From b1d470a1d0abaf47ca9a2447893180f3c3907db8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Wed, 10 May 2023 17:03:05 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- game/scripts/characters/astoria/chitchats.rpy | 14 +- .../astoria/events/imperio_practice.rpy | 52 +-- .../astoria/events/imperio_training.rpy | 14 +- .../characters/astoria/events/intro.rpy | 43 ++- game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy | 52 +-- .../characters/astoria/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 24 +- .../cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy | 2 +- game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy | 324 +++++++++--------- .../hermione/events/cardgame_wager.rpy | 40 +-- .../hermione/events/items/butt_plugs.rpy | 120 +++---- .../hermione/events/items/collars.rpy | 82 ++--- .../hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy | 150 ++++---- .../hermione/events/potions/ass_expand.rpy | 59 ++-- .../hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy | 122 +++---- .../hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_cat.rpy | 50 +-- .../events/potions/polyjuice_luna.rpy | 68 ++-- .../characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 6 +- .../scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy | 5 +- game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy | 4 +- .../characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy | 8 +- game/scripts/events/map.rpy | 16 +- game/scripts/events/potions/intro.rpy | 30 +- .../cardgame/_hermione_card_game_.rpy | 36 +- .../minigames/cardgame/_snape_card_game_.rpy | 36 +- .../minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy | 42 +-- .../mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy | 56 +-- .../mirror/events/a_christmas_tale.rpy | 14 +- .../mirror/events/a_christmas_tale2.rpy | 18 +- .../events/a_spaced_out_conversation.rpy | 30 +- .../mirror/events/a_white_christmas.rpy | 4 +- .../mirror/events/an_odd_circumstance.rpy | 43 +-- .../minigames/mirror/events/biggus_dickus.rpy | 28 +- .../mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy | 4 +- .../mirror/events/eating_for_pleasure.rpy | 16 +- .../mirror/events/genie_house_elf.rpy | 16 +- .../mirror/events/not_so_great_escape.rpy | 2 +- .../minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy | 46 +-- .../mirror/events/previously_at_hogwarts.rpy | 4 +- .../minigames/mirror/events/suck_and_run.rpy | 18 +- .../minigames/mirror/events/whose_points.rpy | 6 +- game/scripts/rooms/seventh_floor/init.rpy | 4 +- 41 files changed, 861 insertions(+), 847 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/chitchats.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/chitchats.rpy index cc1ca913..a0a2a7a6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/chitchats.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/chitchats.rpy @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ label astoria_chitchat: # # elif ag_st_imperio.counter == 2: # ast "I've heard about some students taking private tutoring from other teachers..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - # ast "When Professor Tonks asked me to let her tutor me I didn't think it was going to be so...{w=0.5} hands on..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + # ast "When Professor Tonks asked me to let her tutor me, I didn't think it was going to be so...{w=0.5} hands on..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") # # elif ag_st_imperio.counter == 3: # ast "This spell training thing is so easy, Tonks doesn't seem to be able to resist me at all." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ label astoria_chitchat: block: ast "I found the perfect use for the Wingardium leviosa charm today..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") ast "Granger was being especially annoying, prancing around one of the corridors, so I used it to lift her skirt up!" ("open", "base", "angry", "down") - ast @ cheeks blush "But she didn't even see that I did it! she just punched that Weasley boy on the arm." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - ast "Snap-- {i}Professor{/i} Snape saw it though. I thought I was in trouble for a moment, but he just corrected me on my pronunciation." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast @ cheeks blush "But she didn't even see that I did it! She just punched that Weasley boy on the arm." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + ast "Snap-- {i}Professor{/i} Snape saw it, though. I thought I was in trouble for a moment, but he just corrected me on my pronunciation." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: ast "I've still not been able to cast spells properly without saying the words." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ label astoria_chitchat: ast "I already asked Professor McGonagall, but she didn't want to teach it to us for some reason..." ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") block: - ast "I used a switching spell to swap one of the female Hufflepuff student clothes with one of the Gryffindor boys." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "I used a switching spell to swap one of the clothes of a female Hufflepuff student with one of the Gryffindor boy's." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "You should've seen the confusion and horror on their faces..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "L") block: @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ label astoria_chitchat: ast "Rules are meant to be broken. We break the laws of physics all the time so how come most teachers are so strict?" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "mid") block: - ast "I was bored during class and doodled a bit on one of the books I brought from the library and it started smacking me on the head." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ast "I was bored during class and doodled a bit on one of the books I brought from the library, and it started smacking me on the head." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Why is Miss Pince allowed to jinx books when I get in trouble for making somebody's quill turn into a worm when touched?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label astoria_chitchat: ast "I can't wait to drop the subject once I finish my {i}O.W.L.{/i}s." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") block: - ast "Professor Snape always seem to look at me whenever something goes wrong during his class... as if it's always going to be me who did it." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - ast "I mean, I might have but you can't prove anything..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") + ast "Professor Snape always seems to look at me whenever something goes wrong during his class... As if it's always going to be me who did it." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + ast "I mean, I might have, but you can't prove anything..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") return diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_practice.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_practice.rpy index 8f0af0e8..cde44d72 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_practice.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_practice.rpy @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E1: gen "I've already spoken to your teacher, and we both think it'd be best if I took over the lessons for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Really?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "*Err*...{w=0.4} Yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "*Hmm*... Well you're the headmaster so whatever you say..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "*Hmm*... Well, you're the headmaster so whatever you say..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Good!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then Let's have you try it on that Susan girl again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "You want me to... What?!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -59,13 +59,13 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E1: gen "Don't tell me you wouldn't have given in to the temptation anyway." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "...{w} I mean..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "You got lucky last time, if you were to be caught again, then I don't think even I would be able to save you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "This way, you'll get that anger of yours out of your system and we can both move on with our lives." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "No thanks!" ("base", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "This way, you'll get that anger of yours out of your system, and we can both move on with our lives." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ast "No, thanks!" ("base", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "What? How could you say no to this?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "If I can't use it to embarrass her in front of the other students, then what's the point?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You don't think she'd be more embarrassed if you got her to do something in front of her headmaster?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "I suppose..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "R") - ast "But don't you think she'll figure out that you're in on it? Surely she'd just report--" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") + ast "But don't you think she'll figure out that you're in on it? Surely, she'd just report--" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "We'll just wipe her memory." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That should let you cast it on her as many times as you like..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "You can do that?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E1: gen "{size=+10}Nice!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Sir!" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "What? You can't blame me for this!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "We're doing this so I can cast the spell more successfully." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ast "We're doing this, so I can cast the spell more successfully." ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Don't you think her breasts are pretty?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "{b}No!{/b} they're huge and soft and squishy and, and, and... gross!" ("clench", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Well, you've got two out of three..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -397,18 +397,18 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: ast "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Maybe something a little more... adventurous?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "You mean like making her show you her milk duds?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Well if you insist..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "*ugh*... you're such a filthy pervert!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + gen "Well, if you insist..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ast "*Ugh*... You're such a filthy pervert!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "We can do something else if you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "I didn't say no..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh... well how about you make it so--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh... Then how about you make it so--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "I get to choose, [name_genie_astoria]!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "What? Why?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Because it's my spell and my wand!" ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Not to mention, you'd probably do something over the top and gross..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Probably..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, what's your plan?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Just wait and see old man!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ast "Just wait and see, old man!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Susan, can you hear me?" ("open", "closed", "base", "L") sus "Yes..." ("open", "happy", "base", "stare") ast "You now have an uncontrollable urge to take your top off, okay?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: nar "The blank expression slowly fades from Susan's eyes..." sus "*Ugh*..." ("angry", "narrow", "low", "down") sus "What happened?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Nothing Suzy, Dumbledore was just explaining how your uniform wasn't up to scratch." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "Nothing, Suzy... Dumbledore was just explaining how your uniform wasn't up to scratch." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") sus "My uniform... You're right... Too many clothes..." ("disgust", "happy", "sad", "downL") sus "I need to take off my top..." ("soft", "narrow", "low", "down") ast "*Mhmm*, that's right, Suzy... Why don't you show the old man here your gross boobs... Don't you think he's old?" ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -429,8 +429,8 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: ast "Quiet sir... don't ruin my fun!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "I-I'm not a slut..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "down") - ast "Well I'm sure you'll be able to keep your top on then, [name_susan_astoria]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - sus @ cheeks blush "I... There's something wrong sir!" ("angry", "happyCl", "low", "mid") + ast "Well, I'm sure you'll be able to keep your top on then, [name_susan_astoria]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + sus @ cheeks blush "I... There's something wrong, sir!" ("angry", "happyCl", "low", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "I can't help it..." ("angry", "happy", "worried", "down") ast "" ("grin", "base", "angry", "L") pause.2 @@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: ast "[name_genie_astoria]! Are you touching yourself?" ("scream", "base", "base", "mid") gen "*Ugh*... can you blame me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's not every day you get to see a rack like this..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Well stop it! It's gross!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ast "Well, stop it! It's gross!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") gen "Alri--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus @ cheeks blush "Please sir... it's too much!" ("angry", "happy", "worried", "downR") sus @ cheeks blush "It's bad enough that I can't help showing you my breasts..." ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: sus @ cheeks blush "What? you mean I have to wait until he..." ("angry", "wide", "worried", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "This is unbelievable!" ("angry", "wide", "sad", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "I'm going to report both of you to the ministry of magic!" ("upset", "happyCl", "annoyed", "mid") - sus @ cheeks blush "My aunt is the head of the department of magical law enforcement I'll have you know!" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + sus @ cheeks blush "My aunt is the head of the department of magical law enforcement, I'll have you know!" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") ast "yeah... I've met your creepy old aunt." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") sus @ cheeks blush "What? Did you curse her too, you evil little witch?" ("open", "base", "angry", "right") ast "I wish..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: nar "As you finish shooting your massive load, Susan's leg twitches slightly..." - ast "Can't have that can we... Let's delve deeper." ("grin", "narrow", "angry", "L") + ast "Can't have that, can we... Let's delve deeper." ("grin", "narrow", "angry", "L") # chibi spell animation. play sound "sounds/magic2.ogg" @@ -524,8 +524,8 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: sus "" ("soft", "happy", "shocked", "stare") gen "W-what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You watch as a colourfull mist spreads from the tip of Astoria's wand and seeps into Susan's Nostrills..." - ast "Suzy, you can still hear me right?" ("open", "base", "base", "L") + nar "You watch as a colourful mist spreads from the tip of Astoria's wand and seeps into Susan's nostrils..." + ast "Suzy, you can still hear me, right?" ("open", "base", "base", "L") sus "Yes..." ("open", "happy", "base", "stare") call ast_chibi("wand",530,"base") @@ -554,8 +554,8 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E2: gen "A closeted slut..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Excuse me?" (mouth="open", eyebrows="worried") ast "" (mouth="upset") - gen "Miss Greengrass... is there any other Hufflepuff students you know of selling favours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Why would I know or care what Hufflepuffs are doing?" (mouth="clench") + gen "Miss Greengrass... Are there any other Hufflepuff students you know of selling favours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ast "Why would I know or care what the Hufflepuffs are doing?" (mouth="clench") gen "Just because she enjoys it doesn't mean it's not humiliating for her..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What would the other Hufflepuffs think of her if she knew what you have her do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "What do you mean?" ("upset", "base", "base") @@ -716,7 +716,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: gen "Miss Bones!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sus "Sir?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") sus "Have I done something wrong?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - ast "Maybe it's because of you showing off your gross boobs?" ("grin", "base", "angry", "L") + ast "Maybe it's because of you, showing off your gross boobs?" ("grin", "base", "angry", "L") sus "Astoria! H-how can you say something so rude! I'd never..." ("soft", "happy", "annoyed", "right") ast "Oh yeah?{w} Susan, I want you to look down and take in what you've been doing this whole time." ("open", "base", "angry", "L") sus "" ("soft", "base", "base", "downL") @@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: sus @ cheeks blush "You must have cursed me!" ("angry", "happy", "shocked", "stare") ast "Bingo!" ("grin", "base", "angry", "L") sus @ cheeks blush "Professor! You h-have to stop her!" ("open", "happy", "sad", "left") - gen "*Ugh*...{w=0.3} I'm afraid I can't do that Miss Bones..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ugh*...{w=0.3} I'm afraid I can't do that, Miss Bones..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "" ("grin", "narrow", "angry", "L") sus @ cheeks blush "WHAT?!" ("angry", "wide", "low", "mid") sus @ cheeks blush "W-w-w-well, my aunt will just send you--" ("angry", "happyCl", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: ast "Fine... Just nothing too disgusting!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "Or boring... that'd be even worse!" ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - gen "Alright well, first things first..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #I'll add a menu here with more options once art assets are drawn for them + gen "Alright... Well, first things first..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #I'll add a menu here with more options once art assets are drawn for them pause.1 call gen_chibi("jerk_off_behind_desk") @@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: sus "I love it..." ast "Good!" ("clench", "base", "angry", "L") gen "Isn't that a little much?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "*Pfft*! That's rich coming from you sir!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "*Pfft*! That's rich coming from you, sir!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "If it was up to me, she'd be clucking like a chicken right now!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") ast "Not doing nasties with her mouth!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Fair enough..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -853,7 +853,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: sus "Please sir..." sus "{size=-3}Coat{/size} {size=-3}me{/size} {size=-3}in{/size} {size=-3}your{/size} {size=-3}cum...{/size}" ast "I knew it!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "L") - ast "You're a dirty little slut after all aren't you!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "down") + ast "You're a dirty little slut after all, aren't you!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "down") sus "I am not! I don't know why I'm down here!" ast "Alright then... if you're such a good girl..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") ast "Why don't you tell me what it's like down there?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -883,7 +883,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: sus "..." nar "You hear Susan's words trail off into nothingness, as she takes another breath..." - sus "I wish I could live down here! Is that what you wanted to hear you evil witch?!" + sus "I wish I could live down here! Is that what you wanted to hear, you evil witch?!" ast "Almost..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") ast "I want you to tell me the truth... say you're a slut..." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "Then I'll let you go..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -968,7 +968,7 @@ label ag_se_imperio_sb_E3: with hpunch pause.8 - nar "You watch as a colourfull mist spreads from the tip of Astoria's wand and seeps into Susan's Nostrills once again..." + nar "You watch as a colourful mist spreads from the tip of Astoria's wand and seeps into Susan's nostrils once again..." ast "I don't think so..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_training.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_training.rpy index d22942eb..47d080a5 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_training.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/imperio_training.rpy @@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E2: gen "I have to say, I'm not that impressed..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "You aren't?" ("open", "wide", "shocked", "mid") ast "But, Professor!" ("clench", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "Tonks, would you please do the noise again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Tonks, would you please make the noise again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The noise, Professor?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Yes. Squeal for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Very well..." ("open", "narrow", "shocked", "down") @@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E2: ast "Professor?!" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "You did the same to Miss bones, did you not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Yes, but..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid") - ast "I doubt Professor Tonks would be ok with that, she'll just refuse like she did before!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "L") + ast "I doubt Professor Tonks would be okay with that, she'll just refuse like she did before!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Did you have those concerns with Susan as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Susan didn't require much convincing, her boobs were already falling out of her--" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "Just try it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E3: # Astoria leaves. call ast_walk(action="leave") - ton @ hair angry "The nerve on that girl, I can't believe it!" ("open", "base", "angry", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + ton @ hair angry "The nerve of that girl, I can't believe it!" ("open", "base", "angry", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base") ton "I'm beginning to think teaching her an \"unforgivable curse\" might've been a bad idea after all..." ("normal", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "How so?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Didn't you hear her?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E4: ton @ hair neutral "Well, that was interesting..." ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "downR", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) gen "Do you have any idea why she wanted to leave so abruptly?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I have a couple of theories, actually..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "*Mhmm*... That curse thing is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Mhmm*... That curse thing, is it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair horny ".................." ("soft", "wide", "base", "down") # horny stare ton "Would you like me to put my clothes back on?" ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Don't feel pressured!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1651,7 +1651,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E5: gen "Why weren't you honest with me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Sigh*..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") ton @ cheeks blush "Perhaps I've been taking this favour business... thing a bit too lightly." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "down") - ton "I've been telling myself that it's as much for the students benefit as it is my own." ("upset", "closed", "worried", "mid") + ton "I've been telling myself that it's as much for the students' benefit as it is my own." ("upset", "closed", "worried", "mid") ton "\"I'll help them explore their sexuality\"." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "\"It'll do them good\"." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "We both know that is not the reason why we're doing this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1695,7 +1695,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E5: gen "Miss Tonks..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What this means is that you're no different than Snape and I." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But you have yet to accept it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And if you're unable to, well in that case..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And if you're unable to... Well, in that case..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I can! I have!" ("open_wide", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "Are you sure? Because if you're not in on this one hundred percent. Perhaps this may have been a mistake." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I..." ("open", "base", "worried", "down") @@ -1756,7 +1756,7 @@ label ag_st_imperio_E5: gen "That's what I said." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well then, I believe we're done here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Alright..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "down") - ton @ hair horny "I'm gonna need some \"me\" time now..." ("open", "closed", "base", "ahegao") + ton @ hair horny "I'm going to require some \"me\" time now..." ("open", "closed", "base", "ahegao") ton @ hair horny "If you know what I mean..." ("grin", "narrow", "raised", "down") ton "I suppose I should wish you good luck with the training..." ("soft", "base", "shocked", "L") gen "Have a good night." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/intro.rpy index 76371889..1b37a64a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/events/intro.rpy @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E1: "\"What's in it for me?\"": ton "Are you seriously asking me that?" ("clench", "shocked", "shocked", "stare") - ton "If this doesn't get dealt with immediately they'll have us both locked up in a cell in Azkaban, do you hear me?!" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") + ton "If this doesn't get dealt with immediately, they'll have us both locked up in a cell in Azkaban, do you hear me?!" ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Loud and clear..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'll be locked up in a cell - together with you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I can think of many fates worse than that, if I'm honest." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -122,12 +122,10 @@ label astoria_intro_E1: ton "Are we done here?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Want to give it one more try?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I think not..." ("open", "base", "annoyed", "R") - ton "I expected a bit more from a Genie... A magic trick, perhaps?" ("upset", "base", "annoyed", "down") - gen "I've told you, I can't do magic anymore..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "I expected a bit more from a Genie..." ("upset", "base", "annoyed", "down") ton "How very disappointing..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - ton "I'm starting to have my doubts that you ever were a Genie..." ("mad", "base", "base", "R") gen "Sorry about that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Can I ask you for something else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "May I ask you for something else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Still? Even after disappointing me like this?" ("upset", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Please?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Ugh*... Fine..." ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") @@ -163,10 +161,10 @@ label astoria_intro_E1: # gen ".............." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # ton "What? I did what you asked for... I blew your cock..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") # gen "......................" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - # ton "Now, could we get back to discuss what I came here for in the first place?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + # ton "Now, could we get back to discussing what I came here for in the first place?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") # gen "Fine. I know when I'm outwitted..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # ton "I will suck your delicious cock some other time, [name_genie_tonks]... I promise!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - # ton "But right now we simply don't have time to fool around I'm afraid..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + # ton "But right now, we simply don't have time to fool around, I'm afraid..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") "\"Send Nudes.\"": $ letter_nt_1.send() @@ -176,7 +174,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E1: gen "A poster, maybe?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Oh..." ("upset", "base", "base", "down") ton "A poster, you say?..." ("horny", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "What are you gonna do with it? Put it on your wall and jerk off to it?" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") + ton "What are you going to do with it? Put it on your wall and jerk off to it?" ("horny", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "You can count on that!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Hold on!{w} Are you going to hang it up here? In your office?!" ("open", "wide", "shocked", "stare") gen "Sure... It's not like there are that many other rooms I can go to..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -198,7 +196,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E1: ton "She's not dead!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Injured?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Thankfully not..." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") - gen "And most importantly... Her tits hasn't been shrunk?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And most importantly... Her tits haven't been shrunk?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Don't be silly..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Then how bad could it be?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "She's been a target of an \"unforgivable curse\"!" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -290,7 +288,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E2_hermione: gen "Yes... I need to make sure you've done your studies." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sir, It's one of the first lessons we ever received in defence against the dark arts." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Sigh*... The curse lowers the targets inhibitions, making them more prone to follow the command depending on the skill of the user casting it or their own mental resolve not to abide by the command." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "*Sigh*... The curse lowers the target's inhibitions, making them more prone to follow the command, depending on the skill of the user casting it or their own mental resolve not to abide by the command." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "You could've just said it's like a suggestion spell." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sorry?" gen "Never played D&D?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -311,7 +309,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E2_hermione: her "I'd be honoured, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("scream", "closed", "base", "mid") her "It's no doubt the work of one of those despicable Slytherins..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "I'm sure she--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "She? So it's one of those Slytherin sluts?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") + her "She? So, it's one of those Slytherin sluts?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "Well... From what I heard, it was cast by a female--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I knew it!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "Nothing would give me greater pleasure than to see scum like that sent to Azkaban..." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -329,7 +327,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E2_hermione: her "Oh..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "So no Azkaban?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "Not unless they've killed someone..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Really? So there's still a chance?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + her "Really? So, there's still a chance?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Only if you find a body..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yay!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -381,7 +379,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E2_snape: sna "We'll just have to make sure that no more curses are cast..." ("snape_01") gen "How would we manage to do that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "There's not some kind of spell history stored in a wand is there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Of course not... If that was the case I would've snapped mine a long time ago." ("snape_24") + sna "Of course not... If that was the case, I would've snapped mine a long time ago." ("snape_24") sna "We have to find out who's been casting them." ("snape_24") sna "Normally the real Dumbledore would be able to detect who had cast them, but seeing as how you're here instead..." ("snape_06") sna "We'll have to find them the old-fashioned way." ("snape_10") @@ -729,8 +727,8 @@ label astoria_intro_E3: gen "(Doesn't she already know that?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "I might have made her show her boobs to some students..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") ton "*Ha-ha-ha-ha*!" ("silly", "happyCl", "base", "mid", trans=hpunch) - ast "Just for a second!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "(what's going on here?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ast "Only for a second!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "(What's going on here?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Is that all?" ("open", "base", "raised", "L") ton "You probably did Susan some good then..." ("crooked_smile", "base", "raised", "mid") ton "She sure needs to loosen up a bit." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") @@ -858,14 +856,14 @@ label nt_he_astoria_E1: ton "Old habits, I suppose." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") ton "But no, it's not that." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - ton "This girl you see, she's cursed... and it's quite a hefty curse at that!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R") + ton "This girl, you see... She's cursed... And it's quite a hefty curse at that!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "You don't say..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "This girl is cursed... and it's quite a problem." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") #gen "Don't you mean this cursed girl {i}is{/i} a problem?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #ton "No, she's cursed. Quite a hefty curse at that!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") #gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Her family - the Greengrass family - is quite infamous in the wizarding world." ("open", "base", "base", "L") - ton "They're known for being a very high class family of witches and wizards..." ("open", "base", "raised", "R") + ton "They're known for being a very high-class family of witches and wizards..." ("open", "base", "raised", "R") ton "Some of them are very stuck-up and spoiled, for that reason." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") ton "It's quite the norm for most pure-blood families, actually." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Get to the point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -876,7 +874,7 @@ label nt_he_astoria_E1: gen "Oh shit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Yeah..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "down") gen "Hey, at least it's not the other way round, am I right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Immortality can be quite the curse too you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Immortality can be quite the curse too, you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Yes, I can see how much you're hurting inside..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") ton "The opportunity to have sex with some of the most attractive women in all of history must really suck." ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "I'll live with it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -897,13 +895,12 @@ label nt_he_astoria_E1: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Mind explaining to me what asexual's supposed to mean?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "You don't know?" ("open", "shocked", "raised", "mid") - ton "Well that's not too surprising - all things considered..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "L") + ton "Well, that's not too surprising... All things considered." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "L") ton "It means she experiences no sexual desires or attractions. To anything!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "shocked", "mid") - gen "WHAT?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I know!" ("mad", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "By the great desert sands... That's a curse worse than death." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "The curse has seemingly gone from killing off random members of their family to preventing new members from being born." ("upset", "base", "base", "R") - #gen "Wait, since when can spells change their outcome like that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Magic doesn't make any fucking sense in this universe..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Hey, it makes perfect sense!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid") ton "..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "R") @@ -945,7 +942,7 @@ label nt_he_astoria_E1: ### Event 4 ### # Astoria summon unlock. -# If you pick the wrong choice Astoria won't return for a week and ignores you. +# If you pick the wrong choice, Astoria won't return for a week and ignores you. label astoria_intro_E4: stop music fadeout 1.0 @@ -998,7 +995,7 @@ label astoria_intro_E4: gen "(Shit, was I supposed to do something with her?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "...................." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") gen "(Oh that's right. Freeing her from her curse...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "Sir, If there's nothing you need of me then I'd like to leave..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Sir, If there's nothing you need of me, then I'd like to leave..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") menu: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy index e6091ab1..894983f2 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/gifts.rpy @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): ast "Some chocolate?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Astoria...", gift_item) ast "Did you hear chocolate is supposed to be an aphrodisiac?" - ast "Although it was a muggle that came up with that one so I doubt there's any truth to it." + ast "Although it was a muggle that came up with that one, so I doubt there's any truth to it." ast "Oh well, that sucks doesn't it?" call ast_mood(-2) @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): else: ast "An owl plushie?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stuffed toy to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "If you want to give me toys you better be prepared for me to call you daddy..." + ast "If you want to give me toys, you better be prepared for me to call you daddy..." ast "So, thank you..." ast "Daddy..." call ast_mood(-3) @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): else: ast "Butterbeer?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the bottle to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "It's more of a cider really isn't it?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "It's more of a cider really, isn't it?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ast "Thanks!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-2) @@ -137,12 +137,12 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "Girl magazines?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "I'll take it for the free mascara sample. I once drew a uni-brow on someone with it." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "I'll take it for the free mascara sample. I once drew a unibrow on someone with it." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: ast "Girl magazines?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "Well, I am a girl so of course I'd want it!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Well, I am a girl, so of course I'd want it!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) else: ast "Girl magazines?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -154,18 +154,18 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == adult_mag_ITEM: if states.ast.level < 6: ast "Adult magazines?" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - ast "I'm good thanks." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") + ast "I'm good, thanks." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(0) elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "Adult magazines?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "Of course I read them. I'm an adult after all, it's in the name." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Of course I read them. I'm an adult, after all... It's in the name." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) else: ast "Adult magazines?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Astoria...", gift_item) ast "This is that magazine Tonks was reading during our writing test..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - ast "Perhaps I'll wave it at her so she thinks I stole it..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Perhaps I'll wave it at her, so she thinks I stole it..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) elif gift_item == porn_mag_ITEM: @@ -228,13 +228,13 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: ast "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "Sexy..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - ast "Why not, I don't know if you could tell but I'm a bit of a rebel. Might even wear these in class." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Why not, I don't know if you could tell, but I'm a bit of a rebel. Might even wear these in class." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sexy lingerie to Astoria...", gift_item) call ast_mood(-1) else: ast "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sexy lingerie to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "Is this is the kind of clothes you want your students to dress in from now on?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Is this is the kind of clothing you want your students to dress up in from now on?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "*Heh*- I don't blame you, the school uniform is the most basic piece of trash ever without some spice..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) @@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): call ast_mood(-1) elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: ast "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Hah, you fool! With these you wont be able to stare at my legs anymore!" ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Hah, you fool! With these, you won't be able to stare at my legs any more!" ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stockings to Astoria...", gift_item) call ast_mood(-2) else: @@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == pink_condoms_ITEM: if states.ast.level < 6: ast "Condoms?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - ast "Yeah, no... I'll take them but there's not going to be any dick going near these bad boys..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Yeah, no... I'll take them, but there's not going to be any dick going near these bad boys..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "These will be the perfect thing to fill with water and drop down the staircase..." ("smile", "base", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give the pack of Condoms to Astoria...", gift_item) ast "Cheers for the ammo, [name_genie_astoria]." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): ast "Why would I need condoms when I could just go in raw?" ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "*Ha-Ha-Hah* The look on your face, now that's something money can't buy." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You sheepishly give the pack of Condoms to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "*Hmm*.... yeah why not." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "*Hmm*.... Yeah, why not." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) elif gift_item == vibrator_ITEM: @@ -293,19 +293,19 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "A vibrator?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Get the fuck out..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") - ast "Oh right, I'm in your office... yeah that's going to be solid no on that one." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Oh right, I'm in your office... Yeah, that's going to be a solid no on that one." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(1) elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: ast "A vibrator?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Hold on a second, that's the noise I've been hearing in the girls chambers!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "Do they work?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "I mean, I'll take it I guess." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "I mean, I'll take it, I guess." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Astoria...",gift_item) call ast_mood(-1) else: ast "A vibrator?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Astoria...",gift_item) - ast "That's disgusting! What a disgusting old man you are. Well aren't you being disgusting..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "That's disgusting! What a disgusting old man you are. Well, aren't you being disgusting..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "Disgusting..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "Give it here." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-2) @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "A strap-on?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "What do you want me to do with this?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Well I know what you want me to do with it." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Well, I know what you want me to do with it." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "It's not happening..." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(0) elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: @@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): ast "A strap-on?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the strap-on to Astoria...", gift_item) ast "It says Thestral on the side..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Isn't' that the creature only people that has seen someone die can see?" + ast "Isn't' that the creature where only people that have witnessed someone die can see?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "That makes the person who made he mould kinda fucked up if you think about it..." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "I like it..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(-2) @@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "A broom?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the broom to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "Now if anything will motivate you to fly, that will..." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Now if anything would motivate you enough to fly, that would..." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "Bit awkward during broom care though..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(0) else: @@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): ast "A sex doll?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give the doll to Astoria...", gift_item) ast "But I'm a girl..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "I'll leave it in the Slytherin common room to see if anyone has balls enough to takes it..." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "I'll leave it in the Slytherin common room to see if anyone has balls, big enough to take it..." ("grin", "base", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(-1) elif gift_item == anal_beads_ITEM: @@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): call ast_mood(2) elif states.ast.level > 5 and states.ast.level < 12: ast "Anal beads?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") - ast "Put it up your own ass and I'll let er rip!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "Put it up your own ass, and I'll let er rip!