From 01697bcb88954b0a03cf1a3a360381e75474ada4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Thu, 4 May 2023 18:41:59 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- .../characters/cho/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 112 ++++----- .../hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 232 +++++++++--------- .../characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 64 ++--- .../characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 10 +- .../characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 80 +++--- game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy | 185 +++++++------- 6 files changed, 342 insertions(+), 341 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 34b73e8b..da279e98 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ label cho_reaction_category_fail(category): cho "You want to pick my underwear?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "I don't think so." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") - cho "Unless we're doing exercises I don't see why you want me to change my underwear..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "R") - cho "I'm perfectly fine with the underwear I'm already wearing thank you..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Unless we're doing exercises, I don't see why you want me to change my underwear..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "R") + cho "I'm perfectly fine with the underwear I'm already wearing, thank you..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") elif category == "lower undergarment": random: block: @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ label cho_reaction_category_fail(category): elif category == "piercings & tattoos": random: cho "Yeah, that's not happening..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - cho "No thank you..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "No, thank you..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "My body is already perfect without such things..." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") return @@ -63,11 +63,11 @@ label cho_reaction_touch(what): random: cho "Are you measuring my height or something?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Is this supposed to encourage me?" ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "You'd usually only pet a dog when they do well with their training you know that right?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "You'd usually only pet a dog when they do well with their training, you know that right?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "What next? A treat?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") elif states.cho.level < 16: # Pre Gryffindor match (after Slytherin match) random: - cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well I suppose this is fine... You did help me beat those Slytherins after all." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well, I suppose this is fine... You did help me beat those Slytherins after all." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Thank you, but don't we have other things to focus on?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") block: @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ label cho_reaction_touch(what): if states.cho.level < 16: #Before Gryffindor match random: cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... I can appreciate a man who goes for what he wants no matter what..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "Such speed... Fancy yourself a seeker do you?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Such speed... Fancy yourself a seeker, do you?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Surely such a move must count as a foul..." ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid") else: random: @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_fail(item): cho "Well, tough luck..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: - cho "Ask Granger to wear it why don't you..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "Ask Granger to wear it, why don't you..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "It's made for your size." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What is that supposed to mean?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -211,13 +211,13 @@ label cho_reaction_unequip_fail(item): cho "You want me to stand here without underwear?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Yeah, in your dreams [name_genie_cho]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: - cho "Take your own underwear off why don't you..." ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Take your own underwear off, why don't you..." ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "What's to say I'm wearing any?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") elif item.type == "bra": random: - cho @ cheeks blush "I bet that Gryffindor cow happily stands here with her tits out but that doesn't mean I will..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "I bet that Gryffindor cow happily stands here with her tits out, but that doesn't mean I will..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "R") block: cho @ cheeks blush "You want me to flash you my tits?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): else: # 16+ cho "The cheerleader outfit?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "But isn't that a bit below me?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Blow me? Yes please!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Blow me? Yes, please!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "...{w} Fine." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") ################## ## Misty Outfit ## @@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Sailor Outfit ## ################### elif item == cho_outfit_sailor: #Req 18 (bottom, panties) - gen "I've got this sailors outfit with your name on it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've got this sailor's outfit with your name on it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Looks more like a slutty sailor outfit..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down") cho "I doubt any seamen would actually wear something like this..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah, the semen goes on this outfit not in it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -337,14 +337,14 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif states.cho.level < 16: cho "*Hmm*... I guess this is what I'd be wearing if my family had stayed in Asia..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I thought you said you weren't Japanese?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "There's only one Wizard school in Asia and it's in Japan... Surely you'd know this...." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "There's only one Wizard school in Asia, and it's in Japan... Surely, you'd know this...." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Oh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(How small is the wizard community? These numbers don't add up...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "*Err*... I'm just a bit forgetful that's all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... I'm just a bit forgetful, that's all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right...{w=0.3} Well, just give me a moment to change then..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: # 16+ cho "Did they send you this from Japan?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I had it custom made!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I had it custom-made!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You did?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "And here I thought it was an official uniform..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "What can I say, I'm quite knowledgeable about these types of uniforms... I've got quite the collection of images." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): cho "A Bikini?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yep, this one..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I see..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho @ cheeks blush "Well, I do look great in bikini's..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well, I do look great in a bikini..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I'm still waiting for the beach episode." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The what?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -387,14 +387,14 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): cho @ cheeks blush "And lingerie's purpose is?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") gen "To bring out the sexy!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I see..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho @ cheeks blush "Well if that's the goal then suppose I'll have to wear it." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well, if that's the goal then suppose I'll have to wear it." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Prepare to meet your maker, sexiness!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: #16+ cho @ cheeks blush "Lingerie..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "So these types of underwear really does it for men do they?" ("open", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Yep!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Women too!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Well I better put it on then..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Well, I better put it on then..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") ################## ## Dress Outfit ## @@ -419,12 +419,12 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): cho @ cheeks blush "That tank top would slide up any time I try to do stretches..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Sounds like a bonus to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho @ cheeks blush "Alright fine..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "Alright, fine..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") else : #16+ cho @ cheeks blush "What kind of exercises do you have in mind exactly?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Ones that show off your ass mainly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Figures..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "Give me moment to put it on then..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Give me a moment to put it on then..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ################ ## Smurfette ## @@ -448,14 +448,14 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Come on, she was the only female Smurf for the first five seasons. I know they look similar but surely--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I don't know what a Smurf is." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Oh... That makes more sense..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well, they're these tiny blue creatures that lives in the woods." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, they're these tiny blue creatures that live in the woods." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Like a pixie?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Smurfs are only blue but I guess they're the same size." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Smurfs are only blue, but I guess they're the same size." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Pixies are only blue as well..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Pretty sure they're not, what do they teach you in history class here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "History? We were told they were blue in our Care of magical creatures class." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Genepool must've gotten fucked after generations of inbreeding...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(The gene pool must've got fucked after generations of inbreeding...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Such a shame...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What ever the case... I'd like you to wear this cosplay outfit for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh... Alright..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "It's Basketball themed!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Basket... Then why does it have space in the name?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "I don't know, why does Quidditch have Quid and ditch in the name if it's not about throwing money on the ground?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Err*...{w} I'll just put this on then shall I?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "*Err*...{w} I'll just put this on then, shall I?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") #################### ## Chun-Li Outfit ## @@ -483,13 +483,13 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Chun-Li!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmm*... Not sure if I've heard of her." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Like everyone in this castle...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "I suppose the costume look quite well made." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "I suppose the costume looks quite well-made." ("open", "base", "base", "down") gen "Finest silk in the country!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Alright, I'll wear it... Even though that Tattoo is a bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "Alright, I'll wear it... Even though that tattoo is a bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "A bit what? A bit too awesome?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "So... You really don't know what it says." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Not the faintest idea." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Well... I suppose that's a good thing then..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well... I suppose that's a good thing..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") ################## ## Police Woman ## ################## @@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): cho @ cheeks blush "Trying to take away the focus on that short top?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "No clue what you're talking about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "You know, police are some of the most well respected people in muggle society..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You know, the police are some of the most well-respected people in muggle society..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I know how much you love that stuff." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "They are?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Sure!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == cho_outfit_virgin_killer: #req 14 (no bra, no panties) gen "I've got this jumper I'd like you to put on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "A jumper?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Yup, is that surprising?." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yup, is that surprising?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmm*... I suppose I would've imagined something more--" ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Here you go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Oh... It's one of those." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -566,17 +566,17 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Now, now [name_cho_genie]... Cheerleaders are athletes as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Their role is just as important as yours." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Don't make me laugh..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - cho "They only thing they're good at is distracting the audience from the game." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "The only thing they're good at is distracting the audience from the game." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Well, when you put it--{w=0.3} *Err*... No, their role is very important!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "What else are you supposed to look at during half time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What else are you supposed to look at during half-time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah... I'd rather not, thanks..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") else: # < 10 - cho "No thanks... I'd rather not put on anything that those talentless posers are wearing." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "down") + cho "No, thanks... I'd rather not put on anything that those talentless posers are wearing." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "down") gen "Oh, come on... Cheerleading requires plenty of talent!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Like what? the art of flailing pompoms around?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Coordination, spirit, and a positive attitude." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "These are all important things you need to be a good Cheerleader." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Pff*... Those things comes naturally to me anyway..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "*Pff*... Those things come naturally to me anyway..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "{size=-4}Ability to take constructive criticism...{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Huh*?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -592,9 +592,9 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): cho "Who?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "She's a gym leader." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Who wears something like this at the gym?!" ("clench", "narrow", "raised", "down") - gen "Well, she does obviously... Although it's more of an every day clothing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, she does, obviously... Although it's more of an everyday clothing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "Yeah, no thank you..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "Yeah, no, thank you..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") elif states.cho.level < 10: cho "A cosplay?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "Whoa... Who is this Misty girl to be wearing something like this?" ("open", "base", "raised", "down") @@ -605,9 +605,9 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Well, they basically have these animals fight against each other." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Like cock fighting? Isn't that illegal?" ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "mid") - gen "I don't think there's any cocks involved, I'm not sure what kind of fiction you've been reading..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I don't think there are any cocks involved... I'm not sure what kind of fiction you've been reading." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "You going to put it on or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Are you going to put it on or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'd rather not..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: # < 15 @@ -631,10 +631,10 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): cho "[name_genie_cho]!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What do you mean what? This outfit has no underwear!" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "I mean... It covers the important bits does it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean... It covers the important bits, does it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Maybe not from every angle but if you were careful not to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I am not wearing this!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Alright, No partying for you I guess..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, No partying for you, I guess..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif states.cho.level < 10: cho "This outfit has no underwear!" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") gen "Oh... It doesn't?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -645,7 +645,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Making the Scotts proud..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: # < 16 - cho "This outfit is way to slutty..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "This outfit is way too slutty..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "My nipples would poke right through this..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Counting on it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Yeah, I'm going to have to pass on this one..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -654,22 +654,22 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): ## Sailor Outfit ## ################### elif item == cho_outfit_sailor: #Req 18 (bottom, panties) - gen "I've got this sailors outfit with your name on it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've got this sailor's outfit with your name on it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.cho.level < 4: - cho "Why would I put on a sailors outfit?