diff --git a/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy b/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy
index 69a02dda..af03fc66 100644
--- a/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy
@@ -195,8 +195,8 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
         call gen_chibi("paperwork")
         with d3
         gen "Yes, \"Dear [word_01]\" fits perfectly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
         gen "...{w=0.4} \"It is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle")
         with d3
@@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
         call gen_chibi("paperwork")
         with d3
         gen "Yes, \"Time to go back [word_02]\" that will do..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
         gen "...{w=0.4} \"farewell my little\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle")
         with d3
@@ -239,8 +239,8 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
         call gen_chibi("paperwork")
         with d3
         gen "Yes, \"farewell my little [word_03]\" sounds about right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
-        "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
+        "*Scribble-scribble-scribble*"
         call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle")
         with d3
         gen "And now to sign it as..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         fem "Jealous? Of her? Puh-lease!"
         fem "I have no use for popularity that comes from putting cocks in my mouth!"
         mal "Well, if you ever change your mind..."
-        fem "*huh*?"
+        fem "*Huh*?"
         mal "Feel free to use me as a stepping stone on your road to fame!"
         fem "You wish!"
         mal2 "Hey, guys, I think that's Hermione over there!"
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         mal2 "{size=-4}Yeah, you wish you had Hermione's courage!{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}Exactly! No one is more loyal to Gryffindor than she is!{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}Even if the rumours are true, what does it matter?{/size}"
-        mal "{size=-4}Thanks to her sacrifice our house will be getting the cup this year!{/size}"
+        mal "{size=-4}Thanks to her sacrifice, our house will be getting the cup this year!{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}Yeah, and what did you ever do for our house?{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}I..... But....{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}Exactly! So don't you bad-mouth Hermione!{/size}"
@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     mal "You look... so beautiful tonight, Hermione."
     her "Thank you, you are too sweet." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid")
     mal2 "Can I have the next dance?"
-    mal "What? Back off buddy, I was here first!"
+    mal "What? Back off, buddy! I was here first!"
     mal2 "Like hell you were!"
     mal "Alright, pal! That does it!"
     mal2 "I'm not your \"pal\", buddy!"
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     her @ cheeks blush "Let's just make this quick, alright?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft")
     gen "Let's make what quick?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her @ cheeks blush "You want me to thank you for the dress, don't you, sir?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
-    gen "The dress? No, no that's not why I am here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "The dress? No, no... That's not why I am here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her @ cheeks blush "It is fine, sir. I do not mind." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft")
     gen "Listen to me, girl! I am not who you think--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her @ cheeks blush "Please, sir, let me suck on your cock a little." ("open_tongue", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft")
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     her @ cheeks blush "Well of course, sir." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
     her @ cheeks blush "Put your dick in my mouth and talk to me." ("open_tongue", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft")
     her "Talk dirty to me..."
-    gen "*growl*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "*Growl*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "*Sigh*...." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Fine, have it your way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "But you are abusing your power, girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     her "*Gulp*--"
     show her_ball blowjob h2 mouth_none blush_none eyes_none sweat_s2 as cg
     her "...................." #LOOKING BACK
-    gen "Just keep going girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Just keep going, girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "I will let you know if I see someone coming..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     show her_ball blowjob h2 mouth_open2 blush_none eyes_up2 sweat_s2 as cg
     her "Oh... I'm not worried about that, sir..."
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     her "A chance?"
     her "It's already been decided, sir."
     gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Oh, I mean I hope I will win..."
+    her "Oh, I mean... I hope I will win..."
     her "But since I am the one who organised the whole thing, it is only fair..."
     her "Wouldn't you agree, sir?"
     gen "Well... Sounds like cheat--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -614,8 +614,8 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     show her_ball blowjob h3 sweat_none eyes_none mouth_none blush_b3 as cg
     her "{size=+7}*gobble*!{/size}" #DEEPTHROATING
     gen "{size=+7}Oh, yes!!!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "*gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
-    her "*gobble*"
+    her "*Gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
+    her "*Gobble*"
     show her_ball blowjob h2 sweat_s2 eyes_up2 mouth_smile2 blush_none as cg
     her "Good. I knew you would approve."
     show her_ball blowjob h1 sweat_s1 eyes_up1 mouth_none as cg
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     sna "*Ahem*!"
     sna "Attention, maggots!"
     gen "(Snape?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    sna "Quiet down everyone!"
+    sna "Quiet down, everyone!"
     sna "It is time to announce who will be this year's queen of the annual Hogwarts autumn ball."
 
