Hermione forest BJ proofreading and Lint fixes

* Proofread Hermione forest BJ.
* Fixed writing styling inconsistencies reported by Lint.

game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier3.rpy

@@ -2270,7 +2270,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
 
             pause.5
 
-            gen "Whoa, you're-"
+            gen "Whoa, you're--"
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_down tonks_mouth_lip_bite tonks_blush_heavy as cg
             with d3
@@ -2633,7 +2633,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor...\""
+            ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3
@@ -2645,7 +2645,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me...\""
+            ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3
@@ -2657,7 +2657,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day...\""
+            ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3
@@ -2669,7 +2669,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"With...\""
+            ton "\"With\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3
@@ -2679,7 +2679,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"My...\""
+            ton "\"My\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3
@@ -2689,7 +2689,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
             with d3
 
-            ton "\"Body...\""
+            ton "\"Body\"..."
 
             show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_smile cho_mouth_open as cg
             with d3

game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/suck_it.rpy

@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2:
     $ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick")
 
     #Cho starts licking the tip a couple of times #looking at dick
-    gen "*Whoa*!"
+    gen "Whoa!"
 
     call ctc
 

game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy

@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ label gryffindor_match:
 
         nar "Cho smacks Katie on her shapely bum."
         "Katie" "*Owww*!!"
-        cho "*imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder!\""
+        cho "*Imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder\"!"
         "Katie" "H-How--"
         nar "Cho grins at her briefly, then swiftly flies away."
         "Katie" "Why you little--"

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label hg_collars:
     $ her_outfit_last.save() #Saves current clothing
 
     if hermione.is_worn("robe"):
-        gen "Before what I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Before I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Alright..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid")
         play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
         $ hermione.strip("robe")
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ label slave_scene:
     $ name_genie_hermione = "Master"
     with flashbulb
 
-    her "It doesn't say slut does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
+    her "It doesn't say slut, does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
     gen "Don't be silly... Why would it say that,{w=0.5} slave?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Oh good..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid")
     her "Wait. What did you just call me?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid")
@@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ label flasher_scene:
         her "I..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
         nar "The strings now completely stretched begin tugging on Hermione's nipples."
         her "Alright I do enjoy it okay!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-        nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips the strings return to their dormant state"
+        nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips, the strings return to their dormant state."
         her "*Phew*..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Now was that so hard?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy

@@ -3497,7 +3497,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return:
                     her "Why would I...--"
                     gen "Just say it...{w=0.4} I'll even give you some points if you do."
                     her "I--{w=0.4} I am a kinky girl..."
-                    gen "\"That...\""
+                    gen "\"That\"..."
                     her "That loves being edged..."
                     her "...and denied an orgasm..."
                     gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!"

game/scripts/characters/hermione/wardrobe_reactions.rpy

@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
         gen "Could you put on this latex outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         if her_whoring < 22:
             her "Latex outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
-            her "*Whoa*... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
+            her "Whoa... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
             gen "I know! Glad you're as excited as I am!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "I... How do you put this on?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             gen "Using lots of patience I reckon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
     elif item == her_outfit_poker: #Req 19 (panties, bra)
         gen "I spent some tokens getting this outfit for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         if her_whoring < 22:
-            her "*Whoa*..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
+            her "Whoa..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
             gen "I know... Quite intricate is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "You... you want me to wear this?" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             gen "I mean, I am a winner after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy

@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch(what):
                 lun "Please... Help me get rid of them again..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         elif lun_tier == 4:
             random:
-                lun "*Whoa*... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+                lun "Whoa... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
                 lun "*Ah*... It's almost like a ripple of water... Except running through my body..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
                 lun "*Mmm*... Those nasty Wrackspurts... I can feel them getting agitated already..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush")
         elif lun_tier == 3:

game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy

@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2:
     her "No... But he was close enough for me to feel his..." ("mad", "squint", "worried", "up")
     her "His..." ("base", "slit", "worried", "ahegao")
     gen "His what, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "How did he manage that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Well... The boy wasn't there for the purpose of relieving himself... Well, at least not how one would expect it..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "He was jacking it!?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")