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Why would I put on a sailor's outfit?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Say that again once you've seen it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'd rather not..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif states.cho.level < 10: - cho "Why would I put on a sailors outfit in here?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "Cause you'd look great in it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Why would I put on a sailor's outfit in here?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + gen "Because you'd look great in it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "... Is that the only reason?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yep, now put it on!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "... I'll pass..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") else: # < 18 cho "They were this outfit at sea do they?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "down") gen "Nope, the semen goes on this outfit, not in it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Wait... So it's like a fetish thing?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "*Err*... I mean, it was just a joke. Get it, cause semen sounds like--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Wait... So, it's like a fetish thing?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") + gen "*Err*... I mean, it was just a joke. Get it, because semen sounds like--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I am not putting on some fetish thing for you!" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "It's not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -688,7 +688,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): "\"Japanese schoolgirls are hot!\"": cho "What?!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "*Err*... I mean, in the videos I've watched..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I am not putting this on so you can live some fantasy of yours..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "I am not putting this on, just so you can live out some fantasy of yours..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "It's not...{w=0.3} Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"It's a new design I'm proposing to a Japanese wizarding school!\"": cho "Mahoutokoro?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") @@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "I've got this bikini for you to wear today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.cho.level < 4: cho "A what?!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "Well... It's technically a two piece set..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well... It's technically a two-piece set..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "These ones..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What on earth is wrong with you?" ("scream", "narrow", "angry", "down") cho "Putting on a regular bikini in your office would be bad enough but this!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Yep, this one!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "[name_genie_cho]!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You're loving it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You love it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Is this some sort of joke?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "What? Did I get the wrong size?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I didn't buy some Chinese knock off did I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -799,7 +799,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): #################### elif item == cho_outfit_trainee: #req 10 (top) (Part of clothing event, this is a fallback) gen "I've got the perfect outfit for you to wear when you exercise, mind putting it on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "It's a bit small don't you think?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") + cho "It's a bit small, don't you think?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") gen "Is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That tank top doesn't look like it would go down far enough..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Nonsense, a little bit of airflow doesn't hurt anyone..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -832,7 +832,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Yeah, yeah, sure it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now put this on and show me what a real athlete should look like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I'd rather not, seeing that Quidditch isn't a real sport... Which would make me not a real athlete..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "... Well, you're the one that said it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "... Well, you're the one who said it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") #################### @@ -852,7 +852,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): cho "Why is this so revealing?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "All good cosplays are." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Really?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Why else do you think there's so many photos like that out there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why else do you think there are so many photos like that out there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "I think I'll pass..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "It's a dragon!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Pretty sweet isn't--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Not that one, the other one!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down") - gen "Oh, yeah, that one's pretty cool too I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, yeah, that one's pretty cool too, I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Do you even know what it says?" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "I don't know... Strength? Vigour?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I am not wearing it..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -884,9 +884,9 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): cho "I think I'll pass..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") else: # 4+ cho "Why is this top so small?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "To put more focus on your breasts obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "My... Didn't you say this was a uniform?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "Why would a uniform put focus..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "To put more focus on your breasts, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho @ cheeks blush "My--{w=0.2} Didn't you say this was a uniform?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Why would a uniform put focus--" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Well... The cosplay version--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "What I meant to say was..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -960,7 +960,7 @@ label cho_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): else: random: cho "I am not wearing that..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Thanks but no thanks..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thanks but no, thanks..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "You actually think I'd put on something like that?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Do I look like Granger [name_genie_cho]? I am not wearing something like that..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "This is too much." ("mad", "closed", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 2735bbbf..e271b81b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label her_reaction_category_fail(category): if category == "upper undergarment": random: - her "I'd rather keep the underwear I have on already thank you very much..." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "I'd rather keep the underwear I have on already, thank you very much..." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") block: her "You want me to change my underwear?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") her "Why on earth would I do that?" ("open", "base", "angry", "R") @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ label her_reaction_category_fail(category): her "*Ehm*... Do I have to?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") her "Isn't it supposed to hurt?" ("upset", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level >= 6: - her "You can look all you want but I will not have such things done to my body..." ("normal", "base", "annoyed", "mid") + her "You can look all you want, but I will not have such things done to my body..." ("normal", "base", "annoyed", "mid") else: #under naked level her "You want me to what?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ label her_reaction_touch(what): her @ cheeks blush "So, I guess this is part of our arrangement now..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Oh! Hey, at least give me a warning first." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Your hands not good enough anymore?" ("base", "squint", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "Hey... These things are sensitive you know..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "Hey... These things are sensitive, you know..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") else: # >= 12 random: her @ cheeks blush "Why are you kissing my..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ label her_reaction_touch(what): # Bottoms only OR Bottoms AND panties random: her "Naughty..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*... Want to see what's underneath do you?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*... Want to see what's underneath, do you?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Got your eye on something?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif hermione.is_worn("panties"): # Panties only @@ -154,15 +154,15 @@ label her_reaction_touch_fail(what): her "No touching!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "L") her @ cheeks blush "Bad [name_genie_hermione]!" ("annoyed", "happyCl", "angry", "L") her "Hands to yourself." ("clench", "base", "angry", "R") - her "Cut it out.." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + her "Cut it out..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "Hands off me." ("mad", "wide", "angry", "mid") elif what == "vagina": $ mouse_slap() random: her "Stop that!" ("angry", "wide", "angry", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "L") - her "Unhand me.." ("mad", "wide", "angry", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Stop it please.." ("open", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") + her "Unhand me..." ("mad", "wide", "angry", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Stop it please..." ("open", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") her "Hands off me." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") return @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ label her_reaction_unequip_fail(item): random: block: her "I'm not gonna flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - her "{size=-4}Pervert..{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "{size=-4}Pervert...{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: her "Take off my panties?! No way!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down") @@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ label her_reaction_unequip_fail(item): random: block: her "I'm not gonna flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - her "{size=-4}Pervert..{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "{size=-4}Pervert...{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: her "Take off my bra?! No way!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down") @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ label her_reaction_unequip_fail(item): her "Take my top off? Are you crazy?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "L") elif item.type == "bottom": - her "Take my bottoms off so you can ogle my ass? No thank you." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + her "Take my bottoms off, just so that you can ogle my ass? No, thank you." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") return label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): @@ -263,12 +263,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "It's an insult to my breast, [name_genie_hermione]!!!" ("open", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "*Gasps* {w=0.9}I would never... [name_hermione_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - $ temp_word = renpy.random.choice(["marvellous", "magnificent", "breath-taking", "wonderful", "spectacular", "sensational", "glorious", "beautiful", "lovely", "bananas"]) + $ temp_word = renpy.random.choice(["marvellous", "magnificent", "breathtaking", "wonderful", "spectacular", "sensational", "glorious", "beautiful", "lovely", "bananas"]) gen "Your tits are [temp_word]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "And yet you want me to wear those... rags!" ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "You going to wear it or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "And yet you want me to wear those... Rags!" ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "mid") + gen "Are you going to put the rags on, or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ugh*, fine! Let me change it real quick." ("upset", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") ############################### @@ -306,8 +306,8 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): if states.her.level < 4: her "Of course!" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") her "You should've seen the look on Malfoy's face when he saw me buy it in a muggle shop." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "It was right outside the leaky cauldron you see." ("crooked_smile", "squint", "base", "R") - her "He looked as if he had bit into a--" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + her "It was right outside the leaky cauldron, you see." ("crooked_smile", "squint", "base", "R") + her "He looked as if he had bitten into a--" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "I don't need your life story, just put it on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmph*... Fine." ("upset", "squint", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level < 13: @@ -337,18 +337,18 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "I see...{w} Is she as hot--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Let me go and change real quick." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 13: - her "Glad you're caring about my health [name_genie_hermione]... This office does get a little bit cold sometimes." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Glad you care about my health [name_genie_hermione]... This office does get a little bit cold sometimes." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Ah yes... Your health is important... I wouldn't be able to summon you if you caught a cold, would I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") her "I'll just go and change it then... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 22: - her "My mother made that jumper for me you know..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "My mother made that jumper for me, you know..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I wonder what she'd say if she knew I rarely wear it anymore..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "She'd probably be proud that you're not relying on her giving you clothes anymore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*... Somehow I doubt that..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "R") else: #22+ her "That old thing?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - her "It's a bit boring don't you think?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her "It's a bit boring, don't you think?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "I think you look great in it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*... Alright then." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): if states.her.level < 4: her "I wanted to talk to you about this actually..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(Oh, here we go...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "The cloak doesn't cover the head so when it rains it just ends up in your hair." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "The cloak doesn't cover the head, so when it rains it just ends up in your hair." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") her "I always end up having to dry it using magic, making it go all frizzy." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Isn't your hair already--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "...{w=0.4} Fine..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 13: her "Certainly, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Just let me go change real quick." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "Just let me go and change real quick." ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 22: her "You suddenly want me to cover up now?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") menu: @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "But it's the middle of the day!" ("clench", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Alright fine, I'm not going to argue with you..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") + her "Alright, fine... I'm not going to argue with you." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") else: her "My pyjamas?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") if states.her.level < 13: @@ -451,12 +451,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_cheerleader_1: #Req 10 whoring gen "Could you wear the cheerleader outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 19: - her "Gryffindor colours I presume?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Gryffindor colours, I presume?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "We'll see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "...{w=0.4} Fine." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level < 22: her "*Hmm*... Alright then..." ("base", "happy", "worried", "R") - her "I'll just change it here shall I?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "I'll just change it here, shall I?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "That's the spirit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: #22+ her "That thing is so silly..." ("base", "squint", "base", "R") @@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Wear it, or I will have you go naked!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(How exciting!){/size}" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "I will wear it if I absolutely have to,..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I will wear it if I absolutely have to..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}Do I?{/size}" ("grin", "base", "base", "L") gen "Yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Tzzz--* Your loss..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") @@ -513,12 +513,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "A bit what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well, it's fetish gear, isn't it?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "I'd say it's closer to lingerie than fetish gear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*... Alright fine I'll wear it then..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "*Hmm*... Alright, fine... I'll wear it then." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") else: #22+ her "A fishnet outfit?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... My nipples would stick right through this..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I think that's the point." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Alright, just give me a moment and I'll put it on for you..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Alright, just give me a moment, and I'll put it on for you..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") ###################### ## Fishnet One-Piece ## @@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her @ cheeks blush "And I suppose I shouldn't ask where you got such an outfit from..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Probably shouldn't..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Alright..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "Well I suppose I'll wear it if I have to..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Well, I suppose I'll wear it if I have to..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") else: #22+ her @ cheeks blush "Lingerie?! How dare you [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "As if you have any of that..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Well... Here it goes." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") else: #22+ - her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well I can't say something as skin tight as this doesn't excite me a little bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well, I can't say something as skin tight as this doesn't excite me a little bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I might as well not be wearing anything with how little this leaves to the imagination." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Like that's a bad thing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I knew you'd say that... Alright then, give me a moment..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") @@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Witch Outfit ## ################## elif item == her_outfit_witch: #Req 10 (top) - gen "Put on this witch outfit for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Put on this witch outfit for me, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 13: her "Witch outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "The one I have right here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -620,8 +620,8 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "Witch outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "The one I have right here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Right..." ("grin", "base", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "Well... While real witches' outfits don't look like this I do like this muggle interpretation..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Actually I had this custom made..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "Well... While real witches' outfits don't look like this, I do like this muggle interpretation..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "Actually, I had this custom-made..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... You did, did you?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Looks like someone's gotten their hands on a particular kind of muggle magazine..." ("crooked_smile", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "No idea what you're talking about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -641,13 +641,13 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Indeed... I'm a massive fan." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Especially of the fan service...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Must be a great woman then, seeing your reaction." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "A great woman indeed! Went cave exploring with her a couple times..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A great woman indeed! Went cave exploring with her a couple of times..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Good times..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I wonder why I haven't heard of her..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") her "Well... I suppose I could wear it since you speak so highly of her." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Give me a moment to let me change." ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 22: - gen "Lara Croft looks stunning in it so I think you'd probably fill it just as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Lara Croft looks stunning in it, so I think you'd probably fill it just as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Fill it?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Fit it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I guess I'll have to look up this Archaeologist..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") @@ -660,8 +660,8 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "I'm sure Lara Croft would love to see someone wear her famous outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Although last time I saw her, she couldn't wait to take it off..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Take it off?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "Indeed... She's quite famous in certain circles you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Let's just say if you're anyone in the world of archaeology you've heard about Lara Croft..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Indeed... She's quite famous in certain circles, you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let's just say if you're anyone in the world of archaeology, then you've heard about Lara Croft..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Right..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I'd delve her cavern any--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Okay, okay... Just don't call me Lara once I put it on..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Heart Slut Outfit ## ####################### elif item == her_outfit_hslut: #Req 19 (top, panties, bra) - gen "Put on this burlesque outfit for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Put on this burlesque outfit for me, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 22: her @ cheeks blush "A burlesque outfit?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, this one to be exact..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -685,7 +685,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her @ cheeks blush "Strippers wear these, right?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Sometimes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What do you mean sometimes?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Put in on and I'll change that answer to a yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Put it on, and I'll change that answer to a yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "How cheeky...{w=0.4} Alright then..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") ####################### @@ -696,12 +696,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): if states.her.level < 13: her "Cosplay, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Miss Marvel... One of my favourites!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well I can certainly see why..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well, I can certainly see why..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Alright fine..." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Just give me a moment to change." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 22: her @ cheeks blush "Cosplay, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes... A miss Marvel cosplay to be precise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... A miss Marvel cosplay, to be precise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I see..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "And why do you want me to wear this cosplay exactly?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "I believe it would enhance your physical traits." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "She's from Final Fantasy..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Huh*?" ("upset", "happy", "base", "mid") - gen "Sorry... I should've been more specific shouldn't I..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sorry... I should've been more specific..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Final Fantasy Seven is the one you'd probably know her from." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*..." ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Oh... Come on... it was so good it even got a remake!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): else: #22+ her @ cheeks blush "Lingerie..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Quite observant of you, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Well I suppose if wearing this helps you build up... *Ehm*..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Well, I suppose if wearing this helps you build up... *Ehm*..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "No, do finish that sentence please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What I meant is... If it means I'll be able to finish my tasks faster..." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Just... I'll just put it on..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -839,7 +839,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Egyptian Outfit ## ##################### elif item == her_outfit_egypt: #Req 19 (top) - gen "Put on this Egyptian-themed outfit for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Put on this Egyptian-themed outfit for me, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 22: her "Why am I suspecting this is not your ordinary--" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "Here you go..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -852,12 +852,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "Alright... I guess I'll wear it..." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") her "One moment..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") else: #22+ - her "Egyptian-themed you say?" ("soft", "happy", "base", "mid") + her "Egyptian-themed, you say?" ("soft", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah, this one right here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I see..." ("normal", "happy", "base", "down") - gen "Cleopatra wore this quite proudly I'll have you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Cleopatra wore this quite proudly, I'll have you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Right..." ("soft", "closed", "worried", "mid") - her "Well I wouldn't want to displease the great Cleopatra..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") + her "Well, I wouldn't want to displease the great Cleopatra..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Hopefully I'll do it justice..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "One moment please..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -874,14 +874,14 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Why I'm not quite sure what you mean by that..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "But if I'm expected to put it on for the sake of--" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Just put it on will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just put it on, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} Okay then." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Just give me a moment..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") else: #22+ her @ cheeks blush "A swimsuit..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Are you expecting me to get wet today?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Can never be too careful..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Well... If that's the case then I better put it on..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Well... If that's the case, then I better put it on..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") ##################### ## Bioshock Outfit ## @@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "A corset is hardly going to hinder you from breathing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I guess that's true." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") - gen "Great... So no complaints then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great... So, no complaints then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*... I suppose not..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") her "..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") gen "So... Are you putting it on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -920,7 +920,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Wait a second, they forgot the coin purse!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Huh*?" ("upset", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "There's supposed to be a coin purse for you to store silver coins in..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh... So you don't want me to wear it then?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "Oh... So, you don't want me to wear it?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Of course I do... You'll just have to store the coins in a pocket or something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*... There doesn't seem to be any pockets..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Well... I'm sure you'll find somewhere to put them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -947,13 +947,13 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "Who?" ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "*Sigh*...{w=0.4} Yennefer... {w=0.4} From the witcher." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh...{w=0.4} Her..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") - her "(No clue who that is but I better not offend him...)" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "(No clue who that is, but I better not offend him...)" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "(I guess she picked Triss.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You... Like this Yennefer character then?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "You... Like this Yennefer character, then?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "(She did pick Triss!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean... Shouldn't I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I only did the one playthrough... Maybe Triss was the right choice... Should I have save scummed--)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Err*... No you definitely should..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her "*Err*... No, you definitely should..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "L") her "I'll just put it on shall I?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "A Classy outfit for a classy lady." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well, thank you..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Oh... Yes, put it on for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh... Yes, put it on for me, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "As you wish." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "One moment..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -976,10 +976,10 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): if not states.her.ev.yule_ball.e4_complete: gen "Could you put on this dress?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*... This looks expensive..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "down") - gen "I had it custom made!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I had it custom-made!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(As if my other purchases haven't been...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I do like a pearl necklace..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I knew it... Well, I'm always happy to give you one as long as you don't tell anyone about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I knew it... Well, I'm always happy to give you one, as long as you don't tell anyone about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "We wouldn't want anyone to know the headmaster gave a student a pearl necklace, do we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Well, let's put it on then..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "mid") @@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_reindeer: #Req 19 (top, stockings) gen "I've got this reindeer costume for you to wear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You want me to dress up like a reindeer?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Of course, 'Tis the season after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course, 'Tis the season, after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I just thought that you'd want me to wear something... You know..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") gen "Here's the costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh, Now it makes sense..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -1047,13 +1047,13 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "I spent some tokens getting this outfit for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 22: her @ cheeks blush "Whoa..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I know... Quite intricate is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I know... Quite intricate, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You... you want me to wear this?" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I mean, I am a winner after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... I'm not so sure about that..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Sounds like jealousy to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "*Ahem*... Just put it on will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ahem*... Just put it on, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "...{w=0.4} Fine." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") else: #22+ her "You won this did you?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -1075,20 +1075,20 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "You want me to clean your office now too?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well... Let's just have you wear the outfit for now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ugh*... Maid's outfits are so silly..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "Well... Here it goes I guess..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "Well... Here it goes, I guess..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") elif states.her.level < 22: her "*Hmm*..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I presume your reason for wanting me to put it on isn't related to cleaning..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Figured..." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well I guess it can't be helped..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well, I guess it can't be helped..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "One moment please..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: #22+ her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Is it one of those \"Sexy\" maid's outfits?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "It depends..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What is that supposed to mean?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It depends on who wears it... I think I'd be able to make a judgment whilst seeing you with it on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Charmed...{w} Alright, just let me get changed so we can find out..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Charmed...{w} Alright, just let me get changed, so we can find out..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") ######################### @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ######################### elif item == her_outfit_bikini3: #Req 17 (panties, bra) gen "Put on this bikini for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*... A bikini you say?" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*... A bikini, you say?" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Yep, this one right here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Right...{w} Why would I even expect something normal?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Looks normal to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1120,14 +1120,14 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "(Alright, let's see what's going on here...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/pageflip.ogg" gen "(\"Genie fights Snape using magic... #TODO add explanation to this later...\")" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(That's the tutorial so it must be further in...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(That's the tutorial, so it must be further in...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/pageflipback.ogg" gen "(Genie fucks Hermione in the Ass...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.status.anal: - gen "(*Heh-heh*... Why am I not doing this right now exactly?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(*Heh-heh*... Why am I not doing this right now, exactly?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "(Whops... Spoilers..)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Whops... Spoilers...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(*Hmm*... I've gone too far... Well... In the script at least.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/pageflip.ogg" @@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): play sound "sounds/pageflip.ogg" pause .3 gen "(There we go... The wardrobe section...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Still waiting... I'm going to need a real reason soon or I'm not putting it on..." ("angry", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Still waiting... I'm going to need a real reason soon, or I'm not putting it on..." ("angry", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "(*Aha*! I knew it!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Genie comes up with another bullshit reason... Hermione thinks for a moment and then accepts it as the truth!