From 20de093e34363ec3124def15b035e5284520cb03 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Tue, 9 May 2023 15:45:34 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- game/scripts/characters/astoria/summon.rpy | 10 +- game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy | 141 +++++----- game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy | 20 +- .../characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy | 54 ++-- .../characters/hermione/events/jobs.rpy | 120 ++++---- .../characters/hermione/events/tentacles.rpy | 58 ++-- game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy | 262 +++++++++--------- game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy | 4 +- .../hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 22 +- .../luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 2 +- game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy | 14 +- game/scripts/characters/snape/chitchats.rpy | 90 +++--- .../characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy | 28 +- .../scripts/characters/snape/events/intro.rpy | 44 +-- game/scripts/characters/snape/nicknames.rpy | 6 +- game/scripts/characters/snape/summon.rpy | 6 +- game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy | 6 +- .../scripts/characters/susan/events/intro.rpy | 6 +- game/scripts/characters/susan/summon.rpy | 12 +- .../characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 8 +- game/scripts/characters/tonks/chitchats.rpy | 32 +-- .../characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy | 60 ++-- .../scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy | 49 +--- game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy | 57 ++-- game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy | 36 +-- game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy | 14 +- 27 files changed, 567 insertions(+), 596 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/summon.rpy index 1823b6fd..78d37166 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/summon.rpy @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ label astoria_talk: gen "Could you help me with something?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Depends what it is." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "And what's in it for me..." ("smile", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Well, the Slytherin Quidditch team refuses to practise against the Ravenclaws." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, the Slytherin Quidditch team refuses to practise against Ravenclaw." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "And?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I was wondering if there's something you could do about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Like what?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ label astoria_talk: ast "Yeah right, those guys would never listen to me..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") ast "And can't you do something about it? You're the headmaster!" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Well, I can't technically force them to do anything. If I could, then that would make things a lot easier..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Ask Snape then, he's the head of Slytherin... If they'd listen to anyone it'd be him." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "Ask Snape then, he's the head of Slytherin... If they'd listen to anyone, it'd be him." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") if states.cho.ev.quidditch.e9_complete: gen "(If only he'd listen to me...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: @@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ label astoria_talk: ast "Daddy? Don't you think that's a little weird?" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Not at all!" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "*Hmph*..." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - ast "Alright, why not. Nobody knows about it anyways." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "Alright, why not... Nobody knows about it anyway." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") jump astoria_talk "-Master-" (style="disabled") if states.ast.level < 18: label .master_fail: @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ label astoria_talk: jump astoria_talk - "-From now on I will refer to you as-": + "-From now on, I will refer to you as-": menu: "-Miss Greengrass-": label .miss_greengrass: @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label astoria_talk: $ name_astoria_genie = "Slave" ast "I'm not your slave, [name_genie_astoria]!" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Of course you aren't! We are just playing a game, that's all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Oh I like games!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "I like games!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") ast "Alrighty then!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") jump astoria_talk diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy index 78572770..eeb2e324 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] I do think I deserve one at least after winning our first match." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] I do think I deserve one, since we won our first match." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Chocolate?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Cho...",gift_item) cho "YES!" ("smile", "base", "base", "L") - cho "I've been trying to stay away from it but since the season is over I can have as much as I'd like..." ("open", "wide", "base", "L") + cho "I've been trying to stay away from it, but since the season is over I can have as much as I'd like..." ("open", "wide", "base", "L") cho "Within reason." ("base", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-2) @@ -93,22 +93,22 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Yes, I'll take it... turns out my team mates had been lying about the alcohol content to mess with me." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Yes, I'll take it... Turns out my teammates had been lying about the alcohol content to mess with me." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "I guess I'll finally find out what I've been missing out on!" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "It's a bit tame isn't it? I chugged a lot of it after our last win and can't say I felt a buzz even." ("open", "narrow", "base", "L") + cho "It's a bit tame, isn't it? I chugged a lot of it after our last win and can't say I felt a buzz even." ("open", "narrow", "base", "L") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(0) else: cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Don't you have any firewhisky?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(0) elif gift_item == science_mag_ITEM: @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "*Hmm*... Broom aerodynamics and how to utilise your opponents slipstream..." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "*Hmm*... Broom aerodynamics and how to utilise your opponent's slipstream..." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Interesting..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") @@ -138,14 +138,14 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == girls_mag_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Girls magazines, what do you think I am... a gi--" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I'm good thank you..." ("open", "base", "base", "L",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Girls magazines, what do you think I am... A gi--" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "I'm good, thank you..." ("open", "base", "base", "L",xpos="mid",ypos="base") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Girls magazines?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "I don't usually read these types of magazines, the boys used to make fun of me for it." (face="annoyed") - cho "But they can't get into the girls dorm." (face="neutral") + cho "But they can't get into the girls' dorm." (face="neutral") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(-1) else: cho "Girls magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I did enjoy last months issue about cultural appropriation with traditional clothing..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I did enjoy last month's issue about cultural appropriation with traditional clothing..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Don't tell the boys I said that." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): else: cho "Adult magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Wow, look at that guys abs..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") + cho "Wow, look at that guy's abs..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") cho "And that girls..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "down") cho "I'll take it." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") @@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Professor, he doesn't have his shirt on!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "down") cho "That's...{w=0.3} highly inappropriate..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho "I can't...{w=0.3} I can't accept this." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" (mouth="soft", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") cho "Sir, are you expecting me to wear this?" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Are you insane?!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "No thank you..." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") + cho "No, thank you..." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Lingerie?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Seems pretty flexible. I might be able use these when stretching." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") + cho "Seems pretty flexible. I might be able to use these when stretching." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-2) @@ -281,14 +281,14 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == sexy_stockings_ITEM : if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "Surely that must be against some kind of dresscode..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") + cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Surely that must be against some kind of dress code..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "I'll pass..." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "I guess I wont get sunburnt on my legs wearing these..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "I guess I won't get sunburnt on my legs wearing these..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-1) @@ -300,24 +300,24 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(-2) else: cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "But my legs gets to itchy in these, I'd rather go without any leggings..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "But my legs get too itchy in these, I'd rather go without any leggings..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif gift_item == pink_condoms_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "You're expecting me to go and fuck the teachers, is that what you want?" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "L") - cho "I'm not one of those Slytherin skanks that impale themselves on the daily." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "You can take those and go fuck yourself with them..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Yes, why don't I use these and have sex with the teachers... That's what you want, right?" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "L") + cho "I think you're confusing me with those Slytherin skanks who impale themselves on the daily." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "So, you can have these back and give it to them..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I'm not the kind of girl to go around banging everything I come across..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") - cho "Thanks but no thanks..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I'm not the kind of girl to walk around and bang anyone who cross my path..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") + cho "Thanks but no, thanks..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Are you expecting that I should use these? I know safe sex is important and all but I know what you're insinuating." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "L") + cho "Are you expecting me to use these? I know safe sex is important and all, but I know what you're insinuating." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "L") cho "Keep them..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) @@ -332,36 +332,35 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): if states.cho.tier <= 1: cho "A vibrator?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Sir, are you out of your mind?" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "I'm your student for crying out loud, giving gifts in general is a bit weird but sex toys..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") + cho "I'm your student for crying out loud, giving gifts in general is a bit weird, but sex toys..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "Seriously?!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "A vibrator?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Why would you give me that..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down") - cho "Give it to Granger, I'm sure she'd love to accept a sex toy from her headmaster." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "Why would you give me this?" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") + cho "Give it to Granger... I'm sure she'd love to accept a sex toy from her headmaster." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "A vibrator?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Sir, I don't think this would be appropriate to bring to my dorm..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - cho "The girls... they'd hear it... not that I want it or anything!" ("quiver", "wide", "base", "downR") + cho "The girls... They'd hear it... Not that I want it or anything!" ("quiver", "wide", "base", "downR") call cho_mood(0) else: cho "A Vibrator?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "Ahh, It does promote a healthy lifestyle..." (face="horny") + cho "*Hmm*... It does promote a healthy lifestyle..." (face="horny") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="happy") call cho_mood(-3) elif gift_item == anal_lube_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "What the hell, why do you think this is an appropriate gift? What's wrong with you..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "Senile old man..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "*Ew* Why are you giving me this... when would I ever have the need for lube." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "down") - cho "Give it to one of those Slytherin skanks, they probably go through a ton of it every week." ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "*Eww*... Why are you giving me this? When would I ever have the need for lube?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "down") + cho "Give it to one of those Slytherin skanks, they probably go through a gallon every week." ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Anal lube?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") @@ -371,57 +370,57 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Anal Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the jar of anal lube to Cho...", gift_item) cho "You should've given me this yesterday, [name_genie_cho]." (mouth="soft", face="annoyed") - cho "I haven't been able to sit on a broom all day after yesterday's game..." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") + cho "I haven't been able to sit on a broom properly, since my last flying session..." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") call cho_mood(-5) elif gift_item == ballgag_and_cuffs_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Ball gag... and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag... and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Wait, is this a sex thing?" ("soft", "wide", "raised", "mid") - cho "Professor, that's disgusting... why would you give me this." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") + cho "Professor, that's disgusting... Why would you give me this?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Sir, this is highly inappropriate gift to give to a student!" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - cho "Why would you give me these, how is this going to help me with Quidditch?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Sir, this is a highly inappropriate gift to give to a student!" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Why would you give me these? Are they supposed to help me with Quidditch?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Ball gag and cuffs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I prefer not to lock myself up, I'm a free spirit." ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") - cho "Thanks... but no thanks." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "I prefer not to lock myself up... I'm a free spirit." ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") + cho "Thanks... But no, thanks." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the ball gag and cuffs to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "How progressive... do they require a safe-word to open?" (face="horny") + cho "How progressive... Do they require a safe-word to open?" (face="horny") cho "Wait, how would a safe-word work when you have a ball in your mouth..." (mouth="quiver", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") call cho_mood(-3) elif gift_item == anal_plugs_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "That's disgusting... why do you think it's a good idea to give these to me?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "That one has a tail on it..." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "That's disgusting... Why would you think it'd a good idea to give these to me?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") + cho "That one even has a tail on it..." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Why do you have these? They're not used are they..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "*Ew* Just, no..." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "Why do you have these? They're not used, are they?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") + cho "*Eww*... Just, no." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Sir, are you expecting me to wear this?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") cho "During Quidditch?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "No, no, no, no noooo." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "No, no, no, noooo." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "NO!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) else: cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give a set of anal plugs to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "But these would stick out under my robes..." (face="annoyed") - cho "Maybe people would just think it's a tail or something..." (face="horny") + cho "But these would stick out from underneath my robes..." (face="annoyed") + cho "Perhaps people would just think it's just a tail or something..." (face="horny") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") call cho_mood(-2) @@ -430,7 +429,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "Is that a strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") cho "It's huge!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "I mean, why are you showing me this?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "get it away from me." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Get it away from me." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") @@ -440,32 +439,32 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") cho "But it's so big..." ("horny", "wide", "raised", "mid") - cho "I.. I don't want it..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "I... I don't want it..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the thestral strap-on to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "How would that even fit in anyone?" (mouth="quiver", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") + cho "How would that even fit inside anyone?" (mouth="quiver", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == broom_2000_ITEM: $ states.cho.ev.quidditch.given_thestral = True if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A broom... yes! Finally something better than my old--" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A broom! Finally, something better than my old--" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Hold on, is that a double ended dildo sticking out of it?!?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "What's wrong with you?" ("scream", "wide", "base", "L") - cho "Get that away from my... from me!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Get that away from my--{w=0.4} From me!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Is that a broom with dildos on it?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "Professor, seriously... why... just why." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "Is that a broom with dildos stuck to it?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Professor, seriously... Why... Just why." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "A broom?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "A sex broom? Where did you even get this..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") - cho "No..{w=0.3} I don't...{w=0.3} I don't want that." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + cho "A sex broom! Where did you even get this..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") + cho "No...{w=0.3} I don't--{w=0.3} I don't want that." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: cho "Is that a Lady Speed Stick-2000, with a built-in vibrator and pulse function?" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") @@ -477,7 +476,7 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == sexdoll_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A sex doll? What the heck... why do you have this?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A sex doll? What the heck... Why do you have this?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "And more importantly..." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "{size=+4}Why are you giving it to me?{/size}" ("scream", "wide", "base", "L") cho "You disgust me..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -489,14 +488,14 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "A sex doll?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Why would I need this, it's a girl doll..." ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "L") - cho "I mean, why would I need a sex doll in general. I'm not into this sort of thing..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") + cho "Why would I need this... It's a girl doll." ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "L") + cho "I mean, why would I need a sex doll in general... I'm not into this sort of thing!" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(1) else: cho "A sex doll?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call give_gift("You give the sex doll to Cho...", gift_item) cho "It says Joanne on it..." (face="disgusted") - cho "I leave it in the boys changing room, should be a good reward after a practice." (face="annoyed") + cho "I'll leave it in the boys' changing room... Should make a good reward after practice." (face="annoyed") call cho_mood(-7) elif gift_item == anal_beads_ITEM: @@ -506,13 +505,13 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "How... where did you..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "*Gross!" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + cho "How... Where did you..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") + cho "Gross!" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Sir, how would I be able to sit on a broom if I used these?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") + cho "Sir, how would ever be able to sit on a broom after using these?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") cho "Not that I would ever use them!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "Get those away from me!" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -528,12 +527,12 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == wine_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 2: cho "A wine bottle?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "[name_genie_cho], I cannot drink alcohol, it would ruin my career.." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + cho "[name_genie_cho], I cannot drink alcohol, it would ruin my career..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(4) else: cho "A wine bottle?" (face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] but I can't take it." (face="neutral") - cho "{size=-4}Maybe to celebrate after I win the Quidditch Cup..{/size}" (face="horny") + cho "{size=-4}Maybe to celebrate after I win the Quidditch Cup...{/size}" (face="horny") call cho_mood(0) elif gift_item == firewhisky_ITEM: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy index e5e4f39d..74fec375 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/talk.rpy @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ label cho_talk: jump genie_cho_change - "\"-From now on I will refer to you as-\"" if states.cho.ev.quidditch.e1_complete: + "\"-From now on, I will refer to you as-\"" if states.cho.ev.quidditch.e1_complete: menu: "\"-Miss Chang-\"": $ name_cho_genie = "Miss Chang" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy index d9d68472..f452d1f2 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/forest.rpy @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ label forest_BJ_1: #BJ in the forest interrupted by moaning myrtle gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "*Ugh*, fine! If you must know, I was out here gathering up some mastic resin." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "I know students aren't {i}technically{/i} supposed to touch the stuff, since it's normally used to make belch powder..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") - her "But I'm using it in my research for a non addictive analgesic!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "But I'm using it in my research for a non-addictive analgesic!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") menu: @@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ label forest_BJ_2: her "!!!!!!" show her_forest bj h25 m1 as cg call cum_block - gen "Gods I needed this!" + gen "Gods, I needed this!" show her_forest bj h26 m1 as cg myr "So much...{heart}{heart}{heart}" show her_forest bj h25 m1 as cg @@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot her "What! O-of course not!" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "I'm just out here to admire the moon!" ("base", "base", "base", "R") gen "What moon?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") - nar "Hermione frantically looks to the cloudy sky, unable to even glimpse the moon through the impenetrable greyness." + nar "Hermione frantically looks at the cloudy sky, unable to even glimpse the moon through the impenetrable greyness." her "Oh...{w=0.4} *Uhm*..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") gen "It's alright...{w=0.4} Just admit that you're a dirty little cumslut, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "It's not like that!" ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot show her_forest bj h39 as cg call cum_block - nar "Your cock starts firing off a huge load against the back of the poor girls throat, quickly overflowing all the way up through her nostrils and back at you." + nar "Your cock starts firing off a huge load against the back of the poor girl's throat, quickly overflowing all the way up through her nostrils and back at you." her "{size=+14}!!!{/size}" myr "{size=+3}Oh{/size} {size=+3}my{/size} {size=+3}God!{/size}" @@ -657,14 +657,14 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) her "*Slurp*{heart}*Slurp*{heart}*Glck*" #Myrtle fade in show her_forest bj h16 m2 as cg - gen "And for Casper the slutty ghost here..." + gen "And for Casper, the slutty ghost here..." show her_forest bj h43 m2 as cg her "*Slurp*!!!*Slurp*!!!*Glck*!!!" menu: - nar "Hermione, once again, tries to pull her mouth of your cock..." + nar "Hermione, once again, tries to pull her mouth off your cock..." "-Let her-": - nar "Reluctantly, you allow the girl to pull herself of your throbbing member..." + nar "Reluctantly, you allow the girl to pull herself off your throbbing member..." show her_forest bj h10 m2 as cg her "Myrtle! Why are you always showing up like this?" myr "Aren't I allowed a bit of fun in my afterlife?" @@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}PRFFSSRR!!!{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg - myr "Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!" + myr "Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you!" show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg @@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}WHHTT!!!{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg - myr "Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!" + myr "Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you!" show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg @@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ label forest_BJ_4: #Moaning myrtle dirty talk (Repeatable) (Threaten to expose) show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg - myr "Then there's teachers'!" + myr "Then there's the teachers'!" show her_forest bj h35 m2 as cg her "{size=+5}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{heart}*Glck*{/size}" show her_forest bj h34 m2 as cg diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy index 7c17f604..b7e02a16 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/intro.rpy @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E1: with hpunch gen "{size=+4}NO!{/size}" pause 1.0 - gen "*Err*...