From 660facb9bf2c5a21d3a0e451363a6cb2a3eb943c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Thu, 11 May 2023 13:08:31 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Flags, and proofreading. * Added show_bra, show_tits, show_panties, show_pussy, statuses. * Added status checks into "hg_pf_talk_tonks". * Added event flags in "Dance for me", Snape event. * Proofreading. --- game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy | 6 +- .../hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy | 25 ++++--- .../events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy | 18 ++--- .../events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy | 58 +++++++-------- .../events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy | 28 +++---- .../events/favors/give_me_a_tittyjob.rpy | 26 +++---- .../hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy | 8 +- .../events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy | 2 +- .../hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy | 32 ++++---- .../events/favors/lets_have_sex_anal.rpy | 64 ++++++++-------- .../events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy | 20 +++-- .../events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy | 19 +++-- .../favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy | 8 +- .../hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy | 74 +++++++++---------- .../hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 71 ++++++++++-------- game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy | 8 +- game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy | 4 +- 17 files changed, 254 insertions(+), 217 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy index acf43d95..da5e624e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy @@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): if gift_item == lollipop_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - cho "My team captain hasn't let me buy any to keep my blood sugar balanced... Whatever that means." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Sweets?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "My team captain hasn't let me buy any to keep my blood sugar balanced... Whatever that means." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "But thanks, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy index 740032c3..40dcac72 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T2_fail_intro: # Hermione starts dancing, but it will fail any gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(...........................................){/size}" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", ypos="head", flip=False) her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(This is silly...){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - nar "Hermione looks embarrassed but she keeps on \"dancing\"..." + nar "Hermione looks embarrassed, but she keeps on \"dancing\"..." gen "..................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(...........................................){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Alright, you can start undressing now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T2_fail_intro: # Hermione starts dancing, but it will fail any her @ cheeks blush "I won't let myself be forced to become some cheap stripper!!!" ("mad", "wide", "base", "stare") gen "Nobody is forcing you to do this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If you don't need the points, please feel free to leave." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Yes. I believe you're right Sir." ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Yes. I believe you're right, Sir." ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "Stripping for you won't be worth {b}any{/b} amount of points!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "I will be leaving now!" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T2_fail_repeat: ### Tier 3 ### -# Event 1 (i) - Hermione tries to stip for you but fails. +# Event 1 (i) - Hermione tries to strip for you but fails. # Event 2 (i) - Hermione strips for you on your desk. Snape then enters. # Event 3 (r) - Hermione strips for. You will get some event choices. @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(...........................................){/size}" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", ypos="head", flip=False) her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(This is silly...){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - nar "Hermione looks embarrassed but she keeps on \"dancing\"..." + nar "Hermione looks embarrassed, but she keeps on \"dancing\"..." gen "..................." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(...........................................){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Alright, you can start undressing now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -261,6 +261,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: nar "She clumsily shakes her body to and fro..." "\"Now, take off your top!\"" if hermione.is_worn("top", "bra"): + $ states.her.status.show_bra = True her @ cheeks blush "................................." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") nar "Hermione starts taking off her top..." nar "She seems very hesitant and takes her time..." @@ -306,6 +307,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: nar "Hermione looks extremely embarrassed..." nar "Her fingers shaking as she fumbles somewhat..." "\"Get rid of your bra!\"" if not hermione.is_worn("top"): + $ states.her.status.show_tits = True her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(Okay then...){/size}" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-5}(For the honour of Gryffindor!){/size}" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -348,7 +350,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: hide hermione_main with d3 - nar "Hermione looks at your pleadingly..." + nar "Hermione looks at you pleadingly..." nar "Her fingers tremble slightly as she begins moving them towards her panties..." gen "That's it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -389,7 +391,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: jump end_hg_pf_strip - "\"Sure. You will receive no points though.\"": + "\"Sure. You will receive no points, though.\"": her @ tears mascara_crying "[name_genie_hermione]... I may not be very good at this..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her @ tears mascara_crying "But I did my best... I think I deserve some--" gen "Just make sure you try harder next time, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -406,6 +408,9 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E1: jump end_hermione_event label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: + $ states.her.status.show_tits = True + $ states.her.status.show_pussy = True + gen "[name_hermione_genie], I need you to dance for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Again, [name_genie_hermione]...?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "You will get paid accordingly, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -455,7 +460,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_intro_E2: play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("robe", "accessory") - her "*groan*" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "*Groan*" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") $ _wearing_top = False if hermione.is_worn("top"): @@ -1374,7 +1379,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: her "[name_genie_hermione]... Are you even listening?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "*Ah*... Yes... You've truly got some shapely breasts, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".........." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid") - her "Fine! Have it your way I guess..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "R") + her "Fine! Have it your way, I guess..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "R") her "{size=-5}(As usual...){/size}" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") nar "Hermione moves her hips awkwardly, while trying her best not to look down towards your throbbing member..." @@ -1390,7 +1395,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: nar "Hermione begins taking off her panties..." play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("panties") - nar "Once past her hips, she lets them go and they slide down to her feet..." + nar "Once past her hips, she lets them go, and they slide down to her feet..." play sound "sounds/cloth_sound4.ogg" nar "After flicking them off the table, she resumes her dancing..." else: @@ -1507,7 +1512,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate: her "You should have restrained yourself like a proper headmaster would!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Really? I never heard that restraint was part of the job description..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You could've at the very least aimed it somewhere else!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "The bloodflow was being redirected to my penis, I could hardly move my legs and turn away!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The blood-flow was being redirected to my penis, I could hardly move my legs and turn away!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "But your hands kept moving, so move them and point it at the floor!" ("angry", "happy", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Not even an unstoppable force could push down this immovable object." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "........" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy index d418fe24..236499b0 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: her "As long as I am being paid..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "That's the spirit!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - her "I mean I have done it once today already..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") + her "I mean, I have done it once today already..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "Once more for good luck then!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "If you insist...{heart}" ("open", "base", "base", "R") @@ -527,14 +527,14 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Tell me what you're thinking about.\"": - her @ cheeks blush "*huh*?" ("open", "wink", "worried", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Huh*?" ("open", "wink", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Oh, *umm*... nothing..." ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione],{w=0.4} it's a bit weird..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Even more reason to tell me." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Fine..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "If you must know... I was thinking about the time I corrected professor Snape on the ingredients of a Hiccoughing potion." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "If you must know... I was thinking about the time I corrected professor Snape on the ingredients of a \"Hiccoughing Solution\"." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "....." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her @ cheeks blush "It was...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} {heart} in front of the entire class as well." @@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: gen "This is what you're thinking of when masturbating?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "dead") her @ cheeks blush "Is that too weird?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "(No wonder why she's being such a know it all... she's getting off from it.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(No wonder why she's being such a know-it-all... She's getting off from it.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let's just get back to business shall we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "................." ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") nar "Hermione goes quiet for a moment to enjoy herself, now fully focused on moving her fingers." @@ -575,14 +575,14 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: "\"Play with your tits some more!\"": her "*Hmm*?" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - her @ cheeks blush "Okay...{w=0.4} if you insist..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Okay...{w=0.4} If you insist..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") $ hermione.set_pose("hand_on_breast") her "*Ah*...{heart}" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Now pinch your nipples." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") - gen "do it, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Do it, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") play sound "sounds/gasp2.ogg" her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: gen "You are a disgrace, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ah-ah*...{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "Why don't you come down and I'll help you finish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why don't you come down, and I'll help you finish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") # Hermione climbs off your desk. @@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "This wasn't part of the deal!" ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And I was almost about to--" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "Can't let you have all the fun by yourself can we [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Can't let you have all the fun by yourself, can we, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart} Well, as long as it's just to make this end faster..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "up") her @ cheeks blush "I suppose I can...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart} allow it..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") nar "You give her tits a couple of firm squeezes..." @@ -682,7 +682,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering: nar "You enjoy the sensation of stroking the inside of Hermione's thighs..." nar "Kneading her gently and moving ever closer to her wet pussy..." gen "I love your big... firm, ass..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "As you get closer to her pussy you suddenly move your hands around her back to squeeze her ass..." + nar "As you get closer to her pussy, you suddenly move your hands around her back to squeeze her ass..." her @ cheeks blush "....................." ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "dead") gen "Your loins..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You slide your fingers across the side of her body as you return to the front, and then gently begin rubbing your forefinger just above her clit." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy index 44943c8f..0ddfd275 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy @@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T3_snape: # Fails hide hermione_main with d3 - gen "[name_hermione_genie], before you start I have one more favour to ask of you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_hermione_genie]... Before you start, I have one more favour to ask of you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base") gen "Do you think you could go and fetch professor Snape for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "... Professor Snape?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "May I ask, why, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "May I ask why, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, I just think you could use a bigger audience for your striptease performance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "My striptease performance...?!!" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "Are you completely out of your mind, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -63,11 +63,11 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: her "*Hmm*...?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I figured it was implied, but I wanted to give you an opportunity to find out just how dirty professor Snape can get with his students." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "!!!" ("open", "base", "base", "stare") - gen "If you had a better idea of the type of favours he's currently selling..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you had a better idea of the types of favours he's currently selling..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Then I'd be able to stay ahead of Slytherin in points, no problem..." ("open", "squint", "base", "stare") gen "Precisely..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I--{w=0.4} I should've known..." ("soft", "squint", "worried", "mid") - her "I'm sorry for doubting your intentions, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") + her "I apologise for doubting your intentions, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "No worries [name_hermione_genie], I should've made it more clear." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now, will you go find professor Snape, and bring him here?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bottom", "panties", "bra"): #Other items may not fit the category of "clothes" @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: her "But--{w=0.2} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Performing in front of Snape..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I'm not sure if--" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Yes, it's not an easy task... I am aware of that, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But if anyone is strong willed--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But if anyone is strong-willed--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(And slutty...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "--Enough to do it, it'd be you...{w=0.4} Unless you know some other Gryffindor student who'd be up for the task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "That's true... I am the only one who could do it..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: her @ cheeks blush "I'm just doing what is expected from a student..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R", emote="sweat") sna "Aren't you going to lecture me on the \"corruption that is taking over Hogwarts\" like you've done every other day during classes?" ("snape_03") gen "Severus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "No Albus, I want to hear what {i}little miss perfect{/i} has to say." ("snape_03") + sna "No, Albus... I want to hear what {i}little miss perfect{/i} has to say." ("snape_03") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") sna "Well?" ("snape_03") her "Oh, of course won't lecture you, professor Snape... After all, trading sexual favours for house points is common practice at Hogwarts." ("open", "squint", "worried", "L", emote="sweat") @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: sna "Verbally abusing--{w=0.2} You have some nerve, girl!" ("snape_08") sna "Albus, are you truly going to allow such insolent behaviour from a student?" ("snape_10") her "Professor, please don't listen to him! He's just trying to manipulate you." ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - sna "Know your place girl, or your so called abuse will be anything but verbal." ("snape_10") + sna "Know your place girl, or your so-called abuse will be anything but verbal." ("snape_10") menu: "\"Miss Granger, show some respect!\"": @@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: stop music with hpunch gen "Shut the fuck up!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You!... You good for nothing, ugly-faced, crooked-nosed-wannabe-wizard!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You!... You, good for nothing, dungeon-dwelling, crooked-nosed-wannabe-wizard!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") with hpunch sna "(...)" ("snape_11") her "(... Yikes!)" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: gen "And you... Stripper-whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Do what you are paid to do, and start stripping already!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "That bitch is already butt naked, so what more do you want?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That bitch is already butt-naked, so what more do you want?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "That B--{w=0.2} Bitch?!" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") gen "And you... Stripper-whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Do what you are paid to do!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: sna "Not really, no..." ("snape_01") sna "To be honest, I never really had a problem with the boy himself..." ("snape_06") sna "Although I did plan to make his life here miserable because of his father..." ("snape_03") - sna "But lately I have way more interesting projects to occupy myself with..." ("snape_02") + sna "But lately, I have way more interesting projects to occupy myself with..." ("snape_02") her "..................." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "R") "\"Severus, anything you'd like to get off your chest?\"": #Weasley @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: gen "I don't see why not..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now tell me... Anyone been causing you trouble lately?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Hmph*... Well, I suppose there's the Weasley twins..." ("snape_09") - gen "Really? Who doesn't love a pair of twins?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Really? Who doesn't love twins?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "If they were female, perhaps..." ("snape_23") her @ cheeks blush "....." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "So, what kind of trouble have they been causing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: her "*Tsk*!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "down") sna "All I can say, is that it involves a girl that they're very close to..." ("snape_13") her "{size=-5}(Ginny...?){/size}" ("angry", "squint", "worried", "stare") - gen "I see... So it's a revenge fuck type of situation?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see... So, it's a revenge-fuck type of situation?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "!!?" ("snape_08") sna "Albus, please... Not in front of the girl!" ("snape_17") gen "Alright, alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: her "It is not a boy's--" ("angry", "squint", "annoyed", "R", emote="angry") sna "Truly?" ("snape_09") her "Of course not!" ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") - sna "Then I suppose there must be some other magic at hand to have cause this... Deformation." ("snape_09") + sna "Then I suppose there must be some other magic at hand to have caused this... Deformation." ("snape_09") sna "Miss Granger..." ("snape_09") sna "Remind me... What potion contains two shrivel figs, four daisy roots, five hairy caterpillars, four leeches, and a rat spleen?" ("snape_09") her "*Ehm*... A shrinking solution? But what does--" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape: sna "Perhaps you accidentally sat in one..." ("snape_23") her "*Hmph*" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") - gen "Miss Granger, I'm not seeing a lot happening..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Miss Granger, I'm not seeing much happening..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") if hermione.is_worn("bra"): @@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape_masturbate: call ctc if states.her.tier < 5: # Hermione is not okay with it. her "Guys--{w=0.2} *Ehm*... I mean, sirs! *Ehm*...{w=0.4} Professors!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") - gen "Don't you mind us Miss Granger, just keep doing your thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") + gen "Don't you mind us, Miss Granger... Just keep doing your thing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="base") her "But..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "No! I refuse to dance, when those things are pointed at me!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "You need to put them away, or the dance is over!" ("angry", "happyCl", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape_masturbate: call ctc her "I demand a higher grade than that!" ("soft", "base", "angry", "L", xpos="right", ypos="base", flip=True) - sna "You do not demand a grade Miss Granger, you earn it." ("snape_09") + sna "You do not demand a grade, Miss Granger... You earn it!" ("snape_09") her "I did earn it!" ("clench", "narrow", "annoyed", "L") her "And could you at least have the decency to stop touching yourself when partaking in such an important discussion, professor!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down") sna "*Tch*..." ("snape_12") @@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape_results: gen "Most certainly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now, why don't you tell me what you've learned?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #TODO These only show once you've picked a certain menu option earlier in the event, the player may replay those same menu options, but these should only be shown once, (search for "#flogging", "#weasley", "#potter", "#butt") + #TODO These are he results of menu options earlier in the event, and should only show the first time. If you replay the same option, it will skip it in this section (search for "#flogging", "#weasley", "#potter", "#butt") #flogging: #her "I've learned that he doesn't seem to have any problems with hitting his students..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -863,17 +863,17 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape_results: her "*Hmm*... Let me think..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - #TODO "first time" should only play the first time after it has occured during the event. (These should just need regular permanent flags?) if _masturbate: - #first time - her "Well... I learned that guys doesn't seem to mind masturbating together..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + if not states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage1: + $ states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage1 = True + her "Well... I learned that guys don't seem to mind masturbating together..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I just thought I'd see just how far he would be willing to go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.tier < 5: her "Quite far it seems..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "If I hadn't ended it, he probably would've gone all the way..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I suppose we'll never know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") #annoyed - #subsequent times + else her "Well... I learned that you two masturbating over me has become a frequent occurrence..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "At least now you know just how far he's willing to go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "(Like I didn't know that already...)" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -881,27 +881,27 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape_results: her "Once again, I don't doubt he would've seen it through to the end, had I not ended it." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, you never know..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") #annoyed - #TODO "first time" should only play the first time after it has occured during the event. (should these just use regular permanent flags?) if _masturbate_finished: - # first time - if not states.her.status.cum_body: - $ states.her.status.cum_body = True #Cum on her body for the first time - her "I... I've never let somebody do that to me before... Let alone two people." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + if not states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage2: + $ states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage2 = True + if not states.her.status.cumshot: + $ states.her.status.cumshot = True #Cum on her body for the first time + her "Still... I've never let somebody do that to me before... Let alone two people." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Ejaculate...{w=0.4} On my body..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: her "I didn't think that you'd go as far as finishing..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Oh well... At least now I know what Snape expects from something like this..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - # subsequent times - her "I'm not really sure why I allowed it to go all the way to you both finishing again..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + else: + her "I'm not really sure why I allowed it to go all the way to you both finishing on me again..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "I already know just how much Snape expects from a student performing a task like this." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Then more the reason to see it through." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") if _watch: gen "Did Severus act the way you expected?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Yes, he's just as self absorbed and perverted as he's ever been." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Yes, he's just as self-absorbed and perverted as he's ever been." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") random: her "Calling a girl a harlot... Such a typical thing for him to say..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "There's no doubt, with how easily he threw out terms like \"shake those titties, you harlot\", that the Slytherin girls must be shaking theirs at him frequently." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy index cb175648..15c54ef6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy @@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_T4_intro_E2: her "Stop saying that, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") gen "Come off it [name_hermione_genie], it's not like I'm asking you to do this for free." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("normal", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "I'm sure the Slytherin girls has no issue doing it...{w=0.4} In fact, they're probably being showered in house points as we speak!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm sure the Slytherin girls have no issue doing it...{w=0.4} In fact, they're probably being showered in house points as we speak!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}That is not the kind of shower that I'm worried about...{/size}" ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "What was that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Nothing, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_1: gen "Then don't you think you should focus more on your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right, [name_genie_hermione]! I'm sorry..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") her "I will just keep on stroking it then..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - gen "That said...{w=0.4} There is something you could do to speed up the process..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That said...{w=0.4} There is something you could do to accelerate the process..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Really? What is it [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") menu: @@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_1: menu: "\"That is not what I said.\"": her "But, you--" ("disgust", "base", "angry", "mid") - gen "You asked me what would speed up the process, and I gave you an--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You asked me what would accelerate the process, and I gave you an--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Hold on... You want me to make things up, and degrade myself?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") her "And that's supposed to assist... Calling myself a..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "That's right [name_hermione_genie]... If you want me to finish quicker, then I need you to degrade yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_1: gen "Go on, [name_hermione_genie]...{w=0.4} I'm sure you won't find it that difficult." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Well, that's up for debate.\"": her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Either way, if you want to speed up the process..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Either way, if you want to accelerate the process..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then I want you to call yourself a \"whore\", or a \"slut\", you could also throw a \"harlot\" or two in there for good measure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "So, you want me to make up naughty and degrading things to say about myself?" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Sure, make things up..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_1: her @ cheeks blush "I am a big whore..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") gen "Yes, you are." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I am the biggest whore in the United Kingdom!" ("mad", "squint", "worried", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "I try to act innocent, but the truth is, all I think about... Is cock!" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I try to act innocent, but the truth is, all I think about... is cock!" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "Yes, you do, you little slut!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, that's right! I am a slut!" ("angry", "squint", "worried", "R") her "I crave cock...{w=0.4} {size=-4}All the time!{/size}" ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") @@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2: gen "Apologies." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Your penis is so big it almost scares me!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "You little minx. You know exactly what to say..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "And yet I lust for it..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") + her "And yet, I lust for it..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "Any woman would be happy to have your huge penis inside of her!" gen "... you're good!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "There is more!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") @@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2: "\"I live to suck cock!\"": her "*Ehm*..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") her "I live to suck penis, er... I mean cock..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Really? Well why don't you suck on this one then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Really? Well, why don't you suck on this one then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione], I am just repeating after you..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Really? Could've fooled me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "...................." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") @@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2: "\"This is really good. Did you practise?\"": her "*Hmm*?" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her "Sort of... Well not really..." + her "Sort of... Well, not really..." her "I had a talk with the girls, and..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "About handjobs?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Among other things..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy") @@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2_continue: call her_chibi_scene("hj", trans=d5) pause.5 - her "But everything I just said is not true of course!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "But everything I just said is not true, of course!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "I never have fantasies like that!" gen "Right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -869,10 +869,10 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2_continue: her "What?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "That's disgusting." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") her "Dogs carry {size=+5}STD{/size}s, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Actually, human and canine {size=+5}STD{/size}s are species specific..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Actually, human and canine {size=+5}STD{/size}s are species-specific..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Meaning... They can only be spread to the same species." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............{size=-6}I knew that{/size}" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Heh. Of course you would." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Heh*... Of course, you would." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Also I hear that many women do enjoy getting \"knotted\" quite a bit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What does getting \"knotted\" mean?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") gen "*Ehm*... Well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1052,10 +1052,10 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2_cumming: if states.her.status.blowjob == False: # Hasn't done blowjobs yet. her "With all due respect [name_genie_hermione]..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Not for the meagre {number=current_payout} points..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") - her "Speaking of which. Can I get may payment now please?" + her "Speaking of which. Can I get my payment now, please?" else: her "Maybe next time..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") - her "Can I get may payment now please?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") + her "Can I get my payment now please?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") "\"(Nah... no need.)\"": gen "Here! Take this, whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1085,7 +1085,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_2_cumming: pause.8 call bld - gen "Yes... I Feel so much better now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... I feel so much better now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call her_chibi("stand","mid","base") call gen_chibi("stand","desk","base") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_tittyjob.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_tittyjob.rpy index c93e46ce..3bd01714 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_tittyjob.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_tittyjob.rpy @@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_T6_intro_E1: gen "Fine, fine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How do you feel about wrapping those perfect tits of yours around my cock again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "You like it when I call them perfect don't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You like it when I call them perfect, don't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "You don't have to answer, just bring those {b}perfect{/b} tits over here." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("base", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_T6_intro_E2: label hg_pf_titjob_T6_repeat: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) - gen "[name_hermione_genie], how would you like wrapping those perfect tits of yours around my cock again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_hermione_genie], what do you think about wrapping those perfect tits of yours around my cock again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "As long as I am getting paid..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") gen "Well, then... Time to earn those points!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_1: call her_chibi_scene("tj_mouth", trans=d5) call ctc - nar "Your thrusts ends up going into her drooling mouth." + nar "Your thrusts end up going into her drooling mouth." gen "That's it, slut! Taste it!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "....................." ("open_wide_tongue", "wide", "angry", "stare") gen "Yes, you big-titted whore!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_1: her "I can't go to class like this..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") her "I'm covered in semen..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down", emote="sweat") else: - her "At this hour the Gryffindor common room will be full of students..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") + her "At this hour, the Gryffindor common room will be full of students..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") her "And I'm smelling like spunk!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "I can only hope I'll be able to run past them without anybody noticing..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -595,7 +595,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2: nar "She squeezes her tits around your cock." show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg her "This, has to be the perfect cock!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") - gen "Perfect you say?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Perfect, you say?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "The size..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "The shape..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Everything about it..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2: show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg her "*Hmm*?..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") show her_titjob_personal h21 as cg - her "Sort of...{w=0.3} Well not on another cock..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") + her "Sort of...{w=0.3} Well, not on another cock..." ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "On what then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg her "Well, I spoke to Ginny..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") @@ -768,12 +768,12 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2_continue: her "Pressed against him..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "That's it slut." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg - her "If I feel like teasing him a bit more I will give him a kiss on the forehead..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") + her "If I feel like teasing him a bit more, I will give him a kiss on the forehead..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") show her_titjob_personal h23 as cg her "Making sure that he can see down my blouse..." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") her "{heart}{heart}{heart}" show her_titjob_personal h25 as cg - her "But all of that is not true of course!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "But all of that is not true, of course!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg her "None of that happens! It was just for you to imagine!" gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -803,7 +803,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2_continue: gen "attempted?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_titjob_personal h22 as cg her "Well...{w=0.4} I may have held him there..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - her "Just for a little bit..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "Only for a little bit..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") show her_titjob_personal h23 as cg her "To make sure he knew it was okay..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure that's why, you little slut." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2_cumming: gen "So you're fine with swallowing now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Oh. I suppose so..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") - her "I mean... it doesn't taste that bad and I don't have to clean up afterwards." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + her "I mean... it doesn't taste that bad, and I don't have to clean up afterwards." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*... You sure you wouldn't like people seeing your tits covered in cum..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What? Walk around school covered in your cum, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") @@ -906,12 +906,12 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2_cumming: call her_chibi_scene("tj_pause", trans=d5) call bld - gen "Here! Take this you big-titted whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Here! Take this, you big-titted whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") with hpunch gen "*ARGH*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_titjob_personal h25 as cg her "What? Already?!" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare", ypos="head", flip=False) - gen "Yeah, your tits felt great slut!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yeah, your tits felt great, slut!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call cum_block call her_chibi_scene("tj_cum_on", trans=d9) @@ -952,7 +952,7 @@ label hg_pf_titjob_2_cumming: gen "They just felt too good..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_titjob_personal h36 as cg her "Oh..." ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") - her "Well, If that's the reason then I suppose it's not too bad..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "Well, If that's the reason, then I suppose it's not too bad..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") show her_titjob_personal h37 as cg her "I'll just wipe it off and hope that nobody will notice..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "You could lick them clean..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy index 16eafdd2..af3b9c34 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_ass.rpy @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T2_back: her @ cheeks blush "You said all you were going to do is touch..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Just stand still, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I don't think so, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "No amount of points are worth this humiliation!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") + her @ cheeks blush "No amount of points is worth this humiliation!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") her @ cheeks blush "You are abusing your power, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") gen "What?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I'm leaving!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) @@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_continue: "-Force your finger into her pussy!-": nar "You force one of your fingers into her pussy..." nar "It's very tight and warm..." - nar "Also it is relatively dry... Doesn't look like Hermione's taking much pleasure in this..." + nar "It is also relatively dry... Doesn't look like Hermione's taking much pleasure in this..." jump hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_fail @@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T3_fail: gen "Oh, snap out of it [name_hermione_genie], You got paid didn't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Don't act like you're not benefiting from this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "What ever..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Whatever..." ("angry", "base", "base", "R") "\"Surely you can't be serious, [name_hermione_genie]!\"": $ states.her.mood += 27 @@ -683,7 +683,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_ass_T4_back: gen "Be careful what you wish for, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Giving me free rein might show you just how greedy I can be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Although perhaps if you're lucky enough, you could also receive some of my well known generosity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Although perhaps if you're lucky enough, you could also receive some of my well-known generosity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Lessening your grip on her cheeks slightly, you then move down towards her inner thighs, and gently begin massaging her with your thumbs..." "-Give her butt a slap-": diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy index 434213d5..683dc621 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T2: ### Tier 3 ### -label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T3: # Favour fails if you Slap them. +label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T3: # Favour fails if you slap them. call her_chibi_scene("behind_desk_front", trans=d7) $ hermione.strip("robe", "accessory") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy index 297e811d..2850ba90 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ label hg_pf_sex: label hg_pf_sex_fail: gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Why don't you come over here and I pound your pussy for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why don't you come over here, and then I pound your pussy for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "With my cock!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ hg_pf_sex.fail_intentional() @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ label hg_pf_sex_fail: # Event 1 (i) - First time sex # Event 2 (i) - Sex with different dialogue -# Event 3 (i) - Regular or anal sex (Once spread on desk CG is ready we'll add new writing as a menu option) -# Event 3 (r) - Regular or anal sex, naked option (Once spread on desk CG is ready we'll add new writing as a menu option) +# Event 3 (i) - Regular or anal sex (Once spread on desk CG is ready, we'll add new writing as a menu option) +# Event 3 (r) - Regular or anal sex, naked option (Once spread on desk CG is ready, we'll add new writing as a menu option) label hg_pf_sex_T6_intro_E1: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ label hg_pf_sex_T6_intro_E2: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Last night I had a dream..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You were lying on my desk and I was fucking your tight pussy like a madman..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You were lying on my desk, and I was fucking your tight pussy like a madman..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "In that dream, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Did I happen to receive sixty-five house points afterwards?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Why yes, you did, [name_hermione_genie]." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ label hg_sex_1: show her_sex_personal mouth_disgust eyebrows_base eyes_wide_mid cheeks_blush as cg her "What?" - gen "Well I pay you to have sex with me. How would you call that?" + gen "Well, I pay you to have sex with me... How would you call that?" show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_down cheeks_blush as cg her "..........." @@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ label hg_sex_1: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "You take a step back to take in the view of Hermione who is now fully coated in your cum." + nar "You take a step back to take in the view of Hermione, who is now fully coated in your cum." nar "Looking down you notice her legs still twitching slightly and a streak of liquid slowly beginning to trickle down her legs." nar "After composing herself for a moment, Hermione readies herself and then makes her way to the front of your desk." @@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ label hg_sex_2: gen "Well, you don't seem to mind calling me daddy!" gen "Right now I am your daddy!" else: - gen "Well, right now I am your daddy!" + gen "Well, right now, I am your daddy!" show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyebrows_worried eyes_happycl cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.3}{heart} *Ah-ah*...{heart}{heart}" @@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ label hg_sex_2: her "*Ah-a*...{w=0.4}{heart} But I am only doing this--" if name_genie_hermione == "Master": gen "As if...{w=0.4} I can hear that tone in your voice every time you call me master..." - gen "You're nothing but a cock-sleeve for me to do with as I please and you know it..." + gen "You're nothing but a cock-sleeve for me to do with as I please, and you know it..." elif name_genie_hermione == "Daddy": gen "What would your father say if he knew you're calling me daddy?" else: @@ -1108,7 +1108,7 @@ label hg_sex_2: call slap_her show her_sex_personal mouth_crooked_smile eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_down cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg - her "*Ah*..!{w=0.4}{heart}" + her "*Ah*...!{w=0.4}{heart}" gen "And some more!" call slap_her @@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ label hg_sex_2: gen "Shut it whore!" play background "sounds/sexloopveryfast.ogg" - nar "Thrusting your cock deep into Hermione's pussy you feel yourself getting close to the edge." + nar "Thrusting your cock deep into Hermione's pussy, you feel yourself getting close to the edge." call ctc menu: @@ -1328,8 +1328,8 @@ label hg_sex_2: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "You take a step back to give Hermione some room, giving her ass a last glance you watch as your cum slowly begins sliding down her sides." - nar "After a couple moments, Hermione finally manages to pull herself together and after readying herself she makes her way to the front of your desk." + nar "You take a step back to give Hermione some room, giving her ass a last glance, you watch as your cum slowly begins sliding down her sides." + nar "After a couple of moments, Hermione finally manages to pull herself together and after readying herself, she makes her way to the front of your desk." return @@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@ label hg_sex_3: show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyebrows_annoyed eyes_narrow_r cheeks_blush as cg nar "As you continue pounding Hermione, you suddenly feel her clench her pelvic muscles, creating an even tighter grip around your cock." - gen "There you go girl, you're learning!" + gen "There you go, girl... You're learning!" show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_r cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} {heart}*Ah-ah*...{heart}" gen "I think it's for someone to get another reward..." @@ -1537,7 +1537,7 @@ label hg_sex_3: her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Of course I--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Why else would I be doing this..." gen "Don't you think it's a bit suspicious that as soon as Gryffindor takes the lead it's quickly taken from them?" show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyebrows_annoyed eyes_narrow_down cheeks_blush as cg - her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} That...{w=0.3} That's Snape's work no doubt..." + her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} That...{w=0.3} That's Snape's work, no doubt..." show her_sex_personal mouth_disgust eyebrows_annoyed eyes_narrow_mid cheeks_blush as cg her "All those Slytherin--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Whores..." gen "You're no different to them.... You're nothing but a cum hungry slut!" @@ -1902,8 +1902,8 @@ label hg_sex_3: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "With no other sound but Hermione's breathing returning to a normal pace you take a step back to admire your work." - nar "The girls defiled body still sprawled and presenting herself in front of you, you can't help but take another glance at her glistening pussy before she stands up." + nar "With no other sound but Hermione's breathing returning to a normal pace, you take a step back to admire your work." + nar "The girl's defiled body still sprawled and presenting herself in front of you, you can't help but take another glance at her glistening pussy before she stands up." her "I..." nar "Blushing and without finishing her sentence, Hermione readies herself and makes her way to the front of your desk." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex_anal.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex_anal.rpy index a3b64e40..458ad050 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex_anal.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex_anal.rpy @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: show her_sex_personal mouth_mad eyes_narrow_mid eyebrows_worried tears_soft as cg her "But I don't want you to!" - gen "Really? How do you expect people to fuck you up your ass then?" + gen "Really? How do you expect people to fuck you up your ass, then?" show her_sex_personal mouth_clench eyes_wide_r eyebrows_worried tears_soft as cg her "What people?" @@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Please...{w=0.3} Not inside my--{w=0.2} *Ah*..." play background "sounds/sexloopveryfast.ogg" - nar "Not showing the girl any mercy you thrust your hips even harder against her, pushing your cock down to the hilt into her ass." + nar "Not showing the girl any mercy, you thrust your hips even harder against her, pushing your cock down to the hilt into her ass." gen "That's it slut, take this!" with hpunch @@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: nar "Hermione collapses onto your desk and your dick finally slides out of her cum filled ass." show her_sex_personal cum_pussy_light as cg - nar "As she lies there for a moment you watch as her asshole convulses and your semen slowly beginning to leak out onto the floor." + nar "As she lies there for a moment, you watch as her asshole convulses, and your semen slowly beginning to leak out onto the floor." show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_happy_r eyebrows_base cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg her "*SOB*! I HATE YOU..." @@ -563,10 +563,10 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: gen "*Agh*...{w=0.3} Shut it, [name_hermione_genie]!" show her_sex_personal cum_pussy_heavy as cg - nar "Hermione clenches her ass again and you watch as another glob of cum leak out." + nar "Hermione clenches her ass again, and you watch as another glob of cum leaks out." show her_sex_personal mouth_upset eyes_happycl eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush tears_soft_blink as cg - her "*sob*!{w=0.4} *Sob*!..." + her "*Sob*!