From 641fc2fadbf3c688f9ddc59e18738c23f833f01c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Sat, 25 Mar 2023 16:42:13 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes and improvements * Added strip sounds during Lockheart Tattoo public event. * Removed bld and blktone in some places where it's replaced by inner thought and narrator character. * Minor writing improvements/fixes. * Doll positioning and posing improvements. --- game/scripts/characters/hermione/common.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy | 4 +-- .../events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy | 14 +++----- .../events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy | 33 +++++++++++-------- .../events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy | 19 ++++------- game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy | 13 ++++---- .../characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy | 33 +++++++++---------- .../minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy | 2 +- .../minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy | 18 +++++----- 10 files changed, 67 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/common.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/common.rpy index 3af4b650..c14247ac 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/common.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/common.rpy @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label too_much: "(*Hmm*... I guess it was a little too soon for that.)", "(Did I say something wrong...?)", "(Welp, was worth a shot I guess.)", - "(Perhaps I should rethink my appraoch...)", + "(Perhaps I should rethink my approach...)", "(Judging by her reaction she's not yet ready for it...)" ] diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy index 6656fb74..58757e9c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy @@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E1: $ camera.set_image("CG her_intro hermione bendover") with d5 - nar " Hermione bends down again to pick up her book." + nar "Hermione bends down again to pick up her book." her "--Just put your faith in me, professor." @@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: sna "Next time..." ("snape_38") gen "Alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar " Your meeting comes to an end, and you decide to go to sleep." + nar "Your meeting comes to an end, and you decide to go to sleep." $ ss_he.hermione_E1 = True diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy index 3d8f4f67..20ea94cf 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy @@ -96,15 +96,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_flirt: # Inner monologue if hg_pr_flirt.counter == 1: - show screen blktone - with d3 - her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3) + her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3) her "(I'll need to read about this whole \"flirting\" thing...)" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "L") - hide screen blktone - with d3 - call her_chibi("leave") label .quick_end: @@ -245,6 +240,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E3: call hg_pr_flirt_intro her "Well, the Slytherin quidditch team was practising in the stadium today..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + gen "(Quidish... Team?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I thought I could sneak into the bleachers and cheer them on..." her "But..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -332,7 +328,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E2: her "Well..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "This morning I did flirt with this one guy..." - her "Then after the second period there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + her "Then after the second period, there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") her "And then something bizarre happened..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music her "This angry-looking guy from Slytherin came up to me and asked me out on a date..." @@ -380,8 +376,8 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E3: her "But I still refuse to change my opinion about the Slytherin house, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") gen "I'm not asking you to, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am only doing this to help my own house!" - her "The proud house of \"Gryffndor\"!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - gen "Alright, alright. Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "The proud house of {b}Gryffindor{/b}!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + gen "Alright, alright... Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") jump end_hg_pr_flirt diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy index ce94a4df..37a91f67 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher: her "*huh*?!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") her "Why would I want to flirt with the teach--" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "O-oh... I see..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") - gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You are finally ready to investigate the teachers who made a habit out of buying favours from the students, aren't you?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "I am honoured to pose as bait in this noble endeavour." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "*Ehm*... Yeah, that's exactly what I'm doing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick show her_flirt_public_flitwick zorder 15 as cg with fade - her "So, I made my way to the front of the class, next to Professor Flitwick, and began casting the spell, making the feather float in the air." + her "So, I made my way to the front of the class, next to Professor Flitwick, and began casting the spell, making a feather float in the air." her "But, as I was explaining the proper swishing and flicking motions, it is when I realized--" gen "You weren't getting praised enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I had already showed the class how to cast that particular spell ages ago." @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E3: # Filch her "And we did hit it off quite well too!" her "He was surprisingly sweet." her "But I don't think he is \"dirty\", [name_genie_hermione]." - gen "Gotcha... mister Filth is off the list then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Gotcha... Mister Filth is off the list then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "It's \"mister Filch\", [name_genie_hermione]..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "What did I say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "......." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "R") @@ -312,6 +312,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2: play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME if hermione.is_worn("robe"): + play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("robe") pause .8 her "Ah..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -322,22 +323,22 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2: gen "[name_hermione_genie]... What have you done to your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What do you...{w=0.4} Oh, that..." ("mad", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Yes that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It's... it's nothing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "It's... It's nothing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") if not hermione.is_worn("stockings"): - gen "The hell it is...{w=0.4} is that writing on your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I... yes..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") + gen "The hell it is...{w=0.4} Is that writing on your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "I... Yes..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Gil... Gilde--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "*Sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Now that's dirty!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What!?" ("clench", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "Tagging the students... why didn't I think of that!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Tagging the students... Why didn't I think of that!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, what are you on about?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Why else would he put his name there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, he's a famous author!" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Doesn't give him the right to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Oh... It's an autograph!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I... what else would it be?" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "I... What else would it be?" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Nothing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Here are your points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -349,11 +350,13 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2: pause.5 her "Here..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down",cheeks="blush") + play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("bottom", "stockings") - pause.5 + with d3 + pause .5 gen "Gil... Gilde--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "*Sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") her "He very kindly gave me his autograph after today's lesson..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "And why would you want such a thing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "He's a very popular and esteemed author, surely you know this..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -370,7 +373,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2: her "I had an amazing day, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy") gen "Do tell, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I had a class with professor Lockhart today..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") - her "[name_genie_hermione] He is so charming and smart and..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "[name_genie_hermione], he is so charming and smart and--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "And perfect..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") gen "Please spare me your schoolgirl crush, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "He was even kind enough to give me his autograph..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy") @@ -398,8 +401,10 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2: pause.5 her "Here..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down",cheeks="blush") + play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("bottom", "stockings") - pause.5 + with d3 + pause .5 gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid", cheeks="blush", emote="angry") @@ -433,7 +438,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E3: # Filch call hg_pr_flirt_teacher_intro play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME. - her "Well, I spent quite some time by flirting with mister Filch today." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") + her "Well, I spent a fair bit of my time, flirting with mister Filch today." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her "What a well-read and exceptionally well-mannered gentleman mister Filch is." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "........" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "But I don't think anyone knows him like that..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy index 7cd850b1..6225b348 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/let_them_grope_you.rpy @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope: her "It's a bit embarrassing..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Sure, I understand. I don't need to know the details..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But here is what I need you to do today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} Or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".......?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "And let them touch you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -110,13 +110,8 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope: # Inner monologue if hg_pr_grope.counter == 1: - show screen blktone - with d3 - her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3) - - hide screen blktone - with d3 + her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3) call her_chibi("leave") @@ -131,10 +126,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope: label hg_pr_grope_intro: call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) + her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Did you finish your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..." + her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) if hg_pr_grope.is_tier_complete(): menu: @@ -150,7 +145,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_intro: her "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "I... *Uhh*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up, or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") return @@ -163,7 +158,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E1: her "Well, there is not much to tell..." her "I told that one guy I know that he could touch me a little if he wants..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "He thought I was joking at first..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") - her "So embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "It was so embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "So, did he cop a feel or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music her "He did..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -192,7 +187,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E2: her "Then I let him rub my..." her "... my c-crotch through my panties, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Very good... And what happened next?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "He just sort of started... Touching himself [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "He just sort of started... Touching himself, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "So, I decided to leave..." gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy index c1ee5c66..176db991 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label summon_hermione: jump hg_tutor_start "-Tutoring-" (icon="interface/icons/small/book.webp", style="disabled") if game.daytime and her_tutoring < 15: - nar " Tutoring is available during the night only." + nar "Tutoring is available during the night only." jump hermione_requests "-Sexual favours-" (icon="interface/icons/small/condom.webp") if hermione_favors: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy index dff25608..c69f45f0 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy @@ -208,13 +208,13 @@ label ss_he_story_E1: sna "Or I could tell you some more about those ripe slytherin sluts..." ("snape_02") gen "The latter, please." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Great... Get a load of this then..." ("snape_13") + hide snape_main - call blktone nar "You spend the evening by discussing all sorts of inappropriate things with Professor Snape." nar "You feel a faint bond forming between you two..." + call sly_plus - call hide_blktone jump end_snape_hangout_points @@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E4: sna "Yes! Hermione Granger - the repulsive slut without any dignity! Yes, I like it!" ("snape_02") gen "And what if in that other world the cheerful Severus teams up with some bizarre version of me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And maybe together we train the slut Hermione to be a proper girl and a good student?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Ha-ha-ha! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28") + sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28") hide snape_main @@ -318,7 +318,6 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E5: hide snape_main nar "Professor Snape seems to feel awkward about benefiting from your misery..." - call notes nar "The bond of friendship between you two strengthens slightly..." call sly_plus @@ -437,7 +436,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E9: # Replace this event. hide snape_main nar "Professor Snape trusts you more than he used to..." - nar "(To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you)." + nar "To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you." call sly_plus @@ -475,7 +474,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E10: hide snape_main nar "You spend the evening by skilfully avoiding a whole variety of similar questions." - nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again." + nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate, the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again." call sly_plus @@ -532,7 +531,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E12: hide snape_main - nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for (sort of) putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..." + nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for {i}sort of{/i} putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..." nar "The bond of your friendship strengthens yet again..." call sly_plus diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy index 5384d940..21f17d5c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label nt_he_firewhisky_E4: ### Events ### label nt_he_favors_E1: - ton "So, [name_genie_tonks]... what's the going rate around here then?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) + ton "So, [name_genie_tonks]... What's the going rate around here then?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) gen "Going rate?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "How much do you pay your students to fool around?" ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Oh... It depends on what you want them to do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ label nt_he_favors_E1: ton "How so?" ("mad", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Well most of them aren't going to do whatever you say from the get go..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You have to slowly earn their trust over time and start out small..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "*Awww*... really? Can't I just cheat a bit?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "L") + ton "*Awww*... Really? Can't I just cheat a bit?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "L") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Just take it slow, I'm sure you'll find a cute boy who'll be willing to do whatever you want anyway." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") @@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E3: ton "Yeah, that would be impressive." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") ton "I haven't found a single wizard that could do that." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid") gen "Ah yes. Because all those cunning bachelors are already taken...{w} or gay..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "No. Single as in... no one can do it." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "No. Single as in... No one can do it." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "It's almost impossible to summon drinks and food out of thin air." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "Best they can do is conjure water out of the surrounding humidity." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") gen "That's oddly limiting... Genie's can conjure food with a snap of a finger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E3: label nt_he_story_intro_E4: ton "I've been so busy lately... The days here fly by faster than a Firebolt." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) - gen "I'm not sure I know that... spell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm not sure I know that... Spell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "It's a broom..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, I see... I'm not really that into brooms." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or anything that is inconveniently stiff and long to ride on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E5: ton "I studied to become an auror with the hopes of taking down evil wizards." ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "down") gen "Sounds like a nineties B movie to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "A what?" ("normal", "shocked", "raised", "mid") - gen "Never mind... continue." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Never mind... Continue." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "In any case... That's not at all how the job is anymore." ("mad", "base", "base", "R") gen "Was it ever?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That's what they told me..." ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "R") #'tell' to 'told' @@ -478,11 +478,11 @@ label nt_he_story_E8: gen "Turn where?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Into a werewolf." ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "So, the thing is... we hadn't taken into account that it was mating season for them..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down") + ton "So, the thing is... We hadn't taken into account that it was mating season for them..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "You don't say!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The guy wasn't that interested in biting me that's for sure." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") ton "So you can see why I wasn't so keen on reporting it. More of an embarrassing situation sort of thing than anything else." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "And it was totally our fault, I should've recognised the signs straight away... when they're turned they're largely driven by their instincts." ("open", "base", "shocked", "down") + ton "And it was totally our fault, I should've recognised the signs straight away... When they're turned they're largely driven by their instincts." ("open", "base", "shocked", "down") gen "I see." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Dated him for a while..." ("horny", "base", "base", "R") gen "You did what?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E9: ton "Also... highly illegal." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Anyway..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - ton "He could've ended up in prison... but law isn't black and white like that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "He could've ended up in prison... But law isn't black and white like that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So you're saying that his intentions were good?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "In this instance, the woman in question was in an abusive relationship." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "And the guy knew that the boyfriend was the jealous type..