* Fixed some narrator calls.
* Minor writing improvements.
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Johnny28 2023-03-20 15:56:52 +01:00
parent fe67e3d9ca
commit 78d05ec008
7 changed files with 65 additions and 65 deletions

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@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event)
# and so it does make sense from a narration standpoint.
if not hermione.is_equipped_item(her_neckwear_whore_collar):
play sound "sounds/collar_click.ogg"
nar ">You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her."
nar "You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her."
hide screen blkfade
with d3
@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event)
her "A present?" ("soft", "wink", "worried", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush", trans=d3)
gen "Yes, it's a lovely piece of jewellery to commemorate your self-acceptance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar ">You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago."
nar "You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago."
her "The collar? You're giving it to me?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid",cheeks="blush")
her "And how is that supposed to be a piece of jewellery?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")

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@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
her "No...{w=0.4} Are you sure you gave me the right potion--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down")
her "**Eekh*!!!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "stare") #shocked
nar ">Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom."
nar "Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom."
gen "You were saying?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "This... It feels a bit strange..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
her "Yes...{w=0.4} There's a slight tingling sensation..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "(Some side effect perhaps?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar ">Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body."
nar "Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body."
$ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1)
play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg"
@ -617,13 +617,13 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
her "*Ah*...." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") #pleasure
nar ">Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect."
nar "Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect."
gen "There it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Is--{w=0.2} Is it normal for the potion to make them so sensitive?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
gen "Sounds like a side effect, but I'd call that better than advertised." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} What...{w=0.4} What's that supposed to mean?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
nar ">Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body."
nar "Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body."
$ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1)
play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg"

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@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ label luna_chitchat:
block:
lun "I had a strange dream last night..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree, when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "Must've been the cheese I ate before going to bed..." ("open", "base", "base", "down")
block:

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@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
if luna.is_worn("top"):
gen "Now then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Let's start with your breasts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Take that top off for me will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Take that top off for me, will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
lun "Of course, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
#Luna takes top off
@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
lun "So...{w=0.4} Do you think this should work, [name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid")
gen "Oh...{w=0.4} It's working alright." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar "Focusing your attention on the girls breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..."
nar "Focusing your attention on the girl's breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..."
lun "Great! So what do I have to do to get the Wrackspurts out of them?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} The what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
nar "Luna's cheeks burns with red as she keeps grinding on the edge of your desk."
gen "(Poor girl is literally edging...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Alright, you have convinced me [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Alright, you have convinced me, [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar "Luna stops her grinding, and begins jumping happily on the spot. Her tits bouncing up and down as she does so."

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@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ label name_luna_genie:
lun "Alright, I suppose I am a girl after all." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid")
elif name_luna_genie == "Partner":
lun "[name_luna_genie]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "Yes, we're partners in venture are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Yes, we're partners in this venture, are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
lun "Oh right!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "Of course, you can call me that!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid")
elif name_luna_genie == "Bimbo":