Hermione forest BJ proofreading and Lint fixes
* Proofread Hermione forest BJ. * Fixed writing styling inconsistencies reported by Lint.
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@ -2270,7 +2270,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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pause.5
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gen "Whoa, you're-"
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gen "Whoa, you're--"
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_down tonks_mouth_lip_bite tonks_blush_heavy as cg
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with d3
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@ -2633,7 +2633,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor...\""
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ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -2645,7 +2645,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me...\""
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ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -2657,7 +2657,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day...\""
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ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -2669,7 +2669,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"With...\""
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ton "\"With\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -2679,7 +2679,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"My...\""
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ton "\"My\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -2689,7 +2689,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
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with d3
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ton "\"Body...\""
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ton "\"Body\"..."
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show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_smile cho_mouth_open as cg
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with d3
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@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2:
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$ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick")
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#Cho starts licking the tip a couple of times #looking at dick
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gen "*Whoa*!"
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gen "Whoa!"
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call ctc
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@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ label gryffindor_match:
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nar "Cho smacks Katie on her shapely bum."
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"Katie" "*Owww*!!"
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cho "*imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder!\""
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cho "*Imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder\"!"
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"Katie" "H-How--"
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nar "Cho grins at her briefly, then swiftly flies away."
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"Katie" "Why you little--"
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@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label hg_collars:
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$ her_outfit_last.save() #Saves current clothing
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if hermione.is_worn("robe"):
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gen "Before what I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Before I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Alright..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid")
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play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
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$ hermione.strip("robe")
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@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ label slave_scene:
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$ name_genie_hermione = "Master"
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with flashbulb
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her "It doesn't say slut does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
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her "It doesn't say slut, does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
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gen "Don't be silly... Why would it say that,{w=0.5} slave?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Oh good..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid")
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her "Wait. What did you just call me?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid")
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@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ label flasher_scene:
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her "I..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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nar "The strings now completely stretched begin tugging on Hermione's nipples."
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her "Alright I do enjoy it okay!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips the strings return to their dormant state"
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nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips, the strings return to their dormant state."
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her "*Phew*..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
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gen "Now was that so hard?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
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@ -3497,7 +3497,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return:
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her "Why would I...--"
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gen "Just say it...{w=0.4} I'll even give you some points if you do."
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her "I--{w=0.4} I am a kinky girl..."
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gen "\"That...\""
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gen "\"That\"..."
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her "That loves being edged..."
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her "...and denied an orgasm..."
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gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!"
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@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
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gen "Could you put on this latex outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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if her_whoring < 22:
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her "Latex outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
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her "*Whoa*... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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her "Whoa... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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gen "I know! Glad you're as excited as I am!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "I... How do you put this on?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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gen "Using lots of patience I reckon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
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elif item == her_outfit_poker: #Req 19 (panties, bra)
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gen "I spent some tokens getting this outfit for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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if her_whoring < 22:
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her "*Whoa*..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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her "Whoa..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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gen "I know... Quite intricate is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "You... you want me to wear this?" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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gen "I mean, I am a winner after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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lun "Please... Help me get rid of them again..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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elif lun_tier == 4:
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random:
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lun "*Whoa*... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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lun "Whoa... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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lun "*Ah*... It's almost like a ripple of water... Except running through my body..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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lun "*Mmm*... Those nasty Wrackspurts... I can feel them getting agitated already..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush")
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elif lun_tier == 3:
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@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2:
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her "No... But he was close enough for me to feel his..." ("mad", "squint", "worried", "up")
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her "His..." ("base", "slit", "worried", "ahegao")
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gen "His what, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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gen "How did he manage that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Well... The boy wasn't there for the purpose of relieving himself... Well, at least not how one would expect it..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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gen "He was jacking it!?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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