From fed21d20de5d7d7680ecc2006e42572fb9b598a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Wed, 8 Mar 2023 16:12:03 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Minor fixes * Fixed missing expression during "a bad time to disrobe" mirror story. * Minor writing fixes. --- game/scripts/events/ending.rpy | 4 ++-- game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy | 2 +- .../scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy | 2 +- 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy b/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy index 49111064..651a9c15 100644 --- a/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/events/ending.rpy @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1: with d3 pause 2 - sna "The past several month were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26") + sna "The past several months were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26") sna "Thank you for that...{w=0.3} you incredible traveller from another world..." sna "Thank you, my friend..." gen "I don't know what to say, Severus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1: gen "Yes, \"Dear [word_01]\" fits perfectly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "*scribble-scribble-scribble*" "*scribble-scribble-scribble*" - gen "...{w=0.4} \" it is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "...{w=0.4} \"It is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle") with d3 gen "What should I write now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy b/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy index 35741c76..859a3e23 100644 --- a/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/events/ending_after.rpy @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label ending_after: her "I couldn't help having this bad feeling in my stomach the entire day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") her "It's stayed there up until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") ">Not knowing how to respond, you stand there in silence for a moment until Hermione pulls you towards her and you both begin moving along with the music once more." - ">After what only feels like seconds the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you." + ">After what only feels like seconds, the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you." gen "You look tired girl, you'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} there's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, yes... I suppose so..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "Good night then..." ("base", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy index d1f5c8aa..43e23d5a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: gen "How can you be naked...{w=0.2} --ish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I had to keep my underwear on...{w=0.2} I'd get cold otherwise." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Cold? How would you be cold with the cloak on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Ehm*..." ("digust", "base", "base", "mid") + her "*Ehm*..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Sigh*... Just tell me what happened next." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, a few of the boys were in there." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "They were playing wizards chess..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")