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") call ast_mood(1) elif states.ast.level > 11 and states.ast.level < 18: ast "Anal beads?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") @@ -477,8 +477,8 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): if states.ast.level < 6: ast "Wine?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call give_gift("You give the wine to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "You're joking right?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Snape would murder me if he saw me bringing alcohol into the common room." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") + ast "You're joking, right?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Professor Snape would murder me if he saw me bringing alcohol into the common room." ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "I can't make you shut up after hours even without alcohol in your system..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "Such a slimy slithering killjoy..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(0) @@ -495,13 +495,13 @@ label give_ast_gift(gift_item): ast "Firewhisky?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ast "That's the stuff Tonks always reeks off." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "I'm not gonna drink whatever she does." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "It'd be like wearing old peoples perfume!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "It'd be like wearing old people's perfume!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") call ast_mood(0) else: ast "Firewhisky?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") - ast "Fine, I'll give in. If Tonks likes it so much it can't be that bad..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Fine, I'll give in. If Tonks likes it so much, it can't be that bad..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the firewhisky to Astoria...", gift_item) - ast "*Hmm*... not made using real fire.. well that's bloody obvious..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "*Hmm*... not made using real fire... Well, that's bloody obvious..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") ast "Might experience a slight pain and burning sensation when consuming..." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid") ast "Why didn't you say so before!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") ast "I might even take a sip or two myself..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 5ba4c809..a6202612 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/astoria/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/astoria/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ label ast_reaction_category_fail(category): gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif category == "lower undergarment": ast "Why would I do that?" ("base", "narrow", "angry", "R") - gen "I don't know, why wouldn't you do it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I don't know... Why wouldn't you do it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") elif category == "piercings & tattoos": - ast "Sounds awesome but you'll just make it something stupid." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") + ast "Sounds awesome, but you'll just pick something stupid." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I'd never..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Lies..." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") return @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ label ast_reaction_touch(what): block: ast "Whatever..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") block: - ast "I'm only letting you do this cause you didn't snitch on me..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + ast "I'm only letting you do this because you didn't snitch on me..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: ast "What's this obsession with petting coming from?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "L") @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ label ast_reaction_touch(what): random: block: - ast "You're really enjoying that aren't you?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "You're really enjoying that, aren't you?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") ast "Well I guess you're just a man after all..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") block: ast "Hey!" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -75,12 +75,12 @@ label ast_reaction_touch(what): ast @ cheeks blush "What do you think you're doing?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Kissing you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "Surely that's against some rule..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Worried about rule breaking all of a sudden are we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Worried about rule breaking all of a sudden, are we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ast "No..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: ast "Aren't you a bold one..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") block: - ast "Thought you could slip past my wards did you?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "Thought you could slip past my wards, did you?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") ast @ cheeks blush "I'll have you know I felt none of that!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") return @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label ast_reaction_touch_fail(what): block: ast "Oh sorry, my hand slipped." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") block: - ast "Do that again and you'll regret it..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + ast "Do that again, and you'll regret it..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: ast "Stop..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") block: @@ -170,9 +170,9 @@ label ast_reaction_equip_fail(item): block: ast "*Nuh-uh*, I'm not putting that on." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") block: - ast "*Pfff* You want me to wear that? In your dreams old man..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + ast "*Pfff* You want me to wear that? In your dreams, old man..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") block: - ast "Don't be such a creep, thanks but no thanks." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Don't be such a creep, thanks but no, thanks." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid") return @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ label ast_reaction_unequip(item): label ast_reaction_unequip_fail(item): if item.type == "panties": - ast "Like hell! Take off your own panties old man..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") + ast "Like hell I would! Take off your own panties, old man..." ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") show screen blkfade with d5 @@ -212,10 +212,10 @@ label ast_reaction_unequip_fail(item): ast "Why would you even suggest that?" ("clench", "closed", "base", "mid") elif item.type == "top": - ast "Ha! Keep dreaming old man!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ast "Ha! Keep dreaming, old man!" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif item.type == "bottom": - ast "My bottoms stay where they are and that's final!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + ast "My bottoms stay where they are, and that's final!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") return label ast_reaction_equip_outfit(item): diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy index f1042c89..0ac6d60f 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/intros.rpy @@ -2105,7 +2105,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14: cho "(It's done... There's no going back now.)" cho "(Hold on... Didn't Snape say luck potion is expensive...)" - cho "(Blimey! I could have sold it got a new broom... )" + cho "(Blimey! I could have sold it, and bought a new broom...)" cho "(Too late for that now. I better find the best alternative broom I can!)" $ renpy.call_replay("cho_quid_E12.introspection") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy index eeb2e324..acf43d95 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/cho/gifts.rpy @@ -9,78 +9,78 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): if gift_item == lollipop_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "My team captain hasn't let me buy any to keep my blood sugar balanced, whatever that means." (mouth="soft", face="annoyed") + cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "My team captain hasn't let me buy any to keep my blood sugar balanced... Whatever that means." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "But thanks, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "But thanks, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] I do think I deserve one, since we won our first match." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "But we're up against Gryffindor soon, I don't want to get addicted to sugar..." (mouth="soft", face="annoyed") + cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "But we're up against Gryffindor soon, I don't want to get addicted to sugar..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-1) else: - cho "Sweets?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Sweets?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "I'll keep it for later, I like licking it in front of my teammates to tease them a bit." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + cho "I'll keep it for later... I like licking it in front of my teammates to tease them a bit." ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "*Mmmh*, but in the future... I'm more of a savoury kind of girl when it comes to sucking on things..." ("horny", "wink", "base", "mid") cho "But thanks, [name_genie_cho]." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == chocolate_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Chocolate?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I probably shouldn't... although." (pupils="R", face="horny") + cho "Chocolate?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I probably shouldn't... Although." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "I'll take it, [name_genie_cho]!" (face="happy") + cho "I'll take it, [name_genie_cho]!" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Chocolate... now that would be a treat..." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Chocolate... Now that would be a treat..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Cho...",gift_item) cho "What the heck, I deserve it." ("smile", "base", "base", "L") cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("open", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Chocolate?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "But we're up against Gryffindor soon, I don't want to get addicted to sugar..." (mouth="soft", face="annoyed") + cho "Chocolate?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "But we're up against Gryffindor soon, I don't want to get addicted to sugar..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Thanks." ("base", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-1) else: - cho "Chocolate?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Chocolate?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the chocolate to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "YES!" ("smile", "base", "base", "L") - cho "I've been trying to stay away from it, but since the season is over I can have as much as I'd like..." ("open", "wide", "base", "L") + cho "Yes!" ("smile", "base", "base", "L") + cho "I've been trying to stay away from it, but since the season is over, I can have as much as I'd like..." ("open", "wide", "base", "L") cho "Within reason." ("base", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(-2) elif gift_item == plush_owl_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A toy?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A toy?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stuffed owl to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "My team would probably laugh if they saw me with this..." (mouth="open", face="annoyed") - cho "I guess it's cute..." (face="annoyed") + cho "My team would probably laugh if they saw me with this..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I guess it's kinda cute..." (face="annoyed") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A toy?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A toy?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stuffed owl to Cho...",gift_item) cho "That's very nice of you [name_genie_cho] but I'd probably be made fun of owning this..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I guess I could give it to someone." ("open", "base", "base", "down") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A toy?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A toy?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stuffed owl to Cho...",gift_item) cho "I'm not a child [name_genie_cho]..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Thank you I guess..." ("open", "base", "base", "down") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "A toy?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A toy?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the stuffed owl to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Not the kind of Toy I'd like..." ("horny", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "Thank you I suppose." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -88,130 +88,130 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == butterbeer_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Butterbeer?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Isn't this supposed to be alcoholic? I'm not supposed to drink during the season..." (face="annoyed") + cho "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Isn't this supposed to be alcoholic? I'm not supposed to drink during the season..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Yes, I'll take it... Turns out my teammates had been lying about the alcohol content to mess with me." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "I guess I'll finally find out what I've been missing out on!" ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "It's a bit tame, isn't it? I chugged a lot of it after our last win and can't say I felt a buzz even." ("open", "narrow", "base", "L") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Butterbeer?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Butterbeer?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Don't you have any firewhisky?" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the Butterbeer to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, I suppose, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif gift_item == science_mag_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Oh, I heard that they put out a new formula for broom polish in this issue." (mouth="open", pupils="R", face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Oh, I heard that they put out a new formula for broom polish in this issue." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "*Hmm*... Broom aerodynamics and how to utilise your opponent's slipstream..." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "*Hmm*... Broom aerodynamics and how to utilise your opponent's slipstream..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Interesting..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Five steps to modify your brooms legally..." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Five steps to modify your brooms legally..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sounds useful." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) else: - cho "Experts guide, How to maintain and store your Quidditch gear." (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Isn't that what a broom closet is for?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Experts guide, How to maintain and store your Quidditch gear." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Isn't that what a broom closet is for?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of educational magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == girls_mag_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Girls magazines, what do you think I am... A gi--" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I'm good, thank you..." ("open", "base", "base", "L",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Girls magazines, what do you think I am... A gi--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I'm good, thank you..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Girls magazines?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Girls magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "I don't usually read these types of magazines, the boys used to make fun of me for it." (face="annoyed") - cho "But they can't get into the girls' dorm." (face="neutral") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "I don't usually read these types of magazines, the boys used to make fun of me for it." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "But they can't get into the girls' dorm." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Girls magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Girls magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "They do have some interesting stuff on skincare I suppose..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) else: - cho "Girls magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Girls magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I did enjoy last month's issue about cultural appropriation with traditional clothing..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of rather girly magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Don't tell the boys I said that." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == adult_mag_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Adult magazines?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Adult magazines?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "This is highly inappropriate [name_genie_cho]!" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "Is this the kind of thing you usually give to people?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Adult magazines?" (face="disgusted", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Adult magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "These people do have nice, posture..." (face="horny") - cho "I... I guess they could be useful." (face="horny") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "These people do have nice, posture..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I... I guess they could be useful." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Adult magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Adult magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "They're all so fit in these magazines, totally my type." ("open", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "Does this one model in the nude?" ("horny", "base", "base", "L") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) else: - cho "Adult magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Adult magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of adult magazines to Cho...",gift_item) cho "Wow, look at that guy's abs..." ("horny", "base", "base", "down") cho "And that girls..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "down") cho "I'll take it." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif gift_item == porn_mag_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "What is this!?!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "What is this!?!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Porn magazines?" ("open", "wide", "angry", "mid") - cho "Sir, why would you even think of giving me something like this?" ("scream", "narrow", "angry", "L",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Sir, why would you even think of giving me something like this?" ("scream", "narrow", "angry", "L") cho "" ("angry", "base", "angry", "down") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "What is this?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "What is this?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Porn magazines? Sir, that's too much even for you..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "Is that a snitch in her sna-- No... just no..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "" ("angry", "base", "angry", "down") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "What's this?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "What's this?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give an assortment of porn magazines to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "What's with these positions? Is that a broom handle up her..." (mouth="open",eyes="wide",eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") - cho "Oh my..." (mouth="soft", pupils="R", face="disgusted") + cho "What's with these positions? Is that a broom handle up her..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Oh my..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Porn magazines?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Porn magazines?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Ooh, are those two doing it on a broom? That's impressive..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "[name_genie_cho], this is naughty. Even for you..." ("horny", "wink", "base", "L") cho "I've got my eyes on you." ("base", "narrow", "raised", "L") @@ -221,195 +221,195 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): elif gift_item == krum_poster_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Professor, he doesn't have his shirt on!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "down") cho "That's...{w=0.3} highly inappropriate..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") cho "I can't...{w=0.3} I can't accept this." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" (mouth="soft", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "He really is quite muscular isn't he..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "I'll use it..." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the poster to Cho...",gift_item) cho "As a motivational poster that is!" ("open", "wide", "raised", "L") - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" (mouth="smile", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Wasn't his nudes leaked in Wizard Hunks weekly?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "Not that I'd read such a thing." ("upset", "base", "base", "downR") call give_gift("You give the poster to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-3) else: - cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "I'll take that if you don't mind." (pupils="downR", face="horny") + cho "A Viktor Krum poster?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I'll take that if you don't mind." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the poster to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "(...)" (mouth="soft", pupils="up", face="horny") - cho "I love it, [name_genie_cho]." (pupils="mid", face="horny") + cho "(...)" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I love it, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-5) elif gift_item == sexy_lingerie_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down") cho "Sir, are you expecting me to wear this?" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Are you insane?!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "No, thank you..." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Lingerie?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "Why would I want this? I have plenty of clothes I like already..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "I'll pass on that one, thanks." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Lingerie?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Seems pretty flexible. I might be able to use these when stretching." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") + cho "Lingerie?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Seems pretty flexible. I might be able to use these when stretching." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) else: - cho "Lingerie?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Lingerie?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sexy... Did you pick them out yourself?" ("horny", "wide", "base", "down") cho "You've got good taste... I tore mine last year during the ball..." ("base", "base", "raised", "mid") cho "Well, they got torn at one point at least..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "down") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-3) elif gift_item == sexy_stockings_ITEM : if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "down") cho "Surely that must be against some kind of dress code..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "I'll pass..." ("open", "base", "angry", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "I guess I won't get sunburnt on my legs wearing these..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") - cho "I can almost see right through these..." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") + cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") + cho "I can almost see right through these..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the lingerie to Cho...",gift_item) - cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) else: - cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Stockings?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "But my legs get too itchy in these, I'd rather go without any leggings..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) elif gift_item == pink_condoms_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Condoms?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Yes, why don't I use these and have sex with the teachers... That's what you want, right?" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "L") cho "I think you're confusing me with those Slytherin skanks who impale themselves on the daily." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "So, you can have these back and give it to them..." ("soft", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Condoms?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I'm not the kind of girl to walk around and bang anyone who cross my path..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") cho "Thanks but no, thanks..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(1) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Condoms?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Condoms?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Are you expecting me to use these? I know safe sex is important and all, but I know what you're insinuating." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "L") cho "Keep them..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Condoms?" (pupils="down", face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Condoms?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give a pack of condoms to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "I do surround myself with mostly boys, so having these at hand could be useful..." (pupils="downR", face="horny") - cho "Thank you for your concerns, [name_genie_cho]..." (mouth="soft", pupils="mid", face="neutral") + cho "I do surround myself with mostly boys, so having these at hand could be useful..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you for your concerns, [name_genie_cho]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif gift_item == vibrator_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A vibrator?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A vibrator?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, are you out of your mind?" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "I'm your student for crying out loud, giving gifts in general is a bit weird, but sex toys..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "Seriously?!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A vibrator?" (mouth="open", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A vibrator?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why would you give me this?" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") cho "Give it to Granger... I'm sure she'd love to accept a sex toy from her headmaster." ("smile", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A vibrator?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A vibrator?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, I don't think this would be appropriate to bring to my dorm..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "The girls... They'd hear it... Not that I want it or anything!" ("quiver", "wide", "base", "downR") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "A Vibrator?" (face="horny", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A Vibrator?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the vibrator to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "*Hmm*... It does promote a healthy lifestyle..." (face="horny") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="happy") + cho "*Hmm*... It does promote a healthy lifestyle..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-3) elif gift_item == anal_lube_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Lubricant?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "What the hell, why do you think this is an appropriate gift? What's wrong with you..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Lubricant?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "*Eww*... Why are you giving me this? When would I ever have the need for lube?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "down") cho "Give it to one of those Slytherin skanks, they probably go through a gallon every week." ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Anal lube?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal lube?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why would I need something like this? The broom goes under my butt, not in my butt..." ("soft", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Anal Lubricant?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal Lubricant?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the jar of anal lube to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "You should've given me this yesterday, [name_genie_cho]." (mouth="soft", face="annoyed") - cho "I haven't been able to sit on a broom properly, since my last flying session..." (mouth="annoyed", pupils="down", face="annoyed") + cho "You should've given me this yesterday, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I haven't been able to sit on a broom properly, since my last flying session..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-5) elif gift_item == ballgag_and_cuffs_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A ball gag... and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag... and cuffs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Wait, is this a sex thing?" ("soft", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "Professor, that's disgusting... Why would you give me this?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, this is a highly inappropriate gift to give to a student!" ("scream", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "Why would you give me these? Are they supposed to help me with Quidditch?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "I prefer not to lock myself up... I'm a free spirit." ("soft", "base", "raised", "L") cho "Thanks... But no, thanks." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" (pupils="down", face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A ball gag and cuffs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the ball gag and cuffs to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "How progressive... Do they require a safe-word to open?" (face="horny") - cho "Wait, how would a safe-word work when you have a ball in your mouth..." (mouth="quiver", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") + cho "How progressive... Do they require a safe-word to open?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Wait, how would a safe-word work when you have a ball in your mouth..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-3) elif gift_item == anal_plugs_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal plugs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "That's disgusting... Why would you think it'd a good idea to give these to me?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "That one even has a tail on it..." ("angry", "narrow", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal plugs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why do you have these? They're not used, are they?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "*Eww*... Just, no." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal plugs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, are you expecting me to wear this?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") cho "During Quidditch?" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "No, no, no, noooo." ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") @@ -417,128 +417,146 @@ label give_cho_gift(gift_item): cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) else: - cho "Anal plugs?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal plugs?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give a set of anal plugs to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "But these would stick out from underneath my robes..." (face="annoyed") - cho "Perhaps people would just think it's just a tail or something..." (face="horny") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "But these would stick out from underneath my robes..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Perhaps people would just think it's just a tail or something..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif gift_item == testral_strapon_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Is that a strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Is that a strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") cho "It's huge!" ("scream", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "I mean, why are you showing me this?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") cho "Get it away from me." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") cho "Seriously? Why are you giving me this..." ("angry", "wide", "base", "down") cho "That's disgusting..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") cho "But it's so big..." ("horny", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "I... I don't want it..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") cho "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "A strap-on?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") call give_gift("You give the thestral strap-on to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "How would that even fit inside anyone?" (mouth="quiver", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down") + cho "How would that even fit inside anyone?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == broom_2000_ITEM: $ states.cho.ev.quidditch.given_thestral = True if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A broom! Finally, something better than my old--" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A broom! Finally, something better than my old--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Hold on, is that a double ended dildo sticking out of it?!?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") cho "What's wrong with you?" ("scream", "wide", "base", "L") cho "Get that away from my--{w=0.4} From me!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Is that a broom with dildos stuck to it?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "Is that a broom with dildos stuck to it?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") cho "Professor, seriously... Why... Just why." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A broom?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down",xpos="mid",ypos="base") + cho "A broom?" ("open", "wide", "worried", "down") cho "A sex broom! Where did you even get this..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") cho "No...{w=0.3} I don't--{w=0.3} I don't want that." ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) else: - cho "Is that a Lady Speed Stick-2000, with a built-in vibrator and pulse function?" (mouth="scream", eyes="wide", eyebrows="raised", pupils="down", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Is that a Lady Speed Stick-2000, with a built-in vibrator and pulse function?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the broom to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "I mean..." (pupils="downR", face="horny") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]..." (mouth="soft", pupils="down", face="horny") - cho "I can't wait to try it out..." (pupils="mid", face="happy") + cho "I mean..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I can't wait to try it out..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-6) elif gift_item == sexdoll_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "A sex doll? What the heck... Why do you have this?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A sex doll? What the heck... Why do you have this?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "And more importantly..." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid") cho "{size=+4}Why are you giving it to me?{/size}" ("scream", "wide", "base", "L") cho "You disgust me..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "A sex doll?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A sex doll?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why would you give this to me? Wait, did you use this?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "L") cho "Get it away from me..." ("open", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "A sex doll?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A sex doll?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Why would I need this... It's a girl doll." ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "L") cho "I mean, why would I need a sex doll in general... I'm not into this sort of thing!" ("open", "wide", "raised", "mid") call cho_mood(1) else: - cho "A sex doll?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A sex doll?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the sex doll to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "It says Joanne on it..." (face="disgusted") - cho "I'll leave it in the boys' changing room... Should make a good reward after practice." (face="annoyed") + cho "It says Joanne on it..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "I'll leave it in the boys' changing room... Should make a good reward after practice." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-7) elif gift_item == anal_beads_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 1: - cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal beads?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Yeah, that's not going anywhere near their intended target..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") call cho_mood(4) elif states.cho.tier == 2: - cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal beads?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "How... Where did you..." ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "Gross!" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(3) elif states.cho.tier == 3: - cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal beads?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "Sir, how would ever be able to sit on a broom after using these?" ("angry", "base", "base", "L") cho "Not that I would ever use them!" ("angry", "wide", "raised", "L") cho "Get those away from me!" ("open", "narrow", "raised", "mid") cho "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(2) else: - cho "Anal beads?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "Anal beads?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call give_gift("You give the anal beads to Cho...", gift_item) - cho "Surely my butt would hurt after using these..." (face="annoyed") - cho "Although I do have a cushioning charm on my broom for a reason..." (face="horny") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." (face="neutral") + cho "Surely my butt would hurt after using these..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Although I do have a cushioning charm on my broom for a reason..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(-2) elif gift_item == wine_ITEM: if states.cho.tier <= 2: - cho "A wine bottle?" (face="annoyed", xpos="mid", ypos="base") + cho "A bottle of wine?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") cho "[name_genie_cho], I cannot drink alcohol, it would ruin my career..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "mid") call cho_mood(4) - else: - cho "A wine bottle?" (face="neutral", xpos="mid", ypos="base") - cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] but I can't take it." (face="neutral") - cho "{size=-4}Maybe to celebrate after I win the Quidditch Cup...{/size}" (face="horny") + elif states.cho.tier <= 3: + cho "A bottle of wine?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] but I can't take it." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "{size=-4}Maybe to celebrate after I win the Quidditch Cup...{/size}" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") call cho_mood(0) + else: + cho "A bottle of wine?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Well, I suppose I've deserved to let loose a bit." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + call cho_mood(-1) elif gift_item == firewhisky_ITEM: - cho "Firewhisky?" (face="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) - cho "Why are you giving it to me?" ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "L") - call cho_mood(0) + if states.cho.tier <= 2: + cho "Firewhisky?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Why are you giving it to me?" ("annoyed", "wide", "base", "L") + call cho_mood(0) + elif states.cho.tier <= 3: + cho "Firewhisky?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Thank you, [name_genie_cho] but I can't take it." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "{size=-4}Maybe to celebrate after I win the Quidditch Cup...{/size}" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + call cho_mood(0) + else: + cho "Firewhisky?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + cho "Well, I suppose I've deserved to let loose a bit." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + call give_gift("You give the sweets to Cho...",gift_item) + cho "Thank you [name_genie_cho]" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + call cho_mood(-1) cho "" (xpos="base", ypos="base") hide cho_main diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/cardgame_wager.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/cardgame_wager.rpy index 2021102c..321a7edc 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/cardgame_wager.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/cardgame_wager.rpy @@ -70,13 +70,13 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "The perfect Hermione Granger letting her headmaster feel her up over a card game and some house points!" (face="snape_02") sna "How sweet..." (face="snape_03") her "Can I leave now?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down", flip=True) - gen "You are excused miss Granger, but I will be taking twenty points from Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - $ gryffindor -= 20 #should take gryffindor points and then hermione leaves + gen "You are excused, Miss Granger, but I will be taking twenty points from Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + $ gryffindor -= 20 call her_walk(action="leave") sna "How did you talk her into that?" (face="snape_02") - gen "We made a bet involving house points and she lost, why did you have to barge your way in like that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We made a bet involving house points, and she lost, why did you have to barge your way in like that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It was just getting good!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You should hang a tie on the door or something!" (face="snape_03") sna "How was I supposed to know you were busy with the girl?" (face="snape_04") @@ -210,11 +210,11 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "Reveal yourself! I won't let you harm him!" (face="snape_10", wand=True, flip=False) gen "Severus, wait!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I knew something was wrong from the start, you can't hide from me, now reveal yourself or prepare to die!" (face="snape_30", wand=True) - if not states.her.status.stripping: #if hermione hasn't stripped twice - gen "What are you doing Severus?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + if not states.her.status.stripping: + gen "What are you doing, Severus?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "You're being very strange..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I didn't know you cared so much about my well being..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I didn't know you cared so much about my well-being..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "But... I swear I heard something..." (face="snape_14", wand=True) gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I guess I must've imagined it... I'll just go then." (face="snape_14", wand=True) @@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: with d3 stop music fadeout 2 - else: #if Hermione has stripped twice (so Snape walked in on her) + else: #if Hermione has stripped gen "Wait!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show screen blkfade @@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: hide screen blkfade with d5 - sna "Miss Granger?! I thou-- I..." (face="snape_14") + sna "Miss Granger?! I thought--{w=0.2} I..." (face="snape_14") hide snape_main play music "music/Dark Fog.ogg" if_changed if states.her.level > 21: @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: her "I was just giving the headmaster some help with an \"itch\"." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid_soft", flip=True) sna "I see... I was expecting a poor excuse, your honesty is admirable..." (face="snape_02") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid_soft", flip=True) - sna "Well, in that case I hope you don't mind giving me a scratch...{w=1.0}{nw}" (face="snape_13") + sna "Well, in that case I hope you don't mind giving me a scratch--" (face="snape_13") else: #whoring of 21 or less her @ cheeks blush "Oh, hello there professor..." ("cum", "base", "worried", "mid", xpos="left", ypos="base", flip=True) her @ cheeks blush "I was just helping the headmaster with some cleaning under his desk." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: else: sna "Sure... And my name is {i}Hans Gruber{/i}..." (face="snape_02") gen "I believe that your work is done Miss Granger, I'll refrain from deducting those points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Avoiding house point deductions are we? Is it that simple to get in your pants miss Granger?" (face="snape_01") + sna "Avoiding house point deductions, are we? Is it that simple to get inside your panties, Miss Granger?" (face="snape_01") sna "If I had known..." (face="snape_20") her "In your dreams...!" ("mad", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") sna "In any case, you're a lucky man... Albus." (face="snape_13") @@ -326,17 +326,17 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "Fine, but you're going to have to teach me how to do that later..." ("snape_01") gen "Not sure if that's..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Slurp*, *Slurp*, *Gobble*" - gen "Oh, holy spirit that resides in this place..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, Holy Spirit that resides in this place..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Slurp*, *Slurp*, *Urk*" ("open_wide_tongue", "squint", "worried", "up") gen "Please help me release this anguish...{w} I mean, let me help release you from this anguish." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Well, you seem to know what you're doing so I'll leave you to it..." ("snape_05") + sna "Well, you seem to know what you're doing, so I'll leave you to it..." ("snape_05") hide screen bld1 with d3 pause.2 call sna_walk(action="leave") - gen "And not a moment to soon.... Take this you whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And not a moment too soon.... Take this you whore!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call her_chibi_scene("bj_cum_in") call cum_block @@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "I had no clue exorcism would be this..." (face="snape_03") sna "Extreme..." ("snape_02") gen "Hah, yeah...{w=0.3} But I've done this plenty of times..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Actually, there's quite a bit of ghostly residue I have to deal with now so it might be best if..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Actually, there's quite a bit of ghostly residue I have to deal with now, so it might be best--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Whatever, I'd just leave it to the house elves..." ("snape_03") gen "It's not as simple as it may seem, it's not like warm water is going to do it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Fine, I'll head off in that case." ("snape_01") @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: # # menu: - "\"*Hmm*.. Actually..\" {image=interface/icons/small/cards.webp}": + "\"*Hmm*... Actually...\" {image=interface/icons/small/cards.webp}": gen "I don't see why not... I don't have anything else going on at the moment..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") label bj_duel_game: her "..." ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "Yes... I knew I'd make you bust this time!" (face="snape_02") gen "Trust me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You had nothing to do with that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Sure I didn't, how about you hand me a bottle of that fine wine to celebrate the occasion..." (face="snape_20") + sna "Sure I didn't... So, how about you hand me a bottle of that fine wine to celebrate the occasion..." (face="snape_20") label bj_duel_game_menu: menu: "-Give him the bottle-" (style="disabled") if wine_ITEM.owned <= 0: @@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: her @ cheeks blush "Happy?" ("normal", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "What are you talking about? How could I be happy in a moment like this..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But I just made you..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "I just lost that god damn game cause I couldn't concentrate!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I just lost that god-damn game because I couldn't concentrate!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well, I did what you asked me!" ("mad", "narrow", "angry", "R") her @ cheeks blush "So I'd very much appreciate if you didn't deduct those points!" ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") menu: @@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: gen "Twenty points from Gryffindor!