From 93d87717ac38997ac358328c146a885b604057ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Tue, 14 Mar 2023 18:23:39 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Hermione forest BJ proofreading and Lint fixes * Proofread Hermione forest BJ. * Fixed writing styling inconsistencies reported by Lint. --- .../events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy | 14 +- .../characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy | 2 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy | 210 +++++++++--------- .../hermione/events/items/collars.rpy | 6 +- .../hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy | 2 +- .../hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 4 +- .../characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 2 +- .../mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy | 2 +- 9 files changed, 123 insertions(+), 121 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy index 89040695..66b09685 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy @@ -2270,7 +2270,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: pause.5 - gen "Whoa, you're-" + gen "Whoa, you're--" show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_down tonks_mouth_lip_bite tonks_blush_heavy as cg with d3 @@ -2633,7 +2633,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor...\"" + ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2645,7 +2645,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me...\"" + ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2657,7 +2657,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day...\"" + ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2669,7 +2669,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"With...\"" + ton "\"With\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2679,7 +2679,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"My...\"" + ton "\"My\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2689,7 +2689,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 - ton "\"Body...\"" + ton "\"Body\"..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_smile cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy index 63531572..dbc390c6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy @@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick") #Cho starts licking the tip a couple of times #looking at dick - gen "*Whoa*!" + gen "Whoa!" call ctc diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy index a55fd118..8ffd4c08 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy @@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: nar "Cho smacks Katie on her shapely bum." "Katie" "*Owww*!!" - cho "*imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder!\"" + cho "*Imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder\"!" "Katie" "H-How--" nar "Cho grins at her briefly, then swiftly flies away." "Katie" "Why you little--" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy index 7d12031e..cfd86e0a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy @@ -24,27 +24,27 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle play background "sounds/night.ogg" fadein 1 play sound "sounds/steps_grass.ogg" - nar "Sure enough, the map seems to {b}magically{/b} guide you to the girl, alone in the midnight air..." - nar "Seemingly scraping some resin off a tree..." + nar "Sure enough, the map seems to {b}magically{/b} guide you towards the girl at the edge of the forest..." + nar "As you get closer, you finally spot her outline in the moonlight, followed by little clouds of condensation escaping her mouth with each breath of midnight air." + nar "After getting your hopes up, you realise that the cause for her heavy breathing is due to her being preoccupied with scraping some resin off a tree..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base") hide screen blkfade with d3 - gen "Miss Granger? What are you doing out here at this time of night?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "[name_genie_hermione]! I-- *Ehm*... I wasn't doing anything bad, I swear!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "R", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d5) + gen "[name_hermione_genie]? What are you doing out here at this time of night?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "[name_genie_hermione]! I--{w=0.2} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} I wasn't doing anything bad, I swear!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "R", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d5) gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "*Ugh*, fine! If you must know, I was out here gathering up some mastic resin." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "I know Students aren't {i}technically{/i} supposed to touch the stuff since it's normally just used to make belch powder..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + her "I know students aren't {i}technically{/i} supposed to touch the stuff, since it's normally used to make belch powder..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") her "But I'm using it in my research for a non addictive analgesic!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Whatever..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") menu: "-Let her get back to her botany-": - gen "Well I better leave you be then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "Well, I better leave you be then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "Really?" ("upset", "wide", "worried", "shocked") her "You mean you don't want to--" ("upset", "wide", "worried", "shocked") - gen "Maybe some other time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") nar "You turn away from the miffed girl." gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") @@ -52,14 +52,14 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle return "-Tell her to take care of your stem-": gen "Well, seeing that we're all alone out here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Oh... I, um, guess we are..." ("open", "wide", "base", "R") + her "Oh...