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Three...{w=1} Two--" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -1153,7 +1153,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "What the..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "They wear these on the Vegas strip do they?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well I suppose I'll put it on then..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well, I suppose I'll put it on then..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(What just...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(*Hmm*... The developers must've patched it...{w=0.4} There's my immersion ruined...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Just give me a moment..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1171,12 +1171,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her @ cheeks blush "Well I guess it has some coverage..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I'm sure I could adjust it to be smaller if you'd like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Err*... No, it's fine... I'll just put it on as is..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "You sure? Just say the word and I'll have it--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You sure? Just say the word, and I'll have it--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "No, we're good. Just give me a moment to put it on." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") else: # 22+ her @ cheeks blush "A bikini?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Yep, I've got this leather one for you to wear today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "A leather bikini in the headmasters office..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "A leather bikini in the headmaster's office..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "That's right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... One moment please..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Yep... This one right here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "This is supposed to be a bikini is it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Should fall within that definition, yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "And here I thought bikini's were supposed to protect your modesty..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "And here I thought bikinis were supposed to protect your modesty..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(Your modesty went out the window a long time ago.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well... I suppose it does cover the important bits..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "(Is she trying to convince herself out of it or the other way around?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her @ cheeks blush "Is this really what you imagine a proper Christmas-themed outfit is?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I mean... Mrs Claus probably doesn't wear it... Although she probably should." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Why would I even ask..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Because if she did then Santa would probably come more than once a--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Because if she did, then Santa would probably come more than once a--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Fine!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I wasn't finished..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I'll put it on..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -1275,7 +1275,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her @ cheeks blush "Looks a bit naughty--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Yet I'm sure Santa would put you on the good list if you wore it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... I doubt that..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "Well... I'm doing this to make my house happy so surely it'd even out." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Well... I'm doing this to make my house happy, so surely it'd even out." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure it will." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Just give me a moment to put it on..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1286,16 +1286,16 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "I've got these wrestling robes for you to wear today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 13: her "Wrestling robes?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Why do you want me to wear wrestling robes exactly?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "Why do you want me to wear wrestling robes, exactly?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Wrestle obviously, let me just call for your opponent." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "No, while that would be fun I'd just like you to wear it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, while that would be fun, I'd just like you to wear it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Alright, as long as you don't make me wrestle..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") else: #13+ her "Wrestling robes?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah, although you'd take them off when you actually start wrestling." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "You're not trying to trick me into doing mudwrestling are you?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "You're not trying to trick me into doing mud wrestling are you?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well now that you bring it up..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Never mind, forget I said it!" ("angry", "happy", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Just let me put these on..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -1313,8 +1313,8 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Could you wear the cheerleader outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Cheerleader outfit?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Sir, I am not some floosy cheerleader..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Their attire shows way to much skin for my liking..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her "Sir, I am not some floozy cheerleader..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Their attire shows way too much skin for my liking..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Come on, it's just your stomach..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sorry [name_genie_hermione] but I'll have to decline..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -1325,8 +1325,8 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Could you put on the cheerleader outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 10: her "Cheerleader outfit?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Sir, I am not some floosy cheerleader..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Their attire shows way to much skin for my liking..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her "Sir, I am not some floozy cheerleader..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Their attire shows way too much skin for my liking..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Come on, surely it's not that bad." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sorry [name_genie_hermione] but I'll have to decline..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") else: # < 16 @@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "It's a fishnet--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, I get it!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") her "This isn't really a hobby I considered pursuing, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "But if you say it will help me with my grades then I'll try my best." ("smile", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "But if you say it will help me with my grades, then I'll try my best." ("smile", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Wait what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I will go down to the lake later and try it out, if that's okay with you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1433,7 +1433,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "How do you even put this on?" ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") gen "No clue, although I'd assume it's no different to a condom..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "wide", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Yeah I'm not putting this on..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Yeah, I'm not putting this on..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Did I say condom? I meant... *Err*..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") gen "Fine... Never mind then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1444,7 +1444,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): elif item == her_outfit_slutty_schoolgirl: #Req 19 (top, Bottom) gen "Could you put on this school uniform for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 4: - her "Most certainly... The school uniform is a staple within this institution and I'll wear it with--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Most certainly... The school uniform is a staple within this institution, and I'll wear it with--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Here you go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Pride..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "down") her "What have you done?!" ("shock", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -1473,7 +1473,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her @ cheeks blush "The students wear this with pride... It's a staple of our great institution." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And you've turned it into--" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I know... Quite an improvement, isn't it?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I'm sorry but I am not putting this on, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "I'm sorry, but I am not putting this on, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Suit yourself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ################## @@ -1512,11 +1512,11 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): if states.her.level < 4: her "What is this?!" ("open", "wide", "base", "down") gen "An archaeologist outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well at least it's an artist representation of what one might look like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, at least it's an artist's representation of what one might look like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What kind of archaeologist would be wearing something like this?" ("clench", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Why none other than the great Lara Croft!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Who?" ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Lara Croft! The worlds most famous Archaeologist!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Lara Croft! The world's most famous Archaeologist!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What kind of archaeologist is she to be wearing this?" ("normal", "slit", "base", "mid") gen "The kind that delves into ancient temples looking for rare artefacts!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well I must say that attire such as this is hardly necessary to--" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -1527,7 +1527,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*..." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Whatever you say, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: # < 10 - her "Hmm... When I think of an archaeologist outfit I don't think of something so..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "down") + her "Hmm... When I think of an archaeologist outfit, I don't think of something so..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "down") gen "Triangular?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, I was going to say revealing..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It's not \"that\" revealing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1551,7 +1551,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her @ cheeks blush "What are these heart things even supposed to be?" ("clench", "base", "annoyed", "down") gen "Oh, they're called pasties. They go on the top of your nipples." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "squint", "worried", "stare") - gen "You see, if you move your breasts in a circulation motion these little things spin around." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You see, if you move your breasts in a circulation motion, these little things spin around." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") with hpunch her @ cheeks blush "What?!" ("shock", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "I know!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1581,7 +1581,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Sure could've fooled me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I only did that because you paid..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Go on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "I'm sorry sir but it's too much..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I'm sorry sir, but it's too much..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "(You're in denial [name_hermione_genie]... Well, I'm sure she'll come around soon enough.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ####################### @@ -1605,9 +1605,9 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "Oh My... This thing is skin tight..." ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") gen "Not too unusual for cosplay..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I can't put this thing on..." ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid") - gen "Oh come on... Just use some powder and I'm sure it'll slip right--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh come on... Just use some powder, and I'm sure it'll slip right--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I \"won't\" put this thing on..." ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "... Just say so then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "... Then why didn't you just say so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") ################# @@ -1665,7 +1665,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): else: # < 16 her @ cheeks blush "*Err*... You want me to wear lingerie?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Can I ask you why?" ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "May I ask you why?" ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Don't you want to look sexy for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "For you-- Sir, that is not why I'm doing this..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Did I say for me? I meant--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1685,7 +1685,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "I am not putting that on..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") else: # < 13 her "What's supposed to make this piece of garment a nightie exactly?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Well... It's a thin soft material that you put on at night." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well... It's a thin, and soft material that you put on at night." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Isn't a nightie meant to cover you?" ("normal", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "I mean it sort of does..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -1711,7 +1711,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "This..." ("clench", "squint", "base", "down") gen "Pretty unique isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "This looks like someone ripped an oversized balloon." ("disgust", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Baloon? I was going to say it looks more like a--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Balloon? I was going to say it looks more like a--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "... {w} Like a what?" ("angry", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So will you wear--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1736,7 +1736,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): if states.her.level < 13: her "Egyptian-themed? What's that supposed to mean?" ("upset", "squint", "worried", "mid") gen "You know... The type of clothing that they'd wear in Egypt." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well at least back when I was there." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, at least back when I was there." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You've been to Egypt, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And let me tell you... Cleopatra was quite the sight to behold!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1758,7 +1758,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Yeah, this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir... I thought Egyptians covered their skin from the sun..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Poppycock." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If you did then you wouldn't be able to get an even tan." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you did, then you wouldn't be able to get an even tan." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Sorry [name_genie_hermione] but this is too much..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her "" ("normal", "base", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -1826,20 +1826,20 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Yep, Yennefer from the Witcher." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "A witch?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") her "Well, I suppose I could--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "That's kind of offensive actually." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's kind of offensive, actually." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Huh*?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "She's a sorceress, not a witch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I see..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") her "(What is he even talking about...)" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "You better make up for what you just said by wearing this for me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Calling her a witch... Witches are usually old women or hags you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Calling her a witch... Witches are usually old women or hags, you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I'm a witch!" ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "But the video ga-- I mean books... Yes, I've read them you know!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But the video ga-- I mean books... Yes, I've read them, you know!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Okay I didn't..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Okay... You got me... I didn't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, do I have to wear this?" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "No... I don't deserve it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1848,13 +1848,13 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): ################ ## Ball Dress ## ################ - elif item == her_outfit_ball: #Req 14 (no bra) (ball happens on lvl 15) + elif item == her_outfit_ball: #Req 14 (no bra) gen "Could you put on this dress?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, this dress has no...{w=0.4} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Support." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You know..." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "Oh... I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well your breasts should do shouldn't they?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, your breasts should do, shouldn't they?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") her "Sir, I'm not putting on some dress without my bra..." ("angry", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "Well, that kind of humour is very much like him..." ("soft", "squint", "annoyed", "R") gen "(When in doubt, blame Snape!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif states.her.level < 13: - her "*Err*... You're joking right?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "*Err*... You're joking, right?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Surely you don't expect me to put on something so--" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "*Hah-Ha*... Yeah, I'm a bit of a hop-timist sometimes!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -1944,9 +1944,9 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "*Err*... Am I supposed to be some kind of prize for you winning games?