     her "*Slurp*--"
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     gen "Yes, what is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     show her_ball blowjob h2 mouth_happy2 blush_none eyes_up2 sweat_s2 as cg
     her "Please, do not restrain yourself."
-    gen "Heh... I rarely do, girl." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "*Heh*... I rarely do, girl." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     show her_ball blowjob h2 mouth_none blush_none eyes_none sweat_s2 as cg
     sna "This year's Hogwarts Autumn Ball queen is..."
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "*Slurp*--"
         show her_ball blowjob h2 sweat_s2 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_open2 eyes_up2 blush_b2 as cg
         her "Sir, is this really the proper way to treat one of your students?"
-        gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h1 sweat_s1 sperm_s1 lashes_l1 mouth_none eyes_none blush_none as cg
         her "*Slurp*! *Gulp*! *Gulp*!"
         her "*Slurp*--"
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "You were supposed to treat me {i}right{/i}, sir..."
         her "And what did you do instead?"
         gen "*Ahem*! Let me repeat my previous statement..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        gen "{size=+7}\"*huh*?\"{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "{size=+7}\"*Huh*?\"{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h2 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_happy2 eyes_down2 brows_b2 blush_b2 sweat_s2 as cg
         her "You put your penis in my innocent mouth, sir!"
         show her_ball blowjob h1 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_closed1 brows_none blush_b1 sweat_s1 as cg
@@ -809,7 +809,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "{size=+7}*ARGH*!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "{size=+7}*Argh*!!! YES!!!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h4 sperm_none lashes_l4 mouth_none eyes_none brows_none blush_b4 sweat_none as cg
-        her "*Ah*... yes... *ah*..."
+        her "*Ah*... yes... *Ah*..."
         gen "Oh... *ght*... *panting*" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h4 sperm_none lashes_l4 mouth_none eyes_up4 brows_none blush_b4 sweat_none as cg
         her "Thank you sir..."
@@ -869,17 +869,17 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_none brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none as cg
         sna "Miss Granger, if you would be so kind to grace us with your presence..."
 
-        her "*gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
         gen "Yes! That's a good slut!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "{size=+5}*gobble-gobble-gobble*!!!{/size}"
         gen "Yes. Now, move your tongue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Lick my balls, girl. Come on!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_closed3 brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none as cg
-        her "*gobble*! *Lick*! *Lick*! *gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble*! *Lick*! *Lick*! *Gobble*!"
         gen "Yes... Like that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "What a good whore you are..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*Lick*! *Lick*! *gobble*! *Lick*!"
-        gen "Now look up at me whore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        her "*Lick*! *Lick*! *Gobble*! *Lick*!"
+        gen "Now look up at me, whore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_up3 brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none as cg
         her "???................"
 
@@ -891,10 +891,10 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_stare3 brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 as cg
         call ctc
 
-        her "*gobble*??!"
+        her "*Gobble*??!"
         gen "No, don't you stop now!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_stare3 brows_angry3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
         gen "Yes, whore! Yes!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
         sna "Miss Granger?"
@@ -914,15 +914,15 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "What's the matter, my little spit bucket?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Keep sucking my cock!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_stare3 brows_angry3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 tears_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
         gen "Yes. Good whore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble-gobble-gobble*!"
         gen "Keep deep throating me like that, yes!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*gobble*! *gobble*! *gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Gobble*!"
         gen "The balls, girl! Don't forget to work your tongue!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_none brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 tears_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble*! *Lick*! *Lick*!"
-        gen "Yes! Keep at it and we will be done here in no time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        her "*Gobble*! *Lick*! *Lick*!"
+        gen "Yes! Keep at it, and we will be done here in no time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Oh, I almost forgot..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         play sound "sounds/spit.ogg"
         pause.3
@@ -933,12 +933,12 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "..........................."
         her ".................."
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_happycl3 brows_angry3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble*! *gobble*! *Lick*... *gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Lick*... *Gobble*!"
         gen "you just look so pretty with your face all covered in my spit!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_none brows_angry3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble*! *gobble*! *Lick*... *gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Lick*... *Gobble*!"
         gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*gobble*! *gobble*! *Lick*... *gobble*!"
+        her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Lick*... *Gobble*!"
         gen "Maybe we should show your pretty face to everyone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Should I call some of your classmates over?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_stare3 brows_angry3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
 
         gen "Alright, listen up, whore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3 sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_squintup3 brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
-        her "*gobble*?"
+        her "*Gobble*?"
         gen "I need you to stay still now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "???"
         show her_ball blowjob h3_alt sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_up3 brows_none blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
@@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         sna "Miss Granger..................?"
         sna "You are about to miss your own coronation, girl!"
 
-        gen "Heh..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Your queen is right here..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Choking on my engorged cock!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball blowjob h3_alt sperm_none lashes_none mouth_none eyes_happycl3 brows_b3 blush_b3 sweat_none spit_base3 spit_forehead3 spit_nose3 tears_base3 as cg
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "...................................................."
         gen "Well, I think that was the last of it--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         with hpunch
-        gen "{size=+5}*huh*?!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "{size=+5}*Huh*?!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         call blkfade
 
         stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -1106,8 +1106,8 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "But I am still very grateful to stand here before all of you tonight..."
 
         show screen blktone
-        mal "{size=-4}*huh*?{/size}"
-        mal "{size=-4}What's that stuff on her forehead you wager?{/size}"
+        mal "{size=-4}*Huh*?{/size}"
+        mal "{size=-4}What's that stuff on her forehead, you wager?{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}Sweat...?{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}*Hmm*... Probably...{/size}"
         hide screen blktone
@@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "I know that I speak for every student in this building when I say this."
         show screen blktone
 
-        mal "{size=-4}That doesn't look like sweat though...{/size}"
+        mal "{size=-4}That doesn't look like sweat, though...{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}Yeah...{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}Some weird goo seeping out of her hair...{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}Are you guys really {i}that{/i} dim?{/size}"
@@ -1141,7 +1141,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         fem "{size=-4}*Humph*! Not all of us are sluts, you know.{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}Unfortunately not...{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}\"Unfortunately\"?!{/size}"
-        fem "{size=-4}*Tsk*! You, men are so clueless about everything!{/size}"
+        fem "{size=-4}*Tsk*! You men are so clueless about everything!{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}You could never build a meaningful relationship with a slut!{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}What's a \"meaningful relationship\"?{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}It's when your girl is also your best friend.{/size}"
@@ -1151,7 +1151,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         mal "{size=-4}But I sure could use a slut in my life!{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}What he said!{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}you guys are...{/size}"
-        fem "Such Idiots!!!"
+        fem "Such idiots!!!"
         hide screen blktone
 
         show her_ball speech h1 mouth_open eyes_closed sperm_cum4 as cg
@@ -1208,7 +1208,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         call hide_blktone_top
         call ctc
 
-        her "And most of all I am thankful to my parents..."
+        her "And most of all, I am thankful to my parents..."
         her "The people who raised me..."
         her "Mum... Dad..."
         show her_ball speech h2 mouth_open eyes_squint sperm_cum6 brows_down as cg
@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
 
         show her_ball speech h2 mouth_open eyes_closed sperm_cum6 brows_down as cg
         her "{size=-3}*Ah*...{/size}{heart}"
-        her "...............................*a-ha*...{heart}{heart}{heart}"
+        her "...............................*A-ha*...{heart}{heart}{heart}"
         call ctc
 
         "Somebody from the crowd" "Show us both of them, Hermione!"
@@ -1266,8 +1266,8 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her ".........................................................."
         call ctc
 
-        sna "Quiet down everyone!" ("snape_12", ypos="head")
-        sna "As for you, miss Granger..." ("snape_12")
+        sna "Quiet down, everyone!" ("snape_12", ypos="head")
+        sna "As for you, Miss Granger..." ("snape_12")
         sna "I think that's enough." ("snape_12")
         sna "Cover up and get off the stage... Go..." ("snape_12")
         pause.1
@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "I thought it went rather well..."
         gen "Showing off your tits like that?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_smile1 eyes_closed brows_none blush_b1 as cg
-        her "Only one... *ah*..."
+        her "Only one... *Ah*..."
         gen "What?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Only one tit, sir..."
         gen "Whatever happened to that idealistic and self-righteous girl you once were?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -1446,7 +1446,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "Crap!  Someone's coming!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_none eyes_stare brows_none blush_b1 lashes_none tears_t2 spank_none as cg
         her "No, sir, not yet. But if you keep spanking me--"
-        gen "No, whore! I mean a bunch of students are coming this way!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "No, whore! A bunch of students are coming this way!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_smile1 eyes_up brows_none blush_b1 lashes_none tears_t2 spank_none as cg
         her "What?!"
 
@@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "What's wrong, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open1 eyes_up brows_none blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose1 as cg
         her "Sir, don't call me that in front of them, please..."
-        gen "What's the matter? Why are you Acting shy all of a sudden?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "What's the matter? Why are you acting shy all of a sudden?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Can't you see that they are from Slytherin?!"
         gen "So what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Our two houses... we have a history."
@@ -1513,7 +1513,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         sly1 "{size=+7}Of course it was for everyone, you dumb cunt!{/size}"
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open1 eyes_down brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose1 spit_on_face as cg
         her "Sir! Stop fucking me!"
-        gen "*huh*? You mean, like this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Huh*? You mean, like this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         with hpunch
         pause.3
 
@@ -1541,7 +1541,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "*Ah*... *Ah-a*..."
         sly1 "Yes... I wanted to do this for quite some time now..."
         her "Professor!"
-        gen "*huh*? Oh, don't you mind me girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Huh*? Oh, don't you mind me, girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Imagine that I'm not even here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
         play sound "sounds/spit.ogg"
@@ -1566,9 +1566,9 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         sly2 "*Ha-ha-ha*! Right in the mouth! Good shot, mate!"
         sly1 "And she swallowed it too!"
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open1 eyes_happycl brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_face as cg
-        her "That's was an accident!"
+        her "That was an accident!"
         sly1 "Was it? Let's see."
-        her "*huh*?"
+        her "*Huh*?"
 
