From dc6c496f4ea52872788898326df90bbcea746cad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Johnny28 Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2022 22:07:06 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Writing tweaks - Luna * Minor writing tweaks on Luna Inspect body and talk to me favours. --- .../luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy | 2 +- .../luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy | 30 +++++++++---------- 2 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy index 33e4a779..c00256b1 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy @@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro: call nar(">Luna shuffles uncomfortably and then glances up at you, seemingly unable to find what to say...") - gen "(Good job me..{w=0.4} I have royally fucked it up this time.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "(Good job me...{w=0.4} I have royally fucked it up this time.)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Look, accidents happen to the best of--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I'm sorry [lun_genie_name]!" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve) gen "..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy index 80beddc4..ed81598a 100644 --- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy +++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy @@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T2_E1_repeat: gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Could I...{w} Could I watch you do it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "You want to...{w=0.4} Watch me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Yes, If I'm supposed to learn about these things then wouldn't it be best if I watched you do it?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") + lun "Yes, If I'm supposed to learn about these things, then wouldn't it be best if I watched you do it?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid") gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Please, [lun_genie_name]! Even if I'm not ready yet myself, I really want to be able to help you properly once I am!" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid") gen "Well...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} When you put it that way..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T2_E1_repeat: lun "How big is it going to get?" ("open", "base", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "Quite...{w=0.4} Quite a fair bit bigger..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call nar(">You look up at the girl, who's now watching your every stroke with excitement.") - lun "Wow, it's so much bigger now! It's like unicorn horn!" ("open", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") + lun "Wow, it's so much bigger now! It's like a unicorn horn!" ("open", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") call nar(">With Luna so close to you, you can't help but notice her reddening cheeks and quickening breath.") lun "Wait, surely it can't be as hard as a unicorn horn..." ("soft", "base", "raised", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "(*Ngh*...{w=0.4} You'd be surprised...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: gen "If you compare it to an elephant trunk that is... Actually when it comes to penis size, mine is absolutely massive!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's why I'm such a powerful wizard." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "The two are directly related." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - "-Overexaggerate-": + "-Over-exaggerate-": gen "It's absolutely massive..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "I knew it!" ("grin", "base", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "Actually, I have to use magic to make it smaller than its true size." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -801,17 +801,17 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: gen "Who do you think designed these robes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Ehm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Me of course!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "If everyone has to wear loose fitting clothes then they wouldn't question why I'm always wearing them." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "It is a curse... Sporting such a massive phallus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "I... I'm sorry [lun_genie_name]... I had no idea..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "That's the curse of being such a powerful wizard..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - gen "The more powerful you are the larger it is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Ever since I normalised wearing loose-fitting robes, nobody has ever questioned me about it." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "It is truly a curse... Sporting such a massive phallus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "I--{w=0.2} I'm sorry [lun_genie_name]... I had no idea..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + gen "That's the downside of being such a powerful wizard..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "The more powerful you are, the larger the member." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") "-Play it down-": gen "Nah, it's tiny..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Really?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Yep..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "How do other people even hide theirs then?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") - gen "Oh, you mean compared to other people?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Oh, you meant compared to other people?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You should've specified then... Size is quite relative you know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "This planet is tiny compared to the sun, which is tiny compared to the universe." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Then... How big is it compared to the average person?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -831,10 +831,10 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: lun "I see..." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "Now if you excuse me, I need to concentrate on this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Of course [lun_genie_name]..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") - gen "Feel free to talk about how big it is by the way... It might help." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "Feel free to tell me more about how big it is by the way... It might help." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... *Ehm*..." ("mad", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") call nar(">You continue stroking your cock in anticipation as Luna looks at you, pondering what to say.") - lun "Your penis is so big [lun_genie_name]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") + lun "Your penis is so big, [lun_genie_name]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "Yes, that's it... Keep going, tell me how great I am." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "And you're so powerful..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") @@ -842,7 +842,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: lun "More powerful than merlin!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") gen "*Ngh*...{w=0.3} Yeah...{w=0.3} That guy, he's so overrated!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") call nar(">You feel yourself getting closer to the edge as Luna strokes your ego.") - gen "I'm... I'm close, girl keep going..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + gen "I'm... I'm close girl, keep going..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Oh... *Ehm*... I'm not sure what to--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush") gen "Tell me I'm better than Jafar!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "*Ehm*... I don't know who--" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") @@ -866,11 +866,11 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat: with d3 lun "Wow... It went so far!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "L") - lun "Is that related to your wizard powers too?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") - gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} That's just sheer willpower..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") + lun "Is that related to your wizarding powers too?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid") + gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} That's just sheer willpower... And a couple of kegel's every now and then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") lun "Astonishing..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL") gen "You can stop staring at it now..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") - lun "Oh... Of course [lun_genie_name]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") + lun "Oh... Of course, [lun_genie_name]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Luna walks to mid position call lun_walk(path=[(230, 455),(230, 470),(440, 470),("mid", "base")])