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I mean, this outfit was practically made for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Come on... Surely you can't resist basking in my glory." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on... Surely, you can't resist basking in my glory." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "Well, I'm sorry but looks to me as if you spent your hard earned tokens on a piece of fabric." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "Well, I'm sorry but it looks to me as if you spent your hard-earned tokens on a piece of fabric." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Guess even a smidge of my fame is too much for her...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1956,11 +1956,11 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): elif item == her_outfit_maid: #Req 4 gen "Could you put on this maid's outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "A maid's outfit?" ("upset", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "Isn't cleaning part of the house elves job?" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her "Isn't cleaning part of the house elves' job?" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her "(Not that I approve of this horrible house elf enslavement...)" ("annoyed", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "I mean, I'd be fine if you just--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I have no time to clean up your mess, you'll have to do that yourself..." ("open", "happy", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "(I don't think there's enough tissues in this world for that.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I don't think there are enough tissues in this world for that.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Very well, Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ######################### @@ -1993,7 +1993,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Indeed... This one right here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "wide", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], You can't be serious!" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "About what? It's a bikini is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "About what? It's a bikini, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "These straps are made of chains! Surely that wouldn't even help to keep them on..." ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") gen "I'm sure you'll find a way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I won't!" ("scream", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -2007,7 +2007,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "That one?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Sir, are you sure this is..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Ehm*... I mean it looks a bit..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "*Ehm*... I mean, it looks a bit..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "A bit what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Come on, it's not that bad... Just put it on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2143,7 +2143,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "You want me to wrap a gift for you?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I guess I could do that..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Here's the ribbons..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Here are the ribbons..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Go on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione], you've not provided me any wrapping paper..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -2156,7 +2156,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "You want me to what?!" ("disgust", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Take your clothes--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione], are you crazy?!" ("scream", "happyCl", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "You've learnt how to tie a knot have you not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've learnt how to tie a knot, have you not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If it's an issue I suppose I could--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You want me to take my clothes off and only wear a ribbon?!" ("clench", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Ribbons actually... There's two of them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2189,12 +2189,12 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Don't tell me you knew that too?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I mean..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... In that case I want you to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... In that case, I want you to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Tie it around your tits so hard it squeezes them together!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "Didn't expect that one did you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Didn't expect that one, did you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am not doing that!" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "(Aw, shit...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Oh, shit...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What about doing it loosely?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("upset", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Yeah, yeah... Fine... Not like it's my birthday or anything..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2210,7 +2210,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "I don't know... Might jingle a couple of balls..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What did you just say?!" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Bells... I said bells..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Come on, just put the thing on. I'm sure Santa would give us a white Christmas if you did." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on, just put the thing on. I'm sure that Santa would give us a white Christmas if you did." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I think I'll pass..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "R") gen "(Balls...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: # < 13 @@ -2218,7 +2218,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "Antlers actually..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Antlers..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "And a bell..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "You trying to make me to look like some sort of reindeer?" ("angry", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Are you trying to make me to look like some sort of reindeer?" ("angry", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Cute, aren't they?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "You'd be like a sexy reindeer!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2248,7 +2248,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): return label her_reaction_blacklist(item): - her "I would have to take off some my clothes to fit into this..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") + her "I would have to take off some of my clothes to fit into this..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") if "top" in item.blacklist and hermione.is_worn("top"): her "My top won't fit at all." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index fe9e81e6..52a53b66 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch(what): block: lun "Thank you [name_genie_luna]." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "Other students look at me weird if I try to pet them so I'm glad I didn't do something weird again..." ("angry", "base", "base", "downR") + lun "Other students look at me weird if I try to pet them, so I'm glad I didn't do something weird again..." ("angry", "base", "base", "downR") elif what == "breasts": @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch(what): lun @ cheeks blush "It feels really good so why aren't any of them coming out?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") block: lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*... {w=0.4} Your methods are quite the something [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun @ cheeks blush "I could never have imagined that getting rid of those pest would end up being so..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "I could never have imagined that getting rid of those pests would end up being so..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Enjoyable..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif states.lun.tier == 3: @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch_fail(what): #Not used elif what == "vagina": $ mouse_slap() - lun "*Ah* [name_genie_luna], please don't tease me, wrackspurts have been terribly active today and I'm barely able to withhold as it is." + lun "*Ah* [name_genie_luna], please don't tease me, wrackspurts have been terribly active today, and I'm barely able to withhold as it is." return @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): if states.lun.level < 4: gen "No wands in your hair... No weird stuff..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Weird stuff, [name_genie_luna]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "*Err*... Nothing extra outside the regular uniform I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... Nothing extra outside the regular uniform, I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "What about my underwear?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Your underwear [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I didn't get those with the uniform, so can I still wear them?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "And wear it the way you did the first time we met." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "On the day I was sorted into Ravenclaw?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") lun "I'm not sure I remember how I wore it..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - gen "*Err*... No I meant the one when you came into my office, when you told me about the spurts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... No, I meant the one when you came into my office, when you told me about the spurts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... Then why didn't you say so!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") lun "One moment, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): lun "You're so smart [name_genie_luna]!" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "I am?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "This way you'll get to the affected areas so much quicker!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, yes that's it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, yes, that's it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "We should make this the standard school uniform!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*... I'll think about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): lun "You can do that?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Wear pyjamas during the day!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes? Why wouldn't you be able to? I'm wearing this robe all the time and I'm nowhere near a bath." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes? Why wouldn't you be able to? I'm wearing this robe all the time, and I'm nowhere near a bath." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "If you say so [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") else: lun "My pyjamas?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -397,14 +397,14 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ############## elif item == lun_outfit_swimsuit: #Req 7 (no bra, no panties) gen "Put on this swimsuit for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "But what about the one eyed trouser snake?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "But what about the one-eyed trouser snake?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "It said in the quibbler that putting on a swimsuit could attract the one eyed trouser snake." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "The... Oh I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "It said in the quibbler that putting on a swimsuit could attract the one-eyed trouser snake." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "The... Oh, I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Smut writers and their terrible euphemisms...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Err*... Did the magazine not mention that the... *Ahem*... Snake is valuable?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "It is?" ("angry", "base", "base", "stare") - gen "Of course, the spit of the one eyed trouser snake is heavily sought after." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course, the spit of the one-eyed trouser snake is heavily sought after." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Really?" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly... In fact, some people can't get enough of it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh, I didn't know that!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare") @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == lun_outfit_muggle: #No req gen "Put on this maggle outfit for me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Muggle outfit, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Yes that's it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, that's it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I like the skirt!" ("smile", "base", "base", "down") gen "Is that sarcasm?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "No?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "No... Attend people during flight." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Sounds dangerous..." ("clench", "base", "base", "down") gen "(Explaining this to her will probably take all day...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Just forget what it's for, it's not important for your education..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just forget what it's for, it's not essential for your education..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... Alright then." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") lun "..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") gen "I still want you to put it on though..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -516,10 +516,10 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Gotta maintain some order around here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... Are police some kind of muggle law enforcer?" ("open", "base", "base", "stare") gen "Yes they--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Surely the governmental forces of the world is prevalent enough for you to know what the police are?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Surely the governmental forces of the world are prevalent enough for you to know what the police are?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Like, the ministry of magic?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(This is just plain ignorance at this point...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Just put it on will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just put it on, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Alright." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ################### @@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): lun "Hold on!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") lun "There's a hole with a mistletoe above it!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "That's where the nargles likes to hide!" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") + lun "That's where the nargles like to hide!" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") lun "I can't wear this!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Bloody--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Unless..." ("mad", "base", "base", "stare") @@ -576,13 +576,13 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Surely I shouldn't be standing here without a bra on?" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") if states.lun.level < 4: - gen "(Maybe I've gone to far...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Maybe I've gone too far...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The wrackpurts would most certainly get to me!" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Maybe I could convince her once we've found a way to deal with them...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "If I stood here for too long without a bra I don't doubt they'd get to me!" ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") + lun "If I stood here for too long without a bra, then I don't doubt they'd get to me!" ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "Who?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The Wrackspurts!" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Oh..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -596,17 +596,17 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "And skip the underwear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.lun.level < 4: lun "But [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") - lun "The wrackpurts would be able to get in there if I'm not to wear any underwear." ("clench", "wink", "base", "mid") + lun "The wrackpurts would be able to get in there if I were to not wear any underwear." ("clench", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure we'll be able to deal with that if it comes down to it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Hmm*... I'm not so sure about that..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") else: lun "Is this part of the inspection?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes... Well you see, the spurts... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... Well, you see, the spurts... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "[name_genie_luna]... I'd rather not make myself a target of those things, standing here without underwear would surely bring them all to attention." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") - gen "It'd bring something to attention that's for sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It'd bring something to attention, that's for sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Alright, then I better not." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Wait, I was only--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Damnit...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Dammit...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #################### ## Nightie Outfit ## @@ -620,13 +620,13 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "What do you mean, what about the spurts?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "They'll be able to get in there if I'm not wearing any underwear!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Don't she mean getting out?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Doesn't she mean, get out?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I think it's probably best if I keep myself protected..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") else: lun "Is this part of the inspection?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes... Well you see, the spurts... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... Well, you see, the spurts... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "[name_genie_luna]... Don't you think they'd easily be able to fly in there if I'm not wearing any underwear?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") - gen "I don't see how that's a problem, it feels nice does it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I don't see how that's a problem, it feels nice, does it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*... Does that matter?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "(Is there even a right answer here?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: @@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): "\"Yes.\"": lun "Are you alright [name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Never been better, why?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "*Hmm*... Are you sure the wrackspurts haven't affected your brain perhaps?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "*Hmm*... Are you sure the wrackspurts haven't affected your brain?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Doubt it... Although people do tell me I think with my penis sometimes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Surely it's not a good idea to give them an open landing strip." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "We'll just deal with it if it happens." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -666,7 +666,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... *Ehm*..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") lun @ cheeks blush "I'd rather we continue with our research..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "You watch as Luna grinds her legs together." - gen "I see... Some other time then perhaps." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see... Some other time then, perhaps." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ############## ## Swimsuit ## @@ -695,9 +695,9 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): lun "But [name_genie_luna], I'd have to take off my bra for this!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Haven't you heard of the nipple biting mouth suckers?!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, yeah of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, yes, of course I have!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Although perhaps you could remind me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "The plant... Professor Sprout told us to watch out for them as they're quite rowdy this time of year." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") + lun "The plant... Professor Sprout told us to watch out for them, as they're quite rowdy this time of year." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Rowdy you say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes, she's showed me a great many times how dangerous they can be around nipples." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -762,7 +762,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): lun "But [name_genie_luna]... This outfit doesn't have a bra!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure the outfit is tight enough to keep them contained, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I'm more worried about what could find its way into it..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "(And here I thought she wanted some hands on experience.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(And here I thought she wanted some hands-on experience.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "(Can't let those wrackspurts get to me...)" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") ################### @@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): lun "But, there are no paws!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Paws?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes! And no whiskers either!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "No--{w=0.2} It's not that kind of a costume!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No--{w=0.2} It's not that kind of costume!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "So, will you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Sigh*..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") #Sad @@ -817,7 +817,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): return label lun_reaction_blacklist(item): - lun "Will that really help? With the wrackspurts I mean." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "Will that really help? With the wrackspurts, I mean." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") if "top" in item.blacklist and luna.is_worn("top"): lun "I would need to remove my top." ("open", "base", "base", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index f686b1f8..6d75958d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ label sus_reaction_unequip_fail(item): sus @ cheeks blush "I'm N--{w=0.2} not comfortable with that, [name_genie_susan]..." ("open", "happy", "sad", "right") elif item.type == "bra": - sus @ cheeks blush "P--{w=0.2} please, I can't be D--{w=0.2} doing that [name_genie_susan].." ("soft", "happy", "worried", "down") + sus @ cheeks blush "P--{w=0.2} please, I can't be D--{w=0.2} doing that, [name_genie_susan]..." ("soft", "happy", "worried", "down") elif item.type == "top": sus @ cheeks blush "I don't know if this is a good idea..." ("annoyed", "happy", "sad", "mid") @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Muggle Casual Outfit ## ########################## elif item == sus_outfit_muggle_casual1: - gen "Could you put on your normal clothing for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Could you put on your normal clothing for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "What do you--{w=0.2} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Which clothing, [name_genie_susan]?" ("soft", "happy", "raised", "mid") gen "The boring sweater one, and the jeans." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "My muggle clothing?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "How about you put on this Priestess outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "A--{w=0.2} A Priestess outfit, [name_genie_susan]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Indeed." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sus @ cheeks blush "Why would you-- I mean... Sorry but I'm a bit confused." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + sus @ cheeks blush "Why would you-- I mean... Sorry, but I'm a bit confused." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Luckily, you've got me here for guidance." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now put the dress on." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Oh--{w=0.2} Okay then..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -269,11 +269,11 @@ label sus_reaction_blacklist(item): if "panties" in item.blacklist and susan.is_worn("panties"): sus @ cheeks blush "M--{w=0.2} My panties..." ("angry", "happy", "sad", "down") - gen "Oh, right... Yeah you'd need to do something about those..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, right... Yeah, you'd need to do something about those..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "I'd have to--{w=0.4} To..." ("soft", "happy", "sad", "downR") gen "How about just giving it a try?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If you don't like it you can always change back, would that be okay?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you don't like it, you can always change back, would that be okay?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Alright..." ("base", "happy", "base", "down") sus @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 87ada0fa..35aa67ad 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ label ton_reaction_category_fail(category): if category == "upper undergarment": random: - ton "*Hmm*... You'd like that wouldn't you?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ton "If you behave maybe I'll let you take a peek later, [name_genie_tonks]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "*Hmm*... You'd like that, wouldn't you?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "If you behave, then maybe I'll let you take a peek later, [name_genie_tonks]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Patience dear..." ("grin", "wink", "raised", "mid") block: ton "These crystal orbs are yet to predict that I would ever allow you to ask such a thing..." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid") @@ -38,14 +38,14 @@ label ton_reaction_category_fail(category): ton "Perhaps... But not right now..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif category == "lower undergarment": random: - ton "You want me to put on underwear? Now that's asking a bit much don't you think?" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "You want me to put on underwear? Now that's asking a bit much, don't you think?" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Like the Scottish say, I'd rather let it feel the breeze." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Underwear? Don't make me laugh..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") ton "You'd have to do better than that if you want this kitty to come out and play..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif category == "piercings & tattoos": random: ton "I decide where such things go..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "You'd like that wouldn't you? I think I'd keep such decisions for myself thank you." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + ton "You'd like that, wouldn't you? I think I'd keep such decisions for myself, thank you." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") ton "*Hmm*... I'd be such a bad girl if I let you do that..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "What would you think of me if I let you do that?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") return @@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ label ton_reaction_touch(what): $ mouse_headpat() random: - ton "Is this what you do to our students? A bit tame don't you think?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "Is this what you do to our students? A bit tame, don't you think?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Surely this is not an appropriate method of rewarding your subordinate..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "Does this mean I'm your favourite student?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") ton "Teacher, I mean..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downR") - ton "Such a weird custom but I'll allow it..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton "Such a weird custom, but I'll allow it..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid") block: ton "How naughty... How could I ever have allowed such indecent behaviour..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Don't you dare touch my elbows next..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ label ton_reaction_touch(what): random: ton "*Mmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") ton "Trying to get put in detention are we?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ton "*Tsk*... How naughty... And with an employee no less." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "*Tsk*... How naughty... And with an employee, no less." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: ton "I don't remember this being part of the job description..." ("horny", "narrow", "shocked", "down") ton "But I'll look the other way for now..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ label ton_reaction_touch(what): $ mouse_heart() random: - ton "A gentleman usually doesn't kiss on the lips but I'll allow it..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton "A gentleman usually doesn't kiss on the lips, but I'll allow it..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Did I feel some tongue? Must've been my imagination..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") - ton "Is this one part of the extra curricular activities in my work contract?" ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "Is this one part of the extracurricular activities in my work contract?" ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "mid") ton "I didn't expect to receive a bonus today... What a nice surprise..." ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "mid") return @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ label ton_reaction_touch_fail(what): random: ton "Stop that." (face="annoyed") ton "Do you know how long it takes to model my hair like that?" (face="neutral") - ton "There's two things a man shouldn't touch, her wallet and her hair." (face="angry") + ton "There are two things a man shouldn't touch, her wallet and her hair." (face="angry") ton "Don't get any funny ideas." (face="horny") block: ton "Hey, don't do that!" (face="annoyed") @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ label ton_reaction_touch_fail(what): random: ton "That's not how a headmaster should treat their subordinates." (face="annoyed") - ton "It's inappropriate, let's keep it civil okay?" (face="annoyed") + ton "It's inappropriate, let's keep it civil, okay?" (face="annoyed") ton "Someone fancy themselves a bit of a bad boy?" (face="annoyed", mouth="base") ton "Hey, those are my fun bags... Don't be naughty." (face="annoyed", mouth="horny") ton "Hey now, someone's getting a bit ahead of themselves." (face="annoyed") @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ label ton_reaction_touch_fail(what): random: ton "You have to earn it first." (face="annoyed") - ton "If you'd like to keep these hands intact I suggest you stop it right now, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="annoyed") + ton "If you'd like to keep these hands intact, I suggest you stop it right now, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="annoyed") ton "Hey, who said you had permission to approach the chamber of secrets?" (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") ton "That place is reserved for good boys and girls..." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") ton "That forest is forbidden entry for first years... Let's get to know each other a bit better first..." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") @@ -141,8 +141,8 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_fail(item): random: ton "Not yet big boy, perhaps once this scheme of ours comes more into fruition..." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") - ton "It does look nice but you need to deserve it..." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") - ton "*Hmm*... What would you think of me if I wore this?... Later perhaps." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="raised", mouth="horny") + ton "It does look nice, but you need to deserve it..." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") + ton "*Hmm*... What would you think of me if I wore this?... Later, perhaps." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="raised", mouth="horny") return @@ -157,12 +157,12 @@ label ton_reaction_unequip(item): label ton_reaction_unequip_fail(item): - ### Bra and panties checks are not in use as Tonks doesn't mind NOT wearing underwear. + ### Bra and panties checks are not in use, as Tonks doesn't mind NOT wearing underwear. # if item.type == "panties": # ton "I'm n-not comfortable with that, sir..." # elif item.type == "bra": - # ton "P-please I don't want to.." + # ton "P-please, I don't want to..." if item.type == "top": ton "Someone's being naughty... I might have to give you a spanking for that." (face="annoyed", eyebrows="angry", mouth="grin") @@ -182,9 +182,9 @@ label ton_reaction_unequip_fail(item): random: ton "I thought patience came with old age..." ("base", "base", "raised", "R") - ton "What's the point in that? You already know what's under there don't you?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "What's the point in that? You already know what's under there, don't you?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "You could do with learning some restraint... Perhaps I need to teach you a thing or two..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ton "Eager are we? Well I can't say I blame you..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton "Eager, are we? Well, I can't say I blame you..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") return label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): @@ -197,10 +197,10 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Could you put on your regular clothing for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "You mean my Auror uniform?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Is that what it is?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well... It meets all of the requirements of an Auror uniform." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + ton "Well... It meets all the requirements of an Auror uniform." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "Of course I made my own adjustments to it..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Like not wearing underwear?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well... The ministry didn't mention any underwear requirements so..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "Well... The ministry didn't mention any underwear requirements, so..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Perverts the lot of them..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I'll just put it on then shall I." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ton "Are you asking or is this a hypothetical?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "What if I'm hypothetically asking?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well if you were then I'd probably say yes, that is a pretty crazy thing to ask." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "But you'd still do it right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But you'd still do it, right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Sure, why not..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") elif item == ton_outfit_bikini_2: gen "Do you believe what they say about stripes making you look slimmer?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Miss Tonks, have you ever experienced true freedom?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Every time I take my bra off." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Well today--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "*Err*... Well this is awkward." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... Well, this is awkward." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I got this Bikini with the US flag on it for you to wear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "A bikini? Why not body paint?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*... Maybe next time, but this will have to do for now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == ton_outfit_casual: gen "Could you put on this sexy casual outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Most certainly..." ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") - ton "These leggings are very much my style I must say." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "These leggings are very much my style, I must say." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Is it because they show off every single curve of your body?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "How did you know?" ("soft", "wide", "shocked", "mid") gen "Lucky guess..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ton "Why thank you... I usually sleep naked, but I thought I should probably not be as casual outside my office..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'd like for you to wear it inside my office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course you do..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") - ton "Well I suppose wearing it more often wont hurt." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "Well I suppose wearing it more often won't hurt." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") ################# ## Silky Dress ## @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == ton_outfit_silky: gen "I've got you one of the most splendid and luxurious outfits that I could find." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Luxurious you say?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Why yes... Made by the finest silk no less." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why yes... Made by the finest silk, no less." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Silk? Now that's--" ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid") ton "Oh, I see why you've got it..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "To spoil my favourite teacher?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -362,8 +362,8 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ################ elif item == ton_outfit_club_dress: gen "I've got this club dress for you to wear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "*Hmm*... You planning on taking me out to dance?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "These hips are meant for pushing, not dancing I'm afraid..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "*Hmm*... Are you planning on taking me out to dance?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "These hips are meant for pushing, not dancing, I'm afraid..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "No, I got you this one purely because of how sexy you'd look in it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "As if you'd get me an outfit for any other purpose..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" @@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ton "Well, you could try, but I'm sure I'll look sexy in it either way." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Is that a challenge?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmm*... Go ahead." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "But first, let's judge the sexyness factor of this one..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "But first, let's judge the sexiness factor of this one..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ##################### ## Succubus Outfit ## @@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Trust me, you'd be on the floor laughing if you had watched the cartoon." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Did the person in this cartoon also have one of their breasts exposed?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "down") gen "I wish..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "So I'll just be fullfilling some fantasy of yours then?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "So I'll just be fulfilling some fantasy of yours then?