From 0841d867a83003ebd12bd5a88ffff595feb7d29a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Mon, 8 May 2023 15:15:21 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- .../events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy | 46 ++--- .../inspect_her_body_tier2_hermione.rpy | 18 +- .../events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy | 63 +++--- .../favors/inspect_her_body_tier3_tonks.rpy | 78 +++---- .../characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy | 192 +++++++++--------- .../scripts/characters/cho/events/panties.rpy | 2 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy | 88 ++++---- .../events/quidditch/gryffindor_practice.rpy | 6 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy | 22 +- .../events/quidditch/hufflepuff_practice.rpy | 4 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy | 114 +++++------ .../characters/cho/events/quidditch/quiz.rpy | 42 ++-- .../cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy | 51 +++-- .../events/quidditch/slytherin_practice.rpy | 6 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/training.rpy | 14 +- .../cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy | 92 ++++----- .../cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy | 38 ++-- .../cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy | 32 +-- .../cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy | 20 +- .../luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy | 66 +++--- .../luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy | 48 ++--- .../luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 32 +-- game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy | 35 ++-- .../luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy | 30 +-- 24 files changed, 568 insertions(+), 571 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy index 9b428850..374b71be 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E1: cho @ cheeks blush "No!" ("scream", "happyCl", "angry", "mid", trans=hpunch) cho "Why are you even asking me to do such a thing?!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") #gen "Didn't you take your skirt off for me after the Hufflepuff match?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #cho "{size=-4}Well, I probably shouldn't have done that..{/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") + #cho "{size=-4}Well, I probably shouldn't have done that...{/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") #gen "Sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Have you already forgotten that I'm here to train you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And I'm very thankful for that sir, but..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E1: gen "Your strong advisor..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Your guardian angel!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I don't think taking off my clothes will be necessary for our training, [name_genie_cho]." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "I'm very disappointed I've got to say..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm very disappointed, I've got to say..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You aren't this shy about undressing in front of your team, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's entirely different!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E1: #cho "Well, we had just won the game and all that... Maybe my judgement..." ("annoyed", "closed", "worried", "R") gen "Are you one of those shy girls, Miss Chang?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No, Sir. I wouldn't say I'm shy, but..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "downR") - gen "Well then prove me you aren't, girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well then prove to me that you aren't, girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let me see it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho stays reluctant. @@ -177,11 +177,11 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E1: $ states.cho.mood += 3 cho "What?!" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") # Upset gen "(Crap!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "What I meant to say is, you're in great shape but I still see room for improvements." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What I meant to say is, you're in great shape, but I still see room for improvements." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'm impressed nonetheless!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Thank you, I guess..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "downR") - gen "None of the other girls I get to see here has such fine...{w=1.0} contours." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "None of the other girls I get to see here have such fine...{w=1.0} contours." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Other girls?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "[name_genie_cho], you aren't training anybody else in Quidditch besides me, are you?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "What? Of course not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: if states.her.status.stripping: gen "If it's not too much trouble..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course not, [name_genie_cho]." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "(I'm having a bit of a deja vu!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # In-game font doesn't support special characters. déjà vu! + gen "(I'm having a bit of a déjà vu!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # In-game font doesn't support special characters. déjà vu! else: gen "Yes please!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Whatever you say, Sir!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: play sound "sounds/08_hop_on_desk.ogg" pause 1 - "To your surprise, the athletic petite girl rather playfully climbs on top of your desk." + "To your surprise, the athletic, petite girl rather playfully climbs on top of your desk." pause .5 gen "Nice!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pause .2 @@ -442,8 +442,8 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: "\"Yes, but take off those clothes first...\"": stop music fadeout 1 cho @ cheeks blush "Yes! Thank you, Sir!" ("soft", "closed", "worried", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "Even after I've given up -- you're still believing in me!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") - gen "What?{w=0.2} *Ahem* I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho @ cheeks blush "Even after I've given up -- You're still believing in me!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") + gen "What?{w=0.2} *Ahem*...{w=0.2} I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Of course!{w=0.2} I always did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I may not like it. But this is all just part of my training..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") gen "*Uhhhh*... Sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: cho "This is just about facing my inner demons, isn't it?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Overcoming my fears..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "Failure, and embarrassment..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "(Come on Cho, you can do it!!!)" ("horny", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "(Come on, Cho... You can do it!!!)" ("horny", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*..." ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "What would you like me to do first, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Remove my bra..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: gen "Take off your clothes, [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, Sir!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Would you like me to take off my bra first?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - cho "Or pull down my panties so you can get a nice look at my lower half?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Or pull down my panties, so you can get a nice look at my lower half?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") menu: gen "First, I'd like you to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "\"Bludgers\"!" ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Why would I ever laugh at a pretty girl like you, Miss Chang?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Because they...{w} aren't as big as Hermione's..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "downR") - cho @ cheeks blush "Hers are more closer to {i}Quaffles{/i} than mine..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Hers are much closer to {i}Quaffles{/i} than mine..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "And there will always be a pair of \"Beaters\" that prefer to play with your...{w} balls." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Only two?..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "downR") gen "Don't forget to count those lucky enough to get hit by those \"bludgers\"!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: "\"Let me catch sight of that 'Snitch!'\"": play music "music/fuzzball-parade-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed - cho "Don't you mean \"Snatch,\" Sir?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Don't you mean \"Snatch\", Sir?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Potato, Potato!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Your motives were nothing but for your own perverted gains, weren't they? From the very start." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") # Annoyed gen "More or less..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "mid") call ctc - gen "See, that wasn't very hard was it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "See, that wasn't very hard, was it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "No! You're right!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "And you have a very beautiful body -- if I might add." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E2: gen "Aren't you forgetting about something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You're still naked...{w} I wouldn't go out there if I were you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Oh, yes of course!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) + cho @ cheeks blush "Oh, of course!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) call cho_walk("desk", "base") pause .5 @@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: gen "Your sexy and muscular physique is indeed a very useful asset in boosting your chance of success, yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "So, the purpose of these favours were never about me repaying you for training me? It's about me learning how to whore myself out?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Can't it be both?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I get to partake in that hot bod of yours and in return I teach you how to successfully use it on the pitch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I get to partake in that hot bod of yours and in return, I teach you how to successfully use it on the pitch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You've already seen how effective it's been. That Hufflepuffer could barely fly once the broom wasn't the only hard thing between--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I get the point." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "But what I don't get is why you didn't just tell me this was the goal from the start, I never imagined that my training would involve...{w} this!" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down") @@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: cho "Did you get any proof?" ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "What?{w} Why would I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "To blackmail her!{w} To prove that she's in on this whole \"favour trading\" business too..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "We had an eye witness, for what it's worth..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We had an eyewitness, for what it's worth..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Seriously?! Who was it?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Snape..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?! Professor Snape?" ("scream", "wide", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) @@ -834,9 +834,9 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: cho "That's too funny! I wish I could have been there!" ("smile", "base", "base", "R") gen "She was dancing on my desk, right here, butt naked!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "That sounds sooo embarrassing!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "up") - gen "As far as I know, that door isn't locked right now either..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "As far as I know... That door isn't locked right now either..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Aren't you scared that Snape might walk in on you too?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Hmm*.." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + cho "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") call hide_characters show screen blkfade @@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: cho "It's just Professor Snape, after all..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") cho "Everybody knows that he's a creep! Nobody would believe a word he says." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") - gen "So...{w} what if it's not Snape, but some other teacher that makes their way in here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So...{w} what if it's not Snape, but some other teacher who makes their way in here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Huh*?{w=0.5} Oh no!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "For a second I forgot we even had other teachers at this school!" ("open", "wide", "worried", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "What if Professor McGonagall stumbles in here while...{w} while I--" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: cho @ cheeks blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") call ctc - gen "I've got to say, once again I'm very impressed by you!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've got to say, once again... I'm very impressed by you!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Glad to hear it, [name_genie_cho]." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Catch!" ("base", "base", "base", "L") nar "Cho throws her panties onto your desk." @@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E3: gen "Well then, Miss Chang..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You may leave now.{w} Dismissed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Wait Sir!{w} I can't leave just yet!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "Wait, Sir!{w} I can't leave just yet!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "Why not? Don't tell me you want points now after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No Sir, but...{w} I don't believe we are done here..." ("mad", "base", "worried", "downR") gen "We aren't?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_fail: gen "It's not that easy, girl!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Then get on with it!" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "What's the worst that could happen?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "She could report me, and I'd get kicked out of this school most likely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She could report me, and I'd get kicked out of this school, most likely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "She's reported me to that ministry before..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The \"Ministry of Magic\"?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "If they were to regulate the school rules more strictly, my chance of winning the Quidditch cup would be back down to zero!" ("angry", "wide", "worried", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2_hermione.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2_hermione.rpy index 7e084877..05996504 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2_hermione.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2_hermione.rpy @@ -75,8 +75,8 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: her "*Humph*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "And? What else?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "And Cho's thighs are probably the most impressive ones I've seen in the last hund-- decade or more!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well in that case..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "In that case I'll give you a great opportunity to stare at them indefinitely." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "Well, in that case..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "In that case, I'll give you a great opportunity to stare at them indefinitely." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") cho "What are you talking about, Granger?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") # Hermione walks towards the desk to pick up Cho's clothing. @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: her "Don't use that tone with the headmaster..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Nobody asked you!" ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "L") her "He's the wisest wizard at our school...{w} Surely his word should be final..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "I'd use the word astute but I'll take wise..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'd use the word astute, but I'll take wise..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Why are you siding with her all of a sudden?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Good question." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Miss Granger, why don't you show Miss Chang why your body is superior to hers..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: her "Have a good night, Professor." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "See you in class Chang!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + her "See you in class, Chang!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") cho @ cheeks blush "*Tzzzz*!" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Cow..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: call bld gen "Damn!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "For somebody that does a lot of exercising, she smells really nice!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "For somebody who does a lot of exercising, she smells really nice!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Maybe I should be a bit nicer to her next time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.cho.ev.panty_thief.acquired = False @@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: gen "You do! I'd really like to hear your opinion on Miss Chang's shamelessly exposed body!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Mhmm*" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") # Self assured. her "Fine..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "\"Poor,\" I'd say..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "\"Poor\", I'd say..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "How dare you!{w=0.6} You snobby skunk!" ("scream", "narrow", "angry", "L", trans=hpunch) her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R") gen "(Is that better or worse than \"troll?\")" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Snape explained school ratings during the match. @@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: her "I do not!!!" ("open", "wide", "base", "stare") gen "Girls, we all know what really counts is how we appear on the inside." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") - cho "Oh shut up!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Oh, shut up!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "Professor, you're the one who continuously asks us to expose ourselves!" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Well yes. I also never claimed that {b}I{/b} was pretty on the inside." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You of all people should know better by now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -341,8 +341,8 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_E3_hermione_choices: cho "But I wouldn't say all hope is lost!" ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho "While your figure might be a bit repulsive to the eyes..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "I don't mind looking at those {b}huge melons{/b} of yours." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") - her "How dare you talk of them like that!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "*Heh*... melons..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "How dare you speak of them like that!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") + gen "*Heh*... Melons..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, I'd like to leave now." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") cho "Already missing your books, are you?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy index 0a1ad183..cf2fc846 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: cho "You're just like all the other teachers..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "You are one to say, you little slut!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You went through quite the effort to show the whole school your ass on that broom..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I only did that so we'd win!" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "I only did that, so we'd win!" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Keep telling yourself that, you little show-off!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Come here and hop on my desk already!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: cho "I can't really blame you, you're just a man, after all..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") cho "And I'm simply irresistible." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "That you are, you little slut!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Now hop onto my desk so I can have a good look at you." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now hop onto my desk, so I can have a good look at you." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: $ cc_strip_no_snape = True # throwaway var used only in the next event. cho @ cheeks blush "What?!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "You can't be serious!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") # angry - cho "[name_genie_cho], thanks to him we almost lost the match!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "[name_genie_cho], thanks to him, we almost lost the match!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "He gave those idiots a luck potion, remember?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "You should have thrown him out for that!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "All I care about is that he and his band of greenhorns lost the match against us..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -238,11 +238,11 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: cho "*Hmm*...?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Curly long hair, and tits as big as honeydews." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Didn't the way Miss Granger act, how she flirted with those Slytherin players, struck you as a bit odd?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You might even say... familiar?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Did you not find Miss Granger's flirtatious behaviour with the Slytherin players a bit odd?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You might even say... Familiar?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Are you suggesting that Professor Tonks..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") cho "But how?" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Magic...{w=0.8} duh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Magic...{w=0.8} Duh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How about we call her on your next visit, then you can ask her yourself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I suppose we could do that..." ("normal", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Splendid!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: menu: "\"We need a second opinion on the girl's physique.\"": ton "*Mhmm*?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "So naturally you thought of me to provide this... opinion?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "So, naturally you thought of me to provide this... opinion?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "You're quite the athletic witch yourself, are you not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'm certain there's no one better suited to judge the girl's body than yourself." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: gen "None taken..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "You don't need large breasts. Especially not if you want to have a career in Quidditch." ("open", "base", "base", "L") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") - ton "Just have a look at mine... They're bothersome to fly with even at my size..." ("soft", "base", "shocked", "down") + ton "Just have a look at mine... They're bothersome to fly with, even at my size..." ("soft", "base", "shocked", "down") stop music fadeout 1 pause .2 @@ -720,7 +720,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: with hpunch gen "{b}Balls!{/b}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_47", ypos="head") #smirk - ton "What? No I was talking about her--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) + ton "What? No, I was talking about her--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) with hpunch cho "Professor Snape?!" ("open", "wide", "raised", "L", ypos="head", flip=True) # shock sna "Oh-- now what do we have here?..." ("snape_13", ypos="head") @@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: sna "So you actually considered inviting me..." ("snape_20") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "base", "angry", "L") sna "That's surprising, considering our current bet..." ("snape_21") - sna "I must say though, I appreciate the gesture, Albus." ("snape_22") + sna "I must admit, however, that I appreciate the gesture, Albus." ("snape_22") gen "Bros before--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Quiet! Both of you!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") sna "*Tssz*..." ("snape_46") @@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: sna "As much as I'd like to watch you make a fool of yourself for us, Miss Chang, I have more important things to do." ("snape_13") gen "(More important than this?...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I merely came here to discuss a private matter with our headmaster." ("snape_24") - sna "About this... Misunderstanding that occurred during the last Quidditch game." ("snape_09") + sna "About this... misunderstanding that occurred during the last Quidditch game." ("snape_09") cho "There is nothing more to discuss." ("open", "closed", "angry", "R") cho "We won against you, fair and square, you cheat..." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "L") @@ -891,7 +891,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ cheeks heavy_blush hair horny "" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "L") cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "L") - sna "All I did was give them a vial of pumpkin juice..." ("snape_41") + sna "I merely provided them with a vial of pumpkin juice..." ("snape_41") sna "Then I told them I mixed in some liquid luck." ("snape_13") cho "What stupid kind of tactic is that?" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") sna "" ("snape_39") @@ -905,7 +905,6 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: sna "I have no idea what you're talking about..." ("snape_44") ton @ hair horny "Neither do I." ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "Sir, is this about that basketball thing again?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - #gen "Well you clearly didn't watch the outcome, did you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Even Bugs Bunny couldn't help him win. Serves you right!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "Who's Bugs Bunny?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Oh boy, let me tell you--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -954,7 +953,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: with d3 cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", xpos=190, ypos="base", flip=False) - ton "Well, that was a bit uncalled for... even for him." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R", xpos=350, ypos="base", flip=False, trans=d5) + ton "Well, that was a bit uncalled-for... even for him." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R", xpos=350, ypos="base", flip=False, trans=d5) ton "When did I step on his toes?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Maybe when you called him Snivellus--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1153,7 +1152,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: cho "Really!?" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid") # happy ton @ hair horny "Now-now, Professor. Don't make promises you can't keep..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Why haven't you shown me any of these workouts, sir?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") - gen "We'll get to it at some point I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We'll get to it at some point, I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "I sure wouldn't mind seeing you try out his techniques as well." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "No objections here!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Wicked!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -1269,7 +1268,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: ton "There... much better, don't you think?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "downR") #embarrassed - ton "Miss Chang, could you switch places with me, please." ("open", "base", "shocked", "L") + ton "Miss Chang, could you switch places with me, please?" ("open", "base", "shocked", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Ehm*... Y-Yes. Of course..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "L") # Tonks' sprite moves in front of Cho, both are facing Genie. @@ -1481,7 +1480,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "They aren't that little..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") # annoyed ton @ hair horny "No, you're right, sweetie..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") ton @ hair horny "They're just about perfect." ("horny", "narrow", "raised", "down") - ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "Now stand here so the Headmaster can see your tits." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "Now stand here, so the headmaster can see your tits." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "base", "mid") pause .2 @@ -1506,7 +1505,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("base", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") pause .8 - nar "The lust filled teacher effortlessly removes the bra of her student." + nar "The lust-filled teacher effortlessly removes the bra of her student." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "worried", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Fucking perfect {heart} aren't they, Professor?..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1532,9 +1531,9 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: if cho.is_worn("panties"): cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "L") - ton @ hair horny "Lets unveil this magnificent thing, next!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "down") + ton @ hair horny "Let's unveil this magnificent thing, next!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "down") - nar "Tonks eyes up Cho's panties and before you can blink, she undresses her completely." + nar "Tonks eyes up Cho's panties, and before you can blink, she undresses her completely." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Professor, not so fast--" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "down") pause .2 @@ -1608,12 +1607,12 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees cho_mouth_annoyed cho_eyes_open_look_at_tonks as cg with d3 - cho "...{w=0.4} Thank you I suppose." + cho "...{w=0.4} Thank you, I suppose." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_look_at_cho as cg with d3 - ton "No, really Miss Chang...{w=0.4} Have a feel of mine and I'm sure you'll notice the difference." + ton "No, really Miss Chang...{w=0.4} Have a feel of mine, and I'm sure you'll notice the difference." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees cho_eyes_open_look_at_tits cho_mouth_lip_bite as cg @@ -1666,7 +1665,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: with d3 cho "I...{w=0.4} Suppose...{w=0.4} Maybe just a little bit." - ton "No need to be modest Miss Chang... Your grip on that broom is unmatched." + ton "No need to be modest, Miss Chang... Your grip on that broom is unmatched." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees cho_mouth_smirk as cg with d3 @@ -1906,7 +1905,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_look_at_cho tonks_mouth_base as cg with d3 - ton "...{w=0.4} Miss Chang, you can't be missing out on this." + ton "...{w=0.4} Miss Chang, I urge you to take advantage of this opportunity." ton "Closing your eyes won't be an option during Quidditch." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees cho_mouth_annoyed as cg @@ -1939,7 +1938,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: with d3 cho "..." - ton "There you go, that wasn't so hard was it?" + ton "There you go...{w=0.4} That wasn't so hard was it?" #Tonks wet down legs show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_wetness cho_eyes_open_look_at_tonks cho_mouth_lip_bite as cg @@ -2080,7 +2079,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: with d3 ton "See?" - ton "Of course, even though I got what I wanted, you should finish what you started or they'll know something's up..." + ton "Of course, even though I got what I wanted, you should finish what you started, or they'll know something's up..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees cho_mouth_lip_bite as cg with d3 @@ -2566,7 +2565,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open as cg with d3 - ton "You're not going to chicken out on me now are you, Miss Chang?" + ton "You're not going to chicken out on me now, are you, Miss Chang?" show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg with d3 @@ -2621,8 +2620,8 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_eyes_open_mid cho_eyes_open_mid as cg with d3 - ton "Oh, of course sir..." - ton "Now, keep your eyes on your coach and repeat after me..." + ton "Oh, of course, sir..." + ton "Now, Miss Chang, keep your eyes on your coach and repeat after me..." show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg with d3 @@ -2808,7 +2807,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") else: gen "*Cough*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "I mean--{w=0.2} Thank you Sir..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "I mean--{w=0.2} Thank you, Sir..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") ton @ cheeks blush "*chuckles* So, this is what he has you call him... Well, nothing wrong with that..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -2835,7 +2834,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: cho @ cheeks blush "Yes..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ cheeks blush "Then that is everything I need to know." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton @ cheeks blush "Now, if that's everything... I think I'll better be off." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + ton @ cheeks blush "Now... If that's everything... I think I'll better be off." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "Oh... Okay then!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "*Ahem*... Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, professor?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -2915,7 +2914,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3: her "" ("crooked_smile", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "*Mhmm*... Last time I looked like this in front of you, you couldn't tell either." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "What?! When was that?" ("soft", "base", "worried", "L") - gen "Right after the last game, if I remember correctly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Right after the last game, if I recall correctly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Oh, that wasn't the only time, Professor." gen "It wasn't?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3_tonks.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3_tonks.rpy index f74ebde6..2867fefe 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3_tonks.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3_tonks.rpy @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks: cho "I only ever heard about this type of transfiguration ability once -- during one of Professor McGonagall's lessons..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "She seemed kind of annoyed by the fact that there are people with natural abilities to change their appearance like that." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") gen "Well, not everyone can be as naturally handsome as me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "That... Is not what I meant." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "That... is not what I meant." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "I wonder if she's the only person here who has this \"Metamorphic\" ability..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I hope so..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks: cho "Surely when you decided to tell me her secret -- you considered what could happen if I told the other students about it?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I...{w=0.2} Of course!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Don't worry, I won't tell anyone..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "Though I'd suggest to keep it a secret from Granger at all cost!" ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Though I'd suggest keeping it a secret from Granger at all cost!" ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "I'm confident she'd come up with some annoying rule to try and keep her teacher in check..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, I'm glad to know that you trust me with something like this, [name_genie_cho]." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks: if tonks.is_worn("robe") or ( tonks.is_worn("top") and tonks.is_worn("bottom") ): pass - else: #Tonks in in her underwear or naked. + else: #Tonks is in her underwear or naked. ton @ hair horny "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Who needs clothing anyway?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "But I'll give you a show if that's what you want...{heart}" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks: ton @ hair horny "Stripping's out of the question for me that's for sure..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "But I'll give you a good view at the very least...{heart}" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair horny "Well in that case we shouldn't keep him waiting, should we?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") + ton @ hair horny "Well, in that case we shouldn't keep him waiting, should we?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "After you, [name_cho_tonks]." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") stop music fadeout 1 @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks: ## Cho Strips ## label .strip_cho: - # Check their positions. If Cho stands to the right she'll get moved to the middle. + # Check their positions. If Cho stands to the right, she'll get moved to the middle. if cho_position == 2: # to the right. ton @ hair horny "Move between us, Cho." ("soft", "narrow", "shocked", "L") ton @ hair horny "That way the headmaster can see you better." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ label .spank_cho: call slap_her cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Sir!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I need to get these cushions ready for your next flight!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Spank them tender so you're more comfortable on your broom-stick!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Spank them tender, so you're more comfortable on your broom-stick!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I don't think that will be necessary." ("open", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") menu: @@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ label .spank_cho: call slap_her ton @ hair horny "Surely a bit of a spanking isn't enough for you to..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "down") - ton @ hair horny "Ask me nicely and I'll do it again, [name_cho_tonks]." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton @ hair horny "Ask me nicely, and I'll do it again, [name_cho_tonks]." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Go on, Cho... Ask your teacher to spank you." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "downR") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Please spank me again, Professor." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "R") @@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ label .spank_cho: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "R") ton @ hair horny "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "shocked", "down") - ton @ hair horny "A well behaved girl like you should be rewarded. {heart}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "raised", "L") + ton @ hair horny "A well-behaved girl like you should be rewarded. {heart}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "raised", "L") ton @ hair horny "Ten points for Ravenclaw, Miss Chang." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") $ ravenclaw += 10 cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Thank you I guess--" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "worried", "R") @@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ label .spank_cho: ## Tonks Strips ## label .strip_tonks: - # Check their positions. If Tonks stands to the right she'll get moved to the middle. + # Check their positions. If Tonks stands to the right, she'll get moved to the middle. if cho_position == 1: # middle. ton @ hair horny "Cho, would you mind if I stood between you two?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "I'd like to give the headmaster a better view of my body." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ label .strip_tonks: pause .5 ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "" ("horny", "narrow", "raised", "mid") pause .8 - nar "And then flicks it out of sigh with one swift motion." + nar "And then flicks it out of sight with one swift motion." call ctc # Remove Bra and Panties. @@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ label .spank_tonks: cho @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down") call slap_her ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "*Hngh*..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair angry "Do I have to fetch a beaters bat so you can hit it properly, Miss Chang?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "downR") + ton @ hair angry "Do I have to fetch a beaters bat, so you can hit it properly, Miss Chang?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "downR") ton @ hair angry "I thought I asked you to slap it harder!" ("scream", "narrow", "angry", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "down") call slap_her @@ -800,11 +800,11 @@ label .transformations: cho @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Something on your mind?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Actually, there is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Since your abilities are so rare... Can we be certain that you are in fact human?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Since your abilities are so rare... Can we be certain that you are, in fact, human?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Don't be silly..." ("clench", "base", "shocked", "mid") gen "You {b}are{/b} human, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course I am, Professor!" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") - ton "What else am I suppose to be?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "What else am I supposed to be?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") pass menu: @@ -823,9 +823,9 @@ label .transformations: gen "Tonks, would you mind showing us your little trick again?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course. What's it gonna be, Professor?" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "Remember I can transform into anything... or anyone." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") # suggestive + ton "Remember, I can transform into anything... Or anyone." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") # suggestive cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "*Hmm*... who do I want you to turn into... Let me think." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... Who do I want you to turn into... Let me think." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: gen "Yes, I want you to shapeshift into--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -852,7 +852,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks.doppler_E1: ton "Very well, Professor. Why don't you tell us about them?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, there's nobody better suited to do that than me, I'll have you know!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "After all, I know a lot about the Witcher just from playing the games alone!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Truth be told I skipped the first two, but they don't need to know that...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Truth be told, I skipped the first two, but they don't need to know that...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What kind of \"games\" is he talking about, Professor?" ("soft", "base", "worried", "L") # looking at Tonks. Small text ton "I haven't the foggiest..." ("mad", "base", "raised", "L") # looking back. Small text @@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks.doppler_E1: cho @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Miss Tonks, your appearance, it's almost too perfect..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You didn't find some smoking hot woman in a magazine did you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You didn't find some smoking hot woman in a magazine, did you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "We all know those are highly edited..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "So I'm smoking hot, huh?" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "You flatter me, but no... I've always looked like this." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -964,7 +964,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks.succubus_E1: ton @ hair horny "If you'd met one before, you'd know the difference between me and a succubus right away..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "They are quite relentless when it comes to sex, you know. -- Even more so than I am!" ("horny", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") cho "You have met a Succubus, Professor? But I thought they're extremely dangerous." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair horny "Oh yes! You have to be extremely careful around them..." ("soft", "base", "base", "L") + ton @ hair horny "Oh yes! You have to be extremely cautious around them..." ("soft", "base", "base", "L") gen "Don't tell me you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "Who do you think you're talking to, Professor.{w=0.5} Of course I did." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") # horny, confident cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "No way!" ("horny", "base", "base", "L") @@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_tonks.succubus_E1: ## Succubus Event 2 ## label .succubus_E2: - ton "You want me to shapeshift into a Succubus?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "You want me to shape-shift into a Succubus?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Hell yeah! I do love me some cosplay!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "It's not..." ("open", "base", "shocked", "R") @@ -1030,7 +1030,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: gen "Though I must say you're much more attractive than the last demon who visited me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "You were visited by a demon, Professor?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes... Although it was just your regular sleep paralysis demon." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... Although, it was just your regular sleep paralysis demon." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Oh..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "A rather horrifying looking one at that... Not sexy in the slightest!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1054,7 +1054,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: ton "What I do know is that they usually come off as quite erratic and spontaneous." ("soft", "narrow", "shocked", "mid") ton "In most cases you'd only encounter them if {b}they{/b} want you to..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "So summoning one would be quite difficult." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") - gen "Well... Luckily I have the ability to summon you any time I want!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well... Luckily, I have the ability to summon you any time I want!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "*Hmmm*... Be careful what you wish for, Professor..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair angry "I can be just as dangerous and seductive... {heart}" ("horny", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "mid") @@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: ton "It happened during my first year of Auror training, when I was still a complete novice." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "L") ton "We were tracked down by one during a scouting mission... Unbeknownst to us, of course." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "She tracked you down?" ("mad", "base", "raised", "L") - ton "Yes... They can sense the arousal of humans from miles away... Even further if they haven't had any relief for some time." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") + ton "Yes... They can sense the arousal of humans from miles away... Even further, if they haven't had any relief for some time." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Well, who can blame your partner with you around?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "*giggles*" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") #sound ton @ hair horny "Oh silly... She was after me, of course!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1081,14 +1081,14 @@ label .succubus_E2: ton @ hair horny "Well... My partner didn't notice her exactly... I might've wandered a bit further away from our camp than I should have..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "You know... To get some privacy." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "She must've taken some great caution to be able to sneak up on me, but after a while of... *Ehm*..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "L") - ton @ hair horny "After some time I noticed her movements among the bushes." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair horny "Once I noticed her presence there was no doubt in my mind why she had snuck up on me..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton @ hair horny "After some time, I noticed her movements among the bushes." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton @ hair horny "Once I noticed her presence, there was no doubt in my mind why she had sneaked up on me..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Let me guess... She was--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "She was going full force, pleasuring herself... Not even noticing that I had stopped and spotted her!" ("grin", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Stopped what?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Shush, Miss Chang... Don't interrupt the story!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "Of course I had to be a hundred percent sure what creature she was, so I went to take out my wand to make some light, but..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") - ton @ hair angry "Before I knew it she had flown right up next to me, grabbing my wrists." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ton @ hair angry "Before I knew it, she had flown right up next to me, grabbing my wrists." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "And then you used your auror training to fight her!" ("grin", "narrow", "angry", "L") play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" ton @ hair horny "*Giggles*...{w=0.4} No, we made out instead." ("horny", "narrow", "raised", "L") #sound @@ -1110,7 +1110,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: "\"What do you say, Miss Chang?\"": cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "With m-me?" ("clench", "wide", "raised", "mid") - ton @ hair horny "No, silly... Well not today at least. {heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") + ton @ hair horny "No, silly... Well, not today at least. {heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "down") # blushing # Tonks shows her tongue. @@ -1126,7 +1126,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: ton @ hair horny "... shee!" ("open_wide_tongue2", "narrow", "angry", "down") # Tongue all the way out. cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "By Merlin's beard!" ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "L") #blush gen "Nice..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Although with a succubus I highly doubt there was just kissing going on..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Although with a succubus, I highly doubt there was just kissing going on..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "*Hmm*... Yesh, thaht little devil..." ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ton @ hair horny "She was very quick to lock my head in place between her thighs, and then impaled herself on my tongue." ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "raised", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Rode my tongue for a good hour, that freak..." ("horny", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -1136,11 +1136,11 @@ label .succubus_E2: #ton "Oh, sweetie... My dick could be longer than your dick..." #cho "What?!" #ton "Not that I have one currently..." - #ton "But I could make it as long as I want!" - #cho "..." #looking at floor + #ton "But I could make it as long as I wanted!" + #cho "..." #looking at the floor #gen "What else? Does it vibrate too? How are you even supposed to compete with that?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "*giggles*" #sound - #ton "I haven't tried that actually... That's not a bad idea." + #ton "I haven't tried that, actually... That's not a bad idea." #cho "" #blush #gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "Don't you worry professor... There's always the need for that masculine touch..." @@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ label .succubus_E2: ton @ cheeks heavy_blush hair horny "Winning that cup won't feel as good as having my tongue inside you, Miss Chang... I can promise you that much." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") #Pout #blush ton @ hair horny "Well then... I hope you two liked my little story. {heart}" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair horny "And my new outfit of course..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "down") + ton @ hair horny "And my new outfit, of course..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "down") # Unlock outfit message. Should only appear once. if not ton_outfit_succubus.unlocked: @@ -1195,10 +1195,10 @@ label .hermione_E1: ton "Seems to me like she's a bit of a favourite, isn't she?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "What can I say, she's got the best tits in the house!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Hey! That's not true!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "It isn't? Then who's tits are better, Miss Chang?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It isn't? Then whose tits are better, Miss Chang?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Do tell me, I'd love to know!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Just forget I said anything..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") - ton "Well, I for one am not going to disagree with you, Professor." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "Well... I, for one, am not going to disagree with you, Professor." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Miss Granger's tits are quite nice indeed..." ("horny", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "up") ton "I mean we could do something else if you'd like, Miss--" ("open", "base", "base", "L") @@ -1229,15 +1229,15 @@ label .hermione_E1: play music "music/Under-the-Radar by PhobyAk.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed her "Well then, here she is..." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "Feel free to touch me, Cho." ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") - her "Unlike Hermione I won't bite you... Probably. {heart}" ("smile", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") + her "Unlike Hermione, I won't bite you... Probably. {heart}" ("smile", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "down") # blush her "I simply love getting groped..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "up") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "L") gen "That reminds me... Let's talk about how well you did during the last quidditch match..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You did quite a good job pretending to be Hermione." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Wouldn't you say she did a good job commentating, Miss Chang?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well I wouldn't know since I was more focused on playing, Sir..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But from what I could gather you did quite well, *uhm*... Professor." ("silly", "narrow", "worried", "L") + cho @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well, I wouldn't know since I was more focused on playing, Sir..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But from what I could gather, you did quite well, *uhm*... Professor." ("silly", "narrow", "worried", "L") gen "Yes... She put so much effort into it... you must have been completely exhausted by the end..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "worried", "L") her @ cheeks blush "... {heart}" ("base", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") # blushing @@ -1255,10 +1255,10 @@ label .hermione_E1: hide screen blkfade with d5 - gen "You have to Stay completely focused when you're tasked with commentating on everything that's happening." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You have to stay completely focused when you're tasked with commentating on everything that's happening." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Surely commentating doesn't even come close to the amount of focus you need to spot the snitch..." ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "Or how would Granger be able to do it?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Depends how easily you get distracted, I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Depends on how easily you get distracted, I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Would you say that you're easily distracted... Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Mmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare_soft") gen "Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1295,7 +1295,7 @@ label .hermione_E1: pause 1 her "*Hmm?*... Not even a peek?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") her @ cheeks blush "Don't you want to see what Hermione looks like when--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} She masturbates?" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "Are you sure you... *Ah*...{w=0.4} Want to miss this?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Are you sure you--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} want to miss this?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "..." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "down") #glances at her her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} That's it, Cho..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") her "I knew you couldn't resist..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "up") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy index 63c1cfa6..2c141ab9 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy @@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: cho "A blowjob?!!" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "And some hand action as well of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, I didn't think it'd come to this... I already showed you my naked body and everything..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "There are other tactics you could use that aren't just about showing off your body in public you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "There are other tactics you could use that aren't just about showing off your body in public, you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, yeah? Like what?" ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "Your dream is to become a professional is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I... yes... I suppose it is." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + gen "Your dream is to become a professional, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "I... Yes... I suppose it is." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Then we should do our best to prepare you for what's out there!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") label .introspection: @@ -74,12 +74,12 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: cho "And a blowjob is necessary for this?" ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") if cc_pr_spy_girls.is_event_complete(3, 1): - gen "You've seen the girls on the Gryffindor team... you think they would hesitate with something as simple as a blowjob?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've seen the girls on the Gryffindor team... You think they would hesitate with something as simple as a blowjob?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "down") #Pout gen "I see how it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I sure didn't think a simple blowjob would dissuade you from pursuing your dreams." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "Well... I can tell you this much. A woman looking to make it professionally should have enough confidence not to get stopped by something as simple as a blowjob." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I can tell you this much... A woman looking to make it professionally should have enough confidence not to get stopped by something as simple as a blowjob." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "downR") # angry cho @ cheeks blush "Alright, I'll do it..." ("open", "happyCl", "angry", "downR") @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: cho "By Merlin's beard!" #Wide eyed looking at dick #open mouth gen "Something wrong?" $ camera.set_image("mid_surprised") - cho "N-No...{w=0.4} It's just...{w=0.4} this close...{w=0.4} it's so much larger than--" #Looking at dick + cho "N-No...{w=0.4} It's just...{w=0.4} This close...{w=0.4} It's so much larger than--" #Looking at dick gen "Good, then stop staring and put your hand on it..." $ camera.set_image("mid_surprised_blush") cho "Okay..." #Blush #Normal mouth @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: call ctc - gen "Yes, that's it...{w=0.4} stroke that cock you little Ravenclaw slut..." + gen "Yes, that's it...{w=0.4} Stroke that cock, you little Ravenclaw slut..." $ camera.set_image("up_annoyed") @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: cho "Can't I just keep jerking you off?" gen "You agreed to a blowjob did you not?" $ camera.set_image("mid_worried") - cho "I...{w=0.4} well that was before you showed me your..." #Looks back down + cho "I...{w=0.4} Well, that was before you showed me your..." #Looks back down $ camera.set_image("away_blush") cho "How is this even..." #Cuts to dialog Menu choice else: # Alternate intro if first event has failed @@ -225,13 +225,13 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: $ camera.set_imagepath("cho_bj/hj/") $ camera.set_image("mid_annoyed") cho "..." #annoyed - gen "There you go... much easier the second time, isn't it?" + gen "There you go... Much easier the second time, isn't it?" gen "Now, get those muscles moving..." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid") call ctc - gen "That's it... you keep stroking, slut..." + gen "That's it... You keep stroking, slut..." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid annoyed") cho "*Hmph*..." #Annoyed @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_intro_E1: $ camera.set_image("up_shock") cho "Already?" - gen "No, tomorrow... yes of course now!" + gen "No, tomorrow... Yes, of course now!" $ camera.set_image("mid_worried") cho "Can't I just keep jerking you off?" #pout gen "This again..." @@ -272,13 +272,13 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: $ camera.set_image("up_worried") cho "[name_genie_cho]!" #shocked - gen "It's time to push those limits [name_cho_genie]... we've been over this." + gen "It's time to push those limits [name_cho_genie]... We've been over this." gen "Open up..." $ camera.set_imagepath("cho_bj/kneel/") $ camera.set_image("mid_annoyed") - cho "But... it's... how is it even going to fit?!" + cho "But... it's... How is it even going to fit?!" $ camera.set_image("mid") gen "It will fit... You're the most flexible girl in the castle." gen "If anyone could do it, it's you..." @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: $ camera.set_imagepath("cho_bj/hj/") $ camera.set_image("up_worried") #Cho puts her hand back on - gen "Good... now put your lips around the tip..." + gen "Good... Now put your lips around the tip..." $ camera.set_image("away_blush") cho "Oh-okay..." @@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: cho "He-here I go..." #Cho opens her mouth and moves in towards genies cock #Genie cock twitches - #She moves in closer and closes her eyes with her mouth wide open and just as she barely touches it she jumps back + #She moves in closer and closes her eyes with her mouth wide open and just as she barely touches it, she jumps back $ camera.set_image("cho_bj lick fail") pause 1 # Pauses at last frame. cho "No, I can't... I can't do it!" @@ -335,11 +335,11 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: #Cuts to Office and Cho walks quickly out of the room call cho_walk(action="leave") - gen "(Damn...{w=0.4} Am I that type of coach that keep pushing their pupils too hard?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Damn...{w=0.4} Am I that type of coach that keeps pushing their pupils too hard?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Speaking of hard, this thing isn't going to go away by itself...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Well... if there's anything I got good at in that lamp...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant == "failed": - gen "(Perhaps I should go a bit more easy on her next time...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Perhaps I should go a bit easier on her next time...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ cc_pf_blowjob.fail() $ states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant = "failed" @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: jump end_cho_event "-Take it slow...-": #Cho strokes and licks genie then goes back to stroking until climax - gen "Okay... just keep stroking it for now..." + gen "Okay... Just keep stroking it for now..." if states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant == None: $ camera.set_imagepath("cho_bj/hj/") @@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: call ctc - gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} That's it... you're finally getting the hang of this." + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} That's it... You're finally getting the hang of this." gen "You should've told me Quidditch players were this good at handjobs sooner." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj up blush") @@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: call ctc - gen "And... look at you... stroking your coach's cock..." + gen "And... Look at you... Stroking your coach's cock..." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid blush") @@ -420,16 +420,16 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: $ camera.set_image("cho_bj lick start") pause .7 $ camera.set_image("cho_bj lick") - cho "*lick-slurp-lick*" + cho "*Lick-slurp-lick*" call ctc - gen "*Ah*... Good job [name_cho_genie]." + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.5} Good job [name_cho_genie]." gen "I suppose that will be enough for n--" $ camera.set_image("up_annoyed", trans=d3) cho "No! I want--" $ camera.set_image("away_blush") - cho "I mean... {w=0.5} you deserve your reward [name_genie_cho]." + cho "I mean...{w=0.5} You deserve your reward, [name_genie_cho]." cho "At least let me finish you off with my hand..." $ camera.set_image("mid_blush") gen "That's what I wanted to hear [name_cho_genie], you're learning..." @@ -439,12 +439,12 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: call ctc - gen "*Hmm*... That's it, grip it firmly just like that..." + gen "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} That's it, grip it firmly just like that..." call ctc - gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Not bad... Not bad at all..." - gen "Now... a little bit faster [name_cho_genie]..." + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Not bad...{w=0.4} Not bad at all..." + gen "Now... A little bit faster, [name_cho_genie]..." gen "I think you too deserve a reward..." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid blush fast") @@ -452,9 +452,9 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: cho "Okay..." #Blush $ camera.set_image("cho_hj up blush") - cho "[name_genie_cho]... Will you tell me when--" + cho "[name_genie_cho]...{w=0.4} Will you tell me when--" gen "Faster [name_cho_genie]!" - cho "Oh... of course!" + cho "Oh...{w=0.4} Of course!" $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid blush fast") call ctc @@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: call ctc - gen "Get ready for your reward [name_cho_genie]!" + gen "Get ready for your reward, [name_cho_genie]!" menu: "-Cum on her face-": $ camera.set(zoom=0.45, pos=(150, 70), t=2.0) @@ -484,8 +484,8 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: call ctc gen "*Ah*..." - cho "Are...{w=0.5} are you done?" - gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} yes, you can open your eyes now..." + cho "Are...{w=0.5} Are you done?" + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes, you can open your eyes now..." $ camera.set_image("cum_eye") @@ -577,9 +577,9 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: gen "*Ah*..." cho "..." # Wide eyed - cho "M-{w=0.3}my face!" #Angry + cho "M--{w=0.3} My face!" #Angry cho "You just came on my face!" - gen "*Ahh* At last..." + gen "*Ahh*... At last..." $ camera.set_image("cum_face_tits_glance", trans=d3) @@ -599,9 +599,9 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: gen "Also, You've got a little something right there..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Very funny [name_genie_cho]..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", trans=d3) gen "Your confidence is showing itself more and more every day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.5} You deserved it [name_genie_cho]...{w=0.5} for helping me this far..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.5} You deserved it [name_genie_cho]...{w=0.5} For helping me this far..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "For teaching me... all this stuff..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") #Blush - gen "(I'm a bloody saint I've waited that long...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I'm a bloody saint, I've waited that long...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You're very welcome." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "That...{w=0.4} was...{w=0.4} amazing!" @@ -614,13 +614,14 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: cho @ cheeks blush "Is this what you do to Hermione as well?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") - if states.her.status.gokkun: + if states.her.status.blowjob: gen "Maybe." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I knew it..." ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "Miss Granger knows how to properly dispose--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "{size=+7}She swallows?!?{/size}" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "I mean..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "downR") - cho @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}Of course she does...{/size}" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") + if states.her.status.gokkun: + gen "Miss Granger knows how to properly dispose--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho @ cheeks blush "{size=+7}She swallows?!?{/size}" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "I mean..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}Of course she does...{/size}" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") else: gen "Of course not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I knew--" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -635,7 +636,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_1: gen "Yes, for now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if game.daytime: - cho "Alright... In that case I better head back to class." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + cho "Alright... In that case, I better head back to class." ("open", "base", "base", "R") else: cho "Alright... I'll head off to bed then." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Until next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -701,14 +702,14 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call ctc - gen "That's it... stroke your coach's cock..." - gen "Good...{w=0.5} back and forth...{w=0.5} just like I taught you..." + gen "That's it... Stroke your coach's cock..." + gen "Good...{w=0.5} Back and forth...{w=0.5} just like I taught you..." $ camera.set_image("cho_hj mid blush") cho "(He's so big...)" #Blushes - gen "Very good... Now take that shirt off for me will you..." + gen "Very good... Now take that shirt off for me, will you..." $ camera.set_image("away_blush") @@ -739,7 +740,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: cho "(I can already taste the victory!)" - gen "You're being awfully quiet [name_cho_genie]... it's very unlike you..." + gen "You're being awfully quiet [name_cho_genie]... It's very unlike you..." $ camera.set_image("topless_away_blush") @@ -765,7 +766,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("cho_hj topless mid smile") - gen "*Ah*... yes of course... It's nothing really." + gen "*Ah*... Yes, of course... It's nothing really." call ctc @@ -780,7 +781,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("cho_hj topless mid smile fast") - gen "(*Argh*.. At this rate she'll make me bust!)" + gen "(*Argh*...{w=0.4} At this rate, she'll make me bust!)" call ctc @@ -821,7 +822,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("topless_up") cho "How...{w=0.4} how was that [name_genie_cho]?" - gen "Good start, but you shouldn't close your eyes... And keep going until you find your limit, then hold it there for a bit..." + gen "Good start, but you shouldn't close your eyes...{w=0.4} And you should keep going until you find your limit, then hold it there for a bit..." gen "The further down the better..." $ camera.set_image("topless_mid") @@ -850,7 +851,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: #Cho goes in again with her eyes open this time, her mouth spreading open as it slowly goes over the tip." #As her mouth continues past the tip she stops and looks up at genie for some approval but he stays silent, her eyes closes slightly as she resumes by slowly going down further - gen "*Ah*... That's it...{w=0.5} Keep going, [name_cho_genie]!" #This line should auto play as she goes further down + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.5} That's it...{w=0.5} Keep going, [name_cho_genie]!" #This line should auto play as she goes further down #As she continues further down, her pupils move up a bit more until she hits her gag reflex (slow zoom in effect) #Quickly retracting she moves her head back and her eyes open again (Loop going backwards fast if animated, zoom effect quickly goes back to normal) @@ -877,8 +878,8 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("topless_away_blush") - cho "Oh... Yes, I thought it might've been..." - gen "(This girl is like a on and off switch...)" + cho "Oh...{w=0.5} Yes, I thought it might've been..." + gen "(This girl is like an on and off switch...)" gen "In any case... I think you got it..." gen "So... Let's get that head bobbing, [name_cho_genie]!" @@ -886,7 +887,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: #Cho looks back down at dick cho "Are...{w=0.4} are you going to cum on me again [name_genie_cho]?" - gen "I wouldn't worry about that yet... just focus on your task..." + gen "I wouldn't worry about that yet... Just focus on your task..." $ camera.set_image("topless_mid") @@ -907,13 +908,13 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call ctc - gen "That's more like it... work that tongue..." + gen "That's more like it... Work that tongue..." # Cho looks up $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck medium up") call ctc - gen "Fuck yes... you naughty girl..." + gen "Fuck yes... You naughty girl..." #Cho pulls out and starts jerking genie off slowly $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck closed exit") @@ -935,7 +936,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call ctc - cho "(*huh*... This is just like quidditch, all I have to do is find a good tactic against him. {heart})" #looks up at genie still licking + cho "(*Huh*...{w=0.5} This is just like Quidditch, all I have to do is find a good tactic against him. {heart})" #looks up at genie still licking cho "(Guess he's not immune to his own tricks... {heart})" $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick exit") @@ -958,14 +959,14 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call ctc - gen "You--{w=0.4} you're a fast learner [name_cho_genie]..." + gen "You--{w=0.4} You're a fast learner, [name_cho_genie]..." $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck deep") #Faster Blowjob cho "{heart}{heart}{heart}" - gen "[name_cho_genie], if you do that-- oh fuck!" + gen "[name_cho_genie], if you do that--{w=0.2} Oh fuck!" menu: "-Warn her-": @@ -1041,7 +1042,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call cho_chibi("stand", "door", flip=True) hide cho_main with d5 - gen "At least let m--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "At least let me--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call cho_walk(action="leave") play sound "sounds/door_down.ogg" @@ -1085,7 +1086,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: #Cho stops for a second to consider and then starts going again call ctc - gen "*ah* That's it [name_cho_genie]!" + gen "*Ngh*--{w=0.2} That's it [name_cho_genie]!" $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck closed") @@ -1112,14 +1113,14 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("topless_mid_surprised_cum_mouth") #Cho opens her mouth and lets the cum dribble out - cho "*sho*...{w=0.4} *sho mush*...." + cho "*Sho*...{w=0.4} *Sho mush*...." $ camera.set_image("topless_away_blush_cum_mouth") cho "(Although...{w=0.4} it doesn't taste as bad as I--)" gen "Nicely done [name_cho_genie], I knew you'd have it in you!" - # Make her lisp the name, if the name is unsupported fallback and replace 's' occurences with 'sh' + # Make her lisp the name, if the name is unsupported fallback and replace 's' occurrences with 'sh' $ _replacement_names = { "master": "mashter", "daddy": "dhadhy", @@ -1132,13 +1133,13 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set_image("topless_up_cum_mouth") - cho "*phank you, [_name]*" + cho "*Phank you, [_name]*" gen "Didn't your parents teach you to not speak with your mouth full?" $ camera.set_image("topless_away_blush_cum_mouth") cho "............" - gen "Now, get on your feet so I can have a look at you..." + gen "Now, get on your feet, so I can have a look at you..." # Set cum on doll and strip her $ cho.set_cum(face="light") @@ -1150,7 +1151,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: # TODO: Add Cho doll flip when at door etc, cum layers #Cho has no shirt, cum on her face and down her tits - gen "Well, will you look at that... You look great with a fresh coat of paint!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, will you look at that...{w=0.4} You look great with a fresh coat of paint!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Did you have to cum this much..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", trans=d3) gen "I can't exactly control it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If you don't swallow, you'll have to deal with the mess." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1159,8 +1160,8 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: gen "In any case, you've excelled today [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I think I need to lie down for a bit..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "This was exhausting...{w=0.4} Even for me." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - if states.her.status.kissing: - cho "I don't know how Granger could do this for so long." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + if states.her.status.blowjob: + cho "I don't know how Granger could do this, without getting exhausted." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "(*Heh*, practice makes perfect...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if game.daytime: @@ -1211,7 +1212,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: #Cho's eyes goes wide and pulls out cho "But [name_genie_cho]--" #Big text - gen "*argh*! Get back there at once or forget about your stupid quidditch cup!" + gen "*Aargh*! Get back there at once, or forget about your stupid Quidditch cup!" $ camera.set_image("topless_away_pout") @@ -1229,11 +1230,11 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: call ctc - gen "Get ready, I'm almost..." + gen "Get ready, I'm almost--" $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck medium") - cho "*mhmhm*?!-- (Now?!--)" + cho "*Mhmhm*?!-- (Now?!--)" gen "{size=+4}*ARGH*!{/size}" @@ -1266,14 +1267,14 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: gen "Now this is the kind of initiative I'm talking about!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", trans=d3) #blank stare gen "[name_cho_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Yes...{w=0.5} sorry...{w=0.5} thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("angry", "base", "base", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "Yes...{w=0.5} Sorry...{w=0.5} Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("angry", "base", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "Is that all?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") if game.daytime: gen "That will be all for today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "That will be all for tonight..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Okay, good..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - #Cho walks out of door still without shirt on + #Cho walks out the door, still without shirt on call cho_walk(action="leave") gen "[name_cho_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #Cho comes back through the door @@ -1317,13 +1318,13 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: $ camera.set(zoom=0.45, pos=(150, 70), t=1.0) - gen "*Ahhh* I needed that..." + gen "*Ahhh*... I needed that..." $ camera.set_imagepath("cho_bj/kneel/") $ camera.set_image("topless_mid_cough_cum_swallow") cho "*Cough*-*Cough*-...*Ah*...{w=0.4}*Ah*..." - gen "That was awesome... great job--" + gen "That was awesome... Great job--" $ camera.set_image("topless_up_angry_cum_swallow") @@ -1346,7 +1347,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: with d5 cho "For a first blowjob?! It is not!" - gen "I mean...{w=0.4} wait did you say first... does that mean you still want to do--" + gen "I mean...{w=0.4} Wait did you say first... Does that mean you still want to--" $ cho.wear("all") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound2.ogg" cho "I can't believe you..." @@ -1357,7 +1358,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: #Cut to office screen #Cho has put on her top gen "As I said, it's kind of expected from the whole blowjob thing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "You...{w=0.4} you're joking right?" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid", trans=d3) + cho @ cheeks blush "You...{w=0.4} You're joking, right?" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid", trans=d3) gen "Deadly serious..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Unless I fancy covering your face that is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Unless you--" ("soft", "wide", "angry", "mid") #disgust @@ -1370,7 +1371,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: gen "You're dismissed [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Good!" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") call cho_walk("door", "base") - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "{size=-4}Seriously... just ask first...{/size}" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "down", flip=True, trans=d3) #Small text #Pout #Blush + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "{size=-4}Seriously... Just ask first...{/size}" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "down", flip=True, trans=d3) #Small text #Pout #Blush call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -1379,7 +1380,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2: label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: gen "Let's see what that mouth can do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "You want to...{w=0.4} use my mouth again [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") - cho @ cheeks blush "I guess I could..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") #Blush #Horny + cho @ cheeks blush "I suppose I could..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") #Blush #Horny if states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant == "points": gen "And this time I won't make the mistake of offering house points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1388,7 +1389,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: gen "For you to push your limits on your own..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "So you want me to..." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") elif states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant == "taste": - gen "And if you don't want those clothes dirty you better swallow this time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And if you don't want those clothes dirty, you better swallow this time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "downR") #blush elif states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant == "swallow": cho @ cheeks blush "You expect me to swallow again?" ("open", "base", "base", "downR") @@ -1437,7 +1438,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: #Cho moves up closer cho "..." - cho "Your--... your cock is so big [name_genie_cho]!" + cho "Your--{w=0.4} Your cock is so big [name_genie_cho]!" gen "That's it [name_cho_genie], keep talking just like that..." gen "Put your hand on it and tell me how it feels..." @@ -1473,7 +1474,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: $ camera.set_image("cho_hj topless up blush") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]... it's my pleasure. {heart}" #Worried #Looks at dick + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]... It's my pleasure. {heart}" #Worried #Looks at dick $ camera.set_image("cho_hj topless mid smile fast") @@ -1503,7 +1504,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: cho "The look of pleasure on your face once you cum in my mouth..." if states.cho.ev.suck_it.variant in ("swallow", "throat"): - cho "The sensation of your jizz going down my throat is so..." #Looks at dick + cho "The sensation of your jizz going down my throat, is so..." #Looks at dick $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick success") pause 1 @@ -1528,7 +1529,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: "delicious! {heart}{heart}" - gen "(If she keeps going like this, I'll blow before an actual blowjob...)" + gen "(If she keeps going like this, I'll blow before the actual blowjob...)" $ camera.set_image("topless_up_blush2") @@ -1543,7 +1544,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: $ camera.set_image("topless_up_blush2") cho "[name_genie_cho]?" - gen "Tell me how badly you want-- no, how badly you {i}need{/i} cock in your mouth." + gen "Tell me how badly you want--{w=0.2} No, how badly you {i}need{/i} cock in your mouth." $ camera.set_image("topless_up_cringe") @@ -1560,7 +1561,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: $ camera.set_image("topless_mid_dreamy") - cho "(*Ah* {heart}{heart}{heart})" + cho "(*Ah*{heart}{heart}{heart})" gen "Well then?" $ camera.set_image("topless_up_wide") @@ -1578,7 +1579,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: $ camera.set_image("topless_up_blush2") - cho "I need your cock in my mouth...{w=0.2} and I need to feel your cum going down my throat..." + cho "I need your cock in my mouth...{w=0.2} And I need to feel your cum going down my throat..." gen "(She sure is a quick learner...)" gen "That's it [name_cho_genie]... Now work that mouth of yours for your reward..." @@ -1627,7 +1628,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: call ctc - gen "That's it [name_cho_genie], get ready for your reward." + gen "That's it [name_cho_genie], get ready for your reward!" $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless suck medium") @@ -1657,7 +1658,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: gen "Don't swallow yet!" cho "*Mfff*..." #Mouth full - gen "Good... Now play with it with your tongue." + gen "Good...{w=0.4} Now play with it with your tongue." $ camera.set_image("topless_mid_full_worried") cho "....{w}......{w}....." @@ -1673,7 +1674,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: $ camera.set_image("topless_mid_full_swallowed") gen "I hope you liked your reward." - gen "Now... On your feet, [name_cho_genie]." + gen "On your feet, [name_cho_genie]." $ camera.set(zoom=1.0, pos=(300, 400), t=5.0, pause=True) @@ -1700,7 +1701,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: gen "You can stop talking dirty now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I wasn't--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") #blush, looking right cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes, [name_genie_cho]..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "So... Is that all?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "So...{w=0.4} Is that all?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "For now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Okay then..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1710,27 +1711,28 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E3: with fade if game.daytime: - cho @ cheeks blush "In that case I'll head back to class." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "In that case, I'll head back to class." ("open", "base", "base", "R") else: cho "I'll head back to my dorms then..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Of course...{w=0.4} you better be ready for next time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Next...{w=0.4} yes [name_genie_cho]..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "Next...{w=0.4} Yes [name_genie_cho]..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") call cho_walk("door", "base") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "(He's so commanding...)" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "R", flip=True, trans=d3) # horny - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "(No wonder Hermione enjoys it so much...)" ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid") + if states.her.status.blowjob: + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "(No wonder why Hermione is doing this...)" ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "[name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call cho_chibi("stand", "door", "base", flip=False) cho "" (flip=False, trans=d5) - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes... sorry!" ("mad", "base", "base", "L") #Heavy Blush + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes... Sorry!" ("mad", "base", "base", "L") #Heavy Blush cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Bye then!" ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") #Heavy Blush call cho_walk(action="leave") pause 1 - gen "Turns out I'm a better coach than I gave myself credit for." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Time for the next step!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Turns out I'm a better coach than I gave myself credit for.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Time for the next step!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump end_cc_pf_blowjob diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/panties.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/panties.rpy index 4fea009b..436c1096 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/panties.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/panties.rpy @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label cho_panties_response_T2: play music "music/fuzzball-parade-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed cho "Hello, [name_genie_cho]." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base") - gen "Sup..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_cho_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Uhm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "I forgot to take my underwear with me the last time I was here." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "downR") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy index 6f91b417..890051b6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ label start_gryffindor_match: cho "Time, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "It's Game Time! Get your Hanes on, lace up your Nike's, grab your Wheaties and your Gatorade, and we'll pick up a Big Mac on the way to the ballpark." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What are you on about?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "The big game of course!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The big game, of course!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "The--{w=0.4} Are you talking about the Quidditch Finals?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "You got it." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Time to put your game face on, [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: else: gen "(Alright then, time to get up and moving.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Today is going to be a good day, I can feel it in those old bones!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Seeing Cho on that broom again, and wiping the smirk of Snape's smug face when she stomps those--)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Seeing Cho on that broom again, and wiping the smirk off Snape's smug face when she stomps those--)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") stop music fadeout 1 @@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: #microphone feedback play sound "sounds/microphone_feedback.ogg" gen "Ladies and gentlemen!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} One moment please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} One moment, please." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #Genie turns back to Tonks call gen_chibi("stand", 280, 400, flip=False) @@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: $ renpy.music.set_pause(False, channel="background") $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, delay=1.0, channel="background") - gen "Don't listen to them boy. Just get out there and show who's boss, boss man!" ("base") + gen "Don't listen to them, boy. Just get out there and show who's boss, boss man!" ("base") her "..." ("disgust", "happy", "worried", "mid") gen "And now... Last but not least, who else but the Potter boy!" ("base") @@ -813,11 +813,11 @@ label gryffindor_match: nar "Hermione gritting her teeth holds back her anger, and eventually resumes commentating the game." #Shifts to screen of Cho Doll flying in the air - nar "Cho is being chased by Katie, but not for long as Angelina's attention turns to them." + nar "Cho is being chased by Katie, but not for long, as Angelina's attention turns to them." "Angelina" "What the hell are you doing, Katie?!" "Katie" "N-Nothing, I'm just--" "Angelina" "I don't wanna hear it, just get back to the game!" - "Katie" "...Yes ma'am." + "Katie" "... Yes ma'am." nar "Katie gives up the chase, glaring daggers at Cho." cho "(What the--)" @@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: call gen_chibi(flip=True) with d3 - cho "Is he talking with Gi--" + cho "Is he talking to Gi--" cho "Hold on. What's that thing near the balustrade... Is that... Luna?!" cho "What is she wearing?!" @@ -977,7 +977,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: nar "You lick your lips and give her a wink." nar "Looking at you in horror for a brief moment, she then finally understands what you were trying to say." - nar "Cho gives you a quick nod and then flies up towards one of the Gryffindor chasers who has positioned themselves near the Ravenclaw goalposts." + nar "Cho gives you a quick nod and then flies up towards one of the Gryffindor chasers who have positioned themselves near the Ravenclaw goalposts." her "Johnson passing to Spinnet--" ("grin", "base", "base", "L", xpos=290, ypos="base", flip=True, trans=d5) @@ -1013,10 +1013,10 @@ label gryffindor_match: nar "Looking up at Cho, you see a mix of frustration and worry across her face as she flies off again." gen "{size=-4}Damn it...{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #whisper - sna "{size=-4}Miss Chang isn't doing so well this time is she?{/size}" ("snape_05") #whisper + sna "{size=-4}Miss Chang isn't doing so well this time, is she?{/size}" ("snape_05") #whisper sna "{size=-4}It appears your feeble attempts at riling up Miss Granger were in vain.{/size}" ("snape_37") #whisper gen "{size=-4}How did you--{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #whisper - sna "{size=-4}Why, you were the one that told me about their contempt for each other when we made our little bet.{/size}" ("snape_02") #whisper + sna "{size=-4}Why, you were the one who told me about their contempt for each other when we made our little bet.{/size}" ("snape_02") #whisper gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmm*?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") sna "{size=-4}That little witch has successfully been making my life a misery since the moment she got here.{/size}" ("snape_01") @@ -1314,7 +1314,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: her @ cheeks blush "Why are you doing this?" ("mad", "happy", "angry", "L") cho @ cheeks blush "Why?" ("smile", "narrow", "raised", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "Well I thought I'd give your friends a bit of a show." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well, I thought I'd give your friends a bit of a show." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "Don't you think they deserve to look at something nice for once?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "R") her @ cheeks blush "What?!" ("upset", "wide", "base", "L") @@ -1344,7 +1344,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: ton @ hair horny "*Mmm*... Me too..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") sna "Now this is a plan I can get behind." ("snape_02") - gen "Hah, yeah this was my plan alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hah! Yeah, this was my plan alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ cheeks blush "But perhaps we should call for a--" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") her "{size=+7}Boys!{/size}" with hpunch nar "The boys quickly snap out of it and move their gaze towards the commentator booth." @@ -1361,7 +1361,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: gen "Miss Granger!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ cheeks heavy_blush hair horny "Oh dear..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "You boys are despicable!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Why would you pay any attention towards that walking stick when the girls of your own house are a hundred times more appealing!" ("disgust", "squint", "angry", "L") + her @ cheeks blush "Why would you pay any attention to that walking stick when the girls of your own house are a hundred times more appealing!" ("disgust", "squint", "angry", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*inaudible noise*" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "R") her @ cheeks blush "What was that?" ("grin", "squint", "base", "L") her @ cheeks blush "Sorry I can't hear you over the wind... You'll have to speak up." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") @@ -1382,7 +1382,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "*Hmm*... We should probably put a stop to this..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "*Grr*!!!" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "stare_soft") - ton @ hair upset "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} Why don't you do it Severus?" ("mad", "narrow", "shocked", "R") + ton @ hair upset "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} Why don't you do it, Severus?" ("mad", "narrow", "shocked", "R") #Hermione takes off bra $ hermione.strip("bra") @@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "angry", "R") qcr "Panties!{w=0.4} Panties!{w=0.4} Panties!" cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "L") - nar "The focus on the game, now completely lost, has everyone's eyes moving back and forth between Hermione and Cho, waiting with baited breath to see who will push things further." + nar "The focus on the game, now completely lost, has everyone's eyes moving back and forth between Hermione and Cho, waiting with bated breath to see who will push things further." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("smile", "base", "base", "L") if states.her.public_level < 3: @@ -1424,7 +1424,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: with d3 call cho_walk(1100, 140, speed=2) - her @ cheeks blush "Of course, now when you've seen the real deal why would you ever look at someone like--" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "L", trans=d3) + her @ cheeks blush "Of course, now when you've seen the real deal, why would you ever look at someone like--" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "L", trans=d3) stop background fadeout 3.0 @@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: with dissolve nar "Cho speeds up even more, her skirt clinging on for dear life." - nar "Harry still on her tail is struggling, hard and is barely keeping up with her.{#LINT_IGNORE}" + nar "Harry still on her tail, is struggling, hard and is barely keeping up with her.{#LINT_IGNORE}" call ctc @@ -1500,12 +1500,12 @@ label gryffindor_match: hide cg2 with dissolve - nar "Cho, whose panties are now revealed to the crowd speeds up even further, edging ever so closer towards the snitch." + nar "Cho, whose panties are now revealed to the crowd, speeds up even further, edging ever so closer towards the snitch." qcr "Panties! Panties! Panties!" ton "*Cough*... {i}Ventus{/i}... *Cough*..." play sound "sounds/magic4.ogg" show CG quidditch cho_standing_panties_down as cg zorder 16 with flashbulb - nar "Suddenly, a strong gust of wind grabs hold of her panties and they slide down to her knees." + nar "Suddenly, a strong gust of wind grabs hold of her panties, and they slide down to her knees." call ctc @@ -1527,7 +1527,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: her "She's getting off doing this!?" qcr "Slut! Slut! Slut!" gen "Go on, girl... Don't lose focus now..." - nar "Cho, basking in the attention, loses a bit of speed and Harry begins catching up on her." + nar "Cho, basking in the attention, loses a bit of speed and Harry begins catching up to her." her "You silly slut, you're nothing compared to a real seeker like Harry!" her "The only thing you're good for is showing off your body!" @@ -1589,7 +1589,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: stop music fadeout 1 play background "sounds/crowd_low.ogg" fadein 5 - sna "Well I'll be damned..." ("snape_01", trans=d3) #doesn't look too bothered + sna "Well, I'll be damned..." ("snape_01", trans=d3) #doesn't look too bothered her @ cheeks blush "She...{w=0.4} She cheated!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "stare", trans=d3) #TODO Cho flies up, panties in her hand @@ -1602,7 +1602,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: cho @ cheeks blush "I did? You sure he wasn't just blinded by my charm?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") her "A charm! You must've cast some spell on him!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") cho @ cheeks blush "With what wand exactly?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "The only stiff object here is placed between my legs and that's not a {i}magic wand{/i}." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "The only stiff object here is placed between my legs, and that's not a {i}magic wand{/i}." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Although I don't expect you to know the difference between a dildo and--" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "You...{w=0.4} You..." ("mad", "wide", "angry", "L") gen "Now-now, don't be a sore loser, Miss Granger... There's no way she'd be able to keep a wand on her." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1625,7 +1625,7 @@ label gryffindor_match: with d3 her @ cheeks blush "Cho!" ("angry", "wide", "annoyed", "up") - cho @ cheeks blush "Later Granger!" ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Later, Granger!" ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid") hide cho_main with d5 @@ -1848,7 +1848,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: ton @ hair upset "We've got a situation--{w=0.2}" ("mad", "base", "base", "R", xpos="base", ypos="base") ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "Cho?!" ("clench", "wide", "shocked", "L") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Professor?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "L") - gen "(For fucks sake... {i}Always something{/i}...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(For fuck's sake... {i}Always something{/i}...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Shit... You have to hide, now!" ("mad", "base", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But why--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "L") ton "Just do it, quick!" ("scream", "base", "shocked", "L") @@ -1874,7 +1874,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: #Snape enters office and walks to desk (left) sna "Headmaster..." ("snape_01", trans=d3, xpos=200, ypos="base") gen "Severus! I should've known!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Come to deliver my winnings I presume?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come to deliver my winnings, I presume?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Not exactly..." ("snape_37") #Smugface hide snape_main @@ -1900,7 +1900,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: hoo "Yes, unfortunately it can't be helped, a very serious matter regarding the finals has come up." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "mid") gen "Oh?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid", xpos=460, ypos="base") - gen "That Potter boy didn't die did he?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That Potter boy didn't die, did he?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Who?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") ton "The Gryffindor seeker who crashed into one of the confectionery carts." ("open", "base", "base", "R") hoo @ cheeks blush "He did? I must have missed that." ("open", "shocked", "worried", "R") @@ -1916,7 +1916,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: sna "The matter at hand{nw}" ("snape_01") hoo "" ("normal", "base", "angry", "L") ton "" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - sna "The matter at hand{fast} is in regards to the Ravenclaw girl...{w=0.4} Miss Chang." ("snape_01") + sna "The matter at hand{fast} is in regard to the Ravenclaw girl...{w=0.4} Miss Chang." ("snape_01") gen "Oh? There's not a rule against cumming--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #Thud sound @@ -2004,7 +2004,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: gen "Don't--{w=0.2} *Hngh*...{w=0.4} Don't worry about me, I'll be fine. Just taken by surprise by this whole ordeal, that's...{w=0.4} That's it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Gobble*...{w=0.4} *Gobble*...{w=0.4} *Slurp*" ("open_wide_tongue", "closed", "base", "up") hoo "Are you sure? Your face does look a bit white, sir." ("open", "shocked", "worried", "L", ypos="head") - gen "(With all my blood flow being redirected that's not surprising.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(With all my blood flow being redirected, that's not surprising.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'll...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I'll be fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Slurp*... {w=0.4}*Slurp*...{w=0.4} *Slurp*" ("open_wide_tongue", "closed", "base", "up") gen "So... Regarding this--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4}{nw}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2030,13 +2030,13 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: sna "It has to have been a luck potion!" ("snape_32") sna "Such precise movements should be impossible on anything but a firebolt!" ("snape_17") hoo "I thought you tested the remaining drops in the vial, Severus." ("open", "shocked", "shocked", "mid") - sna "*Err*... Not yet but--" ("snape_14") + sna "*Err*... Not yet, but--" ("snape_14") hoo "Are these accusations all just assumptions based on her athletic abilities?" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") sna "No, of course not!" ("snape_18") - sna "Hand me the vial and I'll inspect it right now!" ("snape_17") + sna "Hand me the vial, and I'll inspect it right now!" ("snape_17") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Ahem*!" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") #Tonks to the rescue - ton "I may be wrong here but don't you happen to have a stake in this game Severus?" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + ton "I may be wrong here, but don't you happen to have a stake in this game, Severus?" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") sna "W--{w=0.2} What?" ("snape_36") gen "Oh yes, the bet!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Bet?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -2052,12 +2052,12 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: with d3 ton "The boys have a bet on which team would end up winning the Quidditch cup." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - hoo "I see... Well that changes things..." ("normal", "base", "base", "L") + hoo "I see... Well, that changes things..." ("normal", "base", "base", "L") sna "You think I'd put some bet above my reputation as a potions master!?" ("snape_18") #Fake offended gen "...{w} Probably." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Highly likely." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Most definitely." ("soft", "narrow", "shocked", "mid") - sna "*Hmph*... In that case I'll just bring the vial to professor Slughorn and have him test it!" ("snape_16") + sna "*Hmph*... In that case, I'll just bring the vial to professor Slughorn and have him test it!" ("snape_16") #Snape's legs vanish from CG as he goes to grab the bottle. show image "cho_under_desk_idle" as cg @@ -2151,7 +2151,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: hide screen blkfade with d5 - ton "You can come out now Miss Chang... The scary pale man is gone." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") + ton "You can come out now, Miss Chang... The scary pale man is gone." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Just give her one more minute--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Go on Miss Chang, no need to worry." ("soft", "base", "base", "L") @@ -2166,10 +2166,10 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Thank you professor." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", xpos="left", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R", xpos="left", ypos="base") ton @ hair horny "*Hmm*?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") - ton @ hair horny "Oh yes, the potion thing... I'm sorry Miss Chang but you're quite distracting." ("base", "base", "base", "L") + ton @ hair horny "Oh yes, the potion thing... I'm sorry Miss Chang, but you're quite distracting." ("base", "base", "base", "L") ton @ hair horny "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} Although I'm not complaining." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "L") ton "You should probably put something on before entering the hallways though." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - ton "I took the liberty of fetching your clothes for you, put them on once you two are finished in here will you?" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") + ton "I took the liberty of fetching your clothes for you, put them on once you two are finished in here, will you?" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes, professor." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") #Ravenclaw clothpile @@ -2267,7 +2267,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} You're lucky I've been training for this, [name_genie_cho]..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down", xpos="base", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Of course... I figured it'd come to this eventually..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Ever since I saw this thing for the first time..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "(Why's she doing this? She already won the cup didn't she?)" + gen "(Why's she doing this? She already won the cup, didn't she?)" cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Sigh*..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "To think that I would actually agree to all of this just so that I could win that cup..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I would've never imagined that I'd go so far as to take my clothes off in front of the entire school..." ("base", "closed", "worried", "mid") @@ -2275,12 +2275,12 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Sure, I enjoyed showing off my athletic body before." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But even then..." ("base", "closed", "base", "stare") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "If you had told me that the thrills leading up to every game would've gradually changed from winning the cup to looking forward to doing all those despicable things..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Well I'm not sure I would've believed it..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Well, I'm not sure I would've believed it..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") gen "*Ahem*... I'm sure your fans would say the same!" cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I'm not just talking about the things I did on the pitch..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R", trans=d3) gen "..." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "You know... I was getting increasingly worried once the finals loomed closer." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", trans=d3) - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "After all... Once I had won the game, there wouldn't be any more need for our... extra curricular activities would there?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "After all... Once I had won the game, there wouldn't be any more need for our... extracurricular activities, would there?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "You'd have no more leverage over me...{w=0.4} Right?" ("smile", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "..." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "No more reason for me to sell you any favours..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=d3) @@ -2338,7 +2338,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: gen "*Hngh*!" gen "So... *Ngh*-- You didn't blow me just to get out of trouble?" - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} Although normally I probably would've considered...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Justifying it that way." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", trans=d3) + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} Although normally, I probably would've considered...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Justifying it that way." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} The potion ...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Well, for some reason I don't feel the need to..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "And that...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I shouldn't hide..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: gen "*Heh-he*... I knew--" cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "It made me extremely--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Angry...{w=0.4} And confused..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare") gen "Oh?" - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes! I had just won the game against Slytherin, and as I came--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Came in here to celebrate with my coach..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=d3) + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes! I had just won the game against Slytherin, and as I came--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} came in here to celebrate with my coach..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Who do I see but Hermione Granger, smiling, and stark naked!" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "down") gen "Well... It wasn't--" cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "That's when I--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} When I realised that maybe I wanted more than just winning the cup." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare") @@ -2366,7 +2366,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Since I really had to try and figure out what makes me tick if I wanted to win the cup." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I couldn't help--{w=0.2}{nw}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "up") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I couldn't help--{fast} *Ah*..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "The only thing I could think about was what it would be like to have you bend me over and--{w=0.2}*Ah*...{w=0.4} fuck me on the commentators podium with everyone watching me..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") #Big moan text + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "The only thing I could think about was what it would be like to have you bend me over and--{w=0.2}*Ah*...{w=0.4} fuck me on the commentator's podium with everyone watching me..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") #Big moan text gen "You little exhibitionist slut!" gen "If only they could see you now." cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes! Let's call Hermione up here!