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ gryffindor -= 20 her "..." ("base", "base", "angry", "mid") - her "What ever..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") + her "Whatever..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid") $ states.her.mood += 15 "-Deduct even more-": gen "Oh, don't you worry..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: her "I know what it means..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Right." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if game.daytime: - her "good day to you then sir." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "good day to you then, sir." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") else: her "Good night then..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") else: @@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ label hg_wager_bj: sna "..." (face="snape_05") gen "You bore..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." (face="snape_05") - sna "What kind of trash talk is that... seriously, you need to step up your game." (face="snape_06") + sna "What kind of trash talk is that... Seriously, you need to step up your game." (face="snape_06") gen "No you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "That's fair..." (face="snape_03") sna "I'll take my leave in that case..." (face="snape_01") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/butt_plugs.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/butt_plugs.rpy index baf0045a..fb46f58b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/butt_plugs.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/butt_plugs.rpy @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "[name_hermione_genie], I want you to do something different today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..........." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") - nar "You pull a large sized butt plug out from under your desk and place it in front of her." + nar "You pull a large-sized butt plug out from under your desk and place it in front of her." if states.her.level < 15: gen "I want you to wear a butt plug around the school." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: $ her_buttplug_small1.unlock() $ ev_her_small_plug.enqueue() - her "and what is that supposed to be? Some sort of animals tail?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "and what is that supposed to be? Some sort of animal tail?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Not exactly, it's a butt plug. I want you to wear it while you attend class today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") stop music @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "And all I ask for..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..........?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") - nar "You pull out a small sized butt plug from your desk." + nar "You pull out a small-sized butt plug from your desk." gen "Is that you wear this to class..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "!!!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -87,23 +87,23 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "You're eager." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well... I mean, I've sort of grown fond of how it feels..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Excellent... Go have fun then!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You pull out the small sized butt plug and hand it to her." + nar "You pull out the small-sized butt plug and hand it to her." nar "Hermione turns around and lifts her skirt giving you a full view as she inserts it." her "{heart}*Ah*{heart}..." ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "I will, [name_genie_hermione]. Thank you." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level >= 19: - nar "You pull out the large sized butt plug." + nar "You pull out the large-sized butt plug." gen "Ready to try out \"the dragon\" yet?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") stop music fadeout 1.0 her "What?" ("scream", "wide", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") her "Of course not! That thing would tear me--" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") - nar "You put the large butt plug back and pull out the small sized butt plug instead." + nar "You put the large-sized butt plug back and pull out the small-sized butt plug instead." gen "How about this one then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, okay then!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid",emote="happy") gen "You'll do it that easily?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well for fifty-five house points I'd be crazy not to." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Plus I don't hate the way it feels..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "Well, for fifty-five house points I'd be crazy not to." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Plus, I don't hate the way it feels..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") nar "You hand her the butt plug." gen "Why don't you put it in now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You want me to put it in now? in front of you?!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -129,11 +129,11 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "Wearing your favourite little butt plug to class!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "... again?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Sure, why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And another fifty-five house points for the Gryffindor house of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And another fifty-five house points for the Gryffindor house, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her ".........." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") gen "So... Are you okay with that, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I suppose so..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - nar "You pull out the small sized butt plug and hand it to her." + nar "You pull out the small-sized butt plug and hand it to her." gen "Fantastic! See you after class." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Medium, magical-": @@ -143,10 +143,10 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: jump .plug_choice if not her_buttplug_medium1.unlocked: - # First time with medium butt plug + # First time with the medium-sized butt plug. gen "[name_hermione_genie], I want you to try something different today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..........." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") - nar "You pull the medium sized butt plug out from under your desk and place it in front of her." + nar "You pull the medium-sized butt plug out from under your desk and place it in front of her." if states.her.level < 19: gen "I want you to wear this butt plug around the school." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -248,11 +248,11 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "Speaking of which..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You hand her the butt plug." her "Right." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - nar "Hermione lifts her skirt and pushes it in gently, taking her time." + nar "Hermione lifts her skirt, and pushes it in gently, taking her time." else: her "Oh, alright then..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down",xpos="right",ypos="base") - her "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} If you pay me an additional ten points I'll show you as I put it in." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") + her "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} If you pay me an additional ten points, I'll show you as I put it in." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") menu: "\"Done\"": $ current_payout += 10 @@ -260,13 +260,13 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: "\"Five is all I can do.\"": $ current_payout += 5 - her "*Hmm*... Alright fine..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "*Hmm*... Alright, fine..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "But you better appreciate it..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure I will." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You hand her the butt plug." her "Well... Here goes..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - nar "Hermione lifts her skirt and pushes it in gently, taking her time." + nar "Hermione lifts her skirt, and pushes it in gently, taking her time." her "{heart}{heart}{heart}*Ah*{heart}{heart}{heart}..." ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "I better...{w=0.4}*Ah*...{w=0.4} Head to class..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") @@ -304,13 +304,13 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: gen "You're eager. I haven't even said which one yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh... Can it be the big one... With the long tail..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Please..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") - gen "Well seeing as how you did ask for the big one..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You hand her the large sized butt plug." + gen "Well, seeing as how you did ask for the big one..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + nar "You hand her the large-sized butt plug." her "!!!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "This isn't the one I meant [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Didn't you ask for the big one?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I did--" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - gen "Well this is the {b}big{/b} one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, this is the {b}big{/b} one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But, [name_genie_hermione]... I don't even think this will fit." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Never say never!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You can't be serious!" ("scream", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: $ ev_her_large_plug.enqueue() play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed - gen "Well it just so happens that I recently came across the solution to your problem." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, it just so happens that I recently came across the solution to your problem." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "The solution?" ("disgust", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -380,20 +380,20 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: her @ cheeks blush "............." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") nar "Hermione slowly leaves your office, barely able to walk in a straight line." - "-Use anal lube-" (style="disabled") if anal_lube_ITEM.owned == 0: #Fail, wears small or medium sized instead + "-Use anal lube-" (style="disabled") if anal_lube_ITEM.owned == 0: #Fail, wears small or medium-sized instead gen "I'm afraid I do not have that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well then, I think I better be off to class then." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-2}unless {size=-2}you {size=-2}have {size=-2}the {size=-2}smaller {size=-2}one?{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}{/size}{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") menu: - "-Take out the small sized butt plug-": + "-Take out the small-sized butt plug-": $ ev_her_small_plug.enqueue() gen "It just so happens that I do!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You hand her the small sized butt plug." - "-Take out the medium sized butt plug-": + nar "You hand her the small-sized butt plug." + "-Take out the medium-sized butt plug-": $ ev_her_medium_plug.enqueue() gen "It just so happens that I do!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You hand her the medium sized butt plug." + nar "You hand her the medium-sized butt plug." her @ cheeks blush "This, this isn't the small one." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "It's smaller in comparison..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "True...{w=0.4} Here I go then..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs: her "..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "{size=-5}alright then...{/size}" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") nar "You hand her the butt plug." - nar "You watch it magically wriggle it's way inside her eager butthole." + nar "You watch it magically wriggle its way inside her eager butthole." her "{heart}*Ah*{heart}..." ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "(Didn't even need any lube...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -495,9 +495,9 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: her "This thing left me so frustrated that during my free period I went to the girls toilets to--" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "*Ahem*... Relieve myself..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "When all of a sudden that annoying ghost poked her head through the door!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") - her "As it if wasn't bad enough that she saw me..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "As if it weren't bad enough that she saw me..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "She then started yelling \"Hermione has a butt plug\" to everyone in the toilets!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid",emote="angry") - her "Luckily the stalls where empty! Imagine if they weren't!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "Luckily the stalls were empty! Imagine if they weren't!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Well, it certainly sounds like you've earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") elif states.her.level < 21: @@ -511,13 +511,13 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: her "*Ehm*... Well..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "I might've shown someone..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "I was in the library fetching some books when Luna started talking at me..." - her "I didn't see her at first but she had been reading at one of the desks." + her "I didn't see her at first, but she had been reading at one of the desks." her "She just started chatting at me like without even a hello like she usually does." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "Talking about something nonsensical as always..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - her "Well, during her blabbering she suddenly went quiet and when I looked over she was staring at my butt." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - m "Buttsted!" - her "Yes, well at first I was hoping that I got away with it... Until... Well..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - m "Well?" + her "Well, during her blabbering she suddenly went quiet and when I looked over, she was staring at my butt." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "Buttsted!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Yes... Well, at first I was hoping that I got away with it... Until... Well..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + gen "Well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I figured that even if she saw it..." her "It wouldn't matter, as no one would believe her..." gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: gen "You could always try relieving yourself in between lessons." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, I've tried that... But it doesn't work..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "It just makes the next class even more difficult..." - her "After potions finished I went to my room to... calm myself..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "After potions finished, I went to my room to... calm myself..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "But it just made Herbology worse..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "I just had to touch myself during the later half of the class..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "During class?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: her "Well as regular as it could have been with a plug up my butt." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "And nobody noticed?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I don't think so, [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Well I suppose something interesting can't happen everyday." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well I suppose something interesting can't happen every day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R",xpos="right",ypos="base",trans=fade) else: @@ -610,14 +610,14 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: her "Block out everything else..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "... Embrace it..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") gen "And how did you do that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, at first I tried rocking my hips, which worked for a bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + her "Well, at first, I tried rocking my hips, which worked for a bit..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "But after some time of doing so, it wasn't really enough..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") her "That's when I finally tried sitting right on the edge of my chair while rocking my hips..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") her "{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "So you worked out how to pleasure yourself in class." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I did, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Although I worry that if I do it too often it will really start to affect my grades..." - gen "Well I'm sure that missing a class or two isn't enough for you not to be able to catch up." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I'm sure that missing a class or two isn't enough for you not to be able to catch up." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "One or two?" ("angry", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hold on, you're saying that you spent all of today's classes pleasuring yourself?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: her "I might have had a few photos taken..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Photos?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I was in the library, minding my own business..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "I was browsing the book shelves and saw that they'd finally acquired a copy of Zygmunt Budge's book of potions." + her "I was browsing the bookshelves and saw that they'd finally acquired a copy of Zygmunt Budge's book of potions." her "And I sort of forgot I had the plug in and everything." her "As it was on the bottom shelf, I quickly kneeled down to grab it..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "When all of a sudden I heard the flash of a camera!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -647,14 +647,14 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_small_return: gen "You let your photo be taken?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I didn't let it happen! He did it without my consent!" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry") her "Luckily I managed to grab him and made him promise not to show anyone the photo..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "... In exchange I did have to let him take a few more though..." + her "... In exchange, I did have to let him take a few more though..." gen "You... Let him take more pictures? Wouldn't that make it worse?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course not [name_genie_hermione], Gryffindors are always true to their word!" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Although the thought did cross my mind...." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "If he released them then I'm sure that any time someone saw me they'd try and see whether or not I had a plug inside me..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "In any case, I'm certain that he won't release any of those photos!" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "If you say so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "He's not an idiot... He'd know that if he were to spread those photos around it would tarnish not just my reputation but Gryffindor as a whole." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "He's not an idiot... He'd know that if he were to spread those photos around, it would tarnish not just my reputation but Gryffindor as a whole." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") her "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Very well... In that case, it sounds like a job well done [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "I've never been so embarrassed in my life!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Severus? What did he do this time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, apparently I dared to suggest there was a better way to properly crush a Sopophorous bean..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "So of course he made me stand in front of the class and show them \"how it's done\"..." + her "So of course, he made me stand in front of the class and show them \"how it's done\"..." gen "What's wrong with that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "He obviously knew about my situation because he made me do it facing away from the class..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "You sure? How could he have known?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -719,7 +719,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "I--{w=0.2} I don't know... I was trying my best to not let it slip out as my legs were shaking, and to crush the bean as fast as possible..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "At least you got to show how a lady handles a bean." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmph*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "Well it sounds like you earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, it sounds like you earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "......." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") block: @@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "I think it has to be alive..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "All I know is that when my cat Crookshanks swatted at it, it went off!" ("scream", "closed", "angry", "mid") her "It was ridiculous! I was barely able to stand..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - her "The vibrations were so intense that my knees gave out and I collapsed onto my bed!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "The vibrations were so intense that my knees gave out, and I collapsed onto my bed!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "(Is she making this up?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well... I'll be sure to inspect it thoroughly and remove this curse..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh... *Ehm*... No, it's fine really [name_genie_hermione], you can leave it the way it is." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: gen "[name_hermione_genie], did you have fun?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*... I suppose you could say that." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down",xpos="right",ypos="base") gen "Anything interesting happen?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Yes... Well I might've... *Ehm*..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "Yes... Well, I might've... *Ehm*..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Had someone..." ("base", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "Touch it." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: gen "Keep what in?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "My voice..." gen "Right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Well it sounds like you've earned your points and then some." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, it sounds like you've earned your points and then some." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: # Friend played with it @@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: if hg_pr_kiss.counter >= 1: her @ cheeks blush "*Err*... maybe..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "What did you do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Well I don't want to say too much [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Well, I don't want to say too much [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "R") her "But after she saw what it was doing to me..." her "She insisted that I let her have a go..." her "And that's all I'll say..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -824,7 +824,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: else: her "... No." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well I don't mind letting her touch the tail [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Well, I don't mind letting her touch the tail [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "But anything else..." gen "Very good [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -839,7 +839,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "Studied for the upcoming potions test..." her "It was a normal day except for coming across a group of nasty Slytherin tramps..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "I was minding my business on the way to class when they called me a \"butt slut\"." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I see... So you gave them a piece of your mind?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see... So, you gave them a piece of your mind?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And sink to their level?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Well, I suppose it's for the best." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -857,7 +857,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "Although maybe the word \"attacked\" is a slight exaggeration... They cornered me at least." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") gen "So, what happened?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I was sitting in the library, minding my own business..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") - her "I must've not been careful enough to hide the tail as all of a sudden a group of students came out of nowhere." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "I must've not been careful enough to hide the tail as all of a sudden, a group of students came out of nowhere." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "They started asking me all these questions..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "\"Is it fluffy\"?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "\"Why are you wearing it\"?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -869,7 +869,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: her "I didn't tell them anything!" ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "You didn't--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "We were in the library for crying out loud..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") - her "Instead I made them promise to keep quiet and not let anyone know about it..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Instead, I made them promise to keep quiet and not let anyone know about it..." ("upset", "closed", "base", "mid") her "And in exchange I let them touch it for a bit..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") gen "So... Instead of answering some innocent questions... You let them touch your butt plug..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -903,12 +903,12 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, I was in the stall finishing up..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") her "When a girl entered the other stall." - her "I wasn't sure but I thought that it may have been a Slytherin..." ("upset", "wink", "base", "mid") + her "I wasn't sure, but I thought that it may have been a Slytherin..." ("upset", "wink", "base", "mid") her "So I decided to press my cheeks to the wall and stick my tail through to freak her out!" ("smile", "base", "base", "R") gen "Freak her out?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yeah!" ("grin", "base", "base", "R") her "At first she didn't do anything, and I thought she must've been stunned by the sight, but after I gave it a little wiggle, instead of running off she tugged on it..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") - her "I was worried she was gonna pull it out but she just stood there and eventually she started to play with it..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") + her "I was worried she was going to pull it out, but she just stood there, and eventually, she started to play with it..." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "I didn't really know what to feel in case it was actually a Slytherin doing it." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "She was stroking it... flicking it... I even think she may have licked it..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") her "... Imagine that... a Slytherin, licking something that was inside my..." @@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_medium_return: #her "she couldn't take her eyes off of it..." #her "imagine that... Astoria Greengrass... pure-blood, licking my..." ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") #her "{heart}........{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up") - #gen "It sounds like you've earned your points today then [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + #gen "It sounds like you've earned your points today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Hmm*... That's too bad, perhaps you'll see them at that hole again some time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Either way, you've surely earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "...{size=-7}(I would have done this for free...){/size}" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_large_return: gen "What happened?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed her "Well... I was walking down to Hogsmeade as we had the afternoon off..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") - her "And I thought I was alone but one of the Slytherin students suddenly rushed up behind me..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her "And I thought I was alone, but one of the Slytherin students suddenly rushed up behind me..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "And I didn't even have enough time to react before he..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her "He..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") her "Before he shouted \"Let it rip!\" and tugged on my tail!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -985,8 +985,8 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_large_return: gen "Enough about the points. Tell me more about your behind." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "My-- Oh right..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "What happened next?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well... I would normally not say this but I'm glad the plug is as big as it is." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") - gen "Didn't budge one bit I assume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Well... I would normally not say this, but I'm glad the plug is as big as it is." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + gen "Didn't budge one bit, I assume." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Can I have my points now?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Certainly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1004,13 +1004,13 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_large_return: play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed her "Well, we're currently studying Dragons in our care of magical creatures lessons." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well I thought it was a great opportunity to give a demonstration how female Dragons attracts their mates.." ("base", "base", "base", "R") + her "Well, I thought it was a great opportunity to give a demonstration how female Dragons attract their mates.." ("base", "base", "base", "R") her "You're kidding..." - her "Nope, I was wearing a dragons head and everything!" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") + her "Nope, I was wearing a dragon's head and everything!" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") her "They didn't suspect a thing about where the tail was attached!" ("smile", "base", "base", "R") gen "Did they touch it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "They did..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") - her "And... Well, since I was roleplaying a female dragon in heat..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") + her "And... Well, since I was role-playing a female dragon in heat..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") her "You could probably guess the rest..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R") gen "I'll be expecting a dragon egg on my desk in the next few months..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What?! No, it just got a bit heated, that's all!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "R") @@ -1030,7 +1030,7 @@ label hg_butt_plugs_large_return: her "Yes, I did [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") gen "Anything interesting happen?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes... As you probably know, you can't really sit very well with this thing inside." - gen "Can't say that I have first hand experience..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Can't say that I have first-hand experience..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right..." gen "So, what happened? I thought you'd expect you'd need to sit down at some point." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I did, although..." diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy index 08ba2820..f5b3d1b3 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/collars.rpy @@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ label hg_collars: if hermione.is_worn("top"): gen "I've got something for you to put on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") - gen "But first, I'll need you to remove your top or it might get caught in your clothing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But first, I'll need you to remove your top, or it might get caught in your clothing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.tier == 1: if hg_pf_admire_panties.is_event_complete(1, 1) or hg_pf_admire_breasts.is_event_complete(1, 1): her "You want me to remove my top?" ("soft", "happy", "worried", "R") gen "Yes please..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I'm getting paid for this right?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "I'm getting paid for this, right?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Fine..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -102,8 +102,8 @@ label hg_collars: if states.her.level < 4: her "My true self?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Yep..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "So, like fortune telling?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "More like present telling." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "So, like fortune-telling?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "More like present-telling." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sounds silly... But alright then." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R") her "How much am I being paid for this?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Let's say thirty points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ label hg_collars: gen "*Hmm*... Just to put on a magic collar?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And here I thought you weren't worried about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Very well, [name_hermione_genie]... Thirty points it is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very well, [name_hermione_genie]... Thirty points, it is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ current_payout = 30 @@ -167,9 +167,9 @@ label hg_collars: her @ cheeks blush "I've taken my clothes off in this office..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I'm sure you've made it say something to try and degrade me..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") gen "Of course not, this collar tells no lies!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'm sure it'll call you a hero for the amount of points you've earned for your house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm sure it'll call you a hero thanks to the number of points you've earned for your house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's what you're doing this for after all, this collar will merely confirm it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, if that's the case... I suppose since I can't tell anyone about all this it would at least be nice to know for sure..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Well, if that's the case... I suppose since I can't tell anyone about all this, it would at least be nice to know for sure..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level < 25: #Sex (24=max) her @ cheeks blush "My true self is it?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ label hg_collars: gen "Yes, I have the feeling something might've changed, so I thought we could try another one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 4: - her "*Hmm*... Well I doubt it..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*... Well, I doubt it..." ("normal", "base", "base", "R") her "Will I get another thirty points?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Okay, then why not..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ label hg_collars: elif states.her.level < 10: her @ cheeks blush "I'm sure it'll just say the same thing as before..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Well I wouldn't be so sure if I were you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I wouldn't be so sure if I were you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ahem*... Although I wouldn't mind some points." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") gen "Figured..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Alright then, Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -217,12 +217,12 @@ label hg_collars: her @ cheeks blush "Well of course you'd think that..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "I want ten points for this..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Good... Then put it on me and lets get this over with..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") #bit worried + her @ cheeks blush "Good... Then put it on me and let's get this over with..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") #bit worried $ current_payout = 10 elif states.her.level < 22: #BJ - her "Well... Seeing the things I've done in here I'm sure it can't be good..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "Well... Seeing the things I've done in here, I'm sure it can't be good..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I'm sure it will recognize why you're doing all this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") #worried @@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ label hg_collars: jump slut_scene "-Tell her she's a flasher-" if states.her.status.stripping: jump flasher_scene - "-Tell her she is good girl-": + "-Tell her she's a good girl-": jump good_girl_scene label slut_scene: @@ -320,9 +320,9 @@ label slut_scene: call bld gen "That's a good little slut..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Now if you want to suck my cock, I expect you to ask nicely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now, if you want to suck my cock, I expect you to ask nicely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What? Isn't it bad enough that the stupid collar said that I'm a slut! Just let me suck your cock!" ("clench", "happy", "base", "up", ypos="head") - gen "Well that's exactly it, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, that's exactly it, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sluts beg for cock!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I expect you to beg!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ label slut_scene: call her_chibi_scene("bj") with d3 - gen "*Ughhh*, I'm getting close girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Ughhh*, I'm getting close, girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Get ready." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause") nar "Hermione pulls your cock out of her mouth hastily, ready to receive her reward." @@ -444,10 +444,10 @@ label slut_scene: gen "Well now that we've established who you really are... I've got a present for you!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "A present? What is it?" ("soft", "happy", "base", "up") - gen "That lovely collar on your neck, I'm giving it to you as reminder of who you are." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That lovely collar on your neck, I'm giving it to you as a reminder of who you are." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You're expecting me to keep it?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare") gen "Most certainly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You are \"my\" slut and you will do well to remember it...{w=0.4} Now get out of my office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You are \"my\" slut, and you will do well to remember it...{w=0.4} Now get out of my office." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "...{w=0.4} Fine." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") call give_reward("A new collar has been unlocked in the wardrobe!") @@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ label slut_scene: her @ cheeks blush "Can I get a towel or something to clean my face?" ("open", "happy", "base", "R", ypos="base", trans=d3) gen "Why? Worried someone's going to see how much of a slut you are?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You can't be serious!" ("upset", "happy", "worried", "stare") - gen "I am... And if you ever want to suck my cock again you will do as I say." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I am... And if you ever want to suck my cock again, you will do as I say." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "...{w} Yes [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Well then...{w=0.4} Get going." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -497,12 +497,12 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event) her "Pansy Parkinson has been telling everyone that I'm a slut!" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "Really? Why is this Pansy Parkinson calling you a slut?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I think she might know something..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "She's going to ruin my reputation! What will people think when they find out what I've been doing with my ninety year old Professor?" ("disgust", "closed", "worried", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "She's going to ruin my reputation! What will people think when they find out what I've been doing with my ninety-year-old Professor?" ("disgust", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I'll be known as a slut for the rest of my life!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ tears soft_blink "I'll never be able to get a good job..." ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ tears soft_blink "My friends will hate me..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - her "Please... The collar doesn't tell me that I'm a slut does it, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "wide", "worried", "mid") + her "Please... The collar isn't telling you that I'm a slut, is it, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "wide", "worried", "mid") gen "Well, you'll be happy to know that this Parkinson girl is incorrect, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The collar doesn't say that you're a slut..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears soft "Oh, thank heavens..." ("grin", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event) gen "A slut is someone who enjoys sex... A whore is someone who's selling themselves for materialistic gains!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "As long as someone pays you one way or the other, you couldn't care less, could you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I--{w=0.2} I--{w=0.2} I--" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") - gen "I bet you'd beg your precious little friends to fuck you if I wasn't around and it would benefit you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I bet you'd beg your precious little friends to fuck you if I wasn't around, as long as it would benefit you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Look at what you've become, nothing more than the school bicycle... Willing to give everyone a happy ride." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I wouldn't be worried about your friends finding out what you're doing in here. They're probably just waiting for a turn themselves..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "[name_genie_hermione] please...{w=0.4} You're being mean." ("shock", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event) her @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.4} {heart}*Ah*...{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "up_soft") gen "Do it whore!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Please fill my pussy with your thick... {heart}cum!{heart}" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead") - gen "That's a good little whore...{w=0.4} Now, who else have you practised that line with I wonder?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's a good little whore...{w=0.4} Now, who else have you practised that line with, I wonder?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Is it just me, or do you beg every other boy you screw with to cum inside you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{heart}{heart}{heart}..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "dead") gen "Tell me girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ label slave_scene: gen "Don't be silly... Why would it say that,{w=0.5} slave?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh good..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid") her "Wait. What did you just call me?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid") - gen "You're a slave Miss Granger. Specifically, {b}my{/b} slave..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're a slave, Miss Granger. Specifically, {b}my{/b} slave..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What are you talking about?" ("angry", "happy", "worried", "mid") gen "It's obvious isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, it's not!" ("open", "happyCl", "annoyed", "R") @@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ label slave_scene: her "That's not true!" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Oh really? Then when was the last time you ever said {b}no{/b} to me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well, I--" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "R") - gen "Exactly... You've become my slave a long time ago, just accept it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Exactly... You became my slave a long time ago, just accept it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Just because I care about my house it doesn't mean--" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid",emote="sweat") gen "Oh please... We have been through this already." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "When was the last time you actually cared about acquiring those silly points of yours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ label slave_scene: gen "Silence. I'm not finished." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "The facts are speaking against you, and very loudly, my dear slave girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Almost as loud as you calling my name when I fill that tight pussy of yours." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Almost as loud as you're calling my name when I fill that tight pussy of yours." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "R",emote="sweat") gen "You know what I think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I think you are scared to admit that what you truly want from life is to be controlled and be taken care of, like a faithful puppy, or a slave." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ label slave_scene: her @ cheeks blush tears soft "I..." ("soft", "base", "base", "stare") # Tears welling up gen "Don't give me that look. We both know that you enjoyed me using you like a cock-sleeve." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You even let me fuck you in the ass, and you loved every second if it!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You even let me fuck you in the ass, and you loved every second of it!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I am not scared to admit what I enjoy, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") # Hermione's thoughts are racing @@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ label slave_scene: nar "You unleash a firm slap across her buttocks." her @ cheeks blush "" ("open_tongue", "happyCl", "base", "up") call ctc - gen "That's not who I am to you [name_hermione_genie]...{w=0.4} To you I am your master." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's not who I am to you [name_hermione_genie]...{w=0.4} To you, I am your master." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Do you understand now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears soft "Yes..." ("angry", "base", "base", "stare") @@ -806,7 +806,7 @@ label slave_scene: gen "Now, if I'm your master...{w=0.4} Then what does that make you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears soft "{size=-7}A--{w=0.2} A slave...{/size}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare") gen "Speak up girl!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush tears soft "I am slave..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush tears soft "I am a slave..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") call slap_her nar "You give Hermione yet another strong slap across her buttocks." @@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ label slave_scene: gen "Yes! That's a good slave...{w=0.4} You're doing great." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Gripping tightly onto Hermione's hips you impale her down to the hilt of your throbbing member." + nar "Gripping tightly onto Hermione's hips, you impale her down to the hilt of your throbbing member." gen "*Ughhh*..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1014,17 +1014,17 @@ label flasher_scene: gen "There it is! Your true self!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") else: - gen "Well... The collar didn't need to do much did it... Seeing your current state of undress..