From 56ccffb8a2e1adabcd4bcf15f97c4c2af8ad0f1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 18:00:51 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Minor writing fixes --- game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy | 2 +- .../characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy | 2 +- game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy index efffbf7e..d9b93bdc 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/chitchats.rpy @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ label hermione_chitchat: elif random_number == 3: her "It's been getting so cold lately..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "I hope it's going to start snowing soon..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "You will let me wear a coat at least right?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") + her "You will let me wear a coat at least, right?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") her "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") elif random_number == 4: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy index 7e0322a4..af082eb0 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy @@ -1254,7 +1254,7 @@ label hg_sex_3: gen "That's it, feel the power of the greatest fuck machine of all time!" her "" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "R", cheeks="blush") - call nar(">As you continue pounding Hermione, you suddenly feel her clench her pelvic muscles, creating a even tighter grip around your cock.") + call nar(">As you continue pounding Hermione, you suddenly feel her clench her pelvic muscles, creating an even tighter grip around your cock.") gen "There you go girl, you're learning!" her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} {heart}*Ah-ah*...{heart}" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") gen "I think it's for someone to get another reward..." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy index 8498724a..d7acc5e6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy @@ -1820,7 +1820,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: her "{size=+5}!!! *Gobble-gobble-slurp-gobble!* !!!{/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "{size=+5}Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Ghr*!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Here it comes, [hermione_name]! Here's you reward!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Here it comes, [hermione_name]! Here's your reward!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "!!!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "worried", "down") call cum_block @@ -1833,7 +1833,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: gen "Take my cum, slut!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Gulp!-Gulp!-Gulp*!" ("open_wide_tongue_cum", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") with hpunch - gen "Yes! Down your mouth you fucking cum dumpster!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes! Down your mouth, you fucking cum dumpster!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Gulp-gulp-gulp-gulp-gulp*!" ("open_wide_tongue_cum", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") stop music fadeout 1.0