From 634d4cb0b920f6deabc4d688a5a4224ba2bf3b8f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny Date: Mon, 3 Oct 2022 01:33:55 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Minor writing tweaks --- .../hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy index 4954d802..5cdbe298 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick her "But, as I was explaining the proper swishing and flicking motions, it is when I realized--" gen "You weren't getting praised enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I had already showed the class how to cast that particular spell ages ago." - her "It made me think, there must've been some ulterior motive as to why would Professor have me do it again." + her "It made me think, there must've been some ulterior motive as to why Professor Flitwick would have me do it again." gen "Maybe he's just forgetful? I forget to take my medication all the time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #unspecified medication makes it funnier her "I am sure he did it to take advantage of me, but unfortunately for him, \"forgetting\" that we've already learned that spell made it very clear to me!" gen "So, what you're saying is he never actually learnt how to cast the spell, and is making his students do it for him?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -163,7 +163,8 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick gen "Didn't you show them off before?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "That was... different..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R", cheeks="blush") - gen "I mean, do you truly believe professor flit-stick has shown this kind of behaviour before?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you say so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So, do you believe that professor flit-stick is showing this kind of behaviour frequently?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Lucky man." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")