Minor fixes

* Fixed missing expression during "a bad time to disrobe" mirror story.
* Minor writing fixes.
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Johnny28 2023-03-08 16:12:03 +01:00
parent a84c8063df
commit fed21d20de
3 changed files with 4 additions and 4 deletions

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@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
with d3 with d3
pause 2 pause 2
sna "The past several month were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26") sna "The past several months were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26")
sna "Thank you for that...{w=0.3} you incredible traveller from another world..." sna "Thank you for that...{w=0.3} you incredible traveller from another world..."
sna "Thank you, my friend..." sna "Thank you, my friend..."
gen "I don't know what to say, Severus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I don't know what to say, Severus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
gen "Yes, \"Dear [word_01]\" fits perfectly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Yes, \"Dear [word_01]\" fits perfectly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
"*scribble-scribble-scribble*" "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
"*scribble-scribble-scribble*" "*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
gen "...{w=0.4} \" it is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "...{w=0.4} \"It is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle") call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle")
with d3 with d3
gen "What should I write now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What should I write now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label ending_after:
her "I couldn't help having this bad feeling in my stomach the entire day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") her "I couldn't help having this bad feeling in my stomach the entire day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
her "It's stayed there up until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") her "It's stayed there up until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
">Not knowing how to respond, you stand there in silence for a moment until Hermione pulls you towards her and you both begin moving along with the music once more." ">Not knowing how to respond, you stand there in silence for a moment until Hermione pulls you towards her and you both begin moving along with the music once more."
">After what only feels like seconds the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you." ">After what only feels like seconds, the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you."
gen "You look tired girl, you'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} there's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You look tired girl, you'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} there's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Oh, yes... I suppose so..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "Oh, yes... I suppose so..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
her "Good night then..." ("base", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") her "Good night then..." ("base", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")

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@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1:
gen "How can you be naked...{w=0.2} --ish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How can you be naked...{w=0.2} --ish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well, I had to keep my underwear on...{w=0.2} I'd get cold otherwise." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") her "Well, I had to keep my underwear on...{w=0.2} I'd get cold otherwise." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R")
gen "Cold? How would you be cold with the cloak on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Cold? How would you be cold with the cloak on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "*Ehm*..." ("digust", "base", "base", "mid") her "*Ehm*..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "*Sigh*... Just tell me what happened next." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Sigh*... Just tell me what happened next." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well, a few of the boys were in there." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Well, a few of the boys were in there." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "They were playing wizards chess..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "They were playing wizards chess..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")