{w=0.5} I mean, no thank you dear child, it won't be necessary." + gen "*Err*...{w=0.5} I mean... No, thank you, dear child, it won't be necessary." her "If you say so, professor..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "L") her "*clears throat*" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") "\"................................\"": @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E1: $ states.her.ev.intro.masturbated = True #Affects next conversation with Snape. $ states.gen.masturbating = True - "\"(No, that's stupid! I Need to behave!)\"": + "\"(No, that's stupid! I need to behave!)\"": $ states.gen.masturbating = False her "You probably know why I am here too." @@ -185,10 +185,10 @@ label hermione_intro_E1: gen "{size=-4}(Would you look at that pretty little thing?){/size}" gen "{size=-4}(Look at her going on and on about something... She's adorable.){/size}" gen "Yes, keep on going, dear." - her "\"Yes\"?! So you think it's fair?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "\"Yes\"?! So, you think it's fair?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Oh, of course not, I meant \"no\". But keep on going anyway..." her "That's a relief. I'm glad that you agree with me, professor..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "As I was saying, the whole issue is simply ridiculous and I cannot believe that it is taking place in our day and age!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "As I was saying, the whole issue is simply ridiculous, and I cannot believe that it is taking place in our day and age!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") if states.gen.masturbating: nar "*Fap-fap-fap*" @@ -196,8 +196,8 @@ label hermione_intro_E1: else: gen "I see..." - her "I mean, I would understand if something like this were to occur during the middle ages..." - her "But we left the middle ages behind a long time ago, did we not?" + her "I mean, I would understand if something like this were to occur during the Middle Ages..." + her "But we left the Middle Ages behind a long time ago, did we not?" if states.gen.masturbating: gen "{size=-4}(Would you look at those rosy cheeks? I want to poke 'em with my cock.){/size}" @@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: "\"Well... I've read the books...\"": sna "What? What books?" ("snape_34") gen "Nah, never mind. I'm a genie, remember? I know things..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "*Hmm*... And yet you need me to teach you stuff..." ("snape_37") + sna "*Hmm*... And yet, you need me to teach you stuff..." ("snape_37") gen "Well, I told you. My magic is acting up in your world..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Sure, sure..." ("snape_37") gen "......" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: gen "The Hermione girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "What?!" ("snape_01") sna "I thought we agreed on the \"no human contact\" rule." ("snape_31") - sna "(Even though lately I've been wondering whether or not she is human at all...)" ("snape_35") + sna "(Even though lately, I've been wondering whether or not she is human at all...)" ("snape_35") gen "I know... She kinda forced her way in..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I imagine she did..." ("snape_01") sna "What did she want?" ("snape_01") @@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: gen "Hey, don't judge me!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You don't know what it's like to be cooped up in this tower like a prisoner!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You... y-you..." ("snape_12") - sna "*snickers*......" ("snape_13") + sna "*Snickers*......" ("snape_13") sna "*Ha*... *ha-ha*... *HA-HA-HA*!!!" ("snape_28") gen "Wha--? What did I say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! You are amazing!" ("snape_42") @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: else: gen "Not sure... She was talking a lot..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Something about some {i}grief-n-door{/i} points... and..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Er... I wasn't paying attention to be honest..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... I wasn't paying attention, to be honest..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Nah... Probably another load of self-righteous crap..." ("snape_01") sna "She is famous for that..." ("snape_35") @@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1: ### Event 2 ### # Second visit from Hermione. Says she sent a letter to the Minestry. -# Takes place after first special event with Snape, where he just complains about Hermione. +# Takes place after the first special event with Snape, where he just complains about Hermione. label hermione_intro_E2: stop music fadeout 3.0 @@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E2: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Absolutely not! I'm busy! Come back later!\"": her "But..." - her "Alright... I will come back tomorrow then..." + her "Alright... I will come back tomorrow, then..." $ achievements.unlock("knock") $ hg_event_pause += 1 @@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E2: gen "...................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "................" ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") "\"Good morning, miss Granger.\"": - her "*Ehm*... so, about the reason of me being here today then..." + her "*Ehm*... So, about the reason for me being here today then..." "\"Yeah, yeah, whatever...\"": her "................" ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") @@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E2: her "Did you know that some of the girls in this school are now selling favours for house points...?" ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "Sometimes even for good grades..." gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Nobody from the Gryffindor house of course..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Nobody from the Gryffindor house, of course..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "And that's what puts us at a disadvantage -- our integrity!" her "As for the boys -- they have to work ten times harder than the girls simply to pass a test..." her "Or, if they are lucky enough, to get one meagre house point..." @@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E2: call bld gen "......................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hermione Granger came by again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Don't mention the witch's name when I'm off duty..." ("snape_01", ypos="head") + sna "Don't mention the witch's name when I'm off-duty..." ("snape_01", ypos="head") sna "..............." ("snape_31") sna "Dammit! I am a grown man, Albus!" ("snape_08") gen "My name is not--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -636,11 +636,11 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E2: sna "Well... don't mind me then..." ("snape_31") sna "I'm all talk..." ("snape_31") sna "I would never cause harm to one of my students..." ("snape_31") - sna "(... permanently that is.)" ("snape_08") + sna "(... permanently, that is.)" ("snape_08") gen "Listen, if she bugs you so much, why not just find a less radical way to deal with her?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Nah... Flogging has been outlawed for years now..." ("snape_35") gen "That's not what I mean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "*huh*?" ("snape_01") + sna "*Huh*?" ("snape_01") gen "She is a top student, right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Yes, damn her. The girl is a hard worker, I will give her that." ("snape_31") gen "She also has a reputation for being self-righteous." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E3: label .choices: menu: - "{size=-3}\"Of course. You are a top student after all.\"{/size}": + "{size=-3}\"Of course. You are a top student, after all.\"{/size}": her "Exactly..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "Or at least I used to be until today..." her @ tears soft_blink "I cannot believe this is happening!" ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -959,8 +959,8 @@ label hermione_intro_E5: her "But I require tutoring, and you are the smartest wizard I know..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") her "Please, sir. I really need your help." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") menu: - "\"Show me your tits and it's a deal!\"": - her "m-my...?" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") + "\"Show me your tits, and it's a deal!\"": + her "M-my...?" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "............" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "....." with hpunch @@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E5: gen "It was a test...{w=0.5} You passed. Good job." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What...?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Oh, of course. I'm so silly sometimes. Sorry about the yelling, sir." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") - gen "My offer is still valid. If you want me to then I can tutor you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "My offer is still valid. If you want me to, then I can tutor you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".............." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") "\"Well, alright, alright...\"": pass @@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E5: menu: "\"I suppose that is possible.\"": pass - "\"*Hmm*... I'm quite busy actually.\"": + "\"*Hmm*... I'm quite busy, actually.\"": her "Sir, please, you are the smartest wizard I know!" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "{size=-4}(You have no idea, little witch.){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well, it could be arranged, I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E5: her "The \"MRM\" shall investigate our education system much closer now..." her "I think some sort of foul play might be taking place..." gen "*Exaggerated gasp* No way!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I have a list of suspects already but I will get back to you on this later..." + her "I have a list of suspects already, but I will get back to you on this later..." gen "*Ehm*... Alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, my classes are about to start. I'd better go..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "Good day to you, sir." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ label nt_he_hermione_E1: gen "Oh, he couldn't believe it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That thrilled, was he?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") ton "Now that's surprising." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") - gen "No he literally couldn't believe it... He thought I was lying at first." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, he literally couldn't believe it... He thought I was lying at first." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Although after he stopped laughing like a maniac..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "He did figure out quite quickly that the ministry probably wouldn't have sent a full-fledged Auror for a minor case like this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well, what can I say... I'm an open book." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E6: her "You see... The Gryffindor house is struggling with points..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "And... everyone is working so hard..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") - her "And they look up to me for help but I don't know what to do..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down") + her "And they look up to me for help, but I don't know what to do..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down") gen "............................" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Professor Dumbledore..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E6: her "The kind that would gain our house additional points..." her "I could write an essay for you or..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "Or maybe clean your tower...?" ("angry", "wink", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") - gen "{size=-4}(Clean my tower? Heh... There's gotta be dirty joke in there somewhere...){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{size=-4}(Clean my tower? Heh... There's gotta be a dirty joke in there somewhere...){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well, alright then, I think we can figure something out." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Well, if you insist...\"": pass @@ -1228,7 +1228,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E6: her "(So little...?)" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down") $ current_payout = 10 "\"Twenty points.\"": - her "(Wow. That's quite a lot for such simple request...)" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "(Wow. That's quite a lot for such a simple request...)" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") $ current_payout = 20 her "*Ehm*, alright..." (xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/jobs.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/jobs.rpy index c5fcb2e0..e78e5bd4 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/jobs.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/jobs.rpy @@ -17,22 +17,22 @@ label job_1: if states.her.level < 4: her "Finally you've come to your senses..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Of course I'll help!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Great, then I've got this maids outfit for you!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great, then I've got this maid's outfit for you!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "What is this?!" ("clench", "squint", "base", "down") - gen "A Maid outfit!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A maid's outfit!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You'll need it for the cleaning you're about to do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione], this isn't what I thought you meant..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "You'll get paid in points of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You'll get paid in points, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "And I suppose you'll technically be working for me so you can get paid for your work..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And I suppose you'll technically be working for me, so you can get paid for your work..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "That's good I suppose..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "Although I'm technically not supposed to hire students so I'll have to hold on to your payment for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Although I'm technically not supposed to hire students, so I'll have to hold on to your payment for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "So... You'll do it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose I could..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Great!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Return here in the evening to drop of your payment and tell me how it went." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Return here in the evening to drop off your payment and tell me how it went." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if not is_in_lead(gryffindor): her "Alright..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Let me just put this on..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -53,17 +53,17 @@ label job_1: elif states.her.level < 13: her "Cleaned up, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, so you better put this on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "A maid outfit?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "A maid's outfit?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Of course this is what you meant..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "You'll get paid in points of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} Alright, In that case I suppose I could do it." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + gen "You'll get paid in points, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} Alright, In that case, I suppose I could do it." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Excellent... Although you'll have to return any monetary payments to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I do?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You think I could just hire students to do these things?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "No, I think it'd be best if I held onto it for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No, I think it'd be best if I held on to it for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Return here in the evening to drop of your payment and tell me how it went." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Return here in the evening to drop off your payment and tell me how it went." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if not is_in_lead(gryffindor): her "Alright..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") her "Let me just put this on..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -83,15 +83,15 @@ label job_1: else: #13+ her "I'm not sure what you." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I want you to put this on!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "A maid outfit?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "A maid's outfit?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Yep!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You'll get paid in points of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You'll get paid in points, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Why not... This castle could use some cleaning where the house elves can't reach." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "That's the spirit!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Just make sure you return here in the evening to give me your payments and tell me how it went." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Give you my what?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Payments." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "This will have to stay off the books so I'll have to hold onto it for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "This will have to stay off the books, so I'll have to hold on to it for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh... Right..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") if states.her.level >= 16: her @ cheeks blush "Let me just put this on..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ label job_1: else: random: - gen "I'd like you to go out and make me some money... *Err*... I mean go out and earn some points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'd like you to go out and make me some money... *Err*... I mean, go out and earn some points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Time to earn some more points for your house, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Time for you to head out and help clean the castle." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I've got a feather duster with your name on it, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label job_1: if not is_in_lead(gryffindor): her "*Humph!*..." ("upset", "base", "annoyed", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) else: - her "No thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) + her "No, thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) gen "What do you mean, no?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "We're in the lead right now... There's no need for me to earn any points at the moment." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ label maid_responses: block: her "Do I really have to keep doing this?" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) gen "What do you mean, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It's so degrading... I had to clean other students dorms!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "It's so degrading... I had to clean other students' dorms!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "You can stop any time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I can?" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Certainly, I'll just get one of those Slytherin floozies that you are always on about." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ label maid_responses: random: block: her "It was as normal a day of cleaning rooms could be." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) - her "Although considering that I'm supposed to be in class during the day I guess it's not that normal." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + her "Although considering that I'm supposed to be in class during the day, I guess it's not that normal." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Don't worry [name_hermione_genie], you'll get your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Just think of how happy your friends will be when they win the house cup this year." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") @@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ label maid_responses: her "It was fine I suppose..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) gen "Nothing else to tell me? What were you tasked to do today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "Well I was tasked to clean the boys changing room..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Well I was tasked to clean the boys' changing room..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "They really should've told me when... How am I supposed to know when they're not using it?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ label maid_responses: her "Professor Snape had me sort his potion ingredients all day..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) gen "Doesn't sound too bad..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "He asked me to put everything on the highest shelves..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "When I asked him why he told me not to question his organization system..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "When I asked him why, he told me not to question his organization system..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "As if he had one to begin with... He was probably just wanted a look up my skirt." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her "..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Can I have my points now?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -246,8 +246,8 @@ label maid_responses: elif states.her.level < 22: random: block: - her "It's was pretty uneventful." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) - her "I suppose I should feel more annoyed by the other students staring at me but it doesn't bother me that much." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "It was pretty uneventful." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) + her "I suppose I should feel more annoyed by the other students staring at me, but it doesn't bother me that much." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Good to hear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am helping the school after all..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "That you are... Ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ label maid_responses: her "..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") block: her "Pretty uneventful." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) - her "I cleaned the prefects bathroom today so not really many people around." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + her "I cleaned the prefects' bathroom today, so there weren't really that many people around." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Although one of the mermaid portraits kept blowing me kisses." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Was she attractive?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ label maid_responses: block: her @ cheeks blush "It was fine... I cleaned the staffroom today..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) her @ cheeks blush "Professor Snape seemed to think it was really funny to have me Scourgify his robes constantly as he continued spilling tea on himself..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Well I suppose that comes with the job." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I suppose that comes with the job." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "That's what he said..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label maid_responses: gen "Tell me what you've been doing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I've been cleaning professor Tonks' office..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) her @ cheeks blush "The things she keeps in there..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "Why I hope none the other students get detention with her." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Why I hope none of the other students get detention with her." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Found anything interesting?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Not sure if she'd like it if I told you..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "(As if I couldn't already guess...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ label barmaid_responses: her "Fine..." gen "Anything unusual happen?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Not really, I just served people drinks." - gen "Well in that case ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, in that case, ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione], here's your payment." "-Dismiss her-": her "Here's your payment." @@ -436,12 +436,12 @@ label gryffindor_cheer_responses: block: her "It was good [name_genie_hermione], I think that the team morale has really started to go up." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, since I've started they seem to have improved their tactics." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Well, since I've started, they seem to have improved their tactics." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "They also seem much happier. Harry is always looking at me with a smile on his face." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "And does he look at you a lot?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course he does, we're good friends." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "\"I'm sure that must be the reason\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well here's the money, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Well, here's the money, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") nar "You receive [payment] gold coins." gen "Well done, [name_hermione_genie], ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: @@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ label gryffindor_cheer_responses: nar "You receive [payment] gold coins." gen "Well done [name_hermione_genie], ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: - her "Very well thank you, all the boys said that I helped keep their spirits up." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Very well, thank you... All the boys said that I helped keep their spirits up." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "{size=-5}I'm sure that wasn't the only thing you've helped stay up...{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What was that [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I was just saying that I'm sure you did a stand up job." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ label gryffindor_cheer_responses: gen "Won?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "We won! We beat Slytherin in a practice match." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "You seem a little bit overexcited for just a practice match." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well it was such a great game. Not to mention that we got to rub it in those Slytherin students faces afterwards." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") + her "Well it was such a great game. Not to mention that we got to rub it in those Slytherin students' faces afterwards." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") gen "Well I'm glad that you are enjoying your work." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am [name_genie_hermione]. Given that most of the \"work\" I've done to help my house is kept private, it feels good to be able to do something public once." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Not to mention you get paid for it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -483,15 +483,15 @@ label gryffindor_cheer_responses: menu: "-Reward?-": gen "What reward did you promise them?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well I was quite keen to ensure our victory against Slytherin that I may have promised that I would give each of them a blowjob if they won." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") + her "Well, I was quite keen to ensure our victory against Slytherin that I may have promised that I would give each of them a blowjob if they won." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "You gave every team member a blowjob after the game?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And the water boy..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "How did you even manage that? Did have to crawl around the locker room on your knees?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Of course not, they all patiently waited on their turn..." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "How did you even manage that? Did you have to crawl around the locker room on your knees?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Of course not, they all patiently waited for their turn..." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Who doesn't love a queue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So they queued up... And then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well I did what I said I would, I'm not the kind of person to lie am I?" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") - her "So, I gave them the reward I promised... And surely you of all people would know how a blowjob works." ("annoyed", "happy", "base", "R") + her "So, I gave them the reward I promised... And surely, you of all people would know how a blowjob works." ("annoyed", "happy", "base", "R") gen "That's not quite what I meant." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You just look rather..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Clean, that's all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -587,14 +587,14 @@ label slytherin_cheer_responses: gen "Well what was your routine?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Mostly star jumps while I cheered \"Go Slytherin!\"." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "So you were just jumping up and down? That doesn't seem like a very intricate cheer." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It isn't but it's what they insisted I do." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "It isn't, but it's what they insisted I do." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Well it definitely sounds like you earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Thirty points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: gen "How was your day today [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Uneventful. I completed my routine and then went back to my room..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "You didn't talk to anyone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I make a point of trying to avoid Slytherin student as best I can." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "I make a point of trying to avoid Slytherin students as best I can." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Are they really that unbearable?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Well, you earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -603,9 +603,9 @@ label slytherin_cheer_responses: gen "Hello [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Hello [name_genie_hermione]." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") gen "How did everything go today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Very well. In fact I think I might be doing too well." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") + her "Very well... In fact, I think I might be doing too well." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I think that my cheering is having too much of an positive effect." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") + her "I think that my cheering is having too much of a positive effect." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I'm not sure that I want the Slytherin team to improve, let alone because of me..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Just think about how you're helping your house in other ways." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose you're right [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -614,15 +614,15 @@ label slytherin_cheer_responses: gen "Well done [name_hermione_genie], twenty points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: her "[name_genie_hermione], something must be done about those Slytherin boys..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her "It's bad enough that I have to cheer for them but they are being a little bit touchy." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "It's bad enough that I have to cheer for them, but they are being a little bit touchy." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Touchy?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Yes, they keep groping me. It's highly inappropriate and it interrupts my routine." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Yes, they keep groping me. It's highly inappropriate, and it interrupts my routine." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "You kept dancing while they groped you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course, I'm there to complete a job. I'm not getting distracted just because of a few boys." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Well what would you have me do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, what would you have me do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Speak to Professor Snape, tell him to chastise them. They'll listen to him..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Very well, I'll speak to him. Although I'm not sure it will have the effect you're hoping for." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It better, otherwise I wont put my full effort into this..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") + her "It better, otherwise I won't put my full effort into this..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "{size=-5}I'm sure that'll show them.{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What was that [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Nothing [name_hermione_genie], I'll speak to Professor Snape tonight..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -633,7 +633,7 @@ label slytherin_cheer_responses: gen "You know, cheering..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And all that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am [name_genie_hermione]. I just performed a different type of cheer today." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "And by that you mean jerking off the entire Slytherin team?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And by that, you mean jerking off the entire Slytherin team?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well that's not how it started. I was initially just giving them a bit of a dance in the locker room..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "And one thing led to another." gen "Fine, I don't want to hear it. How much did they pay you for this \"cheering\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ label job_5: if states.her.ev.promote_cardgame.first_time: gen "Alright then, I think it's time you go help the twins with their shop." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Sir... Why do you want me to help them exactly?" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Sir... Why do you want me to help them, exactly?" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "That is my business." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What do you want me to tell them then?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Just ask them if they have a need for any help promoting their card game." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ label job_5: if states.her.level < 19: # Failstate - her "I know I said I'd help them but you want me to wear... this?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "I know I said I'd help them, but you want me to wear... this?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Of course, is that going to be a problem?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "I can't believe you've done this." @@ -752,17 +752,17 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: $ states.her.ev.promote_cardgame.first_time = False gen "Hello, [name_hermione_genie], how was your day?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Good..." ("normal", "happy", "base", "mid") - her "I'm still not that comfortable wearing the outfit you provided though so I just stood behind the shop counter today." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "I'm still not that comfortable wearing the outfit you provided though, so I just stood behind the shop counter today." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Apparently we sold a lot more items than usual though." ("base","happy", "base", "mid") gen "Great news, I bet the twins are ecstatic." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Indeed, It was nice seeing them in such high spirits." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her "Whilst I might not agree with all their business methods I think they might become great salesmen some day." ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") + her "Whilst I might not agree with all their business methods, I think they might become great salesmen some day." ("base", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "Seems to me like they are already..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, how come you had such a surge in new customers?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No idea, maybe the card game got more people interested in browsing the rest of their stock." ("annoyed", "happy", "base", "R") her "They actually had some problems with people stealing things before I started working there though." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "And this stopped after you started working there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, probably not because of it. They put in some anti thieving measures." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Well, probably not because of it. They put in some anti-thieving measures." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Patent pending?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "It's pretty clever actually, they put up a mirror behind the counter so that when I have to turn around and grab something I'll be able to see if anyone takes anything." ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "\"Yeah, I'm sure that's why they put the mirror there\"..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -791,11 +791,11 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: her @ cheeks blush "Touchy." ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I did get a bit agitated at one point actually..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "They didn't fire you did they?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "They didn't fire you, did they?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") her "The customer was quite apologetic actually and bought a bunch of things." ("smile", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "The twins obviously took the credit for getting such a big sale and seemed rather pleased with themselves." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her "I'm fine with them believing they had anything to do with it though." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "I'm fine with them believing they had anything to do with it, though." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "How noble of you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Here's your payment." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -817,16 +817,16 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: gen "Sounds like a good idea, get people invested." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, that was fine and all until the amount of new people interested started to slow down." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "I see, so I expect the responsibility fell on you as you're the one meant to promote the game?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Yes... I thought it was a great idea so if it ended up not working out then it would look very bad on my part." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Yes... I thought it was a great idea, so if it ended up not working out, then it would look very bad on my part." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "So, you had to stop the practice sessions?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, that's not why I'm annoyed..." ("annoyed", "happy", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "In my haste to find a solution I thought it would be a great idea to play a few rounds of strip cards to get more people interested." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "I've played enough not to be beaten by a new player I thought." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "I've played enough not to be beaten by a new player ,I thought." ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Of course, you've played against me after all..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Sorry, go on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, I managed to get a bunch of people into the card game so practice day is still on the schedule." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Well, I managed to get a bunch of people into the card game, so practice day is still on the schedule." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "That's good!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Though I might reconsider the whole strip card idea..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I lost pretty quickly..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -850,12 +850,12 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: gen "Hello, [name_hermione_genie], how was your day?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Great, they held a card game tournament today." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Wait, a tournament? How come I wasn't invited?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It was students only obviously..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") + her "It was students only, obviously..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") gen "Oh... of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "There were way more participants than I expected seeing that there was an entry fee." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Must've been a great prize pool then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "That's the weird thing. The prize pool only amounted to about half of the total entry fee amount." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Apparently... someone had gone around spreading the rumour that the winner would..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "Apparently... Someone had gone around spreading the rumour that the winner would..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Get a go with me if they won the tournament..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "And did they?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Of course that was never on the table..." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -864,14 +864,14 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: her @ cheeks blush "The winner did end up standing there with such an expectant look on his face after everyone had left..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "So I told him that whatever he was expecting it wasn't happening." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "He seemed so disheartened so I felt a bit bad about the whole thing..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "So, since I didn't want to bring his feeling of victory down I figured since some students had spread the rumour they'd assume the worst anyway..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "He seemed so disheartened, I felt a bit bad about the whole thing..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "So, since I didn't want to bring his feeling of victory down, I figured since some students had spread the rumour, they'd assume the worst anyway..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "So I put my hand down his pants and fiddled around a bit whilst letting the guy get a peek behind my suspenders." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Good on you!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You don't think that was a bit much?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "No! That was the right thing to do in that situation." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "There wasn't a lot you could do about the rumours even if nothing had happened he'd probably lie about it anyway." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You most likely ended up making that guys night." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "There wasn't a lot you could do about the rumours... Even if nothing had happened, he'd probably lie about it anyway." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You most likely ended up making that guy's night." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "More like month... seeing how much he..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Anyway..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "glad you agree." ("base", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ label hermione_helping_selling_cards: gen "Go on." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh, sorry... Well, I was trying out a new sales tactic..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") gen "Something the twins came up with I assume?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "No, I read about it in one of their books actually." ("grin", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") + her "No, I read about it in one of their books, actually." ("grin", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") her "Much like how you should always put the most lucrative cheap items at the counter to make the customer..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Get on with it." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Fine..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/tentacles.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/tentacles.rpy index 8ea1f7b0..c10ba8f1 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/tentacles.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/tentacles.rpy @@ -29,14 +29,14 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: jump .spell label .after_spell: - gen "Work you stupid scroll, or I'll throw you in the fire!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Work, you stupid scroll, or I'll throw you in the fire!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg" "The scroll" "*Reveals itself*" gen "That's what I thought..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now then... Let's find out what this scroll says..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "\"At the highest point is where I'm hidden\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(fuck, it's a riddle...{w=0.4} Guess I deserved that...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Fuck, it's a riddle...{w=0.4} Guess I deserved that...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "\"At the highest point is where I'm hidden\"--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "\"A place where you will need this key\"--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: gen "(*Hmm* But Hermione is busy at the moment, I should postpone my plans until tomorrow.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump main_room_menu - gen "(I better write her a note first so she can carry me with her to class...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(I better write her a note first, so she can carry me with her to class...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_chibi("paperwork") with d3 pause 1.0 @@ -218,13 +218,13 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: with d3 her "Professo--...?" ("open", "base", "worried", "L", flip=True, trans=d3) her "I thought I heard him for a second..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "R") - gen "(Read the note already, would you..)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Read the note already, would you...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pause 1.0 call her_chibi("stand", flip=False) with d3 her "Oh, there's also a note, I better read it..." ("open", "base", "base", "down", flip=False, trans=d3) - gen "(Can't help herself but snoop in other peoples business can she...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Can't help herself but snoop in other peoples' business, can she...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ desk_OBJ.foreground = "plant_on_desk" with d3 play sound "sounds/pageflip.ogg" @@ -261,14 +261,14 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: spo "Hermione Granger was kind enough to bring us a pot with an underdeveloped Devil's Snare." spo "It's kind of wilted and looks weak but..." gen "(Oh fuck you, bitch!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Actually, professor that was--" + her "Actually, professor, that was--" spo "Miss Granger, please don't interrupt me." her "Sorry..." spo "Now then..." spo "This is an incredibly dangerous plant, known to constrict and kill its prey with its fast and powerful tendrils." spo "They are found naturally in caves and swamps as they like dark and damp places and hate sunlight." her "Isn't Devil's Snare extremely dangerous?" - spo "Yes, Miss Granger. At least you're paying attention to what I was saying. Now please sit down." + spo "Yes, Miss Granger. At least you're paying attention to what I was saying... Now, please sit down." play sound "sounds/giggle2_loud.ogg" pause 1.5 play sound "sounds/shush.ogg" @@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: her "Professor Sprout, are they supposed to have mouths?" spo "Yes Miss Granger, it's how they consume their prey once they have asphyxiated them." her "Okay, well, what are the eyes for? I thought they sensed their prey by touch?" - spo "What are you on about Miss Granger? Devil's Snare don't have eyes." + spo "What are you on about, Miss Granger? Devil's Snare don't have eyes." her "This one d--" play sound "sounds/crowd_gasp.ogg" play sound2 "sounds/plant_burst.ogg" @@ -292,8 +292,8 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: play sound "sounds/gasp.ogg" her "I can't move!" play sound "sounds/creaking.ogg" - nar "then lift her into the air with your powerful appendages..." - spo "Stay calm Miss Granger, Devil's Snare will let you go if you don't move!" + nar "Then lift her into the air with your powerful appendages..." + spo "Stay calm, Miss Granger! Devil's Snare will let you go if you don't move!" nar "Slinking your slimy tentacles under her top and skirt." if not hermione.is_worn("panties"): mal "Hey, look, look! She doesn't have panties on!" @@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: her "*Ahhhh*!" play sound "sounds/plant_slithering.ogg" nar "Sliding your tentacles up her legs and slowly pulling them apart." - nar "Hermione struggles against you but her effort is in vain." + nar "Hermione struggles against you, but her efforts are in vain." her "Please no... Not here." if hermione.is_worn("panties"): nar "The tentacles slowly remove her panties, revealing her pussy to the entire class." @@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: nar "It suddenly opens to reveal a long slender appendage with an engorged base." her "What the hell is that? It looks like a..." nar "While she is focused on the dangling limb above her, you move six of your smaller tentacles towards her waist." - her "Oh god no, someone please help me! Professor Sprout do something!" + her "Oh god no, someone, please help me! Professor Sprout, do something!" spo "Students, stand back!" nar "Professor Sprout casts an impressive-looking spell at the mass of writhing tentacles." play sound "sounds/magic3.ogg" @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: spo "If I try anything more advanced than the spell I just cast, I might hurt you." nar "You move two smaller tentacles to her asshole and start teasing the entrance, slowly prying it open." her "Then what am I supposed to do?!" - spo "Just stay as still as possible and it should eventually let you go..." + spo "Just stay as still as possible, and it should eventually let you go..." nar "You move a tentacle with a mouth on the end of it to her right breast and latch onto it." her "Please, I'm not going to be able to stay still if this keeps going!" nar "The three tentacles at the entrance of her vagina suddenly thrust into her." @@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: stop background fadeout 3.0 - nar "After everyone leaves the room your body starts to turn back to normal..." + nar "After everyone leaves the room, your body starts to turn back to normal..." gen "That was hot!" nar "You notice that something is amiss..." gen "What happened to my clothes?!" @@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ label tentacle_scene_intro: play sound "sounds/run_03.ogg" - nar "You dash through the castle in a flash and get back to your office where, fortunately you find some spare clothes lying about." + nar "You dash through the castle in a flash and get back to your office where, fortunately, you find some spare clothes lying about." $ desk_OBJ.foreground = None $ sealed_scroll_ITEM.used = True @@ -390,9 +390,9 @@ label tentacle_1: #Public path play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg" show her_tentacles_public_3 as cg her "..." - spo "If you keep thrashing about so much it won't let you go, stay still girl!" + spo "If you keep thrashing about so much it won't let you go, stay still, girl!" her "I-I'm trying!" - gen "Are you sure you're trying enough? Judging by how much you're moving I'd say that's quite the opposite." + gen "Are you sure you're trying enough? Judging by how much you're moving, I'd say that's quite the opposite." gen "Someone might even think that you are enjoying this." her "They wouldn't..." mal "Who's she talking to?" @@ -410,15 +410,15 @@ label tentacle_1: #Public path nar "You increase the speed of the tentacles." play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg" fadein 2 fadeout 2 her "{size=-3}*mmmmmmm*{/size}" - gen "I don't think you will. In fact I know that you won't." + gen "I don't think you will. In fact, I know that you won't." gen "Because I know what you are. A slut." gen "A slut who can only think about getting off when she's being fucked by a plant in front of her classmates." stop background fadeout 2 nar "You stop moving the tentacles." gen "Now tell them what you are." - her "W-w-what? No please, just don't stop." + her "W-w-what? No, please, just don't stop." play sound "sounds/creaking.ogg" - gen "Tell them what you are and I'll keep going." + gen "Tell them what you are, and I'll keep going." her "I can't... Just keep going..." gen "Say it." her "{size=-3}I'm a slut.{/size}" @@ -449,11 +449,11 @@ label tentacle_1: #Public path show her_tentacles_public_7 as cg stop background fadeout 2 play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg" - nar "With one final surge you release the pent up energy in a surge of white sap all over her." + nar "With one final surge you release the pent-up energy in a surge of white sap all over her." play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg" gen "By the gods, it's as if each vine is cumming. This is amazing..." play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg" - nar "The sensations proved to much for Hermione and she faints, going limp in your tentacles." + nar "The sensations proved too much for Hermione, and she faints, going limp in your tentacles." mal "What a slut..." fem "That's what I've been telling you!" mal2 "Man, I'm going to have to join Gryffindor." @@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ label tentacle_1: #Public path pause.8 nar "You place Hermione back onto the desk as the plant that you are occupying slowly wilts and dies." nar "Professor Sprout quickly runs over." - spo "Miss Granger are you okay?" + spo "Miss Granger, are you okay?" her "..." spo "Quickly, someone take her to the hospital wing." mal "Should we cover her up?" @@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ label tentacle_2: # Personal path nar "You start to rotate the tentacles in her vagina." gen "!!! *HMMMMM*" mal "Wow, I think she's starting to enjoy it." - fem "Hermione? No way, she's too stuck-up to let boys kiss her, not to mention enjoying sex. {size=-6}With a plant but still..{/size}" + fem "Hermione? No way, she's too stuck-up to let boys kiss her, not to mention enjoying sex. {size=-6}With a plant but still...{/size}" mal2 "I don't know man, she doesn't look like she hates it." play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg" fadein 2 fadeout 2 nar "You increase the speed of the tentacles in her vagina." @@ -548,11 +548,11 @@ label tentacle_2: # Personal path show her_tentacles_personal_4 as cg nar "You enter her tight ass. The feeling of being in every hole at once is incredible." her "*Mmmmmmmmh*" - nar "Hermione barely manages a groan, overwhelmed by the shear amount of pleasure she is currently bombarded with." + nar "Hermione barely manages a groan, overwhelmed by the sheer amount of pleasure she is currently bombarded with." play background "sounds/slickloop.ogg" fadein 2 fadeout 2 - gen "Admit it! You're loving this aren't you." + gen "Admit it! You're loving this, aren't you?" gen "Having your holes filled in front of your classmates like the whore you are." - gen "Go on say it! Tell me what you are!" + gen "Go on, say it! Tell me what you are!" her "*Hmmm aaaaa hhhhhhuuuttt*" gen "What was that, I couldn't quite make it out over the sound of you sucking dick." her "*Hmmm aaaaa hhhhhhuuuttt*!" @@ -570,7 +570,7 @@ label tentacle_2: # Personal path nar "You quicken the pace as she convulses beneath you." show her_tentacles_personal_7 as cg play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg" - nar "You explode inside of her from every tentacle-like heads, filling her up to the brim." + nar "You explode inside of her from every tentacle-like head, filling her up to the brim." stop background fadeout 2 play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg" mal "Told you she was a slut." @@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ label tentacle_2: # Personal path pause.8 nar "Professor Sprout quickly runs over." - spo "Miss Granger are you okay? Miss Granger!" + spo "Miss Granger, are you okay? Miss Granger!" her "..................*Ah*" spo ".... She's breathing, thank be Merlin." spo "You! Yes, you girls! Take her to the hospital wing at once!" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy index e81be702..b0f5a2ee 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/gifts.rpy @@ -9,44 +9,44 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): $ states.her.gifted = True if gift_item == lollipop_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A lollipop?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A lollipop?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "Sweets are for kids, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") call her_mood(-5) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A lollipop?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "*Ehm*... Sure, thanks..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "A lollipop?