From c4da5bf77823f67578cc93c6c1c6d24a52290364 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LoafyLemon Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2022 19:02:01 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading --- .../hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy index af02929a..9a63377e 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy @@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: hide hermione with fade - her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff common-room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..." + her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff Common Room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..." her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..." her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..." her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..." @@ -287,14 +287,13 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2: with fade gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "So, did the guy even see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - her "Well, I think he may have seen the one..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") - her "Although, from the way he was looking at me..." + gen "You've got one tit out at least. As a wise man once said--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "{i}A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush.{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit." her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")