{w=0.4} *Sob*!..." gen "Whew!... I think that was the last of it." gen "You alright?" show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_base cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg @@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: her "My butt hurts, but I am alright, [name_genie_hermione]..." gen "Well, you took my dick stoically, all things considered..." show her_sex_personal mouth_base eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg - her "Thank you [name_genie_hermione]..." + her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." call ctc show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_base cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg @@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: her "A little..." show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "But I also feel full and warm inside..." - gen "So you're planning on keeping it in? My cum I mean." + gen "So you're planning on keeping it in? My cum, I mean." show her_sex_personal mouth_base eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "If I can..." @@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: gen "Well, good luck on your journey." show her_sex_personal mouth_base eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg - her "Can I get paid now please?" + her "Can I get paid now, please?" gen "Of course..." @@ -644,13 +644,13 @@ label hg_anal_sex_1_intro: her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Please--" play background "sounds/sexloopveryfast.ogg" - nar "Not showing the girl any mercy you thrust your hips hard against her, pushing your cock down to the hilt into her ass." + nar "Not showing the girl any mercy, you thrust your hips hard against her, pushing your cock down to the hilt into her ass." show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_base cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} [name_genie_hermione]..." show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_narrow_stare eyebrows_base cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg her "You're...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} You're tearing me apart..." - gen "You aint seen nothing yet [name_hermione_genie]!" + gen "You ain't seen nothing yet, [name_hermione_genie]!" play background "sounds/sexloopfast.ogg" nar "You slow down your thrusting until finally..." @@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: $ current_payout = 90 $ hg_pf_sex.change_icon(a="heart_half", b="heart_red") - gen "How about another assfuck, [name_hermione_genie]?" + gen "How about another ass-fucking, [name_hermione_genie]?" her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", flip=True) gen "*Hngh*! You little minx!" @@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: her "Please [name_genie_hermione]...{w=0.3} Call me a \"whore\"..." show her_sex_personal hold_grin as cg gen "*He-Heh*...{w=0.3} You don't have to ask me twice!" - gen "Now bend over so I can fuck your ass more easily, whore!" + gen "Now bend over, so I can fuck your ass more easily, whore!" show her_sex_personal lean_forward caress as cg: ease_quad 1.0 offset (-65, -240) zoom 0.45 rotate -4 @@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: if name_genie_hermione == "Master": gen "That's what you deserve for being such a slut!" elif name_genie_hermione == "Daddy": - gen "That's for you get for being such a naughty girl!" + gen "That's what you get for being such a naughty girl!" show her_sex_personal mouth_base eyes_narrow_mid eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "..." @@ -967,7 +967,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: gen "Relax your muscles a little, would you?" show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_happycl eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush tears_soft_blink as cg her "BUT I'M CUMMING!{heart}{heart}{heart}" - gen "Fine! Have it your way whore!" + gen "Fine! Have it your way, whore!" show her_sex_personal bent_over grab as cg: easein 1.0 offset (0, -480) rotate 0 @@ -1047,9 +1047,9 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: with d5 nar "You step back and give Hermione's ass a last glance, her asshole still convulses slightly as your cum continues to dribble onto the ground." - nar "After a couple moments, she pushes herself up, off your desk..." - nar "Before making her way to the front of your desk you notice her prodding her butthole gently." - nar "You swear you see a slight smile across her face for a brief moment, but before you know it she has already readied herself and made her way to the front of your desk." + nar "After a couple of moments, she pushes herself up, off your desk..." + nar "Before making her way to the front of your desk, you notice her prodding her butthole gently." + nar "You swear you see a slight smile across her face for a brief moment, but before you know it, she has already readied herself and made her way to the front of your desk." "-Cum all over her-": show her_sex_personal cum_outside2 as cg @@ -1119,9 +1119,9 @@ label hg_anal_sex_2_intro: show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg her "Everything is in a daze...{w=0.3} And my legs feel so weak..." if game.daytime: - gen "Well you better get on your feet so you can receive your payment, [name_hermione_genie]... You've still got lessons to get to." + gen "Well you better get on your feet, so you can receive your payment, [name_hermione_genie]... You've still got lessons to get to." else: - gen "Then I better get to awarding your points so you can get some rest..." + gen "Then I better get to awarding you your points, so you can get some rest..." show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush tears_soft as cg her "Oh...{w=0.3} Of course [name_genie_hermione]..." @@ -1191,7 +1191,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: gen "Ready?" show her_sex_personal mouth_soft eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_base as cg her "As I'll ever--" - "-Less talking more fucking-": + "-Less talking, more fucking-": pass play sound "sounds/gltch.ogg" @@ -1233,17 +1233,17 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: show her_sex_personal mouth_soft eyes_closed eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} No, [name_genie_hermione]..." show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_narrow_mid eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush as cg - her "They--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} They would probably hear my--{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.2} Moaning through the door anyway so why--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Why even bother..." + her "They--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} They would probably hear my--{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.2} moaning through the door anyway, so why--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Why even bother..." menu: "-Chastise her-": - gen "So you don't care at all?" + gen "So, you don't care at all?" show her_sex_personal mouth_base eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} I don't, [name_genie_hermione]..." gen "What if one of your Gryffindor friends suddenly turned up outside my door?" show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_narrow_r eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush as cg her "They--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} They wouldn't..." - gen "Are you sure? I mean it's not like the door is locked or anything..." + gen "Are you sure? I mean, it's not like the door is locked or anything..." gen "Anyone could walk in here!" if game.daytime: random: @@ -1276,7 +1276,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: nar "Her pleads are soon drowned out by the slapping of her cheeks as you push your cock deep inside her with every stroke." show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_happycl eyebrows_annoyed cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." - gen "Although... With how loud you're moaning I'd be surprised if I'd even need to call them up here..." + gen "Although... With how loud you're moaning, I'd be surprised if I'd even need to call them up here..." show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_happycl eyebrows_annoyed cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." gen "I bet the entire castle can hear your moans and cheeks slapping..." @@ -1309,10 +1309,10 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_narrow_l eyebrows_worried cheeks_blush as cg her "I suppose I'm just a natural..." gen "Clearly..." - gen "Well then, let's take that to the test shall we!" + gen "Well then, let's put that to the test, shall we!" "-Reward her bravery-": - gen "Well then I suppose you wouldn't mind me going all out on you then..." + gen "I suppose you wouldn't mind me going all out on you then..." gen "After all, it's not like you'd be able to moan loud enough for anyone to hear you through the window..." show her_sex_personal mouth_open eyes_closed eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} Of course...{w=0.4} Go ahead, [name_genie_hermione]..." @@ -1320,7 +1320,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg" nar "You start fucking Hermione with renewed determination." - nar "Noticing Hermione trying to stifle her moans you push your cock deep inside her ass and with each insertion your body smacks hard against her cheeks." + nar "Noticing Hermione trying to stifle her moans, you push your cock deep inside her ass, and with each insertion, your body smacks hard against her cheeks." play background "sounds/sexloopfast.ogg" @@ -1337,7 +1337,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_narrow_up eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*..." - gen "*Hmm*... Surely we can do better than that..." + gen "*Hmm*... Surely, we can do better than that..." call slap_her @@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: her "I..." gen "Although maybe I haven't gone all out on you yet..." show her_sex_personal mouth_soft eyes_narrow_mid eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg - her "*Ah*... Surely you must have..." + her "*Ah*... Surely, you must have..." gen "Well, you're about to find out!" show her_sex_personal bent_over grab as cg: @@ -1392,7 +1392,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_happycl eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." gen "Even after the things I've done to you...{w=0.3} You can't wait to get back in here and do it again..." - gen "To suck your headmasters cock as if your life depended on it..." + gen "To suck your headmaster's cock as if your life depended on it..." show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyes_narrow_mid eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." gen "Have him fuck you so hard that you can't help but yell out in pleasure..." @@ -1417,7 +1417,7 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: gen "With the only purpose of squeezing out as much semen as you can." show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_narrow_down eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "I..." - gen "To have me fill your ass up until you can't walk, or cover you in it just so you can smell it during class..." + gen "To have me fill your ass until you can't walk... Or cover you in it just so you can smell it during class..." gen "You should be ashamed of yourself!" show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyes_base_mid eyebrows_base cheeks_blush as cg her "I--" @@ -1579,6 +1579,6 @@ label hg_anal_sex_3: nar "Hermione lies on your desk for a moment before finally pushing herself up." nar "You watch as she sneakily tries to brush some of your cum off with her finger and lick it off." - nar "Noticing that you were looking she then readies herself and hurriedly makes her way to the front of your desk." + nar "Noticing that you were looking, she then readies herself and hurriedly makes her way to the front of your desk." jump end_hg_pf_sex diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy index 75903879..94f510c4 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T1_intro_E1: gen "I just want you to show me your panties." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "My... Panties...?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") - gen "I know, I know, this a little weird..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I know, I know, this is a little weird..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=+7}A little !?{/size}" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare") her "This is completely inappropriate!" gen "Listen, we need to go through this phase before we get to the good stuff, alright?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -135,6 +135,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T1_E1: label hg_pf_admire_panties_T1: # Call label + + $ states.her.status.show_panties = True + call hide_characters with d3 @@ -210,6 +213,8 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T2_E1: label hg_pf_admire_panties_T2: # Call label + $ states.her.status.show_panties = True + call hide_characters with d3 @@ -256,6 +261,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T2: # Call label # Event 2 (r) - Ask her to take off her panties, you make her stand for longer + variation if she has stripped. label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_intro_E1: + + $ states.her.status.show_pussy = True + if hg_pf_admire_panties.counter == 1: gen "[name_hermione_genie], could you show me your panties?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if not states.her.status.stripping: @@ -346,7 +354,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_intro_E1: her @ cheeks blush "I thought you just wanted me to show you my panties..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, and now I want to see them slide off your legs." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "You'll get paid extra obviously..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You'll get paid extra, obviously..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "...{w=0.4} How much extra?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Ten points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Just ten?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -418,7 +426,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_E1: "\"Do you like showing off your panties?\"": her "Like, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Yes [name_hermione_genie]... Do you enjoy it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*... I don't mind it I guess..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*... I don't mind it, I guess..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") her "As long as it makes my house happy." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure it does." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Stare at her panties-": @@ -470,7 +478,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_E1: gen "Quiet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") call ctc - gen "Okay I'm done..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Okay, I'm done..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Let her go-": gen "Alright then, that shall do for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -561,12 +569,12 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T4_intro_E1: "\"Absolutely not!\"": her "Why not!?" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Sluts doesn't get paid." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sluts don't get paid." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's what makes them sluts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Will you at least pay me the {number=current_payout} points?" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Are you a slut or are you a prostitute?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]?!" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "It's a simple question... Sluts doesn't get paid, so you're a prostitute then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It's a simple question... Sluts don't get paid, so you're a prostitute then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}I'm not a prostitute...{/size}" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Then, what are you, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Do I really have to--" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy index 77b9287c..d8e49b61 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1_intro_E1: $ states.her.mood += 3 $ hg_pf_admire_breasts.fail() - gen "Well.. Next time I guess." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Well... Next time, I guess.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump main_room_menu @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1_intro_E1: pause .5 her "Sir, I would like to have my points now." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "What? Oh yes. Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What? Oh, yes... Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call hide_characters show screen blkfade @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1_intro_E2: $ states.her.mood += 6 $ hg_pf_admire_breasts.fail() - gen "Bummer.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Bummer..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") jump main_room_menu @@ -270,6 +270,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1_E2: label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1: # Call label + + $ states.her.status.show_bra = True + play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME. her "............." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") @@ -296,7 +299,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T1: # Call label ### Tier 2 ### # Hermione will bare her breasts after some convincing. -# Event 1 (i) - Choice: Pay Hermione more points to lift up her top without bra. +# Event 1 (i) - Choice: Pay Hermione more points take off top and bra. # Event 2 (i) - Hermione will lift up her top. # Event 3 (r) - Hermione will lift up her top. @@ -330,9 +333,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T2_intro_E1: her "This again?!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Just asking..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I already told you... Two hundred points..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... That's a lot, just to have you show me your tits don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... That's a lot, just to have you show me your tits, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Two hundred!" ("disgust", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "How about a pat on the back and a snickers bar to help with that terrible mood of yours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How about a pat on the back and a Snickers bar to help with that terrible mood of yours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I think I'd better go..." menu: @@ -368,7 +371,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T2_intro_E1: pass - "\"Twenty-five house points that's my final offer!\"": + "\"Twenty-five house points, that's my final offer!\"": $ current_payout = 25 $ states.her.mood += 9 @@ -466,7 +469,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T3_E1: ### Tier 4 ### -# Hermione is more than ok with showing you her tits now. +# Hermione is more than okay with showing you her tits now. # She doesn't mind if you touch them. # Event 1 (i) - Hermione will lift up her top. diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy index c65b706d..16edc770 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits_branches.rpy @@ -77,6 +77,8 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_transition: label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T2: + $ states.her.status.show_tits = True + call hg_pf_admire_breasts_transition menu: @@ -224,7 +226,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T2_masturbate: # Not a Call label her @ cheeks blush "I am not setting a foot into your office ever again, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - gen "Come on, now. Just say something dirty! I'm almost there!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on now... Just say something dirty! I'm almost there!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush tears messy "You are a horrible person, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") call her_walk(action="run", xpos="door", speed=2, reduce=True) @@ -264,6 +266,8 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T2_masturbate: # Not a Call label label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T3: + $ states.her.status.show_tits = True + call hg_pf_admire_breasts_transition menu: @@ -408,7 +412,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T3_masturbate: "-Hold it as promised-": gen "Oh, alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'd better stop now I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Fuck me that hurts...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Fuck me, that hurts...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..............." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") show screen blkfade with d3 diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy index 73caf730..cc86850e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy @@ -112,13 +112,13 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T4_fail_intro: gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "All I wanted was to get done with that favour early, so I..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") her "I helped..." ("disgust", "base", "worried", "R") - gen "By sucking on my cock! Indeed you did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "By sucking on my cock! Indeed, you did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No! I was merely stroking it... And..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I gave it a short kiss, but..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I'm sorry [name_genie_hermione], but I don't think I can do \"that\"!" ("open", "base", "worried", "R") else: gen "Preferably..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But I'm always open to try out new things!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But I'm always open to trying out new things!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Are you out of your mind?!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I should leave..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T4_fail_repeat: her "That was something different entirely..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I wanted to get done with that favour early, so I helped a bit." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "By sucking on my cock! Indeed you did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "By sucking on my cock! Indeed, you did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "It was nothing more than a short kiss..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Still counts as a blowjob..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # See, no flag is set. It doesn't count! :) @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T4_fail_repeat: ### Tier 5 ### -# Event 1 (i) - Hermione is ok with it. +# Event 1 (i) - Hermione is okay with it. # Event 2 (i) - Hidden blowjob with Snape watching. # Event 3 (r) - Normal blowjob with choices. @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T5_intro_E1: her "Yes. I know I'm supposed to feel outraged..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "But somehow I do not..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "I suppose I am just glad that I can help out my house..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "And if to do that I must put your penis in my mouth, then so be it..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "And if I must put your penis in my mouth to do that, then so be it..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Well, alright then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Although, now when I say it out loud like this..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Too late! You already said \"yes\"!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T5_intro_E2: "\"*Ehm*... I am sorry?\"": stop music fadeout 1.0 her "*Giggle*" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME. her "I got you... [name_genie_hermione]." ("grin", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -229,11 +229,11 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_T5_intro_E2: gen "I guess I'll have to sign a resignation and step down being a headmaster." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione]?!" ("open", "wide", "worried", "mid") play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME. - gen "*he-he* If you could only see your face." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "what.." ("soft", "wide", "worried", "mid") + gen "*He-he* If you could only see your face." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "what..." ("soft", "wide", "worried", "mid") gen "I got you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "........" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "R") - her "*sigh*" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "*Sigh*" ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Well, so much has happened lately..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "I had so many new experiences that kind of changed the way I look at things..." @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_1: call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause") her "Yes, I believe they are..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") her "With me being an excellent student despite being muggle-born and all..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her "Although at first they were against sending me to some \"Bogus boarding school\"." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Although at first, they were against sending me to some \"Bogus boarding school\"." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "Took some effort to convince them that \"Hogwarts\" is a respectable institution." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, a respectable institution indeed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Cock back in your mouth, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_1: her "*Slurp*--" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause") - her "They would not understand of course..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "They would not understand, of course..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "But I do not care." her "I am not afraid to \"get my hands dirty\" and do what needs to be done." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "A bit rebellious, aren't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -449,10 +449,10 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_1: call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause") her "What can I say that you don't already know, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Yes... *Ehm*... I know everything of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... *Ehm*... I know everything, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But I want to see how much you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "To test your knowledge on the subject." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "As soon as you mention \"test\" Hermione's eyes light up with excitement." + gen "To test your knowledge of the subject." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + nar "As soon as you mention \"test\", Hermione's eyes light up with excitement." her "OK. But I need a moment to gather my thoughts..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy") call her_chibi_scene("bj", trans=d3) @@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_1: call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause") her "Gryffindor corresponds roughly to the element of fire..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "And for that reason the colours of red and gold were chosen." + her "And for that reason, the colours of red and gold were chosen." call her_chibi_scene("bj") her "*Slurp*! *Gulp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_1: else: her "I just took a shower recently..." gen "And I gave you another one." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Just wipe it off and you'll be alright." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Just wipe it off, and you'll be alright." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "............" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Unless, you don't want to." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*huh*?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat") @@ -708,10 +708,10 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_snape: "\"I am busy right now, Severus.\"": her "{size=-2}Thank you, [name_genie_hermione].{/size}" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") sna "Busy? With what?" - sna "All you do is sit on you arse all day." + sna "All you do is sit on your arse all day." sna "I really need to talk to you about something." gen "I said I am busy, Severus." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Understood? I.. am.. \"busy\"!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Understood? I... am... \"busy\"!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Oh... You mean \"busy\" busy? Gotcha!" sna "Well, I'll talk to you later then." @@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_snape: sna "Her tactics have changed..." sna "But the amount of grief she manages to bring me is the same..." ("snape_03") gen "*Ngh*... I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I swear, that girl is driving me crazy!" ("snape_10") + sna "I swear that girl is driving me crazy!" ("snape_10") gen "Yeah, she is-- *Ah*... Driving me crazy as well..