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Clever girls uses sweets like these as a \"weapon\"." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") + her "Clever girls use sweets like these as a \"weapon\"." ("smile", "base", "base", "R") call give_gift("You give the lollipop to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) elif gift_item == chocolate_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A chocolate bar?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Hermione...", gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-10) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A chocolate bar?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") - her "That thing about fairies..." + her "That thing about fairies..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "That is a joke of some sort, right?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Hermione...", gift_item) her "Thank you..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-10) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A chocolate bar?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "I just like the way it crunches, [name_genie_hermione]! N-not the taste..." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Hermione...", gift_item) @@ -60,113 +60,113 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-10) elif gift_item == plush_owl_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A stuffed owl?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "It's cute..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the owl to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-7) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A plush toy?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I like it!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the owl to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-10) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A toy?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Toys are for kids, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "But I'll take it..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") call give_gift("You give the owl to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-15) - else: # Lv 7+ - her "This is one of those adult toys isn't it?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + else: + her "This is one of those adult toys, isn't it?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "There's got to be a switch or a button somewhere..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "So... Does it vibrate or something?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Oh...?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") - her "So it is really just a plush toy then?" + her "So it is really just a plush toy then?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") her "Shame..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "I mean, thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give the owl to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-4) elif gift_item == butterbeer_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Are you sure about that, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her "It does contain alcohol, you know..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the bottle to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-3) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Butterbeer, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "To let you in on a little secret, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "I'm a big fan of this completely harmless beverage." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the bottle to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-10) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give the bottle to Hermione...",gift_item) her "I shall drink this with the girls later." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-15) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Butterbeer...?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the bottle to Hermione...",gift_item) her "I shall drink this later with the boys." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Err... I meant to say with the girls, of course." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "*Err*... I meant to say with the girls, of course." ("open", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(-20) elif gift_item == science_mag_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "\"Popular magic\" magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "I will use them for my research!" call her_mood(-15) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Sometimes I find information in magazines that I could never find in a book..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "I will use them for my research!" call her_mood(-10) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Oh..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Yes, I used to read magazines like that a lot..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Lately not so much though..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-3) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "*Ehm*..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "To be honest, magazines like that lost their appeal to me completely lately..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "But I don't mind taking them off you hands anyway, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") + her "But I don't mind taking them off your hands anyway, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(0) elif gift_item == girls_mag_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "*Hmm*?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her "This is the sort of press some Slytherin bimbo would appreciate." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") her "I am way above silly magazines like that, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(0) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "I don't read magazines of that nature, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "................" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") her "But I could give it a try just to humour you I suppose..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-5) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. - her "I ashamed to admit this, but..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + elif states.her.level < 18: + her "I'm ashamed to admit this, but..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "I really enjoy reading magazines like that lately..." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-15) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "The Latest edition of \"Girlz\"?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "I can't have enough of that brilliant magazine!" ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) @@ -174,54 +174,54 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-15) elif gift_item == adult_mag_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "Are that...?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Adult magazines, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Given to me by An esteemed wizard of your status?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "[name_genie_hermione], surely you could find a more productive way to spend your free time." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + her "[name_genie_hermione], surely you could find a more productive way to spend your spare time." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "And I most definitely would not have use for those..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(7) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Adult magazines?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione], I have no interest in things like that." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "And how is this an appropriate present for one of your students, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(3) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Adult magazines?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione], this is such an inappropriate present for a girl like me..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) her "I shall throw these away myself..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") call her_mood(-8) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "The New edition of \"L.o.v.e.\"!!!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her "Err.. I mean, adult magazines?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") + her "*Err*... I mean, adult magazines?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") her "This is a little inappropriate..." her "But I will take them..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) - her "thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-15) elif gift_item == porn_mag_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "*Hmm*... What is this?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione], those are porn magazines!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "Shame on you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(15) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Porn magazines?" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "[name_genie_hermione], what do you expect me to do with those?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Research them?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "Despicable!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") call her_mood(8) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "That's hardcore porn, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "Which is a completely inappropriate gift for a girl like me!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") her ".............." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "But I will take them..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of porn magazines to Hermione...",gift_item) - her "And I shall throw them in the trash, where they and... girls who like these things belong..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "And I shall throw them in the rubbish, where they, and girls who like these things belong..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") call her_mood(0) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Pornography?" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "................" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "How can women even agree to do things like that, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -232,25 +232,25 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-15) elif gift_item == krum_poster_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A Quidditch poster?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "What am I supposed to do with it, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "No, thank you." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(0) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A Quidditch poster?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "I think I saw this player once or twice..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "He is that Durmstrang student, right?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the poster to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-5) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A Viktor Krum poster, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Can't say that I care much for Quidditch, but..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her "I can see why the girls find the brutish physique of some players appealing..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") call give_gift("You give the poster to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-15) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "A Viktor Krum poster?!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "mid") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") call give_gift("You give the poster to Hermione...",gift_item) @@ -259,95 +259,95 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-25) elif gift_item == sexy_lingerie_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. - her "lingerie?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + if states.her.level < 6: + her "Lingerie?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "[name_genie_hermione], I cannot accept a gift like this from you..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(10) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. - her "sexy lingerie?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "You know I cannot possibly accept a gift like that from you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + elif states.her.level < 12: + her "Sexy lingerie?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "You know I cannot possibly accept a gift like this from you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "(It's pretty though)........." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") call her_mood(0) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. - her "sexy lingerie?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + elif states.her.level < 18: + her "Sexy lingerie?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "[name_genie_hermione] that is so inappropriate..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Hermione...",gift_item) her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(-7) - else: # Lv 7+ - her "sexy lingerie?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "Do You think it will make me look like one of the witches in those adult magazines, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") + else: + her "Sexy lingerie?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "Do you think wearing these will make me look like one of the witches in those adult magazines, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") her "Oh... I mean, thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-15) elif gift_item == sexy_stockings_ITEM : - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "Stockings?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "[name_genie_hermione], are you insinuating that I wear these?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(8) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Sexy stockings?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Isn't this a bit inappropriate, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(0) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Sexy stockings?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you I guess..." ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stockings to Hermione...",gift_item) her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(-8) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Sexy stockings?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "These are almost completely transparent, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stockings to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-10) elif gift_item == pink_condoms_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "Condoms?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "[name_genie_hermione], I wouldn't even know what to do with them..." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(6) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "... Condoms?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "*Ehm*... Is this a part of some new Hogwarts sex ed program or something?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "No, [name_genie_hermione]... It feels wrong to accept a thing like this from you..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "No, [name_genie_hermione]... It feels wrong to accept something like this from you..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(0) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A pack of condoms?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") - her "[name_genie_hermione], what possible use could I have for those?" + her "[name_genie_hermione], what possible use could I have for those?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "Well, I shall accept them simply because it is rude to refuse a gift..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give a pack of condoms to Hermione...", gift_item) call her_mood(-3) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "A pack of condoms?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her "I appreciate your concern, [name_genie_hermione]. Thank you." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") call give_gift("You give a pack of condoms to Hermione...", gift_item) call her_mood(-4) elif gift_item == vibrator_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A magic wand?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "No, it doesn't look like--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - her ".........?" + her ".........?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") her "!!!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "This is just beyond inappropriate!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(10) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "Is this what I think it is?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], let me remind you that I belong to the noble house of Gryffindor." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "A present like that would be appropriate for a girl from Slytherin, [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(10) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Is that a... vibrator?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "The design..." - her "it reminds me of my wand..." - her "Did you have this custom made for me [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "The design..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "It reminds me of my wand..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "Did you have this custom-made for me [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "This is inappropriate..." ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "But I shall take it nonetheless..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(0) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "This vibrator..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "It's... calling out for me..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her "But not in a dirty way, [name_genie_hermione]." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -356,26 +356,26 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-10) elif gift_item == anal_lube_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "I don't know what this is..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "But I have the feeling that the jar is full of something vile and inappropriate..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "No, thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." + her "No, thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(6) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "I think I know what this is..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "But why would you give something like this to one of your pupils, [name_genie_hermione]?" her "No, thank you." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") call her_mood(2) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "Anal lubricant?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*.. well... I know this girl..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - her "I mean I don't know her, she is a friend of a friend..." - her "Yes, I will take this for her..." + her @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*... Well... I know this girl..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "I mean, I don't know her, she is a friend of a friend..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "Yes, I will take this for her..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") call give_gift("You give the jar to Hermione...",gift_item) - her @ cheeks blush "Still, I think you should not give presents like this to your pupils, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Still, I think you should not give presents like this to one of your pupils, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") call her_mood(0) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Anal lubricant, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I know a couple of girls who would do anything for a commodity like that." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "Thank for looking out for us, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -383,22 +383,22 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-5) elif gift_item == ballgag_and_cuffs_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "What is this?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Is this like one of those adult toys?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") her "What woman in her right mind would subject herself to a humiliation like that?" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And what possible use could I have for such objects?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "This is just insulting, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(10) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], do you not realise how inappropriate it would be for me to accept a present like that?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And I would not even know what to do with them anyway..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "I mean these fluffy things are obviously handcuffs..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "But this ball... *ehm*..." + her "But this ball... *Ehm*..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "[name_genie_hermione], please..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Just put them away." + her "Just put them away." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(5) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A month ago I would've felt insulted to receive a gift like this..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "But by now I know that some girls really do find pleasure in toys like..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "But I assure you that I am not one of them, [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -406,33 +406,33 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): her @ cheeks blush "Yes, I shall take these to her..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") call give_gift("You give the ball gag and cuffs to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-9) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her @ cheeks blush "A ball gag and handcuffs?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") - her "This is completely inappropriate, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") # :) + her "This is completely inappropriate, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") her "But a gift is a gift, right?" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the ball gag and cuffs to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-15) elif gift_item == anal_plugs_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "*Hmm*...?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Are those like key chain toys?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Is this some kind of keychain toy?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the anal plugs to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") call her_mood(-8) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], are those adult toys of some sort?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "those are some of those anal things, aren't they?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "[name_genie_hermione] this is nothing but a weapon meant to oppress women!" + her @ cheeks blush "Those are some of those anal things, aren't they?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "[name_genie_hermione] this is nothing but a weapon meant to oppress women!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "Despicable!" ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(15) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. - her "Yes, I know that some girls have *uhm*..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Have use for things such as these..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her "But not me, [name_genie_hermione]." + elif states.her.level < 18: + her "Yes, I know that some girls have, *uhm*..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "A use for things such as these..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "But not me, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "No, thank you." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(0) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Anal plugs?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "I have no use for things like that, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "They are so pretty though..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-10) elif gift_item == testral_strapon_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "What is that?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "An artefact of some sort or a trophy?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "So well-crafted..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -452,17 +452,17 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call give_gift("You give the strap-on to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you very much, [name_genie_hermione]. I promise to take good care of it." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-20) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "!!!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "That is..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "But it doesn't even look... human..." + her "But it doesn't even look... human..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "I mean..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "[name_genie_hermione], do you have no shame?!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") - her "Presenting a thing like that to a pupil?!" + her "Presenting a thing like that to a pupil?!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") her ".................." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Please put it away, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(15) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "That thing..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Is that the actual size of the... of the real \"thing\"?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I mean..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") @@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): her "I will take it..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") call give_gift("You give the strap-on to Hermione...",gift_item) call her_mood(-10) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "It's... It's magnificent, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "Is it really modelled after a thestral?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "But the creatures are invisible..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") @@ -485,15 +485,15 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-30) elif gift_item == broom_2000_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "A broom...?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "*Hmm*..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") her "What is that silly-looking thing attached to it?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") - her "Is it like a saddle...?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "Is it some kind of saddle...?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the broom to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you for the gift, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") call her_mood(-20) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A broom...?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "*Hmm*..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "It's a sex-toy of some sort, isn't it?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -501,20 +501,20 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call give_gift("You give the broom to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-20) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A broom...?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "*Hmm*..." + her "*Hmm*..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "What kind of saddle is that...?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "Well, doesn't matter." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Refusing an expensive gift like that would be rude..." + her "Refusing an expensive gift like that would be rude..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the broom to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-30) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "A broom..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "*Hmm*..." + her "*Hmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "That saddle, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "It was designed especially for witches, was it not?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "It was designed specifically for witches, wasn't it?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") her "I am not sure whether this is inappropriate or clever..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "But this is a brilliant piece of engineering either way..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the broom to Hermione...",gift_item) @@ -522,23 +522,23 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-30) elif gift_item == sexdoll_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "Is this..." ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "A sex doll?!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") her "[name_genie_hermione]!!!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") call her_mood(20) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her "A sex doll?" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "This is just so unbecoming for an esteemed wizard such as yourself, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(20) - elif states.her.level < 18: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 18: her "A sex doll..