From 15771e31ef403f55a36ae7bb044912f367fb9a45 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LoafyLemon Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2022 19:40:33 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- .../events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy | 2 +- .../mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy | 20 +++++++++---------- 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy index 9a63377e..49f79e74 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You've got one tit out at least. As a wise man once said--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{i}A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush.{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit." + her "I suppose... although I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit." her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy index 2e81e900..d03e90e3 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy @@ -23,12 +23,12 @@ label blueballing_bad: call music_block nar "Sitting at his desk, doing some paperwork peacefully, Genie suddenly heard some voices, talking loudly while getting closer and closer to the office door..." - "Hermione""{size=-6}What now?{/size}" - "Tonks""{size=-6}Miss Granger... Enough is enough." - "Tonks""{size=-6}Even if he was a bit perverted, surely that wouldn't-{nw}" - "Hermione""{size=-4}A little bit perverted?!{/size}" + her "{size=-6}What now?{/size}" + ton "{size=-6}Miss Granger... Enough is enough." + ton "{size=-6}Even if he was a bit perverted, surely that wouldn't--{w=1.0}{nw}" + her "{size=-4}A little bit perverted?!{/size}" gen "(What's this fuss about?)" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "Tonks""{size=-4}Miss Granger, wait!{/size}{nw}" + ton "{size=-4}Miss Granger, wait!{/size}{w=0.75}{nw}" $ renpy.sound.play("sounds/door_down.ogg") with hpunch call her_chibi("stand", "door", "base") @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ label blueballing_bad: stop music fadeout 0.5 - her "{b}I AM NOT CRAZY!{/b}" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="head") + her "{b}I AM NOT CRAZY!{/b}" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid", xpos="far_right", ypos="head") $ renpy.sound.play("sounds/MaleGasp.ogg") gen "What the-" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ label blueballing_bad: ton "Miss Granger, you--" ("open", "wide", "shocked", "L", hair="neutral", xpos="far_right", ypos="head") her "I {b}know{/b} what I saw. He has to be the one who stole my panties!" ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") her "I knew that house elf was his!" ("mad", "base", "annoyed", "R") - gen "That what?{w=0.25}{nw}" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The what?{w=0.5}{nw}" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Who else would have the authority and be perverted enough to--" ("mad", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "I'm right here you know. Also, you--" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You commanded that thing to steal panties, {b}MY{/b} panties." ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "L") @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ label blueballing_bad: call her_walk(xpos="418", ypos="430", speed=1.5) her "He--{w=0.2} He's covered his tracks... Or he made that {size=-3}idiot{/size} teacher Snape take them!" ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "R_soft") call her_walk(xpos="600", ypos="410", speed=1.5) - ton "Miss Granger, please, you have to-{nw}" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "stare", hair="annoyed") + ton "Miss Granger, please, you have to--{w=0.5}{nw}" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "stare", hair="annoyed") her "You think this is something-{w=0.25} You think this is bad?{w=0.25} This, this chicanery?!" ("angry", "wide", "angry", "L_soft", flip=True) call her_walk(xpos="599", ypos="410", speed=1.5) @@ -88,11 +88,11 @@ label blueballing_bad: her "\"Not the Headmaster!\"{w=0.25}, \"Our Headmaster is not like that!\"..." ("clench", "base", "angry", "up") her "{b}WHAT A {size=+2}SICK{/size} JOKE!{/b}" ("scream", "wide", "angry", "stare") her "I should have stopped him when I had the chance..." ("clench", "base", "annoyed", "R_soft") - her "{size=-3}You--{/size}{w=1.0} You have to stop him Tonks!{w=0.25} You--" ("mad", "wide", "worried", "R_soft") + her "{size=-3}You--{/size}{w=1.0} You have to stop him Professor Tonks!{w=0.25} You--" ("mad", "wide", "worried", "R_soft") with hpunch stop music fadeout 0.5 ton "{b}{size=+3}MISS GRANGER, YOU LOST YOUR SKIRT ON YOUR WAY IN!{/size}{/b}" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid", hair="angry") - her "{nw}" ("open", "wide", "base", "down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + her "" ("open", "wide", "base", "down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") pause her "..." ("open", "wide", "base", "shocked") ton "..." ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "stare", hair="annoyed")