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}(*Slurp*... *Slurp*... *Gulp*...){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") sna "Will you take care of this then?" ("snape_04") @@ -795,7 +795,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_snape: jump hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming -label hg_hidden_blowjob_luna: #TODO Once Luna X Hermione sex scenes are added, add in dialog variations. +label hg_hidden_blowjob_luna: #TODO Once Luna X Hermione sex scenes are added, add in dialogue variations. call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause", trans=d5) pause.8 @@ -876,12 +876,12 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_luna: #TODO Once Luna X Hermione sex scenes are added, a gen "As a matter of fact, I'm quite familiar with the process." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You are?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Indeed! I've got one right here as a matter of fact!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "A trouble maker this one...{w=0.4} Sucking--{w=0.4} *UGH*...{w=0.2} Real good though!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Indeed! I've got one right here, as a matter of fact!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "A troublemaker this one...{w=0.4} Sucking--{w=0.4} *UGH*...{w=0.2} Real good though!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}(*Slurp...* *Slurp...* *Gulp...*){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun "Oh! Can I see it, sir?" ("smile", "base", "base", "up") her "" ("open_wide_tongue", "squint", "annoyed", "up") - gen "Not right now I'm afraid." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not right now, I'm afraid." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's such a shy little thing. You'd better not get any closer!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Aww*... Okay." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "L") her "{size=-4}(*Slurp...* *Slurp...* *Gulp...*){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_luna: #TODO Once Luna X Hermione sex scenes are added, a lun "So they do not only have a head but also knees?" ("soft", "wide", "raised", "mid") lun "I didn't even know that!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "{size=-4}(*Slurp*... *Slurp*... *Gulp*...){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") - gen "*Ngh*...{w=0.3} Well you learn something new every day." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ngh*...{w=0.3} Well, you learn something new every day." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I hope you're being careful, Sprout told us they like to spit... And bite!" ("angry", "base", "low", "mid") gen "Truly?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_tonks: ton "Are you two having one of your silly little duels again?" else: ton "Don't stay up drinking again..." - ton "We wouldn't want him making a fool of himself. Not in front of the students." + ton "We wouldn't want him to make a fool of himself... Not in front of the students." ton "He made such a mess last time..." call her_chibi_scene("bj", trans=d5) @@ -1011,7 +1011,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_tonks: her "{size=-4}(Busty who? *Slurp*... *Slurp*... *Gulp*...){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "squint", "worried", "up") her "{size=-4}(Is she talking about Susan? *Slurp*... *Slurp*... *Gulp*...){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "That's non of your concern, Miss Tonks!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's none of your concern, Miss Tonks!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You may leave now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}(*Slurp*... *Slurp*... *Gulp*...){/size}" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -1120,7 +1120,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_tonks: else: ton "You're telling me that you are fucking her mouth? {w=0.5}Right now???" ("soft", "base", "shocked", "mid") - ton "Oh I've got to see this..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") + ton "Oh, I've got to see this..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") ton "" ("horny", "base", "base", "down", xpos="mid", trans=d3) pause.2 gen "Wait!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_tonks: if states.her.public_level <= 15: ton "It sure sounded like you were..." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") else: - ton "You nasty little cock sucker." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton "You nasty little cocksucker." ("horny", "base", "raised", "mid") her "(.......)" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "I suppose so........." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -1196,7 +1196,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_tonks: if states.ton.level < 50: ton "You're really going to town, aren't you..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") - ton "You should make sure you breathe every once in a while dear girl." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") + ton "You should make sure you breathe every once in a while, dear girl." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") gen "If you need to have her vitals checked out afterwards - I'm sure we could come to an arrangement." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: ton "I'd love to join you back there, Miss Granger..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") @@ -1275,7 +1275,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming: her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Gulp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "squint", "worried", "up", flip=False) nar "She continues to suck on your cock with an almost vicious determination." - nar "Her technique is lacking but she makes up for it with the effort she puts in." + nar "Her technique is lacking, but she makes up for it with the effort she puts in." gen "Yes... I love your eager, little mouth, girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Gobble*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") @@ -1299,7 +1299,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming: her "I see..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") gen "Why do you ask?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I am trying to watch my calorie-intake..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - her "I just wonder how much calories your load contains, [name_genie_hermione]." + her "I just wonder how many calories your load contains, [name_genie_hermione]." her "Maybe I should skip my next meal..." gen "[name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes?" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") @@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming: gen "Don't you like surprises?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Not really..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "I rather enjoy planning ahead actually..." - gen "Well some things in life are just unpredictable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, some things in life are just unpredictable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "There is only one way to find out for sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"What would you like?\"": @@ -1322,7 +1322,7 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming: her "I read that it's good for the skin." block: her "I would like you to cum in my mouth." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") - her "You usually cum so much so I think I will be able to just skip my next meal..." + her "You usually cum so much, so I think I will be able to just skip my next meal..." if game.daytime: her "And do some light workout instead." else: @@ -1508,7 +1508,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: gen "lick the shaft..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*lick*! *Slurp*! *lick*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") nar "Hermione keeps sucking on your cock like her life depends on it." - nar "Her technique is almost perfect and she is incredibly enthusiastic." + nar "Her technique is almost perfect, and she is incredibly enthusiastic." gen "Yes... I love your eager, little mouth, slut..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Gobble*! *Gobble*! *Gobble*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "Do it for daddy." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "Come on princess." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on, princess." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Slurp*! *Gobble*! *Gobble*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") gen "Alright, [name_hermione_genie], almost there." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Make daddy proud!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1722,7 +1722,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: call her_chibi_scene("bj", trans=d5) her "*Slurp*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "That's it.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Slurp*! *Gulp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "dead") gen "Tell me how much you love my cock." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Slurp*! *Gobble*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") @@ -1747,7 +1747,7 @@ label hg_pf_blowjob_2: her "*Gobble*! *Slurp*! *lick*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") else: call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause", trans=d5) - her "Even when you make me suck another boys dick..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") + her "Even when you make me suck another boy's dick..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") her "I still imagine that it's yours..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") call her_chibi_scene("bj", trans=d5) her "*lick*! *Slurp*! *Slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "dead") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 5978fcf8..f2efcee9 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3_intro_E1: gen "Let's have another chat, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Okay..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "I'd like you to tell me a bit about your day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Are you going to...{w=0.8} touch yourself again sir?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "Are you going to...{w=0.8} touch yourself again, sir?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I can't guarantee I won't..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You will be awarded with house points - as usual." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "down") #mad Blush @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: her "Right..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "So, our first lesson of today was muggle studies." ("open", "base", "base", "R") - her "Professor Burbage babbled on about things she doesn't understand as usual." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Professor Burbage babbled on about things she doesn't understand, as usual." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "As a muggle-born, I can't help but notice how inaccurate most of her teachings are, so I briefly considered dropping the subject." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "But ever since I failed that test, I feel like I should take all the extra credit that I can get..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "It's not too bad though... Her views on muggle and wizarding relations are quite refreshing." ("base", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes...{w=0.4} Those naughty Slytherins...{w=0.4} What were they up to this time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "So, what you're saying is that even though you're not learning anything, you're still enjoying it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, I would, if the Slytherins wasn't making it their mission to disrupt every single lesson..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "Well, I would, if the Slytherins weren't making it their mission to disrupt every single lesson..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... And I'm certain that the only reason why they're even taking the subject, is so that they get to make fun of her, and anything muggle related..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "So, what were those naughty Slytherins doing exactly?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "wide", "worried", "shocked") gen "Well?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Well, it's obvious to anyone with common sense isn't it!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Well, it's obvious to anyone with common sense, isn't it!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Even those Slytherin girls quickly realised what people actually use it for... And they're thicker than polyjuice potion!" ("mad", "closed", "angry", "mid") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(I bet you've got a whole drawer full of them...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: gen "How about I fetch that massager, that way--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No!" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Oh right... I forgot it wouldn't function..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well... Surely there's other magical alternatives available for you to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well... Surely, there are other magical alternatives available for you to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Please, I don't want to think about that right now..." ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "I'll figure something out, don't you worry... I'll make it a priority to loosen you up one way or another..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-4}What's that supposed to--{/size}" ("annoyed", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: her @ cheeks blush "..." ("mad", "wide", "base", "stare") her "I...{w} I'm sorry [name_genie_hermione]!" gen "I didn't take you for such a naughty girl, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I thought were having an innocent conversation about back massagers, then you spring all this on me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I thought we were having an innocent conversation about back massagers, then you spring all this on me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]... I didn't mean to--" ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "I don't want to hear it, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But please, I assure you--" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -564,15 +564,15 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3: label hg_pf_talk_tonks_T3_intro_E1: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) - gen "[name_hermione_genie], for today's favour I'd like to bring in a guest to join us." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "A guest? But I thought we decided that this was only going to be between you and I." ("open", "squint", "worried", "mid") + gen "[name_hermione_genie], for today's favour, I'd like to bring in a guest to join us." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "A guest? But I thought we decided that this was only going to be between you and me." ("open", "squint", "worried", "mid") gen "Why only the two of us when there was an option to bring another person in?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "An option to--{w=0.4} What?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid") her "Sorry, I'm not following..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Tell me [name_hermione_genie]... What's your opinion of Miss Tonks?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, she's a very talented witch... You'd have to be, to become an auror." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Very talented indeed...{w=0.4} Anything else you know about her?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmm*... Nothing than any other student wouldn't know, I don't think." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "*Hmm*... Nothing that any other student wouldn't know, I don't think." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Truly? From what I've heard, you two had a bit of a private talk at one point." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You know about that? Who told--" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "I'm the headmaster, [name_hermione_genie]...{w} It's my job to know what goes on within the castle." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks_T3_intro_E1: label hg_pf_talk_tonks_T3_E1: her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade) - gen "Let's call Miss Tonks up for this one shall we." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let's call Miss Tonks up for this one, shall we." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "For what?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "For today's favour of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") @@ -772,7 +772,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton @ hair basic "Not bad, but I expected better from one of our top students." ("open", "base", "base", "L") elif tmp_val >= 20 and tmp_val < 30: her @ cheeks blush "" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") - ton @ hair basic "You go girl! I expected as much from one of my students." ("open", "base", "angry", "L") + ton @ hair basic "You go, girl! I expected as much from one of my students." ("open", "base", "angry", "L") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair basic "I meant to say, one of {i}our{/i} students, of course." ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") elif tmp_val >= 30 and tmp_val < 40: @@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "Wow! Who would have thought you're the girl at the top of the list." ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "Colour me surprised... Looks like they were telling the truth after all." ("horny", "base", "angry", "L") her @ cheeks blush "(... A list... What list...?)" ("angry", "wide", "worried", "stare") - ton "Congratulations for being a \"top\" student." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") + ton "Congratulations on being a \"top\" student." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") ton @ hair basic "Don't be so shy, girl. I'm happy that you took my advice to heart..." ("open", "base", "base", "L") @@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ugh*... I assumed you had read through my initial letter more thoroughly..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") if states.gen.masturbating: - gen "(Too busy packing her bags to get here I bet...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Too busy packing her bags, I bet...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: gen "Now-now, Miss Granger... Miss Tonks was very quick to get here when she heard about your accusations." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") @@ -873,7 +873,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: gen "[tmp_name]-...{w=0.3} *Ugh*... Miss Granger..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Why don't you tell us more about..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "I think we've been trailing a bit off topic here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I think we've been trailing a bit off-topic here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair basic "Oh yes, perhaps..." ("base", "base", "base", "L") gen "Miss Granger, why don't you tell us more about..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -916,7 +916,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: gen "(Yes, very dirty indeed...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You could clearly see her panties during the match between Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff..." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") if states.cho.tier >= 3: # After winning against Slytherin - her "And there are no doubts in my mind that she was wearing those trousers during her match against Slytherin so that she could egg on their beaters." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "And there it no doubt in my mind that she was wearing those trousers during her match against Slytherin so that she could egg on their beaters." ("soft", "base", "angry", "mid") her "Why is she even playing the game if the only thing she's good at is distracting the enemy team..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(I'm sure it distracted the commentator as well...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1120,21 +1120,32 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "I'd be happy with anything you'd like to tell me sweetie..." ("base", "base", "base", "L") her @ cheeks blush "It's... It's quite embarrassing." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") ton "Yes?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") - #TODO add checks - if hg_pf_strip.counter > 1: # Has stripped + if states.her.status.stripping: # (Tonks asks if she stripped, later.) her @ cheeks blush "Well, he asked me to dance for him..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") ton "Dance for him, you say..." ("open", "base", "raised", "R") if states.gen.masturbating: gen "(And you loved every second of it, judged by how much that butt was bouncing...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #elif hg_pf_admire_panties.counter > 1: # Has shown panties - #her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made me show him my panties..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") - #ton @ cheeks blush "Your panties, you say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") - #if states.gen.masturbating: - #gen "(And you loved every second of it... I bet you were totally wet under those panties!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - #elif: # Has shown bra/breasts - #her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made take my top off..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") - #ton @ cheeks blush "Your top, you say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") - else: # Only done talk to me (mentions genie masturbating when she talks) + elif states.her.status.show_pussy: + her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made me show him my privates..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + ton @ cheeks blush "You don't say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") + if states.gen.masturbating: + gen "(And you loved every second of it... I bet you were trying your hardest not to get wet!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + elif states.her.status.show_tits: + her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made me show him my breasts..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + ton @ cheeks blush "You don't say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") + if states.gen.masturbating: + gen "(And you loved every second of it... Those nipples could've cut glass!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + elif states.her.status.show_panties: + her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made me show him my panties..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + ton @ cheeks blush "Your panties, you say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") + if states.gen.masturbating: + gen "(And you loved every second of it... I bet you were totally wet under those panties!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + elif states.her.status.show_bra: + her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made take my top off..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") + ton @ cheeks blush "Your top, you say..." ("base", "base", "raised", "L") + if states.gen.masturbating: + gen "(And you loved every second of it... I bet your nipples were completely stiff, against your bra!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + else: # Mentions Genie masturbating when she was talking to him, which is required to reach T3 her @ cheeks blush "Well, he made me stand here and talk to him about my day, while he touched himself..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") gen "We both know there's no proof of that happening, I was merely scratching my leg." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1143,15 +1154,15 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "And your headmaster, did he enjoy it?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") if states.gen.masturbating: - if hg_pf_strip.counter > 1: + if states.her.status.stripping: her @ cheeks blush "He did seem to enjoy it." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed that little show of yours, you slut!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I'm sure it was quite the sight...{w=0.4} Did you take your clothes off?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "L") her "Professor!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") her "I--" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") ton "There's nothing to be ashamed of, if you're only doing it for the honour of your house..." ("soft", "base", "base", "L") - her "You believe so, professor?" ("open", "base", "worried", "R") - ton "Of course, otherwise I wouldn't have suggested you sell favours to your headmaster in the first place." ("grin", "base", "base", "L") + her "You believe so, Professor?" ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + ton "Of course! Otherwise, I wouldn't have suggested you sell favours to your headmaster in the first place." ("grin", "base", "base", "L") ton "So, just continue doing what your headmaster asks of you, and make your house proud." ("base", "base", "base", "L") gen "(Yes, anything I ask, you little--)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: @@ -1197,7 +1208,7 @@ label hg_pf_talk_tonks: ton "I'm sure your house benefited greatly from his enjoyment." ("horny", "base", "raised", "L") her @ cheeks blush "I suppose..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") ton @ hair basic "Well, I do believe we're done here..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton "Thank you for sharing these things with me Miss Granger... I can see that you've put significant effort into helping your house." ("open", "base", "base", "L") + ton "Thank you for sharing these things with me, Miss Granger... I can see that you've put significant effort into helping your house." ("open", "base", "base", "L") ton "They should be proud to have you." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, Professor..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy index 727cc185..0605bb04 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy @@ -19,7 +19,11 @@ default states.her.map_location = "library" # Sexual activity states default states.her.status.voyer = False -default states.her.status.stripping = False +default states.her.status.show_bra = False +default states.her.status.show_tits = False +default states.her.status.show_panties = False +default states.her.status.show_pussy = False +default states.her.status.stripping = False #stripping should be prioritised for most clothing checks default states.her.status.cumshot = False default states.her.status.handjob = False default states.her.status.kissing = False @@ -59,6 +63,8 @@ default states.her.ev.buttplugs.magic_known = False default states.her.ev.buttplugs.medium_question = False default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.strip_asked = False # Asked hermione to strip during dancing. default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_invited = False # Invited Snape to watch Hermione strip for you both. +default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage1 = False +default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_masturbate_stage2 = False default states.her.ev.suck_it.snape_encounter = False default states.her.ev.suck_it.tonks_encounter = False default states.her.ev.suck_it.luna_encounter = False diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy index c96d1dfb..8c0d6fd6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy @@ -719,7 +719,7 @@ label luna_intro_E2: lun "You're the most powerful wizard there is, so if anyone could deal with them, it'd be you..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well... I'm not usually the person to brag but..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I am known to have slung some seriously powerful spells around back in the day..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Oh thank you sir, I knew you'd be able to help!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + lun "Oh, thank you sir, I knew you'd be able to help!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "Why of course, anything for a student in--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hold on, I didn't actually say yes yet!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "So I think what would be best is if you'd read my daddy's magazine..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downL") @@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ label luna_intro_E2: gen "(Wait... She did it again!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Thank you sir..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Now hold on for a second..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Let me know what you think of the paper once you've read it!" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") + lun "Please let me know what you think of the paper once you've read it!" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "What paper?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The quibbler!" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh... right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")