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "This is a little inappropriate..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "But maybe we could use it for a prank or something..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") call give_gift("You give the blow-up doll to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") call her_mood(-10) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "the Joanne sex doll?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I Can't say that I approve of this..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "But I know Harry would love to have a go at it..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -547,31 +547,31 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): call her_mood(-30) elif gift_item == anal_beads_ITEM: - if states.her.level < 6: # Lv 1-2. + if states.her.level < 6: her "*Hmm*...?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Is this a necklace?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the anal beads to Hermione...",gift_item) her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-8) - elif states.her.level < 12: # Lv 3-4. + elif states.her.level < 12: her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], are those adult toys of some sort?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "This is one of those butt... bead things, aren't they?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "[name_genie_hermione] get them away from me!" + her "[name_genie_hermione] get them away from me!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "Gross!" ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(15) - elif states.her.level < 17: # Lv 5-6. + elif states.her.level < 17: her "That's not a necklace..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I wouldn't have any use for this..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her "Thanks but no thanks [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Thanks but no, thanks [name_genie_hermione]." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") call her_mood(0) - else: # Lv 7+ + else: her "Anal beads?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Obviously I don't need this sort of thing, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "Although it's got a nice colour..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") her "....................." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Fine, I'll use them as an armband, [name_genie_hermione]." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") call give_gift("You give the anal beads to Hermione...",gift_item) - her "But I wont use them for their intended purpose..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "But I won't use them for their intended purpose..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "................" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") call her_mood(-10) @@ -581,18 +581,18 @@ label give_her_gift(gift_item): her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione], I'll ask Ginny to drink some with me later." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") call her_mood(-20) elif states.her.level < 12: - her "[name_genie_hermione]?! Drinking alcohol on school grounds is forbidden.." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "[name_genie_hermione]?! Drinking alcohol on school grounds is forbidden..." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") her "And you as a headmaster should know it!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") call her_mood(10) elif states.her.level < 18: - her "But, [name_genie_hermione].. I can't drink alcohol." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "I guess I could use it for some potion mixing though.." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "But, [name_genie_hermione]... I can't drink alcohol." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "I guess I could use it for some potion mixing though..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") call give_gift("You give the "+str(gift_item.name)+" bottle to Hermione...", gift_item) her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(-5) else: - her @ cheeks blush "But, [name_genie_hermione].. You know I can't drink.." ("soft","base", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "I get drunk too fast and I might do something I'll regret later." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "But, [name_genie_hermione]... You know I can't drink..." ("soft","base", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I usually get drunk way too fast, and I'd rather not do something I'll regret later." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "base", "base", "R") call her_mood(0) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy index c24e46af..93a6edea 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ label hermione_talk: "-Never mind-": jump hermione_talk - "-From now on I will refer to you as-": + "-From now on, I will refer to you as-": menu: "-Miss Granger-": $ temp_name = "Miss Granger" @@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ label hermione_change: her "*tsk* ..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") her "" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") elif states.her.level >= 5 and states.her.level < 19: - her "I can be a bit nerdy sometimes I suppose.." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="sweat") + her "I can be a bit nerdy sometimes I suppose..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="sweat") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level >= 19: her "I don't read as much as I used to anymore." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", emote="sweat") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 5395c66c..f5e19d54 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_fail(item): random: her "I am not wearing that..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "down") - her "Thanks. but no thanks..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "angry", "R") + her "Thanks. but no, thanks..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "angry", "R") her "You actually think I'd put on something like that?" ("annoyed", "wide", "angry", "mid") her "I'm not some Slytherin skank [name_genie_hermione], ask them to humiliate themselves for your amusement..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "L") her "This is too much." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ label her_reaction_unequip_fail(item): if item.type == "panties": random: block: - her "I'm not gonna flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + her "I'm not going to flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "{size=-4}Pervert...{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: her "Take off my panties?! No way!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label her_reaction_unequip_fail(item): elif item.type == "bra": random: block: - her "I'm not gonna flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + her "I'm not going to flash you anything!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") her "{size=-4}Pervert...{/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: her "Take off my bra?! No way!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): else: #22+ her "My muggle clothing, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "L") gen "Yeah, that one!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "It's a bit... Too normal don't you think?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "It's a bit... Too normal, don't you think?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I don't see how that's a bad thing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Alright then... Let me put it on real quick." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "My mother made that jumper for me, you know..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I wonder what she'd say if she knew I rarely wear it anymore..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "She'd probably be proud that you're not relying on her giving you clothes anymore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*... Somehow I doubt that..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*... Somehow, I doubt that..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "R") else: #22+ her "That old thing?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "It's a bit boring, don't you think?" ("open", "squint", "base", "R") @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif item == her_outfit_s_overcast: gen "Could you put on your regular clothing, the one with the school skirt and pullover?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 4: - her "The pullover does go well with the school skirt don't you think?" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "The pullover does go well with the school skirt, don't you think?" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It would look good even without the skirt on in my opinion." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "How nice, I'll let my mother know you said--" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Wait, what did you say?" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): elif states.her.level < 22: her "You suddenly want me to cover up now?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") menu: - "\"Yes, your body disgusts me and I'm doing everyone a favour...\"": + "\"Yes, your body disgusts me, and I'm doing everyone a favour...\"": her "What!?" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") "\"Of course not...\"": gen "I'd just like you to wear it... Is that so much to ask?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "But that thing is so boring..." ("clench", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "Not this one..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh... That one..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "Well I suppose I could put that one on..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Well, I suppose I could put that one on..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") her "One moment..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ################## @@ -934,7 +934,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item): her "Who?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "*Err*... I meant, you should see the zone she's--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What I meant to say was..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Just... Put it on will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just... Put it on, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Alright." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") her "" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -1419,7 +1419,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): gen "I'm not hearing a no." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I can't believe I'd even have to--" ("clench", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "No! I am not putting on this disgusting--" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Alright, Alright... A simple no would've sufficed..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, Alright... A simple \"no\" would've sufficed..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") elif states.her.level < 13: her "Latex?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): her "Wouldn't that be kind of weird?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I don't see why it would..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I mean... There's not really a pool or anything in here..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "L") - gen "Yeah... No complimentary chocolate either." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yeah... No complimentary chocolate, either." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Huh*?" ("upset", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Would you put it on if there was a pool in here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index a46f3532..395042e5 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E1_intro: lun "But [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Once we have a way to properly deal with them then I'm sure we could administer the cure without causing a fuss." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You believe there's a cure for something like this, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I have a theory... and If it works, then it should let us expel those spurty buggers." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I have a theory... And if it works, then it should let us expel those spurty buggers." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You've found a way to expel them on command?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, I wouldn't say on command... Now that is beyond even my own capabilities..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I need to conduct some more tests, and once that's done, I'll put it into practice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy index 74981ae9..d0bcdcc7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ label luna_talk: jump genie_luna_change - "-From now on I will refer to you as-" if states.lun.ev.spectrespecs.e4_complete: + "-From now on, I will refer to you as-" if states.lun.ev.spectrespecs.e4_complete: menu: "-Miss Lovegood-": $ name_luna_genie = "Miss Lovegood" @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ label genie_luna_change: lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") elif name_genie_luna == "Partner": lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Yes, we're working together now so it's only appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, we're working together now, so it's only appropriate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... Of course [name_genie_luna]." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif name_genie_luna == "Master": lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ label genie_luna_change: elif name_genie_luna == "Daddy": lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "But wont that be confusing?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "But won't that be confusing?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Would it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes, that's usually what I call my father..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "I'm your daddy now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -294,10 +294,10 @@ label name_luna_genie: gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Isn't it against the law?" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "... Is what against the law?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Teachers and students calling each other by their first name. I read an article about it in the quibbler." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") - gen "*Err*... No they recently made it legal." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Teachers and students referring to each other by their first name. I read an article about it in the quibbler." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + gen "*Err*... No, they recently made it legal." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh, How progressive!" ("soft", "base", "base", "stare") - lun "Then of course, you can call me that!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "In that case, you can call me that!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") elif name_luna_genie == "Loony": lun "Do you really need to call me that, [name_genie_luna]?" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") lun "Other students call me that to make fun of me." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") @@ -326,6 +326,6 @@ label name_luna_genie: lun "Well I do love helping you cum..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downL") lun "Sure, you can call me that." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") else: #Custom/fallback - lun "That's not too bad... Sure you can call me that." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "Sure, you can call me that!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") jump luna_talk diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/chitchats.rpy index 2d404d2e..5b068b44 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/chitchats.rpy @@ -13,26 +13,25 @@ label snape_chitchat: if not states.her.unlocked: random: block: - sna "I am starting to get worried about Albus.." ("snape_06") + sna "I am starting to get worried about Albus..." ("snape_06") sna "I simply hope he's alright." ("snape_09") block: sna "Do you know how much longer will that spell of yours last?" ("snape_05") sna "I have important matters to discuss with Albus very soon..." ("snape_09") return - ### WHORING LEVEL 01 ### if states.her.level >= 0 and states.her.level <= 2: random: sna "I am feeling rather doubtful about our whole plan again..." ("snape_06") block: - sna "Do You really think you can do this?" ("snape_24") - sna "Do You think you can break the girl?" ("snape_25") + sna "Do you really think you can do this?" ("snape_24") + sna "Do you think you can break the girl?" ("snape_25") block: if game.weather in ("rain", "blizzard"): sna "Isn't the weather lovely today?" ("snape_02") - sna "I wish it would stay like that forever." ("snape_06") + sna "I wish it would stay like this forever." ("snape_06") else: sna "Don't you just hate this wretched sunny weather?" ("snape_01") sna "I wish it would rain every day." ("snape_06") @@ -44,7 +43,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "I killed a pupil once." ("snape_01") sna "Yes... I strangled the maggot with my bare hands." ("snape_02") - sna "........*low growl*." ("snape_03") + sna "........ *Low growl*." ("snape_03") sna "Did that sound believable?" ("snape_05") sna "The moment those animals stop fearing me, I'm done for." ("snape_06") sna "Cultivating fear in the hearts of your students is the most important task for every teacher." ("snape_26") @@ -63,9 +62,9 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Being a wizard is a twenty-four hours a day..." ("snape_04") - sna "seven days a week..." ("snape_03") - sna "365 days a year job." ("snape_04") - sna "We get no vacation days..." + sna "Seven days a week..." ("snape_03") + sna "Three hundred and sixty-five days a year occupation." ("snape_04") + sna "Not even a single holiday..." block: sna "Quidditch..." ("snape_04") @@ -73,37 +72,36 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_04") - ### WHORING LEVEL 02 ### if states.her.level >= 3 and states.her.level <= 5: random: block: - sna "I have yet to notice any changes in miss Granger's behaviour..." ("snape_24") + sna "I have yet to notice any changes in Miss Granger's behaviour..." ("snape_24") sna "Are you sure that you know what you're doing?" ("snape_05") sna "" ("snape_09") block: sna "It sure feels good to be able to grant house points or take them away whenever I feel like it." ("snape_24") - sna "My authority among the students is growing every day..." + sna "My authority among the students is growing every day..." ("snape_24") sna "And when I say \"authority\" I mean \"fear\"." ("snape_02") block: sna "Did you know that the full moon is known to boost male potency?" ("snape_24") - sna "It also makes it easier to focus at a task at hand, making you more proactive." + sna "It also makes it easier to focus on a task at hand, making you more proactive." ("snape_24") sna "But who gives a damn about that, am I right?" ("snape_28") sna "" ("snape_29") block: - sna "My precious Slytherins make all of this torment worth while..." ("snape_06") + sna "My precious Slytherins make all of this torment worthwhile..." ("snape_06") sna "Their skirts are getting shorter every week, I swear." ("snape_19") block: sna "There was a time when I was young and full of hope..." ("snape_06") - sna "Ha-ha... I'm pulling your leg, mate." ("snape_28") + sna "*Ha-hah*... I'm pulling your leg, mate." ("snape_28") sna "I was never full of hope..." ("snape_29") block: sna "Someone broke into my personal storage..." ("snape_16") - sna "Only took some Gillyweed... lucky they didn't take any of my amorentia." ("snape_29") + sna "They only took some Gillyweed... Lucky they didn't take any of my amorentia." ("snape_29") sna "Not that I need or use such things." ("snape_09") block: @@ -128,7 +126,6 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_09") - ### WHORING LEVEL 03 ### if states.her.level >= 6 and states.her.level <= 8: random: block: @@ -157,7 +154,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Regrets? I don't know the meaning of the word!" ("snape_05") sna "I live a very fulfilling life." ("snape_06") - sna "Ha-ha-ha! I'm sorry, I just can't say such nonsense with a straight face." ("snape_28") + sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! I'm sorry, I just can't say such nonsense with a straight face." ("snape_28") sna "" ("snape_26") block: @@ -171,7 +168,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "So that's what freedom feels like, *huh*?" ("snape_06") block: - sna "Autumn... the most depressing time of the year..." ("snape_06") + sna "Autumn... The most depressing time of the year..." ("snape_06") sna "I Love it!" ("snape_02") sna "" ("snape_23") @@ -181,11 +178,10 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_09") - ### WHORING LEVEL 04 ### if states.her.level >= 9 and states.her.level <= 11: random: block: - sna "Lately miss Granger has gotten aggressive almost to the point of open hostility..." ("snape_24") + sna "Miss Granger has gotten aggressive lately, almost to the point of open hostility..." ("snape_24") sna "I hope you know what you're doing..." ("snape_05") sna "" ("snape_09") @@ -201,7 +197,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_23") block: - sna "According to a recent study nine out of ten girls secretly fantasise about being abused by their teacher." ("snape_24") + sna "According to a recent study, nine out of ten girls secretly fantasise about being abused by their teacher." ("snape_24") sna "I bet that tenth girl was Hermione Granger." ("snape_03") sna "" ("snape_01") @@ -210,21 +206,21 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_23") block: - sna "Do You have a few condoms to spare?" ("snape_24") - sna "I have a whole pack but..." ("snape_25") + sna "Do you have a few condoms to spare?" ("snape_24") + sna "I have a whole pack, but..." ("snape_25") sna "... they've expired years ago..." ("snape_06") - sna "The changes you brought into my life, mate." ("snape_02") + sna "The changes you've brought into my life, mate." ("snape_02") sna "" ("snape_23") block: sna "You think we could turn Hogwarts into a \"girls only\" school?" ("snape_24") sna "Hogwarts Girls Academy!" ("snape_23") - sna "Now that would be bloody perfect... except for Lockhart maybe." ("snape_13") + sna "Now that would make this institution bloody perfect... If it wasn't for for Lockhart." ("snape_13") block: sna "Why did the teacher cross the road?" ("snape_24") sna "To get away from his students!" ("snape_25") - sna "Ha-ha-ha! Gets me every time!" ("snape_28") + sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! Gets me every time!" ("snape_28") sna "" ("snape_25") block: @@ -237,7 +233,6 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_23") - ### WHORING LEVEL 05 ### if states.her.level >= 12 and states.her.level <= 14: random: block: @@ -252,7 +247,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Something rather brilliant happened last night between me and this Slytherin minx." ("snape_20") - sna "Long story short, all of my muscles ache and I still feel rather dehydrated..." ("snape_22") + sna "Long story short, all of my muscles ache, and I still feel rather dehydrated..." ("snape_22") sna "" ("snape_13") block: @@ -295,7 +290,6 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_23") - ### WHORING LEVEL 06 ### if states.her.level >= 15 and states.her.level <= 17: random: block: @@ -304,21 +298,21 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Have you heard of the \"Slug club\"?" ("snape_24") - sna "What if I start a club of my own?" + sna "What if I start a club of my own?" ("snape_24") sna "I would call it the \"Snape Club\"!" ("snape_23") - sna "I would invite girls over, offer them some tea and muffins..." + sna "I would invite girls over, offer them some tea and muffins..." ("snape_23") sna "Feel them up a little..." ("snape_13") sna "Bloody brilliant!" ("snape_22") sna "" ("snape_02") block: sna "Tell me Genie... Have you ever had your asshole licked clean by a witch?" ("snape_02") - sna "A life changing experience, neither less nor more..." ("snape_21") + sna "A life-changing experience, neither less nor more..." ("snape_21") sna "" ("snape_02") block: sna "So, how is the training going?" ("snape_24") - sna "All according to plan I hope?" + sna "All according to plan I hope?" ("snape_24") sna "" ("snape_05") block: @@ -332,7 +326,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Hogwarts benefited greatly from your arrival." ("snape_24") - sna "And when I say \"Hogwarts\" I mean \"me\"." ("snape_02") + sna "And when I say \"Hogwarts\", I mean \"me\"." ("snape_02") sna "" ("snape_23") block: @@ -342,7 +336,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Some of those Slytherin girls simply adore me these days..." ("snape_24") - sna "Personally I'd much rather be feared..." ("snape_05") + sna "Personally, I'd much rather be feared..." ("snape_05") sna "But I am willing to settle for mindless adoration..." ("snape_23") block: @@ -351,12 +345,11 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_29") - ### WHORING LEVEL 07 ### if states.her.level >= 18 and states.her.level <= 20: random: block: - sna "Miss Granger really is changing. I can see it clearly now..." ("snape_24") - sna "Her grades went down and even her attendance is far from perfect now..." + sna "Miss Granger really is changing... I can see it clearly now..." ("snape_24") + sna "Her grades went down, and even her attendance is far from perfect now..." ("snape_24") sna "But despite that she continues to excel at being a pain in my arse!" ("snape_10") sna "" ("snape_01") @@ -368,7 +361,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "I hear the vampire theme is quite popular among the girls lately." ("snape_24") sna "I would make a great vampire, don't you think?" ("snape_05") - sna "Maybe I should buy a couple of those fake fangs..." + sna "Maybe I should buy a couple of those fake fangs..." ("snape_05") sna "Just to drive the horny, little sluts completely crazy." ("snape_21") sna "" ("snape_02") @@ -384,28 +377,28 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "Sunlight, chocolate, Quidditch, cats, and orange juice..." ("snape_01") - sna "That's a list of things I don't care for..." + sna "That's a list of things I don't care for..." ("snape_01") sna "Here is a short list of things I do care for a great deal..." ("snape_02") sna "The dark arts, wine, and pussy." ("snape_23") block: - sna "have You ever seen two wizards in a fistfight?" ("snape_02") + sna "Have you ever seen two wizards in a fistfight?" ("snape_02") sna "Bloody hilarious!" ("snape_28") sna "" ("snape_23") block: - sna "You know that feeling when you just came in a girl's mouth and she swallows it all and says: \"Thank you, professor\"?" ("snape_14") + sna "You know that feeling when you come into a girl's mouth, and she swallows and says: \"Thank you, professor\"?" ("snape_14") sna "Isn't that the best?" ("snape_13") sna "" ("snape_23") block: - sna "do You think the Hogwarts ghosts sometimes spy on girls taking when they a shower and such?" ("snape_24") + sna "Do you think the Hogwarts ghosts sometimes spy on girls when they are taking a shower?" ("snape_24") sna "If I were a ghost I know I would." ("snape_13") sna "" ("snape_23") block: - sna "This one girl confessed to me that she has frequent fantasises about being abused by that squib misterFilch." ("snape_19") - sna "I think I could arrange that. Should I?" ("snape_14") + sna "This one girl confessed to me that she has frequent fantasises about being abused by that squib, mister Filch." ("snape_19") + sna "I think I could arrange that... Should I?" ("snape_14") sna "" ("snape_02") block: @@ -419,7 +412,6 @@ label snape_chitchat: sna "" ("snape_06") - ### WHORING LEVEL 08+ ### if states.her.level >= 21: random: block: @@ -456,7 +448,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "So, this witch has my cock in her mouth, right?" ("snape_24") sna "Her hot girlfriend is cleaning my asshole with her tongue..." ("snape_02") - sna "Meanwhile this third girl is on her knees with her mouth open, waiting for me to spit in it..." + sna "Meanwhile, this third girl is on her knees with her mouth open, waiting for me to spit in it..." sna "And every time I spit, she says: \"Thank you, professor Snape\"." sna "That was a bloody surreal evening..." ("snape_22") sna "" ("snape_02") @@ -480,7 +472,7 @@ label snape_chitchat: block: sna "I almost feel bad for having all the fun." ("snape_24") - sna "Do You want me to send you up some fresh Slytherin slut?" ("snape_14") + sna "Do you want me to send you up some fresh Slytherin slut?" ("snape_14") sna "" ("snape_23") return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy index f7b5efe9..6a7df689 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/hangouts.rpy @@ -205,9 +205,9 @@ label ss_he_story_E1: call bld gen "Alright. Teach me your wand-based magic now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Sure, I could do that..." ("snape_23", ypos="head") - sna "Or I could tell you some more about those ripe slytherin sluts..." ("snape_02") + sna "Or I could tell you some more about those ripe Slytherin sluts..." ("snape_02") gen "The latter, please." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Great... Get a load of this then..." ("snape_13") + sna "Great... Get a load of this, then..." ("snape_13") hide snape_main @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E2: label ss_he_story_intro_E3: sna "Have you heard of that \"men's rights movement\" nonsense?" ("snape_01", ypos="head") - sna "She is smart, popular, and has a will of iron..." ("snape_01") + sna "She is smart, popular, and has a will made from iron..." ("snape_01") sna "Lately I am starting to feel very doubtful about our whole plan..." ("snape_06") gen "You shouldn't though..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Is that so..." ("snape_26") @@ -361,11 +361,11 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E7: sna "Did you swear your loyalty to her?" ("snape_05") gen "Not really..