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", trans=d3) @@ -2523,7 +2523,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: call cho_chibi(xpos="desk", ypos="base", flip=False) with fade - gen "That... Was amazing!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That... was amazing!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "...{w=0.5}{nw}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d3) cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "...{fast}" ("soft", "wide", "base", "stare") gen "[name_cho_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2551,7 +2551,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return: gen "You should probably put some clothes on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Oh...{w=0.4} Well if I have to..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - #cho walks to clothes pile and rumages through it + #cho walks to clothes pile and rummages through it call cho_walk(xpos=438, ypos=435) play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" pause .8 diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_practice.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_practice.rpy index c80013f0..4b44155c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_practice.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_practice.rpy @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ label cc_gt_return: gen "Had a fruitful day, smacking some peaches?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I did not!" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d3) gen "Too bad, I was so sure it would have worked." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Oh it worked alright..." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Oh, it worked alright..." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "It did?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "In fact, it worked so well I'm not sure what was redder, Katie's bum, or Hermione's face..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "She was fuming!" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ label cc_gt_talk: gen "Not yet... I've got some things to take care of before then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's too bad, I want to crush those Gryffindors already!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(I've still got to help her find a broom in the morning...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(And how am I supposed to get cheerleading squad together...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(And how am I supposed to get a cheerleading squad together...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Perhaps there's some other Ravenclaw student I can ask...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif not states.cho.ev.quidditch.e11_complete: # Didn't ask Luna to cheer @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ label cc_gt_talk: elif not states.cho.ev.quidditch.e12_complete: # Didn't get the broom gen "Not until we have you pick out one of the school brooms to use." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "You mean not until we find out how worthless they are and you have to get me a proper broom." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "You mean not until we find out how worthless they are, and you have to get me a proper broom." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: #Match ready gen "As long as you're ready." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy index 7ea259b2..4c2fada7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ label start_hufflepuff_match: cho "To be honest, [name_genie_cho], I'm feeling quite nervous." ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Don't worry. I believe you are ready..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "When are you going to play against Hufflepuff?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "That's up to you, [name_genie_cho]. As headmaster you decide when the games will be held..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "That's up to you, [name_genie_cho]. As headmaster, you decide when the games will be held..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So if I were to say tomorrow, it will happen tomorrow?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well then, tomorrow it is!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: sna "Granger..." ("snape_08") sna "Well, that's very displeasing to say the least..." ("snape_07") sna "In any case, you won't be seen up close by any of the other teachers." ("snape_09") - gen "Sounds like a snore. Can't I stay here and you'll tell them I'm ill or something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sounds like a snore. Can't I stay here, and you'll tell them I'm ill or something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "No." ("snape_04") sna "That would just prompt the nurse to examine you closely..." ("snape_03") gen "Well... I wouldn't mind that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: # Show wine call give_reward(text=">Not grape-juice.", gift="interface/icons/wine.webp") - gen "That's all the persuasion I needed my friend!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's all the persuasion I needed, my friend!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide screen bld1 with d3 pause .2 @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: nar "You make your way towards the pitch with Snape, pondering if this was such a good idea." play sound "sounds/steps_grass.ogg" - nar "After walking for a while across the school grounds a huge oval shaped pitch with massive towers around it looms before you." + nar "After walking for a while across the school grounds, a huge oval-shaped pitch with massive towers around it looms before you." nar "Amazed by...{w=0.6}{nw}" gen "Agrabah towers are larger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Amazed... by the sight, Snape then leads you to the base of one of the towers." @@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: mal "Fight? Against what?" gen "{size=-4}See, that guy knows his lines...{/size}" ("base") sna "..." ("snape_03") - gen "Aye... fight and you may die." ("base") + gen "Aye... fight, and you may die." ("base") call sna_chibi("stand", 230, 400, flip=True) with d3 @@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=["emo8", "emo7", "emo8"]) with d3 - nar "After a moment of confusion the crowd cheers excitedly, eager to see the match kick-off." + nar "After a moment of confusion, the crowd cheers excitedly, eager to see the match kick-off." call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=[None, None, None]) with d3 @@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=["th", "an", "excl"]) with d3 - mal2 "Yeh! Start the game!" + mal2 "Yeah! Start the game!" qcr "START THE GAME! START THE GAME!" nar "Hermione's voice eventually gets drowned out by the growing restlessness of the crowd." her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid", xpos=290, ypos="base", flip=True) @@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: play sound "sounds/ball_hit.ogg" her "*Umm*, I'm not sure if anyone's scored yet..." ("normal", "happy", "base", "mid") her "Wait, that guy has the quaffle... I think..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "Scratch that last bit, he has a stick so he must be a beater!" ("mad", "happy", "base", "mid") + her "Scratch that last bit, he has a stick, so he must be a beater!" ("mad", "happy", "base", "mid") sna "{size=-4}Good grief...{/size}" ("snape_05", ypos="head") pause .5 @@ -895,7 +895,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=[None, None, None]) with d3 - sna "Yes, and I was starting to enjoy it. You are missing most of it by the way..." ("snape_20", ypos="head") + sna "Yes, and I was starting to enjoy it. You are missing most of it, by the way..." ("snape_20", ypos="head") her "As a result of your yelling!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "" ("normal", "closed", "angry", "mid") sna "Eyes forward... girl." ("snape_13", ypos="head") @@ -1011,7 +1011,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match: # Outro gen "This isn't such a bad game after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I *hick* told you... so..." ("snape_22", ypos="head") + sna "I--{w=0.2} *hick*...{w=0.2} told you so..." ("snape_22", ypos="head") gen "Just bring more wine next time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "M-More?!" ("snape_20", ypos="head") gen "Or at least share more of it with me!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match_return: play sound "sounds/MaleGasp.ogg" gen "{size=+10}IT WASN'T ME!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "..........." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*huh*?{w=0.5} Are you okay, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "*Huh*?{w=0.5} Are you okay, [name_genie_cho]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Wha--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Of course I am!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_practice.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_practice.rpy index 2a00c461..2d9f3c72 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_practice.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_practice.rpy @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ label cc_ht_start: cho "Ready as I'll ever be." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Great. Get your team ready cause you are going to play today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I'll give their team captain a heads up during classes then." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "I'll give their team captain a heads-up during classes then." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Good, let me know how it went once practice finishes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I will, [name_genie_cho]. Wish me luck." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ label cc_ht_talk: cho "And little miss Granger wasn't even the slightest bit intimidated by her new obligation?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Not at all. She seemed rather joyous about her situation." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down") # Bit sad. - cho "Well she just doesn't know what's coming towards her yet!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Well, she just doesn't know what's coming towards her yet!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "{size=-4}I hope she gets hit by a bludger as well! I might even tell the boys to aim at her once or twice!{/size}" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") # Small text. gen "Make sure you tell everyone how your great and very proactive headmaster sorted everything out..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, I will. Thank you very much!" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy index bc50713d..f1042c89 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ label cho_quid_E1: gen "You know what, keep calling me Professor..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") - gen "And you I will call..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And I will call you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: "\"-Cadet-\"": @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label cho_quid_E1: cho "Very well, [name_genie_cho]." ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Tell me, how do you usually play?{w} Is there a specific reason why you've been losing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, it sort of differs depending which team we're playing against..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + cho "Well, it sort of differs depending on which team we're playing against..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "...{w} Let's start with whichever team you're playing against first." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That'd be Hufflepuff...{w=0.4} Most of their previous victories against us were achieved thanks to their seeker!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho "He's always catching the snitch before me." ("quiver", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ label cho_quid_E1: gen "And you are \"both\" looking for that thing? At the same time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes, [name_genie_cho]." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I do my best flying around the pitch searching for it. But it's just so small and really tricky to see..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "down") - gen "Why don't you look for it together? After all there is only one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why don't you look for it together? After all, there is only one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Hmm*?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You just need to grab that Snatch before he does." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "???" ("annoyed", "wide", "raised", "mid") @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ label cho_quid_E3: cho "Surely{w=0.3}, nobody in their right mind would let Luna Lovegood commentate." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") # Book quote. #gen "I am of right mind, Miss Chang...{w} and don't call me Shirley..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Knowing her she'd probably commentate the grass as it's growing..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + cho "Knowing her, she'd probably commentate the grass as it's growing..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") cho "Trust me, [name_genie_cho]. Luna would be a terrible choice!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Fine. How about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -408,10 +408,10 @@ label cho_quid_E4: her "" (xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) gen "[name_hermione_genie], how much do you know about Quidditch?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione], I mean, I've taken flying lessons... they're mandatory." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Ah, okay... and here I was hoping that you'd be able to commentate this years quidditch games..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Ah, okay... and here I was hoping that you'd be able to commentate this year's Quidditch games..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Me, wasting time on something as stupid as--" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Wait...{w=0.3} What did you say?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "I was going to ask you if you'd commentate this year's quidditch games..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I was going to ask you if you'd commentate this year's Quidditch games..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You want me... to commentate this year's Inter-House Quidditch cup?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") her "I'd be honoured, sir!" ("scream", "closed", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) her "Quidditch has always been one of my passions, to be able to commentate it..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ label cho_quid_E6: gen "Wait, so you didn't quit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No! Why would I be here telling you this if I did?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "I guess you would've had to give me a two weeks notice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You tell me, you're the one that appointed me." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "You tell me, you're the one who appointed me." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Oh, right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And since I didn't sign anything..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I quit!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ label cho_quid_E6: her "No amount of house points was worth the humiliation I got!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Well, *boo* --{w=0.3} bloody --{w=0.3} *hoo*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Tzzzs*!..." ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") - her "Good luck finding somebody that is more willing to be the school's laughing stock!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "Good luck finding somebody that is more willing to be the school's laughingstock!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") "\"We'll look for somebody more competent, then.\"": @@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ label cho_quid_E6: her "More competent?!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Surely we can find a replacement for you in no time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well if that's the case, it seems like I'm no longer needed..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "Well, if that's the case, it seems like I'm no longer needed..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") "\"All you need is a bit of practice...\"": if hg_pf_sex.counter == 0: @@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ label cho_quid_E7: her "Madam Hooch would be unquestionably against that." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I wont step a foot on that podium, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "I won't step a foot on that podium, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "There's nothing you could tempt me with that would change my mind." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") gen "Well then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "No more mister nice guy..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ label cho_quid_E7: her "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho "Is it my hair? Or my strong legs? Or my abs?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "Would you like me to show you my body again, right now?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") - her "No thanks." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "No, thanks." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "I should mix in some drops of Veritaserum into your pumpkin juice, and ask you again..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") cho "Maybe then you'll speak the truth... How you really think of me." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "You wouldn't!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "L") @@ -749,9 +749,9 @@ label cho_quid_E7: cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I will commentate all the matches, the Gryffindor match as well! The one after this one, should Ravenclaw even get that far..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") - cho "Oh no you won't! You'd be all in favour of Gryffindor!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "L") + cho "Oh no, you won't! You'd be all in favour of Gryffindor!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "L") her "Yes I would. And I'll make sure that you lose." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") - gen "Great. Finally we can get on with this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great... Finally, we can get on with this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Wait!--" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Miss Granger, you better keep to your word this time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -816,10 +816,10 @@ label cho_quid_E8: gen "Close enough." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The next match is coming up, and I require your help with something." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course. What is it?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "There's this asian girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "There's this Asian girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Cho Chang?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "How did you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Is she the {i}token asian{/i} girl in this school?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Is she the {i}token Asian{/i} girl in this school?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Yes, the little Ravenclaw minx, correct." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well, I figured you'd be talking about her - if it has to do with Quidditch." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "She's one of the girls I buy favours from." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -881,7 +881,7 @@ label cho_quid_E8: if states.cho.ev.quidditch.e9_complete: gen "I already did. He isn't going to help me out..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well that's just like him." ("open", "base", "angry", "R") + ton "Well, that's just like him." ("open", "base", "angry", "R") else: gen "I guess I could..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Yeah, maybe not..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -902,11 +902,11 @@ label cho_quid_E8: ton "Really? What happened to Miss Granger?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "She quit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmm*... That's too bad..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") - ton "But it's understandable... After all that mocking she had to go through last game." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") + ton "But it's understandable... Seeing that she had to go through all that mocking, during the last game." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") ton "Poor thing..." ("mad", "base", "worried", "L") ton "Have you tried talking to her?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Not yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well, if anyone could convince her surely you'd be the one to be able to." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + ton "Well, if anyone could convince her, surely you'd be the one to be able to." ("base", "base", "base", "R") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Why don't you tell her that a very special someone will be really disappointed if she doesn't show up." ("horny", "base", "base", "stare") gen "(So it's not just me who thinks she's into Cho!)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ label cho_quid_E8: ton "Very well..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "R") ton "In any case, I could join you in the commentator booth during the next game to help encourage Miss Granger." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "If anything I'll get a nice view from up there." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + ton "If anything, I'll get a nice view from up there." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") ton "Since you already made sure Hufflepuff is out of the competition..." ("upset", "base", "raised", "R") ton "The best we can hope for now is to not get last..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "It's always third or nothing with us Puffs." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") @@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ label cho_quid_E9: gen "Your team didn't show up for practice against Ravenclaw!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Well, there's no specific rule that forces the teams to practise against each other..." ("snape_05") gen "There's not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Actually that does make sense...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Actually, that does make sense...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Of course not, but it is heavily encouraged for students that are looking to make it professionally." ("snape_09") gen "Do you have something to do with this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I don't know what you're talking about..." ("snape_47") #Smirk @@ -1026,13 +1026,13 @@ label cho_quid_E10: gen "What makes them different to the other teams? Can we expect similar tactics like with the Slytherbins?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Oh, no... They're the polar opposite to the Slytherin team." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Figures." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So what's their schtick then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So what's their shtick then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They use tactics and coordination!" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "What?! There's tactics in this game?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "They're also quite a bit more nimble than the Slytherin team, so they got hit by way less bludgers than we did." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "What?! There are tactics in this game?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "They're also quite a bit more nimble than the Slytherin team, so they got hit by way fewer bludgers than we did." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Some of the hits they pulled off during the last game had my teammates covered in bruises for days!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "downR") cho "Would've been weeks if it wasn't for Madam Pomfrey." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... Well, hopefully we wont see that kind of meddling from Snape this time around." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... Well, hopefully we won't see that kind of meddling from Snape this time around." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Snape?! What has Professor Snape got to do with it?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "He provided them with a felix potion... Thing, before the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Felix Felicis!?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ label cho_quid_E10: cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") cho "No offence [name_genie_cho] but I must say I've never heard such nonsense in my life." ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "I only care about reaching the top, no matter what!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Very well [name_cho_genie]... If that's the case then I'm not sure if I can help you any further." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very well [name_cho_genie]... If that's the case, then I'm not sure if I can help you any further." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") cho "But [name_genie_cho], I still want you-- I still need your help!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Then you shouldn't bite the hand that feeds you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ label cho_quid_E11: lun "Oh, yes [name_genie_luna], I'd be happy to!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Are you sure?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Of course, [name_genie_luna]!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Great. Then I'll look forward at seeing you cheering at the game!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great. Then I'll look forward to seeing you cheering at the game!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.cho.ev.quidditch.e11_complete = True @@ -1158,7 +1158,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: stop music fadeout 1 play sound "sounds/steps_grass.ogg" - nar "You make your way down to the pitch, catching a few stares on the way by some of the portraits. Looks like the real Dumbledore wasn't a morning person either." + nar "You make your way down to the pitch, catching a few stares on the way from some of the portraits. It appears the real Dumbledore may not have been a morning person either." #Pitch entrance, Cho is standing there call room("quidditch_pitch") @@ -1179,7 +1179,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: cho "Five AM!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Then where are the brooms?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I put them in the cleaning supply closet where they belong." ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - cho "They were all terrible, I tried every single one and they're even worse than my family's bluebottle!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "They were all terrible, I tried every single one, and they're even worse than my family's bluebottle!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So the broom makes the player, does it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yes!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: cho "Please professor, you're my only hope!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "L") hoo "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "downR") hoo "Well, I'd normally be able to pull some strings, but I don't think even I would be able to procure you a firebolt, Miss Chang..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - hoo "There's only so many produced each season, and only a couple has been sold outside of professional--" ("normal", "base", "base", "down") + hoo "There's only so many produced each season, and only a couple have been sold outside of professional--" ("normal", "base", "base", "down") cho "Pleaaaaaase!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "L") hoo "..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "downR") @@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: hoo "Miss Chang." ("open", "base", "angry", "L") hoo "I think I've got just the broom for you." ("base", "shocked", "angry", "L") - cho "Yes! Thank you Professor!" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "L") + cho "Yes! Thank you, Professor!" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "L") hoo "A broom, that when used by the right person could be faster and even more agile than the firebolt." ("base", "shocked", "shocked", "L") cho "Thank you so--" ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Wait...{w=0.4} Faster than the firebolt?! But that's the best broom out there!" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -1285,11 +1285,11 @@ label cho_quid_E12: hoo "Now, I'll give you this broom... But you're going to have to promise me..." ("base", "shocked", "base", "L") hoo "Promise me!" ("open", "shocked", "angry", "L") hoo "Don't ever tell a soul what I'm about to show you..." ("normal", "shocked", "base", "L") - cho "Oh, of course professor!" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") + cho "Oh, of course, professor!" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") hoo "And that goes for you as well, Professor..." ("open", "base", "shocked", "mid") gen "Of course, but what exactly--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Alright then, one moment..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Hold on, this isn't a broom from some black market brooms dealer is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hold on, this isn't a broom from some black market brooms dealer, is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Don't be silly, of course not." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") hoo "You can inspect it if you like." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") hoo "{size=-6}Coach...{/size}" ("base", "wink", "raised", "mid") #small text #blush #smirkyface @@ -1370,7 +1370,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: gen "Of course I do..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Although a reminder wouldn't hurt." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "-Blame the Quidditch guide book-" if quidditchguide_ITEM.used: + "-Blame the Quidditch guidebook-" if quidditchguide_ITEM.used: gen "Err..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I must've missed that section in the Quidditch guide." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Her list of accomplishments required a whole book, it said so in the footnotes!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1379,19 +1379,19 @@ label cho_quid_E12: cho "Nobody ever managed to figure out her identity or how she managed to fly so well." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "L") hoo "You sure know your Quidditch history Miss Chang, ten points to Ravenclaw." ("grin", "base", "base", "L") $ ravenclaw += 10 - cho "And then...{w=0.4} And then...{w=0.4} You dissapeared, and became a teacher?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") + cho "And then...{w=0.4} And then...{w=0.4} You disappeared, and became a teacher?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") hoo "Yes indeed." ("base", "shocked", "base", "L") cho "Wow...{w=0.4} I can't believe it." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "L") hoo "Sorry?" ("open", "shocked", "raised", "L") - cho "Why would you end in the middle of your Quidditch carreer?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho "Why would you end in the middle of your Quidditch career?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Oh...{w=0.4} *Ehm*..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Well you know, better end it when you're at the peak...{w=0.4} The urge to experience Quidditch from a new angle... And to... *Ehm*..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "Teach?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Oh, yes! Teach!" ("open", "closed", "shocked", "stare") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "The masked seeker... Teaching the next generation of Quidditch players..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Oh, stop it now Miss chang, you're making me blush." ("grin", "base", "base", "downR") + hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Oh, stop it now, Miss Chang, you're making me blush." ("grin", "base", "base", "downR") cho "But, you're a living legend! This broom... It's... It's..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Looks like a normal broom to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, how could you say that?! This surely must be her secret! Why else would she be giving it to me?" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -1405,24 +1405,24 @@ label cho_quid_E12: cho "You mean using things like broom polish and trimming it?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "Precisely." ("base", "base", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "It's always been believed, and I still teach our students that usage of such things helps with aerodynamics, speed and agility." ("open", "base", "shocked", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Except that's only a half truth." ("open", "base", "base", "downL") + hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "Except that's only a half-truth." ("open", "base", "base", "downL") hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "How do I explain this..." ("normal", "narrow", "raised", "down") hoo @ cheeks blush "Remember your first flying lesson when you had to use a command word for the broom to jump into your hand?" ("open", "shocked", "shocked", "L") - cho "Oh, yes of course!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho "Yes, of course!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "Have you ever considered how this actually works? There's no wand being used in conjunction with the command word." ("open", "shocked", "shocked", "L") cho "..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "I honestly never thought about it..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") hoo @ cheeks blush "Yes, and I wouldn't blame you..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - hoo @ cheeks blush "The basic knowledge on creating brooms has been passed down for generations, the why's and how's is not something the average broom user cares about." ("open", "base", "shocked", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "But me on the other hand... Well I got a bit obsessed trying to answer this question, and began researching heavily to try and figure out how it all worked..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + hoo @ cheeks blush "The basic knowledge of creating brooms has been passed down for generations, the \"why's\" and \"how's\" is not something the average broom user cares about." ("open", "base", "shocked", "L") + hoo @ cheeks blush "But me, on the other hand... Well, I got a bit obsessed trying to answer this question, and began researching heavily to try and figure out how it all worked..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "And you found the answer?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "It took years of research but yes, I did." ("grin", "shocked", "base", "L") + hoo @ cheeks blush "It took years of research... But yes, I did." ("grin", "shocked", "base", "L") cho "Years?!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "Indeed... I had to sift through and translate some very old tomes to find what I was searching for, as all my questions led me towards the very essence of enchanting." ("open", "shocked", "base", "L") cho @ cheeks blush "Wow..." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "Think of magic as a tree." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "All magic in this world and others stem from the same source, each school of magic are just branches leading to it." ("base", "shocked", "base", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "If the magic user has a higher understanding of the core fundamentals of that branch of magic, then they have a much easier time at manipulating it.." ("base", "base", "base", "L") + hoo @ cheeks blush "All magic in this world and others stems from the same source, each school of magic are just branches leading to it." ("base", "shocked", "base", "L") + hoo @ cheeks blush "If the magic user has a higher understanding of the core fundamentals of that branch of magic, then they have a much easier time at manipulating it..." ("base", "base", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "As an example, creatures of old such as Djinns possess magical abilities that stretch as far as the roots of magic." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") hoo @ cheeks blush "Although their abilities are innate... We'd be so lucky to even get close to the source of each school of magic." ("base", "shocked", "base", "mid") gen "(Makes sense... I sort of just waved my fingers and shit happened...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1431,7 +1431,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: gen "Djinn is fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I see..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") hoo @ cheeks blush "Through my research, I found that when a magic user imbues an object with magic, we also leave a trace of ourselves inside of it." ("open", "shocked", "shocked", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "It's a bit complicated to explain... In essence it's something like our core instincts or character, mixed with all of the other elements that binds us magic users together." ("base", "base", "shocked", "L") + hoo @ cheeks blush "It's a bit complicated to explain... In essence, it's something like our core instincts or character, mixed with all of the other elements that binds us magic users together." ("base", "base", "shocked", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "Are you following?" ("base", "shocked", "raised", "L") gen "Makes perfect sense to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Err*..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "L") @@ -1450,9 +1450,9 @@ label cho_quid_E12: cho "Oooh!" ("smile", "base", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "So... With this knowledge, I started working on figuring out new ways to care for your broom." ("base", "base", "base", "down") hoo @ cheeks blush "I tried sweeping with it, it's a broom after all, I thought maybe it would like that." ("open", "shocked", "raised", "R") - hoo @ cheeks blush "But it didn't work, in fact it made the broom slower... Which made sense, this broom was designed for flying after all..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") + hoo @ cheeks blush "But it didn't work... In fact, it made the broom slower... Which made sense, this broom was designed for flying after all..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") hoo @ cheeks blush "I tried talking to it... And that might've worked, albeit the fact that brooms don't have ears..." ("base", "shocked", "base", "L") - hoo @ cheeks blush "I even tried using Fleetwood's High-Finish Handle Polish to see if it made any difference to the one I usually use and lo and behold..." ("base", "base", "base", "downR") + hoo @ cheeks blush "I even tried using Fleetwood's High-Finish Handle Polish to see if it made any difference to the one I usually use, and lo and behold..." ("base", "base", "base", "downR") cho "" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") #expectant call ctc @@ -1470,7 +1470,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: gen "So, this is what you meant when you said you had just the broom for Miss Chang..