From 1571daa6f7e0e9c99abb0ac757e82a9c594ec0b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Mon, 9 Sep 2024 15:13:21 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes * Fixed issues reported by Lint. * Minor writing adjustments/fixes. --- .../cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy | 2 +- .../events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy | 2 +- .../hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy | 4 ++-- .../hermione/events/requests/wear_my_cum.rpy | 2 +- .../rooms/main_room/objects/jerk_off.rpy | 4 +--- .../rooms/main_room/objects/phoenix.rpy | 24 +++++++++---------- 7 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy index e6ee52d3..9bf69d95 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy @@ -2459,7 +2459,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14: show cho_handjob eyes_open_narrow_forward as cg with d3 cho "Yes, you're completely right [name_genie_cho]..." - cho "Even though I didn't drink it, I lied, and made you believe that I did... Just so I could fulfill my desires..." + cho "Even though I didn't drink it, I lied, and made you believe that I did... Just so I could fulfil my desires..." play sound "sounds/boing05.ogg" show cho_handjob penis_hard as cg with vpunch diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy index 6f328bd5..b8436dce 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy @@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: her "If you must know...{w=0.4} I was thinking about the time I corrected professor Snape on the ingredients of a \"Hiccoughing Solution\"." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "....." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - her "It was--{w=0.2} /shudder}*Ah*...{/shudder}{w=0.4} {heart} in front of the entire class as well." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") + her "It was--{w=0.2} {shudder}*Ah*...{/shudder}{w=0.4} {heart} in front of the entire class as well." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "He refused to let me answer any questions for a week after that." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "But it was worth it..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") her "The look on his face when he realised he was wrong...{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy index 0a36cef1..0aee0215 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy @@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot pause her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*" show her_forest bj h17 as cg - her {bounce}"*Ah*....{/bounce}{heart}{heart}{heart}" + her "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}{heart}{heart}{heart}" her "I'm surprised how often we bump into each other out here, [name_genie_hermione]..." show her_forest bj h16 as cg her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy index bc3bf5d1..70083eb9 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy @@ -1612,7 +1612,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried eyes_squint_crossed as cg with d5 - her "{shake}*Aheeeee*!! [name_genie_hermione], I can't-{/shake}-" + her "{shake}*Aheeeee*!! [name_genie_hermione], I can't--{/shake}" gen "Answer me!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{shake}*Ahhh*...{w=0.2} *Ahee*...{w=0.2} I...{/shake}" gen "Tell me you want to cum!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -3596,7 +3596,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: call weather_sound gen "Well then...{w=0.4} I suppose that shall do for now, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - else: + else: # Strength was set to high before. (second to worst ending) # Vagina is wet. diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/wear_my_cum.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/wear_my_cum.rpy index f59ab7ca..6d5ddea1 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/wear_my_cum.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/wear_my_cum.rpy @@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ label hg_pr_cumslut: $ hermione.set_cum(hair="heavy") - gen "{/bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".............." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") call her_chibi_scene("hj_cum_on_done") diff --git a/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/jerk_off.rpy b/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/jerk_off.rpy index fd4c8f58..81820049 100644 --- a/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/jerk_off.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/jerk_off.rpy @@ -44,7 +44,6 @@ label jerk_off: nar "You lack the item required for this option." jump .choice - nar "You cum all over Hermione's panties, and then use them to wipe the cum off the floor..." "-Think about Cho!-" if not states.cho.ev.panty_thief.acquired and states.cho.unlocked: nar "You fantasise about Cho." random: @@ -72,7 +71,6 @@ label jerk_off: nar "You lack the item required for this option." jump .choice - nar "You cum all over Cho's panties, and then use them to wipe the cum off the floor..." "-Think about Luna!-" if states.lun.unlocked: nar "You fantasise about Luna." random: @@ -200,7 +198,7 @@ label jerk_off: random: #Post orgasm dialogue gen "(That's the stuff...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(There we go... One nut a day keeps the existential dread at bay..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(There we go... One nut a day keeps the existential dread at bay...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(This was a pretty sweet jerk-off session...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/phoenix.rpy b/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/phoenix.rpy index c37a04da..1b8ccf82 100644 --- a/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/phoenix.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/rooms/main_room/objects/phoenix.rpy @@ -39,10 +39,9 @@ label phoenix_feed: random: gen "I already fed it today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The poor thing doesn't even need more food today, it's all set." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Let's leave the Phoenix to its nap. It had enough for the day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let's leave the phoenix to its nap... It had enough for the day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "This phoenix prefers to take things slow and steady." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's full up and won't need to eat till tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I wonder if I pet you enough, would you magically transform into a sexy woman?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pause .8 jump main_room_menu @@ -57,20 +56,20 @@ label phoenix_pet: random: gen "Who's a good bird?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "*Pat* *Pat* *Pat*..." + "*Pat* *Pat* *Pat*" gen "Glad you aren't as noisy as Iago..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Can't resist a little head scratch, eh?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Nice feathers, wouldn't want to pluck those out..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "See? I scratch your back, you scratch mine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 20 > states.bird_petted_times > 10: - gen "I've petted you {number=states.bird_petted_times} times. Just a couple more, and I'm sure something will happen... Right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've petted you {number=states.bird_petted_times} times... Just a couple more, and I'm sure something will happen...{w=0.4} Right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 30 > states.bird_petted_times > 20: gen "How many more times do I have to pet you for you to do something? It's been {number=states.bird_petted_times} already!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 40 > states.bird_petted_times > 30: gen "Dear diary, it's been {number=states.bird_petted_times} pets since I landed here, yet that stubborn bird still refuses to talk to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 50 > states.bird_petted_times > 40: - gen "I pet you patiently, but all I get is silence. Wait, how many times was it again? {number=states.bird_petted_times}?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I pet you patiently, but all I get is silence... Wait, how many times was it again? {number=states.bird_petted_times}?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 60 > states.bird_petted_times > 50: gen "I've read about talking birds, but you must have missed that chapter." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if 70 > states.bird_petted_times > 60: @@ -94,23 +93,23 @@ label phoenix_pet: faw "..." block if 300 > states.bird_petted_times > 200: gen "Hello darkness my old friend..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - faw "*cawk*" + faw "*Sqwawk*" gen "There's no way that fucking worked!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Seriously, though, can you talk now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") faw "..." gen "... Just great." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block if states.bird_petted_times > 300: gen "I can't believe I'm still doing this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - faw "AHHHH AFTER TEN THOUSAND YEARS I'M FREE!" - gen "BY THE GREAT DESERT SANDS, IT FINALLY WORKED!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But wait, I've only been doing this for {number=states.env.day}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - faw "Oh, really? Well, I still have time for a nap then." - gen "WAIT A FUCKING—" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + faw "{shake}Aahh!!! After ten thousand years, I'm free!{/shake}" + gen "{size=+4}By the great desert sands, it finally worked!{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hold on... Ten thousand years? I've only been doing this for {number=states.env.day}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + faw "Oh, really? Well, I still have some time for a nap then." + gen "{size=+4}Wait a fucking—-{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_chibi("sit_behind_desk") with blackfade - gen "Ugh... I guess I must have fell asleep at some point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ugh*... I guess I must have fell asleep at some point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Was it all but a dream?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump main_room_menu @@ -124,5 +123,6 @@ label phoenix_pet: gen "It's in a post-pet state, I should leave it alone." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I don't want to cause carpel-talon tunnel." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Gave that bird a good ruffling, now off to groom a griffin." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I wonder if I pet you enough, would you magically transform into a sexy woman?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump main_room_menu