         play sound "sounds/spit.ogg"
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open_tongue1 eyes_dead brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_face spit_guy_mouth as cg
@@ -1626,7 +1626,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         pause .1
         hide screen white
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_full1 eyes_dead brows_none blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_face guy1_bj1 as cg
-        her "{size=+7}*gobble*?!?{/size}"
+        her "{size=+7}*Gobble*?!?{/size}"
         sly1 "{size=+5}Yes, yes! Swallow it all!!!{/size}"
 
         # Swallowing cum
@@ -1668,11 +1668,11 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         with hpunch
         pause.3
         her "*Gulp*! Gulp!* *Slurp*!"
-        sly2 "I don't know... *gh*... How much longer..."
+        sly2 "I don't know... *Ghh*... How much longer..."
         sly2 "... I could keep up like that."
         her "*Slurp-Slurp-Slurp-slurp*!"
         her "*Slurp-Gulp-Slurp-Slurp-gulp*!!!"
-        sly2 "Oh, man... Oh man..."
+        sly2 "Oh, man... Oh, man..."
         her "*Slurp-Slurp-Slurp-Slurp-Slurp*!!"
         sly2 "I... I..."
         sly2 "..................."
@@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "{size=+3}*Gulp-gulp*...{/size}"
         play sound "sounds/gulp.ogg"
         her "*Gulp..."
-        sly2 "*Argh*... my cock..."
+        sly2 "*Argh*... My cock..."
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_none eyes_happycl brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_body spit_on_face -guy1_bj1 as cg
         her "*Gu-aha*..."
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_none eyes_none brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_body spit_on_face as cg
@@ -1743,7 +1743,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         sly1 "Aren't you, {i}mudblood{/i}?"
         her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Gulp*!"
         gen "Yup... Every time you say that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "What is this? Her legs are shaking!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Are you cumming, girl?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_none eyes_none brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_l1 tears_none spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_face guy1_bj3 as cg
@@ -1813,7 +1813,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "Yes, just plaster her face with cum. She loves that shit!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_smile1 eyes_dead brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_l1 tears_t2 spank_none guy2_pose2 spit_on_body spit_on_face as cg
         her "{size=+3}No! I am already cumming... Stop!{/size}"
-        sly1 "Heh... Hermione Granger... What a whore!"
+        sly1 "*Heh*... Hermione Granger... What a whore!"
         sly2 "Yeah! Nothing but a mudblood cunt!"
         her "{size=+9}AAAAAH!!!!!{/size}"
         her "{size=+3}Yes! I'm a whore! I'm a whore!{/size}"
@@ -2011,7 +2011,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "*Ah-a*........."
 
         gen "Is that...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        gen "are Leftovers of my cum still in her mouth?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Are there leftovers of my cum still in her mouth?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "What the hell is she doing?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
         show her_ball speech h1 mouth_open eyes_closed sperm_cum_mouth brows_down blush_heavy mascara_drip sweat_light as cg
@@ -2083,7 +2083,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         mal2 "{size=-4}Yes, keep talking. You are good at this!{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}Good at what?!{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}Wait a second, are you guys getting off on this?{/size}"
-        mal "{size=-4}Heh... Look at the crow calling the raven black!{/size}"
+        mal "{size=-4}*Heh*... Look at the crow calling the raven black!{/size}"
         fem "{size=-4}What do you mean?{/size}"
         mal2 "{size=-4}You are blushing like crazy, girl! And your eyes are all misty!{/size}"
         mal "{size=-4}Yeah! You enjoy this as much as we do!{/size}"
@@ -2143,9 +2143,9 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her @ cheeks blush "Let me just pull my panties down a little..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft")
         gen "Damn you girl! Will you let me finish!?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her @ cheeks blush "Of course sir..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
-        gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her @ cheeks blush "Just make sure you don't hit my dress, alright?" ("open_tongue", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft")
-        gen "*growl*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "*Growl*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Come here, whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Suppose I might as well fuck you one last time!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "(One last time?)" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid")
@@ -2177,7 +2177,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open1 eyes_closed brows_none blush_b1 lashes_none as cg
         her "A little..."
         gen "Well, you're just precious then, aren't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*ah*......"
+        her "*Ah*......"
         gen "Aren't you, whore?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "*Ah*... Whatever you say, sir."
         gen "Yes, you are precious, you slut!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -2224,7 +2224,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_none eyes_dead brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_t1 as cg
 