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") #Blushing hoo @ cheeks blush "Figured it out already have you?" ("base", "wink", "raised", "mid") - hoo @ cheeks blush "Well I can't say I'm surprised, you've always had a much broader view on magic than most, professor." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + hoo @ cheeks blush "Well, I can't say I'm surprised, you've always had a much broader view on magic than most, professor." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "I'm confused..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") hoo @ cheeks blush "Think about the things I've told you thus far, Miss Chang." ("base", "base", "base", "L") hoo @ cheeks blush "When you enchant an object, it takes on some of the enchanter's characteristics." ("base", "base", "shocked", "L") @@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "I remember using it at the Quidditch world cup finals... Thousands of people watching..." ("grin", "closed", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "downR") hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "I don't think any broom had ever reached such speeds before..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare") - hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "When I caught the snitch... Why I've never felt such a rush." ("grin", "closed", "shocked", "mid") + hoo @ cheeks blush_heavy "When I caught the snitch... Why, I've never felt such a rush." ("grin", "closed", "shocked", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "{size=-6}I'll do it...{/size}" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "downR") #Small text # Used in Quidditch Outro @@ -1568,7 +1568,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: gen "(Gross...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, what do you call this invention of yours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "What do I call it?" ("open", "shocked", "raised", "mid") - hoo "*Hmm*... Why I never really thought about giving it a name." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "down") + hoo "*Hmm*... Why, I've never really thought about giving it a name." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "down") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I thought women named all their toys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1599,13 +1599,13 @@ label cho_quid_E12: "\"The Purple Rocket!\"": $ states.cho.ev.quidditch.broom_name = "Purple Rocket" - cho @ cheeks blush "The broom isn't... Oh I see..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "The broom isn't... Oh, I see..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") hoo "Works for me." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*He-heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"The Cumet!!\"": $ states.cho.ev.quidditch.broom_name = "Cumet" - hoo "There's already a broom called that unfortunately." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "mid") + hoo "There's already a broom called that, unfortunately." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "mid") gen "There is?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Someone's stolen the pun before I could..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hoo "Oh, I see what you mean now." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1654,7 +1654,7 @@ label cho_quid_E12: label cho_quid_E13: - # Informs the player that all preprations are complete + # Informs the player that all preparations are complete gen "(Cheerleading squad... Check... Broom... Check...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Well then... That should be everything.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1671,7 +1671,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14: call cho_walk("mid", "base", action="enter") cho "Hello Coach." - gen "Hello [name_cho_genie]... So, I still am your coach after all?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hello [name_cho_genie]... So, I am still your coach after all?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course you are!" cho "Unless you would rather not be anymore?" gen "Nonsense." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1710,10 +1710,10 @@ label cho_quid_E14: cho "Actually, I was thinking of showing you how I take care of my favourite lumber." gen "{i}Your favourite lumber?{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") cho "Yes, is it that surprising?" - gen "(Last I checked she didn't have any lumber down there, we have even had sex!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "(Last I checked, she didn't have any lumber down there, we have even had sex!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") gen "(Have my dick gotten so worn down that I can't tell the difference between a pussy and an ass?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") gen "(Or maybe she's a were-futa?!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - gen "(Nah... She would show symptoms much earlier.)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "(Nah... She would've shown symptoms much earlier.)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") gen "(Perhaps she has been under some sort of body concealment charm this entire time?)" gen "(No... That'd be ridiculous...{w=0.5} Although--)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") cho "Earth to [name_genie_cho]! Are you listening?" @@ -1853,7 +1853,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14: gen "That Hooch lady's sure taught you a lot!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") cho "*giggles*" cho "Practice makes perfect... It's what she taught me." - cho "I've practised enchanting on my own equipment a countless times by now." + cho "I've practised enchanting on my own equipment countless times by now." cho "My snitch absolutely glows with magic once I'm finished with it." gen "I bet..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") cho "Although I have to do it in secret, so I end up picking a time and place where I won't be bothered, like the changing rooms after practice." @@ -2069,7 +2069,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14: sna "Today's lesson will be about Felix Felicis." sly1 "Who's that?" - sna "It's a potion, you idiot! A luck potion more specifically." + sna "It's a potion, you idiot! A luck potion, more specifically." sna "This potion provides the drinker with a tremendous amount of luck, turning an ordinary day into an extraordinary one." sna "When under its effects, it will make the one who drinks it succeed in whatever activity they partake in, no matter what it is." sna "However, it is highly toxic in large quantities, therefore can only be consumed a handful of times during one's lifetime." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/quiz.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/quiz.rpy index 19a3889d..ae49fc3b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/quiz.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/quiz.rpy @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label cho_quiz: cho "Okay then, where do we begin?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, first we'll need to discuss what you'll do for me in this arrangement of ours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You need me to do something for your assistance, professor?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes, my time is quite a commodity these days so I want to make sure that the ones I spend it on are actually prepared to do what it takes to achieve their goals." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, my time is quite a commodity these days, so I want to make sure that the ones I spend it on are actually prepared to do what it takes to achieve their goals." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right... I suppose that's fair." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Great! Then I'd like you to start selling favours to me for my service." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Favours? What kind of favours?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label cho_quiz: cho "I mean...{w} I never really saw you showing too much interest before..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "About what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Quidditch!" ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid", trans=hpunch) - gen "Ah, yes... Quidditch.{w} It's like the Wizards version of Basketball, right?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Ah, yes... Quidditch.{w} It's like the Wizards' version of Basketball, right?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Basketball?!" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "Is that the muggle sport nobody cares about?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") gen "Nobody cares?{w} What are you...{w} Haven't you seen \"Space Jam\"?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -76,11 +76,11 @@ label cho_quiz: # Question 1 menu: - "-There's five players on each team...-": - gen "There's two teams with each one having five players on the court at one time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + "-There are five players on each team...-": + gen "Two teams with each one having five players on the court at one time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5) $ renpy.block_rollback() - cho "Whilst Quidditch does have two teams...{w=0.5} there's 7 players on each..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Whilst Quidditch does have two teams...{w=0.5} there are seven players on each..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") with hpunch show screen swear_bubble(random.randint(0, 4)) with d1 @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ label cho_quiz: gen "The game is played on a rectangular court..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5) $ renpy.block_rollback() - cho "Well, that's not similar at all then. The Quidditch pitch is oval shaped..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho "Well, that's not similar at all then. The Quidditch pitch is oval-shaped..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") with hpunch show screen swear_bubble(random.randint(0, 4)) with d1 @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label cho_quiz: "-[states.cho.ev.quiz.hint]You may not go out of bounds with the ball...-": $ states.cho.ev.quiz.correct_answers += 1 - gen "You're not allowed outside the bounds whilst holding the ball or you'll have to hand it over to the opponent team..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're not allowed outside the bounds whilst holding the ball, or you'll have to hand it over to the opponent team..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ confidence_meter += 12 show screen meter(confidence_meter) $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5) @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ label cho_quiz: # Question 4 menu: "-You can't touch your opponent...-": - gen "You're not allowed to touch your opponent or it would be counted as a foul..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're not allowed to touch your opponent, or it would be counted as a foul..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5) $ renpy.block_rollback() cho "Well, that's definitely not the case in Quidditch..." ("open", "closed", "raised", "mid") @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ label cho_quiz: $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5) $ renpy.block_rollback() play sound "sounds/hmm3.ogg" - cho "*Hmm*... Well that's the same as in Quidditch I suppose." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "*Hmm*... Well, that's the same as in Quidditch, I suppose." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Naturally..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ label cho_quiz: if states.cho.ev.quiz.correct_answers <= 1: # 0-1 answers correct? gen "Well, I'm sure that the winning conditions are pretty similar at least..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And what are the winning conditions?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "You win by having the most amount of points when the time is over." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You win by having the most number of points when the time is over." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, in Quidditch the game doesn't end until the snitch is caught, so it could technically go on forever." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "So in short... nothing like basketball." ("annoyed", "closed", "base") gen "The game doesn't end until the snitch is caught?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ label cho_quiz: gen "(Perhaps it might be worth trying to learn a bit more about Quidditch before I ruin this whole thing...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Oh, well... look at the time!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") - gen "You've made me go on about basketball for such a long time so we're already at the end of today's session." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've made me go on about basketball for such a long time, so we're already at the end of today's session." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "But we didn't even get to any tutoring..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "We'll get there, don't you worry... next time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "...{w=0.4}Fine." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ label cho_quiz: cho "I'll have to look up this \"Space Jamming\"...{w=1.0} thing." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You should! It has Bugs Bunny in it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And now you stopped making sense again..." ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "L") - cho "Also I'm still quite unsure if you actually know Quidditch or are just trying to confuse me with Basketball terms..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Also, I'm still quite unsure if you actually know Quidditch or are just trying to confuse me with Basketball terms..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") show screen meter(75) pause .3 call bld @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ label cho_quiz: gen "(Perhaps it might be worth trying to learn a bit more about Quidditch before I ruin this whole thing...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Oh, well... look at the time!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?" ("upset", "closed", "worried") - gen "You've made me go about basketball for such a long time so we're already at the end of today's session." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've made me go about basketball for such a long time, so we're already at the end of today's session." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "But we didn't even get to any tutoring..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "We'll get there, don't you worry... next time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "...{w=0.4}Fine." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ label cho_quiz: # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") - gen "(The fuck am I supposed to do now... I feel like that must've been a fluke, I know nothing about Quidditch..)." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(The fuck am I supposed to do now... I feel like that must've been a fluke, I know nothing about Quidditch...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I'd rather not ask Snape... but unless there's someone else that I could ask without sounding like a complete dumb-ass it might have to do...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.cho.ev.quiz.lost = True @@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ label cho_quiz_checkpoint: cho "Next question..." ("open", "closed", "base", "down") $ states.cho.ev.quiz.correct_answers += 1 - cho "Apart from the Snitch there are two other types of balls on the pitch, what are they called?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "Apart from the snitch, there are two other types of balls on the pitch, what are they called?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") # Question 2 menu: @@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ label cho_quiz_checkpoint: cho "Let's do some history..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I am made out of history, this should be a breeze..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Okay then..." ("smile", "base", "raised", "mid") - cho "A game of Quidditch doesn't finish until the Snitch is caught, therefore it could go on forever..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + cho "A game of Quidditch doesn't finish until the Snitch is caught; therefore it could go on forever..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") cho "In the longest ever match played, they had to constantly bring on substitutes to let the players get some sleep..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho "For how long did the game go on for?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") @@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ label cho_quiz_checkpoint: cho "I'll have to take your word on that one..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") cho "Anyway... final question..." ("open", "base", "raised", "down") - cho "As you know, you may not go outside of the bounds with the ball during the game, or you'd have to hand it over to the opposition..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + cho "As you know, you may not go outside the bounds with the ball during the game, or you'd have to hand it over to the opposition..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") cho "But what is the penalty if the defensive goes out of bounds?" ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") # Question 4 @@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ label cho_quiz_checkpoint: "-A free shot at the goal-": gen "Free goal shot?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ renpy.block_rollback() - cho "No that's not right..." ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") + cho "No, that's not right..." ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "L") gen "Then what is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, I don't know..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "How am I supposed to then?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ label cho_quiz_checkpoint: gen "Or were you asking the wrong questions?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sorry?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Time is just relative... what is the difference between a month or a few minutes, really..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Sir, you got bunch of the questions wrong..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Sir, you got a bunch of the questions wrong..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "The truth lies in the eyes of the beholder, Miss Chang..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I don't...{nw=1.0}" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "You'll see... I'll show you the real truth..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -622,12 +622,12 @@ label ss_he_cho_E2: sna "Well, they're both on the Gryffindor team..." ("snape_03") sna "And as much as it pains me to say this..." ("snape_06") sna "They're very discrete business minded individuals..." ("snape_02") - gen "I've take it you've had a fair deal of business with them yourself?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I take it you've had a fair deal of business with them yourself?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "No comment..." ("snape_03") else: gen "The Twins? Have you been keeping twins from me now as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I mean, if two very irritating ginger boys is your type I'm not going to judge..." ("snape_03") + sna "I mean, if two very irritating ginger boys is your type, I'm not going to judge..." ("snape_03") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Fred and George Weasley runs a secret shop in the school..." ("snape_01") gen "Doesn't sound very secret if you know about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy index 49260f32..82572f11 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label slytherin_match: ton "I was afraid you might've forgotten about today's--" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Quidditch match?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "So you didn't forget!" ("grin", "wide", "shocked", "mid") - gen "How could I? Last match was a great show!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How could I? The previous match was a great show!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "It sure was..." ("horny", "base", "raised", "R") ton "So, is Miss Granger going to show up as well?" ("soft", "wide", "shocked", "mid") gen "Who knows with her, honestly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ label slytherin_match: sna "I had some... business to attend to." ("snape_35") ton "Business, *huh*?" ("horny", "wide", "raised", "L") - sna "You will be accompanying us I presume?" ("snape_04") + sna "You will be accompanying us, I presume?" ("snape_04") ton "If that's okay with you?" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") with None @@ -232,8 +232,8 @@ label slytherin_match: ton "Great!" ("grin", "base", "raised", "L") ton "So, are we going?" ("base", "base", "shocked", "L") - sna "Ah *ahem*, yes... I suppose." ("snape_12") #throat clear in the middle of the sentence for extra awkardness - gen "I may be immortal but I'm afraid I'll die from this awkwardness..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + sna "Ah *ahem*, yes... I suppose." ("snape_12") #throat clear in the middle of the sentence for extra awkwardness + gen "I may be immortal, but I'm afraid I'll die from this awkwardness..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'd take a hundred years in the lamp over this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" @@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label slytherin_match: pause 1.0 sna "Indeed!" ("snape_02", ypos="head") - ton "You jinxed it.." ("upset", "closed", "worried", "mid", ypos="head", flip=True) + ton "You jinxed it..." ("upset", "closed", "worried", "mid", ypos="head", flip=True) gen "Hey!{w=0.4} That wasn't--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Hermione walks up to the podium @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ label slytherin_match: her "Professor Tonks, your hair!" ("soft", "base", "base", "L", ypos="head", flip=False) ton @ hair neutral "Whoopsie...{w=0.5} Miss Granger, so glad to see you!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "L", ypos="head", flip=True) sna "{size=-2}*Hmph*{/size}" ("snape_31", ypos="head") - her "Of course, as you know I take my responsibilities seriously!" ("open", "base", "angry", "L") + her "Of course... As you know, I take my responsibilities seriously!" ("open", "base", "angry", "L") call quidditch_stands(crowd=crowd_mid) with d3 @@ -604,15 +604,15 @@ label slytherin_match: sna "..." ("snape_45") gen "He was on the other side of the pitch!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "That's my boys!" ("snape_37") - sna "Thick as oatmeal, but built like a brick shithouse." ("snape_28") + sna "Thick as porridge, but built like a brick shithouse." ("snape_28") play sound "sounds/ball_hit.ogg" ton @ hair horny "They're so strong... I've never seen a bludger hit its target from that far before..." ("horny", "base", "base", "up") #horny ton @ cheeks blush "Is it me or is it getting a bit hot in here?" ("normal", "closed", "raised", "downR") sna "Something to cool you down perhaps?" ("snape_02") ton "Good idea, did you bring any of that firewhisky, Professor Dumbledore?" ("soft", "wink", "raised", "mid") gen "Err..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Firewhisky? For such a special day as today I've brought some of my finest wine." ("snape_20") - gen "(Yeah right, it's probably one of mine...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + sna "Firewhisky? For such a special day as today, I've brought some of my finest wine." ("snape_20") + gen "(Yeah, right... It's probably one of mine...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Now, if I may, Miss Tonks?" ("snape_13") ton "*Hmm*... I tend not to drink wine too often..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down") ton "Oh what the heck, go on then. I'll have a glass." ("base", "base", "annoyed", "down") @@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ label slytherin_match: menu: "\"Way to go Snape...\"": - gen "You knew you couldn't win so you decided to use one of your dirty tricks..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You knew you couldn't win, so you decided to use one of your dirty tricks..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And now I need to find me a new commentator, thanks to you!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "A bit hypocritical of you don't you think--" ("snape_32") "\"You owe me one, Snape...\"": @@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ label slytherin_match: with d5 pause .2 - nar "A couple of minutes go by, and there's no sign of Tonks..." + nar "A couple of minutes goes by, and there's no sign of Tonks..." play sound "sounds/murmur.ogg" # Crowd reactions aren't visible during blackfade @@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ label slytherin_match: call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=[None, "emoq", None]) with d3 - gen "In less than an hour, aircraft from here will join others from around the world. And you will be launching the largest aerial battle in this history of mankind." (face="open") + gen "In less than an hour, aircraft from here will join others from around the world. And you will be launching the largest aerial battle in the history of mankind." (face="open") gen "" (face="base") sna "Not again..." ("snape_17") gen "Mankind...{w=0.3} that word should have new meaning for all of us today." (face="open") @@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ label slytherin_match: stop background fadeout 3.0 play music "music/BattleThemeB.ogg" fadein 3.0 if_changed gen "The world ain't all sunshine and rainbows..." (face="base") - gen "It is a very mean and nasty place and it will beat you to your knees and keep you there permanently if you let it." (face="base") + gen "It is a very mean and nasty place, and it will beat you to your knees and keep you there permanently if you let it." (face="base") call quidditch_stands(crowd_react=[None, "emo8", None]) with d3 @@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ label slytherin_match: hide hermione_main nar "You keep touching Hermione, moving your hand further and further underneath her skirt." - nar "And as you begin rubbing her vagina with increased pressure you feel a bit of a wet spot forming across her panties." + nar "And as you begin rubbing her vagina with increased pressure, you feel a bit of a wet spot forming across her panties." her @ cheeks blush "Oh! That's naughty!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "up", trans=d3) @@ -1203,7 +1203,7 @@ label slytherin_match: sna "{size=-4}Another goal for Slytherin... Although you might've missed it...{/size}" ("snape_37") #Small text nar "You smirk and look back at Hermione who's still on the floor trying to catch her breath." sna "You can wipe that smile off your face now..." ("snape_01") - sna "Whatever your plan is I doubt you'll succeed..." ("snape_03") #smirk + sna "Whatever your plan is, I doubt you'll succeed..." ("snape_03") #smirk sna "Another couple of goals and you won't win even if Miss Chang manages to catch the snitch." ("snape_45") sna "Ravenclaw has no chance, We've got this game in the bag." ("snape_01") gen "You say that..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ label slytherin_match: $ renpy.choice_for_skipping() cho "Hey boys, check this out..." - cra "What do you want slut?" + cra "What do you want, slut?" show cho_cg quidditch pose1 base as cg zorder 17: zoom 1.0 pos (-1300, -600) @@ -1300,7 +1300,7 @@ label slytherin_match: malf "What?!?" cra "She's going after the Snitch!" - nar "Malfoy spins his head around. Finally noticing that Cho's currently chasing the snitch in the distance, he quickly darts after her." + nar "Malfoy spins his head around, and as he finally spots Cho who is currently chasing the snitch in the distance, he quickly darts after her." malf "You fucking idiots!" @@ -1330,8 +1330,8 @@ label slytherin_match: with d3 her "And she's caught it!{w=0.5} Ravenclaw wins and makes it to the finals against Gryffindor!" ("smile", "base", "angry", "L") - sna "I was looking forward to seeing that cup in my office again this year... Oh well..." ("snape_41") - her "And what a well deserved victory as well!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + sna "I was looking forward to seeing that cup in my office again this year... Oh, well..." ("snape_41") + her "And what a well-deserved victory as well!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You put the cup in your office?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Fade to black @@ -1654,7 +1654,7 @@ label slytherin_match_return: sus @ cheeks blush "You want to s-spank me? W-Why would you want to sp-spank me, professor? Did I do something wrong?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=morph) sus @ cheeks blush "Are you going to punish me for flaunting these massive pair of--" ("horny", "wink", "base", "mid") - sus @ cheeks blush "Wow... They really are big aren't they... And they feel so soft..." ("smile", "base", "base", "down") + sus @ cheeks blush "Wow... They really are big, aren't they... And they feel so soft..." ("smile", "base", "base", "down") sus @ cheeks blush "(I'll give you two the attention you deserve tonight...)" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Tonks?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "Oh right...{w=0.3} Where was I?" ("smile", "happy", "low", "downL") @@ -1729,7 +1729,7 @@ label slytherin_match_return: gen "This world, I swear there's something new every day..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What next?{w=0.2} Can you time travel?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I wish! The ministry won't let me do it..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - ton "If I could I'd just go back to kill baby \"you know who\"..." ("upset", "closed", "angry", "mid") + ton "If I could, I'd just go back to kill baby \"you know who\"..." ("upset", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "(Why is that always the first thing people consider when talking about time travel...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(So predictable...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1755,11 +1755,10 @@ label slytherin_match_return: call ton_walk(action="leave") stop music fadeout 11.0 - call bld - gen "Damn that witch is impressive!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She reminds me of one of those ancient, semen-stealing succubi..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Corrupting... enticing..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'd let her suck my life force any day." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Damn, that witch is impressive!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(She reminds me of one of those ancient, semen-stealing succubi..)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Corrupting... Enticing...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I'd let her suck my life force any day.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.ton.busy = True $ states.sna.busy = True diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_practice.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_practice.rpy index cfd67d8b..012f35d0 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_practice.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_practice.rpy @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ label cc_st_return: cho "No, sir." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Damn it, that naivety of hers is turning me on!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Damn it... That naivety of hers is turning me on!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Brats like you need to be punished!\"": $ states.cho.mood += 2 @@ -172,13 +172,13 @@ label cc_st_return: gen "Welcome back..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R") #Annoyed gen "Don't tell me they didn't show up again... Tonks assured me she'd get them to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "No they did show up alright." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "No, they did show up alright." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Excellent!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then what about our strategy, do you think it will work during the game?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I can't believe I flaunted my ass at them... but yes, I believe it will work." ("soft", "closed", "raised", "mid") cho "Crabbe and Goyle especially should be a great help, turning the game to my favour." ("smile", "narrow", "raised", "R") cho "So long as they don't give my ass too much of a {i}bludgering{/i}..." ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Just make sure to pick the right moment to distract them and you'll be fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just make sure to pick the right moment to distract them, and you'll be fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Very well then, I guess we're ready to take those snakes on for the main match!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if not states.cho.ev.quidditch.e7_complete: cho "What about Granger?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/training.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/training.rpy index 71c78257..561a2a0c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/training.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/training.rpy @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ label cho_training: gen "You'll have to wear a skirt of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "A skirt?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") #shocked gen "Of course!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If he's too focused on your panties there's no way he'll catch that snatch!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If he's too focused on your panties, then there's no way he'll catch that snatch!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: # Repeated intro gen "So about that tactic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ label cho_training: gen "It's all about the ass!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "The ass?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid") #shocked gen "Yes, you told me how those brutes love a good ass spanking, now that's an ass fetish if I ever heard one!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So this time we'll have those Slytherins get a good look of your ass!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So this time we'll have those Slytherins get a good view of your ass!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: # Repeated intro gen "So about that tactic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ label cho_training: cho "But, but, but!" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "That's probably what the crowd will be chanting..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Teasing Cedric is one thing... but the Slytherins..." ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "down") - cho "I can't see my self doing...{w=0.4} this..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I can't see myself doing...{w=0.4} this..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, that's your loss I guess..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "happyCl", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "If that's all you have then I think I'm done here." ("open", "base", "worried", "down") @@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ label cho_training: cho "What should I be wearing?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "What do you mean?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, up until now you've made me wear some silly combination of clothes." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Well, previously, you've made me wear some silly combination of clothes." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You can wear whatever you like, fashion is too complicated for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I see..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "In that case--" ("open", "base", "base", "R") @@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ label cho_training: cho @ cheeks blush "Teasing them is one thing but touching as well?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "With everyone watching." ("horny", "happyCl", "base", "mid") #blushes but imagining it gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "No, I wont do it..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "No, I won't do it..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR") gen "But what if--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho gets upset and leaves @@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ label cho_tactics: # Change Tactic #TODO This plays once cho has agreed to the tactic/clothing and during the first intro - # Once you pick the right option the practice match option unlocks (Maybe we should have it say Try out tactic?) + # Once you pick the right option, the practice match option unlocks (Maybe we should have it say Try out tactic?) # The various options should go away once you've tried it once label .change_front: @@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ label cho_tactics: gen "We'll test the tactics during the next practice like usual." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Do we have to? I'm sure it will work even without trying it." ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Of course we do! You're the one that was so adamant last time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course we do! You're the one who was so adamant last time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So let's see those results!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Yeah... Great, just let me know when..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I certainly shall." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy index 882dcd60..e54ed6b5 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_boys.rpy @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: # Intro if cc_pr_manipulate_boys.points == 0: gen "So what do we know about our opponents?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Hufflepuff? Well their team isn't the best, but they have a really strong seeker." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Hufflepuff? Well, their team isn't the best, but they have a really strong seeker." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Right...{w=0.3} who was that again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Cedric Diggory. How often do I have to repeat that to you, [name_genie_cho]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You will understand once you get to be my age..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: cho @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}Even if he's cute...{/size}" ("normal", "base", "worried", "downR") # Small text. gen "That's good. We can use this to our advantage." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "We can? How?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "You two having history! Which means he'll be much easier to distract during the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You two, having history! Which means he'll be much easier to distract during the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "All you have to do is make him believe something might actually happen." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What?{w=0.3} I don't want to go out with Cedric again!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I know, I know, you just have to make him believe that you will." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: gen "Would that be an issue?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Since they are on the enemy team, yes!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - cho "What if my team was to find out I hang around Slytherins?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "What if my team were to find out I hang around Slytherins?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") cho "{b}Slytherins!!{/b}" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "So? Just do it in secret then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That...{w=0.3} might work." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") @@ -186,9 +186,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_start: cho "You actually want me to target that pervert?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Sort of... He won't be the main goal of this operation." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Then, what is?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Miss Granger is quite protective of her friends isn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Miss Granger is quite protective of her friends, isn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I guess... The few times I've seen them without her, she's usually just around the corner talking to some teacher or another." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") - gen "Then use those moments to your advantage... Miss Granger is also part of the game isn't she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Then use those moments to your advantage... And remember, Miss Granger is also part of the game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If you can somehow spark that jealousy or protectiveness of her friends..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Angering her enough could transfer to the game... And since she'll be stuck in the commentator booth the whole time, she won't be able to pull them away from you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("mad", "wide", "raised", "mid") @@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T1_E1: gen "*Mhmm*... I can't say I blame him..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let me guess, you tried the old \"drop your pencil trick\" on him?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "\"Pencil trick\"?" ("mad", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Yes. You \"accidentally\" drop your pencil, and then when you have the boy's attention, you bent down and--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes. You \"accidentally\" drop your pencil, and then when you have the boy's attention, you bend down and--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Sir, we're only allowed to use \"quills\" here." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "So just use \"quills\" instead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That would just make a mess and get ink everywhere..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -342,8 +342,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T1_E2: gen "Why not? Tell me what happened..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, today I saw Cedric again down in the dungeons." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "{size=-2}(The dungeons? I like where this is going already!){/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Before I approached him I removed my Ravenclaw tie, and unbuttoned the top of my blouse." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "A very well thought out strategy, girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Before I approached him, I removed my Ravenclaw tie, and unbuttoned the top of my blouse." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + gen "A very well-thought-out strategy, girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I thought it would be enough to get his attention." ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Which I assume you got straight away?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No, Sir. But somebody else's..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T1_E2: gen "Who?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "{size=+4}Professor Slughorn!{/size}" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid", trans=hpunch) cho "He -- once again -- had to stand in for professor Snape, who couldn't make it in time for his lecture." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "Snape is missing his classes? How often has this been happening?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Snape is missing his classes? For how long has this been happening?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Probably every other week or so." ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "R") gen "{size=-2}(Slacker...){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Anyway...{w=0.3} Slughorn sort of crossed paths with me when I was about to confront Cedric..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid") @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T1_E2: cho @ cheeks blush "And he stood so close, he could see right down my cleavage!" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "{size=-2}(What a lucky git!){/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I couldn't move a single muscle! It was like I was frozen in place!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "R") - cho "What if something like that would happen during the game?!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") + cho "What if something like that happened during the game?!" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "You're right. That could be an issue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "And the worst thing is, he just kept staring!" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "And then? What happened?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T1_E3: cho "I ran into Cedric on my way to the library...{w} Literally!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "I bumped into him and hit my head pretty hard..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "You poor thing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "It's nothing, Sir. I'm more than capable at enduring pain!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "It's nothing, Sir. I'm more than capable of enduring pain!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "A useful skill to have, I can imagine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I've grown to be quite tough -- and resistant to all sorts of pain -- after years of playing Quidditch..." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "mid") play sound "sounds/gulp.ogg" @@ -439,8 +439,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_intro_E1: gen "So why the face?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well, I did as you suggested.{w=0.6} I left a note for them to meet me alone after class." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "downR") gen "Great, so did they show?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Yes... apparently they could read after all... And they met with me after the lesson." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "Once everyone had left and we were alone in the corridor. I didn't really know how to go about it." ("quiver", "narrow", "worried", "mid") + cho "Yes... Apparently they could read after all... And they met up with me after the lesson." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "Once everyone had left, and we were alone in the corridor... Well, I didn't really know how to go about it." ("quiver", "narrow", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "They must have felt how awkward I was as I approached them...{w=0.8} Or they had literally never had any woman approach them before." ("quiver", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "So they didn't get that you were coming onto them?{w=0.6} Surely they can't be that thick..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No, sir. They got it alright...{w=0.6} perhaps a little too well." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down") @@ -458,10 +458,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_intro_E1: cho "Exactly..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "R") cho "I was a bit frustrated at that point, and running out of options on how I could even make my intentions clear to them..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "So I lifted my skirt a bit to show them my panties." ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - gen "You go girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You go, girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Well, that's where I messed up...{w=0.6} They took it as an invitation and squeezed my butt cheeks quite hard and painfully." ("quiver", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "Ouch, then what happened?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "I pushed them away of course! I won't just let them grope me as they please!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "I pushed them away, of course! I won't just let them grope me as they please!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "But...{w=0.3} I did tell them right after -- if they're kind to me during the game -- that I'll reward them handsomely for it..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "Not that I have any intentions to do so..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Of course not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_intro_E1: cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Can I please go now, Sir?{w} I've done what you asked of me." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Yes, [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You've done a great job today getting closer to beating those pesky Slytherins." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You've done a great job today, you're definitely getting closer to beating those pesky Slytherins." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Thank you, Sir." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "If you remind them of your meeting during the match, then I'm certain their desire to win... will wash away." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "downR") @@ -495,8 +495,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_E1: cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) pause .5 - cho "Sir, I managed to corner their seeker when he came out of the boys bathroom." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "One of the only times those thugs weren't hanging around with him." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "Sir, I managed to corner their seeker when he came out of the boys' bathroom." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "It's one of the few times those thugs weren't hanging around with him, you see." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Him?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Malfoy..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") cho "I cornered him and pushed him back into the bathroom." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -509,10 +509,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_E1: gen "Impressive!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And what was his reaction?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "At first he was mostly surprised by the circumstance..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - cho "But then I clenched my cheeks so he could get a good feel of what a real athlete feels like." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "But then I clenched my cheeks, so he could get a good feel of what a real athlete feels like." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "When that happened he went from surprised to shocked." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "You should have seen it.{w=0.6} I was actually not as repulsed as I thought I might be." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "It was quite thrilling actually." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "It was quite thrilling, actually." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Why wouldn't you be, you've worked hard on your body." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now you're starting to see some of the benefits." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Yeah... yeah! You're right!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T2_intro_E3: gen "They are ruthless!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What exactly did they want from you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They questioned me..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "About what I'm up to. What my plan is. Why I'm acting...{w=0.8} strangely." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "downR") + cho @ cheeks blush "About what I'm up to... What my plan is, and why I'm acting...{w=0.8} strangely." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "downR") gen "Strangely? In what way?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Typically, girls from other houses don't talk to boys from Slytherin..." ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Not to mention flirt with them!" ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -730,7 +730,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_twins: call cho_walk(action="enter", xpos="desk", ypos="base") stop music fadeout 1.0 - gen "Back so soo--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Back so soon--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" (face="angry", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) @@ -759,24 +759,24 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_twins: gen "Or maybe even a--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Could you start acting serious for just one moment?!" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "I'm berry serious." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*urghhhh*! I can't believe you!" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") # Angry noises + cho "*Urghhhh*! I can't believe you!" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") # Angry noises gen "Alright, alright. Tell me what happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What does it look like what happened?" ("upset", "base", "angry", "down") - gen "Well, to me it looks like you caught a case of the smurfs." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, to me, it looks like you caught a case of the smurfs." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Those bloody twins!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "downR") cho "They tricked me into eating one of their darn sweets!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") cho "You should lock those two up..." ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "I wish I could've been there..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "WHAT?" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid") + cho "{size=+4}WHAT!?{/size}" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "To stop them I mean!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "So, why did you come straight to me and not go to your dorm?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And pass through my common room?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") - cho "No thank you... your office was the closest thing to their stupid shop." ("clench", "base", "angry", "R") + cho "No, thank you... Your office was the closest thing to their stupid shop." ("clench", "base", "angry", "R") if not item_store_intro_done: gen "Shop? What shop?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Are you kidding me? Surely you must know about them and their shady businesses." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "Are you kidding me? Surely, you must know about them and their shady businesses." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "I have no clue what you're talking about." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") cho "Don't you have any spare robes or anything?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -788,13 +788,13 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_twins: gen "You'll figure something out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "What!?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "You want me to just go out there without any clothes on?" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid") - gen "Of course... seems like a great exercise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course... Seems like a great exercise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Exercise? How is this an exercise to you?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "down") gen "An exercise in confidence, [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You have got to be joking..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "So, you're not going to help me?" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "This one's on you [name_cho_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "*Grrrr*, Whatever..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "*Grrrr*, whatever..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_ron: cho "No, that's about it." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Great, then that will be all for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Good night then..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Good night Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good night, Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -885,8 +885,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_harry: cho "Yes!" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I've been stalk--{w=0.4} *Ehh*...{w=0.2} Following them... And sure enough, I managed to find the perfect opportunity!" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") cho "I was flying by the divination tower and noticed that Hermione and her friends were standing by one of the windows." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "Luckily Ron and Hermione's backs were turned towards me, so it was easy to grab Harry's attention without them noticing me." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Nice, gave him a bit of a show then I presume?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Luckily ,Ron and Hermione's backs were turned towards me, so it was easy to grab Harry's attention without them noticing me." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + gen "Nice, gave him a bit of a show then, I presume?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course..." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R") #smirk cho "And I found something out." ("crooked_smile", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "That boy has a broom fetish!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_T3_harry: gen "Whoa!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "*U ikhe*?" ("open_wide_tongue", "wink", "raised", "mid") #Tongue still out gen "Very much...{w=0.4} But what about Potter?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Naturally he completely lost focus on their conversation, so Hermione followed his gaze and finally spotted me through the window." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "Naturally, he completely lost focus on their conversation, so Hermione followed his gaze and finally spotted me through the window." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "R") cho "And after staring daggers at me, she yanked the boys away by their robes, almost making them tumble down the stairs." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Looks like you have her well jealous at this point!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #This is a bit of a British slang gen "Hopefully this should be enough to affect her during the finals." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "I'll be back before you can say blueberry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #TODO Genie walks past Cho to the door and turns to her, she turns as he stops gen "But personally, I don't really see why it's such an issue." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I've been known to turn blue and swell up as well and you don't see me complaining." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've been known to turn blue and swell up as well, and you don't see me complaining." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -964,9 +964,9 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Hello." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Hello, Professor Dumbledore." maf "What can I do for you? Would you like a new cloak, or do you require some alterations to an existing item?" - gen "Neither thank you, I'm just here to make a few inquiries." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Neither, thank you, I'm just here to make a few inquiries." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Of course sir, what can I help you with?" - gen "Firstly, what type of items do you sell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Firstly, what types of items do you sell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Well, I'm a tailor. I make uniforms for the staff and students." maf "I also perform alterations to existing items. This is mainly when a student goes through a growth spurt or gets a hole in their cloak." gen "I see. Do you ever make custom orders?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: maf "Anything I can assist you with?" maf "I just got this new plaid fabric in, I was thinking of turning it into a kilt." maf "It's the perfect garment for letting the old family jewels get some fresh air." - gen "I'm good thank you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm good, thank you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") maf "Then what can I do you for?" gen "Well... As it happens..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: $ d_flag_02 = 3 maf "Are you sure?" - gen "Seems like the safest option all things considered." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Seems like the safest option, all things considered." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How long will it take to get the Ravenclaw uniform ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-\"perfect\" Outfit-" if d_flag_01: @@ -1132,7 +1132,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: cho "But why Slytherin..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "downR") menu: - "{size=-3}\"If you don't like it you can go without any!\"{/size}": + "{size=-3}\"If you don't like it, you can go without any!\"{/size}": cho "What!?" ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "You heard me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I went out of my way to fetch those clothes for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: "\"Sorry...\"": cho "..." ("normal", "wide", "base", "mid") - cho "(Well that's a first...)" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") #taken aback + cho "(Well, that's a first...)" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") #taken aback gen "Sorry for going out of my way to help you!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Sigh*" ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") cho "Why did you think it would be a good idea to pick Slytherin colours..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "downR") #pout @@ -1206,7 +1206,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: $ cho.set_body_hue(0) - cho "Thanks I guess." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", trans=d9) + cho "Thanks, I guess." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down", trans=d9) gen "Speaking of colour..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You're not blue anymore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Finally..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1223,7 +1223,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: # Gryffindor gen "Got it right here!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size, so I chose the next best thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms in your size, so I chose the next best thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" nar "You hand the Gryffindor uniform to Cho." @@ -1299,7 +1299,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: # Hufflepuff gen "Got it right here!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms your size so I went with something mellow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "She didn't have any Ravenclaw uniforms in your size, so I went with something mellow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg" nar "You hand the Hufflepuff uniform to Cho." @@ -1342,8 +1342,8 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: "\"That's true, maybe you should just head back naked...\"": cho "What!?" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "You heard me, make like a bee and buzz off!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And you better hurry up before those sweets wear off or you'll find it even harder to explain your current state." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "But... Surely you can't be serious!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + gen "And you better hurry up before those sweets wear off, or you'll find it even harder to explain your current state." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho @ cheeks blush "But... Surely, you can't be serious!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "I am neither Shirley nor Sirius..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Grrr*... I can't believe you!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -1427,7 +1427,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_boys_twins_branch: gen "Smurfabunga!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") #Looking livid #red cheeks - gen "I think some colour has started to return on your cheeks!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I think some colour has started to return to your cheeks!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I also got you this wig." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I am not wearing the wig!" ("clench", "wide", "angry", "mid") cho "I can't believe you!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy index b49b8bb4..28b7a920 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_start: gen "Which means it's even more important to try and entice those girls before the match itself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "base", "raised", "down") gen "It's all about throwing them off their game, like you said..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If the girls won't get thrown off by you wearing some outfit, then maybe an emotional... Bond... Would be more appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If the girls won't get thrown off by you wearing some outfit, then maybe an emotional... bond... would be more appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Don't you think we'd have an easier time focusing on the boys?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Sometimes the hard route is the right one to take... You shouldn't dismiss it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Since those girls sound freaky...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_alicia: gen "But I'm sure you liked sneaking a peek at her moist muff, regardless." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "How was I to know she wasn't wearing any panties..." ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") # annoyed gen "Be that as it may, this Alicia girl seems to be one step ahead of us..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So, what happened next B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So, what happened next, B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "She started kissing me again, and placed a hand on one of my butt cheeks..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Correction, she's two steps ahead of us..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sounds to me like you got a fan on the Gryffindor team..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_alicia: gen "Not kissing specifically..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "down") gen "And now I'd like you to entice the other two as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Sure, no problem... I'll just walk up to one of them and they'd throw themselves at me, just like Spinnet did!" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R") #Sarcastic + cho @ cheeks blush "Sure, no problem... I'll just walk up to one of them, and they'd throw themselves at me, just like Spinnet did!" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R") #Sarcastic gen "Great plan!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But for now, you better get some rest and ready yourself to take on the other two." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -233,10 +233,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "All the details..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "So...{w=0.4} Much like before, my plan was to follow Katie as she wandered off, away from the others." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "And to no surprise... She was once again making her way down towards the lake." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "So I ran up to her and questioned her on where she was headed, and she responded that she was just going for a walk to clear her head." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "So I ran up to her and questioned her about where she was headed, and she responded that she was just going for a walk to clear her head." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "That's what I said..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "So, to try and catch her off guard I bluntly asked her if she wasn't going for another round with those tentacles." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "So, to try and catch her off guard, I bluntly asked her if she wasn't going for another round with those tentacles." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Whoa, right to the point!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, although she didn't even respond to it, and just started walking again..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "So I pushed her further, and asked what the Gryffindor house would think if they knew..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -246,11 +246,11 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: gen "Such a naughty girl!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I know! That's not at all where I was going with the conversation." ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "What I hadn't realised during my failed attempts at confronting her, it that she had been leading me off the path." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR") - cho @ cheeks blush "Because just as I was about to reply, I felt something tighten around my waist and suddenly I found myself dangling several feet off the ground!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Because just as I was about to reply, I felt something tighten around my waist, and suddenly, I found myself dangling several feet off the ground!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "That's when I realised, she had led me all the way to the Whomping Willow!" ("clench", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") gen "The whomping what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "That darn tree, students are told to stay away from..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "It had grabbed both Katie and I, and then lifted us into the air... I thought we were done for." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "It had grabbed both Katie and me, and then lifted us into the air... I thought we were done for." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "And for a brief moment, we just dangled there, until the silence was cut short by a loud snapping sound and a yell." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Terrifying!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "It was! Until I realised the tree wasn't even trying to kill us..." ("upset", "closed", "angry", "mid") @@ -276,10 +276,10 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: gen "Now you can forever cherish this moment with Katie... and that spanking willow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Whomping, Sir." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "And I just took it for what it was... Endurance training! There's nothing wrong with that..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Whatever you want to call it, I do it at least once or twice a day myself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Whatever you want to call it, I do it at least once or twice a day, myself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Anyhow... After a couple more minutes, the tree finally stopped smacking us, and I was able to catch my breath..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Sounds like a great workout." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, it was a workout and a half that's for sure!" ("horny", "base", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, it was a workout and a half, that's for sure!" ("horny", "base", "base", "down") gen "Then maybe we should incorporate it into your training." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "But Sir, the Whomping Willow is still extremely dangerous!" ("mad", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Everybody knows to stay as far away from it as possible!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part1: cho @ cheeks blush "I bet I ruined it anyway..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "Because as soon as the tree lowered us back to the ground, Katie rushed off." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "So I couldn't even talk to her..." ("clench", "base", "base", "down") - gen "You kidding me? Talking would've just ruined it at that point!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're kidding me? Talking would've just ruined it at that point!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You just had an amazing experience together, and didn't exchange a word throughout the entire thing. There's no better emotional bonding than that..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("mad", "happyCl", "base", "down") #Blushing gen "Well, I'd say we're one step closer to taking on the Lions for the finals." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -337,17 +337,17 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: cho @ cheeks blush "I had to fight its grip, to at least get some form of control back..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "But that was easier said than done, as the tree had already snaked some of its branches underneath my clothes... sliding them right off my body." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Nice! Just like that?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Well I tried to grab them... but it had already moved its branches away from me..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Well, I tried to grab them... But it had already moved its branches away from me..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") gen "What happened to your reflexes... Are you being bested by a tree now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No. I simply let it do its thing to...{w=0.4} impress Katie..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "I'm sure she didn't mind that her clothing got taken off as well... that slut." ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "(As well?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "Just eyeing me up and down like a piece of meat... right up until..." ("clench", "base", "base", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "Just eyeing me up and down like a piece of meat... And that's when..." ("clench", "base", "base", "R") gen "Yes?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "The tree threw one of its branches about and swung it at us, smacking our butts..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "That's when the tree threw one of its branches about and swung it at us, smacking our butts..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "Got to bless mother nature!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "And It just kept doing it, over and over, until our cheeks turned all red..." ("clench", "base", "base", "downR") - cho @ cheeks blush "It was as if my body was on fire!" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "It was as if my body had caught on fire!" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "As it continued, Katie looked up at me and reached out to grab my hand..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "And as I finally managed to grab it, the tree smacked us hard across our cheeks." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "And with that pain came a sudden rush of relief as Katie tightened her hand around mine." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_katie_part2: gen "Never mind... did anything else happen after that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Not much, as far as I recall..." ("base", "base", "base", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "All I remember is the tree lowering us to the ground and the sound of Katie's breathing..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "I just laid there for a while, catching my breath, until the only thing I could hear was the sound of the forest around me..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "I just laid there for a while, catching my breath, until the only thing I could hear was the sound of the surrounding forest..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Almost sounds poetic." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Once I recovered, I turned to face Katie, but once again, she had already gone..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Now that's how it's done!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina: cho @ cheeks blush "Well...{w=0.4} I went to see if I could catch Angelina talking to Madam Hooch again." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "I was determined to get the full context of what was going on this time!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "I immediately went and hid in the boys changing room as soon as they had gone for lunch to listen in." ("soft", "base", "base", "L") - cho @ cheeks blush "Although I got there a bit early and they were still in the showers, touching each other, and gossiping.." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "Although I got there a bit early, and they were still in the showers, touching each other, and gossiping..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Hooch and Johnson?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "No, the girls on the Gryffindor team!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina: cho @ cheeks blush "Because...{w=0.3} I...{w=0.4} Well, I didn't blow it, okay!?" ("open", "base", "angry", "downR") cho @ cheeks blush "I wasn't going to let her undress me like that... Instead, I grabbed her hands and put them under my bra to let her play with my breasts." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "Luckily she didn't seem to think much of it and began massaging them." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "Angelina on the other hand was not convinced... telling the other girls to step aside..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down") + cho @ cheeks blush "Angelina on the other hand, was not convinced... And she told the other girls to step aside..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down") cho @ cheeks blush "Which they did...{w=0.4} Both Alicia and Katie jumped back when Angelina approached me, while staring me down." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Scary..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I don't think I've ever had a girl scrutinize me like that..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") @@ -457,12 +457,12 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina: cho @ cheeks blush "Which took me by such surprise, I tripped and slid down onto the wet floor." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Ouch..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Those Lionesses are animals!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "She didn't even apologize, and just looked down at me, telling me I kiss like a high-schooler..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "She didn't even apologize, and just looked down at me, telling me that I kiss like a high-schooler..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "That said... didn't stop her from crouching down for another... although this time she put her tongue in there." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Straight in there!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I hope you returned the favour!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "I tried to... but as I attempted it, she stopped and stood back up." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") - cho @ cheeks blush "So I tried doing the same, but when I steadied myself to get up, she put her foot beneath my skirt and pressed it against my panties which made me slide back down onto the floor." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "So I tried doing the same, but when I steadied myself to get up, she put her foot beneath my skirt and pressed it against my panties, which made me slide back down onto the floor." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Then, turning back to the others, she started chastising them even further, about how she was still mad at them for doing what they did..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "But when doing so, she also started rubbing her foot up and down against my panties." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy index 1a58b776..cf952b12 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_boys.rpy @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: cho "Where do you get all these ideas from... seriously." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's your cup-size, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") #Blushes - cho "You're such an old pervert, you know that right?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") + cho "You're such an old pervert, you know that, right?" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") cho "And it's B cup actually..." ("open", "base", "base", "downR") #Blushes and glances to the side gen "Noted..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "So..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") #pondering @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: gen "No-no... You don't get it, we use code words here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "This is a secret operation!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "You want me to give you a nickname?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "I think codename would be the appropriate term." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I think a \"codename\" would be the appropriate term." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: @@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: gen "Ready for some more espionage B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Of course!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Who are we targeting today?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "The keeper... Tom or whatever his name was." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The keeper... Tom, or whatever his name was." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Ron..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, yes. That guy!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "And what would you have me do?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Spy on him of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Spy on him, of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "See if there's anything we can use against him during the match." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Fine... I'll do my best, but don't get your hopes up..." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") gen "You'll do excellent B, now make haste!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -95,9 +95,9 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_start: gen "Am I? That's how Snape says it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right... So, what is it that you want me to do with him?" ("open", "base", "raised", "downR") gen "I'll tell you what you shouldn't do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Don't share your wine with him or he'll drink it all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Don't share your wine with him, or he'll drink it all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Harry drinks your wine?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") - cho "This isn't one of your weird euphemisms again is it?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "This isn't one of your weird euphemisms again, is it?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "I was talking about Snape." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I see..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Anyhow..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -142,11 +142,11 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_twins: cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) gen "Mission successful?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, in terms of not getting caught I suppose so." ("angry", "closed", "base", "down") + cho "Well, in terms of not getting caught, I suppose so." ("angry", "closed", "base", "down") gen "Then spill those beans B, what did you manage to learn about them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They're pigs. I'll tell you that much." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Well, I guess calling them pigs is a bit uncalled for. They're a pair of pranksters that's for sure." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + cho "Well, I guess calling them pigs is a bit uncalled-for... They're a pair of pranksters, that's for sure." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "Those two would do anything for a laugh..." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "So, what did they do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "They tricked some poor Hufflepuff girls by giving them sweets that they had tampered with..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "downR") @@ -156,13 +156,13 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_twins: cho "How is that funny!?" ("angry", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "What if the girl was Hermione?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "I suppose...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} No it's still..." ("soft", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") + cho "I suppose...{w=0.4} No...{w=0.4} No, it's still not--" ("soft", "happyCl", "angry", "mid") gen "She'd look like a blueberry with a huge wig draped on top of it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "*Giggles*" ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho @ cheeks blush "Anyhow...{w=0.4} It completely ruined her clothes, and as she deflated she quickly ran off stark naked and crying to her dormitory." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Wait, so the clothes didn't expand as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "It's not a spell... she ate it, so why would her clothes be affected?" ("clench", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Sounds like amateurish magic to me... If they just imbued those sweets with some sort of effect which allows the consumers sweat to permeate their clothes then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sounds like amateurish magic to me... If they just imbued those sweets with some sort of effect which allows the consumer's sweat to permeate their clothes, then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("disgust", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} I suppose I better have a word with those two..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Please do..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_twins: gen "Then that will be it for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Okay then." ("open", "base", "base", "R") cho "Good night." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Good night Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good night, Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_ron: cho "Well, I'm certain about one thing... That boy is a perv." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") cho "Before Hermione caught me, I could tell he was checking her out any time he could." ("open", "base", "angry", "downR") cho "It's quite sad really, you could tell from a mile off that she has no interest in him whatsoever." ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "Maybe he's not mature enough for his age, but once his character develops then love and attraction could unexpectedly come into fruition." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Maybe he's not mature enough for his age, but once his character develops, then love and attraction could unexpectedly come into fruition." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "*Pfff*... What kind of soppy romance novels have you been reading?" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") cho "In any case... He comes off as the clingy type... If anything ever happened between them, it'd probably be out of pity on Hermione's part..." ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "And here I thought you'd make the assumption Miss Granger is sleeping with her friends." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_ron: gen "Our mission continues..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Right..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "I'll be going then... Good night." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Good night Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good night, Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") @@ -236,8 +236,8 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_harry: cho "This is such a waste of time..." ("open", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "I gather you didn't get any useful information?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "downR") - cho "I've been hiding in the boys bathroom, trying to listen in on Harry and Ron." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Why in the boys bathroom?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "I've been hiding in the boys' bathroom, trying to listen in on Harry and Ron." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "Why in the boys' bathroom?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "That's the only time Hermione isn't around..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "downR") gen "I see, then what were they talking about?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Ron was going on about wizard's chess." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_boys_T3_harry: gen "Yes, that will be all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "Good..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") cho @ cheeks blush "Good night then..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Good night Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Good night, Miss Chang." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Cho leaves. call cho_walk(action="leave") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy index b1c760ce..bb8335eb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy @@ -37,12 +37,12 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_start: cho @ cheeks blush "My cup-size?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "That's right." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "But that's not even correct! Mine is--" ("disgust", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - cho @ cheeks blush "I mean...{w=0.4} Where do you get all these ideas from... Seriously!?" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho @ cheeks blush "I mean...{w=0.4} Where do you get all these ideas from, seriously!?" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "So what's your actual size then?{w} B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") #Blushes - cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes it's B..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "downR") #Blushes and glances to the side + cho @ cheeks heavy_blush "Yes, it's B..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "downR") #Blushes and glances to the side gen "Noted..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho @ cheeks blush "You're such an old pervert, you know that right?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho @ cheeks blush "You're such an old pervert, you know that, right?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") else: # Player has spied on the boys @@ -139,13 +139,13 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_start: cho "..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You can't get caught when you spy on her Johnson--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean-- when you spy on Johnson..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Of course... So what--" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Of course... So, what--" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Utmost!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Importance!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "So are you ready, B?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - cho "Yes I'm ready..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") + cho "Yes, I'm ready..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Don't get spotted!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Until later then..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_alicia: cho "I saw her whisper something into another student's ear..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "And as if on command -- they immediately followed her into the girls' toilets." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "A girl that takes what she wants... I respect that." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A girl who takes what she wants... I respect that." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "So, what was she doing with them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Do you really have to ask, [name_genie_cho]?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_katie: gen "Mission successful?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What did you learn about Katie Bell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "She's a freak!" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") # angry - gen "Whoa, that's a bit uncalled for, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Whoa, that's a bit uncalled-for, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'm sure she looks perfectly fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No, not her looks... what she's been doing." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") # blush cho "I followed her all the way down to the lake today. And then hid behind a tree to observe her." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -339,8 +339,8 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_katie: gen "That's...{w=0.4} odd..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Perhaps she's a mermaid?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "I highly doubt that, seeing that she has legs..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Although, for a moment I did consider that the mermaids living there -- might have used their songs to charm her..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "up") - gen "Well that's not concerning at all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + cho "Although, for a moment, I did consider that the mermaids living there -- might have used their songs to charm her..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "up") + gen "Well, that's not concerning at all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "She did resurface a couple of moments later though... just as I began to worry..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "But she emerged with a huge splash -- as she had been lifted into the air by some giant tentacles!" ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Whoa, tentacles!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_angelina: gen "*Hmm*... Not a bad idea, now that I think about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "We should try that as well." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "No! I don't want to win by cheating!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Yes, cause distracting hardly counts as cheating..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, because distracting hardly counts as cheating..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "Well of course it doesn't! It's within the rules!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") cho "We need to do something about it, before Angelina tries to take advantage of the situation..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy index 26bbc1bf..dc45b34e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: nar "Focusing your attention on the girl's breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..." - lun "Great! So what do I have to do to get the Wrackspurts out of them?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "Great! So, what do I have to do to get the Wrackspurts out of them?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} The what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The Wrackspurts, [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Those bloody things." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "They do?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "I've been trying to suppress it the best I can, [name_genie_luna]!" ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well that wont do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, that won't do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Fighting it is what's been holding you...{w=0.4} *Err*...{w=0.4} Them back, [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You need to allow that feeling to build up, or you--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} You won't be able to expel them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "I can't believe I didn't think of that before!" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") nar "Looking up at Luna's face, you notice her expression has changed to that of excitement and lust..." - nar "After a moment of silence, you finally speak up in fear of not being able to finish in time." + nar "After a moment of silence, you finally speak up, in fear of not being able to finish in time." gen "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} So...{w=0.4} Any other areas that you've noticed being unusually sensitive, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Oh, yes [name_genie_luna]!" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "I know!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.2} Why don't you teach me?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Oh, well I don't know, [name_luna_genie]..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... I don't know, [name_luna_genie]..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_luna], please!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") hide luna_main with d3 @@ -311,10 +311,10 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "Alright then!" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I haven't even told you what it is yet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Don't worry [name_genie_luna], I trust you!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "If we're to be able to have you expel these spurts successfully, then you're going to have to venture into a completely new venue of magic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If we're to be able to have you expel these spurts successfully, then you're going to have to venture into an entirely new venue of magic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "New venue of magic..." ("angry", "base", "raised", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "I'm not sure I understand, [name_genie_luna]." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "As you know... These techniques are untested and go beyond normal boundaries of magical conventions." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "As you know... These techniques are untested and go beyond the normal boundaries of magical conventions." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Right." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "It's not the type of magic where you'll have a use for a wand..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Unless it has a vibrate function.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: gen "[name_luna_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") # looks up at genie - gen "Now that's the kind of self determination I've been looking for!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now that's the kind of self-determination I've been looking for!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Check out those tits!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if luna.is_worn("bottom"): @@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: gen "*Hmm*... Those panties though...{w=0.4} I'd love to smell them..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #Luna takes of Panties and everything else (Panty strip is not possible in wardrobe until next tier) + #Luna takes off Panties and everything else (Panty strip is not possible in wardrobe until next tier) play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ luna.strip("clothes") with d3 @@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: nar "Luna grinds her legs together once more, and you notice a wet streak beginning to run down her leg." gen "Good girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Then come up to me so we can deal with those spurts, once and for all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Then come up to me, so we can deal with those spurts, once and for all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Thank you [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") #Luna quickly walks up towards desk, fades to black @@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: hide screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Before moving on, you can't help but pick up the sounds of her shallow breaths and the unusual warmth, despite her current state of undress coming off her body." + nar "Before moving on, you can't help but pick up the sounds of her shallow breaths and the unusual warmth, despite her current state of undress, coming off her body." nar "You feel your cock harden slightly beneath your robes, almost at the verge of pressing up in between the girl's cheeks." gen "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} So...{w} The sensitive areas we discussed previously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*..." ("soft", "closed", "low", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=dissolve) @@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "(Is...{w=0.4} Is that his...)" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "downL") call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_grope_breasts_naked") - nar "Arching her back up again, Luna's cheeks slides over your cock once more, which is enough to bring you over the edge." + nar "Arching her back up again, Luna's cheeks slide over your cock once more, which is enough to bring you over the edge." gen "*ARGH*!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "stare") #surprised @@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: lun "Cum, [name_genie_luna]..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "Oh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well it was your first time...{w=0.3} It's not that uncommon for it to end prematurely..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, it was your first time...{w=0.3} It's not that uncommon for it to end prematurely..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "It's not, [name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "stare") gen "Yes...{w=0.3} Actually it's very...{w=0.3} Very common..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I wasn't expecting you to work it--{w=0.2} *Err*...{w=0.3} For it to work the first time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: gen "Yes...{w=0.3} Was there something else [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "Oh...{w=0.3} No that's all, [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) + lun @ cheeks blush "Oh...{w=0.3} No, that's all, [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) hide luna_main @@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Luna absentmindedly walks up and scoots in front of you." + nar "Luna absent-mindedly walks up and scoots in front of you." if luna.is_any_worn("top", "bottom", "robe"): call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_idle") @@ -691,13 +691,13 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: gen "Then tell me...{w=0.3} What else have we learned about them thus far?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Uhm*..." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR") lun "We have learned that you can lure them out to a particularly sensitive body area, through positive thoughts. Then, you need to rub that spot energetically to finally expel them..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - lun "But we already have tried that [name_genie_luna], and it didn't work!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") + lun "But we have already tried that [name_genie_luna], and it didn't work!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I managed to do it by myself...{w=0.3} So you must have done something wrong..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Hmm*..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "(Putting the pieces together...{w=0.3} And...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh! I know!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "stare") lun "I was possibly thinking too much about the wrackspurts, and how glad I'd be to finally get rid of them." ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") - lun "What I should have done instead is project positive thoughts onto the area itself!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") + lun "What I should have done instead was project positive thoughts onto the area itself!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Exactly!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Ignore intrusive thoughts that may pop into your head, and just focus on your body, on how it feels..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let the sensations engulf you completely, until your mind is clear..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -707,7 +707,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: lun "Yes, I'm ready [name_genie_luna]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") if luna.is_any_worn("robe", "top", "bottom", "accessory"): - gen "Lets get you out of those clothes first, shall we..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let's get you out of those clothes first, shall we..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Now, let me help you get you out of those pesky undergarments..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -740,10 +740,10 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: lun "Okay, I'll try." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") if luna.is_worn("bottom", "panties"): - nar "Noticing Luna's ever increasing excitement, you put your hands on either side of her hips, and pull both fabrics down, in one singular motion..." + nar "Noticing Luna's ever-increasing excitement, you put your hands on either side of her hips, and pull both fabrics down, in one singular motion..." $ luna.strip("bottom", "panties") elif luna.is_worn("bottom"): - nar "Noticing Luna's ever increasing excitement, you put your hands on either side of her hips, and pull the fabric down swiftly..." + nar "Noticing Luna's ever-increasing excitement, you put your hands on either side of her hips, and pull the fabric down swiftly..." elif luna.is_worn("panties"): nar "You oggle Luna's choice of underwear, before swiftly pulling them down right to her ankles..." @@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Mmmm*..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - nar "Luna, getting more and more excited by your touch pushes her ass towards you once more." + nar "Luna, getting more and more excited by your touch, pushes her ass towards you once more." call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_breasts_naked") nar "As it graces your cock, you struggle not to get hard..." @@ -837,7 +837,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: stop background fadeout 2 nar "You stop your movement for a second to give Luna some breathing room, but as you do, she starts moving her hips back and forth on her own." - gen "(Never mind then...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Never mind, then...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Tsk*... Such impatience with the youths these days..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") #Looks back at you gen "Very well [name_luna_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -897,7 +897,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Luna goes to stand up, but as she does, her legs give way and she slumps forward, completely limp onto your desk." + nar "Luna attempts to stand up, but her legs give way, and she slumps forward onto your desk, completely limp." nar "Luckily her grip around your fingers finally loosens enough for you to free yourself, and you swiftly pull them out, which causes her to shudder once more." play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg" @@ -920,17 +920,17 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro: lun "Did you see how many Wrackspurts I expelled?" ("crooked_smile", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Very impressive indeed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I can't believe we finally did it!" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - lun "Finally, a fool proof way of expelling wrackspurts from other areas than your brain!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "Finally, a foolproof way of expelling Wrackspurts from other areas than your brain!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Quite the discovery! I'm sure we'll be able to help a lot of backed up people." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") lun "So, what next? We've solved it now, right?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Solved--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now I think you're getting a bit ahead of yourself [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "But--" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Masturbation is only a temporary solution, so perfecting it is vital... Until I've come up with a more permanent solution that is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Masturbation is only a temporary solution, so perfecting it is vital... Until I've come up with a more permanent solution, that is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Then I'll practice as soon as I get to my dorm!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "No!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I need to watch--{w=0.2} *Err*...{w=0.4} Instruct you so you can alleviate yourself properly and safely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I need to watch--{w=0.2} *Err*...{w=0.4} Instruct you, so you can alleviate yourself properly and safely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh, of course [name_genie_luna]!" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") lun "Hopefully the Wrackspurts will leave me alone until then..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") #blush looking down gen "Hopefully..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -973,13 +973,13 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat: lun "Although I began feeling them move around again once I was on the way to my dorm, just thinking about our last session." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "Well, that's to be expected." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Until we've found a fool proof way to deal with them, I'm afraid this will have make do as a regular treatment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Until we've found a foolproof way to deal with them, I'm afraid this will have make do as a regular treatment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Alright..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL") lun "I suppose that's not too bad." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Good to hear..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now then, ready for your treatment, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes [name_genie_luna]..." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Great, then come here and we'll get started." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great, then come here, and we'll get started." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #Luna walks towards desk and it fades to black call lun_walk("desk") @@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat: gen "[name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh...{w=0.2} Sorry, [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") lun "Your hands are a bit cold." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare") - gen "Then let's get them warmed up shall we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Then let's get them warmed up, shall we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You spread your fingers apart and drag them across the sides of Luna's nipples, increasing your grip around them with each motion." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "How's this, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1076,7 +1076,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat: play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg" lun @ cheeks blush "*AAAAAH*!!!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "up") - nar "Luna's thighs clenches around you, as waves of pleasure washes over her." + nar "Luna's thighs clench around you, as waves of pleasure washes over her." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.2} I'm...{w=0.2} I'm--" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "stare") @@ -1210,7 +1210,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat: call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_breasts_naked") nar "You pinch Luna's nipples again, and being fully ready for it this time, you only hear a short intake of breath." lun @ cheeks blush "" ("soft", "base", "base", "up") - nar "Releasing your grip of her nipples, you begin brushing your fingertips along the sides of her breasts, up and around her nipples." + nar "Releasing your grip on her nipples, you begin brushing your fingertips along the sides of her breasts, up and around her nipples." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} How...{w=0.4} How strange..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "Luna, now enjoying the heightened sensitivity of her nipples, begins to relax, her breathing slowing down more and more." lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat: lun @ cheeks blush "Please be careful [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") nar "Trying not to give into the temptation, you resume massaging Luna's breasts." - nar "Her breathing soon begins slowing down and you feel her previously tense grip around your legs starting to relaxe." + nar "Her breathing soon begins slowing down, and you feel her previously tense grip around your legs starting to relax." lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat: nar "As you brush up against her, you notice how wet she is already." gen "*Hmm*... Looks like that massage helped after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*..." ("open", "closed", "low", "mid") - nar "Moving your forefinger up and down against Luna, you hear her breathing becoming more and more erratic and you feel your cock twitch slightly against your robes." + nar "Moving your forefinger up and down against Luna, you hear her breathing becoming more and more erratic, and you feel your cock twitch slightly against your robes." gen "(Time to bust this thing wide open...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You stop your movements, giving Luna just a brief moment of anticipation before you push a finger inside." @@ -1292,7 +1292,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat: play background "sounds/slickloopveryfast.ogg" nar "You start rubbing your thumb against Luna's clit as your fingers move rapidly inside her." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("grin", "base", "base", "up") - nar "Luna's moans reverberates around your office and you notice her legs beginning to shake slightly." + nar "Luna's moans reverberates around your office, and you notice her legs beginning to shake slightly." nar "Luna's moans suddenly stops, and she clenches her thighs tight around your hand." call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_idle_naked") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy index db42f681..c15bc341 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro: nar "Luna shifts her thighs together uncomfortably." lun "Yes..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") #seductive gen "That's unfortunate..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well in that case, I think it's time I teach you how to masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, in that case, I think it's time I teach you how to masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Oooh*... I'm finally going to become a master baiter myself, [name_genie_luna]?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "That's right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Marvellous!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro: lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") nar "Luna stares at you intently." gen "Good... Now--" - gen "Remember what we talked about... Locate the affected area, then focus positive thoughts onto it.." + gen "Remember what we talked about... Locate the affected area, then focus positive thoughts onto it..." lun "Right." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Have you found it?" lun "Yes..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -125,13 +125,13 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro: gen "Is everything alright, [name_luna_genie]?" lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3} of course, [name_genie_luna]!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare") lun @ cheeks blush "My fingers are just a bit cold..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "That's fine... Just try rubbing yourself and your fingers will warm up in just a moment." + gen "That's fine... Just try rubbing yourself, and your fingers will warm up in just a moment." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "narrow", "low", "stare") gen "..." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3} is this how it should be done?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "As long as it's feeling good, then I'm sure it's working. Just keep going and you'll soon be rid of those nasty Wickerspoons." + gen "As long as it's feeling good, then I'm sure it's working. Just keep going, and you'll soon be rid of those nasty Wickerspoons." lun @ cheeks blush "I'm glad..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") lun @ cheeks blush "Although it feels a bit different compared to when you helped me..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "That's to be expected... Another person's touch will always feel different to your own." @@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "*Oh*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "You want me to leave already, [name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "If there's nothing else I can help you with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} Well I was just wondering..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + lun @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} Well, I was just wondering..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") lun @ cheeks blush "What do I do if the feeling comes back, [name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Do I just get rid of them myself from now on?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly not!