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well... The collar didn't need to do much, did it... Seeing your current state of undress..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well then... Now that the collar has told us how much you enjoy showing off your naked body..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I want to hear it from you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - if states.her.level < 19: # Wont admit it + if states.her.level < 19: # Won't admit it her @ cheeks blush "Hear... Hear what from me?" ("disgust", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "Tell me how much you're enjoying flaunting your naked body." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.4} I am just doing it for the points, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "R") - nar "The collar once more tugs on the strings, making hermione gasp." + nar "The collar once more tugs on the strings, making Hermione gasp." her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") #Horny her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "stare") #embarrased gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1053,7 +1053,7 @@ label flasher_scene: her @ cheeks blush "I..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") nar "You watch as the strings of the collar slowly begin to pull on itself as Hermione hesitates." her @ cheeks blush "I..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - nar "The strings now completely stretched begin tugging on Hermione's nipples." + nar "The strings, now completely stretched, begins tugging on Hermione's nipples." her @ cheeks blush "Alright I do enjoy it okay!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips, the strings return to their dormant state." her @ cheeks blush "*Phew*..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -1073,11 +1073,11 @@ label flasher_scene: else: #Openly admits it, proves it to you nar "You watch as the strings attached to her new nipple piercings tug and pull, making her nipples harden." her @ cheeks blush "I love it!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") - nar "The collar happy with the answer, relaxes its strings." + nar "The collar, happy with the answer, relaxes its strings." gen "Oh?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "I mean... If the magic collar says so then it must be true..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I mean... If the magic collar says so, then it must be true..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I...{w=0.4} Yes, although I didn't think you'd be so hasty to admit it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Let's give you some confirmation then..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "What are you--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1092,7 +1092,7 @@ label flasher_scene: play sound "sounds/08_hop_on_desk.ogg" #Sound of the desk squeaking. pause 3 gen "!!!!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Hermione waiving away your questioning look, walks over and climbs onto your desk..." + nar "Hermione, waiving away your questioning look, walks over and climbs onto your desk..." call her_chibi("dance_pause","on_desk","on_desk") @@ -1119,7 +1119,7 @@ label flasher_scene: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Hermione prounces around your desk for a moment, and shows herself off from every angle..." + nar "Hermione prances around your desk for a moment, and shows herself off from every angle..." her @ cheeks blush "Now if you don't mind..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -1216,7 +1216,7 @@ label good_girl_scene: her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") her "Well then... Before I go." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I thought that since you're paying me and all I should at least show you my breasts..." ("open", "closed", "base", "down") + her "I thought that since you're paying me and all, I should at least show you my breasts..." ("open", "closed", "base", "down") gen "That seems fair." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") stop music fadeout 1.0 @@ -1250,9 +1250,9 @@ label good_girl_scene: her @ tears soft "*sob*... I guess not..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "It takes some real strength and determination!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "You really think so [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I do! you're a good girl Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I do! you're a good girl, Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Once Gryffindor wins the house cup almost everyone will be so happy." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Once Gryffindor wins the house cup, everyone will be so happy." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]... I can't wait!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "*Sigh*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Genie sighs because he was hoping that Hermione would present herself or something because the collar did nothing. her "Is something the matter, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -1275,7 +1275,7 @@ label good_girl_scene: if not her_neckwear_good_girl_collar.unlocked: $ her_neckwear_good_girl_collar.unlock() - gen "Oh... You can keep that collar by the way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh... You can keep that collar, by the way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Really?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Yeah, sure, Why not... Should give me a good reminder to be more careful making decisions..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Maybe I should sell her some more favours until I give her another one...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy index 060df15c..1c2e4612 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/items/vibrators.rpy @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ label hg_vibrators: gen "Sure can." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") else: - her @ cheeks blush "I'll need wear some underwear over them, of course." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "I'll need to wear some underwear over them, of course." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "If you must..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: if hermione.is_any_worn("clothes"): @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ label hg_vibrators: with d3 pause 1 - if hermione.is_any_worn("bra", "panties"): #Removes eveything except bra or panties if she's wearing them (maybe this could be done differently) + if hermione.is_any_worn("bra", "panties"): #Removes everything except bra or panties if she's wearing them (maybe this could be done differently) $ hermione.strip("clothes") $ hermione.wear("bra", "panties") else: @@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public: gen "You don't. I'll control them myself using the remote, that way you can just focus on enjoying yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You will? But then how am I supposed to know when they'll go off?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's what makes it fun." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "What if they go off when there's other students or teachers around?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "What if they go off when there are other students or teachers around?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "That's just a risk you'll have to take." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Come on... It's just some tiny little vibrations. I'm sure you can handle it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -570,9 +570,9 @@ label hg_vibrators_public: gen "Surely that's more than enough of an incentive to broaden your sexual education." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I am plenty sexually educated!" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "W-wait, that's not what I meant--" ("angry", "squint", "base", "stare") - gen "*heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I meant--{w=0.2} Well, the problem is--" ("normal", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "Oh. So you're considering it at least." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh. So, you're considering it at least." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}Why am I even trying...{/size} *sigh*" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") else: gen "Surely someone like you would have plenty of experience controlling yourself during sexual stimulation." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public: gen "I see." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I just don't want people to notice, okay?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Then maybe you should consider keeping your legs closed for the time being." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Unless you don't mind flashing yourself that is." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Unless you don't mind flashing yourself, that is." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I'm talking about the sounds!" ("open", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "I see... Then let's make a compromise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Only turn them on during a class that is noisy enough, that way, no one will be able to hear the buzzing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public: her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") # slight shock gen "I mean, I'm sure it's loud enough--{w=0.2} I mean, the class is--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Fuck, I give up. You know what I mean anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Sigh*... I'll figure it out. As long as I'm getting paid of course." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Sigh*... I'll figure it out. As long as I'm getting paid, of course." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Sure! Wouldn't have it any other way." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "See you later then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Right..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -686,13 +686,13 @@ label hg_vibrators_public: gen "Said and done!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "If my condition isn't satisfactory, I could just turn the vibrators on during lunch break..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "But, that's when all students gather around--" ("angry", "base", "base", "stare") + her @ cheeks blush "But, that's when all the students gather--" ("angry", "base", "base", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "I see what you're doing..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Alright, fine, {i}Gobstones{/i} it is." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I knew you were the reasonable one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Unless..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") #enticing gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "There is some time left before classes start, if you wanted to check everything is in working order, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") # Enticing look + her @ cheeks blush "There is some time left before classes start, in case you wanted to check everything is in working order, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") # Enticing look gen "Clever, but don't think you can get off the hook that easy, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") #annoyed but blushing her @ cheeks blush "See you tonight then." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") @@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal mouth_angry as cg with d5 her "*Ah*...{w=0.2} Please, [name_genie_hermione]! It's too strong...!" - gen "Alright, I can turn it down, but who's to say you wont change your mind again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Alright, I can turn it down, but who's to say you won't change your mind again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried mouth_worried as cg with d5 @@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_neutral eyes_open_forward as cg with d5 her "That is not--" - gen "Don't worry! I'm the person holding the controller after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If it was anyone else, they might've gotten impatient by now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Don't worry! I'm the person holding the controller, after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If it were anyone else, they might've gotten impatient by now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But I can do this all day!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_upset eyes_squint_right mouth_open as cg with d5 @@ -1002,11 +1002,11 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: gen "You're lucky I'm in a good mood, so I think I'll oblige you,{fast} for being so honest with yourself for once." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(She'll love this...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "[name_hermione_genie],{w=0.2} from now on you are not allowed to cum!{nw}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_hermione_genie],{w=0.2} from now on, you are not allowed to cum!{nw}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyes_open_forward mouth_worried as cg - gen "[name_hermione_genie], from now on you are not allowed to cum!{fast}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_hermione_genie], from now on, you are not allowed to cum!{fast}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyes_squint_forward as cg with d5 @@ -1141,8 +1141,8 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried eyes_narrow_forward as cg with d5 her "Your--{w=0.2} Your way?" - gen "I've been way to lenient with you, first you disobey me... and even when I so graciously granted your wish--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "--Something that I don't even do anymore, by the way--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've been way too lenient with you, first you disobey me... and even when I so graciously granted your wish--" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "--Something that I don't even do any more, by the way--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "--but you still aren't satisfied!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, yes, we're going to do this {b}my{/b} way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal eyes_squint_forward as cg with d5 her "Expect the...{w=0.4} Unexpected?" - gen "That's right...{w=0.4} I could change the intensity at a moments notice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's right...{w=0.4} I could change the intensity at a moment's notice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyes_narrow_forward mouth_worried as cg with d5 @@ -1280,7 +1280,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried eyes_closed mouth_horny as cg with d5 her "*Mmm*..." - gen "I've done this enough times to know exactly when someone's about to go over the edge, so that I can ease up and keep it going for a while longer..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I've done this enough times to know exactly when someone's about to go over the edge, just so that I can ease up and keep it going for a while longer..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And that is the goal for today's lesson..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hold{w=0.3} it{w=0.3} in..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1338,7 +1338,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} And how...{w=0.4} How do I make sure that you're--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Satisfied..." gen "By doing what I ask of you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Although, I must say..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Watching you squirm about, and trying to hold it in is quite satisfying by itself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Watching you squirm about, and trying to hold it in, is quite satisfying by itself..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried as cg with d5 @@ -1520,7 +1520,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: if not her_outfit_vibrators.unlocked: her "" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "L") - nar "For a brief moment you see Hermione's eyes flicker towards the vibrators left on your desk." + nar "For a brief moment, you see Hermione's eyes flicker towards the vibrators left on your desk." gen "Fine, you can take them and finish yourself off, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I wasn't--" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Consider it a gift." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1551,7 +1551,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: gen "I expect great things from you, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Next time I shall grade you for your performance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "(So he did remember...)" ("disgust", "base", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "Fine, I'll try to find an opportunity to practice in my... chambers." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") # Hermione makes an unintentioanl pun, Genie's influence is rubbing off on her. + her @ cheeks blush "Fine, I'll try to find an opportunity to practice in my... chambers." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") # Hermione makes an unintentional pun, Genie's influence is rubbing off on her. gen "Splendid!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That will be all, [name_hermione_genie]. You are dismissed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -1562,7 +1562,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: jump end_hermione_event "-Turn the intensity to Medium-": - #She cums but it takes a little longer. + #She cums, but it takes a little longer. play sound "sounds/click4.ogg" play background "sounds/vibrator_medium.ogg" @@ -1714,7 +1714,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: her "Oh... why thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") if not her_outfit_vibrators.unlocked: - her "Is there some kind of a reward?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Is there some kind of reward?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Reward?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Wasn't having the biggest orgasm of your life enough for you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, it was-- It's just..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -1770,9 +1770,9 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: $ hermione.hide() call unlock_clothing("Congratulations! You have unlocked a new outfit!", her_outfit_vibrators) - gen "Have fun, and try to not to overdo it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Have fun, and try to not overdo it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or you might end up blind." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "........*sigh*" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "........ *Sigh*" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I won't..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Who said that?" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1912,7 +1912,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: "-Be kind-": #Mood stays the same gen "Oh right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "No need to worry, [name_hermione_genie]. You're helping out the Headmaster after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No need to worry, [name_hermione_genie]. You're helping out the headmaster, after all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh, I wasn't worried about--" ("upset", "squint", "base", "R") gen "I'm sure that such a bright girl as yourself is able to keep up with the curriculum anyway." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes, so far--" ("open", "closed", "base", "R") @@ -2011,7 +2011,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: her @ cheeks blush "I--{w=0.2}I'll have those points now." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "L") gen "But we were just getting started!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "And now we're finished." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Are you sure? I've finished plenty of times and it's usually more--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Are you sure? I've finished plenty of times, and it's usually more--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "--Finished! We're done here!" ("angry", "happyCl", "annoyed", "mid") nar "Hermione bends over and picks up the vibrators from the ground, slamming them onto your desk." @@ -2022,20 +2022,20 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal: her @ cheeks blush "You can have these back now." ("disgust", "happy", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Are you sure? You can keep them, you know." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "No thanks..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "No, thanks..." ("open", "narrow", "angry", "R") call her_walk("mid", "base") call her_chibi(flip=False) with d3 - gen "I suppose you wouldn't want anyone find them in your dorm." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I suppose you wouldn't want anyone to find them in your dorm." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "(That's not what I'm worried about...)" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") play sound "sounds/click4.ogg" stop background gen "No worries, just let me know if you feel like using them again." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Sure... If I ever get the sudden urge to ask my headmaster for some vibrators I'll come and ask..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Sure... If I ever get the sudden urge to ask my headmaster for some vibrators, I'll come and ask..." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") gen "Ask and come any time you like!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Can I have my points now?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") @@ -2405,7 +2405,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her @ cheeks blush "She noticed right away that I am an expert at practising with magic wands." ("grin", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Of course, I'd expect no less from such a seasoned witch as her." ("base", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Seasoned you say... From teaching the arts of bukkake no doubt..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "In fact, I was the first person to perfectly master turning a rat yellow and ever since then I've been the go to student to demonstrate--" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") + her "In fact, I was the first person to perfectly master turning a rat yellow and ever since then I've been the go-to student to demonstrate--" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Hold on... A Rat?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, why so surprised?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I don't want to hear about stupid rats, what about the exhibitionism? The vibrators? The guys jacking off onto you, and maybe your teacher as well?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2450,14 +2450,14 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her @ cheeks blush "I'm just--{w=0.2} Well, I wanted you to know what went through my head before... You know." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Fine, if it makes you feel better, go ahead." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") #annoyed - her @ cheeks blush "So, Charms finished and we went for lunch." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "So, Charms finished, and we went for lunch." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "We? Who's we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Me and my friends..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I keep forgetting that the nerdy girl archetype has actual friends in this universe...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #Lunch - her @ cheeks blush "So, we had our lunch... And whilst chatting with my friends I sort of forgot I was even wearing them... The vibrators I mean." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "So, we had our lunch... And whilst chatting with my friends, I sort of forgot I was even wearing them... The vibrators, I mean." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Which, thinking back on it, I'm sure was your intention this whole damn time..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You caught me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Probably shouldn't tell her I was sleeping the entire time...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2522,7 +2522,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: $ hermione.strip("accessory0") with d3 - her @ cheeks blush "It was a bit difficult, initially they were planning to play wizard chess, so I had to really wrack my brain to find a good reason why they should play gobstones instead." ("angry", "closed", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "It was a bit difficult, initially they were planning to play wizard chess, so I had to really rack my brain to find a good reason why they should play gobstones instead." ("angry", "closed", "base", "R") gen "But you succeeded?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "After some convincing, yes." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -2577,7 +2577,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: stop music fadeout 1 stop weather fadeout 4 - #CG Hermione outside in courtyard, in front of Harry and Ron who's playing Gobstones, base facial expression + #CG Hermione outside in the courtyard, in front of Harry and Ron who's playing Gobstones, base facial expression show screen blkfade with d5 @@ -2595,7 +2595,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "After some convincing, my friends and I finally made our way outside into the courtyard..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Just as we were about to sit down, suddenly, the vibrators turned on." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - # This section has a different endings depending on the player choices. + # This section has a different ending, depending on the player's choices. #Optimal order is Medium > Low > High $ _vibrator_last = None @@ -2631,7 +2631,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: # Repeat her "Even though I was expecting it this time, I was not ready for you to switch it on to the high setting so quickly." - her "I tried to stifle myself but my gasp had the boys look towards me suspiciously." + her "I tried to stifle myself, but my gasp had the boys look towards me suspiciously." show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_neutral eyes_sad mouth_open npc_sus_ron as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_neutral eyes_sad mouth_open npc_sus_ron as xray_overlay @@ -2659,7 +2659,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "At least I think they did, as they went back to their game..." gen "Smooth..." her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." - gen "So, how did it feel like?" + gen "So, how did it feel?" show her_vibrators_public eyes_sad as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_sad as xray_overlay @@ -2726,7 +2726,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public eyes_closed mouth_lip_bite as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_closed mouth_lip_bite as xray_overlay - her "Still... I was having my privates stimulated in front of my friends, so I couldn't help but feel bit anxious." + her "Still... I was having my privates stimulated in front of my friends, so I couldn't help but feel a bit anxious." gen "Guilty that they were missing all the fun no doubt." her "That's not what I meant!" @@ -2734,7 +2734,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_down as xray_overlay her "I was feeling anxious because they might find out what I've been putting myself through for the sake of our house!" - gen "I see... So not only were they missing all the fun, but also all the points they could earn while doing some favours." + gen "I see... So, not only were they missing all the fun, but also all the points they could earn while doing some favours." her "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") show her_vibrators_public eyes_sad as xray_child @@ -2772,7 +2772,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public nude blush_heavy mouth_lip_bite eyes_left as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy blush_heavy mouth_lip_bite eyes_left as xray_overlay - her "I was standing outside, in the middle of a courtyard, my friends right in front me as the vibrators had began shaking against my private parts..." + her "I was standing outside, in the middle of a courtyard, my friends right in front me as the vibrators had begun shaking against my private parts..." her "Of course... Knowing you, I had no doubts it had only just begun and there was more to come." gen "You've got me all figured out, huh." her "*Hmph*..." @@ -2785,7 +2785,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "It brought my last experience back to life again, and I started doubting if it was a wise decision to put myself through this again." gen "Surely you weren't considering missing out on, possibly, one of the best orgasms of your life." her "I would never be concerned about missing out on such a thing!" - gen "Right, of course. There no way that would happen on my watch." + gen "Right, of course. There's no way that would happen on my watch." her "..." gen "And then what?" @@ -2815,7 +2815,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy mouth_lip_bite eyes_big_crossed as xray_overlay her "..." - gen "Now, speak the truth... You were enjoying it weren't you?" + gen "Now, speak the truth... You were enjoying it, weren't you?" her "I--" her "I was not!" gen "(She's such a know-it-all, yet she never learns...)" @@ -2833,7 +2833,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_clenched as xray_overlay her "All these thoughts were racing through my head, and I didn't know what to do, I could barely control my body." - gen "Right, that's very relatable and all but--" + gen "Right, that's very relatable and all, but--" her "It's the truth!" gen "Sure, sure, I believe you..." gen "So, what were these \"things\" going through your head exactly?" @@ -2849,7 +2849,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_worried eyes_down as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_worried eyes_down as xray_overlay - her "I thought that if I had ran off, you wouldn't pay me and it would all be for naught..." + her "I thought that if I had run off, you wouldn't pay me, and it would all be for naught..." her "Although, I didn't have much time to consider my options as the decision was being made for me..." gen "Made for--" gen "Oh, I see." @@ -2905,7 +2905,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "I was getting a bit excited, okay?" gen "*Heh-heh*..." - gen "So, what were the boys doing? Surely they must've noticed their friend going delirious?" + gen "So, what were the boys doing? Surely, they must've noticed their friend going delirious?" her "At that point, it was difficult to tell, they were too busy playing with their balls..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") #Could cut back to room screen @@ -2924,7 +2924,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: gen "Watching them gobbling stones is one thing, but since when was \"ballplay\" in the courtyard acceptable?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Ballpl--{w=0.4} [name_genie_hermione]... I'm talking about the gobstone balls!" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Gob-- Oh!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(The naming conventions makes no sense in this universe...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(The naming conventions make no sense in this universe...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It should be named something different then, like \"Gob-balls\"! {w=0.3}Or something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Actually, that sounds even more confusing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -2975,7 +2975,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public -npc_sus_ron as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy -npc_sus_ron as xray_overlay - her "Even after he went back focusing on their game... He kept glancing over at me every once in a while." + her "Even after he went back to focusing on their game... He kept glancing over at me every once in a while." her "Which did make things much more difficult, every time he looked over, I'm sure my expression changed into some stupid grimace, trying to cover for what was going on." gen "I'm sure it made things harder alright..." her "Yes... My situation was getting rocky by the minute, all I could concentrate on was trying to stand as still and be as quiet as possible..." @@ -2997,12 +2997,12 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: gen "Alright, alright..." gen "Please continue." her "I don't know if I feel like it, if you're going to continue making these wild accusations..." - gen "You're the one that started talking about balls and boners... I hardly have any interest in such things... {w=0.3}Unless it's my own that is." + gen "You're the one eho started talking about balls and boners... I hardly have any interest in such things... {w=0.3}Unless it's my own, that is." her "..." gen "Now then, tell me more about how you, {i}DID NOT{/i} get off from your friend watching you." her "*Sigh*..." - her "Well... At that point the intensity changed again." + her "Well... At that point, the intensity changed again." gen "Oh right, I--" $ _vibrator_last = "high" @@ -3022,7 +3022,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_neutral eyes_sad effects_shaky_legs as xray_overlay her "Yes, with the intensity going down, I could feel my legs quaking. I had to coax myself from falling to my knees." - her "It was as if I had been thrown into a cold lake and my body were only just beginning to get used to the temperature." + her "It was as if I had been thrown into a cold lake and my body was only just beginning to get used to the temperature." her "Well, to be honest, I'm not sure what I was feeling." gen "Intense pleasure? Anticipation?" gen "Wait, I know!" @@ -3093,7 +3093,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public eyes_closed mouth_neutral as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_closed mouth_neutral as xray_overlay - her "It was just enough for me to enjoy myself and at the same time, not have to worry about being caught." + her "It was just enough for me to enjoy myself, and at the same time, not have to worry about being caught." else: # Strength was set to high before. @@ -3101,7 +3101,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_down mouth_neutral as xray_overlay her "After the initial shock, it was finally at a level where I could at the very least lose any suspicion they might've gained towards me..." - her "At first, they just looked over me every once in a while, as if wanting to check up on me, but soon enough they were fully engrossed in their silly game as usual." + her "At first, they just looked over at me every once in a while, as if wanting to check up on me, but soon enough they were fully engrossed in their silly game as usual." show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_worried eyes_closed as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_worried eyes_closed as xray_overlay @@ -3126,13 +3126,13 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy wetness_vagina as xray_overlay her "I could also feel that I was getting even wetter by the minute..." - her "Not to the point where it was out of my control of course but..." + her "Not to the point where it was out of my control, of course, but..." gen "Of course." show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_worried eyes_sad as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_worried eyes_sad as xray_overlay - her "My breath began to quicken slightly but I managed to keep it in check, only looking over every once in a while to make sure they weren't suspecting anything." + her "My breath began to quicken slightly, but I managed to keep it in check, only looking over every once in a while to make sure they weren't suspecting anything." her "And that's when you--" her "You--" gen "Don't tell me..." @@ -3155,7 +3155,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: # Strength was set to medium before. # Vagina is wet - # This is the second best ending. Hermione cums once but she manages to hide it from her friends. + # This is the second best ending. Hermione cums once, but she manages to hide it from her friends. show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_worried eyes_clenched mouth_lip_bite effects_shaky_legs as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_worried eyes_clenched mouth_lip_bite effects_shaky_legs as xray_overlay @@ -3213,7 +3213,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: gen "Says who?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Says me!" ("scream", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I mean...{w=0.4} You got away with it, didn't you? Surely it's not such a big deal." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean...{w=0.4} You got away with it, didn't you? Surely, it's not such a big deal." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "It is a big deal!" ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I'm constantly doing all these deplorable things, way beyond anything I thought I'd ever do, and this is just another step in that direction." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "R") @@ -3227,7 +3227,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her @ cheeks blush "How could you say such a thing!?" ("angry", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Isn't that what you just said?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Yes, but you're not supposed to agree with me!" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Why not? It's true isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why not? It's true, isn't it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "In any case, I don't see how it affects anything." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Lines are meant to be crossed, it's how we achieve our true potential." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But I didn't cross the line! They didn't see!" ("angry", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -3269,14 +3269,14 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public wetness_legs npc_shock_ron npc_shock_harry as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy wetness_legs npc_shock_ron npc_shock_harry as xray_overlay - her "As wave after wave hit me the only thing I could hear was my friends gasps, which in the moment, only made the sensation so much stronger." + her "As wave after wave hit me the only thing I could hear was my friend's gasps, which at that moment, only made the sensation so much stronger." show her_vibrators_public eyes_clenched mouth_lip_bite as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_clenched mouth_lip_bite as xray_overlay her "I tried to control myself, but my attempts were futile, my excitement kept flowing down my shaky thighs." - her "I could feel each and every pulse across my entire body, first it spread out from my head, then breasts, going down to my legs, and all the way out to my toes." - gen "Damn, you go girl!" + her "I could feel each and every pulse across my entire body, first it spread out from my head, then across my breasts, down to my legs, and all the way out to my toes." + gen "Damn, you go, girl!" show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_neutral eyes_ahegao as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_neutral eyes_ahegao as xray_overlay @@ -3302,9 +3302,9 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: play sound "sounds/fall.ogg" with hpunch - her "My legs finally buckled, as orgasm, after orgasm had finally took its toll on my body." - her "My friends seeing this, yelped out in shock, calling my name again." - her "And after sitting down on my knees in a moment that felt like eternity, I finally slumped to the floor and everything went dark." + her "My legs finally buckled, as orgasm, after orgasm, had finally taken its toll on my body." + her "My friends, seeing this, yelped out in shock, and called my name again." + her "And after sitting down on my knees for a moment that felt like an eternity, I finally slumped to the floor and everything went dark." her @ cheeks blush "The only thing I could remember before passing out were the vibrators, finally coming to a stop..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") stop background fadeout 2 @@ -3368,7 +3368,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_left mouth_neutral as xray_overlay her "Trying to pull myself together, I only managed to muster an apologetic smile and stammer how close of a call it was..." - gen "To cum all over them you mean?" + gen "To cum all over them, you mean?" her "No, I meant their game..." show her_vibrators_public mouth_lip_bite as xray_child @@ -3485,14 +3485,14 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her "And I must mention, it is rather unusual for me to--" gen "Right, you're one of those \"Rinse and repeat\" kind of girls." her "*Hmph*... And what makes you say that?" - gen "Fine, you're a kinky girl that loves being edged and denied an orgasm." + gen "Fine, you're a kinky girl who loves being edged and denied an orgasm." her "That's not--" gen "Come on, just admit it..." her "Why would I...--" gen "Just say it...{w=0.4} I'll even give you some points if you do." her "I--{w=0.4} I am a kinky girl..." gen "\"That\"..." - her "That loves being edged..." + her "Who loves being edged..." her "...and denied an orgasm..." gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!" @@ -3505,7 +3505,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public mouth_open effects_shaky_legs as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy mouth_open effects_shaky_legs as xray_overlay - her "What--{w=0.2} Oh...{w=0.4} Well, it didn't stop there... My legs started shaking and the wetness continued trickling down my legs..." + her "What--{w=0.2} Oh...{w=0.4} Well, it didn't stop there... My legs started shaking, and the wetness continued trickling down my legs..." show her_vibrators_public mouth_lip_bite as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy mouth_lip_bite as xray_overlay @@ -3604,13 +3604,13 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show her_vibrators_public eyebrows_neutral eyes_closed mouth_open as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyebrows_neutral eyes_closed mouth_open as xray_overlay - her "Yes, at last the intensity went down and I let out a sigh of relief." + her "Yes, at last the intensity went down, and I let out a sigh of relief." show her_vibrators_public eyes_sad mouth_neutral as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_sad mouth_neutral as xray_overlay - her "It was bad enough that I had gotten excited in front of my friends. I don't know what I would've done if I had went over the edge right in front of them..." - gen "(Damn, I hoped she would've be done by then...)" + her "The fact that I got excited in front of my friends was bad enough. I am not sure what I would have done if I had gone over the edge in front of them..." + gen "(Damn, I hoped she would've been done by then...)" show her_vibrators_public eyes_left mouth_open as xray_child show her_vibrators_public_proxy eyes_left mouth_open as xray_overlay @@ -3689,7 +3689,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: her @ cheeks blush "Yes..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Tell me what happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well, after I exited your office..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "I was wracking my brain trying to decide when would be the best time to use the vibrators." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "I was racking my brain trying to decide when would be the best time to use the vibrators." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" $ hermione.strip("top") @@ -3713,13 +3713,13 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: gen "Always thinking about your academics I see." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Of course..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Although unfortunately for me, I was one of the last students to enter the class, and as usual the Slytherins took all the spots in the back and I ended up sitting right at the front of the class." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Although unfortunately for me, I was one of the last students to enter the class, and as usual, the Slytherins took all the spots in the back and I ended up sitting right at the front of the class." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her @ cheeks blush "As you can imagine, it made things much more difficult as I was in view of everyone behind me." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "But it was the last lesson for today, so I had to go with my plan..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Good to hear, edging yourself for an entire day can't be that healthy..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I meant I didn't want to forfeit the points!" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Right... The points... Speaking of, why don't you get to it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*tsk*..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") #closed eyes in frustration + her @ cheeks blush "*Tsk*..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") #closed eyes in frustration her @ cheeks blush "So, I was trying to time the vibrations with the music--" ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Hold on...{w=0.4} You were doing what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "You asked me to get to the point... Isn't that what you asked?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -3792,7 +3792,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return: show vibrators_floor at Transform(xpos=340, ypos=355, zoom=0.5) with d5 - her @ cheeks blush "No thanks..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "No, thanks..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Or I could just keep them for safekeeping, for now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide vibrators_floor diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/ass_expand.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/ass_expand.rpy index 40723bd9..6cd63932 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/ass_expand.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/ass_expand.rpy @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "Bottoms up!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: #Drank her "Another one? How do you have time to make these?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Potion making is easy when you've been practicing for as long as I have." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Potion making is easy when you've been practising for as long as I have." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I see..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Go on, I think you'll enjoy this one." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Just have a whiff and see for yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: her "You want me to what?!" ("angry", "squint", "worried", "mid") gen "Go to class!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Isn't that what you're supposed to do in school?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Not when you've just drank a potion like this!" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Not when you've just drunk a potion like this!" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid") gen "I suppose you might not fit on the chairs that well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "That is not the reason..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I can't believe you're asking me to expose myself like this..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: her "My butt... It's--" ("clench", "squint", "base", "down") play sound "sounds/slap.ogg" if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bottom", "panties"): - nar "Hermione suddenly jolts forward as if she was hit by something on her butt." + nar "Hermione suddenly jolts forward as if she were hit by something on her butt." her @ cheeks blush "Ouch!" ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "stare") her @ cheeks blush "S--{w=0.2} Something's happening to it, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("clench", "happy", "worried", "down") gen "You'd probably want to take off your clothes right about now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: pause .5 her @ cheeks blush "" ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "down") - gen "[name_hermione_genie]! Stripping in your headmasters office, how indecent!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "[name_hermione_genie]! Stripping in your headmaster's office, how indecent!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if hermione.is_any_worn("bottom", "panties"): play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg" @@ -360,11 +360,11 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: nar "Hermione glances down at her new exterior in disbelief." else: # 19+ her @ cheeks blush "And my ass, it feels so... Good." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up") - nar "You start to notice Hermione's ass jiggle slightly." + nar "You start to notice Hermione's ass jiggling slightly." her @ cheeks blush "Something is happening with my body, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "down") play sound "sounds/slap.ogg" her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("open_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") - nar "Hermione jolts forward as if her ass was spanked by an invisible force." + nar "Hermione jolts forward as if her ass were spanked by an invisible force." gen "*Heh-Heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bottom", "panties"): gen "You'd probably want to take off your clothes right about now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -387,7 +387,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: her @ cheeks blush "So, when will is it supposed to happen?" ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "When is what supposed to happen?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "When is my butt supposed to grow?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Your butt? Why I just wanted to see if could get you to take your clothes off!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Your butt? Why, I just wanted to see if I could get you to take your clothes off!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What, so it won't actually--" ("angry", "base", "base", "down") else: #Not wearing top, bottom or panties gen "That means the potion is working..