{w=0.4} I--{w=0.2} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} I suppose we are..." ("open", "wide", "base", "R") gen "How about you take care of this dick?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Oh thank goodness... I thought you were going to murder me for a second there..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) - gen "What? How could you even think such a thing!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "Oh, thank goodness...{w=0.4} I thought you were going to murder me for a second..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) + gen "What? How could you even think of such a thing!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "Sorry [name_genie_hermione]... I don't know why I said that!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "I should just learn to shut my mouth sometimes..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "How about you open it instead, and let me ensure you can't say such nonsense out loud?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "*Hmm*... Alright..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + gen "How about you open it instead, and let me ensure that you can't voice such nonsense?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} Alright..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") $ forest_BJ_progress = 2 play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" @@ -74,44 +74,44 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "1", "overlay") - her "*Mmmm*... I don't think I'll ever get sick of this cock..." - gen "It'll get sick of having to wait for you to put it in your mouth though." + her "*Mmmm*...{w=0.4} Don't you ever get sick of me sucking your cock?" + gen "The only thing I'll get sick of is having to wait for you to put it in your mouth." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "2", "overlay") - her "*Hmph*... Now, now, [name_genie_hermione]... patience is a virtue." + her "*Hmph*...{w=0.4} Now, now, [name_genie_hermione]...{w=0.4} Patience is a virtue." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "3", "overlay") her "Besides, doesn't my hand feel nice?" gen "Not as nice as your mouth." - her "Alright then... Have it your way." + her "Alright then...{w=0.4} Have it your way." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "4", "overlay") nar "Hermione leans forward and engulfs the head of your cock in her mouth." anon "{size=-4}Wow...{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "5", "overlay") her "!!!" her "Did you hear something?" - gen "What? I don't believe so..." - gen "Not unless you count the sound of you sucking away..." + gen "I don't believe so..." + gen "Not unless you count the sounds of you putting your headmaster's dick in your mouth..." gen "Speaking of which..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "6", "overlay") her "..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "7", "overlay") nar "Hermione goes back to work, slobbering her way up and down your cock." - gen "Gods... they'd make you a queen for sucking cock like this in Agrabah..." + gen "Gods...{w=0.4} They'd make you a queen for sucking cock like this in Agrabah..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "8", "overlay") her "(Where?)" - gen "*Mmmmm*... Fuck yes..." + gen "*Mmm*... Fuck yes..." play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" - anon "{size=-8}*te-he-he-he*...{/size}" + anon "{size=-8}*Te-he-he-he*...{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "5", "overlay") her "!!!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "9", "overlay") - her "Tell me you heard something that time, [name_genie_hermione]!" + her "Please tell me you heard something that time, [name_genie_hermione]!" menu: "-Tell her to get back to work-": gen "All I hear is a mouth that needs to get back to sucking." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "10", "overlay") her "Not now, [name_genie_hermione]!" - her "I think there's someone else here..." + her "I think someone else is here..." her "Or something else..." gen "Wait..." gen "You don't mean..." @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m1", "11", "overlay") with hpunch gen "{size=+10}AH! A G-G-GHOST!{/size}" - myr "*ha-ha-ha-hah*!" + myr "*Ha-ha-ha-hah*!" myr "Good one Dumbledore! You always were a joker." her "Myrtle!" her "This isn't what it looks like!" @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle show screen blkfade with d3 - nar "Hermione hastily covers up and sprints away angrily as the ghostly apparition fades away..." + nar "Hermione hastily covers up and sprints away, as the ghostly apparition fades away..." nar "You stumble back to your office in a confused and blue-balled stupor..." return @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ label forest_BJ_2: play background "sounds/night.ogg" fadein 1 play sound "sounds/steps_grass.ogg" - nar "The map yet again leads you to the curly haired girl, alone at the edge of the forest, picking mushrooms." + nar "The map, yet again, leads you to the curly haired girl at the edge of the forest, who's currently in the midst of picking mushrooms." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base") hide screen blkfade @@ -163,12 +163,12 @@ label forest_BJ_2: her "Don't startle me like that!" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") her "And yes, I've been collecting some mushroom samples." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Fascinating..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "So, what are you doing out here?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "I didn't expect seeing anyone at this time of night." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, you know me... Always looking to connect with my students..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "*Mhmmm*... So that's what you're down here for then? To {i}connect{/i}?" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") - gen "Always..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Fine... Just let me take my robes off..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + her "What are you doing out here?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "I didn't expect to see anyone at this time of night." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") + gen "Oh, you know me... Just looking for any opportunity to connect with my students..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "*Mhmmm*...{w=0.4} That's what you're down here for? To {i}connect{/i}?" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") + gen "In a sense..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "Fine...{w=0.4} Just let me take my robes off..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("robe") @@ -182,32 +182,33 @@ label forest_BJ_2: $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "12", "overlay") - gen "So you're not worried about that ghost?" - her "You mean Myrtle? You know she's harmless..." + gen "So...{w=0.4} You're not afraid that the ghost might show up again?" + her "Are you talking about Myrtle?" + gen "Yeah, that ghost girl." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "10", "overlay") - her "It's the gossip I'm worried about..." + her "Ghosts aren't really scary... It's only her tendency to gossip that I'm worried about..." gen "Gossip?" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "13", "overlay") - her "Stop playing dumb, [name_genie_hermione]! Everyone knows that Myrtle's the biggest gossiper in the history of gossips..." + her "Of course! Everyone knows that Myrtle's the biggest gossiper in the history of gossips..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "4", "overlay") nar "Hermione quickly pops your cock into her mouth in between her words..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "10", "overlay") - her "*Pop*... Not to mention she never forgets! She's {b}still{/b} going on about the whole McCartney thing." + her "*Pop*...{w=0.4} Not to mention the fact that she never forgets! Can you believe that she's {b}still{/b} going on about the whole McCartney thing?" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "8", "overlay") her "*Shlrp* *Schkk* *Slurp*" gen "*Mmmm*..." - gen "So have you heard any gossip floating around then?" + gen "So, have you heard of any gossip floating around then?" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "10", "overlay") her "Surprisingly not..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "14", "overlay") - her "*Slurp* *Schkk* *sShlrp*" + her "*Slurp* *Schkk* *Shlrp*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "13", "overlay") her "Perhaps she doesn't want to upset you..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "4", "overlay") - her "*Shlrp* *schkk* *slurp*" + her "*Shlrp* *Schkk* *Slurp*" gen "*Mmmm*..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "10", "overlay") - her "Still... I didn't think she'd be able to help herself..." + her "Still...{w=0.4} I didn't think she'd be able to help herself..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "14", "overlay") her "*Slurp* *Schkk* *Shlrp*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "15", "overlay") @@ -217,7 +218,7 @@ label forest_BJ_2: $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "12", "overlay") her "It'd be the gossip of the century..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "18", "overlay") - her "*slurp* *schkk* *shlrp*" + her "*Slurp* *Schkk* *Shlrp*" gen "You almost sound disappointed that she didn't tell anyone." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "17", "overlay") her "What? How could you say such a thing!" @@ -261,7 +262,7 @@ label forest_BJ_2: her "!!!!!!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m1", "25", "overlay") call cum_block - gen "Gods I Needed this!" + gen "Gods I needed this!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m1", "26", "overlay") myr "So much...{heart}{heart}{heart}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m1", "25", "overlay") @@ -292,9 +293,9 @@ label forest_BJ_2: her "Yes! You can't just keep using me as you please!" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") her "Can't keep coating me in your, filthy, nasty {b}{heart}cum{heart}{/b}..." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "dead") - her "Well... I hope you've learned your lesson!" ("open", "narrow", "base", "stare") - her "I'm going to go back and..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "R") - her "*Geh*... Wash the taste out of my mouth..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "up") + her "Well...{w=0.4} I hope you've learned your lesson!" ("open", "narrow", "base", "stare") + her "I'm going to go back, and..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "R") + her "*Geh*...{w=0.4} Wash the taste out of my mouth..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "up") her "And remember for next time--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "up") her "Don't{size=-1}... {b}cum{/b}... {size=-1}so... {size=-1}much... {size=-1}down... {size=-1}my... {size=-1}throat...{heart}{heart}{heart}{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "dead") show screen blkfade @@ -322,9 +323,9 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot with d3 gen "Good evening, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]... Fancy meeting you here." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d5) + her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]...{w=0.4} Fancy meeting you here." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d5) gen "What are you doing out here at this hour? You don't appear to be collecting anything." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Oh... I just thought I'd come out here to... Get some fresh air..." ("open", "base", "base", "down", xpos="base", ypos="base") + her "Oh...{w=0.4} I just thought I'd come out here to--{w=0.2} Get some fresh air..." ("open", "base", "base", "down", xpos="base", ypos="base") play sound "sounds/sniff.ogg" her "*Aah*..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") @@ -333,13 +334,13 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot her "I'm just out here to admire the moon!" ("base", "base", "base", "R") gen "What moon?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") nar "Hermione frantically looks to the cloudy sky, unable to even glimpse the moon through the impenetrable greyness." - her "Oh... *Uhm*..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") - gen "It's alright... Just admit that you're a dirty little cumslut, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "Oh...{w=0.4} *Uhm*..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") + gen "It's alright...{w=0.4} Just admit that you're a dirty little cumslut, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "It's not like that!" ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her "{size=-4}I-- I just wanted to...{/size}" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + her "{size=-4}I--{w=0.2} I just wanted to...{/size}" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") gen "So you don't want me to cover you in cum like the cumslut you are?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "*Ugh*... If you must..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "dead") + her "*Ugh*...{w=0.4} If you must..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "dead") show screen blkfade with d3 @@ -365,29 +366,29 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot her "It's almost as if you knew I was going to be here..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "18", "overlay") her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*" - gen "I'm sure it's just a coincidence... Although speaking of bumping, how about you bump this dick into the back of your throat." + gen "I'm sure it's just a coincidence...{w=0.4} Although speaking of bumping, how about you help me bump this dick into the back of your throat." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "20", "overlay") her "*Khes* *sh-r*! (Yes sir!)" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "27", "overlay") - nar "In response, hermione thrusts her entire lithe frame forwards, forcing your thick cock all the way down her throat." + nar "In response to your request, Hermione thrusts her entire lithe frame forwards, forcing your thick cock all the way down her throat." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "28", "overlay") - gen "Ugh.... that's it, [name_hermione_genie]!" + gen "*Ugh*.... That's it, [name_hermione_genie]!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "29", "overlay") gen "I'm surprised anyone could even take it this deep." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "17", "overlay") her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} I suppose I've had a good teacher." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "19", "overlay") gen "That's true..." - nar "You lower your hand and rest it softly on the back of the little sluts head..." + nar "You lower your hand and rest it on the back of the little sluts head..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "30", "overlay") - gen "THIS!" + gen "THIS--" pause $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "31", "overlay") - gen "Can't be taught!" + gen "-can't be taught!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "30", "overlay") her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "31", "overlay") - nar "You vigorously start fucking the poor girl's throat with little regard for her well being." + nar "You vigorously start fucking the poor girl's throat with little regard for her well-being." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "32", "overlay") her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "33", "overlay") @@ -404,13 +405,13 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot #$ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "overlay") #$ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "33", "overlay") - nar "You're so focused on your face fucking session, you almost fail to notice the ghostly apparition of an attractive little witch appear behind Hermione." + nar "You're so focused on your face fucking session, that you almost fail to notice the ghostly apparition of an attractive little witch appearing behind Hermione." play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" pause .3 $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "32", "overlay") gen "!!!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "33", "overlay") - nar "Before you even have time to scream, Myrtle, raises her finger to her lips, shushing you." + nar "Before you even have time to scream, the ghost, raises her finger to her lips, shushing you." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "32", "overlay") nar "Instead of making herself known, it appears like she only wants to watch Hermione have her throat fucked silly..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") @@ -418,7 +419,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") her "???" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") - nar "Coaxed on by the prospect of an ethereal audience, you begin to get into a firm, rough rhythm of properly fucking Hermione's throat raw." + nar "Coaxed on by the prospect of an ethereal audience, you begin to get into a firm, and rough rhythm of properly fucking Hermione's throat raw." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") her "*Glck*-*Glck*-*Glck*!!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") @@ -428,7 +429,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") her "*Slurp*! *Gulp*! *Slurp*!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") - gen "Yes, just like that... That's a good little slut..." + gen "Yes, just like that...{w=0.4} That's a good little slut..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") @@ -436,7 +437,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") - gen "Come on [name_hermione_genie]." + gen "Come on, [name_hermione_genie]." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "36", "overlay") her "*Slurp*! *Gobble*! *Gobble*!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "37", "overlay") @@ -450,7 +451,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") gen "{size=+5}Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "35", "overlay") - gen "See? Your body was made for this..." + gen "See? I told you that your body was made for this..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "36", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "37", "overlay") @@ -470,15 +471,16 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "38", "overlay") her "{size=+10}!!!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "37", "overlay") - myr "*He-he-he*... Hi Hermione..." + myr "*He-he-he*...{w=0.4} Hi Hermione..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "36", "overlay") her "*Glck* Sto--{w=0.3}! *glck*{heart}*glck*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "37", "overlay") - nar "Hermione's throat momentarily lessens its grip around your cock as her face has turned even redder, and she starts to pull back, either due to embarrassment or lack of air..." + nar "Hermione's throat momentarily lessens its grip around your cock." + nar "Her face now even even redder than before, she starts to pull back, either due to embarrassment or lack of air..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "36", "overlay") nar "Unfortunately for the petite witch, her shame only serves to intensify your pleasure." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "37", "overlay") - gen "{size=+4}*ARGH*, HERE IT COMES, [name_hermione_genie]!{/size}" + gen "{size=+4}*ARGH*!!! HERE IT COMES, [name_hermione_genie]!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "36", "overlay") call cum_block @@ -490,7 +492,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "39", "overlay") call cum_block - nar "Your cock starts firing off a huge load against the back of the poor girls throat, quickly overflowing up through her nostrils and back at you." + nar "Your cock starts firing off a huge load against the back of the poor girls throat, quickly overflowing all the way up through her nostrils and back at you." her "{size=+14}!!!{/size}" myr "{size=+3}Oh{/size} {size=+3}my{/size} {size=+3}God!{/size}" @@ -498,12 +500,12 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot call cum_block myr "I've never seen this much cum in my whole life, or even since then!" - myr "Here Dumbledore, shoot some more!" + myr "Look over here Dumbledore, and shoot some more!" show screen blkfade with d3 $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m3", "39", "overlay") - nar "Moaning Myrtle rises up from the dewy ground and flashes her see-through breasts towards you." + nar "Moaning Myrtle rises up from the dewy ground, and flashes her spectral breasts towards you." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m3", "41", "overlay") hide screen blkfade with d3 @@ -511,11 +513,11 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot gen "{size=+7}*ARGH*! YES!!!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m3", "42", "overlay") - nar "With your orgasm renewed by the sight of some heavenly cans, you begin shooting cum down Hermione's throat anew." + nar "Your orgasm now renewed by the sight of some heavenly cans, you begin shooting cum down Hermione's throat anew." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m3", "41", "overlay") call cum_block - her "*gulp* *gargggglelggg* *gobble*...." + her "*Gulp* *Gargggglelggg* *Gobble*...." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m3", "42", "overlay") call cum_block @@ -540,7 +542,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot hide screen blkfade with d3 - nar "Eventually, your orgasm comes to a halt, and you finally pull your sloppy cock out of Hermione's well used hole..." + nar "Eventually, your orgasm comes to a halt, and you finally pull your sloppy cock out of Hermione's well-used hole..." nar "She then collapses onto her robe, no longer held up by your member." gen "You did good, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") gen "Wouldn't you say the same, ghost?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") @@ -559,15 +561,15 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot nar "You wrap Hermione's robe over her like a blanket, and carry her back to your office." play sound "sounds/fire_woosh.ogg" - nar "You carefully place her into a chair in front of the fireplace, light it and then drape her cum covered robes over her." + nar "You carefully place her into a chair in front of the fireplace, light it, and then drape her cum covered robes over her." menu: gen "(Should I clean her up a bit?)" "-clean her up-": gen "(I suppose I should...)" - nar "You use a rag and wipe her face clean." - her "*Zzz* no... *Zzz* I wanna be a.. *zzz* cumslut... *zzz*" - gen "*Shhh*... Don't worry, [name_hermione_genie], there's plenty where that came from..." + nar "You grab the edge of her robes and wipe her face clean with it." + her "*Zzz*...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} *Zzz*...{w=0.4} I wanna be a--{w=0.2} *zzz*...{w=0.4} Cumslut..." + gen "*Shhh*...{w=0.4} Don't worry, [name_hermione_genie]...{w=0.4} There's plenty where that came from..." "-leave her be-": gen "(She looks better like this anyway...)" nar "Just as you're about to turn to walk over to your desk, you notice a content smile spreading across Hermione's face as she pulls her robes up over her shoulders." @@ -604,7 +606,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) "-Apologise-": gen "Sorry about that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") gen "I'll try and be on time for our blowjobs from now on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Good... It's the least you can do..." ("base", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Good...{w=0.4} It's the least you can do..." ("base", "closed", "angry", "mid") "\"You know where my office is.\"": her "*Hmph*..." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -622,7 +624,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) her "*Mmmmm*..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "17", "overlay") - her "I can't believe you're making come down here during such chilly evenings..." + her "I can't believe you're making come down here during these circumstances..." gen "Say what?" her "You heard me..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "19", "overlay") @@ -633,7 +635,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "18", "overlay") her "*Slurp* *Glck* *Slrp*" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "20", "overlay") - gen "*Ughhhh*.... That's it, [name_hermione_genie]..." + gen "*Ughhhh*...{w=0.4} That's it, [name_hermione_genie]..." gen "Be a good little cockslut for your headmaster..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "16", "overlay") her "*Slurp*{heart}*Slurp*{heart}*Glck*" @@ -665,21 +667,21 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "29", "overlay") her "{size=+10}!!!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "30", "overlay") - gen "*Ugh*... Fuck yes..." + gen "*Ugh*...{w=0.4} Fuck yes..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "31", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Gobble-gobble-slurp-gobble!* !!!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "30", "overlay") gen "{size=+5}Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "31", "overlay") - myr "Wow... You're so rough on her..." + myr "Wow...{w=0.4} You're so rough on her..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "32", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "33", "overlay") - gen "*Ugh*... Don't worry... She loves it..." + gen "*Ugh*...{w=0.4} Don't worry...{w=0.4} She loves it..." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "32", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "33", "overlay") - gen "She's probably wetter than the nile down there..." + gen "She's probably wetter than the Nile down there..." her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "32", "overlay") myr "You think so?" @@ -721,7 +723,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*HNNOOO*glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "44", "overlay") - myr "So long as you're alright with that, Sir... I don't have to mention you! It can just be Hermione!" + myr "So long as you're alright with that, Sir...{w=0.4} I don't have to mention you! It can just be Hermione!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") @@ -739,9 +741,9 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") myr "This is going to be the best decade of my afterlife!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") - her "{size=+5}*glck*{heart}*glck*{heart}*glck*{/size}" + her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - "\"you can say it was me.\"": + "\"You can say it was me.\"": $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") myr "{size=+2}{b}Really?{/b}{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") @@ -760,31 +762,31 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "I'll go to rave-NO the Slytherin bathroom first!" + myr "I'll go to rave--{w=0.2} No... The Slytherin bathroom first!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "44", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "Then Gryffindor!" + myr "Then Gryffindor's!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "Ravenclaw!" + myr "Then Ravenclaw's!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "Hufflepuff!" + myr "Can't forget Hufflepuff!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "The prefects' bathroom!" + myr "Or the prefects' bathroom!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "Then the teachers'!" + myr "Then there's teachers'!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") - myr "Then Hogsmeade!" + myr "And Hogsmeade!" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "35", "overlay") myr "{size=+2}THEN{/size} {size=+2}THE{/size} {size=+2}WHOLE{/size} {size=+2}WORLD!!!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "34", "overlay") @@ -797,12 +799,12 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) with d3 $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "34", "overlay") - nar "At the edge of your orgasm, Hermione forcefully pushes herself off your dick, then rips her top and skirt of in one swoop before wrapping her hair around your cock." + nar "At the edge of your orgasm, Hermione forcefully pushes herself off your dick, then rips her top and skirt off in one swoop, before wrapping her hair around your cock." $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "45", "overlay") hide screen blkfade with d3 - her "{size=+5}That's it, Professor, Cum for me! Cover me in front of Myrtle!{/size}" + her "{size=+5}That's it, [name_genie_hermione]! Cum for me! Cover me, in front of Myrtle!{/size}" with hpunch gen "{size=+5}What the hell is this?!{/size}" $ dynamic_cg("herm_forest", "base", "m2", "46", "overlay") @@ -848,19 +850,19 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) with d3 her "Wow, that was--" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "Hold on... Where's Myrtle?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") + her "Hold on...{w=0.4} Where's Myrtle?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Oh, she probably left to do that gossiping you were so worried about." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "So you're telling me I got my hair all sticky for--" ("upset", "closed", "annoyed", "mid_soft") her "{size=+4}Wait, what did you say?!{/size}" ("scream", "wide", "base", "stare") - gen "Yeah, she said something about visiting the girls' bathrooms--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "Yeah, didn't she say something about visiting the girls' bathrooms--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "She can't do that! I'll have to stop her!" ("angry", "wide", "annoyed", "stare") play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" - myr "*giggles*" + myr "*Giggles*" gen "*Heh*-*Heh*!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "Oh... So, she was just making a fool out of me..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "down") + her "Oh...{w=0.4} So, she was just making a fool out of me..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "down") gen "I mean, it's not that difficult, seeing that you're standing naked in a forest, with your hair drenched in semen." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - her "*Hmm*... Yes, I should probably get dressed..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") - gen "Go ahead... But leave the semen in your hair, would you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} Yes, I should probably get dressed..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") + gen "Go ahead...{w=0.4} But leave the semen in your hair, would you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "But, what if someone--" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") gen "*Hmm*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy index 93a8ca61..e6fde069 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label hg_collars: $ her_outfit_last.save() #Saves current clothing if hermione.is_worn("robe"): - gen "Before what I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Before I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Alright..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("robe") @@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ label slave_scene: $ name_genie_hermione = "Master" with flashbulb - her "It doesn't say slut does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "It doesn't say slut, does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Don't be silly... Why would it say that,{w=0.5} slave?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh good..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid") her "Wait. What did you just call me?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ label flasher_scene: her "I..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") nar "The strings now completely stretched begin tugging on Hermione's nipples." her "Alright I do enjoy it okay!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") - nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips the strings return to their dormant state" + nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips, the strings return to their dormant state." her "*Phew*..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "Now was that so hard?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy index 02efbf59..76b70ef8 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy @@ -3497,7 +3497,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "Why would I...--" gen "Just say it...{w=0.4} I'll even give you some points if you do." her "I--{w=0.4} I am a kinky girl..." - gen "\"That...\"" + gen "\"That\"..." her "That loves being edged..." her "...and denied an orgasm..." gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index ef99f2d8..04838774 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Could you put on this latex outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if her_whoring < 22: her "Latex outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "*Whoa*... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "Whoa... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "I know! Glad you're as excited as I am!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I... How do you put this on?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Using lots of patience I reckon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_poker: #Req 19 (panties, bra) gen "I spent some tokens getting this outfit for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if her_whoring < 22: - her "*Whoa*..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "Whoa..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "I know... Quite intricate is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You... you want me to wear this?" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "I mean, I am a winner after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index bbece0d6..c0cfe824 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch(what): lun "Please... Help me get rid of them again..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") elif lun_tier == 4: random: - lun "*Whoa*... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "Whoa... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") lun "*Ah*... It's almost like a ripple of water... Except running through my body..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") lun "*Mmm*... Those nasty Wrackspurts... I can feel them getting agitated already..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") elif lun_tier == 3: diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy index 62d0f7ae..8617797e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy @@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: her "No... But he was close enough for me to feel his..." ("mad", "squint", "worried", "up") her "His..." ("base", "slit", "worried", "ahegao") gen "His what, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "How did he manage that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well... The boy wasn't there for the purpose of relieving himself... Well, at least not how one would expect it..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "He was jacking it!?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")