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -301,8 +301,8 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro: jump ll_pf_masturbate.end -##Luna takes off her skirt and later on her top. She fingers herself for the first time -##She doesn't squirt in this event but will on the third event. +##Luna takes off her skirt and later on, her top. She fingers herself for the first time +##She doesn't squirt in this event, but will, druing the third event. label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro: @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro: nar "Luna gives you a look of excitement from your proposition..." lun @ cheeks blush "Well, I do feel inclined to take you up on that offer." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") - gen "It's not an offer, [name_luna_genie]. If we are to make any progress, then I require you to take off your bottoms so I can watch you masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It's not an offer, [name_luna_genie]. If we are to make any progress, then I require you to take off your bottoms. so I can watch you masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") nar "Luna's body twitches slightly, looking at her face, you get the feeling she's pondering on something." @@ -344,14 +344,14 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro: gen "(What is she on about now?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Yes, my body appears to have reacted to your proposition..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") gen "Your body is reacting to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I mean, yes that makes perfect sense... Your body does tell you when you're hungry so why wouldn't it try and help you get rid of those spurts too." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean, yes! That makes perfect sense... Your body does tell you when you're hungry, so why wouldn't it try and help you get rid of those spurts too." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Ten points to Ravenclaw." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ ravenclaw += 10 lun @ cheeks blush "Thank you [name_genie_luna]." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Very well then, let's give your body what it needs... Take your bottoms off--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") #Horny lun @ cheeks blush "Yes, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "And do come a bit closer so I can get a proper look..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And do come a bit closer, so I can get a proper look..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Okay." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") #Luna chibi walks to desk @@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "It's--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.3} It's weird...{w=0.3} I almost feel glad I've got them..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Getting rid of them feels...{w=0.4} so...{w=0.3} so...{w=0.3}{nw}" ("angry", "closed", "low", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Getting rid of them feels... so... so...{fast} good..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare") - gen "The positive feelings must be your body telling you that you're doing the right thing expelling them..." + gen "The positive feelings must be your body telling you that you're doing the right thing, by expelling them..." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up") lun @ cheeks blush "I must be...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Expelling a lot of them then..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*... [name_genie_luna], I'm feeling hot all over..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro: gen "I'd even go as far to say that you were born to do this." lun @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") - lun @ cheeks blush "Well I'm not so sure about that..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "Well, I'm not so sure about that..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Although I must say...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I've been enjoying these sessions a fair bit, [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "They are starting to become all I can think about..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Do you think that's a bad thing?" @@ -690,7 +690,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "{size=+4}*Mmm*...{fast} Yes...{heart}{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3}{nw}" ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{fast} [name_genie_luna], I think I'm..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") - nar "Luna's fingers moves in a flurry, as she continues pumping them into her needy slit." + nar "Luna's fingers move in a flurry, as she continues pumping them into her needy slit." lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{heart}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up") gen "Good girl...{w=0.3} Now--" @@ -772,10 +772,10 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro: gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Don't you think she meant my fingers, [name_genie_luna]?" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Hold on that can't be it... My fingers aren't new... I've had them for as long as I can remember." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") + lun "Hold on... That can't be it... My fingers aren't new... I've had them for as long as I can remember." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") lun "What do you think it is, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Something new within her... Why does future telling always have to be so vague...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "*Hmm*... Well I can't say that I..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... Well, I can't say that I..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Hold on...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Huh*? Did you have a revelation, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "You've just given me a great idea!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat: gen "Patience, [name_luna_genie]..." lun "Sorry [name_genie_luna]..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "So, how does it feel now? Any different?" - lun "*Ehm*... It's a bit more hard than before..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + lun "*Ehm*... It feels a bit harder than before..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "That's good, now try it a bit more gently and tell me if anything changes..." lun "Alright..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") nar "Luna pinches her nipple more carefully this time, and an involuntary moan escapes her lips." @@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat: gen "Of course!" gen "Didn't you enjoy watching me?" lun "Oh...{w=0.4} I suppose I did." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Now undress for me so I can watch you relieve yourself properly..." + gen "Now undress for me, so I can watch you relieve yourself properly..." lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" @@ -985,7 +985,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Luna turns around to face you and gives you a smile, seemingly still pleased with herself even though she couldn't get a proper look through her glasses..." + nar "Luna turns around to face you and gives you a smile, seemingly still pleased with herself, even though she couldn't get a proper look through her glasses..." # End of masturbate section @@ -1001,15 +1001,15 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat: #Luna is still naked gen "So... How are you feeling?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "As if my mind have been cleared of a thick fog." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) - gen "Ah yes... The post nut clarity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "As if my mind has been cleared of a thick fog." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) + gen "Ah yes... The post-nut clarity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The what? sorry?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "The perfect time to make the big life decisions..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I'm not sure I understand what you mean, [name_genie_luna]." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "It only gets more difficult at this point, now that you've mastered the art of masturbation [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Mastered master baiting?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") #confused - gen "If we want to get rid of those spurts for good then we need to keep trying new methods." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Oh! Well I'm willing to do anything that it takes to save the school [name_genie_luna]!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "If we want to get rid of those spurts for good, then we need to keep trying new methods." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Oh! Well, I'm willing to do anything that it takes to save the school [name_genie_luna]!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "That's what I like to hear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then that shall be all for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Okay, thank you [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1038,12 +1038,12 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat: pause .5 lun "There we go." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - lun "I'm so used to walking around naked at home so I didn't even realise..." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + lun "I'm so used to walking around naked at home, so I didn't even realise..." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "You walk around naked at home?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes?" ("base", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "(No wonder she didn't look phased by taking her clothes off...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How very progressive..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "It means there's less places for the Nargles to hide in you see." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "That way, there are fewer places for the Nargles to hide." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I see..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Just smile and nod...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well then... I'll let you know when our next session will be [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 8648fefb..a46f3532 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E1_intro: gen "Yes, yes... But what about the girl that made those weird noises? Tell me about her!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Well, I never saw her, [name_genie_luna]." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") lun "I just observed her aura. It was so fascinating!" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "But... What ever they're doing to be making auras red..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "downL") + lun "But... Whatever they're doing to be making auras red..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "(Come on, say something naughty already!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "(*Tsk*... Auras...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -155,9 +155,9 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E1_intro: lun "But [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Once we have a way to properly deal with them then I'm sure we could administer the cure without causing a fuss." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You believe there's a cure for something like this, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I have a theory... If it works then it should let us expel those spurty buggers." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I have a theory... and If it works, then it should let us expel those spurty buggers." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You've found a way to expel them on command?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Well I wouldn't say on command... Now that is beyond even my own capabilities..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I wouldn't say on command... Now that is beyond even my own capabilities..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I need to conduct some more tests, and once that's done, I'll put it into practice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh! I can't wait!" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: lun "Is it working?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Give me a moment..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You move your gaze to the girl's chest, rubbing your hardening cock with increasing pace." + nar "You move your gaze to the girl's chest, while rubbing your hardening cock with increased pace." lun "What is it that you're doing?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -238,14 +238,14 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes...{w=0.3} I'm waving my wand all right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I knew it!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - nar "As you continue stroking your cock, you watch as Luna's moment of excitement turn into confusion once more." + nar "As you continue stroking your cock, you watch as Luna's moment of excitement turns into confusion once more." lun "Is it supposed to take this long?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes...{w=0.3} Sometimes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Sometimes?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") lun "Isn't this the first time you're trying this?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} I just need to focus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Oooh... So like the Patronus Charm?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "Oooh... So, it's like the Patronus Charm?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} The what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The Patronus... You focus on a Happy memory and if you succeed, a corporeal shape of your spirit animal bursts out from your wand!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes, that's it...{w=0.3} Ten points to Ravenclaw!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: lun @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} And the worst times are when I'm about to go to sleep...{w=0.4} It must be something with my pyjamas..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} They're...{w=0.4} They're bothering me again..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Just keep talking [name_luna_genie], they're sensing the magic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... So it's working, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... So, it's working, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, just keep talking..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "But [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: lun "It's--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} It's like a tingly sensation spreading from between my legs... Almost as If I'm about to wet myself..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") lun "But it's--{w=0.2} It's different...{w=0.4} It feels really good." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - nar "An image of the girl's wet panties runs across your mind and you feel your cock twitch slightly in your hand." + nar "An image of the girl's wet panties runs across your mind, and you feel your cock twitch slightly in your hand." lun "[name_genie_luna]... I don't know how long I can endure this... Please tell me it's working..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E4_repeat: lun "Yes...{w=0.4} Thank you, [name_genie_luna]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Hold on...{w} Actually we may have a little problem..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "A little problem, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "No, wait it's a massive problem! A massive problem has arisen!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, wait! It's a massive problem! A massive problem has arisen!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "There's a massive problem?! [name_genie_luna], why didn't you tell me at the start!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "It just started happening! Come here quick!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "On it!" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E4_repeat: gen "(She might get a heart attack from seeing this battlefield...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's...{w=0.3} I'm fine!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Are you sure, [name_genie_luna]?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes...{w=0.3} *Ahem*...{w=0.3} Nothing a good nap wont sort out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes...{w=0.3} *Ahem*...{w=0.3} Nothing a good nap won't sort out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Okay then..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun "[name_genie_luna]..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -796,8 +796,8 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: menu: "-Be modest-": gen "I'd say it's quite average..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "Really? So they can get bigger than this?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "If you compare it to an elephant trunk that is... Actually when it comes to penis size, mine is absolutely massive!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun @ cheeks blush "Really? So, they can get bigger than this?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") + gen "If you compare it to an elephant trunk that is... Actually, when it comes to penis size, mine is absolutely massive!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's why I'm such a powerful wizard." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The two are directly related." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Over-exaggerate-": @@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: gen "Oh yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Who do you think designed these robes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Me of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Me, of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Ever since I normalised wearing loose-fitting robes, nobody has ever questioned me about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It is truly a curse... Sporting such a massive phallus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I--{w=0.2} I'm sorry [name_genie_luna]... I had no idea..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -822,7 +822,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: gen "Yep..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "How do other people even hide theirs then?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "downL") gen "Oh, you meant compared to other people?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You should've specified... Size is quite relative you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You should've specified... Size is quite relative, you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "This planet is tiny compared to the sun, which is tiny compared to the universe." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Then... How big is it compared to the average person?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Absolutely massive!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -836,12 +836,12 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: lun @ cheeks blush "Wow... I can't believe I didn't know that..." ("angry", "base", "base", "downL") gen "Merlin, Saruman, Gandalf...{w=0.3} Jafar...{w=0.3} What do we all have in common?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I don't--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "We all wear robes! To hide our true power you see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We all wear robes! To hide our true power, you see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Although that last one had a power enlargement...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I see..." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Now if you excuse me, I need to concentrate on this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Of course [name_genie_luna]..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Feel free to tell me more about how big it is by the way... It might help." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Feel free to tell me more about how big it is, by the way... It might help." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... *Ehm*..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") nar "You continue stroking your cock in anticipation as Luna looks at you, pondering what to say." lun @ cheeks blush "Your penis is so big, [name_genie_luna]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy index 6dd9782f..c96d1dfb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label luna_intro_E1: hide pentogram onlayer screens centered "{size=+7}{color=#cbcbcb}20 minutes later...{/color}{/size}" - gen "*Ha-ha*... Good one! Alright, talk to you later Beelzebub!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ha-ha*... Good one! Alright, talk to you later, Beelzebub!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "Beelzebub" "Ah, don't be so formal, just call me Bub." "Beelzebub" "If you ever need some latest {i}hot{/i} news, I'm your guy." call give_reward("Satan's phone number has been added to your contacts list.", "interface/icons/phone.webp") @@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ label luna_intro_E1: gen "Anyway,{w=0.2} how am I supposed to know that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "She's not wearing her school uniform, is she?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I thought our headmaster was supposed to know all of our students..." ("upset", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Even my immense knowledge has its limits dear..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Even my immense knowledge has its limits, dear..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "(Clearly there's more important things occupying your mind...)" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R") # Rolls eyes her "How come you haven't escorted her back yourself, professor?" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ label luna_intro_E1: $ name_luna_genie = "Miss Lovegood" - gen "This so called Miss {i}Lovegood{/i} sleep-walked in here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "This so-called Miss {i}Lovegood{/i} sleep-walked in here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "How am I not surprised." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "P-Professor, what are you wearing?!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Yes, Miss Tonks. What in the great desert sands are you wearing?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -523,9 +523,6 @@ label luna_intro_E2: gen "{size=-4}Oh... It's miss Loony.{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/wallpaper-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed - #lun "Please don't call me that, Sir.." - #gen "My apologies, child." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #gen "Please come closer." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call lun_walk("desk") @@ -594,7 +591,7 @@ label luna_intro_E2: pos (0, 0) easein_quad 2.0 zoom 1.0 pos (-1040, -600) - gen "(Holy shit that ass!)" + gen "(Holy shit... That ass!)" nar "{size=+3}*{b}fap{/b}-fap-{b}fap{/b}*{/size}" gen "*Ugh*... (I'm getting close.)" @@ -649,7 +646,7 @@ label luna_intro_E2: if states.gen.masturbating: gen "There's more where that came from." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "So you can see {i}them{/i} too Professor?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "So you can see {i}them{/i} too, Professor?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "See what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*sigh* Just as expected." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") lun "You could see them if you had one of these." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -661,14 +658,14 @@ label luna_intro_E2: nar "Luna points to the oddly shaped glasses on her nose." gen "Those goofy looking glasses?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Are you planning on winning a masquerade ball or something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Don't be fooled by their look professor, these glasses are infused with magic." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun "Don't be fooled by their look, professor... These glasses are infused with magic." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") lun "They are called {i}Spectrespecs{/i}!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") menu: "\"Spectre-- what?\"": lun "Spectrespecs!" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") lun "They allow the wearer to see things that are there, but hidden." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "And that vapor ware thing on your nose is supposed to help you with that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And that vaporware thing on your nose is supposed to help you with that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Uh-huh!*" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Great..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -679,14 +676,14 @@ label luna_intro_E2: lun "Oh, who you gonna call?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Luigi, he's clearly the superior choice when it comes to fighting ghosts." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Who, sir?" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "Who... How do you not know... The inventor of the Luigi board?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Who... How do you not know... the inventor of the Luigi board?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Huh*?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Never mind." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If not ghosts..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"The theory of the parable fourth dimensional tuples.\"": lun "I'm sorry, sir?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "*sigh* I'm talking about the four-dimensional space, {size=-1}a mathematical{/size} {size=-2}extension of the concept{/size} {size=-3}of three-dimensional or 3D space.{/size} {size=-5}Three-dimensional space{/size}{size=-7} is the simplest possible abstraction of the observation that one only needs three numbers, called dimensions, to describe the sizes or locations of objects in the everyday world.{/size}{size=-10}For example, the volume of a rectangular box is found by measuring and multiplying its length, width, and height (often labeled x, y, and z)...{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Sigh* I'm talking about the four-dimensional space, {size=-1}a mathematical{/size} {size=-2}extension of the concept{/size} {size=-3}of three-dimensional or 3D space.{/size} {size=-5}Three-dimensional space{/size}{size=-7} is the simplest possible abstraction of the observation that one only needs three numbers, called dimensions, to describe the sizes or locations of objects in the everyday world.{/size}{size=-10}For example, the volume of a rectangular box is found by measuring and multiplying its length, width, and height (often labeled x, y, and z)...{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call blkfade centered "{size=+7}{color=#cbcbcb}5 minutes later...{/color}{/size}" call hide_blkfade @@ -699,27 +696,27 @@ label luna_intro_E2: lun "Wrackspurts, sir, and lots of them too!" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Brackspurts?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Wrackspurt sir..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - gen "I see...{w=0.2} *Err* I mean I don't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see...{w=0.2} *Err*, I mean I don't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Is she making all this shit up, or am I supposed to know about these things?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well I can't say I've ever come across these whackspurs you speak of." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I can't say I've ever come across these whackspurs you speak of." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "There's a whole section dedicated to them in {i}the quibbler{/i}, it's a quite fascinating read you know." ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Pretend that I don't know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "{i}The quibbler{/i} is my daddy's magazine, sir." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So is that why you're here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "To advertise your fathers magazine?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "To advertise your father's magazine?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now I must say that's quite bold for a student to just waltz into their headmasters office and shill their--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... No sir!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "downL") lun "I'm just worried that we might have an infestation on our hands and--" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") lun "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") #Luna eyes down pause .5 - nar "Luna gives you an uncomfortable look and then turns her gaze to floor." + nar "Luna gives you an uncomfortable look and then turns her gaze to the floor." gen "An infestation?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes sir. I've come across several swarms of them in a fair few places recently." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "They appeared quite docile at first but recently they've started to become quite problematic..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Well I sure would love to be able to help Miss Lovegood, but as I said this is the first time I even heard about these things..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "They appeared quite docile at first, but recently, they've started to become quite problematic..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + gen "Well, I sure would love to be able to help Miss Lovegood, but as I said this is the first time I even heard about these things..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... But you can help, sir!" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") - lun "You're the most powerful wizard there is so if anyone could deal with them it'd be you..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "You're the most powerful wizard there is, so if anyone could deal with them, it'd be you..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well... I'm not usually the person to brag but..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I am known to have slung some seriously powerful spells around back in the day..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh thank you sir, I knew you'd be able to help!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy index dfcf6f61..b53331eb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy @@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ label spectrespecs_E1: ger "Why on earth would we carry the quibbler?" gen "I don't know... You tell me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Sir, that pile of rubbish is full of nothing but conspiracy theories and old wives tales." - ger "No offence but nobody in their right mind reads the quibbler..." - gen "Well as it happens I do intend to read the thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ger "No offence, but nobody in their right mind reads the quibbler..." + gen "Well, as it happens I do intend to read the thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "{size=-4}We're all doomed...{/size}" fre "Please don't tell me you take that thing seriously, sir..." gen "*Err*...{w=0.3} Of course not...{w=0.3} It's work related." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E1: ger "Obviously, Fred... But you don't need to--" gen "If you have to know... I intend on using it to get a better understanding of what that girl's thought process is like..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "...{w} Well, Good luck with that." - ger "Our sister finds her personality endearing but personally I don't really see any good reason to try and humour her." + ger "Our sister finds her personality endearing, but personally, I don't really see any good reason to try and humour her." gen "(I can think of at least two good reasons...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Two humongous--{w=0.5} Plump,{w=0.2} squishy...{w=0.3} and...{w=0.8} *Err*...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Oh*... bouncy--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E3: gen "(Wait, why did I read the entire thing?!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Those twins were right... Who even buys this trash?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Well, I've read it now so might as well check on Miss Lovegood about this supposed infestation...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Well, I've read it now, so might as well check on Miss Lovegood about this supposed infestation...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ thequibbler_ITEM.owned = 0 $ thequibbler_ITEM.used = True @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: $ states.lun.ev.spectrespecs.e4_complete = True - gen "Alright, so I read that ridiculous magazine but I still don't know what the hell those spratters are supposed to be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, so I read that ridiculous magazine, but I still don't know what the hell those spratters are supposed to be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "My daddy's magazine is not ridiculous, sir..." ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "I mean... If he's the one who wrote those articles..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Our magazine is for the people, by the people!" ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "*Ngh*!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Why aren't they coming out!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Hold on... These are cut outs! What year is this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hold on... These are cut-outs! What year is this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The severing charm should--" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Come here you stupid bird!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Sir, what are you--" ("angry", "base", "raised", "L") @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: with fade - gen "Right then... So I just put these silly things on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Right then... So, I just put these silly things on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes sir... Once you've put them on, you should be able to see--" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") $ wrackspurts_count = 0 @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "(Who brought the UV light?)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(My desk looks like a Jackson Pollock painting!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Do you see them?!" ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "*Err*... No there's nothing in here... Everything just turned purple..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... No, there's nothing in here... Everything just turned purple..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "But... I'm sure I saw some..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Nope... Absolutely no traces of spurts anywhere that I can see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Wrackspurts, sir..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "(Although if I had somewhere else to release my seed, then this wouldn't be a--)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "down") - nar "Through the haze you suddenly notice that Luna is rubbing her thighs together." + nar "Through the haze, you suddenly notice that Luna is rubbing her thighs together." gen "(What the--)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What are you doing, Miss Lovegood?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun @ cheeks blush "I've only heard of people's brain going fuzzy..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "The way you're supposed to get rid of them is to think positive thoughts." ("disgust", "base", "base", "R") lun @ cheeks blush "But this is like an unbearable itch I can't scratch!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "(Oh there's a way... You just don't know it yet...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Oh, there's a way... You just don't know it yet...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Does this happen often?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Daily!" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "They wouldn't leave me alone during today's flying lessons!" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: nar "Luna awkwardly continues to grind her legs together in front of you." gen "(I bet you enjoyed every second of it...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "It was... intense... I could barely keep my broom steady..." ("soft", "closed", "low", "mid") - lun @ cheeks blush "But I didn't want to alarm anyone so I managed to pull through." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + lun @ cheeks blush "But I didn't want to alarm anyone, so I managed to pull through." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") lun @ cheeks blush "But..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down") lun @ cheeks blush "" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") nar "Luna grinds her legs with even more vigour, as she looks into your eyes." @@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun "Yes! I swear I even saw some on Tonks' face!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "On her--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You have to help, sir!" ("mad", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - lun "Please, if what I fear is true then it's not just me being bothered by them..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "Please, if what I fear is true, then it's not just me being bothered by them..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well... Alright then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You'll do it?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -337,11 +337,11 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "But you're going to have to help me, Miss Lovegood." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Me? Why me?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I thought you wanted to help?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Yes but I thought...{w=0.4} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Usually people don't really include me in these sorts of things." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") + lun "Yes, but I thought...{w=0.4} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Usually people don't really include me in these sorts of things." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR") nar "Luna glances away again, and you notice a glimpse of doubt in her eyes for a brief moment." - gen "Most certainly, Miss Lovegood... You have the most experience with these things after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Most certainly, Miss Lovegood... You have the most experience with these things, after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But if you don't want to be involved, then--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "No!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun @ cheeks blush "Of course, sir! I'll do anything that will help me deal with this..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Excellent." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then I shall let you know once I need your assistance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "Yes sir... Thank you sir." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "Yes sir... Thank you, sir." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "On your way now, Miss Lovegood." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... Right..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R")