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: else: #Drank nar "Hermione's face turns into a grimace as the potion begins taking effect." her @ cheeks blush "There's that weird feeling again... Are you sure it's supposed to do this?" ("disgust", "squint", "base", "stare") - gen "I mean, the potion haven't even started to take effect yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean, the potion hasn't even started to take effect yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bra", "bottom", "panties"): gen "Speaking of, you'd probably want to take some of those clothes off right about now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh... Alright..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -495,13 +495,13 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: her @ cheeks blush "*Ehm*... Yes..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Alright then... Go ahead..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ hermione.strip("clothes") - her @ cheeks blush "This potions sure is taking its time..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "This potion sure is taking its time..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Patience, [name_hermione_genie]... We'll see the effects kicking in soon enough..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Any minute now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "closed", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Nothing is--" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - nar "Hermione suddenly jolts forward once more as if she was hit hard on her butt." + nar "Hermione suddenly jolts forward once more as if she were hit hard on her butt." play sound "sounds/slap.ogg" if states.her.level < 19: her @ cheeks blush "Ouch!" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "Beats me...{w}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") #pout - nar "You start to notice Hermione's ass increase in size." + nar "You start to notice Hermione's ass increasing in size." $ hermione.equip(her_hips_ass1) play sound "sounds/boing05.ogg" @@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "Good... Now let's see what your final verdict will be..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "closed", "worried", "mid") nar "You begin moving your hands up and down her thighs, lightly brushing against the underside of her butt." - nar "Hermione doesn't respond but you feel her muscles relax a bit more as you continue rubbing her." + nar "Hermione doesn't respond, but you feel her muscles relax a bit more as you continue rubbing her." her @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "Moving your hand up again, you resume massaging her soft cheeks..." her @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*..." ("soft", "closed", "worried", "mid") #closed eyes #blush @@ -707,7 +707,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "(I barely even touched her yet...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Continuing the massage, you begin kneading her soft cheeks with your thumbs..." her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare") - nar "Grabbing the sides of her waist you move your thumbs in a circular motion, giving her a squeeze each time you close your palm." + nar "Grabbing the sides of her waist, you move your thumbs in a circular motion, giving her a squeeze each time you close your palm." her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "Lightening your grip, you slowly slide your hands alongside the sides of her figure and move them underneath her cheeks." her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} You...{w=0.3} You're..." ("soft", "closed", "worried", "mid") @@ -891,7 +891,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "What was that, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Pushing Hermione over your desk you finger her ass vigorously." + nar "Pushing Hermione over your desk, you finger her ass vigorously." call her_chibi_scene("lie_on_desk_fingering_slow") play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg" @@ -909,10 +909,10 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: call her_chibi_scene("lie_on_desk_fingering_slow") play background "sounds/slickloopveryfast.ogg" - nar "Grabbing her hip with your other hand you relentlessly finger fuck her asshole." + nar "Grabbing her hip with your other hand, you relentlessly finger-fuck her asshole." her @ cheeks blush "...{w=0.03}{nw}" ("open_tongue", "base", "base", "up") her @ cheeks blush "...{fast}" ("open_wide_tongue", "base", "base", "ahegao") - nar "And suddenly you feel her body go limp as her asshole relentlessly quivers around your fingers." + nar "And suddenly, you feel her body go limp as her asshole relentlessly quivers around your fingers." her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*!" ("smile", "base", "worried", "ahegao") stop background fadeout 2 @@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: stop background fadeout 2 her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Be careful--" ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "R") - nar "With a small yelp and popping sound you quickly pull your finger out of her asshole." + nar "With a small yelp and popping sound, you quickly pull your finger out of her asshole." play sound "sounds/pop01.ogg" with kissiris @@ -967,7 +967,8 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: show screen blkfade with d5 - nar "Standing there for a moment you begin feeling Hermione's breathing slow down, finally after a couple of minutes once her ass shrunk back down she straightens her back and makes it to the front of your desk." + nar "Standing there for a moment, you begin feeling Hermione's breathing slow down..." + nar "Finally after a couple of minutes, once her ass shrunk back down, she straightens her back and makes it to the front of your desk..." call her_chibi("stand","desk","base", flip=False) call gen_chibi("sit_behind_desk") @@ -1001,7 +1002,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "Oh, I almost forgot, {number=current_payout} points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh right... The points.... Thank you." ("soft", "wink", "base", "mid") - nar "Hermione still a bit dazed, stumbles slightly as she makes her way to your door." + nar "Hermione, still a bit dazed, stumbles slightly as she makes her way to your door." call her_walk("mid", "base") pause .2 @@ -1045,8 +1046,8 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: $ hermione.equip(her_hips_ass2) - nar "As Hermione's straightens her back you watch as her ass begins shrinking in size." - nar "With a short sigh, she then walk up to the front of your desk." + nar "As Hermione's straightens her back, you watch as her ass begins shrinking in size." + nar "With a short sigh, she then walks up to the front of your desk." $ hermione.equip(her_hips_ass1) @@ -1068,7 +1069,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: gen "{number=current_payout} points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you, I'll head back to class then..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") else: - gen "Yes... No wait, I almost forgot!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... No, wait, I almost forgot!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{number=current_payout} to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh right... The points.... Thank you." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -1116,7 +1117,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_give: ##Send Hermione to class Ass expand Return event## label her_potion_ass_return: - #Hermione enters office and walks to front of desk + #Hermione enters the office, and walks to the front of the desk call her_walk("desk", "base", action="enter") if states.her.public_level < 19: @@ -1140,19 +1141,19 @@ label her_potion_ass_return: gen "Professor Snape and the Slytherins is like the top of the list of things you constantly complain about." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I don't always complain about them!" ("disgust", "squint", "annoyed", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "That said... I'd normally enjoy the free time as you mentioned... But manoeuvering that... *Err*..." ("angry", "squint", "worried", "R") + her "That said... I'd normally enjoy the free time as you mentioned... But manoeuvring that... *Err*..." ("angry", "squint", "worried", "R") gen "Dump truck?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") her "Yes, that..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") her "We didn't even get all the way down to Hogsmeade, which is normally where the Slytherins would leave the group before they took notice..." ("open", "squint", "annoyed", "R") - her "I was just about to give them a piece of my mind but this thing made me lose my balance and fall onto the ground..." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "down") + her "I was just about to give them a piece of my mind, but this thing made me lose my balance and fall onto the ground..." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "down") her "And to no surprise, they stopped in their tracks howling with laughter..." ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R") gen "Surely some Slytherin students trying to make a scene isn't enough to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course not!" ("angry", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "But they're not the only ones who have been starting at it." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "Me falling over on the way to Hogsmeade wasn't exactly a one time occurrence..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "Me falling over on the way to Hogsmeade wasn't exactly a one-time occurrence..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Whilst other people weren't openly laughing at it, I could still hear them whispering and giggling..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "I felt as if I was going die from embarrassment..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "I felt as if I was going to die from embarrassment..." ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "They're just jealous." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Are they, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well... Maybe not the falling over part." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1173,7 +1174,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_return: fit "cover" with fade - her @ cheeks blush "In today's history of magic lesson I was asked by professor Binns to help outline the timeline of the Witch hunts of the 14th century on the blackboard..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "In today's \"History of magic\" lesson, I was asked by professor Binns to help outline the timeline of the Witch hunts of the 14th century on the blackboard..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Sounds dreadfully boring..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "History of magic is not boring, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1199,7 +1200,7 @@ label her_potion_ass_return: show her_potions_public_expand_ass_a2 as cg: ease 6.0 zoom 0.75 offset (-2100, -500) - gen "Defined derriere!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Defined derrière!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show her_potions_public_expand_ass_a2 as cg: ease_quad 30.0 zoom 0.25 offset (0, 0) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy index 46f7007d..0a84cd87 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/breast_expand.rpy @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: menu: "\"No, you fucking weirdo!\"": her @ cheeks blush "What did you just call me?" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "Oh, sorry did I say that out loud?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, sorry, did I say that out loud?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "You had your teeth shrunk?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now that's too much even for me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "... It means yes, I want you to drink the potion." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "(Weirdo...)" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") "\"Yes, just don't make it weird.\"": - her "Hey, I'm not the one asking people to drink random concoctions am I?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "Hey, I'm not the one asking people to drink random concoctions, am I?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Fair point." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: her "*Sniff*" ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "*Sigh*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "(My breasts ached so much...{w=0.4} I can't believe even the smallest touch almost made me cum on the spot...)" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "(If I spend another night relieving myself I'll start running out of excuses on why I'm missing the morning class...)" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "(If I spend another night relieving myself I'll start running out of excuses for why I'm missing the morning class...)" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "[name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "(Although it sure was enjoyable...)" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: if not states.her.ev.potions.breast_expand_drank: gen "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} It appears as if the potion may have been a failure or something should've happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh... So what should I--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Oh... So, what should I--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") nar "You notice Hermione's breasts bounce slightly as the potion begins to take effect." @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then I maybe it's best you head back to class for today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh... Okay." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Since you drank it I suppose you've earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Since you drank it, I suppose you've earned your points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{number=current_payout} points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ gryffindor += current_payout @@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: if not states.her.ev.potions.breast_expand_drank: - nar "As Hermione reaches the door she stops and her body lurches slightly, the potion now beginning to spread through her body." + nar "As Hermione reaches the door, she stops and her body lurches slightly, the potion now beginning to spread through her body." #Hermione turns around call her_chibi(flip=False) pause .5 @@ -237,13 +237,13 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: "\"Oh... It was supposed to make your breasts bigger.\"": if states.her.level < 19: her @ cheeks blush "It was supposed to do what?" ("open", "base", "base", "stare") # Slightly shocked - gen "What? You didn't oppose to drinking this potion did you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "What? You didn't oppose to drinking this potion, did you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "No, but I didn't--" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It's not like you're not getting anything out of this, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "That's true..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") her "Oh well, whatever, the potion obviously did not work, there's no point arguing about it." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Exactly." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "In any case, you better be off or you'll miss class." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "In any case, you better be off, or you'll miss class." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: her @ cheeks blush "It-- I thought you liked my--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -251,13 +251,13 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "Besides, wouldn't it be fun to try something different for a change?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I guess..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Anyhow, back to class you go [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Let me know if there's any developments." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Let me know if there are any developments." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"It's a secret.\"": her "I see..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Yeah, too bad it didn't work." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Right..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - nar "You watch as Hermione shift around uncomfortably." + nar "You watch as Hermione shifts around uncomfortably." her "I think I better head off then." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let me know if there's any... developments." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "(Not to mention, it would affect my reputation...)" ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") her "*Ehm*..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "You know, *Ah*...{w=0.4} I don't feel that great so I think I'll just head to my dorm for today." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "You know, *Ah*...{w=0.4} I don't feel that great, so I think I'll just head to my dorm for today." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Are you sure? It's not very like you to miss class, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes, I--{w=0.2} I'm sure..." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") gen "Very well [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -359,32 +359,32 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: "-Tell her to display her titties-" if not hermione.is_worn("top", "bra"): - gen "Give me a better look of those tits." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Give me a better look at those tits." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if not states.her.ev.potions.breast_expand_drank: if states.her.level < 19: her "I don't think so [name_genie_hermione]... You're only paying me for drinking the potion." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") if hermione.is_any_worn("top", "bra"): - her "If you expected to see me without anything covering them then you should've said so at the start." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh, I didn't think that would be necessary is all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "That's it then? It makes me show you my breasts? Is it some sort of mind control potion?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "If you expected to see me without anything covering them, then you should've said so at the start." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + gen "Oh, I didn't think that would be necessary, is all." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "That's it then? Does it make me show you my breasts? Is it some sort of mind control potion?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Mind control? Where's the fun in that? No, this is something much more entertaining." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "If not mind control, then what on earth--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "You notice Hermione's clothes getting tighter as the potion begins to take effect." nar "Hermione unconsciously adjusts them as they get less and less comfortable by the minute." - her "*Hmm*... Something better be happening soon or I'm out of here." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*... Something better happen soon, or I'm out of here." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Looks to me as if something's already happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Something--{w=0.2} What do you--{w=0.2} What's wrong with me?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "There's nothing wrong with you. Although I'd get those breasts out if I were you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - her "If you expected me to give you a better view then you should've said so at the start." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "If you expected me to give you a better view, then you should've said so at the start." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "If you say so... You won't really have much choice in a minute or two once that potion kicks in." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What's that's supposed to mean?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You'll just have to wait and find out, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well whatever it is, it better happen soon otherwise I'm going--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Well whatever it is, it better happen soon, otherwise I'm going--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") nar "You notice Hermione's breasts jiggle slightly as the potion begins taking effect." - nar "After a brief moment of confusion Hermione then continues..." - her "As I said, something better be happening soon or I'm leaving." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") + nar "After a brief moment of confusion, Hermione then continues..." + her "As I said, something better be happening soon, or I'm leaving." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "I wouldn't worry about it, from the looks of it, something already happened." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "It-- Where? What's happened to me?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Well, nothing major yet..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "Looks like the potion is beginning to take effect." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "It is? What's it doing?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") - nar "Hermione grabs her breasts to check them just as they give of another lurch." + nar "Hermione grabs her breasts to check them just as they give off another lurch." her @ cheeks blush "Oh my!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "But this means..." ("soft", "wide", "base", "stare") @@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: "\"No way!\"": gen "Aren't you already getting enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Does your greed have no end?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "A simple no would be enough..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "A simple \"no\" would've been enough..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") "\"How about ten extra points?\"": her "*Hmm*. That does sound fair." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her @ cheeks blush "Is--{w=0.2} Is it normal for the potion to make them so sensitive?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare") gen "Sounds like a side effect, but I'd call that better than advertised." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} What...{w=0.4} What's that supposed to mean?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare") - nar "Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body." + nar "Hermione's breasts bounce slightly as the potion spreads through her body." $ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1) play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg" @@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: if not states.her.ev.potions.breast_expand_groped: her @ cheeks blush "Depends what it is you want..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "To weigh those melons of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "To weigh those melons, of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Sorry?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I want you to come here for a moment and let me have a feel." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Oh..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") @@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "So?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I want twenty extra points..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Now get over here so we can find out just how much bigger they got!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now get over here, so we can find out just how much bigger they got!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") #annoyed #glancing away #blush $ current_payout += 20 @@ -668,9 +668,9 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her @ cheeks blush "In that case I want another twenty points like last time..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Twenty points again?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Yes." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... I can give you additional ten points at best." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... I can give you an additional ten points at best." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But..." ("mad", "squint", "worried", "mid") - gen "If I were to give you the same amount of points every time then why would you ever want to do something new." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If I were to give you the same amount of points every time, then why would you ever want to do something new." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "No... Ten extra points should suffice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Alright, fine... I'll do it..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: else: #19+ her @ cheeks blush "I should've guessed..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") #smirk - gen "Can't waste such an opportunity can we?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Can't waste such an opportunity, can we?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "If touching my breasts is what you want then go ahead..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I don't mind..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") # smirk @@ -790,9 +790,9 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: nar "You resume running your fingers across her breasts." if states.her.level < 19: - gen "Those points aren't going to earn themselves are they?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Those points aren't going to earn themselves, are they?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You pinch Hermione's nipples making her yelp in surprise." + nar "You pinch Hermione's nipples, making her yelp in surprise." her @ cheeks blush "*Oohh*..." ("angry", "closed", "worried", "mid") #pleasure #still eyes closed gen "..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her @ cheeks blush "Don't pinch them, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "It looked like you enjoyed it though..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I did not!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") #blush - gen "Very well... I suppose that's it for today then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very well... I suppose that's it for today..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "But I'm still--{w=0.2} I mean...{w=0.4} Alright..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") show screen blkfade @@ -873,7 +873,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: gen "No buts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Not this time at least." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Sigh*... It's as if you are obsessed with all things sexual." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Only when it's about you my dear [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Only when it's about you, my dear [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") # Blushes her @ cheeks blush "I'll get going then..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That you shall." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -891,7 +891,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her "Even then, the castle is full of moving pictures, they're like surveillance..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") else: her "You want me to go out like this?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", flip=False, trans=d3) - her "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} No I think I'd rather stay in here until I can put my top on..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") + her "*Hmm*...{w=0.3} No, I think I'd rather stay in here until I can put my top on..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Fine. I guess you can wait here until the effects wear off..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I don't really mind either way." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: @@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: nar "As you continue rubbing her, you notice that Hermione's eyes are glazed over, numbingly staring into space." - gen "Well, well, well... You sure are sensitive aren't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, well, well... You sure are sensitive, aren't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #unfocused pupils from this point nar "You start alternating, pinching and pulling her nipples out as far as you can, then letting them go before grabbing them again." @@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*..." ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid") - nar "Suddenly you feel Hermione begin to tense up and you grab her breasts and squeeze her nipples hard between your fingers." + nar "Suddenly you feel Hermione begin to tense up, and you grab her breasts and squeeze her nipples hard between your fingers." her @ cheeks blush "*Ngh*--" ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") @@ -1005,7 +1005,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give: label her_potion_breasts_return: stop music fadeout 1 - #Hermione enters office and walks to front of desk + #Hermione enters the office, and walks to the front the of desk call her_walk("desk", "base", action="enter") play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed @@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "Do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Making me attend a class looking like that!" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "On the day we have potion lessons on the schedule no less." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "So I take it you caught some of the students attention?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So I take it you caught some of the students' attention?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Some? I would be surprised if all of them weren't staring at me at some point..." ("clench", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "And that includes Professor Snape!" ("disgust", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "(I'd be more surprised if they didn't stare...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her @ cheeks blush "The Slytherin students' snide remarks is not what bothers me, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "But it's hard to focus on the precision needed for potion brewing when everyone in the room is staring at you." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I could barely see the cutting board as I was preparing my ingredients..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "(Even then I bet she was the most focused of all of them...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Even then, I bet she was the most focused of all of them...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Have you ever tried picking up Ashwinder's Egg with two beach balls attached to your chest?" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Can't say that I have." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "--Once I had finally managed to finish my potion, I accidentally knocked it off and smashed it onto the floor..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -1062,12 +1062,12 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") else: #Repeat gen "[name_hermione_genie]... Had a fun day in class?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "How did you manage to convince me of doing this again..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", trans=d3) + her "How did you manage to convince me to do this again..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", trans=d3) gen "Convince you to do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Go to class like that!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "mid") gen "There was convincing involved?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmph*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "So... It didn't go well I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So... It didn't go that well, I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid") show her_potion_public_expand_breasts_c1 as cg zorder 17: @@ -1081,12 +1081,12 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: linear 180.0 zoom 0.6 offset (0, 135) anchor (0.0, 0.4) with fade - her "Even though I was ready for it and I knew what to expect it didn't go much better than last time..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") + her "Even though I was ready for it and I knew what to expect, it didn't go much better than last time..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "R") her "Any optimism I had after leaving your office went out the window once I remembered we had potions class today." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") - her "When making my way there I was hoping that the effects wouldn't be as prevalent as last time..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "mid") + her "When making my way there, I was hoping that the effects wouldn't be as prevalent as last time..." ("open", "squint", "worried", "mid") her "But I didn't even get all the way down the grand staircase before my breasts started growing rapidly." ("angry", "squint", "worried", "mid") her "I must've had at least a dozen portraits stare at me walking through the corridors on the way there." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "R") - gen "Portraits aren't real you know." + gen "Portraits aren't real, you know." her "I know that... But having all these famous witches and wizards stare at you..." ("angry", "squint", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Well... It's embarrassing... Many of them are role models of mine." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "But... They're paintings..." @@ -1117,16 +1117,16 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "I mean, Who could blame him..." gen "You'd be surprised what people do when they think nobody is looking." her @ cheeks blush "Oh, He knew I saw him doing it!" ("mad", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "But of course everyone else's eyes were on me so he got away with it..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "But of course everyone else's eyes were on me, so he got away with it..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I couldn't believe it... He was barely every trying to conceal it." ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Are you sure he wasn't just scratching--" her @ cheeks blush "No [name_genie_hermione]... It was out!" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "If I was stood any closer to him I'm sure he could've hit me with it." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "If I was stood any closer to him, I'm sure he could've hit me with it." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") gen "(Amateur...)" gen "Wait, when you say \"it\"..." her @ cheeks blush "You know exactly what I mean..." ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") her @ cheeks blush "If seeing him do that wasn't bad enough, I was also forced to clean it off the floor afterwards." ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") - gen "Very admirable of you [name_hermione_genie]... Boys will be boys after all, you know how messy they can be." + gen "Very admirable of you [name_hermione_genie]... Boys will be boys, after all, you know how messy they can be." her @ cheeks blush "I didn't volunteer! Snape-- I mean... Professor Snape made me do it." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure he didn't know... He probably just thought someone spilled their potion again." her "I'm sure..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") @@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her @ cheeks blush "And I was making my way to my next class when I suddenly bumped into another student." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Poor guy probably didn't even know what hit him." - her @ cheeks blush "I didn't mean it in a literal sense. {size=-4}Unfortunately...{/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") # Changed Fortunately to unfortunately as with High reputation, she'd be fine with it. + her @ cheeks blush "I didn't mean it in a literal sense. {size=-4}Unfortunately...{/size}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Although he wasn't exactly looking where he was going and ended up walking right into one of the suits of armour..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Which did boost my confidence quite handsomely..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") #smile #glance away gen "I'm glad that our little experiment could give you such a boost in self-esteem." @@ -1200,7 +1200,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her @ cheeks blush "So it didn't take very long for all the students to notice what was going on..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "At first, it was just those Slytherin delinquents..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And I can deal with them no problem, as you already know--" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "But then boys from Gryffindor and other houses joined in and began making comments about my chest too." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "But then boys from Gryffindor and other houses joined in and began making remarks about my chest too." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "What about the girls? Did any of them notice?" her @ cheeks blush "Of course they did! One particular girl from Ravenclaw was saying that I'd done this to try and catch the eye of Professor Snape..." ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "As if!" ("open", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") # annoyed, looking away @@ -1212,7 +1212,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "What happened next?" her @ cheeks blush "*Ahem*... Well, the lesson was almost over... But that's when {i}it{/i} happened..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "{i}It{/i}? [name_hermione_genie]?" - her @ cheeks blush "Yes... I was doing my best to follow the potion recipe, but I must have gotten something wrong." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "Yes... I was doing my best to follow the potion recipe, but I must have got something wrong." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "Maybe I was distracted... Or maybe I dropped something important..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Maybe you just were horny!" her @ cheeks blush "Or maybe... I just couldn't see all the instructions because your concoction gave me those massive things..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "Well, did you?" her @ cheeks blush "I said that the brewer would like to remain anonymous, as to not expose our arrangement." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "I see... I suppose that's for the best." - her @ cheeks blush "Professor Snape of course, took this as a chance to lecture the others on the dangers of swelling solutions." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "Professor Snape, of course, took this as a chance to lecture the others on the dangers of swelling solutions." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Saying that I had obviously been more concerned with getting everyone's attention than following his directions!" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Even going so far as implying that I had deliberately caused the accident so that I could show off my chest!" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "The very idea makes me fume with anger!" ("clench", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -1281,14 +1281,14 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "Professor Snape is the potions master after all, if he thinks these types of potions are dangerous--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Professor Dumbledore!" ("scream", "happyCl", "base", "mid") #closed #yelling #blush her @ cheeks blush "I-I mean, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") # apologetic - gen "Oh alright, if you don't want me to interfere then I guess I won't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh alright, if you don't want me to interfere, then I guess I won't." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") # smile :) gen "I guess we're done here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well done [name_hermione_genie], {number=current_payout} points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "May I please be excused?" ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Somewhere you need to be?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Yes... I need to... *Ehm*..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "I see. Some time alone in your bed is exactly what you need I think." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see... Some time alone in your bed is what you need, I think." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "That's--" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "We both know I'm right, there's no point hiding it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Talk to you later, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1297,7 +1297,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her "Hello [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How's your day been?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Pretty good thanks." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Pretty good, thanks." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Can't complain, you know." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Good to hear, anything unusual happen?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Well, I caught the eye of more students than usual... Thanks to the potion you gave me." ("open", "squint", "base", "R") @@ -1306,7 +1306,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: her @ cheeks blush "Being gawked over by the boys, or being stared at jealously by the girls is quite the confidence boost." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Although I think it's worth considering putting some sort of countermeasures up to prevent people from walking into things as much." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "If a big pair of breasts is enough to have students knock over suits of armours or smash into walls, it's only a matter of time until someone seriously hurts themselves." ("soft", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "That's easier said than done [name_hermione_genie]... I'm not sure if you noticed, but this castle is made out of stone." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's easier said than done [name_hermione_genie]... I'm not sure if you noticed, but this castle is made from stone." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Of course I have, I'm just saying..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "At least if we put some cushioning charms down it wouldn't be as bad." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Or perhaps if you didn't entrance people with those big titties then they would pay attention to where they were going." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -1318,12 +1318,12 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "So how did that go?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Fine I suppose..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") #annoyed gen "Is that so? You don't sound very convincing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*... Well I was under the impression that I had gotten better at managing these things." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*... I thought I was getting better at handling these things." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "The vest helps a ton, I'm sure if I wasn't wearing it, it'd be a difficult task not to burst any of the buttons." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "(Note to self... Remove vest from School uniform...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Note to self... Remove vest from school uniform...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I only had a couple of vital steps left before finishing it up when one of the Slytherin students knocked the contents of my cauldron over me." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Oh, dear... Are you alright?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "I'm fine... Only thing that was hurt was my pride..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "I'm fine... The only thing that was hurt was my pride..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") show her_potions_public_expand_breasts_b1 as cg zorder 17: pos (0, 0) @@ -1350,11 +1350,11 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: show her_potions_public_expand_breasts_b2 as cg - her @ cheeks blush "The Slytherins, even though they were howling with laughter were all staring me down as I sat there getting rid of that sticky potion..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "The Slytherins, even though they were howling with laughter, were all staring me down as I sat there getting rid of that sticky potion..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Even the Gryffindors didn't even pretend to avert their gaze." ("annoyed", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "Well, you're an attractive girl, It'd be an insult if they did." - her @ cheeks blush "And Professor Snape, yet again made sure to bring me up in front of the class to give some long-winded lecture on how important it is to let the stabilizing agent take effect before transferring your potion." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "Trying to embarrass me no doubt..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "And Professor Snape, yet again, made sure to bring me up in front of the class to give some long-winded lecture on how important it is to let the stabilizing agent take effect before transferring your potion." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Trying to embarrass me, no doubt..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Safety first." her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_return: gen "Before you leave... Just out of curiosity..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Yes [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "What happened to that top of yours?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh... Well, apparently potion damage is quite common so I was able to procure a new set." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her "Oh... Well, apparently potion damage is quite common, so I was able to procure a new set." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes, I was told this was the fourth time this week!" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_cat.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_cat.rpy index 7e3cfb5b..f1e18ffb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_cat.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_cat.rpy @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ label potion_cat_make: play sound "sounds/sniff.ogg" gen "Yep..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Smells like a wet pussy all right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Not the kind I'd like to drink from though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Smells like a wet pussy, all right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not the kind I'd like to drink from, though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") return label her_potion_cat_give: @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_give: if states.her.level < 16: her "A potion? What kind of potion is it? It looks gross..." ("disgust", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "Wouldn't it spoil half of the enjoyment if I told you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Depends whose enjoyment you're talking about..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "Depends on whose enjoyment you're talking about..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Twenty points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmm*...{w=0.4} Can't you tell me what kind of potion it is?" ("annoyed", "wink", "base", "mid") her "Polyjuice? Babbling Beverage? Shrinking solution?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_give: gen "You don't have to do anything [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "But if you do decide to, it would make me very happy...." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "And there's some points in it for you as well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And there are some points in it for you as well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: her "But I'll drink it if you really want me to." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_give: gen "Aaaany second..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Unless..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Unless?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Well maybe one of the ingredients..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, maybe one of the ingredients..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Never mind..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What was it supposed to do?" ("angry", "happy", "base", "mid") gen "There's no point in telling you now. It was going to be a surprise." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_give: gen "You'll just have to wait for a bit, remember?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So you best head back to class for now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - if states.her.public_level < 15: #Before she'd enjoy to have her look like a cat in class + if states.her.public_level < 15: #Before she'd enjoy having her look like a cat in class her @ cheeks blush "Great... Can't wait for the effects to kick in... It was bad enough the first time..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "I'm sure ten extra points should make it worth it, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -204,14 +204,14 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: her @ cheeks blush "People kept making fun of me and pulling my tail in class!" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "And how did that make you feel?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Humiliated!" ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "They kept asking if I was been a good kitty and if I wanted scratches..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "They kept asking if I had been a good kitty and if I wanted scratches..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "And you know the worst thing?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "The darn potion made me want the scratches..." ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "R") gen "I see...{w=0.5} then we at least learnt something new here today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: #High - her @ cheeks blush "My class mates sure seemed to enjoy it though..