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -519,9 +519,8 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E9: gen "I see, then how did the situation end up?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The girl got out of the abusive relationship and requested to have her memory adjusted." ("open", "wide", "shocked", "mid") gen "And that's--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "That's fine if the person in question is okay with it." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "They have to sign a form and all that..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Obviously..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "That's fine... We do it to muggles all the time." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Where do these people draw the line... making someone fall in love with you just like that?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -579,7 +578,7 @@ label nt_he_story_E11: ton "Of course I didn't know that... I had just heard rumours about the bathroom." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "So did you manage to get in there in the end?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Oh yeah, it was easy!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") - ton "Once I knew about the password I just had to pretend to be one of the prefects, and ask another for it." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + ton "Once I knew about the password, I just had to pretend to be one of the prefects, and ask another for it." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Smart..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump end_tonks_hangout @@ -591,11 +590,11 @@ label nt_he_story_E12: ton "Of course..." ("base", "wide", "shocked", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) ton "Most of my escapades were kind of one trick ponies." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Sounds pretty foolproof to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I mean how many other students could change their appearance?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean, how many other students could change their appearance?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "None, that's why. Process of elimination." ("upset", "base", "raised", "downR") gen "So you got punished without any sort of proof?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "No, but they set up countermeasures after the time when..." ("open", "base", "raised", "R") - ton "I shouldn't really talk about it. They never confronted me about it so fessing up now isn't going to do me any good." ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "down") + ton "No, but they set up countermeasures after the time when--" ("open", "base", "raised", "R") + ton "I shouldn't really talk about it. They never confronted me about it, so fessing up now isn't going to do me any good." ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Not a word leaves this office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Do you think I'm weird?" ("open", "narrow", "shocked", "down") gen "Everyone is a bit... weird..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -603,8 +602,8 @@ label nt_he_story_E12: ton "You might have noticed that I'm a bit more comfortable with my sexuality than most people." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Oh, here we go!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I already told you about the whole werewolf thing, and the power play fantasies with the vampire..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Well, you didn't phrase it that bluntly before but I got the gist." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well, just like many weird or odd sexual preferences they're often deeply embedded with experiences from your youth." ("open", "base", "worried", "L") + gen "Well, you didn't phrase it that bluntly before, but I got the gist." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "Well, just like many weird or odd sexual preferences, they're often deeply embedded with experiences from your youth." ("open", "base", "worried", "L") ton "So for me, there was this one time where I pretended to be a teacher..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") ton "As in, I literally took over their lesson when they were ill." ("mad", "base", "base", "down") gen "How did you manage that, weren't the students notified of their leave beforehand?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy index fd70641d..a579ba21 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ label twins_random_duel: ger "You are broke, sir." fre "Come back with your offer when you have more gold, professor." gen "Fine.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar " You return to your office." + nar "You return to your office." jump main_room ger "Acceptable..." twi "Let's play." diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy index 91c2348e..3ddb45d3 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy @@ -161,11 +161,11 @@ label panty_raid: gen "Ninety points to Gryffi--{w=0.5}{nw}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Ninety points to Gryffi--{fast} wait a second..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") - nar " You take another look at the panties and notice something unusual." + nar "You take another look at the panties and notice something unusual." her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - nar " Both panties and bra have a small piece of paper tied to them." + nar "Both panties and bra have a small piece of paper tied to them." her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") - nar " You reach out and grab the closest pair of panties, then study the paper." + nar "You reach out and grab the closest pair of panties, then study the paper." her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "R") "8.99$\n{size=-3}Thank you for shopping with us and hope to see you back soon!{/size}\nMadam Mafkin{#LINT_IGNORE}" gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -598,31 +598,31 @@ label panty_raid: her "We need to talk--" "Katie" "I know exactly what we need. {heart}" play sound "sounds/slap_03.ogg" - nar " Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{nw}" + nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{nw}" play sound "sounds/door2.ogg" - nar " Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{fast}, then shuts the door." + nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{fast}, then shuts the door." pause 1.0 play sound "sounds/09_lock.ogg" pause 0.5 her "Why did you lock the door...?!" play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" - nar " Katie starts taking off her clothes." + nar "Katie starts taking off her clothes." her "Wha-wha-what-t-t are you d-doing?!" play sound "sounds/giggle.ogg" "Katie" "Aren't you talkative today?{w=0.5} I would save my breath if I were you. {heart}{heart}{heart}" "Katie" "I'm quite{w=0.2} {heart}horny{heart}{w=0.2} so you might be stuck here for a while." play sound "sounds/push_on_bed.ogg" - nar " She pushes Hermione onto the bed." with vpunch + nar "She pushes Hermione onto the bed." with vpunch her "{size=+4}W-wait?!{/size}" play sound "sounds/sit_on_bed.ogg" - nar " Then she swiftly straddles her face in cowgirl position." with hpunch + nar "Then she swiftly straddles her face in cowgirl position." with hpunch play sound "sounds/gltch.ogg" her "..........!!!" her "*Hmph*" play sound "sounds/gasp2.ogg" "Katie" "Ahh!{heart} {w=0.5}So much better... {heart}{heart}{heart}" "Katie" "I'll start moving now.{w=0.5} You ready?" - her "*nwh*!!!" + her "*Nwh*!!!" play sound "sounds/giggle3.ogg" "Katie" "I'll take that as a yes. {heart}{heart}{heart}" play sound "sounds/jump_on_bed.ogg"