Improvements

* Improved writing and posing for "show me your panties, show me your tits, give a handjob, kiss a girl and final events".

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts:
     elif states.her.tier <= 3:
         her "" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     elif states.her.tier <= 5:
-        her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
+        her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     else:
         her "" ("base", "narrow", "annoyed", "up", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts:
     if game.daytime:
         her "Now if you don't mind, I'd better go... My classes are about to start."
     else:
-        her "I'd better go now then. It's getting pretty late..."
+        her "I'd better head off for today, It's getting pretty late..."
 
 
     # Hermione leaves
@@ -481,11 +481,11 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_intro_E1:
     gen "Did I ever tell you what magnificent tits you have?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "............" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     her "Why do you have to be so vulgar, [name_genie_hermione]?!" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-    gen "Just take the compliment and come a bit closer to show them to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Just take the compliment, and show them to me..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
 
-    her "Are you only going to watch, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "Are you only going to watch, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    her "Alright then..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
 
     $ current_payout = 25
 
@@ -495,9 +495,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_E1:
     her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
 
     gen "I need to see your tits, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
-    her "Are you only going to watch, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "You're only going to watch, right?" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     $ current_payout = 25
@@ -508,9 +508,9 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts_T4_E2:
     her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
 
     gen "I have to see your marvellous knockers, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
-    her "Are you only going to watch, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "Are you only going to watch, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     $ current_payout = 25

game/scripts/events/final_events.rpy

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ label ball_quest_E1:
     gen "*Ehm*... Sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Please excuse me if I am being too direct with this, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid")
     her "But I think you should put {b}me{/b} in charge." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
-    her "I did it last year and it was the best organised \"autumn ball\" Hogwarts has had in years." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
+    her "I did it last year, and it was the best organised \"autumn ball\" Hogwarts has had in years." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
     her "You said so yourself, [name_genie_hermione]. Do you remember?" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Right, of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "So, is this a yes?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ label ball_quest_E1:
     her "Yes, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid")
 
     $ d_flag_01 = False
-    $ d_flag_02 = False
+    $ d_flag_02 = False # Have sex with me
     $ d_flag_03 = False # Masturbation flag
 
     label .choices:
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ label ball_quest_E1:
             $ states.her.mood += 10
             $ d_flag_02 = True
 
-            her "I will have to... sleep...?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid")
+            her "I will have to--{w=0.2} Sleep...?" ("angry", "wide", "base", "mid")
             her "..................." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME.
             her "I am not stupid, [name_genie_hermione]... Quite the opposite in fact." ("angry", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -485,10 +485,10 @@ label ball_quest_E2:
     gen "I'm guessing that's bad?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Bad?{w} {size=+5}BAD?!{/size}" ("snape_10")
     sna "{size=+5}That's a catastrophe!{/size}" ("snape_15")
-    sna "last year's ball was completely horrible!" ("snape_16")
+    sna "Last year's ball was completely horrible!" ("snape_16")
     gen "Was it? I heard differently..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Oh really? And who told you that?" ("snape_10")
-    gen "not a very reliable source apparently..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Not a very reliable source apparently..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Dammit... Dammit all to hell..." ("snape_08")
     sna "I had big plans for the thing..." ("snape_07")
     gen "Really? Like what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -517,10 +517,9 @@ label ball_quest_E2:
     sna "And since you are my boss..."
     sna "I don't know why I even bother teaching those so-called students..." ("snape_06")
     gen "To maintain the charade?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "for the Same reason why I never leave this room...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Right..." ("snape_05")
     sna "But you know what else could endanger our little enterprise?"
-    sna "Me losing it during class and strangling a couple of Gryffindor maggots with my bare hands..." ("snape_07")
+    sna "Me losing it during class, and strangling a couple of Gryffindor maggots with my bare hands..." ("snape_07")
     gen "*Hmm*... I see your point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     sna "Seriously, man... I need a drink..." ("snape_06")