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "One of the boys were entranced by the motion of my tail..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "My classmates sure seemed to enjoy it though..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "One of the boys was entranced by the motion of my tail..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "It seemed to have its own mind..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "And how did that make you feel?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I'm not sure..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: menu: "-Let her go-": - gen "Very well, [name_hermione_genie]. You've done what I've asked of you so be a good kitty and go to bed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very well, [name_hermione_genie]. You've done what I've asked of you, so be a good kitty and go to bed." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Unless there was anything else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: $ states.her.ev.potions.polyjuice_cat_furry = True $ cat_potion_ITEM.owned -= 1 - her "You're joking right?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "You're joking, right?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Surely you must be curious what another one would do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "But what if it turns me completely into a cat?" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "I suppose I might have to hide the bird..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "I'll give you thirty more points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Are you really sure it's safe?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Of course! You're not doubting my brewing abilities are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Of course! You're not doubting my brewing abilities, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I... I suppose not..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") her "Alright then..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -305,14 +305,14 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: "-Calm yourself-": gen "*Ah-ha-ha*...{w=0.4} Ah...{w=0.4} That was funny..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Are you done?" ("disgust", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "I--{w=0.2} *Heh*...{w=0.4} Yes think so..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I--{w=0.2} *Heh*...{w=0.4} Yes, I think so..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Why did I drink another one... How am I supposed to face the other--" ("clench", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "*Hah-Hah* Your face! You should've seen the look on your--" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/hiss_girl.ogg" her "..." ("mad", "base", "angry", "mid") #Hissing her @ cheeks blush "..." ("disgust", "wide", "base", "down") #Wide eyed - gen "{size=+5}*Pwah-Ha-Ha-Hah!*{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{size=+5}*Pwah-Ha-Ha-Hah*!{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I can't believe you!" ("scream", "base", "annoyed", "mid") call her_walk(action="leave") @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "You did it!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Did you not want me to?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Yes, although I was sure you'd refuse to do it again..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*... Well I just thought--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*... Well, I just thought--" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Did you enjoy those paws last time perhaps?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What do you--" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: her @ cheeks blush "" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "*Hah-ha-Hah*!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "There, I've drank it..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "There, I've drunk it..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her "[name_genie_hermione]!" gen "*Ha-Ha-Ha*!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Your face!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: $ hermione.equip(her_outfit_last) jump end_hermione_event - "-Ask for a blowjob-": + "-Ask her for a blowjob-": pass gen "I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "But it'd be such a wasted opportunity!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "(Perhaps if she had already given me a blowjob in her normal form she'd be more willing to agree.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Perhaps if she had already given me a blowjob in her normal form, she'd be more willing to agree.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You may leave." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: else: #Success her "Right now? I look like a cat! Why would you ask me at a time like this?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") - her "You're not some sort of pervert who likes animals are you?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "You're not some sort of pervert who likes animals, are you?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Of course not, I just think that you have a very unique look at the moment and that it would be a shame not to do anything with it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'll give you Twenty extra points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Fine... Just promise me you aren't going to do anything weird." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "Good girl." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "L", ypos="head", flip=False) - nar "Hermione now kneeling in front of you, takes you into her mouth." + nar "Hermione, now kneeling in front of you, takes you into her mouth." play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # SEX THEME. call her_chibi_scene("bj", trans=d9) @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her "What do you mean, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It felt like Velcro!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You're the one that asked me to do this... A cat's tongue is a lot rougher than a human." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "You're the one who asked me to do this... A cat's tongue is a lot rougher than a human." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") her "Do you want me to stop?" ("open", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "No, keep going, just try not to move that tongue too much." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Okay." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") @@ -540,8 +540,8 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "*Hmm*... You'd think they question why you'd turn up looking like a cat..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Did they just assume you were under an evil Slytherin spell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.public_level > 15: - gen "Or would they just think that slutty little Miss Granger is begging for attention." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "You go to place your hand on the back of her head but her new ears block the way." + gen "Or would they just think that slutty little Miss Granger is begging for attention?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + nar "You go to place your hand on the back of her head, but her new ears block the way." gen "These are quite soft." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You start feeling and patting the ears." nar "Hermione's eyes widen as she starts purring involuntarily." @@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: nar "Hermione starts purring as her eyes widen and look into yours." gen "There it is!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Keep going girl, this feels amazing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Closing your eyes you momentarily stop patting her and Hermione's purring stops." + nar "Closing your eyes, you momentarily stop patting her and Hermione's purring stops." gen "Don't stop!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call her_chibi_scene("bj_pause", trans=d3) @@ -595,7 +595,7 @@ label her_potion_cat_return: gen "{size=+10}*ARGH*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Purr* *Purr* *Purr*" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up_soft") - nar "The vibrations prove too much and you shoot your load directly down her throat." + nar "The vibrations prove too much, and you shoot your load directly down her throat." call cum_block call her_chibi_scene("bj_cum_in", trans=d5) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_luna.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_luna.rpy index 1e134535..36280049 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_luna.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/potions/polyjuice_luna.rpy @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "Are you sure it's wise to be giving me alcohol, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "It's not alcohol, [name_hermione_genie]... Just a harmless little potion." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - her "Trying to get me drunk are you?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "Trying to get me drunk, are you?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Nothing of the sort, just a harmless little potion." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You hand Hermione the potion bottle." @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: gen "It makes your breath smell like strawberries." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Does it--" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") her "Of course it doesn't..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "You'll just have to drink it to find out I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You'll just have to drink it to find out, I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Let's see if I can guess what is first..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") call her_chibi("sniff_potion","mid","base") @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "Is this..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Yep, another Polyjuice potion." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Do I really have to drink this again?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "If you'd like to continue our favour trading it would certainly be in your best interest, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If you'd like to continue our favour trading, it would certainly be in your best interest, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") if states.her.level < 19: her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "*Smacks lips*" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") if not states.her.ev.potions.polyjuice_luna_drank: - her "It didn't taste so bad actually. Kind of sweet and sour." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") + her "It didn't taste so bad actually... Kind of sweet and sour." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") gen "As long as you keep it down, you'll earn Gryffindor a great deal of points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I will." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "So... What now?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: gen "And how are your scores now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I'm still at the top... Just not by much." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Well, there are times when academic excellence shouldn't be your primary concern." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Hmph*... And what \"should\" be my primary concern then?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "*Hmph*... And what \"should\" be my primary concern, then?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Currently. I'd say your face is pretty high on the list." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Excuse me? This is hardly appropriate--" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") elif states.her.level < 22: @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "Although it's easier just to say \"we\" as I can't tell them where the majority of those points came from." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "That is true... If you told them, they probably wouldn't be able to be able to look at you the same way." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yeah..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I mean... Soon enough you wont even look the same!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean... Soon enough, you won't even look the same!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What do you mean?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I'm still the same person am I not--" ("annoyed", "squint", "worried", "mid") else: @@ -147,9 +147,9 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: if states.her.status.blowjob: her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh, don't be so modest. If sucking dick was a class, you'd be {i}Magna Cum Laude{/i}." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "I'm not sure that's appropriate, but thanks I suppose..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") - her @ cheeks blush "You know... There's still time to earn some house points before class. If you're feeling generous I could..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "I'd have to know on whose face I'll be cumming on though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her @ cheeks blush "I'm not sure if that's appropriate, but thanks, I suppose..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") + her @ cheeks blush "You know... There's still time to earn some house points before class. If you're feeling generous, I could..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + gen "I'd have to know on whose face I'll be cumming on, though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What do you mean? My face of course--" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") elif states.her.level < 16: her "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -163,8 +163,8 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her @ cheeks blush "How dare you even suggest such a thing." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Oh come on, it's not like you haven't thought about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well, maybe, but I have never done such a thing before..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid") - gen "We could change that right now if you want." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'd have to know on whose face I'll be cumming on though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We could change that right now if you'd like'." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'd have to know on whose face I'll be cumming on, though." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What do you mean whose face you will be--" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") play sound "sounds/burp.ogg" @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "...{fast}" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I beg your pardon, I'm not sure where that came from--" ("mad", "squint", "base", "mid") - # Sets Luna's initial facial expression to the ones Hermione had just a moment ago (more less) + # Sets Luna's initial facial expression to the ones Hermione had just a moment ago (more or less) $ luna.set_face(mouth="mad", eyes="narrow", eyebrows="base", pupils="mid") else: her "Not bad. So, what now?" ("base", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -187,10 +187,10 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "Lately I've been questioning my previous outlook on life in general." ("open", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "In what way exactly?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well, since we started our... mutually beneficial... agreement, or whatever we call this..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "R") - her "The general atmosphere in our common room has been in an all time high because of how many house points we're racking in." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + her "The general atmosphere in our common room has been at an all-time high because of how many house points we're racking in." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "That's good, you must feel a great sense of pride and accomplishment." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course! The only issue is that I would never be able to tell them I'm the one to thank for it..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "If they just got one look of my face they'd be able to tell what was up." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") + her "If they just got one look at my face, then they'd be able to tell what was up." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Speaking of..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") # Sets Luna's initial facial expression to the ones Hermione had just a moment ago @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: her "It's been pretty good, thanks for asking." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid") her "The morale has never been higher in the common room." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") her "I feel like we might actually have a chance at winning this year." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "All thanks to you I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "All thanks to you, I'm sure." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(You're lucky you've got me instead of the real old man, I bet he'd never rig the points like this...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Well... You've also kindly allowed me to earn these points..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "That I have." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: # Sets Luna's initial facial expression to the ones Hermione had just a moment ago $ luna.set_face(mouth="angry", eyes="narrow", eyebrows="base", pupils="down") else: - her "Well, generally its been quite dull up until now." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "Well, generally it's been quite dull, until now." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "I would be lying if I said I wasn't a little bit excited when you called on me." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "R") gen "Oh, you'll be getting your fair share of excitement soon enough, well, at least the {i}new you{/i} will." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "What do you mean by that--" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: nar "Hermione starts examining herself, feeling out her new assets and pausing at her breasts." - lun "*Hmm*... That's a Polyjuice potion alright..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") + lun "*Hmm*... That's a Polyjuice potion, alright..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") lun "And apparently I'm still a girl... Someone from Ravenclaw?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "Keen observation, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: lun "What?!" ("disgust", "wide", "base", "mid") if states.her.level < 16: - lun @ cheeks blush "I can't believe what you're suggesting, you're asking me to show off another students breasts?" ("disgust", "base", "annoyed", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "I can't believe what you're suggesting, you're asking me to show off another student's breasts?" ("disgust", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Well, what else would you have me do? Look at your face?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.4} Yes?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Come on... You've drank the potion... Don't you think it'd be a bit of a waste?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: if states.her.level <= 16: lun "This again? It was already bad enough that I agreed to do it before..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "There wasn't any repercussions was there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "There weren't any repercussions, were there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down") lun "I suppose not..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "Then get those puppies out for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -355,10 +355,10 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: pause .5 lun @ cheeks blush "There, see... Perfectly ordinary breasts." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Absolutely no need to keep looking at them." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "downR") - gen "I'm not quite convinced, the soft pale skin, the cute pink nipples and they look like quite a handful..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm not quite convinced, the soft pale skin, the cute pink nipples... They look like quite a handful..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I think you might have some serious competition here [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "You can't be serious! They're saggy and couldn't even fill your palm!" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "*Hmm*... Well I sure wouldn't use the word \"saggy\"... Perhaps a closer examination is required." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hmm*... Well, I sure wouldn't use the word \"saggy\"... Perhaps a closer examination is required." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Surely you can see from there how--" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") gen "No, I think I'd need a closer look [name_hermione_genie]... Seeing that my eyesight is so terrible and all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "..." ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "down") @@ -384,13 +384,13 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") lun @ cheeks blush "Am I done here?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") else: - gen "Yes... Upon closer inspection I must say those are some magnificent tits..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... Upon closer inspection, I must say those are some magnificent tits..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione]!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") gen "But Hermione's will always remain my favourite." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "I'm glad you've come to your senses, Thank you... If you're completely satisfied, I'll cover up these... things." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "I'm glad you've come to your senses... Well, if you're completely satisfied, I'll cover up these... things." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") else: gen "You look a bit flustered [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "You're staring directly at my, well, her chest, [name_genie_hermione], and I can't help but feel a bit undefined as its not my own..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "You're staring directly at my, well, her chest, [name_genie_hermione], and I can't help but feel a bit undefined as it's not my own..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "Am I free to go now?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") menu: @@ -406,12 +406,12 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: lun @ cheeks blush "You want me to strip naked?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Of course!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Why?" ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "To give you a chance to earn some extra points obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "To give you a chance to earn some extra points, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "That's not really the answer I was looking for..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") - lun @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}I'm sorry Luna...{/size}" ("normal", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}I'm sorry, Luna...{/size}" ("normal", "happyCl", "base", "mid") lun @ cheeks blush "I want fifty points." ("scream", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - gen "That's a bit much don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's a bit much, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "You're asking me to take the clothes off another student without their permission..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Well technically--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -475,9 +475,9 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: gen "How am I supposed to get a good comparison if you're still wearing clothes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "You were supposed to compare our breasts!" ("scream", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "Well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "There's always more things worth comparing don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "There's always more things worth comparing, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "*Hmph*..." ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "R") - gen "Now-now [name_hermione_genie]... There's some points in it for you if you do it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Now-now [name_hermione_genie]... There are some points in it for you if you do it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I don't care about the points..." ("angry", "base", "annoyed", "mid") gen "You don't?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I mean... I do... But it's not about that!" ("annoyed", "base", "annoyed", "mid") @@ -516,16 +516,16 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: call ctc gen "You didn't even hesitate this time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well you've seen it already haven't you?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Yes... Although I'd think you'd at least be a bit more hesitant about showing off another students privates." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Honestly after spending some more time around her I do think you're right about her not caring about it that much..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") + lun @ cheeks blush "Oh... Well, you've seen it already haven't you?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") + gen "Yes... Although, I'd think you'd at least be a bit more hesitant about showing off another student's privates." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*... Honestly, after spending some more time around her, I do think you're right about her not caring about it that much..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "downR") gen "Good enough for me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then I suppose you don't mind if I--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "No!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid") gen "You didn't even let me finish..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Didn't you just say that Miss Lovegood wouldn't really care?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "I..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - lun @ cheeks blush "Well maybe she would care about this, stripping is one thing!" ("angry", "closed", "raised", "mid") + lun @ cheeks blush "Well, maybe she would care about this, stripping is one thing!" ("angry", "closed", "raised", "mid") gen "Alright then [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: $ current_payout = 20 @@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ label her_potion_luna_give: gen "Nice..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Not as nice as your own obviously..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not as nice as your own, obviously..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun @ cheeks blush "Obviously..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Although surely even you could admit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Her nipples are pretty cute." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 52a53b66..b57a0db5 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -239,10 +239,10 @@ label lun_reaction_unequip(item): return label lun_reaction_unequip_fail(item): - if item.type == "panties": #probably wont play since category unlocks same level as she can take them off + if item.type == "panties": #probably won't play since category unlocks same level as she can take them off lun "I'm sorry [name_genie_luna] but my panties are my one and only defence against wrackspurts." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") - elif item.type == "bra": #probably wont play since category unlocks same level as she can take them off + elif item.type == "bra": #probably won't play since category unlocks same level as she can take them off lun "*giggles*" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "What's so funny?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... It's nothing..." ("base", "base", "base", "R") @@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ label lun_reaction_equip_outfit(item): lun "It said in the quibbler that putting on a swimsuit could attract the one-eyed trouser snake." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") gen "The... Oh, I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(Smut writers and their terrible euphemisms...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "*Err*... Did the magazine not mention that the... *Ahem*... Snake is valuable?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Err*... Didn't the magazine mention that the... *Ahem*... Snake is valuable?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "It is?" ("angry", "base", "base", "stare") gen "Of course, the spit of the one-eyed trouser snake is heavily sought after." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Really?" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy index 07fa1b2b..61d2e2a2 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/events/intro.rpy @@ -566,15 +566,14 @@ label tonks_intro_E3: gen "Some people would say I'm {b}the{/b} Genie, actually!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The most powerful being in the entire universe... Multiple universes even..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Glad my reputation precedes me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton @ hair horny "How curious. I've never had a Genie before..." ("horny", "wide", "base", "down") # Tonks looks horny. + ton @ hair horny "How curious... I've never had a Genie before." ("horny", "wide", "base", "down") # Tonks looks horny. gen "I'm sorry-- what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I meant, I've never had the pleasure of meeting a Genie before. This is brilliant!" ("grin", "shocked", "shocked", "mid") gen "(Is she hitting on me?!)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I'm flattered... But how were you able to tell?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "I'm an Auror. It's my job to identify and catch magical beings..." ("soft", "wide", "shocked", "mid") ton "But, if you are here, what happened to Professor Dumbledore?{w} Did he use one of your wishes and wish himself away?" ("mad", "wide", "shocked", "R") - gen "No... I don't do that anymore." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'm what you would call a \"free\" Genie..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not exactly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "So? What happened to him?" ("upset", "base", "raised", "mid") gen "I believe we traded places when one of my magical inventions went wrong..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "Really?! Is he okay?" ("mad", "wide", "base", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy index 11fcec4c..00b809d7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/talk.rpy @@ -97,8 +97,8 @@ label tonks_talk: gen "My lamp!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Shit, where even is that thing?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I must have lost it when I got to this place!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Do you even need it? Didn't you say you were a free Genie now?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") - gen "Of course I still need it! What sort of question is that, woman?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + ton "Do you even need it?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + gen "Of course I need it! What sort of question is that, woman?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "(................)" ("mad", "base", "base", "down") gen "How would you like to suddenly be robbed of your house?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "(I guess I can jerk him off some other time...)" ("mad", "base", "worried", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy index 35aa67ad..d2534697 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/tonks/wardrobe_reactions.rpy @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ label ton_reaction_category_fail(category): ton "Perhaps... But not right now..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif category == "lower undergarment": random: - ton "You want me to put on underwear? Now that's asking a bit much, don't you think?" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "You want me to put on underwear? Now, that's asking a bit much, don't you think?" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Like the Scottish say, I'd rather let it feel the breeze." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Underwear? Don't make me laugh..." ("base", "base", "base", "down") ton "You'd have to do better than that if you want this kitty to come out and play..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid") @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label ton_reaction_touch(what): ton "Teacher, I mean..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downR") ton "Such a weird custom, but I'll allow it..." ("horny", "closed", "base", "mid") block: - ton "How naughty... How could I ever have allowed such indecent behaviour..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") + ton "How naughty... How could I have ever allowed such indecent behaviour..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") ton "Don't you dare touch my elbows next..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") elif what == "breasts": @@ -428,9 +428,9 @@ label ton_reaction_equip_outfit(item): gen "You've been so helpful lately, so I've got you an outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "That's very--" ("base", "wide", "base", "mid") ton "What's this?" ("soft", "base", "raised", "down") - gen "Why, it's an elf costume of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Why, it's an elf costume, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "For Santa's sexy little helper." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "*Hmm*... And you're supposed to be Snta I suppose?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "*Hmm*... And you're supposed to be Santa, I suppose?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "Why of course... Although you're free to handle Santa's sack if you like." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #################### diff --git a/game/scripts/events/map.rpy b/game/scripts/events/map.rpy index d36bb2c8..42697ef3 100644 --- a/game/scripts/events/map.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/events/map.rpy @@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ label map_attic: else: $ states.her.ev.sealed_scroll.sample = True - call blkfade gen "(The attic, *huh*...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(I guess I could check it out.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -40,7 +39,7 @@ label map_attic: gen "(Turns the user into a magical tentacle plant with the usage of living plant material.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well, well... that could be useful..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So I guess this tentacle plant should be here somewhe--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "As you scan the room you notice a slender piece of vine poking out from behind some crates, as if to avoid the light." + nar "As you scan the room, you notice a slender piece of vine poking out from behind some crates, as if to avoid the light." gen "This must be it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/slash.ogg" nar "You make a clean cut, when suddenly...{nw}" @@ -54,7 +53,6 @@ label map_attic: nar "You hastily make your way towards your office." call gen_walk(action="enter") - call hide_blkfade stop weather call music_block @@ -78,7 +76,7 @@ label map_attic: else: gen "(On second thought... She's probably busy right now.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - gen "(It's a bit late... Miss Granger wont be having any classes right now...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(It's a bit late... Miss Granger won't be having any classes right now...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Save for later-": pass @@ -111,7 +109,7 @@ label map_forest: $ potion_inv.add("ing_wormwood") "-Leave it-": pass - nar "Finding nothing else of interest you return to your office." + nar "Finding nothing else of interest, you return to your office." jump return_office elif ran < 0.6: nar "You search around the forest and manage to find an odd-looking herb." @@ -122,7 +120,7 @@ label map_forest: $ potion_inv.add("ing_knotgrass") "-Leave it-": pass - nar "Finding nothing else of interest you return to your office." + nar "Finding nothing else of interest, you return to your office." jump return_office else: nar "You search around the forest but find nothing of interest." @@ -150,7 +148,7 @@ label map_lake: $ potion_inv.add("ing_niffler_fancy") "-Leave it-": pass - nar "Finding nothing else of interest you return to your office." + nar "Finding nothing else of interest, you return to your office." jump return_office elif ran < 0.6: nar "You search around the lake and manage to find an exposed root that looks similar to ginger." @@ -161,7 +159,7 @@ label map_lake: $ potion_inv.add("ing_aconite_root") "-Leave it-": pass - nar "Finding nothing else of interest you return to your office." + nar "Finding nothing else of interest, you return to your office." jump return_office else: nar "You search around the lake but find nothing of interest." @@ -203,7 +201,7 @@ label ravenclaw_dormitories: "-Search the area-":#Luna's Hair $ ran = renpy.random.random() if ran < 0.3: - nar "You search around the dorms and manage to find an comb with some hair in it." + nar "You search around the dorms and manage to find a comb with some hair in it." gen "This must be someone's hair." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: "-Take the hair-": diff --git a/game/scripts/events/potions/intro.rpy b/game/scripts/events/potions/intro.rpy index a1394583..0c25586f 100644 --- a/game/scripts/events/potions/intro.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/events/potions/intro.rpy @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ label potions_intro_E0: if states.map.room_of_requirement.intro_e1: sna "Didn't I tell you not to leave your office?" ("snape_04") else: - sna "A bit far from your office don't you think?" ("snape_03") + sna "A bit far from your office, don't you think?" ("snape_03") sna "Are you sure it's wise for you to wander the dungeons?" ("snape_04") gen "*Err*...{w=0.4} So this isn't my office?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -47,11 +47,11 @@ label potions_intro_E0: sna "You're talking about the paintings..." ("snape_03") sna "That would be Sir Cadogan and the fat lady." ("snape_24") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "That's a bit rude don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's a bit rude, don't you think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "That's her name." ("snape_03") gen "Oh..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Did you need something?" ("snape_04") - sna "You could just call for me you know." ("snape_05") + sna "You could just call for me, you know." ("snape_05") gen "Oh... Yes, Well I thought that it was a bit unfair to have you walk all the way to my office every time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Is that so?" ("snape_44") gen "Yes..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ label potions_intro_E0: sna "Being a teacher is not an easy job." ("snape_06") gen "I know something about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You do?" ("snape_05") - gen "Yeah. I might tell you about it someday, but for now I'll leave you to it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yeah. I might tell you about it someday, but for now, I'll leave you to it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Right... In that case..." ("snape_04") "\"I like your office!\"": gen "Way nicer than the one I have." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Thanks. I always had a thing for interior design--" ("snape_23") sna "Hold up. You're doing it again!" ("snape_17") gen "Doing what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Trying to talk your way out things and changing subjects!" ("snape_32") + sna "Trying to talk your way out of things and changing subjects!" ("snape_32") if states.sna.level <= 25: sna "If you don't have anything important to report I think you should leave." ("snape_31") @@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label potions_intro_E2: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "\"Shut it Van Gogh...\"": - # Fun fact: This is a rare insult as Van Gogh has sold only but a single painting in his life time, he got famous only after his passing. + # Fun fact: This is a rare insult as Van Gogh has sold only but a single painting in his lifetime, he got famous only after his passing. pass "\"These bloody paintings...\"": gen "Whoever thought it was a good idea to make paintings talk should be drowned in paint..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ label potions_intro_E2: sna "Your office couldn't be further away from here Genie, you're not fooling me with that one again..." ("snape_03") gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") else: - sna "What the hell are you doing in my office this time of day?" ("snape_03") + sna "What the hell are you doing in my office at this time of day?" ("snape_03") call gen_chibi("stand", flip=False) gen "*Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Sightseeing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label potions_intro_E2: sna "Are you insane?" ("snape_10") gen "I'm quite adept at potion making, I'll have you know!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's what got me here in the first place!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Right... And that effect was deliberate was it?" ("snape_03") + sna "Right... And that effect was deliberate, was it?" ("snape_03") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You're lucky I caught you before you did anything stupid!" ("snape_01") gen "Like what? It's just potions..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ label potions_intro_E2: sna "Do you phase through debris as well?" ("snape_03") gen "Good point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So... Will you teach me how to brew your potions then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So... Will you teach me how to brew your potions, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_03") sna "*Hah-Hah-Hah!*" ("snape_28") gen "*Heh-Heh*..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -345,20 +345,20 @@ label potions_intro_E2: if states.sna.level > 50: sna "Because...{w=0.4} I...{w=0.2} know...{w=0.2} You..." ("snape_10") gen "You do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "I {i}know{/i} that you would mess it up I should say..." ("snape_03") + sna "I {i}know{/i} that you would mess it up, I should say..." ("snape_03") else: sna "Because...{w=0.4} I...{w=0.2} Don't...{w=0.2} Trust...{w=0.2} You..." ("snape_10") gen "You don't?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I don't trust that you wont mess it up I should say..." ("snape_03") - gen "Come on! Those recipes I found in your desk looks simple enough..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on! Those recipes I found inside your desk look simple enough..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You read that?" ("snape_14") gen "Of course I did!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "They're quite genius actually..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Oh... Why I wouldn't say--" ("snape_23") gen "A lot of them appeared to be derivatives from other potions, is that correct?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Ahem*...{w=0.4} Yes." ("snape_25") - sna "They weren't really useful for what I wanted so I changed them a bit..." ("snape_37") + sna "They weren't really useful for what I wanted, so I changed them a bit..." ("snape_37") if states.map.room_of_requirement.intro_e1: gen "Much like that mirror..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -383,16 +383,16 @@ label potions_intro_E2: gen "So...{w} *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The recipe's mentioned some additional ingredients..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Yes?" ("snape_05") - gen "Well, I didn't really see a ingredient cupboard or anything in here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I didn't really see a cupboard with ingredients or anything in here..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Right?" ("snape_03") gen "So, where do you keep your... *Err*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Keep {size=+5}my{/size} what?" ("snape_04") gen "You know what, I think I'll probably manage to find some on my own..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Hmm*..." ("snape_04") gen "Drinks later?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "On me obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "On me, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_04") - gen "*Hah-hah*... See you later then buddy!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "*Hah-hah*... See you later then, buddy!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Ahem*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_chibi("stand", flip=False) "-Indirectly ask about ingredients-": diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_hermione_card_game_.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_hermione_card_game_.rpy index f8351b29..c4e540c6 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_hermione_card_game_.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_hermione_card_game_.rpy @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ label hermione_cardgame_menu: her "Do they even make the cards still? I don't think there's anyone in Hogsmeade stocking them." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") her "So I wouldn't be able to play against you..." ("base","base") her "Unless Fred and Geo..." ("clench","wide") - gen "Unless... who now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Unless... Who?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "(Hermione... learn to keep your mouth shut.)" ("mad", "wide", "base", "R") gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I'm sorry sir, I should have told you..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") @@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ label hermione_cardgame_menu: gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Please don't tell them I told you." ("open","happyCl") gen "So you say they might have some cards?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Wha... yes, maybe." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") - her "You're not going to shut them down are you?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Why should I? It's a free market is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Wha... Yes, maybe." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her "You're not going to shut them down, are you?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") + gen "Why should I? It's a free market, is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "A little bit of competition with Hoemead is good for consumers." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "But...{w=0.3} I mean, yes of course." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") + her "But...{w=0.3} I mean... Yes, of course." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "So you'll play if they stock some cards?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I mean..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "If they don't get shut down I mean." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh! Yes of course I'll play!" ("shock","wide") + her "Oh! Yes, of course I'll play!" ("shock","wide") her "..." ("soft", "wide", "worried", "stare") her "Anything else you needed or am I free to go?" ("base", "base", "worried", "mid") $ states.her.ev.cardgame.known = True @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ label hermione_cardgame_menu: gen "Hello again [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Hello [name_genie_hermione]." ("base","base") gen "I wanted to thank you for mentioning the Weasley shop." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "You're not shutting them down are you?" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "You're not shutting them down, are you?" ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "Of course not, where else am I supposed to get my supplies from?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, yes... where." ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "I hope you've picked up some cards because we're playing today!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -54,8 +54,8 @@ label hermione_cardgame_menu: her "I had to go make sure that you hadn't shut them down and somehow ended up with a deck of cards." ("mad", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "(Sounds like even I could learn some bartering tricks from those two.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So, how about some practice rounds then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*Ehm*... I've only recently started playing so I'm not that good yet." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "Don't worry, after a few practice rounds you'll get up to speed, when you're ready we'll play the real challenge..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "*Ehm*... I've only recently started playing, so I'm not that good yet." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") + gen "Don't worry, after a few practice rounds you'll get up to speed, when you're ready, we'll play the real challenge..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.her.ev.cardgame.has_cards = True jump hermione_duel_menu @@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ label hermione_random_duel: her "You've already challenged me though..." ("open", "happy", "base", "R") her "and I lost." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "What if we made it a wager..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Like gambling? No thank you!" ("clench", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") + her "Like gambling? No, thank you!" ("clench", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "It's not gambling, just a friendly house point wager..