diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 8a57bb11..39e84dd4 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -788,7 +788,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", cheeks="blush") ton "Don't be so shy, girl. I'm happy that you took my advice to heart..." ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") - ton "After all, it's thanks to you that the ministry sent me here." ("base", "base", "base", "L") + ton "Consider for a minute where your house would be if you hadn't." ("base", "base", "base", "L") her "I guess..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") her "I assure you that I wasn't considering selling favours myself, when I sent that letter..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") her "But then we had that talk..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") @@ -815,14 +815,14 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "Ah, yes... Yes." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") ton "... Wait, what?" ("mad", "shocked", "raised", "L") gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Ugh*... I assumed you had read through the initial letter more thoroughly..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") + her "*Ugh*... I assumed you had read through my initial letter more thoroughly..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") if genie_masturbating: gen "(Too busy packing her bags to get here I bet...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Now-now, Miss Granger... Miss Tonks was very quick to get here when she heard about your accusations." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I suppose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") - ton "So your problem was never that the girls of this school are engaging in illicit, sexual favours with their teachers..." ("normal", "wide", "raised", "L") - ton "It's that the boys haven't had the same opportunities?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "L") + her "I suppose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + ton "So your problem was never that the girls are engaging in illicit, sexual favours with their teachers..." ("normal", "wide", "raised", "L") + ton "But that the boys haven't had the same opportunities?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "L") her "Exactly!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "Why didn't you say so during our talk, Miss Granger?" ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "L") ton "I can easily sort out that problem!" ("horny", "base", "base", "L", hair="horny") @@ -850,11 +850,11 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "I... Yes, I believe so... And the morale amongst my friends has risen substantially." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") ton "Excellent." ("grin", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") else: - ton "Well, I'm sure your male friends appreciates the fact that you're making up for their shortcomings..." ("base", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") + ton "Well, I'm sure your male friends appreciates the fact that you've been making up for their shortcomings..." ("base", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") her "It's not their fault that the teachers aren't as interested in buying favours from them." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - ton "Yes... Women earning more than men is a dilemma, that's for sure..." ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") - ton "Well, at least the guys in your house are grateful that they have you to help win the house cup, right?" ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") - her "I suppose... {size=-4}Or they would be, if they knew about it...{/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "Yes... The women earning more than the men is a complex dilemma, that's for sure..." ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") + ton "Well, at least they can sleep easy, knowing that they've got you out there doing what is necessary for the sake of your house, right?" ("open", "base", "base", "L", hair="basic") + her "I suppose... {size=-4}Although they don't really know about it...{/size}" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "I'm just worried it won't be enough..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "In that case... Would you be against the idea of selling favours to another teacher?" ("horny", "base", "raised", "L", hair="horny") her "I..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -880,9 +880,9 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: "\"Those pesky Slytherin Sluts!\"": her "What else would you like to know?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") if genie_masturbating: - gen "What other--{w=0.2} *Ugh...{w=0.4} Activities do you have here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What other--{w=0.2} *Ugh*...{w=0.4} Activities do you have here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "What other classes do you have here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What other activities do you have here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I'm not sure what you mean, Professor..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") ton "I think what your headmaster is getting at..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") if not _yourself: @@ -977,23 +977,22 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: her "Well, I could pick any of the girls in Slytherin, really..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "It is quite astonishing to what level those Slytherins go to get the teachers going..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "Especially that one time during care for magical creatures..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Such as that one time during our care of magical creatures class..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "Oh? You weren't studying centaurs, were you?" ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") her "No? Why would you assume that?" ("normal", "wink", "base", "mid") ton "No reason...{w=0.4} Please continue." ("open", "base", "raised", "R", cheeks="blush", hair="horny") ton "" ("base", "base", "raised", "mid", hair="basic") - her "Well, I do hope that Hagrid is above this favour trading business. He sure seems like it during my classes with him." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "One of the Slytherin students was being quite rough with a {i}Blast-ended Skrewt{/i}... Making it go off on purpose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") if genie_masturbating: - her "She was shaking it up and down, which was only agitating it a bit initially..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") + her "She was shaking it up and down... Which was only agitating it a bit initially." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Yes I bet you'd love to do that with my cock.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "But once she got going, you could really see how it could just go off any minute..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "But then she really got going, and it got to the point where it could blast off at a moments notice..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(Yes, any minute now...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I was just about to call her out on it, when suddenly it started shaking violently." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "I was just about to call her out on her disgraceful behaviour, when suddenly the Skrewt started shaking violently." ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "(Yes, any second now...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Then what happened?" ("open", "base", "raised", "L", cheeks="blush") - her "There was a moment of shock, spread across her face just as the {i}Skrewt{/i} exploded right into it..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") + her "There was a moment of shock spread across her face, just as the {i}Skrewt{/i} exploded right into it..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush") ton "" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush", hair="horny") gen "(Yes, take it right on your face, you slut!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1040,7 +1039,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "That's not how you're supposed to care for a Blast-ended skrewt..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") ton "Wait, what is a {i}Blast-ended Skrewt{/i} actually?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "L") her "It's some cross-breed that Hagrid came up with... I don't even know how he managed it..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") - ton "Sounds to me like this Hagrid fellow has been doing some illegal breeding..." ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton "Sounds to me like this Hagrid fellow has been up to some illegal breeding..." ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "(*He-he-he*)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Ahem*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Although, all things considered!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -1099,7 +1098,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: "\"Tonks isn't some kind of snitch\"": gen "Or are you telling me that her word isn't good enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, of course not, but--" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") - gen "I'm sure Miss Tonks would be happy to provide additional points, as you'd basically be providing a favour for us both." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm sure Miss Tonks would be happy to provide you with additional points, as you'd basically be providing a favour for us both." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmm*? Oh yes, I'd love to be of help for the Gryffindor house." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid", hair="horny") her "Well... In that case, I want another five points." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That can be arrange--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1174,7 +1173,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: gen "*Ah-Ah*..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "What have you been doing back there?" ("soft", "narrow", "raised", "mid", hair="horny") gen "I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Just \"scratching his leg\"... As always." ("crooked_smile", "base", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "Just \"scratching his leg\"... As always." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush") ton "Right..." ("normal", "base", "shocked", "R") ton "Well then, since my work here is done... I think I better get back to my regular duties." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", hair="basic") @@ -1183,7 +1182,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "I'm asking Miss Granger." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "He did have the appearance of of someone who was enjoying... \"it\"." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + her "He did have the appearance of someone who was enjoying... \"it\"." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") her "Someone who was enjoying it a bit too much, even..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", cheeks="blush") ton "That just means you did a great job, Miss Granger." ("base", "base", "base", "L") ton "I'm sure your house benefited greatly from his enjoyment." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L")