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Pretty much..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Alright then..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -425,13 +425,13 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ### Elf Outfit ## ################# elif item == ton_outfit_elf: - gen "You've been so helpful lately so I've got you an outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've been so helpful lately, so I've got you an outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That's very--" ("base", "wide", "base", "mid") ton "What's this?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "down") gen "Why, it's an elf costume of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "For santa's sexy little helper." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "*Hmm*... And you're supposed to be santa I suppose?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "Why of course... Although you're free to handle santas sack if you like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "For Santa's sexy little helper." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "*Hmm*... And you're supposed to be Snta I suppose?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + gen "Why of course... Although you're free to handle Santa's sack if you like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #################### ### Ribbon Outfit ## @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Well today I'd like you to wrap yourself up for me like a present!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "You sure you'd want that?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "But what if you've been to naughty this year for you to unwrap me?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "But what if you've been too naughty this year for you to unwrap me?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "I'll just have you unwrap yourself in that case." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmph*... That's cheating..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") @@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "Not that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The company?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "The sexy Christmas outfits!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "I should've guessed... So you've got me something like that to wear I assume?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "I should've guessed... So, you've got me something like that to wear I assume?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, put this on for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Very well..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -505,9 +505,9 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ##################### elif item == ton_outfit_wrestling_coach: gen "Could you put on this sports coach outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Sports coach? There's other sports than Quidditch?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton "Sports coach? There are other sports than Quidditch?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "...{w=0.4} Excuse me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "I'm just joking, I know there's other sports." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + ton "I'm just joking, I know there are other sports." ("base", "base", "base", "R") ton "Although I'm not that of a big fan of Gobstones and Wizard Chess myself." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "They don't have any sexy uniforms." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): #ton "Sweetie... I look good in anything I wear." #gen "You sure about that?" #ton "Nice try..." - #ton "Convincing me to wear it just so that I get to prove a point won't work one me." + #ton "Convincing me to wear it just so that I get to prove a point won't work on me." #gen "Damn." #elif item == ton_outfit_wrestling_coach: #gen "Could you put on this sports coach outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -690,12 +690,12 @@ label ton_reaction_blacklist(item): ton "I'd need to take off my top." if "bottom" in item.blacklist and tonks.is_worn("bottom"): - ton "It would be very unfashionable wearing bottom garment with that." + ton "It would be very unfashionable to wear a bottom garment with that." if "bra" in item.blacklist and tonks.is_worn("bra"): ton "My girls would definitely appreciate me letting them breathe." gen "Your tits you mean." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Now, now, don't get needy my dear headmaster." + ton "Now, now, don't get needy, my dear headmaster." if "panties" in item.blacklist and tonks.is_worn("panties"): ton "There's not a single pair of panties in the world that would fit this." diff --git a/game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy index 768bb558..8543e731 100644 --- a/game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy @@ -20,18 +20,18 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Thank you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == her_outfit_nightie: gen "I'd like to order a custom outfit today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Certainly honey... Repairing these conservative school clothes all day has been quite dull to say the least." + maf "Certainly honey... Repairing these conservative school clothes all day has been quite dull, to say the least." gen "Well, I can assure you that this outfit is not conservative." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "*Hmm*?" - gen "I'd like to order a girls Nightgown." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'd like to order a girl's Nightgown." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, that doesn't seem overly--" gen "And make it out of silk!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "*Ahh*... So I assume that you also want it transparent?" + maf "*Ahh*... So, I assume that you also want it transparent?" gen "If that is possible." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Of course it is possible, who do you take me for?" - maf "I just have to order in the materials, although silks not cheap." + maf "I just have to order in the materials, although silk is not cheap." gen "Don't worry about the cost." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "As you wish sweetie, it should be ready shortly." + maf "As you wish sweetie... It should be ready shortly." gen "Thank you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == her_outfit_ball: if not states.her.ev.yule_ball.e4_complete: @@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "I was thinking that I could have a custom one made. For a very good girl of mine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Do you sell Ball dresses?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "*Hmm*... I suppose I do although they're nothing special... Why do you ask?" - gen "A 'girl' approached me with a problem. Apparently she's unable to acquire a dress for this years autumn ball." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "How tragic.... Well I'm sure that one of these cheap ones will suffice." + maf "*Hmm*... I suppose I do, although they're nothing special... Why do you ask?" + gen "A 'girl' approached me with a problem. Apparently, she's unable to acquire a dress for this year's autumn ball." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "How tragic.... Well, I'm sure that one of these cheap ones will suffice." gen "I was thinking I could have a custom one made... She is a very good girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Very well! I'll make her the best dress this school's ever seen. If you say she's been such a good girl..." maf "It should be ready in about a week." @@ -52,17 +52,17 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "I'm ordering my next batch of material in a couple of days to keep the cost down..." maf "Or I could order it now if you pay a bit extra..." elif item == her_outfit_msmarv: - gen "Tell me Madam Mafkin, have you ever heard of superheroes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Yes yes, those people in the comic books. My grandson is quite fond of them." + gen "Tell me, Madam Mafkin... Have you ever heard of superheroes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "Yes, yes... Those people in the comic books. My grandson is quite fond of them." gen "Fantastic, I was wondering if it would be possible for you to make me a costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Certainly, who did you have in mind?" gen "Do you know Ms Marvel?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm afraid not..." - maf "But I'm sure that my grandson has a comic of hers. I'm set to visit him this tonight so I can take a look." + maf "But I'm sure that my grandson has a comic of hers. I'm set to visit him this tonight, so I can take a look." gen "Thank you very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "No need to thank me honey. Payment will suffice." elif item == her_outfit_hslut: - gen "Have you ever seen a burlesque show Madam?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Have you ever seen a burlesque show, Madam?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I've done more than that, I've designed a few of the outfits for them!" gen "Splendid, in that case I'd love to commission one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Most Certainly, any particular colour in mind?" @@ -71,32 +71,33 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Thank you very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "You're quite welcome, sir." # elif item == hg_costume_power_girl_ITEM: - # gen "I was wondering if it would be possible for you to make me a super hero costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + # gen "I was wondering if it would be possible for you to make me a superhero costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "Certainly, who did you have in mind?" # gen "Do you know Power Girl?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "I'm afraid not..." - # maf "But I'm sure that my grandson has a comic of hers. I'm set to visit him this weekend so I can take a look." + # maf "But I'm sure that my grandson has a comic of hers. I'm set to visit him this weekend, so I can take a look." # gen "Thank you very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "No need to thank me sir. Payment will suffice." elif item == her_outfit_croft: gen "Would you be able to make me a cosplay costume?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Certainly, what are you after?" - gen "Do you happen to know Lara croft?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Do you happen to know Lara Croft?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm afraid not..." gen "She's a video game character..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, my little squib grandson loves video games. I'm sure he can show me what she looks like." gen "Thank you very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "You're welcome. I'm seeing him tonight so I should be able to complete this one slightly faster than usual." + maf "You're welcome." + maf "I'll be seeing him tonight, so I should be able to complete this one slightly faster than usual." gen "Fantastic." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # elif item == hg_outfit_christmas_ITEM: # gen "I was wondering if it would be possible for you to make me a festive costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # maf "Certainly, what what holiday are you looking to \"celebrate\"?" + # maf "Certainly, what holiday are you looking to \"celebrate\"?" # gen "Christmas." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "At this time of year?" - # gen "It's never to early to start the festivities..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + # gen "It's never too early to start the festivities..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "Evidently not. I'll have it done as soon as I can. " # gen "Thank you very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # maf "You're welcome. I'll even give you a special price. Consider it my Christmas gift to you.." + # maf "You're welcome. I'll even give you a special price. Consider it my Christmas gift to you..." # gen "Thank you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # elif item == hg_outfit_pirate_ITEM: # gen "I want a pirate outfit" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -146,9 +147,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Swimming at your age?" gen "Hey, you're only as old as you feel..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And no, it's not for me... I need a woman's swimsuit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "I see, well it's about time you set up some swimming lessons..." + maf "I see... Well, it's about time you set up some swimming lessons..." maf "Are you looking for a design to fit the school colours?" - gen "No thank you, something sporty shall suffice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, thank you... Something sporty shall suffice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." maf "I'll have to look through some of those muggle magazines then..." maf "It will be ready shortly." @@ -181,9 +182,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Is that a condo--" gen "But you'd cut a heart shape here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." - gen "And a hole for the head obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And a hole for the head, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "It needs to be tight that's for sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It needs to be tight, that's for sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Naturally..." gen "Pink would look good I think!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Noted..." @@ -207,7 +208,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Yes, she's from a video game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'll have to ask my squib grandson about that one... Hopefully he knows who she is." gen "Oh, he'll know her, even if he's never played it... could even be his final fantasy." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Okay then, I shall floo him and then I'll get that outfit ready for you." + maf "Okay then, I shall floo him, and then I'll get that outfit ready for you." gen "(She'll do what to him?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Anything else?" elif item == her_outfit_witch: @@ -223,7 +224,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_latex: gen "I'd like an outfit... a latex one!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Latex?" - maf "Now you do know what kind of outfits are known to be made by latex don't you, honey?" + maf "Now you do know what kind of outfits are known to be made by latex, don't you, honey?" gen "Of course... And I'd like one of those very much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Okay then... just making sure." elif item == her_outfit_teddy: @@ -232,15 +233,15 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "It's a gift..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Is this \"gift\" for one of the teachers?" gen "I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Oh... don't tell me... Is it miss Tonks?" + maf "Oh... don't tell me... Is it for miss Tonks?" gen "It's--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "No... that'd be silly... McGonagall perhaps?" maf "No... I shouldn't pry..." maf "So, you want it in green then? It's her favourite colour." gen "Black shall do fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Black?! Is it for Professor Sn..." + maf "Black?! Is it for Professor Sn--" gen "Madam..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "My apologies... I'll get going on this as soon as possible! Can't let a lady wait can we?" + maf "My apologies... I'll get going on this as soon as possible! Can't let a lady wait, can we?" elif item == her_outfit_fishnet: gen "Could you make me a fishnet outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A fishnet... outfit, sir?" @@ -249,7 +250,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Underwear--? surely something like that wouldn't be very effective as underwear, sir?" gen "Effective enough to catch a fish..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "What?" - gen "So, could you make this for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So, could you be so kind and make this for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." maf "Of course, sir." gen "Excellent..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -264,7 +265,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Madam, I require your finest bikini!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh my, aren't you a quick one, at least buy me a dinner first." gen "...!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You got it wrong... I want to buy a custom made bikini." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You got it wrong... I want to buy a custom-made bikini." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh..." maf "Are you looking for anything specific?" gen "How about a sling bikini?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -274,7 +275,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "I'll get to it then..." elif item == her_outfit_cheerleader_1: gen "Could you make me a Gryffindor cheerleader outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "You're not showing favouritism towards Gryffindor's Quidditch team again are you, sir?" + maf "You're not showing favouritism towards Gryffindor's Quidditch team again, are you, sir?" gen "Of course not..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "*Hmm*..." gen "You have my word that there's no favouritism towards Gryffindor's team going on here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -282,10 +283,10 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_cheerleader_2: gen "Could you make me a Gryffindor cheerleader outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "You're not showing favouritism towards--" - gen "Although could you make it more like this *scribbles*." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Although could you make it more like this? *scribbles*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg" maf "Oh...{w=0.6} Oh I see..." - maf "You're not planning for this to be used during an actual Quidditch match then I assume." + maf "So, you're not planning for this to be used during an actual Quidditch match, I assume?" gen "I have no idea what you're talking about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, we all do have our fantasies..." gen "I thought this was a respectable establishment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -299,10 +300,10 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): # elif item == cho_outfit_sailor: - gen "I'd like a sailors outfit today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "A sailors outfit? We're a bit far from the sea are we not?" + gen "I'd like a sailor's outfit today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "A sailor's outfit? We're a bit far from the sea, are we not?" gen "True, I was just thinking about something in that style." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "The style of a sailors outfit and what else?" + maf "The style of a sailor's outfit and what else?" gen "Something that doesn't cover all of the hull!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Doesn't cover the hull? What do you--" maf "Oh, I see what you mean..." @@ -311,13 +312,13 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == cho_outfit_misty: gen "I'd like a cosplay outfit please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Yes?" - gen "Do you know Pokemon?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Do you know Pokémon?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Of course!" - gen "I... wait you do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I... Wait, you do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "No, I have no clue what you just said..." - gen "...{w}I'd like a Misty outfit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "...{w} I'd like a Misty outfit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A misty outfit? I'm good, but I don't think even I could make an outfit out of mist!" - gen "She's a character from Pokemon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She's a character from Pokémon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh... I see, maybe my grandson will know." gen "I'm sure he will..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == cho_outfit_j_school: @@ -347,9 +348,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Now, who on earth could this dress be for?" gen "It's a gift I'll be sending to one of the Chinese wizarding schools." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Really? Any particular reason to be sending them a dress?" - gen "Yes... *Ehm*... It's important to be on good terms with the other wizarding schools is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... *Ehm*... It's important to be on good terms with the other wizarding schools, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So what better gift than a traditional Chinese dress?