         her "*Ah*..."
-        gen "Yes, you're liking this aren't you?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Yes, you're liking this, aren't you?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_smile1 eyes_happycl brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_none as cg
         her ".............."
         gen "Answer me, slut!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -2304,7 +2304,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "Sir, excuse me, but you have to let me go..."
         gen "*Ah*... Your pussy is something else!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Sir-- *Ah*...{w=0.3} I am serious."
-        her "As the queen I am expected to lead the dance."
+        her "As the queen, I am expected to lead the dance."
         gen "Yes... Like that, just like that... Oh, yes..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open1 eyes_up brows_b1 blush_b1 lashes_none tears_t1 spank_s1 as cg
         her "Sir, are you even listening?"
@@ -2358,9 +2358,9 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "*Ah*... *Blah*..."
         gen "Your butthole... It's so damn tight..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h2 mouth_open_tongue2 eyes_none brows_none blush_b2 lashes_none tears_none spit_on_body as cg
-        her "*Ah*... *blah*... *ah*..."
+        her "*Ah*... *Blah*... *Ah*..."
         gen "You are drooling all over my hand, you nasty slut!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*Ah*... *Blah-blhah*... *ah*... *bla-ah*..."
+        her "*Ah*... *Blah-blhah*... *Ah*... *Bla-ah*..."
 
         call blktone_top
         stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -2377,7 +2377,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         her "*Ah*..."
         gen "Yes, this year's ball queen is performing a complicated pirouette with a dick buried deep in her tiny asshole!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         show her_ball sex h1 mouth_open_tongue2 eyes_stare brows_none blush_b1 lashes_l1 tears_none spit_on_body as cg
-        her "*Ah*... I am *ahh*..."
+        her "*Ah*... I am--{w=0.2} *Ahh*..."
         gen "Did you say something, your majesty?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "*Ah*... I am the autumn ball queen... *ah*..."
         gen "Well of course you are!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -2589,7 +2589,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
         gen "Stop it with the eyes! You're making me feel uncomfortable..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "I wrote you a letter, so what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her @ cheeks blush tears mascara "I think it's sweet........." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid")
-        gen "I said stop gawking at me girl. I thought you were late for your dance or something!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "I said, stop gawking at me, girl. I thought you were late for your dance or something!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her @ cheeks blush tears mascara "{size=+5}THE DANCE!{/size}" ("open", "wide", "base", "stare")
         her "I'm sorry, I have to go!"
         her "I will see you later, sir!"
@@ -2640,7 +2640,7 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     pause 1
     stop music fadeout 1.0
 
-    centered "{size=+7}{color=#cbcbcb}Outskirts of hogwarts{/color}{/size}"
+    centered "{size=+7}{color=#cbcbcb}Outskirts of Hogwarts{/color}{/size}"
 
     $ game.daytime = False
 
@@ -2666,13 +2666,13 @@ label ball_ending_E2:
     gen "Goodbye, my whores..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Goodbye, smart cumslut Hermione..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     if states.cho.unlocked:
-        gen "and my token asian Cho..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "And my token Asian Cho..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     if states.ast.unlocked:
-        gen "and my sassy blonde Astoria..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "And my sassy blonde Astoria..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     if states.lun.unlocked:
-        gen "and my {i}wackspit-sucking{/i} queen Luna..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "And my {i}wackspit-sucking{/i} queen Luna..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     if states.sus.unlocked:
-        gen "and my big-titted redhead Susan..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "And my big-titted redhead Susan..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "and of course, goodbye to my favourite nympho, Tonks..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "....................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "..........." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -2835,7 +2835,7 @@ Farewell, my little [word_03].{/size}
         her @ cheeks blush "Huh...?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
         dum1 "With hard work."
         her @ cheeks blush "That's just stupid!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid")
-        dum2 "Miss Granger, would you mind to guard your tongue when--"
+        dum2 "Miss Granger, would you mind guarding your tongue when--"
 
