From 8dc77e81b38da16975f4f7d666228a23d50192fd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Sat, 18 Feb 2023 23:30:52 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Minor writing adjustments * Improved some Luna Chit-chat writing. --- game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy | 69 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 34 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy index 34a6fc95..33065ae8 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/chitchats.rpy @@ -31,14 +31,14 @@ label luna_chitchat: $ random_number = renpy.random.randint(1, 10) if random_number == 1: - lun "During today's potions lesson I remembered reading an article in the quibbler about the Valerian root." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "It was talking about its calming properties and how chewing on it would produce the same effect as a Draught of Peace." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "Since we were brewing a Draught of Peace potion I brought up the article with professor Snape but he just laughed and prompted me to try it." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "So I did, and let me tell you... I've never felt so relaxed in my life." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "We were brewing a Draught of Peace during today's potions lesson, which reminded me of an article in The Quibbler about Valerian root." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "It described the roots calming properties and how when you chew on it, it will produce the same effect as the potion." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I brought this fact up to professor Snape, but he just laughed and prompted me to have at it." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "So I tried chewing on one... And let me tell you... I've never felt so relaxed in my life." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 2: lun "I had a strange dream last night..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - lun "I was sitting by a tree when a rabbit carrying a pocket watch jumped by, prompting me to follow it..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") lun "Must've been the cheese I ate before going to bed..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") elif random_number == 3: @@ -47,12 +47,12 @@ label luna_chitchat: lun "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 4: - lun "I was a bit disappointed when I found out the Thestrals live in the forbidden forest." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + lun "I was a bit disappointed when I found out that the Thestrals live deep inside the forbidden forest." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") lun "I'm hoping I'll be able to ride one someday..." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 5: - lun "There something I've been meaning to ask you." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "Could we not put up so many mistletoe's during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "[lun_genie_name]...{w=0.4} There's something I've been meaning to ask you." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun "Could we avoid putting up so many mistletoe's during the holiday celebrations?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") lun "It would highly decrease the risk of a Nargle infestation." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 6: @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ label luna_chitchat: lun "I'd love to take one to Sweden and look for the Crumple-Horned Snorkack." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 7: - lun "Sir, you really need to do something about Peeves." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + lun "[lun_genie_name], you really need to do something about Peeves." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") lun "He's been following me around chanting \"Loony Luna, Loony Luna, who would ever do yah\"..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif random_number == 8: @@ -70,10 +70,10 @@ label luna_chitchat: elif random_number == 9: lun "I hope we'll be able to contain this infestation within the school." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "I'm a bit worried it might spread on one of our visits to Hogsmeade." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") + lun "I'm a bit worried it might spread to Hogsmeade during one of our student outings." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") elif random_number == 10: - lun "Sir, do you think wrackspurts could spread to animals?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "[lun_genie_name], do you think wrackspurts could spread to animals?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") lun "No, don't say anything... I can't bear the thought of it!" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid") elif lun_tier == 2: @@ -85,66 +85,66 @@ label luna_chitchat: lun "I found a sock completely filled with them once!" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 2: - lun "I feel like I could've nipped this infestation in the bud if only we had made spectrespecs mandatory years ago." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "This school sure is lucky that you're here to help dealing with this, Sir." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "I feel like I could've nipped this infestation in the bud if only my proposal of mandatory spectrespecs had gone through." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun "At least we can count ourselves lucky to have such a great headmaster here to help deal with this unfortunate situation." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 3: - lun "I used to think Wrackspurts could only fly small distances." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I used to think that wrackspurts could only fly small distances." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") lun "But then I saw some on the ceiling in Tonks' classroom!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") lun "I wonder if she was trying to fend them off with defensive magic..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif random_number == 4: - lun "I still can't believe you managed to channel the wrackspurts though your penis, sir." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I still can't believe you've managed to channel the wrackspurts though your penis, [lun_genie_name]." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") lun "You've got to teach me how to do that!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 5: - lun "Are you able to cast other magic through your penis, sir?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "Are you able to cast other magic through your penis, [lun_genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") lun "We should try it sometime!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 6: - lun "I can't help but imagine what it'd look like to have a patronus cast through a penis..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") - lun "Is that a weird thing to be imagining?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "I can't help but imagine what a patronus would look like when bursting through the tip of a penis..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun "...{w=0.4} Is that a weird thing to be imagining?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 7: lun "I'm still not so sure I'll ever be able to get rid of these spurts myself..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - lun "If it requires a lot of focus that is... I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") + lun "If it requires a lot of focus that is...{w=0.4} I'm not very good at that." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") elif random_number == 8: - lun "Are you sure we shouldn't clean your desk, sir?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - lun "Or are you worried they might spread elsewhere if we move them?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + lun "Are you sure we shouldn't clean your desk, [lun_genie_name]?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "Or are you worried the wrackspurts might spread elsewhere if we move them?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 9: - lun "Can you inspect my body today, sir?" ("angry", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "Can you inspect my body today, [lun_genie_name]?" ("angry", "base", "raised", "mid") lun "Can you?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") lun "Please." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 10: - lun "Sir, Is it supposed to feel really good when you rub your thighs together?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "[lun_genie_name], Is it supposed to feel really good when you rub your thighs together?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") elif lun_tier == 3: $ random_number = renpy.random.randint(1, 10) if random_number == 1: - lun "*Ehm*... Hypothetically... What would a person do if they got some wrackspurts stuck to their underwear?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") + lun "*Ehm*...{w=0.4} Hypothetically...{w=0.4} What would a person do if they got some wrackspurts stuck to their underwear?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") elif random_number == 2: - lun "I'm so glad the inspection was successful, I don't know what I'd do if we didn't get anywhere with it..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + lun "I'm so glad that the inspection was successful...{w=0.4} I don't know what would've done if we didn't make any progress..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") elif random_number == 3: - lun "Is it possible to have magic fingers, sir?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - lun "You know how some people are born with innate magic abilities." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - lun "I was just thinking about when you touched me down there..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") + lun "Is it possible for someone to possess magical fingers, [lun_genie_name]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "You know, like how some people are born with innate magical abilities." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "It would explain a lot about what I felt when you touched me down there..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") elif random_number == 4: lun "That thing I felt on my back when you helped me..." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") lun "*Hmm*... Nevermind..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") elif random_number == 5: - lun "I've been trying to figure out if there's any more sensitive areas on my body." ("open", "base", "base", "down") - lun "But it's not easy when you're ticklish..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") + lun "I've been trying to figure out if there's any other sensitive areas on my body." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + lun "But doing so isn't that simple when you're ticklish..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") elif random_number == 6: - lun "I've been thinking... since my nipples get hard sometime... I wonder if it's possible to rub them to get the wrackspurts out like you do your penis." ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") + lun "I've been thinking...{w=0.4} Since my nipples get hard sometime, perhaps I'd be able to expel the wrackspurts through them like you do through your penis." ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") elif random_number == 7: lun "The wrackspurts appear to have been building up even faster than normal recently." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -155,12 +155,11 @@ label luna_chitchat: lun "You watch me!" ("base", "wink", "base", "mid") elif random_number == 9: - lun "You said that my naked body helped you release the spurts, what did you mean by that exactly?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") - lun "They're not flocking over to me are they?!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "You said that my naked body helped you release the spurts...{w=0.4} What did you mean by that exactly?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") elif random_number == 10: - lun "How come you're so quick at unhooking a woman's bra, sir?" ("open", "base", "base", "down") - lun "Wait, what am I saying... Of course the great Dumbledore can do anything with ease..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") + lun "How come you're so skilled at unhooking a woman's bra, [lun_genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "down") + lun "Wait, what am I saying...{w=0.4} Of course the great Albus Dumbledore can do it with ease..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") # elif lun_tier == 4: # $ random_number = renpy.random.randint(1, 10)