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game/scripts/characters/cho/chitchats.rpy
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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy
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@ -154,10 +154,10 @@ label name_cho_genie:
if states.cho.tier <= 3:
cho "Princess?!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "Yes, is that a problem?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho @ cheeks blush "It's... It's a bit girly don't you think?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid")
cho @ cheeks blush "It's... It's a bit girly, don't you think?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid")
gen "You're a girl, I see nothing wrong with it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid")
cho @ cheeks blush "Yes I suppose I am." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid")
cho @ cheeks blush "Yes, I suppose I am." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid")
cho @ cheeks blush "Fine..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid")
else:
cho @ cheeks blush "You want to call me..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid")

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game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy
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@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
her "So far professor Trelawney did not teach me a single piece of any actual knowledge, sir." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "So far, Professor Trelawney did not teach me a single piece of any actual knowledge, sir." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
her "I am sorry sir, but I don't really have time for idle chat chats..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "I am sorry sir, but I don't really have time for idle chit-chats..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
### WHORING LEVEL 02 ###
@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
her "As one of the top students in this school I have a reputation to keep..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "As one of the top students in this school, I have a reputation to keep..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "People look up to me..."
her "... So, your discretion is very appreciated, sir." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
her "I dislike the entire house of Slytherin with all my heart, sir." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid")
block:
her "Do you remember when you asked me to show you my panties for the first time sir?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "Do you remember when you asked me to show you my panties for the first time, sir?" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "I was so furious with you then..."
her "Now I see that I was just being selfish..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid")
her "After all, the honour of my house is at stake here..."
@ -138,16 +138,16 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
block:
her "Hogwarts has really become a second home to me lately..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
her "I don't even miss my parents nearly as much anymore..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down")
her "Come to think of it I don't miss them at all..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare")
her "Come to think of it, I don't miss them at all..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare")
her "I'm an awful daughter..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down")
block:
her "*Yawn*! I read about this technique that supposedly allows you to cut your sleep time in half..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
her "It don't think it's working though.... *Yawn*!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down")
her "I don't think it's working though... *Yawn*!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down")
block:
her "Even after I graduate from Hogwarts I plan to keep on working hard." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "If I give it my all I can make this world a better place, I know it!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "Even after I graduate from Hogwarts, I plan to keep on working hard." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "If I give it my all, I can make this world a better place, I know it!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
block:
her "I've been spending so much time in your office lately, sir..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "If I'm not careful some people may think that I have become your pet..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid")
her "If I'm not careful, some people may think that I have become your pet..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid")
her "I meant to say the teacher's pet..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat")
her "" ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
block:
her "My father used to say: \"Magic is just science we don't understand yet\"." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "He couldn't be more wrong of course..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "He couldn't be more wrong, of course..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
block:
@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
block:
her "I barely study at all anymore..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid")
her "Despite that my popularity among the other students seems to be growing..."
her "Despite that, my popularity among the other students seems to be growing..."
her "*Hmm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
block:
@ -357,8 +357,8 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
her "Add Ashwinder's egg to cauldron..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "Then add horseshoe reddish and heat..."
her "Add Ashwinder's egg to the cauldron..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
her "Then add horseshoe reddish and heat it up..."
her "Then juice a squill bulb..."
her "Or was it a dash of thyme first?" ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her ".............." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat:
block:
her "I am sorry to bother you with this, sir..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "But do you have any condoms?"
her "Sadly the ones I've bought are already gone..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat")
her "Sadly, the ones I've bought are already gone..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat")
her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R")
block:

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game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy
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@ -298,9 +298,9 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
gen "I'm afraid not, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Okay then... Let me just change it real quick." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R")
########################################################
## Clear Night (Jeans and muggle top with vest) ##
########################################################
##################################################
## Clear Night (Jeans and muggle top with vest) ##
##################################################
elif item == her_outfit_s_clearnight:
gen "Could you wear your normal clothing, the one with jeans and the top with the vest?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
if states.her.level < 4:
@ -385,15 +385,15 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
## Rainy (School outfit with cloak)##
#####################################
elif item == her_outfit_s_rain:
gen "Could you put on your regular school outfit, and your cloak as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Could you put on your regular school uniform, and your cloak as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
if states.her.level < 4:
her "I wanted to talk to you about this actually..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
gen "(Oh, here we go...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "The cloak doesn't cover the head, so when it rains it just ends up in your hair." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid")
her "I always end up having to dry it using magic, making it go all frizzy." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R")
her "I always end up having to dry it using magic, which makes it go all frizzy." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R")
gen "Isn't your hair already--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid")
gen "I mean... great point [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I mean... Great point [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Thank you..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid")
gen "Now. can you put it on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "...{w=0.4} Fine..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R")

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game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy
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@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ label luna_chitchat:
random:
block:
lun "We were brewing a Draught of Peace during today's potions lesson, which reminded me of an article in The Quibbler about Valerian root." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "It described the roots calming properties and how when you chew on it, it will produce the same effect as the potion." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "It described the root's calming properties and how when you chew on it, it will produce the same effect as the potion." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "I brought this fact up to professor Snape, but he just laughed and prompted me to have at it." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "So I tried chewing on one... And let me tell you... I've never felt so relaxed in my life." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid")
@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label luna_chitchat:
block:
lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} There's something I've been meaning to ask you." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
lun "Could we avoid putting up so many mistletoe's during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "Could we avoid putting up so many mistletoes during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
lun "It would highly decrease the risk of a Nargle infestation." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
block:
@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ label luna_chitchat:
block:
lun "I'm still not so sure I'll ever be able to get rid of these spurts myself..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down")
lun "If it requires a lot of focus that is...{w=0.4} I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R")
lun "If it requires a lot of focus, that is...{w=0.4} I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R")
block:
lun "Are you sure we shouldn't clean your desk, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid")