completed your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... So, I suppose you have completed your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I did, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "What's the problem, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Boys are jerks, all of them! That is the problem, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her "I was kind enough to offer this this one boy a handjob." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "down") + her "I was kind enough to offer this one boy a handjob." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "down") her "And do you know how he thanked me?" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "By ejaculating all over me!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") her "And he did that on purpose... I know he did!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/kiss_a_girl.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/kiss_a_girl.rpy index c75d6c5b..cc779641 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/kiss_a_girl.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/kiss_a_girl.rpy @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_intro: her "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "Well... I..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Don't be shy, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Did you, or did you not kiss someone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Did you, or did you not, kiss someone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]." gen "So, you kissed someone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T3_E1: play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music her "It was awkward and embarrassing..." gen "Did you do it or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "... No I did not, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "... No, I did not, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "All I achieved was making a complete fool out of myself..." her "In front of the entire class..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Tell me what happened, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T3_E3: "\"I don't appreciate your attitude, [name_hermione_genie].\"": her "Well, that is unfortunate, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Sure is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Because you are not getting paid you insolent, little witch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Because you are not getting paid, you insolent little witch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") stop music fadeout 1.0 @@ -293,10 +293,10 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T4_E2: gen "Very direct [name_hermione_genie], I'm impressed..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you [name_genie_hermione]... Although unfortunately, that's when things went a bit outside of my control." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "Rather than doing what I requested, she immediately jumped to her feet, and kissed me right there and then..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "Nice... Love a girl who's got their life figured out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Nice... Love a girl who's got her life figured out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You kissed her back, I hope?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course I did!" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - her "I requested her help after all, so it would've been weird if I hadn't!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "I requested her help, after all, so it would've been weird if I hadn't!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "Although... Speaking of weird..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Things got weird really fast..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "The way she kissed me..." @@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T4_E3: her "What about you, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "Were you like that when you were younger?" gen "Are you asking if I enjoyed watching two girls going at it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I still do..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") "\"Can't have too much of a good thing.\"": @@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T4_E3: her "That doesn't make any sense..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "Of course it does!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let me explain the maths..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "A guy and a girl kissing is fifty percent gay, because there's a guy involved..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A guy and a girl kissing is fifty percent gay because there's a guy involved..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So if there's two girls, and no guy, that makes it zero percent gay!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Although...{w=0.4} That does make it lesbian...{w=0.4} Which is a hundred percent gay.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "mid") @@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T4_E3: her "But the girl who I was kissing, instead of breaking the kiss, basked in the attention and pulled me even closer towards her." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") her "And she kept going at it, right up until our classes were resuming." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "So, due to her not letting go, and the Slytherin boys pushing away the other girls, I didn't manage to get more than one kiss today." - gen "Sounds to me like your kissing booth idea was way too affective." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sounds to me like your kissing booth idea was far too affective." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Affective, [name_genie_hermione]? Don't you mean--{w=0.2} Oh...{w=0.4} Yes, perhaps you're right..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Either way... You've still done what I've asked of you today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Nicely done [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -460,13 +460,13 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T5_E1: her "And today of all days..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "to be honest..." her "She was quite attractive..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her "For someone from Slytherin that is..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "For someone from Slytherin, that is..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I did not ask her why she needed this so desperately..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "She was probably just trying to boost her own popularity at my expense..." her "Or it could also be that someone from the school staff bought this favour from her..." her "The same way you buy favours from me, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "(Snape?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "If that is the case I am sure that it was professor Snape..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "If that is the case, I am certain that it was professor Snape..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "What? He would never..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You should really investigate Professor Snape's activities, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -492,7 +492,7 @@ label hg_pr_kiss_T5_E1: her "And I had to fight the urge to slap her smug face for doing that..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "But I don't think the boys would appreciate that..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Well... You would be surprised..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "In any case, After that we kissed some more..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "In any case, after that, we kissed some more..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "And then the break was over..." her "And we had to run to class..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "*Sigh*... Nonchalant and innocent schooldays..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy index 80bad978..224535ac 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E1: call hg_pr_grope_intro her "Well, there is not much to tell..." - her "I told that one guy I know that he could touch me a little if he wants..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "I told that one guy I know that he could touch me a little if he wanted..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "He thought I was joking at first..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "It was so embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "So, did he cop a feel or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E3: call hg_pr_grope_intro play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music - her "I led this one guy from Hufflepuff to an empty classroom and I told him that he can touch me if he wants." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "I led this one guy from Hufflepuff to an empty classroom and I told him that he can touch me if he wanted." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "That I don't mind..." her "..........." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "And?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T4_E1: gen "What did the note say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") her "It said... \"You can touch my butt if you want, I bet professor Snape would never notice\"." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R", cheeks="blush") - her "Of course, the entire class, including Snape then burst into laughter..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "Of course, the entire class, including Snape, then burst into laughter..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") her "It was so embarrassing..." her "Professor Snape really is the worst..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Yes, I think we've established that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")