Improvements

* Improved writing and posing, and added sound effects for Hermione "grope her" and "final events".
* Added more randomized dialogue when Hermione agrees to do favours even when Gryffindor is in the lead.

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me.rpy

@@ -1312,8 +1312,8 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate:
     menu:
         gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         "-Promise her to hold it-":
-                $ d_flag_07 = True #Promised to hold it.
+            $ d_flag_07 = True #Promised to hold it.
-                her "Well, alright then..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
+            her "Well, alright then..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
 
         "-Give her no such promise-":
             $ d_flag_07 = False #Did not promise to hold it.
@@ -1340,7 +1340,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate:
         play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
     else:
         nar "Hermione moves her body in an attempted seductive manner."
-        nar "Trying her best to focus on her task she tries to avoid looking directly at you."
+        nar "Trying her best to focus on her task, she tries to avoid looking directly at you."
 
     $ hermione.strip("clothes")
 
@@ -1348,14 +1348,14 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_masturbate:
     nar "But she looks rather ridiculous in her attempts to act like a professional stripper..."
     call ctc
 
-    nar "Nonetheless you decide to show her some appreciation..."
+    nar "Nonetheless, you decide to show her some appreciation..."
     nar "By stroking your cock even faster!"
     her ".........." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "dead")
     nar "Suddenly Hermione breaks into a whole series of rather complex pirouettes."
     gen "{size=-4}(This looks quite impressive actually...){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     pause.5
 
-    nar "Hermione gives her breasts a squeeze followed by another series of rather complex (and naughty) movements."
+    nar "She then gives her breasts a squeeze, followed by another series of rather complex, and naughty, movements."
     call ctc
 
     gen "{size=-4}(Did she practise this?){/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_snape.rpy

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape:
         her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base")
         gen "Do you think you could go and fetch professor Snape again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "... professor Snape?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid")
-        her "may I ask, why, [name_genie_hermione]?"
+        her "May I ask why, [name_genie_hermione]?"
         gen "Oh, I just want you to dance for us." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "!!!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
         gen "I want to prove that professor Snape is dirty, and I need your help." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -106,14 +106,14 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape:
     pause.5
 
     play music "music/Dark Fog.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed
-    sna "Genie... *err*, I mean Albus, you wanted to see me?" ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base")
+    sna "Genie--{w=0.2} I mean Albus...{w=0.4} You wanted to see me?" ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base")
-    gen "Yes. Are you in the mood for a little striptease?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Severus! Yes, I wanted to ask if you were in the mood for a little striptease." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Oh...?" ("snape_05")
-    sna "Miss Granger here will be performing I assume?"
+    sna "Miss Granger here will be performing, I presume?"
     her ".............." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
     gen "Yes, our little minx is more than happy to take off her clothes for our entertainment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "............" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
-    gen "Aren't you [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Aren't you, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     pause.5
 
     her "" ("angry", "happy", "worried", "R")
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T4_snape:
             gen "Is he still causing you grief?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             sna "Oh..." ("snape_09")
             sna "Not really, no..."
-            sna "To be honest I never really had a problem with the boy himself..." ("snape_06")
+            sna "To be honest, I never really had a problem with the boy himself..." ("snape_06")
             sna "Although I did plan to make his life here miserable because of his father..."
             sna "But lately I have way more interesting projects to occupy myself with..." ("snape_02")
             her "..................." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy

@@ -322,8 +322,12 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T4_intro_E1:
 
     menu:
         "\"I'm gonna molest your tits now.\"":
-            #nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her uniform..."
+            if hermione.is_worn("top"):
-            her ".........." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down")
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
+            elif hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her bra..."
+            else:
+                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits..."
 
             jump hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4
 
@@ -354,10 +358,10 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T4_intro_E2:
         "\"I'm gonna play with your tits today.\"":
             her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down")
 
-            if not hermione.is_worn("top") and hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+            if hermione.is_worn("top"):
-                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her bra..."
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
-            elif hermione.is_worn("top") and not hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+            elif hermione.is_worn("bra"):
-                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her bra..."
             else:
                 nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits..."
 
@@ -370,7 +374,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T4_intro_E2:
 
 label hg_pf_grope_T4_E2:
     gen "[name_hermione_genie]. Come here and let me grope you!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
+    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
 
     call her_walk("desk", "base", reduce=0.8)
     call blkfade
@@ -396,17 +400,17 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T4_E2:
         "\"I'm gonna molest your tits now.\"":
             her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
 
-            if not hermione.is_worn("top") and hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+            if hermione.is_worn("top"):
-                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her bra..."
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
-            elif hermione.is_worn("top") and not hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+            elif hermione.is_worn("bra"):
-                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
+                nar "You reach out swiftly to grab both of her tits through her bra..."
             else:
                 nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits..."
 
             jump hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4
 
         "\"I'm gonna play with your butt now.\"":
-            her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
+            her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "down")
             nar "You reach out and place your hand on her butt cheeks..."
 
             jump hg_pf_grope_ass_T4

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her_breasts.rpy

@@ -203,13 +203,13 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4:
     call her_chibi_scene("behind_desk_front", trans=d7)
     pause.8
 
-    her "............" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
-
     play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # SEX THEME.
     $ hermione.strip("robe", "accessory")
 
     if hermione.is_worn("top"):
-        nar "Hermione shifts to start undoing her clothes..."
+        nar "But before you manage to grab them, Hermione shifts to start undoing her clothes..."
+
+        her "..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush", trans=d3)
 
         menu:
             "\"That's right, take it off!\"":
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4:
                 jump hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4_clothed
 
     elif hermione.is_worn("bra"):
-        nar "Hermione shifts to start undoing her bra..."
+        nar "But before you manage to grab them, Hermione shifts to start undoing her bra..."
         $ hermione.strip("bra")
         her "" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
         call ctc
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4_naked:
 
     her "!!!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
     her "Ouch! Stop hurting me!"
-    gen "Admit that you enjoy it and I will." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Admit that you enjoy it, and I will." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "But I don't..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down")
     her "And if you plan to keep on doing this to me, [name_genie_hermione]..."
     her "... then I think I should leave." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4_clothed:
 
     "*squeeze-squeeze-squeeze*"
 
-    her "................" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    her "................" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
 
     menu:
         "\"Do you enjoy this, [name_hermione_genie]?\"":
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ label hg_pf_grope_breasts_T4_continue:
 
     her "*Ah*... [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "What? You enjoy this, don't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "No... I..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
+    her "No... I..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Don't you lie to your headmaster, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     nar "You squeeze her tits again..."

game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy

@@ -267,16 +267,23 @@ label hermione_favor_menu:
         if states.her.favors_convinced_stage:
             her "We're in the lead already..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid_soft", trans=d3)
             if states.her.level >=20 and states.her.favors_convinced_stage == 2:
-                her "But I'll do anything for you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("smile", "happy", "base", "mid")
+                random:
+                    her "But I'll do anything for you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("smile", "happy", "base", "mid")
+                    her "But I'll do it anyway..." ("smile", "happy", "base", "mid")
+                    her "But since you've been helping me earn points for my house, I'll do it anyway..." ("smile", "happy", "base", "mid")
+                    her "But since I'm already here, I might as well do it..." ("smile", "happy", "base", "mid")
                 jump silver_requests_root
             elif states.her.level >=18 and states.her.favors_convinced_stage == 2:
-                her "I guess you do have a way with words,[name_genie_hermione]... I'll do it." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid")
+                random:
+                    her "Although, considering what you said before... I'll do it anyway." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid")
+                    her "Although, I suppose another house may catch up... Okay, I'll do it." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid")
+                    her "Although, an ever bigger lead would really show the Slytherins which house is the best." ("base", "wink", "base", "mid")
                 jump silver_requests_root
             elif states.her.level >=16:
                 her "I have told you before, [name_genie_hermione], it was just a one time thing..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid")
                 gen "What about tomorrow though?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her "What about tomorrow?" ("base","squint", "base", "mid")
-                gen "I made a graph detailing the current daily average points Slytherin gain... doesn't look that great." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                gen "I made a graph detailing the current daily average points Slytherin gain... It doesn't look that great." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 gen "Just think about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 jump hermione_favors_convinced_check
         else:

game/scripts/characters/hermione/vars.rpy

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ default states.her.ev.intro.e5_complete = False # 5th visit, asks to be tutored,
 default states.her.ev.intro.convinced = False # Tonks convinces Hermione to sell favours.
 default states.her.ev.intro.e6_complete = False # 6th visit, asks to buy favours, favours unlocked.
 default states.her.ev.show_me_your_tits.failed = False
-default states.her.ev.panty_thief.soaked = False
+default states.her.ev.panty_thief.soaked = False # Temp var, genie procures Hermione's panties and cums on them, resets once returned.
 default states.her.ev.forest_bj.stage = 1
 default states.her.ev.sealed_scroll.sample = False
 default states.her.ev.sealed_scroll.examined = False
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ default states.her.ev.promote_cardgame.helped = False
 default states.her.ev.buttplugs.magic_known = False
 default states.her.ev.buttplugs.medium_question = False
 default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.strip_asked = False # Asked hermione to strip during dancing.
-default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_invited = False
+default states.her.ev.dance_for_me.snape_invited = False # Invited Snape to watch Hermione strip for you both.
 default states.her.ev.suck_it.snape_encounter = False
 default states.her.ev.suck_it.tonks_encounter = False
 default states.her.ev.suck_it.luna_encounter = False