         ### TITS ###
         $ hermione.strip("robe", "accessory")
diff --git a/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy b/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy
index 896008cc..de3784bc 100644
--- a/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy
@@ -14,17 +14,17 @@ label ending_after:
     play music "music/epic-unease-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1 if_changed # noloop
     pause 3
     g2 "Where... where am I...?" with d5
-    g2 "Am I dead... is this the end...?"
-    g2 "Genies aren't supposed to die are they?"
-    g12 "No wait... this is different...{w=0.4} what is this feeling?"
+    g2 "Am I dead...? Is this the end...?"
+    g2 "Genies aren't supposed to die, are they?"
+    g12 "No wait...{w=0.4} This is different...{w=0.4} What is this feeling?"
     g12 "I feel..."
     show screen white
     pause .1
     hide screen white
     g14 "Everything!" with hpunch
     g14 "The...{w=0.4} The cosmic power is running through me!"
-    g14 "I can see it, the universe... No...{w=0.4} Multiple universes... all around me."
-    g14 "But... Why?"
+    g14 "I can see it...{w=0.4} The universe...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} Multiple universes... all around me."
+    g14 "But...{w=0.4} Why?"
     g14 "Why am I not back yet!?"
     show screen white
     pause .1
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ label ending_after:
     pause .1
     hide screen white
     g14 "Wait...{w=0.8} I know..." with d3
-    g14 "This... it must be my magic!"
-    g14 "I need to focus where I want to be... Or I'll be stuck... stuck here forever!"
+    g14 "This...{w=0.4} It must be my magic!"
+    g14 "I need to focus where I want to be... Or I'll be stuck...{w=0.4} Stuck here forever!"
     g14 "Stupid... life choices!"
     play background "sounds/pulse.ogg"
     g14 "Focus..."
-    g14 "I just left a bunch of Sluts at that school!"
+    g14 "I just left a bunch of sluts at that school!"
     g14 "But... I need to get home!"
 
     # Choose to end the game or continue playing
@@ -112,14 +112,14 @@ label ending_after:
 
             if "public" in states.her.ev.yule_ball.variant:
                 play music "music/court-of-the-queen-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1 if_changed
-                nar "Arriving at the great hall you glance through the doors and spot Hermione who's currently enjoying the attention she's receiving from some of the other students."
-                nar "You decide it's probably best to head back to your office. But before you get the chance to slip into the shadows Hermione has already begun making her way in your direction."
-                nar "As she steps through the door you notice some Slytherin students looking in your direction, smirks spreading across their faces."
+                nar "Arriving at the great hall, you glance through the doors and spot Hermione who's currently enjoying the attention she's receiving from some of the other students."
+                nar "You decide it's probably best to head back to your office... But before you get the chance to slip into the shadows, Hermione has already begun making her way in your direction."
+                nar "As she enters the hallway, you notice some Slytherin students looking in your direction, smirks spreading across their faces."
 
                 $ hermione.equip(her_outfit_ball)
                 her @ cheeks blush "Back so soon?" ("base", "happy", "base", "L", ypos="head", flip=False)
-                gen "I um...{w=0.4} had a change of heart." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                her "Cold outside?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
+                gen "I... *Err*...{w=0.4} had a change of heart." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                her "I see... Yes, it is quite cold outside tonight, isn't it?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
                 gen "Yes...{w=0.5} that's it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
                 nar "Standing there in silence, looking at Hermione, you can't help but struggle with what to say."
@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@ label ending_after:
                 her @ cheeks blush "Care for a dance?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
                 gen "I...{w=0.5} of course!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
-                nar "With your arms wrapped around Hermione's waist the two of you begin moving along with the music."
-                nar "As some time passes it's very clear that the Slytherin students are looking at you both through the doorway."
+                nar "With your arms wrapped around Hermione's waist, the two of you begin moving along with the music."
+                nar "As some time passes, it's very clear that the Slytherin students are looking at you both through the doorway."
                 gen "Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Yes?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare_soft")
                 play sound "sounds/slap_03.ogg"
@@ -138,41 +138,41 @@ label ending_after:
                 nar "Swiftly taking your hand away from Hermione's butt, you give a quick smirk towards your audience."
                 her @ cheeks blush "I didn't say stop..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L")
                 gen "Of course..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                nar "Without a moments hesitation you lift her skirt up, holding it against her back and leaving her panties exposed."
-                her @ cheeks blush "Sir..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "down") #could change the sirs here to the name that the player has set for hermione to call you
+                nar "Without a moments hesitation you lift her dress up, holding it against her back and leaving her panties exposed."
+                her @ cheeks blush "Sir..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "down") #could change the sirs here to the name that the player has set for Hermione to call you
                 nar "Now firmly gripping her butt with your other hand, you begin to massage her cheeks whilst moving along with the music."
                 her @ cheeks blush "..." ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "up") #Look of pleasure
                 nar "Your hand finds its way back down, pulling Hermione's panties down with it."
                 her @ cheeks blush "Sir...{w=0.4} what are you doing?" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "stare")
-                gen "You seem a little bit tense... just giving you a hand..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "You seem a little bit tense... Just giving you a hand..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "But... What if someone notices..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R")
                 nar "Ignoring her pleas you begin rubbing your fingers between her thighs, not bothering to be discreet."
                 her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w} Sir..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
                 nar "As you move your hand higher up her thighs, Hermione's breathing quickens and a wetness begins to spread across the side of your hand, her legs shaking slightly as she tries to keep it together."
                 her @ cheeks blush "Sir...{w=0.4} I..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "down")
-                nar "With the music soon coming to a close you shift your hand and begin stroking against her vagina with even more vigour than before."
+                nar "With the music soon coming to a close, you shift your hand and begin stroking against her vagina with even more vigour than before."
                 her @ cheeks blush "Sir...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.5} they'll...{w=0.2} they'll hear me..." ("mad", "happyCl", "base", "L")
                 gen "You better \"come\" quietly then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Sir... this isn't the time for..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
-                nar "As the music reaches it's peak, Hermione moves one of her hands off your back and puts it against her mouth to quickly try and stifle herself."
+                nar "As the music reaches its peak, Hermione moves one of her hands off your back and puts it against her mouth to quickly try and stifle herself."
                 her "*Mmmmf*..."
                 with hpunch
                 with kissiris
                 stop music fadeout 6 #It's a bit sudden and quiet but not sure what to do instead
                 nar "Hermione shudders in your arms and then quickly lets go as the music comes to an end."
                 her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.8}*Ah*...{w=0.8}*Ah*..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
-                nar "With a quick glance towards the doorway you notice some Slytherin students have blocked it with their backs towards you."
+                nar "With a quick glance towards the doorway, you notice some Slytherin students have blocked it with their backs towards you."
                 gen "You look tired girl, you'd better pull yourself together..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Yes...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.6} I just need to...{w=0.3} catch my breath..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "L")
                 gen "Perhaps sooner rather than later, the music has stopped..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Oh...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} I didn't even notice..." ("open", "happy", "worried", "mid")
                 nar "Hermione moves to stand up but stumbles as she tries to compose herself..."
-                nar "As she gets on her feet she looks up and notices the backs of the Slytherins in the doorway. She spins around to look at you, a red colour quickly spreading across her cheeks."
+                nar "As she gets on her feet, she looks up and notices the backs of the Slytherins in the doorway. She spins around to look at you, a red colour quickly spreading across her cheeks."
                 her @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.3} I think I'd better head off to bed then..." ("mad", "squint", "base", "stare_soft") #Worried #Sheepish looking
                 gen "Sounds like a good idea..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Okay then..." ("soft", "squint", "worried", "R") # smiles
                 her @ cheeks blush "Good night..." ("base", "squint", "worried", "mid")
-                gen "Good night Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Good night, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
 
                 # Back in the office
@@ -200,53 +200,53 @@ label ending_after:
                 call sna_walk(action="enter", xpos="desk")
                 gen "What did I tell you about knocking!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "Who rule..." ("snape_03", ypos="head")
-                sna "You mother fucker..." ("snape_01")
+                sna "You motherfucker..." ("snape_01")
                 sna "I knew it!" ("snape_02")
                 sna "I knew you couldn't make yourself leave yet." ("snape_02")
-                gen "Hey, it's not my fault this place has so many..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                gen "I have urges okay!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Hey, it's not my fault this place has so many--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "I have urges, okay?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "How very uncharacteristic of you..." ("snape_01")
                 sna "But good news nonetheless..." ("snape_02")
-                sna "So I take it you have... unfinished business before you depart?" ("snape_37")
-                gen "A headmaster can't just up and leave before the school year is over can he?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                gen "Also I'm getting quite fond of the place... Not that I want to pick out curtains or anything." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                sna "So I take it that you have... unfinished business to complete before you depart?" ("snape_37")
+                gen "A headmaster can't just up and leave before the school year is over, can he?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Also, I'm getting quite fond of the place... Not that I want to pick out curtains or anything." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "..." ("snape_45")
-                sna "Very well... our little scheme continues." ("snape_02")
+                sna "Very well... Our little scheme continues." ("snape_02")
                 sna "Although at the moment I've got a class to attend to." ("snape_01")
                 call sna_walk("door")
                 gen "Yes... I also have very important business to get on with..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                sna "Sure you do..." ("snape_01")
+                sna "I'm sure you do..." ("snape_01")
                 call sna_walk(action="leave")
 
                 jump main_room
             else:
                 play music "music/court-of-the-queen-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1 if_changed
-                nar "Arriving at the great hall you decide to take a quick glance through the doors before heading back to your office."
-                nar "Hermione is currently occupied looking out one of the windows and doesn't notice your presence."
-                nar "You glance over at the teachers table and lock eyes with Snape who hastily stands up and quickly slides towards you."
+                nar "Arriving at the great hall, you decide to take a quick glance through the doorway before heading back to your office."
+                nar "Hermione is currently looking out one of the windows and is not aware of your presence."
+                nar "You glance over at the high table and lock eyes with Snape, who quickly stands up and then slides towards you."
                 sna "Good evening sir...{w=0.5} I...{w=0.8} I didn't expect you so soon." ("snape_29", ypos="head")
                 gen "Hello again Severus." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 gen "I have returned..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                sna "*Ahem...*{w=0.4} I see..." ("snape_06")
+                sna "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} I see..." ("snape_06")
                 sna "Well...{w=0.5} Here it goes..." ("snape_04")
-                sna "Who...{w=0.5} who rules?" ("snape_09")
+                sna "Who...{w=0.5} Who rules?" ("snape_09")
                 gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "............." ("snape_25")
                 sna "..." ("snape_26")
                 gen "Robin Williams." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                sna "You mother fucker!" ("snape_20") #Epic handshake meme (jk)
+                sna "You motherfucker!" ("snape_20") #Epic handshake meme (jk)
                 gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "..." ("snape_12")
                 sna "About the thing I said earlier." ("snape_12")
-                gen "yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "The whole friend thing..." ("snape_14")
-                gen "*Ah*... yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Ah... Yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 gen "I mean, I was leaving and all that--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "No...{w=0.4} Even that being the case... I did mean it...{w=0.4} good ones are hard to come by." ("snape_24")
                 gen "Well... even if you didn't mean it, I bet you ain't never had a friend like me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "Ain't that true...{w=0.3}" ("snape_45")
                 sna "So...{w=0.4} You're staying then?" ("snape_46")
-                gen "Can't just leave in the middle of the school year can I? What kind of headmaster would do that?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Can't just leave in the middle of the school year, can I? What kind of headmaster would do that?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "Is that so..." ("snape_47")
                 gen "There are still plenty of girls that haven't seen me at my best!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "There it is..." ("snape_02")
@@ -256,41 +256,41 @@ label ending_after:
                 gen "What did you say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 sna "Nothing..." ("snape_38")
                 gen "Okay then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                gen "In that case I'll head back to my office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "In that case, I'll head back to my office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
                 $ hermione.equip(her_outfit_ball)
-                nar "As Snape slides back towards the teachers table, Hermione notices your presence and quickly starts walking towards you."
+                nar "As Snape slides back towards the teacher's table, Hermione notices your presence and quickly starts walking towards you."
                 nar "Before you can even attempt to slip into the shadows again, she's already come through the doorway with one of her arms held out in front of her."
                 her @ cheeks blush "Care for a dance?" ("base", "happy", "base", "L", ypos="head", flip=False) # smiles
-                gen "I...{w=0.4} Oh, what the hell... why not." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "I...{w=0.4} Oh, what the hell... Why not." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") # smiles
                 nar "With your arms wrapped around Hermione's waist, the two of you begin moving along with the music."
-                nar "After some time passes you can't help but look down on Hermione's butt sticking out below your hands."
+                nar "After some time passes, you can't help but look down at her butt sticking out below your hands."
                 gen "Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Yes?" ("open", "base", "base", "L")
-                nar "Hands now wandering down towards Hermione's butt she smiles and tightens her grip around you."
+                nar "You move your hands down to Hermione butt, and she smiles and tightens her grip around you."
                 nar "Gently resting your hands against her cheeks you return to slowly moving along with the music."
                 her @ cheeks blush "Sir..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
-                gen "Yes Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Yes, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Could..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Why can't this moment go on forever?" ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid")
                 gen "We both know that everything has to come to an end..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 gen "But hopefully I've been able to teach you how to cherish every moment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 nar "Hermione tightens her arms even more as you continue the dance in silence."
-                nar "After a while, her grip loosens slightly as she shifts her head to look up at you."
+                nar "After a while, her grip lessens slightly as she shifts her head to look up at you."
                 her @ cheeks blush "I..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
                 her @ cheeks blush "I just wanted to say that...{w=0.5} I'm glad I have you." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
-                gen "Where's this suddenly coming from Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                her @ cheeks blush "I don't know... it's just..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "L")
-                her @ cheeks blush "I couldn't help having this bad feeling in my stomach the entire day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare")
-                her @ cheeks blush "It's stayed there up until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R")
+                gen "Where's this suddenly coming from, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                her @ cheeks blush "I don't know... It's just..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "L")
+                her @ cheeks blush "I've had this bad feeling in my stomach all day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare")
+                her @ cheeks blush "It's stayed there until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R")
                 nar "Not knowing how to respond, you stand there in silence for a moment until Hermione pulls you towards her and you both begin moving along with the music once more."
                 nar "After what only feels like seconds, the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you."
-                gen "You look tired girl, you'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} there's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "You look tired girl... You'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} There's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Oh, yes... I suppose so..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Good night then..." ("base", "happy", "base", "R")
                 gen "Good night." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                her @ cheeks blush "Oh... wait,{w=0.3} before you go..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
+                her @ cheeks blush "Oh... wait,{w=0.3} Before I go..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
                 gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 play sound "sounds/kiss.ogg"
                 with kissiris
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ label ending_after:
                 gen "What was that for?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her @ cheeks blush "Nothing, I just felt like you earned it." ("base", "base", "base", "R")
                 her @ cheeks blush "See you tomorrow..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid")
-                gen "Good night Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "Good night, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
                 stop music fadeout 1
                 call blkfade