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Sounds like gambling to me..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "So, how about it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -221,19 +221,19 @@ label hermione_random_duel: her "and I lost." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "What if we made it a wager?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Gambling you mean?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "Not for money obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Not for money, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What are you suggesting then?" ("base","happy") gen "Well, I was thinking house points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "House points..." ("normal", "happy", "base", "R") her "How would this work then?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") - gen "Well, if you win I'll give you ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, if you win, I'll give you ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Only ten?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Twenty then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And if I lose?" ("open", "happy", "base", "R") gen "I'll take the same amount away." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(As if she's going to let that happen...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("normal","happyCl") - her "Okay... In that case to make it fair, let's add these extra rules..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") + her "Okay... In that case, to make it fair, let's add these extra rules..." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid_soft") label hermione_random_duel_rematch: @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label hermione_random_duel: gen "You do know what this means, don't you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "This means I'm going to have to deduct twenty points from the Gryffindor house." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Please, don't. I don't want the others to wake up tomorrow wondering why there's twenty house points missing..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") + her "Please, don't. I don't want the others to wake up tomorrow wondering why there are twenty house points missing..." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") gen "Well, in that case..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") menu: @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label hermione_random_duel: her @ cheeks blush "Did you need anything else?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid_soft") call give_reward("Hermione can now work by helping the twins promote the card game.", "interface/icons/icon_gambler_hat.webp") jump hermione_requests - "-Ask for a blowjob instead-": + "-Ask her for a blowjob instead-": jump hg_wager_bj "-Deduct the points-": pass @@ -318,9 +318,9 @@ label her_duel_lost: stop music fadeout 1 if geniecard_level > 1: - her "Hah, told you I'd do it!" + her "*Hah*! Told you I could do it!" her "I'll take those points now." - gen "Fine, twenty to gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Fine, twenty to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ gryffindor += 20 menu: @@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ label her_duel_lost: jump hermione_random_duel "-Be a loser-": pass - her "Cards not in your favour [name_genie_hermione]? Maybe next time..." + her "Cards not in your favour, [name_genie_hermione]? Maybe next time..." call her_walk(action="leave") jump end_hermione_event diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_snape_card_game_.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_snape_card_game_.rpy index 83c41b79..0b3b75af 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_snape_card_game_.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_snape_card_game_.rpy @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label snape_duel_menu: gen "Do you have any?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I do, I collected some when I was younger... Never played though." ("snape_09") gen "Why not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Didn't really have anyone to play with so I stopped buying them." ("snape_06") + sna "Didn't really have anyone to play with, so I stopped buying them." ("snape_06") gen "Up for a game or two?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_03") sna "Why not?" ("snape_02") @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ label snape_duel_menu: sna "Do you know how hard it is to progress with this game with no one to play against?" ("snape_03") sna "I even traded some of my potion ingredients to some weird guy in Knockturn alley for one of the old booster packs..." ("snape_01") - sna "Turns out... That card I gave you, whilst not very powerful was quite rare." ("snape_08") + sna "Turns out... That card I gave you, whilst not very powerful, it was quite rare." ("snape_08") gen "Sounds like a you problem." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_29") gen "How about we do a wager?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -69,16 +69,16 @@ label snape_duel_menu: sna "..." ("snape_04") sna "Fine, but only if it's on equal terms..." ("snape_10") gen "What does that mean?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "It means, you set your prize and I'll set mine accordingly." ("snape_03") + sna "It means, you set your prize, and I'll set mine accordingly." ("snape_03") gen "Okay, so..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "If you win I'll give you some wine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Don't you provide me with plenty of wine anyway?" ("snape_05") - gen "I mean, I could stop doing it. The office has my name on it after all and last I checked that means whatever is in it belong to me as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean, I could stop doing it... The office has my name on it after all, and last I checked, that means whatever is in it belongs to me as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." - gen "In a figurative way obviously. It doesn't actually have my name on the door." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "In a figurative way, obviously... It doesn't actually have my name on the door." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Obviously..." ("snape_03") gen "It's not like this office came with any of those Slytherin sluts you have yet to share with me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "Fine, if that's your only proposal. If you win then I'll give you something from my personal collection." ("snape_03") + sna "Fine, if that's your only proposal. If you win, then I'll give you something from my personal collection." ("snape_03") gen "Like what?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "You'll see..." ("snape_02") gen "(Must be something good if he's not going to tell me...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ label snape_duel_menu: if wine_ITEM.owned < 1: sna "Do you have it?" gen "What?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "The wine of course!" + sna "The wine, of course!" gen "I don't..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "That's a shame... Our wager will have to wait then." gen "Can't we just duel anyway? I'm not intending to lose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label snape_duel_menu: sna "Let's do it." ("snape_02") block: sna "Always!" ("snape_02") - sna "I'll make sure you lose this time Genie..." ("snape_01") + sna "I'll make sure you lose this time, Genie..." ("snape_01") block: sna "My stock is filled so why not?" ("snape_03") gen "Great." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ label snape_duel_menu: jump snape_random_duel label snape_first_duel: - sna "A bit dusty but this should do!" ("snape_03") + sna "A bit dusty, but this should do!" ("snape_03") gen "You, or the deck?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I...{w=0.3} The deck, obviously." ("snape_14") sna "Let's do this." ("snape_17") @@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ label snape_first_duel: label snape_second_duel: - sna "That first one was just a warm up, there's no way you'll beat me this time!" ("snape_16") + sna "That first one was just a warm-up, there's no way you'll beat me this time!" ("snape_16") gen "Time to get our decks out." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "...." ("snape_25") sna "Let's just play." ("snape_04") @@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ label snape_third_duel: gen "Me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I... no, of course not." ("snape_14") sna "Let's do this." ("snape_17") - sna "Show me what you got genie... Beat me and I'll give you a card from my collection and 3 tokens." ("snape_18") + sna "Show me what you got Genie... Beat me, and I'll give you a card from my collection and 3 tokens." ("snape_18") gen "Bring it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play music "music/Juhani_Junkala.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label snape_third_duel: gen "They're old, that's what." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now to the prize..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Fine... Here's your tokens and one of my precious cards." ("snape_05") - sna "(You were a good card my boy. But it's time to grow up.)" ("snape_05") + sna "(You were a good card, my boy... But it's time to grow up.)" ("snape_05") $ states.sna.ev.cardgame.stage = 3 $ unlocked_cards += [card_snape] call give_reward("You have received a special card!", "images/cardgame/t1/special/snape_v1.webp") @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ label snape_random_duel: $ states.sna.ev.cardgame.stage = 4 gen "Yes!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "No wine for you.." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "No wine for you..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_04") gen "Now, how about that prize we discussed." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Ah, yes... something from my collection." ("snape_05") @@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ label snape_random_duel: sna "Not again... Did you look at my cards before the game?" ("snape_10") gen "How would I have done that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I don't know..." ("snape_08") - sna "Some kind of Genie hocus pocus?" ("snape_07") + sna "Some kind of Genie hocus-pocus?" ("snape_07") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Hmm*... Perhaps that comment might've been a bit..." ("snape_25") gen "Yeah, a just a little..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ label snape_special_duel: return "draw" elif not duel_response == "win" or duel_response == "Close": - sna "Well, well.. It appears I've--" + sna "Well, well... It appears I've--" gen "{size=+4}Fuuuuuuuuck!{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") return "loss" @@ -504,9 +504,9 @@ label snape_duel_lost: gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: sna "Child's play..." ("snape_02") - gen "I'm hundreds of years old you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm thousands of years old, you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "And I beat you..." ("snape_02") - gen "just shows how luck based the game is honestly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That just shows how luck based the game is, honestly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") block: sna "..." ("snape_02") gen "Just take your prize and go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ label snape_duel_lost: block: sna "Hah!" sna "I mean...{w=0.3} Good game." - gen "You're allowed to show enthusiasm you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're allowed to show enthusiasm, you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I know, but it's bad for my image..." gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Whatever you say, here's your bottle." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy index e186afc1..9de51189 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/cardgame/_twins_card_game_.rpy @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ label twins_first_duel: if states.twi.ev.cardgame.stage < 1: twi "No way!" ger "You must've been cheating." - gen "It's all in the cards boys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It's all in the cards, boys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "I can certainly see that..." ger "Are you thinking what I'm thinking Fred?" fre "I believe I am, George!" @@ -27,12 +27,12 @@ label twins_first_duel: ger "We'll send you an owl when we've set things up." fre "So you better get ready for a rematch!" twi "Because we'll win next time!" - gen "We'll see about that... I can't have students going around showing up to their headmaster can I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "We'll see about that... I can't have students going around showing up to their headmaster, can I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.stage = 1 $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.delay = states.twi.ev.cardgame.delay+game.day pass else: - twi "Not again.." + twi "Not again..." gen "Tough luck boys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pass @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ label twins_second_duel: ger "I blame Trelawney on this, she said that luck would be on our side today..." fre "Well... A promise is a promise." fre "Here's your reward." - ger "And we also heard about your wins against Snape so here's some extra tokens." + ger "And we also heard about your wins against Snape, so here are some extra tokens." fre "Make sure to come back and spend those tokens in our token shop." $ card_rand_twins = renpy.random.choice([[card_fred, "fred"], [card_george, "george"]]) $ unlocked_cards += [card_rand_twins[0]] @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ label twins_second_duel: $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.stage = 2 $ tokens += 3 else: - twi "Not again.." + twi "Not again..." gen "Tough luck boys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") $ tokens += 1 @@ -103,13 +103,13 @@ label twins_random_duel: fre "But let's make it a bit interesting." gen "I was going to suggest something similar but go on..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "Let's make a wager." - gen "Interesting... So what kind of wager are you boys suggesting?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Interesting... So, what kind of wager are you boys suggesting?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "How about a monetary one?" gen "Of course, what else is there in this world other than monetary rewards?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") twi "Exactly!" ger "Okay, how about..." ger "If you win then we'll give you a cut from our weekly profits." - gen "That confident are we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That confident, are we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") twi "Always!" gen "Well, if it's a monetary reward you're looking for..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Then how about if I lose, I'll give you ten gold?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ label twins_random_duel: gen "........... what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "It means you're broke, sir." fre "Come back with your offer when you have more gold, professor." - gen "Fine.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "You return to your office." jump main_room ger "Yes, that is quite satisfactory..." @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ label twins_random_duel: elif states.twi.ev.cardgame.profit == 0.2: gen "Ready for another wager?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "No, I think we've had quite enough of a dent in our profit margin..." - fre "We're almost half way to where we were before we introduced the card game." + fre "We're almost halfway to where we were before we introduced the card game." gen "Only half?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "Yes, we still need to think about growth." gen "(I should've asked for a cut to begin with.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -148,9 +148,9 @@ label twins_random_duel: twi "Always!" ger "Remember, after your first win we'll give you another 1%% from our weekly profits on your every subsequent victory." gen "Is there a limit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - fre "There is... But no offence sir, I doubt you're going to reach it." + fre "There is... But no offence, sir... I doubt you're going to reach it." gen "(We'll see about that...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Okay then... If you two win then I'll give you ten gold." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Okay then... If you two win, then I'll give you ten gold." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "One second, professor." nar "George takes out a calculator and starts calculating something." if game.gold < 10: @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ label twins_random_duel: "-Short-": ger "You are broke, sir." fre "Come back with your offer when you have more gold, professor." - gen "Fine.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Fine..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You return to your office." jump main_room ger "Acceptable..." @@ -187,17 +187,17 @@ label twins_random_duel: stop music fadeout 1 if states.twi.ev.cardgame.stage < 3: twi "Impossible!" - ger "How did you even do that? we weighed these packs for a reason..." + ger "How did you even do that? We weighed these packs for a reason..." gen "You did what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Don't mind him, he doesn't know what he's saying when he's angry." gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "So... We had a deal." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Yes, about that..." - gen "You're not backing out are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You're not backing out, are you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") fre "Of course not, I just wanted to make sure we're on the same page about this." fre "You can come pick up your cut once a week." - ger "The amount may vary obviously." - fre "It all depends of how many sales we get that week." + ger "The amount may vary, obviously." + fre "It all depends on how many sales we get that week." fre "We're always looking to have someone help with promoting the shop and card game." gen "(Sounds like something Hermione might be able to do.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "(After some convincing...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -212,18 +212,18 @@ label twins_random_duel: gen "Well, how about a lower percentage? I'll adjust my wager as well." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ger "We'll think about it..." - call give_reward("You have received 5%% of the twins profits!", "interface/icons/cards.webp") + call give_reward("You have received 5%% of the twins' profits!", "interface/icons/cards.webp") $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.profit += 0.05 $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.stage = 3 $ tokens += 3 elif states.twi.ev.cardgame.profit >= 1.2: fre "Nice job but you've reached the cap I'm afraid." - ger "Yeah, don't want to go minus do we?" + ger "Yeah, we don't want to go into the minus, do we?" $ tokens += 1 else: twi "Not again..." gen "Time to pay up, boys." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ger "Fine... We'll up your profits by 1%%..." + ger "Fine... We'll up your weekly cut by 1%%..." $ tokens += 1 $ states.twi.ev.cardgame.profit += 0.01 @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ label twins_duel_lost: "-Be a loser-": pass - ger "Cards not in your favour professor? Maybe next time..." + ger "Cards not in your favour, Professor? Maybe next time..." "You return to your office." jump main_room @@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ label twins_duel_cancel: #jump return_office hide screen blkfade with dissolve - ger "Cards not in your favour professor? Maybe next time..." + ger "Cards not in your favour, Professor? Maybe next time..." "You return to your office." jump main_room diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy index 280b80f7..c59fe68f 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_bad_time_to_disrobe.rpy @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: gen "Miss Granger. Have you ever been excited about the thought of being caught?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Caught?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right",ypos="base", trans=d3) - her "In what way professor?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her "In what way, Professor?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, for today's favour I have a prop for you to use." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: her "Well, I guess that would be fine..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Although it's a bit different from your usual requests." ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - gen "You'd be naked of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You'd be naked, of course." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Naked!?! But what if someone sees me?" ("open", "wide", "base", "stare") @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: gen "(Is this girl for real?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "It's just an expression..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now tell me...{w=0.4} Did you complete your assignment?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "I did, sir...{w=0.4} I snuck into the boys dormitory using the cloak, as you suggested." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + her "I did, sir...{w=0.4} I sneaked into the boys' dormitory using the cloak, as you suggested." ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "mid") gen "Naked?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Naked...{w=0.2} --ish." ("disgust", "base", "base", "R") gen "How can you be naked...{w=0.2} --ish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: her "Pretty poorly in fact." ("disgust", "wink", "base", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I'm sorry miss Granger, but you're going to have to do better than this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm sorry, Miss Granger... But you're going to have to do better than this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I expect more from you by now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "So, no points then?" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "No, I know you can do better." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: $ game.daytime = False call music_block - nar "Later that evening a distraught-looking Hermione enters the office." + nar "Later that evening, a distraught-looking Hermione enters the office." call her_chibi("top_naked","desk","base") $ hermione.strip("robe", "accessory") @@ -160,17 +160,17 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1: her @ tears mascara_soft "What do you think has happened?!" ("upset", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, I know what I think... But I'd like to hear it from you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara_soft "I didn't want to disappoint, sir, so I did what you asked..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") - her @ tears mascara_soft "I went into the girls changing room at the Quidditch pitch, undressing and leaving my clothes in one of the lockers." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") + her @ tears mascara_soft "I went into the girls' changing room at the Quidditch pitch, undressing and leaving my clothes in one of the lockers." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well done. And then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "I took the cloak and snuck into the boys changing room--" ("soft", "squint", "base", "R") - her @ tears mascara "I didn't want any of them to bump into me so I decided to stand just around the corner of the doorway." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her @ tears mascara "I took the cloak and sneaked into the boys' changing room--" ("soft", "squint", "base", "R") + her @ tears mascara "I didn't want any of them to bump into me, so I decided to stand just around the corner of the doorway." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Judging by your current state, I assume it didn't play out as you thought." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara "Well, it did at first... But I had made a miscalculation." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") her @ tears mascara "By thinking I was short enough to fit under the cloak..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "down") gen "Right, so your--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara "My feet were completely visible the whole time!" ("upset", "base", "angry", "mid") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ tears mascara "And before I knew it, one of the boys were moving closer to inspect them, so I tried to get away, but I slipped...{w=0.4} and...{w=0.4} and." ("upset", "wide", "base", "shocked") + her @ tears mascara "And before I knew it, one of the boys was moving closer to inspect them, so I tried to get away, but I slipped...{w=0.4} and...{w=0.4} and." ("upset", "wide", "base", "shocked") gen "And what?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ tears mascara "My butt fell out!" ("scream", "wide", "worried", "stare") @@ -212,16 +212,16 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: call music_block call bld - gen "Good afternoon miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Good afternoon professor, what can I do for you today?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") + gen "Good afternoon, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Good afternoon, Professor... What can I do for you today?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base") gen "Glad you asked, I've got another task for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Another task? And what task may that be professor?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") - gen "Well, miss Granger... I think somebody owes me a invisibility cloak." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Another task? And what task may that be, Professor?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") + gen "Well, miss Granger... I think somebody owes me an invisibility cloak." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, do you want me to collect it from somebody?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "That somebody is you, miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That somebody is you, Miss Granger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You left my cloak at the scene of the crime." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Crime? Professor, what have you gotten me into?" ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") - gen "I'm talking about when you went for a visit to the boys changing room." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm talking about when you went for a visit to the boys' changing room." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or have you forgotten already?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "{size=-7}I've tried to.{/size}" ("upset", "base", "worried", "R") gen "Sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -232,19 +232,19 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: her "By house elves I bet..." ("disgust", "closed", "angry", "mid") gen "Hey now... I know they might be small, but I wouldn't call them elves." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "In any case, the cloak has more of a sentimental value to me... lots of memories." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "(Like the time where your butt fell out of it.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Oh, the memories... you must retrieve it for me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Fine, I'll do it... even though I hold you partly responsible for the situation that lead to me dropping it." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") - gen "Great! Let's not dwell on the past then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Like the time when your butt fell out of it.)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, the memories... You must retrieve it for me." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Fine, I'll do it... Even though I hold you partly responsible for the situation that lead to me dropping it." ("annoyed", "closed", "angry", "mid") + gen "Great! Let's not dwell on the past, then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("normal", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") her "Do you happen to have any idea of where it is?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well, it hasn't been reported as found, so unless it's been stolen, there's only one place it could be." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "The boys changing room?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") - gen "The boys changing room." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "The boys' changing room?" ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down") + gen "The boys 'changing room." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And how many house points?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "For what exactly?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Retrieving the cloak of course." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "You're demanding house points, for your own mistakes, miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "Retrieving the cloak, of course." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "You're demanding house points, for your own mistakes, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "But I thought..." ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("upset", "narrow", "worried", "down") @@ -253,10 +253,10 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: gen "With your butt--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "No, well... Yes, but this time you'll be prepared." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "But... What if they recognise me, sir?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "if they had recognized you, then I'm sure you'd already know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If they had recognized you, then I'm sure you'd already know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "(That's true...)" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid_soft") her @ cheeks blush "And then what? You want me to be able to just walk out of there?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "That's for you to figure out, miss Granger. Either way, once you have the cloak it shouldn't be an issue getting away." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "That's for you to figure out, miss Granger. Either way, once you have the cloak, it shouldn't be an issue getting away." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "And I want--" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I'll give you forty house points for it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "(I was going to ask for thirty.)" ("soft", "happy", "base", "R") @@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: gen "Magic cupboard." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right... I'll just start from the beginning, shall I?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - her "So... I went to the boys changing room when they were busy with their Quidditch practice." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "So... I went to the boys' changing room when they were busy with their Quidditch practice." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "{size=+2}*CRUNCH*{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "It's very messy in there... And here I thought that the girls changing room was bad..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "{size=+3}*CRUNCH* *Chew* *Chew*{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: her "Anyway... so I rummaged around in that mess..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") her "I knew it had to be somewhere between the showers and the doorway..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "And after looking around for a while, I noticed that the cloak had been pushed underneath one of the benches lining the wall." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") - her "So as I was grabbing for it, I thought to myself... Well, I've already managed to sneak in there so perhaps I could earn myself some points as well..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her "So as I was grabbing for it, I thought to myself... Well, I've already managed to sneak in there, so perhaps I could earn myself some points as well..." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "So I took my clothes off again, and while draping the cloak over me, I began walking to the showers." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her "But, just as I was about to enter, one of the Slytherin boys emerged in front of me!" ("clench", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "{size=+6}*CRUNCH*{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2: gen "Smart." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "If I had been smart, I would've taken into consideration why someone might go to the changing room before practice is finished..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") - gen "To drain the snake no doubt." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "To drain the snake, no doubt." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Do you want me to continue or not?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") gen "You're the one receiving the points here, I'm just providing the means of earning them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Hmph*..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale.rpy index 6ac80f67..f7bcf67c 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale.rpy @@ -104,13 +104,13 @@ label a_christmas_tale: gen "I don't know what you mean." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Said the large bearded man..." - gen "I'm Santa of course." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm Santa, of course." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I bring presents..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's the plan!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") pause.8 - nar "After silence and confusion then Severus said..." - sna "Well, just get it over with so I can go back to bed." (face="snape_09") + nar "After silence and confusion, then Severus said..." + sna "Well, just get it over with, so I can go back to bed." (face="snape_09") gen "Now boy where's your spirit, it's Christmas is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Now genie, look here..." (face="snape_24") nar "But then he froze on the spot." @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale: show screen bld1 with d3 - nar "The man had then vanished, without even a trace.." + nar "The man had then vanished, without even a trace..." hide screen bld1 with d3 @@ -151,13 +151,13 @@ label a_christmas_tale: with d3 nar "With only a gift left where he had stood, should he open or should he wait?" sna "My first present since childhood..." (face="snape_04") - nar "As he peeled back the wrapping he just stood there in shock." + nar "As he peeled back the wrapping, he just stood there in shock." sna "Where on earth did he get this?" (face="snape_03") nar "Then suddenly..." play sound "sounds/knocking.ogg" nar "A knock." - "Snape are you in there, I think I lost my keys." + "Snape, are you in there, I think I lost my keys." sna "The door is open, you fool." (face="snape_08", xpos="base", ypos="base") nar "His voice... now just a wheeze." @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale: with d5 nar "A picture we then see as it's our time to depart." sna "" (face="snape_23") - nar "As sadness turned to joy in the cold teachers heart." + nar "As sadness turned to joy in the cold teacher's heart." call ctc hide screen snape_picture_frame diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale2.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale2.rpy index 2a7fa696..c610b9b8 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale2.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_christmas_tale2.rpy @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): with d3 nar "T'was the night before Christmas on a cold winter night." - nar "We see the headmasters room but there's no one in sight." + nar "We see the headmaster's room, but there's no one in sight." nar "No sound but the wind as the storm outside roars." nar "But then a man enters, as he never knocks on any doors." @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): sna "Are you sure about that? I don't see a sack in your hand..." ("snape_01", trans=d3) hide snape_main with d3 - gen "Be patient dear boy... Don't you give me that face." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Be patient, dear boy... Don't you give me that face." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Your gift will get here soon through this office fireplace." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide screen bld1 with d3 @@ -159,17 +159,17 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): gen "Now unwrap those naughty bits!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair happy "Wait, I just remembered, don't unwrap the present yet!" ("mad", "shocked", "base", "L", trans=dissolve) - ton @ hair happy "If he's not been good this year then a gift he cannot get." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid") + ton @ hair happy "If he's not been good this year, then a gift he cannot get." ("open", "closed", "shocked", "mid") hide tonks_main with d3 - gen "I'm certain he's been good... Now unwrap her I insist!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm certain he's been good... Now unwrap her, I insist!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair happy "I'm not so sure myself... His offences fill this list." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down", trans=dissolve) hide tonks_main with d3 - gen "Then read it for me elf... I'm sure it will be quick..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Then read it for me, elf... I'm sure it will be quick..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide screen bld1 with d3 nar "The elf then unrolled it... A scroll six inches thick." @@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): with d3 ton @ hair happy "So is slapping their ass..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "Well I'm sure they're all right... It was only a slap..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, I'm sure they're all right... It was only a slap..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair happy "I'm not done yet santa, there's more..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "L") gen "What the crap..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): gen "I think he's got a point, at least he didn't curse..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair happy "You say that but now, is when the list is getting worse..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid") - ton @ hair happy "He's bought blowjobs with house points... Now that doesn't sound great..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") + ton @ hair happy "He's bought blowjobs with house points... Now, that doesn't sound great..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down") gen "A misprint I'm sure!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair happy "The list says thirty-eight..." ("mad", "wide", "base", "down") @@ -242,8 +242,8 @@ label a_christmas_tale2(): gen "Sexual acts is one thing... But not knocking on doors!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "A man without manners is what Santa Claus abhors." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I can't give you a gift but I offer this advice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Most things I will ignore but good manners deem you nice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I can't give you a gift, but I offer this advice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Most things I will ignore, but good manners deem you nice." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now ladies it's time to leave, it is a busy time of year..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Let us empty this sack and spread my Christmas cheer." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_spaced_out_conversation.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_spaced_out_conversation.rpy index 0fb4b242..8f081567 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_spaced_out_conversation.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_spaced_out_conversation.rpy @@ -21,16 +21,16 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: play music "music/Anguish.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed nar "The flames flickered higher up the fireplace." - nar "Licking in greedy hunger, as if wanting to taste the wine the two men sedately drank just out of the fire's reach." + nar "Licking in greedy hunger, as if wanting to taste the wine, the two men sedately drank just out of the fire's reach." nar "The men took no notice of the flames, except to silently acknowledge the warmth it provided." nar "They were an odd pair, these two, sitting as they frequently did, beside the old fireplace sipping wine." nar "One, dressed all in black, with matching flowing black hair, stared sullenly at his glass." nar "Perhaps it was the darkness surrounding him that made his skin look so pale." nar "And maybe it was only the voluminous robes wrapped loosely across his body that made him appear gaunt." nar "The other was even more mysterious..." - nar "Draped in gray-white costume, he had a long, flowing beard and a curious aura of both age and vitality." + nar "Draped in a gray-white costume, he had a long, flowing beard and a curious aura of both age and vitality." nar "Sometimes, if the flames flickered just so, he almost appeared entirely different, as a burly, cowled man with a short curled beard." - nar "They sat in front of the fire as they did on many nights and talked of worlds upon worlds. And of magic. The dark man was first to speak." + nar "They sat in front of the fire as they did on many nights and talked of worlds upon worlds. And of magic. The dark man was the first to speak." sna "So, let me try to understand this..." ("snape_05", ypos="head", trans=d3) nar "Snape said slowly." @@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: sna "Come again?" ("snape_03") hide screen a_spaced_out_conversation_horns with d9 - nar "Snape asked, gaping at the sight before it was gone so fast that he was left unsure he had seen anything." - gen "I said, they keep the whole thing low key." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + nar "Snape asked, gaping at the sight before it was gone so fast that he was left unsure if he had seen anything." + gen "I said, they keep the whole thing low-key." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie repeated." gen "Keeps most people from knowing how they make it bigger on the inside." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Most people?" ("snape_05") @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: nar "Snape flicked his hands impatiently and just decided to move on." show screen with_snape(ani=False) nar "Determining when Genie was serious or not was still beyond his ability." - nar "Plus, there had been another one of those weird flickers and he could have sworn he had seen a multicoloured scarf around Genie's neck." + nar "Plus, there had been another one of those weird flickers, and he could have sworn he had seen a multicoloured scarf around Genie's neck." sna "And, you then grant the summoner three wishes?" ("snape_01") nar "Snape continued." sna "Anything they want? You can make anything come true?" ("snape_05") @@ -108,8 +108,8 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: nar "Genie said with a sarcastic edge that relieved Snape." sna "Well, then..." ("snape_01") nar "Snape said." - sna "After we find a way to get you back to your home, maybe I could come visit you and we could work something out." ("snape_28") - nar "Genie eyed him curiously and then, with a bit of his usual humour then asked." + sna "After we find a way to get you back to your home, maybe I could come visit you, and we could work something out." ("snape_28") + nar "Genie eyed him curiously and then, with a bit of his usual humour, then asked." gen "Are you sure you could resist the urge to use all three on yourself?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Snape chuckled. He momentarily considered how rarely he chuckled." nar "Not with humour, at least. He hadn't really done that since..." @@ -123,13 +123,13 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: nar "Snape said dreamily. In his mind's eye, he remembered the flaming red hair that lit a fire in his own heart." sna "I sometimes wonder if that would have made all the difference." ("snape_29") nar "Snape mused." - sna "If I would have been a better, a kinder man than I am today." ("snape_06") + sna "If I had been a better, a kinder man than I am today." ("snape_06") gen "But would you have been as popular?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie asked." gen "you were central in every book and movie. Everyone loves you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "What?" ("snape_05") nar "Snape snapped from his reverie. He looked at Genie in confusion." - gen "I mean, would you have been as powerful." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I mean, would you have been as powerful?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie said hastily." gen "Wasn't that rejection what drove you to your studies and your mastery?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Snape eyed Genie suspiciously, but let the matter pass." @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: sna "Then, one day, I could reach out to that insipid boy, with his foolish fantasies about Potter and say, \"Harry, I am your father\"!" ("snape_28") nar "Genie nodded." gen "It could work. You've got the black robes already. You just need the helmet." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - nar "Snape cocked an eyebrow in confusion. The flames leapt and danced and Genie flickered once again." + nar "Snape cocked an eyebrow in confusion. The flames leapt and danced, and Genie flickered once again." gen "No mind pay you." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie said." gen "Darkness that path, take you it will." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -162,12 +162,12 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: nar "Snape finally managed to say." nar "Genie laughed." gen "Muppet?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - sna "No thanks, I'll just have the wine." ("snape_05") + sna "No, thanks... I'll just have the wine." ("snape_05") nar "Snape replied." gen "I'm afraid that's the last of it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie said, looking mournfully at the bottle." nar "He eyed Snape through the red droppings of wine still remaining in his glass. It looked like Snape was bleeding." - nar "The image disturbed him and he put his glass down." + nar "The image disturbed him, and he put his glass down." gen "So..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie coughed once, cleared his throat and continued." gen "Did you mean it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: nar "Snape asked." gen "Yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie said, unable to keep the excitement from his voice." - gen "Would you really come to my world and set me free with a wish." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Would you really come to my world and set me free with a wish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Why not?" ("snape_06") nar "Snape said." sna "Assuming we can find a way to send you back." ("snape_09") @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ label a_spaced_out_conversation: gen "In the final frontier?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie asked, with a wink that to Snape always meant some kind of inside joke Snape never understood." nar "He decided to ignore it as he had many other times." - sna "Let me continue to research why your powers of transdimensional travel are muted here and we'll find a way to fix your problem." ("snape_05") + sna "Let me continue to research why your powers of transdimensional travel are muted here, and we'll find a way to fix your problem." ("snape_05") gen "Both our problems." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Genie suggested and this time, both of them laughed together." sna "You know, Genie, this could be the start of a beautiful friendship." ("snape_23") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_white_christmas.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_white_christmas.rpy index 623d79df..23f42ef7 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_white_christmas.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/a_white_christmas.rpy @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ label a_white_christmas: nar "Genie said as his opponent entered the ring..." her "" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "L", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3) - nar "With a smirk spread across their face...{w=0.4} Her eyes fixed on Genie's thing." + nar "With a smirk spread across her face...{w=0.4} Her eyes fixed on Genie's thing." nar "Her coach then appeared and jumped over the rope." @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ label a_white_christmas: nar "Until the opponents' coach raised their hand, and the stomping was no more." nar "Genie held his breath until there was a shout." - ton "Now lets do this thing...{w=0.4} {size=+2}Let's start...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+3}this...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+4}silly...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+5}bout!{/size}" ("mad", "base", "annoyed", "L") + ton "Now let's do this thing...{w=0.4} {size=+2}Let's start...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+3}this...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+4}silly...{/size} {w=0.4}{size=+5}bout!{/size}" ("mad", "base", "annoyed", "L") play sound "sounds/crowd_cheer.ogg" diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/an_odd_circumstance.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/an_odd_circumstance.rpy index ebffbccc..a3919e34 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/an_odd_circumstance.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/an_odd_circumstance.rpy @@ -31,13 +31,13 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: play music "music/jazz take 2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed "It was a normal night..." - "I was sitting in my office as usual, slowly chipping away at some left over paperwork..." + "I was sitting in my office as usual, slowly chipping away at some leftover paperwork..." "Leaning back in my chair, I closed my eyes for a moment, thinking back on recent events." "It has been a weird few days for sure... Not just my appearing in this office, but also the whole situation in general..." "I sat back up and hunched myself over the parchment." - "Well, I guess it could be worse... Weather is... acceptable." + "Well, I guess it could be worse... The weather is... acceptable." "Why do I have to do this stuff again? Surely there should be some kind of secretary around..." - "Suddenly the door opened as if my wishes had come true...{w=0.5} Something about this felt backwards somehow." + "Suddenly, the door opened as if my wishes had come true...{w=0.5} Something about this felt backwards somehow." call her_walk(action="enter") her "Mister D." @@ -52,10 +52,10 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: gen "My phone?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "I said in a puzzled manner..." "I never had a phone in here... in fact, there's not a single electronic device in this office..." - "After a few moments the figure stepped into the light, illuminating a girl's face." + "After a few moments, the figure stepped into the light, illuminating a girl's face." call her_walk("desk") her "..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d3) - "Her hazel coloured flowing hair reminded me of a leather bound book, filled to the brim with the secrets of the girl in front of me..." + "Her hazel coloured flowing hair reminded me of a leather-bound book, filled to the brim with the secrets of the girl in front of me..." "I felt myself becoming lost in her mysterious brown eyes, which provoked a sense of great pain and suffering." hide hermione_main with d3 @@ -64,7 +64,8 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "Taken aback by my own automatic response, I thought to myself..." gen "(What am I doing, this girl seems to think I'm someone called... mister D?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "Surely that can't be me... unless this is some other secret alias of mine... It appears she may know me though, I better press further..." + "Surely, that can't be me... Unless this is some other secret alias of mine..." + "It appears she may know me, though... I better press further..." her "I knew you were good, but I didn't think you'd manage to do it as discretely as you did..." her "How professional..." her "And such a looker too... I can't believe we've just met..." @@ -90,17 +91,17 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: her "Silencio." pause 1 - "A few seconds later I tried to ask where that voice and bright light had come from... But as I did, I could only feel my lips moving with no sound emerging..." + "A few seconds later, I tried to ask where that voice and bright light had come from... But as I did, I could only feel my lips moving with no sound emerging..." call gen_chibi("stand_by_desk", -8, 614, flip=False) with d3 "Taken aback by this, I jumped out of my chair while clutching at my vocal cords..." "I turned around, now feeling slightly worried, looking for the source of the voice." - her "Don't say anything else... you know why I'm here, we had a deal remember?" + her "Don't say anything else... You know why I'm here, we had a deal, remember?" "The girl had moved behind me in a flash!" - "Was this it... did I break a deal of ours?" + "Was this it... Did I break a deal of ours?" "Was this girl here to kill me, is that why she sounded so worried?" - "Feeling rather dizzy I steadied myself on my desk, trying to compose myself..." - "Suddenly I felt a sharp tug and I knew this must be it..." + "Feeling rather dizzy, I steadied myself on my desk, trying to compose myself..." + "Suddenly, I felt a sharp tug and I knew this must be it..." gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "I waited a few moments for the pain to begin..." gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -115,8 +116,8 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: her "I hope this should suffice... I couldn't stand the thought of discussing this any further..." her "I have a reputation to uphold after all..." - "After regaining my focus I looked down and found the girl kneeling in front of me, her hand wrapped around my shaft." - "Even if I were able to respond, I had but a seconds notice before her lips had wrapped themselves around my cock." + "After regaining my focus, I looked down and found the girl kneeling in front of me, her hand wrapped around my shaft." + "Even if I were able to respond, I had but a second's notice before her lips had wrapped themselves around my cock." call her_chibi_scene("bj") with d3 @@ -126,13 +127,13 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: "I felt myself growing harder in her mouth as her lips pressed against my skin..." her "*Slurp!* *Gobble!*" "What was it that I had done for this girl, in exchange for her degrading herself in such a manner?" - "The girl then glanced up into my eyes seeing my confused look..." + "The girl then glanced up into my eyes, seeing my confused look..." "Interpreting this expression as her efforts being unsatisfactory, she then concentrated on the task she had set for herself and pushed her head forwards, taking the whole length down her throat." her "*Gulp!* *Gobble!* *Gobble!*" - "Since I couldn't make a sound I let out a heavy breath of air and closed my eyes for a few seconds..." + "Since I couldn't make a sound, I let out a heavy breath of air and closed my eyes for a few seconds..." show screen blkfade with d3 - "After a few moments I opened my eyes and turned my head down again to observe the scene playing out in front of me." + "After a few moments, I opened my eyes and turned my head down again to observe the scene playing out in front of me." hide screen blkfade with d3 "The girl suddenly pulled her mouth away..." @@ -152,11 +153,11 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: her "*Slurp!* *Gulp!* *Slurp!*" "Her head yet again found itself further and further down my shaft, easily taking in the whole thing this time, as her tongue slowly moved across the bottom." her "*Slurp!* *Slurp!* *Slurp!*" - "For a moment I could feel her forehead pressed against my torso as my cock reached the bottom of her throat... it seemed as if time had stopped..." + "For a moment, I could feel her forehead pressed against my torso as my cock reached the bottom of her throat... it seemed as if time had stopped..." her "..." - "Suddenly she looked up into my eyes as she started to move her tongue, massaging the underside of my cock..." + "Suddenly, she looked up into my eyes as she started to move her tongue, massaging the underside of my cock..." her "*Gobble!* *Gltch!* *Slurp!*" - "My eyes closed and I felt a sudden rush of ecstasy come over me." + "I closed my eyes, and then I felt a sudden rush of ecstasy come over me." "Right after I let out an inaudible groan, my pelvic muscles tightened as I began cumming down her throat." call her_chibi_scene("bj_cum_in") @@ -188,7 +189,7 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: hide screen blkfade with d3 her "I guess that's what I get for using the silencing charm." - "Still being unable to say anything I just stood there, my chest moving up and down as my breathing slowed down." + "Still being unable to say anything, I just stood there, my chest moving up and down as my breathing slowed down." "The girl, adjusting herself and still slightly covered in semen, made her way to the door, only turning around once more..." her "I hope that was satisfactory..." her "Let it be known that Hermione never backs down on a deal..." @@ -201,7 +202,7 @@ label an_odd_circumstance: hide screen blkfade with d3 "\"Hermione\" she said..." - "It was the only clue I had gotten on who this mysterious girl was, and I still did not know what kind of favour I had granted her..." + "It was the only clue I had gotten on whom this mysterious girl was, and I still did not know what kind of favour I had granted her..." "But it didn't matter, the favour I had just received in return was more than enough to make up for anything I might have assisted her with..." "Or at least that's what I hoped..." diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/biggus_dickus.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/biggus_dickus.rpy index 33fc257e..c62332eb 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/biggus_dickus.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/biggus_dickus.rpy @@ -43,37 +43,37 @@ label biggus_dickus: gen "Ah...{w=0.4} Some quid pro quo eh?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Very well... Let it never be said that I don't reciprocate a girl going down on me!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Professor! I just need you to buy me something!" ("clench", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Oh...{w=0.4} Well that's much less exciting." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh...{w=0.4} Well, that's much less exciting." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Alright, you want some lollipops? Maybe some of that fairy chocolate?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Though I don't know what I've done to annoy you this time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No professor...{w=0.4} I'm after something a bit more...{w=0.4} Adult." ("angry", "closed", "base", "down") - gen "Very well...{w=0.4} Butterbeer then? Or Are we being daring enough to try some wine for once?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very well...{w=0.4} Butterbeer then? Or are we being daring enough to try some wine for once?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "No, Professor...{w=0.4} I would like you to buy..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") her "Three thestral strap-ons, please." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid") - gen "Is that all?{w=0.4} A little boring, but whatever you need I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Is that all?{w=0.4} A little boring, but whatever you need, I suppose." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What? I--{w=0.4} Sir, I'm worried you didn't quite hear me." ("clench", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "I'm asking you to acquire three strap-ons...{w=0.4} Modelled after Thestrals." ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "For me...{w=0.4} Your student." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid") - gen "I heard you the first time, girl. I may be old but I'm not deaf." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I heard you the first time, girl. I may be old, but I'm not deaf." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Do you need them immediately?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I-- yes.... Fastest delivery possible, please." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "If you don't mind that is..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "If you don't mind, that is..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") gen "Certainly not, I'll put in the order tonight." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Can't very well have one of my students going without her study materials." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Thank you sir." ("soft", "squint", "base", "R") gen "Don't mention it. They should be here sometime tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I assume you don't need them for one of your morning classes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "No sir. I certainly won't be using these during my morning classes." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R") - gen "Very good. Is that all then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Very good. Is that all, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I...{w=0.4} I mean...{w=0.4} Could you also buy me some of those cute plush owls?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down") her @ cheeks blush "I know I'm asking a lot..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Some owl plushies, and three strap-ons." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Got it all written down, here." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If that is all Miss Granger, then I suggest you head to your dorms." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "If that is all, Miss Granger, then I suggest you head to your dorms." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Yes sir...{w=0.4} Thank you again." ("grin", "squint", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "Good night." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Good night, girl. Pleasant dreams." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ label biggus_dickus: call ctc gen "Anything else Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Oh... No that's all... Bye then." ("angry", "base", "base", "L") + her @ cheeks blush "Oh... No, that's all... Bye then." ("angry", "base", "base", "L") call her_walk(action="leave") @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ label biggus_dickus: call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="desk", ypos="base") - her "Good evening Professor." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) + her "Good evening, Professor." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) gen "Miss Granger...{w=0.4} I assume you are here for your gifts?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Yes Professor." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid") her "I mean, if you've acquired them already." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid") @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ label biggus_dickus: gen "I'm still not sure I should be allowing you to have these things..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("angry", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid") call ctc - gen "But since I know you're a good student however, here you go!{fast}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But since I know you're a good student, however... Here you go!{fast}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "You hand Hermione the items." @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label biggus_dickus: gen "His name...{w=0.4} Is Jeff?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And what exactly is it this...{w=0.4} \"Jeff\", is going to do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, that's easy!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "He's going to fuck me silly of course!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "He's going to fuck me silly, of course!" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "Wait...{w=0.4} {size=+5}What?{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How? It's an inanimate object!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I mean sure, he's certainly big enough for it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ label biggus_dickus: gen "You little slut!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Twenty points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "What? But I'm not even selling you a favour." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "I don't care! For that plan alone you deserve some points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I don't care! For that plan alone, you deserve some points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Especially for saying it out loud!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Oh! Well thank you, sir!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "Oh! Well, thank you, sir!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "Now... If you don't mind, I'd like to head back to my dorm." ("base", "squint", "base", "R") - gen "I bet you do...{w=0.4} Very well, off you go Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I bet you do...{w=0.4} Very well, off you go, Miss Granger." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Have fun with...{w=0.4} \"Jeff\"." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Oh, I will..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "Goodnight, sir!" ("base", "base", "base", "R") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy index 218dfeac..720499ed 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/blueballing_bad.rpy @@ -119,9 +119,9 @@ label blueballing_bad: gen "I panicked! She was begging for house points and I didn't want to blow my cover!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair neutral "My god, you really are an innocent idiot." ("open", "wide", "shocked", "stare") gen "Hey!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton @ hair neutral "You know I could erase people memories if you get caught? Right?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + ton @ hair neutral "You know I could erase people's memories if you get caught? Right?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "...Wait,{w=0.5} you can do that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton @ hair neutral "Well, not too often or it might affect their brain, but--" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") + ton @ hair neutral "Well, not too often, or it might affect their brain, but--" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid") with hpunch play sound "sounds/card_punch1.ogg" gen "{b}{size=+6}I'VE BEEN BLUEBALLING MYSELF THIS WHOLE TIME, FOR NOTHING?!{/size}{/b}" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/eating_for_pleasure.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/eating_for_pleasure.rpy index 9539c83c..b72edd6e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/eating_for_pleasure.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/eating_for_pleasure.rpy @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: gen "*Gah*... this place is so dull..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Not a single gambling den or a whore house..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "And even if I don't need to eat I'd do anything for a pizza right about now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "And even if I don't need to eat, I'd do anything for a pizza right about now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hat "Just call a pizza place then..." play sound "sounds/MaleGasp.ogg" @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: hat "Wizards use it as a form of communication and travel." gen "Wait, so like a portal?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I've been able to just travel to any ole fireplace this whole time?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - hat "Hogwarts fireplaces are limited to voice communication or we'd have all sorts of dark wizards roaming this place..." + hat "Hogwarts fireplaces are limited to voice communication, or we'd have all sorts of dark wizards roaming this place..." gen "(Sounds like discrimination to me...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How does it work then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hat "There should be some powder in one of the drawers, take it and throw some in the fire and say out loud who you want to call." @@ -112,8 +112,8 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: pause 1.0 hat "Did you say Pizza--?" play sound "sounds/microphone_feedback.ogg" - "*static*... Welcome to Pizza slut, may I take your order?" - hat "Well I'll be damned..." + "*Static*... Welcome to Pizza slut, may I take your order?" + hat "Well, I'll be damned..." gen "{size=+8}Yes! Hello, is this thing on?{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "Sir, I can hear you... No need to shout." @@ -155,9 +155,9 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: "Okay then..." gen "{size=+8}Ten minutes or pizza's free?{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "Of course, sir... we've never been late using the floo..." - "hold on a second..." + "Hold on a second..." "It seems like your floo-network fireplace has blocked incoming travel." - gen "{size=+8}What a shame... I guess you'll have to make your way here the old fashioned way.{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{size=+8}What a shame... I guess you'll have to make your way here the old-fashioned way.{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{size=+8}Headmaster's office is on the seventh floor, enjoy the moving staircases!{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "But sir..." play sound "sounds/microphone_feedback.ogg" @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: gen "(A phone would have been so much easier...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") play sound "sounds/spit.ogg" gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - hat "No just use the..." + hat "No, just use the..." gen "Don't worry, I got this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_chibi("stand_alt") @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ label eating_for_pleasure: call her_walk(action="leave") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "These wizard customs... ruining something as holy as pizza..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Mmm... Come to genie you beautiful temptress..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Mmm... Come to Genie, you beautiful temptress..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") show screen blkfade with d5 diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/genie_house_elf.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/genie_house_elf.rpy index 9b3c7f21..37fd962b 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/genie_house_elf.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/genie_house_elf.rpy @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label genie_house_elf: nar "This story takes place after the introduction of Snape and before meeting Hermione." gen "(How does that door work?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "The genie thought." - gen "(How do the people know I've summoned them? I don't have a secretary... that I know of anyway.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(How do the people know I've summoned them? I don't have a secretary... that I know of, anyway.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Have they been keeping a secretary from me? I should ask Sn..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Snape then opened the door, his pointy nose protruding under his silky hair." @@ -35,14 +35,14 @@ label genie_house_elf: nar "At least he knew things about aliens..." sna "Well, you're the headmaster are you not?" ("snape_06", xpos="base", ypos="base") nar "Snape said as if that meant anything." - nar "A look of confusion spread across the genie's face which only made Snape smirk even more." + nar "A look of confusion spread across the genie's face, which only made Snape smirk even more." nar "He then composed himself after seeing this unusual expression on the headmaster's face." sna "I keep forgetting that you don't know these things." ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base") sna "students learn it on day one." ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base") sna "The headmaster is in control of the school and its inhabitants." ("snape_24", xpos="base", ypos="base") nar "Snape said in a matter of fact sort of way." gen "I know that, we have schools in my world too." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "But generally we don't wave wooden sticks around yelling random words." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "But generally, we don't wave wooden sticks around yelling random words." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "Snape flinched, as if the notion of magic consisting of waving a wand and yelling random words was utterly absurd." sna "No. You're literally in control of the school... look." ("snape_08", xpos="base", ypos="base") nar "Snape said, pulling his wand out and waving it." @@ -59,12 +59,12 @@ label genie_house_elf: gen "A house... elf?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Is that like Santa's elves?" ("smile", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "The genie said, now climbing down to sit on his chair." - sna "Sort of, they don't get paid so they do have that in common..." ("snape_05", xpos="base", ypos="base") + sna "Sort of, they don't get paid, so they do have that in common..." ("snape_05", xpos="base", ypos="base") nar "Snape muttered under his breath..." - sna "The houses elves here can send us messages so we can go where we're needed." ("snape_05", xpos="base", ypos="base") + sna "The houses elves here can send us messages, so we can go where we're needed." ("snape_05", xpos="base", ypos="base") sna "He just sits here invisible during the day and cleans and eats at night." ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base") gen "The house elf cleans?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "I thought I had some sort of magic self cleaning desk..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I thought I had some sort of magic self-cleaning desk..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") nar "The genie said sheepishly." hide snape_main hide screen bld1 @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label genie_house_elf: helf "I see it all, I clean it all... every... last... bit of it." sna "..." ("snape_08", xpos="base", ypos="base") - nar "After a few moments Snape turned around, started walking towards the door and said." + nar "After a few moments, Snape turned around, started walking towards the door and said." sna "If that is all, I'll be in the dungeons." ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base") sna "I've been working on a new cleaning solution." ("snape_01", xpos="base", ypos="base") sna "It might come in handy sooner than I thought." ("snape_02", xpos="base", ypos="base") @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ label genie_house_elf: nar "The door shut and silence spread across the room, only interrupted after a few minutes by the house elf." helf "So, should I turn invisible again sir?" - gen "Yes... yes that would be for the best." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes... Yes that would be for the best." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call blkfade diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/not_so_great_escape.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/not_so_great_escape.rpy index 7072ca5a..8e9de292 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/not_so_great_escape.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/not_so_great_escape.rpy @@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ label not_so_great_escape: nar "Tonks leans over the window and sees Genie lying face down in a rose bush." - g8 "Bloody hell..." + gen "Bloody hell..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Sigh*... He'll be fine..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d5) call blkfade diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy index 78c6e98a..ecd9eb48 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/panty_raid.rpy @@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ label panty_raid: gen "Well then, perhaps today is your lucky day." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Really?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "" ("soft") - gen "Yes, in fact you may wish to remain as unseen as possible during your activities today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yes! In fact, you may wish to remain as unseen as possible during your activities today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "(That doesn't sound suspicious at all...)" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") her @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I would very much like for you to recover one of the most revered and sacred objects in this academy...{w=0.5} No, in the world!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Oh! You want me to recover a magical artifact?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Oh! You want me to recover a magical artefact?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Something like that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ label panty_raid: her "{size=-4}I only wish you would have asked this of me sooner...{/size}" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") her "You can count on me, [name_genie_hermione]! I am happy to perform a task such as this one." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "Great! Now all the information I have for this \"artifact\" is an ancient riddle..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Great! Now all the information I have for this \"artefact\" is an ancient riddle..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Are you ready?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid_soft") her "" ("base") @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ label panty_raid: her @ cheeks blush "If you wanted to see my...{w=0.3} *ahem*{w=0.3} {i}undergarments{/i}, you could have just asked..." ("disgust", "squint", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "{size=-4}You didn't have to make the whole story up to grab my attention...{/size}" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") gen "By Merlin's beard! I think you've got it girl...{w=0.5} {size=-4}for the most part at least.{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], my classes start soon, can we just get it over with so I can get my points and leave?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "[name_genie_hermione], my classes start soon, can we just get it over with, so I can get my points and leave?" ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") gen "Such eagerness...{w=0.3} but where's the challenge in handing me your own?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "Sorry, you wanted me to hand you a pair?" ("open", "wide", "base", "mid") @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ label panty_raid: her @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "base", "base", "R") gen "You've outdone yourself [name_hermione_genie], how did you manage this feat?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I would prefer not to talk about it..." ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") - gen "Well you can certainly colour me impressed." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well, you can certainly colour me impressed." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Does that mean I've earned some extra house points?" ("open", "base", "base", "R") gen "I think the situation calls for it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("smile", "base", "base", "R") @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label panty_raid: her "...!" ("angry", "wide", "base", "stare") her "Uh.... Well, the person I bough--{w=0.3} *ahem*{w=0.2} {size=+2}BORROWED{/size} these from must have forgotten to take the price tag off." ("open", "happy", "base", "mid") her "" ("normal") - gen "I see...{w=0.3} Well whoever you took them from must be a bit slow to forget something like that, don't you agree?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I see...{w=0.3} Well, whoever you took them from must be a bit slow to forget something like that, don't you agree?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Uhh..." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "I would even dare to call them...{w=0.2} a moron." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "..." ("upset") @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ label panty_raid: her "I am sorry [name_genie_hermione]. I wo--" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "Wait what?" ("shock", "base", "worried", "mid") her "" ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") - gen "I never imagined you'd possess such \"out of the box\" problem solving!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I never imagined you'd possess such \"out of the box\" problem-solving!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Really?" ("open", "base", "worried", "mid") her "" ("soft", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "You fumbled the landing, but otherwise cheated like a pro!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -246,12 +246,12 @@ label panty_raid: her "Hello [name_genie_hermione], you called?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3, flip=False) her "" ("base") gen "Hello to you too, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Say...{w=0.3} would you like to earn some points today girl?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Say...{w=0.3} would you like to earn some points today, girl?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Possibly..." ("open") her "But that depends on the task required of me." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "R") gen "I would like you to try yourself at that \"treasure hunt\" again." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*sigh* I knew that sooner or later you would ask me about it, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") + her "*Sigh* I knew that sooner or later, you would ask me about it, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") her "Do I have a choice?" ("upset", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Certainly, if you don't mind those \"Slytherin Harlots\" taking the house cup!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I Do mind..." ("upset", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ label panty_raid: her @ cheeks blush "No one." ("open", "base", "worried", "R") her @ cheeks blush "" ("soft") gen "Come on now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "Umm...{w=0.3} Does that really matter?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her @ cheeks blush "*Umm*...{w=0.3} Does that really matter?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "" ("soft") gen "It does to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*sigh*" ("soft", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") @@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ label panty_raid: gen "How dull.{w=0.5} forty-five stupid house points to Gryffindor." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Do those count the same as regular points?" ("annoyed") gen "I suppose..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Goodnight then sir." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Goodnight then, sir." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") call her_walk("door", "base") @@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ label panty_raid: gen "Don't you worry, I'm just teasing you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid") gen "But we've made it quite a habit by now, didn't we?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "You coming here every morning and asking for points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "You, coming here every morning and asking for points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "... for which in return you bring me panties of that colleague of yours..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down") @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label panty_raid: gen "Do you really think we have a class you wouldn't know about?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "True... Then, do you know of how many \"Connies\" attend Hogwarts?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("normal") - her "There aren't any in Gryffindor or Ravenclaw I believe, but I'm not sure for some of the other houses." ("open", "base", "base", "mid_soft") + her "There aren't any in Gryffindor or Ravenclaw, I believe, but I'm not sure for some of the other houses." ("open", "base", "base", "mid_soft") her "" ("normal") gen "I feel as though there's some context missing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "*Ehm*... alright, so...{w=0.5} I was in the Gryffindor girl's dorm, working on my \"task\"." ("open") @@ -463,28 +463,28 @@ label panty_raid: gen "Yes, Yes... But how does this connect back to a Connie?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Right... Well, I obviously chose a time at which I believed all my dorm mates would be gone." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "But just as I was shoving the last pair into my bag, Katie Bell walked in..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down") - her @ cheeks blush "She caught me red handed!" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") + her @ cheeks blush "She caught me red-handed!" ("disgust", "narrow", "worried", "down") her "" ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "Or silky handed!{w=1.0}{nw}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Or silky handed!{fast}... panty handed?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "" ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Sounded better in my head...{w=0.5} give me a minute and I'll come up with something that works..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Sounded better in my head...{w=0.5} give me a minute, and I'll come up with something that works..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "I've never been more embarrassed in my entire life!" ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") her "" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R_soft") gen "Pff, as if you've never said {i}that{/i} before." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her @ cheeks blush "I mean it! I was mortified standing there clutching her panties while stumbling over my words for an excuse." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") + her @ cheeks blush "I mean it! I was mortified, standing there clutching her panties while stumbling over my words for an excuse." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") her @ cheeks blush "" ("upset") gen "And what did she do?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well... that's the odd thing, while I was floundering like a fish she was just grinning at me. Then she said, and I quote..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") + her "Well... That's the odd thing, while I was floundering like a fish, she was just grinning at me. Then she said, and I quote..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "\"I always had a feeling about you Granger... But if you want them, you'll need to do me a favour. Meet me tonight and we can help with Connie's Linguistics homework\"." ("open", "base", "base", "R") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Connie's linguist?-{w=1.0}{nw}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Connie's linguist?-{fast} oh I see..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Connie's linguist?-{fast} Oh, I see..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "As embarrassing as the circumstances were, I would never turn down a request to help a student with homework! But I don't think we have a linguistics class or what Connie she was--" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid") gen "{i}Cunnilingus{/i} [name_hermione_genie]... She was asking for Cunnilingus." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "*huh*? But she said she wanted study help." + her "*Huh*? But she said she wanted study help." gen "It was a metaphor... She was assuming you were a bit more worldly than you really are." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "I am plenty worldly!" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid") her "..." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R") @@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ label panty_raid: gen "You can go then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "..." ("annoyed") her @ cheeks blush "......" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") - her @ cheeks blush "What about the points sir?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") + her @ cheeks blush "What about the points, sir?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") her @ cheeks blush "" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") gen "Oh yes, right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Forty-five points to Gryffindor!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ label panty_raid: pause 1.0 fem "Who is it?" pause 0.5 - her "It's me... Hermione granger." + her "It's me... Hermione Granger." play sound "sounds/door.ogg" her "Hello Katie I--" play sound "sounds/giggle2.ogg" @@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ label panty_raid: play sound "sounds/slap_03.ogg" nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{nw}" play sound "sounds/door2.ogg" - nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{fast}, then shuts the door." + nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her into the room{fast}, then shuts the door." pause 1.0 play sound "sounds/09_lock.ogg" pause 0.5 @@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ label panty_raid: her @ cheeks blush "Oh, poor [name_genie_hermione], I had no idea you were so pent up. You can start calling me out more than twice a day if that isn't enough." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid_soft") gen "During the day? But what about your classes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her @ cheeks blush "*Hmm*? Oh well, missing one or two wouldn't hurt... Especially if the headmaster has an important \"assignment\" for me." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") - gen "I'll consider it... Now let's circle back to you, Katie and your binge of her minge." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'll consider it... Now let's circle back to you, Katie, and your binge of her minge." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Professor... How dare you... I would never even think to shamelessly do something so heinous with a classmate and give you all the juicy details..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "R") her @ cheeks blush "For less than forty house points." ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid") her @ cheeks blush "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/previously_at_hogwarts.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/previously_at_hogwarts.rpy index aeb923e9..d6f46655 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/previously_at_hogwarts.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/previously_at_hogwarts.rpy @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label prev_at_hogwarts: sna "And that Potter boy..." ("snape_08") dum3 "There it is..." sna "The Potter boy?" ("snape_25") - dum1 "Yes, I've noticed you've been quite stressed lately about this... Potter situation of yours for the lack of a better term." + dum1 "Yes, I've noticed you've been quite stressed lately about this... Potter situation of yours, for the lack of a better term." sna "And your point?" ("snape_09") dum2 "Ah yes... my point." dum1 "Where was I again..." @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ label prev_at_hogwarts: sna "Are you joking with me right now?" ("snape_04") dum1 "I'm being quite serious... stress can be quite taxing on your body." sna "I..." ("snape_01") - sna "I need a moment... I'll talk to you later Albus." ("snape_06") + sna "I need a moment... I'll talk to you later, Albus." ("snape_06") dum1 "I thought we were getting somewhere..." sna "..." ("snape_01") hide snape_main diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/suck_and_run.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/suck_and_run.rpy index cf28285c..3b3eb714 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/suck_and_run.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/suck_and_run.rpy @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ label suck_and_run: call setup_fireplace_hangout(char="snape") - sna "*Ah*... Been looking forward to this..." ("snape_23", ypos="head") - gen "Rough day I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + sna "*Ah*... I've been looking forward to this..." ("snape_23", ypos="head") + gen "Rough day, I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Bloody slackers, all of them!" ("snape_17") gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "What's the point of me teaching them anything if they can't even bother staying awake?" ("snape_32") @@ -54,8 +54,8 @@ label suck_and_run: sna "No, these students in particular are some Hufflepuff boys." ("snape_16") sna "Now they're lazy at the best of times, but catching someone sleeping in my class... That's a first." ("snape_07") sna "I wish I could hang them up by their ankles, like in the old days! That would show them!" ("snape_08") - gen "Come on man, it's Halloween!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "Cheer up a little, will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Come on, man... It's Halloween!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Cheer up a little, will you?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "*Mmm*... The time of year when girls will put on any type of outfit with the word \"slutty\" written in front of it." ("snape_23") gen "Exactly!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Wait a minute..." ("snape_01") @@ -71,14 +71,14 @@ label suck_and_run: sna "You're such a mystery to me sometimes, Genie..." ("snape_06") gen "Come on, you must have seen it! At least heard of it." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "I'm afraid I have not seen this Nightmare {i}moo-wee{/i} thing." ("snape_09") - gen "Okay so there's this guy... Jack Skellington, and he's the \"Pumpkin King\" of Halloween Town." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Okay, so there's this guy... Jack Skellington, and he's the \"Pumpkin King\" of Halloween Town." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Which kind of makes him the boss of the place. Only there's a mayor. Look, I don't know enough about the politics." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Anyway... He decides he wants to be Santa Claus, so he kidnaps him in order to take over his position." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Only then the Americans shoot him down and Jack has to release Santa in order to save Christmas." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_03") gen "Actually, maybe it is a Christmas movie after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "..." ("snape_04") - gen "Yeah, you're right... In that case Die Hard would easily take the top spot." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Yeah, you're right... In that case, Die Hard would easily take the top spot." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Now that I think of it, the villain kind of looks like--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") sna "Die... Hard?" ("snape_05") gen "Don't you dare tell me it's not A Christmas movie!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ label suck_and_run: ton "Isn't that just my normal clothing?" ("soft", "base", "base", "down") gen "That's true..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So... What is it then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So... What is it, then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton "*Hmm*... Not sure I should ruin the surprise." ("horny", "wink", "base", "mid") ton @ hair horny "I'm sure you'll find out soon enough..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "R") #Glance #hornyhair gen "Looking forward to it." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ label suck_and_run: ton "Really?" ("disgust", "wide", "shocked", "mid") ton "Well... Colour me surprised..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid") gen "Yes... He seemed quite eager to find out what the girls will be wearing this year in fact." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ton "Oh, so it's like that is it?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") + ton "Oh, so it's like that, is it?" ("base", "narrow", "raised", "mid") gen "He also mentioned that some Hufflepuff boys have been falling asleep during his lessons... What do you think--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ cheeks heavy_blush hair horny "What?! Why do you think I'd know anything about Hufflepuff boys falling asleep in class!?" ("silly", "happyCl", "worried", "mid") ton @ cheeks blush hair horny "Are you implying that I'm sneaking into their room to fuck them? That I'm draining their cocks dry every night!?" ("scream", "base", "angry", "mid") @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label suck_and_run: play background "sounds/slickloopfast.ogg" fadein 2 ton @ hair angry "*Slurp* *Slurp* *slurp*!" ("open_wide_tongue", "narrow", "base", "up") gen "*Argh*!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So...{w=0.4} *Ah*... What is it then?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "So...{w=0.4} *Ah*... What is it, then?" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "*Slurp*?" ("open_wide_tongue", "base", "base", "mid") gen "What kind of foul creature am I dealing with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") ton @ hair angry "*Slurp*?" ("open_wide_tongue", "base", "raised", "mid") diff --git a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/whose_points.rpy b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/whose_points.rpy index e3a0392f..be026cf0 100644 --- a/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/whose_points.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/minigames/mirror/events/whose_points.rpy @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ label whose_points: her @ cheeks blush "This cauldron hasn't been used for years. It's all mouldy and full of muck!" ("grin", "base", "worried", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base") play sound "sounds/applause01.ogg" - hat "Boo! There's no cauldrons in the bedroom!" + hat "Boo! There are no cauldrons in the bedroom!" gen "Quiet now, it was a good euphemism. Ten points to Gryffindor." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") hide hermione_main @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ label whose_points: gen "Go ahead..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - ast "\"Things that you would not share with your classmates, but would share with... \"what do you call him again? ah yes, \"[name_genie_luna]\"." ("open", "base", "base", "down") + ast "\"Things that you would not share with your classmates, but would share with... \"what do you call him again? Ah yes, \"[name_genie_luna]\"." ("open", "base", "base", "down") hide astoria_main with d3 @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ label whose_points: ast "Harlot! Harlot! Harlot!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos=400, ypos="base") lun "How do those points taste now?" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "L", xpos=600, ypos="base") - lun "The whole wizarding world is going see your tits!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") + lun "The whole wizarding world is going to see your tits!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid") hide luna_main hide astoria_main with d3 diff --git a/game/scripts/rooms/seventh_floor/init.rpy b/game/scripts/rooms/seventh_floor/init.rpy index ef83ae1e..ceee5229 100644 --- a/game/scripts/rooms/seventh_floor/init.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/rooms/seventh_floor/init.rpy @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ label seventh_floor: call gen_walk("left_mid", speed=1.5) - gen "Maybe if I... or I could..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Maybe if I... Or I could..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call gen_walk("right", speed=1.5) pause .6 @@ -60,6 +60,6 @@ label seventh_floor: call gen_chibi("stand_alt", flip=False) pause.8 - gen "Well... will you look at that!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Well then... Will you look at that!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call screen room_menu