Improvements

* Improved and posed "Give me a handy".
* Posed "Dance for me".
* Adjusted some of Hermione's nickname requirements to align with her attitude.

* Minor writing improvements.

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy

@@ -166,16 +166,16 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_fingering:
             gen "And what if they find out how you earned the points?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             stop background
             her "What?!" ("shock", "wide", "base", "stare")
-            gen "If that happened, then surely I wouldn't wouldn't be the only one degrading you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "If that happened, then surely everyone would be degrading you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             play background "sounds/slickloop.ogg"
             her "..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "R")
-            gen "It would be the entire school." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "The entire school would let you know exactly what they think about your ways of gaining house points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg"
             her "The entire-- *Ah*...{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead", cheeks="blush")
-            gen "Every...{w=0.4} Single...{w=0.4} Student." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "That's right... Every...{w=0.4} Single...{w=0.4} Student." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             play background "sounds/slickloopveryfast.ogg"
             her "*Ah*...{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up", cheeks="blush")
-            her "[name_genie_hermione], please... {w=0.4}*mmmh*...{w=0.4} Don't tell anyone..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush")
+            her "[name_genie_hermione], please... {w=0.4}*Mmmh*...{w=0.4} Don't tell anyone..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush")
             nar "Hermione continues to rub herself with renewed effort..."
             her "They can't--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} They can't find out..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft", cheeks="blush")
             her "If Harry and Ron knew..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_fingering:
             her "I'm not a--{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             gen "Not a what, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
-            her "{size=-3}A Slut...{/size}." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
+            her "{size=-3}A Slut...{/size}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
             gen "Miss Granger!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             gen "How very unbecoming of you to use such foul language..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "But--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I just repeated what you--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -357,8 +357,6 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_fingering:
 ### Tier 5 ###
 
 label hg_pf_strip_T5_fingering:
-
-
     gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "I hope you're feeling horny." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/talk.rpy

@@ -202,31 +202,31 @@ label hermione_talk:
                         jump hermione_change_fail
                 "-Bitch-":
                     $ temp_name = "Bitch"
-                    if states.her.level >=13:
+                    if states.her.level >=15:
                         jump hermione_change
                     else:
                         jump hermione_change_fail
                 "-Slut-":
                     $ temp_name = "Slut"
-                    if states.her.level >=15:
+                    if states.her.level >=19:
                         jump hermione_change
                     else:
                         jump hermione_change_fail
                 "-Cumslut-":
                     $ temp_name = "Cumslut"
-                    if states.her.level >= 17:
+                    if states.her.level >= 19:
                         jump hermione_change
                     else:
                         jump hermione_change_fail
                 "-Slytherin Whore-":
                     $ temp_name = "Slytherin Whore"
-                    if states.her.level >= 19:
+                    if states.her.level >= 22:
                         jump hermione_change
                     else:
                         jump hermione_change_fail
                 "-Mudblood-":
                     $ temp_name = "Mudblood"
-                    if states.her.level >= 21:
+                    if states.her.level >= 22:
                         jump hermione_change
                     else:
                         jump hermione_change_fail

game/scripts/characters/luna/events/intro.rpy

@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ label luna_intro_E2:
     menu:
         "\"Spectre-- what?\"":
             lun "Spectrespecs!" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
-            lun "They allow the wielder to see things that are there, but hidden." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid")
+            lun "They allow the wearer to see things that are there, but hidden." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid")
             gen "And that vapor ware thing on your nose is supposed to help you with that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             lun "*Uh-huh!*" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid")
             gen "Great..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/interface/letter.rpy

@@ -86,9 +86,9 @@ default letter_cards_unlock = Letter(
 label letter_cards_unlock:
     $ states.cardgame.unlocked = True
 
-    gen "That last bit just sounds like a scam to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "(That last bit sounds like a scam...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "I guess I'll have a look at the starter pack at least..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "(I suppose I could take a look at the starter pack at least...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     show screen blktone
     show screen start_deck
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ label letter_cards_unlock:
         for i in playerdeck:
             i.copies = -1
 
-    gen "Hell yes I'm playing this..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "(Hell yes I'm playing this...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     call give_reward("You've unlocked Wizard cards.\n\nUse the deck builder available on your desk to learn the rules and edit your deck.","interface/icons/cards.webp")
     return