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Something that they don't have already perhaps..." + maf "Something that they don't have already, perhaps..." gen "Sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Nothing... Of course I'll make it for something this important!" gen "Great!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -368,7 +369,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Just straps and some fabric to cover up the goods should do..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I see..." maf "And should I even ask who this is for?" - gen "If you'd like my continued patronage I'd prefer if you didn't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you'd like my continued patronage, I'd prefer if you didn't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I suppose the extra income does help with my retirement fund..." maf "Okay then... micro bikini coming right up..." elif item == cho_outfit_toon: @@ -382,7 +383,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Right..." gen "This is what I'm talking about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg" - maf "Oh... Oh I see..." + maf "Oh... Oh, I see..." maf "This is one of those muggle sports uniforms." maf "Why didn't you just say so?" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -395,7 +396,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "What are you-- I meant the video game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh..." gen "What were you talking about?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Nothing... So you want an outfit made from this game?" + maf "Nothing... So, you want an outfit made from this game?" gen "I... Yes, something Chun-Li inspired if you please..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Alright then, I'll ask my grandson to give me some reference material." elif item == cho_outfit_bunny: @@ -433,7 +434,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "You mean a monitor?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Sorry?" gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Once I've asked him I'll get that {i}souvlaki{/i} costume ready for you as soon as possible!" + maf "Once I've asked him, I'll get that {i}souvlaki{/i} costume ready for you as soon as possible!" gen "Takama--{w=0.4} I'm sure he'll know what you mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # @@ -443,13 +444,13 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == lun_outfit_nightie1: gen "I need a nightie." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A nightie, sir?" - gen "Yes...{w=0.4} one of the girls had theirs stolen." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Right... So what kind of nightie did she have stolen?" + gen "Yes...{w=0.4} One of the girls had theirs stolen." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "Right... So, what type of nightie was stolen from her?" gen "I believe it was loose fitting... And translucent!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Don't you mean Opaque, sir?" gen "No... Pretty sure I'm correct on this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "...{w=0.4} Alright then... I'll get started on it now then shall I?" - gen "That'd be great, I mean we can't let her sleep naked can we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "...{w=0.4} Alright then... I'll get started on it now then, shall I?" + gen "That'd be great, I mean we can't let her sleep naked, can we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." elif item == lun_outfit_nightie2: gen "Could you make me a nightie?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -485,13 +486,13 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Gotta stay in shape and all that, you know how it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Alright, so something sporty then?" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Yeah I suppose that will have to do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yeah, I suppose that will have to do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == lun_outfit_flight_attendant: gen "I need a flight attendant outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A flight attendant outfit? Is that a muggle thing?" gen "Yes, it's what the staff wears inside of a plane." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "A plain what, sir?" - gen "Yes a... Surely you must've seen a plane before?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes a... Surely, you must've seen a plane before?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." gen "Big metal thing in the sky..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh! The giant metal birds!" @@ -500,14 +501,14 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "How silly..." gen "I know right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "...{w} Anyway, you think you could make an outfit like that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "I suppose... I'll have to ask my grandson what it looks like but it shouldn't be a problem." + maf "I suppose... I'll have to ask my grandson what it looks like, but it shouldn't be a problem." gen "Excellent." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == lun_outfit_party: if not states.her.ev.yule_ball.e4_complete: #If the ball hasn't been brought up yet gen "Could you make a dress for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Certainly, what type of dress would you like?" gen "Something weird would do well I think..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Something completely out there and non modern..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Something completely out there and non-modern..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Something--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Are you trying to wind me up, sir?" gen "I'm deadly serious..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -515,7 +516,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif not states.her.ev.yule_ball.started: #If the ball has been brought up but not happened gen "One of the students needs a dress for the upcoming ball." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Weren't they required to bring an outfit at the start of the school year?" - gen "Yes, although you know how scatter-brained students can be." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, although you know how scatterbrained students can be." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "And what kind of style of dress would she like?" gen "Something eccentric and weird is what she'd normally go for, I believe..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "So this student is the kind of person that just likes to be different then?" @@ -533,7 +534,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Well I guess we're lucky the ball already happened." gen "Why is that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well... Nevermind... I'll make this for you then, shall I?" - gen "As soon as possible please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "As soon as possible, please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'll see what I can do..." gen "Good luck!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == lun_outfit_muggle: @@ -546,10 +547,10 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "If you say so..." elif item == lun_outfit_summer: gen "Could you make me something good for the summer?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "You're going to need to be more specific I'm afraid." - gen "Oh... Some shorts, and a crop top!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "You're going to need to be more specific, I'm afraid." + gen "Oh... Some shorts and a crop top!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Alright then. That shouldn't be that--" - gen "And make the crop top very tight please!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And make the crop top very tight, please!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Tight, sir?" maf "But if I do that, it won't stay down very easy." gen "Gives the puppies an easier time to breathe." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -557,7 +558,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Trust me, it's for their own good." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "... Alright then, sir... A tight crop top it is." elif item == lun_outfit_harley_quinn: - gen "I need super villain costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I need a super villain costume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Headmaster by day, villain by night is it?" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Or is it for somebody else?" @@ -581,11 +582,11 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Oh... I see... Good one!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'll get working on it as soon as possible." # gen "Could you make me a Ravenclaw Cheerleader outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # maf "You're not showing favouritism towards Ravenclaw's Quidditch team are you?" + # maf "You're not showing favouritism towards Ravenclaw's Quidditch team, are you?" # gen "I'm merely looking to see if it'd be worth to bring cheerleading to this country." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # maf "If that's the case then I want some royalties in case these designs are supposed to be wide spread." - # gen "Oh they'll be wide spread alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # maf "Great then that's settled." + # maf "If that's the case, then I want some royalties in case these designs are supposed to be widespread." + # gen "Oh they'll be widespread alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + # maf "Great, then that's settled." # gen "(Wait, what did she say?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "I'll get it done as soon as possible." # elif item == ll_lingerie_silk_ITEM: @@ -593,7 +594,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): # maf "Male or female?" # gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "Female it is..." - # maf "Well, it shouldn't take that much material so I'll have them done for you rather quickly." + # maf "Well, it shouldn't take that much material, so I'll have them done for you rather quickly." # gen "Great." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # maf "And I'll be sure to keep this transaction our little secret..." # gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -618,7 +619,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Excellent." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == ton_outfit_casual: gen "I'm looking for something casual and tight-fitting." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "That's pretty vague... could you be more specific of what you had in mind?" + maf "That's pretty vague... could you be more specific about what you had in mind?" gen "Well... it should be modern..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg" maf "Right... *scribbles*." @@ -641,7 +642,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "One see-through... nightgown coming right up." elif item == ton_outfit_bunny: gen "I need a bunny suit, something similar to what they'd wear at a casino." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Not sure what casino's you've been to but I think I know what you mean..." + maf "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Not sure what casino's you've been to, but I think I know what you mean..." gen "With big bunny ears!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Alright..." maf "If that's all, I need to go source the materials for these...{w=0.3} ears." @@ -678,9 +679,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Certainly, looking for any particular pattern?" gen "Something to show off our national heritage." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "So a Scottish flag?" - gen "What, no.. I meant the union jack." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Oh... {i}righto{/i}..." - maf "One union jack bikini-bra it is..." + gen "What, no... I meant the Union Jack." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "Oh... {i}Righto{/i}..." + maf "One Union Jack bikini-bra it is..." gen "(Scottish... As if I wouldn't know straight away that we were in Scotland...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == ton_outfit_bikini_4: gen "Could you make be a bikini-bra?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -689,11 +690,11 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Are you sure? I thought you weren't meant to put it on clothing." gen "You're not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm fairly sure I read that somewhere..." - gen "Well, I think if it's being made into something meant to contain immense greatness we could make an exception." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I think if it's being made into something meant to contain immense greatness, then we could make an exception." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm not sure what you mean, sir..." gen "Don't worry about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Okay then..." - maf "One United states of America patterned bikini-bra coming up." + maf "One United States of America patterned bikini-bra coming up." elif item == ton_outfit_swimsuit_1: gen "Got any swimsuits?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Not in stock but I could make you one." @@ -717,9 +718,9 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "Right." gen "I need a striped, translucent swimsuit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Translucent? Doesn't that defeat the purpose a bit?" - gen "Depends what the purpose is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That would depend on what the purpose is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, you'd think that you could just go to a nudist beach." - gen "You seen any around here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Have you seen any around here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Can't you just Apparate to one, sir?" gen "Do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Apparate." @@ -732,7 +733,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "So, what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Why couldn't you just--" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Never mind... What is I to question the headmaster..." + maf "Never mind... Who am I to question the headmaster..." elif item == ton_outfit_swimsuit_3: gen "I need a swimsuit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Right, any specifications?" @@ -756,19 +757,19 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Could you make me something like this? *Scribbles*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I see..." maf "Are you sure you've drawn it correctly?" - maf "There seem to be some fabric missing." + maf "There seems to be some fabric missing." gen "Positive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Okay then." - maf "One... Flintstone outfit it is." + maf "One... Flintstone outfit, it is." gen "Yabadababoob!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == ton_outfit_club_dress: - gen "Have you ever been out clubbing Miss Mafkin?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Have you ever been out clubbing, Miss Mafkin?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "By merlin no... I wouldn't dare hurt an animal." gen "Not that... Clubbing Is when you go to a club, listen to music whilst moving your arms around awkwardly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Oh... In that case yes, although it's been a while." + maf "Oh... In that case, yes, although it's been a while." maf "They used to call me the dancing queen--" - gen "Yes yes, very interesting... Loud music with no way of chatting anyone up... Love it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, yes, very interesting... Loud music with no way of chatting anyone up... Love it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." gen "You think you could provide me with something a woman might wear when going clubbing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -783,7 +784,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): gen "Something that makes the nipples part of the integral structure of the piece." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "..." maf "This is for a lady I assume?" - gen "I mean my nipples could probably cut glass when hard but yes it's for a lady..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean my nipples could probably cut glass when hard... But yes, it's for a lady." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Was that extra information necessary, sir?" gen "Is it normal or do I need to get them checked?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm not a medical expert, sir... I'm a tailor." @@ -797,15 +798,15 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == ton_outfit_lady_D: gen "Could you make me a cosplay outfit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Of course, as long as I know it." - gen "Well you should know this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, you should know this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's none other than lady Dimitrescu." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "*Hmm*... Well I can't say that I've heard of her." + maf "*Hmm*... Well, I can't say that I've heard of her." gen "She's a video game character." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "I see... In that case I'll have to ask my grandson..." + maf "I see... In that case, I'll have to ask my grandson..." gen "I'm sure if your grandson has spent any time online, he'll know who she is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "On line, sir?" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Just ask him and I'm sure he'll know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just ask him, and I'm sure he'll know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == ton_outfit_mechanic: gen "Could you make me a mechanic attire?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -819,20 +820,20 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): maf "I only wanted to say that maybe it's time to quit loafing around, our roof is leaking again." gen "Oh. Sure, I'll get Snape to fix that as soon as possible." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Do you mean Mr Filch?" - gen "(I didn't know his reputation was so low people call him filth so openly...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I didn't know his reputation was so low, people call him filth so openly...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sure, whatever." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Thank you, sir." maf "As for your outfit, it should be done in a timely fashion." gen "Sweet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == ton_outfit_office: - gen "I need a Office workers outfit, is that something you can do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I need a Office worker's outfit, is that something you can do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Certainly, sir. What kind of cut are you looking for?" gen "Cut? Am I finally getting paid for letting you set up shop here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'm referring to how you'd like the suit to be cut." gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg" - gen "Well, if you could, I'd like something like this... *scribbles*." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, if you could, I'd like something like this... *Scribbles*." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #TODO uncomment once conversion for python 3 allows it #show image Transform(Fixed("paper", "geniedrawing", fit_first=True), align=(0.5, 0.5), zoom=0.5) as drawing @@ -842,7 +843,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): #with d5 maf "I see..." - maf "Well, I suppose, with a couple adjustments... Something like that should be doable." + maf "Well, I suppose, with a couple of adjustments... Something like that should be doable." gen "Great!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "I'll have it ready for you as soon as possible." elif item == ton_outfit_pullover: @@ -859,13 +860,13 @@ label purchase_outfit(item): elif item == sus_outfit_lace1: gen "I'm looking to acquire some lingerie, do you have something like that in stock?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Not currently... Although I have some business coming up in Knockturn alley so I could procure some materials for it." + maf "Not currently... Although I have some business coming up in Knockturn alley, so I could procure some materials for it." gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Oh, it's nothing sinister I assure you sir, no need to worry." gen "So is it going to take long?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Sorry?" - gen "Will it take long to acquire these materials." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - maf "Oh, no I should have it done before you can say floo powder." + gen "Will it take long to acquire these materials?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + maf "Oh... No, I should have it done before you can say floo powder." gen "Great!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif item == sus_outfit_latex1: