From 78d05ec0085ce4a1887a8452b792f88480940a4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Mon, 20 Mar 2023 15:56:52 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes * Fixed some narrator calls. * Minor writing improvements. --- .../hermione/events/items/collars.rpy | 4 +- .../hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy | 8 +-- game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy | 2 +- .../luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy | 6 +- .../luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 66 +++++++++---------- .../luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy | 42 ++++++------ game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy | 2 +- 7 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 65 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy index 7cae9d4c..507a06d2 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy @@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event) # and so it does make sense from a narration standpoint. if not hermione.is_equipped_item(her_neckwear_whore_collar): play sound "sounds/collar_click.ogg" - nar ">You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her." + nar "You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her." hide screen blkfade with d3 @@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event) her "A present?" ("soft", "wink", "worried", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush", trans=d3) gen "Yes, it's a lovely piece of jewellery to commemorate your self-acceptance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar ">You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago." + nar "You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago." her "The collar? You're giving it to me?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid",cheeks="blush") her "And how is that supposed to be a piece of jewellery?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy index a9a33362..d78b5297 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy @@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "No...{w=0.4} Are you sure you gave me the right potion--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "**Eekh*!!!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "stare") #shocked - nar ">Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom." + nar "Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom." gen "You were saying?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "This... It feels a bit strange..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "Yes...{w=0.4} There's a slight tingling sensation..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "(Some side effect perhaps?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar ">Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body." + nar "Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body." $ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1) play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg" @@ -617,13 +617,13 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "*Ah*...." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") #pleasure - nar ">Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect." + nar "Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect." gen "There it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Is--{w=0.2} Is it normal for the potion to make them so sensitive?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") gen "Sounds like a side effect, but I'd call that better than advertised." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} What...{w=0.4} What's that supposed to mean?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") - nar ">Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body." + nar "Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body." $ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1) play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg" diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy index fe63c277..496ee122 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ label luna_chitchat: block: lun "I had a strange dream last night..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree, when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") lun "Must've been the cheese I ate before going to bed..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") block: diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy index 783afd55..d25fc322 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: if luna.is_worn("top"): gen "Now then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let's start with your breasts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Take that top off for me will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Take that top off for me, will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Of course, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") #Luna takes top off @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: lun "So...{w=0.4} Do you think this should work, [name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Oh...{w=0.4} It's working alright." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Focusing your attention on the girls breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..." + nar "Focusing your attention on the girl's breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..." lun "Great! So what do I have to do to get the Wrackspurts out of them?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} The what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro: nar "Luna's cheeks burns with red as she keeps grinding on the edge of your desk." gen "(Poor girl is literally edging...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Alright, you have convinced me [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, you have convinced me, [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Luna stops her grinding, and begins jumping happily on the spot. Her tits bouncing up and down as she does so." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 93786832..360c76c7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -228,17 +228,17 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: lun "Is it working?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Give me a moment..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You move your gaze to the girls chest, rubbing your hardening cock with increasing pace." + nar "You move your gaze to the girl's chest, rubbing your hardening cock with increasing pace." lun "What is it that you're doing?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - nar "A quizzical expression spreads across Luna's face as she unbeknownst to her, watch her headmaster masturbate in front of her." + nar "A quizzical expression spreads across Luna's face as she, unbeknownst to her, watch her headmaster masturbate in front of her." lun "Are you casting a spell? I can see your arms moving." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes...{w=0.3} I'm waving my wand all right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I knew it!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") - nar ">As you continue stroking your cock, you watch as Luna's moment of excitement turn into confusion once more." + nar "As you continue stroking your cock, you watch as Luna's moment of excitement turn into confusion once more." lun "Is it supposed to take this long?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes...{w=0.3} Sometimes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -251,10 +251,10 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes, that's it...{w=0.3} Ten points to Ravenclaw!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ ravenclaw += 10 lun "Thank you, [name_genie_luna]!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - gen "Now, be quiet and stand there for a bit will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now, be quiet and stand there for a bit, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - nar "With great difficulty, you work your now softened shaft, staring at the girls heaving chest." + nar "With great difficulty, you work your now softened shaft, staring at the girl's heaving chest." lun "" ("base", "base", "base", "downR") #looking away call ctc @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: call ctc lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - nar ">You stop rubbing your cock and look up at Luna's face." + nar "You stop rubbing your cock and look up at Luna's face." call gen_chibi("sit_behind_desk") @@ -323,8 +323,8 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E2_intro: lun "" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Looks back pause .8 - gen "I'm sure with your help we'll find a way to get those spurts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Okay, thank you..." ("open", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + gen "I'm sure with your help, we'll find a way to get those spurts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Okay, thank you [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") if game.daytime: lun "I'll head back to class then, [name_genie_luna]." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: gen "Right then... Let's have another crack at this shall we." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "We're going to try and expel the wrackspurts again, [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "That's right [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's right, [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Can I see how you do it this time?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "*Err*... I'm not sure that's such a good idea..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Aww*... Why not?" ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: gen "Now... Tell me a bit more about your experiences with the spratters..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "How's that supposed to--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Are you questioning my methods [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Are you questioning my methods, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh! Of course not!" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Then answer my question..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Right...{w=0.4} *Ehm*...{w=0.4} As I said before, they bother me at the most inopportune moments..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: lun "And there was that time down at the lake... Now I'd never think they'd be down there, I thought they hated water..." ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") - nar "As she goes on talking about wrackspurts and how they make her feel, you notice that Luna has started grinding her legs together again." + nar "As she goes on, talking about wrackspurts and how they make her feel, you notice that Luna has started grinding her legs together again." lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} And the worst times are when I'm about to go to sleep...{w=0.4} It must be something with my pyjamas..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} They're...{w=0.4} They're bothering me again..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -386,27 +386,27 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: nar "You keep stroking your cock as Luna stares at you, shifting her legs uncomfortably..." lun "[name_genie_luna], it feels weird... Please..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "How weird does it feel [name_luna_genie]? Describe it to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How weird does it feel, [name_luna_genie]? Describe it to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Luna grinds her legs together even more as she tries to maintain eye contact with you, she then stutter for a moment as a wave of lust washes over her." + nar "Luna grinds her legs together even more as she tries to maintain eye contact with you, she then stutters for a moment as a wave of lust washes over her." - lun "I... I don't know how to describe it..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + lun "I--{w=0.2} I don't know how to describe it..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "You close your eyes, listening to the girl... Your cock pulsating in your grasp as you feel yourself getting close to bursting." + nar "You close your eyes, listening to the girl..." lun "It's--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} It's like a tingly sensation spreading from between my legs... Almost as If I'm about to wet myself..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") lun "But it's--{w=0.2} It's different...{w=0.4} It feels really good." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - nar "An image of the girls wet panties runs across your mind and you feel your cock twitch slightly in your hand." + nar "An image of the girl's wet panties runs across your mind and you feel your cock twitch slightly in your hand." lun "[name_genie_luna]... I don't know how long I can endure this... Please tell me it's working..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - nar "You rub your cock even faster, the sound of Luna's voice fading out of your mind..." + nar "You rub your cock even faster, and the sound of Luna's voice starts fading out of your mind..." - lun "I can't bear it, [name_genie_luna]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "I need--" ("mad", "wide", "base", "L", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=dissolve) + lun "{size=-4}I can't bear it, [name_genie_luna]!{/size}" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "{size=-4}I need--{/size}" ("mad", "wide", "base", "L", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=dissolve) call gen_chibi("cum_behind_desk_done") call lun_chibi("stand", 230, 455, flip=True) @@ -435,10 +435,10 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean...{w=0.4} I'd love to!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yay!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - lun "So how did you do it? I thought you were using your wand..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "So, how did you do it? I thought you were wielding your wand..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun "Or is that what you call a penis, do you call that a wand too?!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") lun "Did you cast a spell through it?--" ("soft", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "Slow down [name_luna_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Slow down, [name_luna_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Sorry [name_genie_luna]..." ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, you could say it's similar to a spell... I stroke my penis along the shaft and then--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Can I do it now?" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: menu: "\"Are you serious...\"": pass - "\"....what?\"": + "\".... What?\"": pass "\"..............\"": pass @@ -528,13 +528,13 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E3_intro: label ll_pf_talk_T1_E4_repeat: - gen "How are you feeling [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "How are you feeling, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I...{w=0.4} I'm okay..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") lun "But I'm still worried about this burning sensation between my legs, [name_genie_luna]." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure we'll find a way for you to deal with them once I've had a thorough inspection of your body...." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "I do hope we find a solution soon, I've been spotting more and more of them through my spectrespecs by the day..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "(With Tonks and Snape around that's not surprising...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "I do hope we'll find a solution soon... I've been spotting more and more of them through my spectrespecs by the day." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") + gen "(With Tonks and Snape around, that's not surprising...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well I better prepare for that inspection then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes...{w=0.4} Thank you, [name_genie_luna]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Hold on...{w} Actually we may have a little problem..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -556,25 +556,25 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E4_repeat: call lun_walk(path=[(440, 470),(230, 470),(230, 455)]) call lun_chibi("stand", 230, 455, flip=True) - nar "As Luna rushes up to your desk you pull out your cock and start stroking it." + nar "As Luna rushes up to your desk, you pull out your cock and start stroking it." lun "[name_genie_luna]!" ("mad", "base", "base", "downL", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=dissolve) lun "Your penis is getting all hard again!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") lun "How on earth did this happen so quickly?!" ("clench", "base", "base", "downL") gen "That's what I thought!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Does it hurt [name_genie_luna]? Your penis looks as if it's about to burst!" ("angry", "base", "base", "downL") + lun "Does it hurt, [name_genie_luna]? Your penis looks as if it's about to burst!" ("angry", "base", "base", "downL") gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} It...{w=0.4} It's fine, but you better keep a close eye on it as I deal with this." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]!" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") lun "" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL") - nar "Luna fixes her gaze and stares intently at your cock as you continue stroking it." + nar "Luna fixes her gaze, and stares intently at your cock as you continue stroking it." nar "Even in her worried state, there's still quite a bit of excitement in her eyes." gen "Oh. I can't even look at it, tell me it still looks okay!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "It's still intact [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") - lun "Oh my... It's twitching!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") - gen "I feel it, just keep looking at it [name_luna_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "It's still intact, [name_genie_luna]!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL") + lun "Oh my...{w=0.4} It's twitching!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") + gen "I can feel it coming, keep looking at it, [name_luna_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]!" ("clench", "base", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") nar "You keep stroking your shaft as Luna watches your every move." @@ -631,12 +631,12 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T1_E4_repeat: lun "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} Okay then..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun "[name_genie_luna]..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "We'll have that inspection done soon right?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "We'll have that inspection done soon, right?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun "I'm worried what might happen if they attacked me like this." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Of course...{w=0.3} I'll check you out-- *Err*...{w=0.3} I mean, I'll have you checked as soon as possible!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Thank Merlin..." ("open", "closed", "low", "mid") - lun "Then let me know as soon as you're ready [name_genie_luna]." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "Then let me know as soon as you're ready, [name_genie_luna]." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call lun_walk(action="leave") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy index e2a22267..1822e4f7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/spectrespecs/spectrespecs.rpy @@ -119,19 +119,19 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun "Anyone can submit an article to the quibbler." ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "So... He just fact checks it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "He prints it!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Well even after reading it I still haven't got the faintest clue what those creatures are supposed to be." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, even after reading it, I still haven't got the faintest clue what those creatures are supposed to be." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The only thing I learnt is that they go into your ear or something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "That's right...{w=0.5} At least that is what they're supposed to be doing." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") lun "" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - nar "Luna gives you another uncomfortable look which she then quickly wipes off her face as she continues..." + nar "Luna gives you another uncomfortable look, which she then quickly wipes off her face as she continues..." lun "Why don't you have a look for yourself sir, there should've been a pair of spectrespecs in the back of the magazine." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "(So the magazine comes with toys as well...{w=0.4} How is she actually taking this trash seriously?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/paper_rustle.ogg" - gen "*Ngh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ngh*!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Why aren't they coming out!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hold on... These are cut outs! What year is this?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "The severing charm should--" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") @@ -148,8 +148,8 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: pause .4 call gen_chibi("stand_alt") - gen "Bird... Cut these out for me will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Sir I doubt the--" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "L") + gen "Bird... Cut these out for me, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Sir, I doubt the--" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "L") faw "*Squawk*!" call gen_chibi("grab_high", phoenix_OBJ.xpos, phoenix_OBJ.ypos+365, flip=False) @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "Right then... So I just put these silly things on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Yes sir... Once you've put them on you should be able to see--" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "Yes sir... Once you've put them on, you should be able to see--" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid") $ wrackspurts_count = 0 @@ -194,19 +194,19 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "*Err*... No there's nothing in here... Everything just turned purple..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "But... I'm sure I saw some..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Nope... Absolutely no traces of spurts anywhere that I can see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Wrackspurts sir..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "Wrackspurts, sir..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "(All I see is semen...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "And I fear in these quantities they've proven themselves to be quite the pain, sir." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + lun "And I fear in these quantities, they've proven themselves to be quite the pain, sir." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "(I should probably clean this place one of these days...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Sir, I had been hoping that you'd find a solution by reading the magazine because I wasn't sure how to tell you this..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") - gen "(Although if I had somewhere else to release my seed then this wouldn't be a--)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Sir, I had been hoping that you'd find a solution by reading the magazine, because I wasn't sure how to tell you this..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + gen "(Although if I had somewhere else to release my seed, then this wouldn't be a--)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") nar "Through the haze you suddenly notice that Luna is rubbing her thighs together." gen "(What the--)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What are you doing, Miss Lovegood?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "It's the Wrackspurts sir..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") + lun "It's the Wrackspurts, sir..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "They've been bothering me for months..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") @@ -214,9 +214,9 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: nar "You can see Luna is rocking her pelvis as if grinding the air." lun "Except... It's not my brain they're making fuzzy." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "So where exactly is this fuzzy feeling coming from, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "I... I'm not sure I should say, Sir." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") + lun "I... I'm not sure I should say, sir." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush") gen "Then I don't see how I'm supposed to be able to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Between my legs, Sir..." ("disgust", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "Between my legs, sir..." ("disgust", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun "" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") nar "Luna looks up at you again, shifting her legs around slightly." gen "(This girl's been missing out...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "But it doesn't make sense, Sir..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "But it doesn't make sense, sir..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") lun "I've only heard of people's brain going fuzzy..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") lun "The way you're supposed to get rid of them is to think positive thoughts." ("disgust", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") lun "But this is like an unbearable itch I can't scratch!" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun "But..." ("angry", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush") lun "" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") nar "Luna grinds her legs with even more vigour, as she looks into your eyes." - lun "That feeling sir..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "That feeling, sir..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") lun "It was as if something inside of me was building up... Desperate to come out!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "(That's it slut, you asked for it!)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: call gen_chibi("cum_behind_desk_done") pause .8 - gen "*Ah...*{w=0.4} *Ah...*{w=0.4} *Ah...*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I saw them!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "That was awesome." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "There are so many of them now!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: gen "Oh my..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "On the railing going up to professor Tonks' office..." ("clench", "base", "base", "down") gen "On the railing too!?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Yes! I swear I even saw some on Tonks's face!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "Yes! I swear I even saw some on Tonks' face!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "On her--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You have to help, sir!" ("mad", "happyCl", "base", "mid") lun "Please, if what I fear is true then it's not just me being bothered by them..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: lun "You'll do it?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I'll for sure do something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Oh, thank you, Sir!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + lun "Oh, thank you, sir!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "But you're going to have to help me, Miss Lovegood." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Me? Why me?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -341,8 +341,8 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: nar "Luna glances away again, and you notice a glimpse of doubt in her eyes for a brief moment." - gen "Most certainly Miss Lovegood... You have the most experience with these things after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But if you don't want to be involved then--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Most certainly, Miss Lovegood... You have the most experience with these things after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But if you don't want to be involved, then--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "No!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") nar "Luna locks her eyes with you as she rubs her legs together once more." @@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ label spectrespecs_E4: call lun_walk(action="leave") gen "(Hopefully I haven't said yes to crazy...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(...{w=0.5}Although the blowjobs might be worth it...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(...{w=0.5} Although the blowjobs might be worth it...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call popup("You have unlocked the ability to buy sexual favours from Luna.", "Congratulations!", "interface/icons/head/luna.webp") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy index 202a4a22..7e59bb38 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy @@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ label name_luna_genie: lun "Alright, I suppose I am a girl after all." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif name_luna_genie == "Partner": lun "[name_luna_genie]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes, we're partners in venture are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes, we're partners in this venture, are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh right!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") lun "Of course, you can call me that!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif name_luna_genie == "Bimbo":