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Why do you even bother then?" ("snape_06") - sna "The way I see it, you are an all-powerful being and she is just some muggle..." ("snape_09") + sna "The way I see it, you are an all-powerful being, and she is just some muggle..." ("snape_09") gen "She's a what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "A human... She's just a human..." ("snape_25") sna "So why bother trying to please her?" ("snape_05") - gen "Well it's complicated..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, it's complicated..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna ".............." ("snape_05") gen ".................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "She's hot, isn't she?" ("snape_02") @@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E8: sna "Especially the girls..." ("snape_22") gen "*Hmm*... Fine by me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But won't a reform like that attract unnecessary attention towards us?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Yes. You are right of course." ("snape_29") + sna "Yes. You are right, of course." ("snape_29") sna "I am getting greedy..." ("snape_29") sna "I'm getting drunk with power, my friend!" ("snape_28") sna "And this exquisite wine does not improve my judgment in the slightest either!" ("snape_28") @@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E8: label ss_he_story_intro_E9: # Replace this event. - sna "... so, after that I return back to Russia, right?" ("snape_24", ypos="head") + sna "... so, after that, I return back to Russia, right?" ("snape_24", ypos="head") gen "Back to Russia?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "But wait, it gets worse." ("snape_01") sna "Apparently I am fluent in Russian now." ("snape_05") @@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E10: sna "................!" ("snape_01") gen "It's plastic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I beg your pardon?" ("snape_05") - gen "it's plastic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It's plastic..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I don't get it..." ("snape_25") gen "This planet plans to evolve into something else in a million years or so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "In order to do that it needs a special kind of material that it can't produce on its own." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E10: gen "It's to produce plastic. Simple as that." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Are you fucking kidding me?!" ("snape_30") sna "No, no... That can't be it..." ("snape_26") - gen "*He-he*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*He-heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Are you pulling my leg?" ("snape_25") gen "You should've seen your face." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You really had me worried there, you bloody non-human bastard!" ("snape_15") @@ -486,7 +486,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E11: gen "We used to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "What happened?" ("snape_26") gen "\"The great catastrophe\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "It incinerated most of the worlds population in a matter of hours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It incinerated most of the world's population in a matter of hours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "................" ("snape_26") gen "Turning about eighty percent of the planet's surface into a scorching desert..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And the remaining twenty percent into an icy wasteland..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E13: sna "Could be." ("snape_22") sna "Nonetheless, training that girl had such a great impact on my life..." ("snape_24") sna "And even the school itself..." ("snape_24") - gen "In other words you are getting less broody and you blame me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "In other words, you are getting less broody, and you blame me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Something like that..." ("snape_23") sna "I'm losing my dark presence, man." ("snape_28") # :) @@ -566,11 +566,11 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E13: label ss_he_story_E14: - sna "... So she says, \"Sir, could you choke me a little, please\"!" ("snape_02", ypos="head") + sna "... So, she says, \"Sir, could you choke me a little, please\"!" ("snape_02", ypos="head") sna "And I am happy to oblige of course!" ("snape_13") sna "So, I choke that little bitch while I'm fucking her, right?" ("snape_19") sna "And she rolls her eyes up to the point where I can't even see her pupils anymore!" ("snape_19") - sna "Her face turns to a cute tint of purple and she's barely breathing." ("snape_19") + sna "Her face turns to a cute tint of purple, and she's barely breathing." ("snape_19") sna "So I think that maybe I should loosen up my grip a little..." ("snape_14") sna "And that's when the bitch starts to cum!" ("snape_21") gen "Sweet! And then you woke up?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -621,7 +621,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E15: gen "Yes, for as long as Slytherin is in the lead." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Seriously? She still cares about that?" ("snape_05") gen "Very much so." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Well in that case I shall personally ensure that the Slytherin house gets as many house points as possible." ("snape_23") + sna "Well, in that case, I shall personally ensure that the Slytherin house gets as many house points as possible." ("snape_23") hide snape_main diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/intro.rpy index ca15e296..4329070a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/events/intro.rpy @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ label snape_intro_E1: menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "\"Actually I'm a bit busy.\"": + "\"Actually, I'm a bit busy.\"": sna "" ("snape_04", trans=d3) anon "Well, aren't you always, Albus?" "\"Of course. What is it?\"": @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ label snape_intro_E1: anon "Half of my... so-called \"pupils\" are nothing but annoying maggots that make my life miserable on a daily basis." gen "................" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "" ("snape_06") - anon "Most of them belong to your precious Gryffindor house of course..." + anon "Most of them belong to your precious Gryffindor house, of course..." gen "......?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "" ("snape_03") anon "The wretched Weasley family, that noisy Granger girl and of course the hero of all the juvenile delinquents around the globe..." @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ label snape_intro_E1: # Event 2 -# Sanpe talks to genie about hermione, snape becomes suspicious +# Snape talks to Genie about Hermione, Snape becomes suspicious label snape_intro_E2: play music "music/Music for Manatees.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed @@ -191,9 +191,9 @@ label snape_intro_E2: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Granger? Hermione Granger, right?\"": anon "Yes, her..." - anon " She also happens to be a part of the \"Potter gang\"." + anon "She also happens to be a part of the \"Potter gang\"." "\"I got your back, Jack, witches be crazy!\"": - anon "What...? Albus you behave oddly lately." + anon "What...? Albus, you're behaving oddly lately." anon "Is everything alright?" menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ label snape_intro_E2: sna "" ("snape_20") anon "Then lift her skirt up, and..." sna "" ("snape_12") - anon "*Ahem*! Sadly, nowadays we teachers are severely limited in the disciplinary measures we have at our disposal..." + anon "*Ahem*! Sadly, nowadays, us teachers are severely limited in the disciplinary measures we have at our disposal..." anon "I know you are just as powerless as I am in this matter, but I'm telling you, that girl had better stop testing my patience." menu: @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ label snape_intro_E2: sna "" ("snape_06") anon "Perhaps I'd better go get some sleep." anon "I need to be in my top shape every morning..." - anon "You can't show weakness to those brats or they will swallow you whole..." + anon "You can't show weakness to those brats, or they will swallow you whole..." sna "" ("snape_24") anon "Good night, Albus." @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ label snape_intro_E3: menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Hermione Granger? No, Nothing from her.\"": - anon "I see... So she's been bluffing then." + anon "I see... So, she's been bluffing then." sna "" ("snape_16") anon "What an annoying witch." "\"Yes...\"": @@ -353,12 +353,12 @@ label snape_intro_E3: "\"What? What kind of question is that?\"": sna "" ("snape_06") anon "You are right..." - anon "Forgive me... I'm just being paranoid I suppose..." + anon "Forgive me... I'm just being paranoid, I suppose..." sna "" ("snape_05") anon "But you can never be too cautious with rumours about \"you know who\" still being alive and all..." "\"Tall broody guy?\"": sna "" ("snape_06") - anon "Albus, lately you adopted a peculiar sense of humour, that I do not care for in a slightest..." + anon "Albus, lately you adopted a peculiar sense of humour, that I do not care for in the slightest..." anon "Maybe you should spend a little less time in the company of that big oaf Hagrid." "-Use magic to get the right answer-": $ d_flag_01 = True @@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label snape_intro_E3: sna "" ("snape_03") anon "...!" gen "What kind of question is this...{w=0.1} Severus?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - anon "Forgive me... I'm just being paranoid I suppose..." + anon "Forgive me... I'm just being paranoid, I suppose..." sna "" ("snape_06") anon "Well, good night, Albus." @@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ label snape_intro_E4: gen "And I sure as heck don't work for \"I don't know who\"!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "............................." ("snape_01") gen "I've been *Ehm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "... Conducting an experiment back in my world, during which something went wrong and I ended up here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "... Conducting an experiment back in my world, during which something went wrong, and I ended up here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna ".........................." ("snape_01") sna "What became of the real Albus Dumbledore then?" ("snape_01") @@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ label snape_intro_E4: gen "He's Probably feeling just as surprised finding himself in my world as I am about finding myself here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "...................................." ("snape_01") sna "When did this happen?" ("snape_01") - gen "It happened few days ago..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It happened a few days ago..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Can you go back?" ("snape_01") gen "I think so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Why didn't you?" ("snape_31") @@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ label snape_intro_E4: sna "Have a safe trip home now." ("snape_01") gen "*Ehm*... Thank you, Mr Servus." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "My name is {b}Severus{/b}, not Servus.." ("snape_43") + sna "My name is {b}Severus{/b}, not Servus..." ("snape_43") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Good luck with your students and the \"Potter Gang\"." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "\"The potter gang\"?" ("snape_01") @@ -623,12 +623,12 @@ label snape_intro_E4: sna "Why are you still here, creature?" ("snape_01") gen "There's no need to be rude." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And I'm not sure... I tried to undo the spell but nothing happened..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And I'm not sure... I tried to undo the spell, but nothing happened..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Marvellous..." ("snape_35") sna "What does this mean? You're staying here for good?" ("snape_01") gen "Of course not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Me being here at all is only possible because the spell is compensating for the imbalance caused by itself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "said spell will wear off eventually and I shall be pulled back into my world." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "said spell will wear off eventually, and I shall be pulled back into my world." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Likewise, your Dumb-le-dork friend shall be pulled back here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I see..." ("snape_01") sna "How long until the spell wears off?" ("snape_01") @@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ label snape_intro_E4: sna "....................." ("snape_01") sna "Splendid..." ("snape_31") - gen "Alright, to be honest I'm not sure where to go from here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, to be honest, I'm not sure where to go from here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "All this time I thought I could undo the spell whenever I wanted to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..................................................." ("snape_01") sna ".................................." ("snape_01") @@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ label snape_intro_E5: sna "Let's just roll with it..." ("snape_29") gen "Excuse me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Well what else could we do?" ("snape_06") + sna "Well, what else could we do?" ("snape_06") sna "Normally I would alert the ministry of magic and let them take care of this mess..." sna "But I'd rather avoid any dealings with those rotten bureaucrats this time..." sna "Also, losing a headmaster, even temporarily, could hurt the school's reputation..." ("snape_10") @@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ label snape_intro_E5: "\"I want three wishes.\"": sna "Three wishes?" ("snape_44") sna "Who do you think I am? A genie?" ("snape_24") - gen "Three wishes or I'm walking through that door right now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Three wishes, or I'm walking through that door right now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "...Fine." ("snape_31") sna "What do you want?" ("snape_35") gen "First, I want a maid!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -804,14 +804,14 @@ label snape_intro_E5: gen "Intriguing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call sna_chibi(flip=False) sna "*Hmm*... I suppose that could be arranged..." ("snape_05", trans=d3) - gen "Oh, and I wouldn't mind if you sent me some of those Slytherin girls as well.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, and I wouldn't mind if you sent me some of those Slytherin girls as well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..............." ("snape_05") sna "........................." sna "*Ha-ha-ha*!!!" ("snape_28") gen "What? What did I say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*A-ha-ha-ha-ha*..." ("snape_28") sna "No, no, my apologies..." ("snape_02") - sna "It's just that to me you still look and sound like Albus..." + sna "It's just that to me, you still look and sound like Albus..." sna "To hear Professor Dumbledore say things like \"Send me some of those girls\"..." sna "It's hysterical..." ("snape_22") sna "But you wouldn't understand..." ("snape_09") @@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ label snape_intro_E5: pause.2 sna "................." ("snape_06", ypos="head") - sna "\"Send those whores up, Severus!\" Ha-ha-ha.." ("snape_28") + sna "\"Send those whores up, Severus!\" *Ha-ha-ha*..." ("snape_28") call sna_chibi("leave") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/nicknames.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/nicknames.rpy index 21c12dca..8a4b899d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/nicknames.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/nicknames.rpy @@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ label snape_nicknames_genie: sna "Genie I presume?" ("snape_05") gen "Nah.... {i}G{/i} as in gangsta..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{i}Wuddup it's mister G coming at you from the big Hog.{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Yeah, no I'm not doing that..." ("snape_04") + sna "Yeah, no... I'm not doing that." ("snape_04") "-Big D-": sna "I don't think that the real Albus Dumbledore would call himself that..." ("snape_03") gen "I suppose I am much greater than he is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Greater than the real Albus Dumbledore?!" ("snape_25") - sna "*Hmph*... You might be a Genie but that is taking things too far..." ("snape_03") + sna "*Hmph*... You might be a Genie, but that is taking things too far..." ("snape_03") "-Master-": sna "I am not some common house elf..." ("snape_03") gen "What kind of elf are you then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label snape_nicknames_genie: sna "Why on earth would I do that?" ("snape_05") gen "Because it's true." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You look like an old man." ("snape_03") - gen "Hey, I'm only a sixtyfive thousand years old thank you very much..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Hey, I'm only a sixtyfive thousand years old, thank you very much..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I'm talking about--{w=0.4} You know what, nevermind..." ("snape_03") "-Lord Voldemort-": sna "..." ("snape_11") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/snape/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/snape/summon.rpy index 1ebe5c87..19d0231c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/snape/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/snape/summon.rpy @@ -57,16 +57,16 @@ label summon_snape: else: sna "I hope you have some wine at least?" ("snape_01") gen "I hoped you'd bring your own for once." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I see.." ("snape_04") + sna "I see..." ("snape_04") sna "I guess you don't need my help after all." ("snape_31") - gen "(Bloody alcoholic..)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Bloody alcoholic...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump .talk "-Address me only as-" if states.her.ev.intro.e6_complete: call snape_nicknames_genie jump .talk - "-From now on I will refer to you as-" if states.her.ev.intro.e6_complete: + "-From now on, I will refer to you as-" if states.her.ev.intro.e6_complete: call snape_nicknames jump .talk diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy index 4dd63ff4..e860da45 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ label susan_chitchat: sus "I hope I'm not disappointing her too much..." ("open", "base", "sad", "downR") block: - sus "Madam Pomfrey once prescribed me a \"Draught of peace\" to drink the night before exams so I could get some sleep." ("open", "base", "base", "right") + sus "Madam Pomfrey once prescribed me a \"Draught of peace\" to drink the night before exams, so I could get some sleep." ("open", "base", "base", "right") sus "But even with her prescription, Snape wouldn't give one to me." ("open", "base", "sad", "downR") block: @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label susan_chitchat: block: sus "How come Professor Snape is allowed to ask us to gather ingredients in the forbidden forest?" ("soft", "happy", "sad", "mid") - sus "The students that didn't go got a bad grade, and the ones that did got detention..." ("angry", "closed", "sad", "mid") + sus "The students who didn't go received a bad grade, and the ones who did got detention..." ("angry", "closed", "sad", "mid") sus "How is that fair?" ("soft", "happy", "sad", "mid") block: @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ label susan_chitchat: block: sus "Just because the Hufflepuff house is next to the kitchen, doesn't mean we can get food whenever we like." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - sus "So why does the Slytherin students keep asking me to show where I hide my melons?" ("annoyed", "happy", "sad", "down") + sus "So why do the Slytherin students keep asking me to show where I hide my melons?" ("annoyed", "happy", "sad", "down") block: sus "Why do people seem to find my surname so funny?" ("soft", "happy", "sad", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/susan/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/susan/events/intro.rpy index f1716a6f..5dd1e75f 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/susan/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/susan/events/intro.rpy @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ label nt_he_susan_E1: ton "Lately she's been too shy to even answer the simplest of questions during my class." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") ton "She's lost quite a few points for her house that way." ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") ton "Not in my lessons, of course. I'd never take points from Hufflepuff!" ("soft", "base", "worried", "R") - gen "Just send her my way and I'll drown her in house points!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just send her my way, and I'll drown her in house points!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And show her that her bod--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Ahem!* Show her that she's appreciated..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That's what I was thinking..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ label nt_he_susan_E1: gen "I don't know... banter?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Snape sure as hell hasn't sent me any girls..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I can teach him a thing or two about sharing - if you'd like..." ("soft", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - ton "The more the merrier in my opinion..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + ton "The more, the merrier in my opinion..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "You don't mean Snape and I..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course not, don't be silly!" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Maybe he's afraid you'd steal them from him if you got the chance..." ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ label susan_intro_E1: sus "S-Sir?" ("soft", "happy", "shocked", "mid") gen "(This must be that girl she wanted me to help with body confidence...)" gen "Did professor Tonks tell you why I wanted to see you?" - sus "N-no...{w} I'm not in trouble am I?" ("open", "happy", "base", "stare") + sus "N-no...{w} I'm not in trouble, am I?" ("open", "happy", "base", "stare") gen "Don't worry, I just needed to confirm something - You're free to go..." sus "C-confirm something?" ("angry", "happy", "base", "mid") sus "So I'm not in trouble then?" ("open", "happy", "sad", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/susan/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/susan/summon.rpy index 937ce246..4af0ac9d 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/susan/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/susan/summon.rpy @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ label summon_susan: if game.daytime: sus "I will go back to classes then, [name_genie_susan]." ("base", "base", "shocked", "mid") else: - sus "*Ehm*... good night then, [name_genie_susan]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + sus "*Ehm*... Good night then, [name_genie_susan]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") play sound "sounds/door.ogg" @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ label susan_talk: jump susan_requests - "-From now on I will refer to you as-": + "-From now on, I will refer to you as-": menu: "-Miss Bones-": $ name_susan_genie = "Miss Bones" @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ label susan_talk: "-Cow-": $ name_susan_genie = "Cow" sus "Why would you want to call me that, [name_genie_susan]?" ("angry", "happy", "low", "mid") - sus "The other girls already call me that and I hate it..." ("angry", "narrow", "low", "down") + sus "The other girls already call me that, and I hate it..." ("angry", "narrow", "low", "down") gen "You poor thing!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You see, if someone like me would call you that, maybe it wouldn't affect you as much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "I--... You might be right." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -175,10 +175,10 @@ label susan_talk: gen "You know... What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Isn't that a name you'd give to a-- A cow?" ("open", "happy", "sad", "downR") gen "Oh, is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sus @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*... Yes, I think so at least..." ("open", "happy", "worried", "mid") + sus @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*... Yes, I think so, at least..." ("open", "happy", "worried", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "Some of the other girls shouted it at me before..." ("annoyed", "happy", "worried", "down") gen "That's a shame... I thought you'd like it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sus @ cheeks blush "Oh, Well... I suppose as long as it's not ill meaning..." ("open", "happy", "worried", "downR") + sus @ cheeks blush "Oh, well... I suppose as long as it's not ill meaning..." ("open", "happy", "worried", "downR") gen "Of course not!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Alright then, you can call me that if you like..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") jump susan_talk @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ label susan_talk: sus @ cheeks blush "I'm not a... slut." ("soft", "narrow", "sad", "downR") gen "Of course not. This is just to strengthen your self-esteem." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Trust me, I know what I'm doing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Being called a slut always boosts a girls confidence!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Being called a slut always boosts a girl's confidence!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "R-- Really?" ("soft", "happy", "sad", "mid") gen "Yes. Now... shall we try it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "... alright, [name_genie_susan]..." ("base", "happy", "sad", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 6d75958d..f43130b6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/susan/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label sus_reaction_touch(what): random: sus @ cheeks blush "W--{w=0.2} Why are you..." ("soft", "happy", "sad", "stare") sus @ cheeks blush "P--{w=0.2} please, it's embarrassing..." ("angry", "happy", "sad", "downR") - sus @ cheeks blush "D--{w=0.2} don't... Don't look at me sir..." ("soft", "closed", "sad", "mid") + sus @ cheeks blush "D--{w=0.2} don't... Don't look at me, sir..." ("soft", "closed", "sad", "mid") elif what == "vagina": $ mouse_heart() @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ label sus_reaction_touch_fail(what): if what == "head": $ mouse_slap() - sus @ cheeks blush "*Eeek!*" ("angry", "happyCl", "sad", "mid") + sus @ cheeks blush "*Eeek*!" ("angry", "happyCl", "sad", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "I'm sorry sir, you scared me..." ("angry", "base", "sad", "mid") gen "(Poor thing isn't used to human touch...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit(item): ## Lingerie Outfit 1 ## ######################## elif item == sus_outfit_lace1: - gen "Could you put on these lingerie for me please?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Could you put on this lingerie for me please?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Okay...{w=0.4} One moment [name_genie_susan]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downR") ############################## @@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ label sus_reaction_equip_outfit_fail(item): ## Lingerie Outfit 1 ## ######################## if item == sus_outfit_lace1: - gen "Could you put on these lingerie for me please?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Could you put on this lingerie for me please?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "L--{w=0.2} Lingerie!?" ("angry", "wide", "shocked", "mid") gen "Yep." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "I--{w=0.2} I--{w=0.2} Why would you ask me to--" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/chitchats.rpy index 83c28404..ffd4906c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/chitchats.rpy @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ label tonks_chitchat: ton "They didn't suspect a thing." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid") block: - ton "Being a teacher sure has its perks. If I was caught with firewhisky as a student I would've gotten expelled." ("soft", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + ton "Being a teacher certainly has its perks... If I had been caught with firewhisky as a student, I would've been expelled." ("soft", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") ton "Now I can have as much as I like, even share some every once in a while." ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") block: @@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ label tonks_chitchat: block: ton "I had to keep one of the students after class for special tutoring." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "As a defence against the dark arts teacher it is my job to protect them against both outside threats and inner demons..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - ton "She has a lot to learn but it's getting there." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") + ton "As a defence against the dark arts teacher, it is my job to protect them against both outside threats and inner demons..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") + ton "She has a lot to learn, but it's getting there." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") block: ton "Snape doesn't seem to like me much..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") @@ -89,26 +89,26 @@ label tonks_chitchat: block: ton "I hope I'll have enough time to have a positive influence on this school and the students..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - ton "If I can't make a mark in the school I should at least be able to make one on the students." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "If I can't make a mark in the school, I should at least be able to make one on the students." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: - ton "Becoming an auror is extremely difficult and the job is almost entirely dominated by men..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "R") + ton "Becoming an auror is extremely difficult, and the job is almost entirely dominated by men..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "R") ton "I think I made the right choice of becoming a teacher." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid") block: - ton "My mother was a pure-blood but was burned off the Black family tree after marrying a muggle-born..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - ton "Some people won't understand but I think you should be allowed to love whoever you want..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "My mother was a pure-blood but she was burned off the Black family tree after marrying a muggle-born..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + ton "Some people won't understand, but I think you should be allowed to love whoever you want..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") block: - ton "Don't tell anyone but I must have spent a fortune on Tolipan Blemish Blitzer in my time studying at Hogwarts..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") - ton "My parents thought I was just being clumsy and needed replacement materials but most of the money they sent me was spent on beauty and hair products..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + ton "Don't tell anyone, but I must have spent a fortune on Tolipan Blemish Blitzer in my time studying at Hogwarts..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + ton "My parents thought I was just being clumsy and needed replacement materials, but most of the money they sent me was spent on beauty and hair products..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") block: ton "I only really chased after boys during school because all the other girls did..." ("open", "base", "raised", "down") ton "Secretly I just wanted them to chase after me instead..." ("normal", "base", "base", "L") block: - ton "I learned a lot being tutored by Alastor Moody..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "I learned a lot from having Alastor Moody tutor me..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") ton "Never thought I'd end up being a teacher myself..." ("open", "base", "raised", "down") ton "Though my methods are slightly different to his..." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") @@ -127,13 +127,13 @@ label tonks_chitchat: ton "Little did they know I got a good view whilst on the ground..." ("horny", "narrow", "raised", "stare") block: - ton "One of the girls had their boggart turn into a student pointing and laughing at her..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + ton "One of the girls had their boggart turn into a student, and it was pointing and laughing at her..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "I'm going to teach her to not be ashamed of her body." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: ton "Today I taught the students about the {i}Tanglepest{/i}..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") ton "A foul creature that is drawn to footwear..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "It doesn't actually exist, I just wanted an excuse to have the students show me their feet." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "It doesn't actually exist... I just wanted an excuse to have the students show me their feet." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") block if states.gen.ev.tonks.metamorphmagi_aware: ton "Since Metamorphmagi can change their skin, I sometimes just don't bother wearing any clothes." ("soft", "base", "shocked", "mid") @@ -142,18 +142,18 @@ label tonks_chitchat: block if states.gen.ev.tonks.metamorphmagi_aware: ton "I often got detentions by morphing into prefects..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") - ton "It was worth it though as I had free range to the prefects' bathroom..." ("base", "wide", "base", "mid") + ton "But It was worth it, as I was able to utilize the prefects' bathroom..." ("base", "wide", "base", "mid") block if states.gen.ev.tonks.metamorphmagi_aware: ton "Most of my abilities are based around emotions..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") ton "My hair can go red when I'm upset or angry..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "Don't tell anyone but my natural hair colour is actually more brown..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "People think it's pink but that's because I'm horny all the time." ("base", "base", "base", "down") + ton "Don't tell anyone, but my natural hair colour is actually more brown..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + ton "People think it's pink, but that's because I'm horny all the time." ("base", "base", "base", "down") block if states.gen.ev.tonks.metamorphmagi_aware: ton "There are rumours that Snape has set up an Age Line to keep students away from his private stash..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "Won't stop me borrowing some polyjuice potions though... Not that I need them..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "But maybe I can find a girl that doesn't mind drinking it and have some fun." ("horny", "base", "raised", "R") + ton "But maybe I can find a girl who doesn't mind drinking it and have some fun." ("horny", "base", "raised", "R") block if states.gen.ev.tonks.metamorphmagi_aware: ton "I'm a metamorphmagus. I can change my appearance at will..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy index 80e1c09e..abe4b88c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/hangout.rpy @@ -155,10 +155,10 @@ label nt_he_firewhisky_E1: gen "Boring lessons ahead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Not particularly, why?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "You might regret going back to classes after drinking this much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Oh don't you worry, [name_genie_tonks]." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + ton "Oh, don't you worry, [name_genie_tonks]." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") ton "I could down this entire bottle without anybody being able to notice a thing." ("horny", "base", "base", "L") gen "You're one glass in and swaying like a buoy..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "*Hic* Oh well..." ("open", "base", "base", "ahegao", trans=hpunch) + ton "*Hick* Oh well..." ("open", "base", "base", "ahegao", trans=hpunch) ton "No risk, no fun!" ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") else: gen "Long day?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label nt_he_firewhisky_E4: ### Events ### label nt_he_favors_E1: - ton "So, [name_genie_tonks]... What's the going rate around here then?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) + ton "So, [name_genie_tonks]... What's the going rate around here, then?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) gen "Going rate?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "How much do you pay your students to fool around?" ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Oh... It depends on what you want them to do." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ label nt_he_favors_E1: gen "Or you happen to be sitting on the toilet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anyway, you can't just ask for a lap dance straight away, You have to butter them up first." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "How so?" ("mad", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Well most of them aren't going to do whatever you say from the get go..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, most of them aren't going to do whatever you say from the get go..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You have to slowly earn their trust over time and start out small..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Awww*... Really? Can't I just cheat a bit?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "L") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ label nt_he_favors_E2: ton "And I believe that group of boys knew that fact as well..." ("base", "base", "angry", "R") gen "Sounds like it's about time we step it up a notch." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "And behave even riskier?" ("open", "shocked", "shocked", "mid") - ton "Who do you think you're asking exactly?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton "Who do you think you're asking, exactly?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "So...{w=0.3} Is that a yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Fuck yes!" ("grin", "narrow", "shocked", "mid") ton "I want those boys to call me all sorts of names... And do it straight to my face!" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E2: gen "Paranoid of what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Dark wizards." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "So...{w=0.3} He's a racist?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "No, but he's old... I think he should just retire to be honest." ("open", "base", "base", "downR") + ton "No, but he's old... I think he should just retire, to be honest." ("open", "base", "base", "downR") ton "His methods have gotten progressively more nefarious..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") ton "Some would argue he should lock up himself, for all the things that he did to catch his targets..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "And you?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E3: gen "Ah yes. Because all those cunning bachelors are already taken...{w} or gay..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "No. Single as in... No one can do it." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "It's almost impossible to summon drinks and food out of thin air." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "Best they can do is conjure water out of the surrounding humidity." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") + ton "The best they can do is conjure water out of the surrounding humidity." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") gen "That's oddly limiting... Genie's can conjure food with a snap of a finger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I'm sure you could..." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E4: ton "It's a broom..." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, I see... I'm not really that into brooms." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or anything that is inconveniently stiff and long to ride on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Well I don't mind that... Most witches don't." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") + ton "Well, I don't mind that... Most witches don't." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "You should ask me about my knowledge of flying carpets instead!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I can tell you everything about the newest model." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Do you own one yourself? A flying carpet?" ("silly", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ label nt_he_story_E6: ton "The immense power vampires have over their prey..." ("horny", "base", "raised", "ahegao") ton "It's a shame that they're slaves to their own urges." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "(Well... there's that bad feeling I felt before.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "I get it though. Some aspects of it at least..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") + ton "I get it though. Some aspects of it, at least..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") jump end_tonks_hangout @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E7: label nt_he_story_E8: - ton "I'll tell you about this one time where Moody went a bit too far." ("normal", "base", "base", "downR", ypos="head", flip=False) + ton "I'll tell you about this one time when Moody went a bit too far." ("normal", "base", "base", "downR", ypos="head", flip=False) gen "Where did this sudden urge of sharing come from?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Oh, I've been wanting to spill the beans about this for ages. I just didn't want to get anyone in trouble at the ministry..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "What's to say I won't get you into trouble?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ label nt_he_story_E8: gen "Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "So, the thing is... We hadn't taken into account that it was mating season for them..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "You don't say!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "The guy wasn't that interested in biting me that's for sure." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") + ton "The guy wasn't that interested in biting me, that's for sure." ("soft", "base", "base", "downR") ton "So you can see why I wasn't so keen on reporting it. More of an embarrassing situation sort of thing than anything else." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "And it was totally our fault, I should've recognised the signs straight away... When they're turned they're largely driven by their instincts." ("open", "base", "shocked", "down") gen "I see." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ label nt_he_story_E8: label nt_he_story_intro_E9: - ton "Being an auror was quite a stressful job you know." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) + ton "Being an auror was quite a stressful job, you know." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) gen "I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The ministry was mostly concerned about the criminals making up for their crimes." ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") ton "But I was more concerned about the victims involved." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -505,16 +505,16 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E9: ton "Also... highly illegal." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Anyway..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - ton "He could've ended up in prison... But law isn't black and white like that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "He could've ended up in prison... But the law isn't black and white like that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So you're saying that his intentions were good?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "In this instance, the woman in question was in an abusive relationship." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "And the guy knew that the boyfriend was the jealous type..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I see, so he fed her the potion to get her out of it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Right... I mean jealousy isn't that bad in a playful relationship. But it wasn't like that." ("normal", "base", "base", "downR") + ton "Right... I mean, jealousy isn't that bad in a playful relationship. But it wasn't like that." ("normal", "base", "base", "downR") gen "Wait a second, how did you even know the guy wasn't just saying this because the potion is illegal?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Because I used truth serum." ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "And that isn't illegal or regulated as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "As I said... Law is more complicated than that, and in certain instances using a truth serum would be the right thing to do." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "As I said... The law is more complicated than that, and in certain instances, using a truth serum would be the right thing to do." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") ton "And to be honest, who was he going to tell... It's not like he had the moral high ground." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "I see, then how did the situation end up?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The girl got out of the abusive relationship and requested to have her memory adjusted." ("open", "wide", "shocked", "mid") @@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ label nt_he_story_intro_E10: call bld gen "Settled in okay?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Yes, I finally feel like I've found some sort of daily routine." ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) - ton "This school brings back so many memories. It's like, every time I turn a corner I expect to see one of my old classmates." ("open", "base", "shocked", "R") + ton "This school brings back so many memories. It's like, every time I turn a corner, I expect to see one of my old classmates." ("open", "base", "shocked", "R") gen "So, good memories?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Mostly, it's a bit different now." ("base", "narrow", "shocked", "down") gen "In what way?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -560,21 +560,21 @@ label nt_he_story_E11: ton "You gonna put me in detention?" ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") ton "Or put me over your knee and spank me?" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Don't tempt me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "There was this time where I changed into professor Snape." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "There was this time when I changed into professor Snape." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Why Snape?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well, he was the most likely not to be in the staff room. Which is where I wanted to get in." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Why's that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "He never leaves the dungeons does he?" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") - ton "Just take one look at his pasty face and you'll see..." ("mad", "base", "base", "downR") + ton "Just take one look at his pasty face, and you'll see..." ("mad", "base", "base", "downR") ton "Don't tell him I said that..." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "So... I changed into professor Snape and went towards the staff room..." ("base", "base", "annoyed", "R") gen "Isn't the staff room just full of boring old teachers?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "My goal wasn't to talk with the teachers..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + ton "My goal wasn't to speak with the teachers..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "I was trying to get a key to the prefects' bathroom." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "And you couldn't just turn into a prefect, and get in there that way?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well, that would've been the clever thing to do..." ("open", "base", "raised", "R") - ton "Although like everything else in this school, the bathroom has a password and not a key..." ("normal", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + ton "Although, like everything else in this school, the bathroom has a password and not a key..." ("normal", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") ton "Of course I didn't know that... I had just heard rumours about the bathroom." ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "So did you manage to get in there in the end?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Oh yeah, it was easy!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") @@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ label nt_he_story_E12: call bld gen "Tell me more about that shapeshifting ability of yours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course..." ("base", "wide", "shocked", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) - ton "Most of my escapades were kind of one trick ponies." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + ton "Most of my escapades were kind of one-trick ponies." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "Sounds pretty foolproof to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean, how many other students could change their appearance?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "None, that's why. Process of elimination." ("upset", "base", "raised", "downR") @@ -609,14 +609,14 @@ label nt_he_story_E12: gen "How did you manage that, weren't the students notified of their leave beforehand?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "No. There was just a note on the door, so I ripped it off before the class got there." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Seems like a flawed system..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Yeah, afterwards a lot of the teachers changed the way they do it. Not the new ones though..." ("grin", "base", "base", "downR") + ton "Yeah, afterwards, a lot of the teachers changed the way they do it. Not the new ones though..." ("grin", "base", "base", "downR") gen "You haven't told me which class this was. Did you turn into Snape and teach potions?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Of course not! Snape would've made my life hell, and I wasn't going to make someone hurt themself." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "down") ton "It was charms..." ("mad", "base", "base", "down") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I had been practising some charms, and taught myself a couple on my own, like the one for invisibility..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "down") gen "Impressive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Thanks... Normally you wouldn't learn that one until much later, so you'd easily be able to dispel it." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + ton "Thanks... Normally, you wouldn't learn that one until much later, so you'd easily be able to dispel it." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "But you decided it was a good idea to teach it anyway?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I didn't say it was a good idea." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") ton "It didn't end up working anyway..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "R") @@ -632,9 +632,9 @@ label nt_he_story_E12: gen "(That sounds disgusting...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Anyway, the teachers played it off as an accident... though poor Flitwick had his magical abilities questioned by the students for a while." ("upset", "base", "shocked", "down") ton "And they tried to set up some more countermeasures towards my abilities at that point." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "R") - ton "Not that they worked that well... After that I was a bit more selective with my usage, and actually thought about the consequences a bit before using it." ("mad", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") + ton "Not that they worked that well... After that, I was a bit more selective with my usage, and actually thought about the consequences a bit before using it." ("mad", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") gen "Well, you do start thinking more about others as you get older..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Yeah well, my sexual drive started to take the upper hand on my decisions from that point on, so it evened out." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + ton "Yeah... Well, my sexual drive started to take the upper hand on my decisions from that point on, so it evened out." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump end_tonks_hangout @@ -661,10 +661,10 @@ label nt_he_story_centaur: # Not in use. gen "(I like where this is going!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "*Fap!* *Fap!* *Fap!*" - ton "Centaurs don't do well with Ministry personnel{w} Even less so with female witches such as myself..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - ton "Making them a compelling offer so they'd peacefully return to their assigned territory was quite...{w} challenging {heart}" ("horny", "base", "base", "R") + ton "Centaurs don't do well with Ministry personnel{w} Even less so with female witches, such as myself..." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton "Making them a compelling offer, so they'd peacefully return to their assigned territory was quite...{w} challenging {heart}" ("horny", "base", "base", "R") gen "Go on..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "All I did was do them a small favour.{w} A little service the Ministry would never even think of providing them with." ("mad", "base", "worried", "down") + ton "All I did was giving them a small favour.{w} A little service the Ministry would never even think of providing them with." ("mad", "base", "worried", "down") ton "But I did it anyway..." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "*Argh!* What did you do?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Well, I simply helped them release some of their stored up tension..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") @@ -687,7 +687,7 @@ label nt_he_story_centaur: # Not in use. ton @ hair horny "You should know, I never shy away from getting my hands dirty!" ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "*Agh!* Fuck! I'm getting close..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Most of the Ministry view Centaurs as \"lesser\" beings... As animals." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - ton "But not me. To me they're all powerful, and magnificent creatures." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") + ton "But not me. To me, they're all powerful, and magnificent creatures." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") ton "And it's known that above all they embody strength, dominance, and lust..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "(And they are so{w} fucking{w} hung!!!)" ("horny", "base", "base", "ahegao") # Ahegao @@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ label nt_he_story_centaur: # Not in use. ton "A remarkable wizard such as yourself would never even consider solutions of such..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Depravity..." ("horny", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Are you asking me whether or not I'd jerk of a Centaur?..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Are you asking me whether or not I'd jerk off a Centaur?..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Because that would be a clear \"no\" from me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Professor, I've never told anybody about my experiences as an Auror..." ("mad", "base", "worried", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy index 1ac19448..07fa1b2b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ label tonks_intro_E1: else: ton "Of course, Sir." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "I had to make a compelling offer so they'd peacefully return to their assigned territory, which isn't easy..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "I had to make a compelling offer, so they'd peacefully return to their assigned territory, which isn't easy..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "You'd never be able to guess how I did it, it's quite the story." ("horny", "base", "base", "R") ton "Unfortunately, I cannot tell you...{w} Strictly confidential Ministry information..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -166,13 +166,13 @@ label tonks_intro_E1: if letter_favors.read: gen "More or less..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "We have received a letter from a Miss named \"Hermione Granger\", about the trading of... \"favours\" between staff and students at this school." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") #not sure if it's better to put miss in quotations or not. My logic is that the fact that she is a "miss" is a given, the name however is something the ministry may not know hence the quotations - gen "Yes she very much enjoys doing that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, she very much enjoys doing that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Trading favours?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "(I wish...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "No. She enjoys writing letters...{w} lots of 'em..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "I can't say that I am." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "So you haven't had any complaints from students in regards to \"favour trading\"?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton "So you haven't had any complaints from students in regard to \"favour trading\"?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "(Oh, fuck...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That depends...{w=0.3} What sort of favours are you referring to?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "..." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ label tonks_intro_E1: gen "That won't be necessary." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Do have some confidence in me, Professor. This is what I was trained for..." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") gen "................................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "I've already gotten a room down in Hogsmeade." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + ton "I've already got a room down in Hogsmeade." ("open", "base", "base", "R") ton "I'll be staying there, so no need to worry about accommodation." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Great..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I shall start right away!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E1: gen "Twice, actually..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "And you're telling me about this... now?" ("snape_32") sna "I'm surprised you didn't blow our cover right there and then..." ("snape_16") - gen "What can I say. I'm very good with the ladies!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What can I say... I'm very good with the ladies!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Or you are just too lucky for your own good, more likely..." ("snape_43") gen "That too, to a lesser extent..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E1: menu: gen "................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "{size=-2}\"That's a bit uncalled for, don't you think?\"{/size}": + "{size=-2}\"That's a bit uncalled-for, don't you think?\"{/size}": sna "Maybe you're right." ("snape_06") sna "My apologies." ("snape_09") gen "Apologies accepted." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -432,29 +432,6 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E1: nar "You spend the remainder of the day with Snape, drenching your worries in plenty of wine..." - #gen "So, what are your thoughts on this whole ministry situation?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #sna "I can't say I have a very high opinion on how those fools run the place." - #sna "The Department of Magical Law Enforcement are a joke." - #sna "The only decent auror they have is Alistair Moody and he's more concerned dealing with dark magic than petty rumours to get involved with this investigation." - #sna "The minister for magic himself is a fool." - #sna "He might bring a good smile and spirits to the people during times of rebuilding after great loss." - #sna "But when it comes to making any worthwhile decisions or recognizing potential threats or misconduct..." - #gen "I was talking mostly about our current predicament rather thant he ministry at large..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #sna "I know..." - #gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #gen "Surely you must be slightly worried." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #sna "I have committed many crimes much worse than chatting up some students, all of which I should've been incarcerated for." - #sna "As I said, the current ministry is a shamble of what it once was... no change will come from this." - #sna "Cornelius fudge is more interested in how the ministry looks from the outside rather than expose existing issues and dealing with them." - #gen "Such as?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #sna "Well, apart from leaving Hogwarts completely in the hands of the headmaster..." - #sna "Corruption, illegal trades of magical artefacts and creatures. The list goes on..." - #sna "The only one showing any interest in the schools business is the Head of the Department of Magical law Enforcement herself." - #gen "And that's not a problem because?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #sna "Because in the end you'd see a dementor getting frisky with a human before any of these things aren't getting swept under the carpet." - #sna "You could put the tooth fairy in front of the minister and he'd still deny her existence if he were to have held that stance." - #sna "And the other fools at the ministry would do so as well even if they witnessed it themselves." - $ states.sna.ev.hangouts.tonks_e1 = True $ ss_event_pause += 1 $ hg_event_pause += 1 @@ -501,7 +478,7 @@ label tonks_intro_E3: play music "music/scheming-weasel-slower-version-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed ton "Professor..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=dissolve) - gen "How's the investigation going? Nothing to report I gather?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How's the investigation going? Nothing to report, I gather?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "On the contrary..." ("open", "wide", "shocked", "stare") ton @ hair angry "It's worse than I could have ever imagined!" ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") gen "(........)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -510,7 +487,7 @@ label tonks_intro_E3: ton @ hair angry "Corrupted! Right down to the core!" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "(What's the matter with her hair?!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "You don't have to search for too long to uncover the vile debaucheries that are happening at this school..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "(Snape you fucking idiot! You blew it!!!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Snape, you fucking idiot! You blew it!!!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "Teachers taking advantage of their students, promising house points in return for sexual acts..." ("open", "base", "angry", "R") #in a sexual favour, the sex act is the favour ton @ hair horny "While they abuse their authority and power to do the most despicable things to them..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "R") ton @ hair angry "But the Dumbledore I know would never allow such disgracefulness at his school..." ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -622,7 +599,7 @@ label tonks_intro_E3: ton "You mean Professor Snape is in on this?!" ("open", "wide", "shocked", "mid") gen "What? But I didn't--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "But of course!{w} After all he was mentioned in Miss Granger's letter as one of the main offenders." ("disgust", "wide", "shocked", "stare") + ton "But of course!{w} After all, he was mentioned in Miss Granger's letter as one of the main offenders." ("disgust", "wide", "shocked", "stare") ton @ hair angry "That sleazy, vile snake...{w} Naturally he'd be all over an opportunity such as this." ("mad", "base", "angry", "R") gen "(Snake? Have I been saying his name wrong this entire time?...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I hate when that happens...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -804,7 +781,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E2: sna "So...{w=0.4} what does she want?" ("snape_04") sna "Surely she's taking the position for a reason..." ("snape_01") gen "It appears that she'd like to be part of this whole favour trading business, which is also why she asked to be made a teacher..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And in return she'll keep things quiet with the ministry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And in return, she'll keep things quiet with the ministry." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Hmm*... Not having to worry about the Ministry anymore, you say..." ("snape_38") sna "And I'm supposed to believe that she'd be willing to do that for us?" ("snape_25") @@ -858,7 +835,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E2: label ss_he_tonks_E3: call bld gen "Our new partner in crime, is she getting on well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Tonks? I haven't seen her since last time we talked..." ("snape_09", ypos="head") + sna "Tonks? I haven't seen her that much... I prefer not to fraternize with the other teachers..." ("snape_09", ypos="head") sna "Shouldn't you know what that witch is up to? You made her a teacher, after all..." ("snape_01") gen "I'm sure she's still just settling down..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Probably drinking booze down at Hogsmeade, more likely..." ("snape_35") @@ -876,7 +853,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E3: gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"... Demiguise?\"": gen "What the fuck is that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "*sigh* I keep forgetting you're not from around here..." ("snape_06") + sna "*Sigh*... I keep forgetting you're not from around here..." ("snape_06") sna "It's a magical beast that can make itself invisible and has precognitive sight." ("snape_24") gen "... Sounds boring, forget I asked." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..........." ("snape_05") @@ -899,7 +876,7 @@ label ss_he_tonks_E3: sna ".................." ("snape_31") sna "I can't say that I trust her just yet..." ("snape_35") - sna "Not before I get to slip in a couple drops of \"Veritaserum\" into her drink..." ("snape_03") + sna "Not before I get to slip in a couple of drops of \"Veritaserum\" into her drink..." ("snape_03") gen "\"Veritaserum\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Truth potion!{w=0.4} I oftentimes use some on my \"very attractive Slytherins\"..." ("snape_02") sna "Only a single drop, and they'll tell me everything I want to know." ("snape_41") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy index 5eccb43a..e14cb6c8 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/gifts.rpy @@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == chocolate_ITEM: ton "*Mhmm*, Chocolate!" (pupils="down", face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "It's said that chocolate is a very effective mood enhancer after a Dementor attack." (mouth="open", face="happy") - ton "That's because chocolate is considered to be a great aphrodisiac..." (face="horny") + ton "It's known that chocolate is a very effective mood enhancer after a Dementor attack." (mouth="open", face="happy") + ton "Although it's less known that it's because chocolate is considered to be a great aphrodisiac..." (face="horny") ton "I'll keep this for one of my private lessons." (face="happy") call ton_friendship(1) @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): ton "An Owl?" (face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) ton "Oh, it's a toy... Haven't seen one of these in a while." (face="disgusted") call give_gift("You give the stuffed owl to Tonks...",gift_item) - ton "Okay, for nostalgias sake then..." (face="neutral") + ton "Okay, for nostalgia's sake then..." (face="neutral") call ton_friendship(0) elif gift_item == butterbeer_ITEM: @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == science_mag_ITEM: - ton "Jinxes and sphinxes? These could help for some of my lessons." (mouth="open", face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "Jinxes and sphinxes? These could help with some of my lessons." (mouth="open", face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="neutral") call ton_friendship(0) @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == adult_mag_ITEM: ton "Adult magazines?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "Wont be the first time I've slipped one in the stack of magazines in my classroom." (face="horny") + ton "Won't be the first time I've slipped one of these inside the stack of magazines in my classroom." (face="horny") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="happy") call ton_friendship(1) @@ -59,25 +59,25 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): ton "I already know most positions in this book already of course..." (face="happy") call give_gift("You give an assortment of pornographic magazines to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Although..." (face="horny") - ton "I'll keep them. Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="happy") + ton "I'll gladly accept them anyway... Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="happy") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == krum_poster_ITEM: ton "That's that Krum boy is it?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give the poster to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "Nice figure, could set a good mood in the classroom... Or my office." (pupils="down", face="happy") + ton "Nice figure... Yes, this would certainly set a good mood in my classroom... Or my office." (pupils="down", face="happy") ton "Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="happy") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == sexy_lingerie_ITEM: - ton "Oh, I see you're a man with a sense of style." (mouth="open", pupils="down", face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "I see you're a man with a sense of style." (mouth="open", pupils="down", face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give the sexy lingerie to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "If it were up to me these would be part of the school uniform..." (face="happy") + ton "If it were up to me, then a pair of these would be an obligatory part of the female school uniform..." (face="happy") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == sexy_stockings_ITEM : - ton "Nice, I have a pair just like these..." (mouth="open", pupils="down", face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "Although another pair without holes in them wont hurt..." (face="happy") + ton "Nice... I have a pair just like these." (mouth="open", pupils="down", face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "Although another pair without holes in them won't hurt..." (face="happy") call give_gift("You give the sexy stockings to Tonks...", gift_item) call ton_friendship(1) @@ -85,21 +85,21 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): ton "Some condoms?" (face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give some condoms to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Safe sex is important..." (face="neutral") - ton "I don't remember taking sex ed when I was in school... maybe I was too busy experimenting it myself that day..." (face="horny") + ton "I don't remember taking sex ed when I was in school... No wonder the students have no idea what they're doing..." (face="horny") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == vibrator_ITEM: - ton "A vibra-- back massager?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "Mm, Mine seemingly went missing from my desk. This should do if it doesn't turn up again." (face="annoyed") + ton "A vibra--ting back massager?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "*Mmm*... Mine seemingly went missing from my desk..." (face="annoyed") + ton "It's a bit small, but this should do until it turns up again." (face="annoyed") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="neutral") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == anal_lube_ITEM: - ton "That's one big jar of Anal lube you have there." (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "Now that's a big jar of Anal lube you have there." (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give the jar of lube to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "What's the difference between this and regular lube?" (mouth="open", face="disgusted") - ton "Seems like it might be enough to cover the whole body..." (mouth="open", face="happy") + ton "Looks like this might be enough to cover the whole body..." (mouth="open", face="happy") ton "Thank you, [name_genie_tonks]." (face="neutral") call ton_friendship(1) @@ -111,9 +111,10 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == anal_plugs_ITEM: ton "Some anal plugs?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "Wow, this is what they use these days? Very colourful..." (face="happy") - call give_gift("You give an assortment of anal plugs to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "I think I might leave some in one of the desks..." (face="horny") + ton "Wow... This is what they use these days?" (face="happy") + ton "Very colourful..." (face="happy") + call give_gift("You give the assortment of anal plugs to Tonks...", gift_item) + ton "I think I might hide some inside my classroom for the students to find..." (face="horny") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == testral_strapon_ITEM: @@ -126,20 +127,19 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == broom_2000_ITEM: ton "I don't remember the brooms looking like this when I took flying lessons..." (face="angry", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call give_gift("You give the broom to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "Seems like a good way to stay put on the broom though... unless you lose focus." (mouth="open", face="happy") - ton "Which you probably will with this..." (face="horny") + ton "Seems like a good way to stay put on the broom though... Unless you lose focus." (mouth="open", face="happy") call ton_friendship(3) elif gift_item == sexdoll_ITEM: - ton "a sex doll?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "A sex doll?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) ton "Not too useful for me, but I might put it in one of our secret gift exchanges." (mouth="open", face="horny") call give_gift("You give the sex doll to Tonks...", gift_item) - ton "They'll gossip for weeks wondering who it's from." (face="horny") + ton "They'll gossip for weeks, wondering who it's from." (face="horny") call ton_friendship(1) elif gift_item == anal_beads_ITEM: - ton "anal beads?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "It's a bit short but I'll take it..." (face="happy") + ton "Anal beads?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "It's a bit short, but I'll take it..." (face="happy") call give_gift("You give the anal beads to Tonks...", gift_item) ton "Thanks..." (face="horny") call ton_friendship(1) @@ -150,12 +150,13 @@ label give_ton_gift(gift_item): ton "I was hoping for something with a bit more \'punch\'." (mouth="open", pupils="R", face="neutral") call ton_friendship(0) else: - ton "I had told you before I don't particularly like wine.." (mouth="open", pupils="R", face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) + ton "I've told you before... Wine doesn't particularly agree with me." (mouth="open", pupils="R", face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call ton_friendship(-1) elif gift_item == firewhisky_ITEM: ton "Firewhisky?" (face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - ton "*Mmm*.. My favourite. But let's save it for later, shall we?" (face="horny") + ton "*Mmm*... My favourite..." (face="horny") + ton "But let's save it for later, shall we?" (face="horny") call ton_friendship(0) ton "" (xpos="base",ypos="base") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy index 424e2a10..11fcec4c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy @@ -73,14 +73,14 @@ label tonks_talk: $ name_genie_tonks = "Old man" ton "I have to say, for your age you're in really great shape..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") gen "That's part of the benefits of being immortal...{w=0.4} Your body doesn't age." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "You're lucky then... I've had men that were a couple hundred years old, whose bodies were quite fragile..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + ton "You're lucky then... I've had men that were a couple of hundred years old, whose bodies were quite fragile..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "All mortals? How did they get that old?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Ever heard of the \"Philosopher's stone\"?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Is it a tiny, red, stone-looking gem, that lengthens the owner's life?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's called the \"sorcerer's stone\" in my world, however." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Really? Why is that?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "I have no clue..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Didn't you say you were an \"all knowing\" being?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + ton "I thought genies were \"all knowing\" beings?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") ton "I guess you really are an \"old man\", Genie..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "..............." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label tonks_talk: ton "Voldemort, having a child? Are you serious?" ("open", "wide", "shocked", "stare") gen "Of course not." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Once you're immortal, the last thing you need is some annoying brat on your mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "All we really want to do is waste a majority of our existence with mindless sex!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "All we really want to do is waste the majority of our existence with mindless sex!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny "Oh my..." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") gen "And sometimes a bit of kinky role-play..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Are you going to call me \"Lord Voldemort\" now or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -146,11 +146,11 @@ label tonks_talk: gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Don't you lie to me young man, an Auror is trained to see right through that stuff." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "\"Young man\"? I'm literally over ten thousands of years old." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "\"Young man\"? I'm literally over ten thousand years old." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Right." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Also technically not a man..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I just have the bits of a man." - gen "Can't reproduce though, so that's kinda weird." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Can't reproduce though... So, that's a bit odd." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Not that I'm complaining, it made it easier to spend that much time inside the lamp." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I feel like I'm oversharing now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Just a little bit." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ label tonks_talk: gen "What?- Why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Because... that title has to be earned!" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Seriously?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Yes. Show me that you're worth to be my master, and I'll gladly become your bitch!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + ton "Yes... Show me that you're worth if you want to be my master, and I'll gladly become your bitch!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Until then you can forget about it..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "...................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label tonks_talk: jump tonks_talk - "-From now on I will address you as-": + "-From now on, I will address you as-": menu: "-Tonks-": label .tonks: # Local label unavailable from global scope. @@ -229,8 +229,8 @@ label tonks_talk: label .nympho: $ name_tonks_genie = "Nympho" ton "You think I'm a nympho, [name_genie_tonks]?" ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") - ton "Like a filthy, sex craved maniac? Who wouldn't shy away from fulfilling every single one of her fantasies?" ("grin", "base", "shocked", "mid") - ton "It fits quite well, actually." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + ton "A filthy, sex-craving maniac? Someone who wouldn't shy away from fulfilling every single one of her fantasies?" ("grin", "base", "shocked", "mid") + ton "Yes... That does sound like me, doesn't it?" ("base", "base", "base", "R") "-Bitch-": label .bitch: @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label tonks_talk: #label .fuck_puppet_fail: #ton "A what?" ("soft", "wide", "shocked", "mid") #gen "A fuck puppet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #ton "So that's all that I'm good for is it?" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + #ton "So that's all that I'm good for, is it?" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") #ton "Just another puppet for you to fuck?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") #gen "That's right... And such a fine puppet as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "*Hmph*... Sorry, but this puppet comes with a brain included." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ label tonks_talk: $ name_tonks_genie = "Slut" ton "Maybe I am..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "Although I'd rather get called \"fashionable\"." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Weird thing to say in bed but I ain't judging." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Weird thing to say in bed, but I ain't judging." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Oh, you mean like that..." ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "mid") ton "In that case, I'm the \"sluttiest slut\" of them all." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ label tonks_talk: #ton "A what?!" ("clench", "wide", "shocked", "mid") #gen "Whore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "You can't call me that!" ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") - #gen "Why not!? That's what you're here for isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + #gen "Why not!? That's what you're here for, isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "Yes, but a title like that has to be earned!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") #gen "You-- Hold on, what did you say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "I've not slept around enough to have the privilege of you calling me that." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R") @@ -292,8 +292,8 @@ label tonks_talk: ton @ hair horny "You pay me to--" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Well, I suppose I do spend a lot of my time on the clock... Enticing my pupils..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "But I can assure you it's to encourage them to do better during class." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Sure... Doesn't make you less of a whore though." - ton "*Mmm*... Alright, fine, If calling me a whore is the punishment for being a good teacher then you can call me a whore any day..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "Sure... Doesn't make you less of a whore, though." + ton "*Mmm*... Alright, fine, If calling me a whore is the punishment for being a good teacher, then you can call me a whore any day..." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") "-Cunt-" (style="disabled") if states.ton.level < 60: label .cunt_fail: @@ -316,9 +316,11 @@ label tonks_talk: "-Slave-"(style="disabled") if states.ton.level < 60: label .slave_fail: ton "To who?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "To me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "To whom." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "Who?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") + gen "To me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*giggles*" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton "No, I don't think so [name_genie_tonks]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "No, I don't think so, [name_genie_tonks]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") "-Slave-" if states.ton.level >= 60: label .slave: @@ -338,7 +340,7 @@ label tonks_talk: ton "For a genie, I thought you'd be a bit more educated on this topic." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Filling my existence with mindless sex helps me forget my troubled past." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That's... concerning." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "At least it's better that you're doing it to forget rather some power fantasy to stick the middle finger to humanity and your creator." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "At least it's better that you're doing it to forget, rather than it being some power fantasy to stick the middle finger to humanity and your creator." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yep." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now give me ten push-ups, slave!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy index 4956cd4e..3ce54a8c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/shops/item/chitchats.rpy @@ -30,21 +30,21 @@ label purchase_item(item): fre "Forbidden magic is quite a risky and expensive endeavour Professor, We'll sell it for no less than five hundred." gen "What's it for anyway?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "It is one of the components needed for a forbidden spell." - ger "Acquired completely legitimately I might add!" + ger "Acquired completely legitimately, I might add!" gen "What does it do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "It transforms you into... something." gen "Like what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "We don't know, it could be anything." - ger "A powerful phoenix, a terrifying gorgon, a deadly basilisk or an awe inspiring dragon." + ger "A powerful phoenix, a terrifying gorgon, a deadly basilisk or an awe-inspiring dragon." gen "Not sure I'd really want to transform into any of those..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "Well... those are just theories, we've not been able to use the scroll to find the second component ourselves." - gen "Really? Now that's is surprising." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Really? Now that is surprising." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Yes, although it's blank for some reason... not really anything new to us as we used to have a ma--" ger "massive amounts of scrolls just like this one!" - ger "Yep... lot's of them, shame they all burnt." + ger "Yep... lots of them, shame they all burnt." fre "What are you-- *HHNG*" fre "Oh! I see... Yes, very unfortunate..." - gen "That is unfortunate... Well I'm sure I'll manage." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That is unfortunate... Well, I'm sure I'll manage." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide screen blktone with d3 @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ label purchase_item(item): gen "Colour me intrigued..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And it works?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Of course it does, we tested it on ourselves!" - ger "Just know that the collar loses its magic once it is put one's neck." + ger "Just know that the collar loses its magic once it is put on one's neck." ger "So you'll have to buy another collar if you want to test if anything's changed..." # ger "So you'll have to buy multiple collars if you want to test it on multiple subjects..." # fre "Or multiple times on one subject to see if anything's changed..." @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ label purchase_item(item): gen "So, what did the collar say when you guys put it on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Voyeu--" ger "Thrifty!" - ger "Wait, what did you just say Fred?" + ger "Wait, what did you just say, Fred?" fre "..." gen "Alright then, I'll take it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "*Ahem*... It's a pleasure doing business with you, sir!"