Fixes and improvements

* Fixed genie distributing more points than he promised on "Flash A Classmate" public requests.
* Improved writing and posing during "show me your tits, flash your tits, flirt with students, flirt with teachers, kiss a girl and "let them grope you".
* Removed blktone and bld in some places where it's replaced by inner thought and narrator character.
* Lowered points payout slightly for "Kiss a girl" public favour.
* Removed mood penalty on one of Hermione's public events as bad mood is inescapable.

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy

@@ -565,8 +565,6 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
 
     call her_chibi_scene("behind_desk_front")
 
-    hide screen blktone
-    hide screen bld1
     hide screen blkfade
     with d5
     call ctc
@@ -712,8 +710,6 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
         nar "You remove your hands from Hermione's love canal, fingers drenched by her love juices."
 
     call her_chibi_scene("behind_desk_front")
-    show screen bld1
-    with d3
 
     gen "This shall do for now [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/give_me_a_handy.rpy

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ label hg_pf_handjob_1:
             pause.8
 
             her "So, did it work? Are you ready to... finish, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down")
-            gen "{size=-4}(Surprisingly, yes! I'm about to cum! Should I warn her?){/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "{size=-4}(Surprisingly, yes! I'm about to cum!){/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     menu:
         gen "..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/grope_her.rpy

@@ -207,11 +207,11 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_intro_E1:
     gen "How would you like to earn some house points today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "And what would I need to do to earn them?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "Oh nothing too out of the ordinary." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "You just stand here while I grope you for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "You'd just have to stand here, while I grope you for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "[name_genie_hermione]... I'd prefer it if you wouldn't make me such offers..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "Why? Too hard to resist?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Nothing like that, [name_genie_hermione]."
+    her "Nothing of the sort, [name_genie_hermione]."
-    gen "Well, how about you come closer and bare your tits for me...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Well, that's my offer, so how about you come closer and bare your tits for me...?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "I feel like playing with them a little..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "!!!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Or your butt..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -220,14 +220,14 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_intro_E1:
     her "[name_genie_hermione]! Don't you think this is too much?" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
     gen "You think?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "I am not one of those harlots from Slytherin, you know..."
-    gen "I know... You are from {i}Gryfonmon{/i}... or something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #<- GRYFFINDOR MISSPELLED ON PURPOSE
+    gen "I know... You are from {i}Gryfonmon{/i}... Or something..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") #<- GRYFFINDOR MISSPELLED ON PURPOSE
-    her "And if I don't feel like it, I don't have to sell you a single favour, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
+    her "So if I don't feel like it, then I don't have to sell you a single favour, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
     gen "Of course..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "..................." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
-    gen "I'll give you {number=current_payout} house points for this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "So, I'd like to award {number=current_payout} house points to Gryffindor... If you \"feel\" like earning any more points from me, that is." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "......................." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
-    her "All you are going to do is watch, [name_genie_hermione]?"
+    her "Is watching me not enough, [name_genie_hermione]?"
-    gen "Well, I feel more like touching, actually..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Why watch, when I could touch..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "...................................."
 
     call her_walk("desk", "base", reduce=0.8)
@@ -249,7 +249,6 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_intro_E1:
                 nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her bra..."
             else:
                 nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits..." #Fallback, she'd usually wear a bra on this level.
-            her "[name_genie_hermione].....?" ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
 
             jump hg_pf_grope_breasts_T3
 
@@ -264,8 +263,8 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_E1:
     gen "How would you like to earn some house points today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "And what would I need to do to earn them?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "annoyed", "mid")
     gen "Get squeezed!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "squeezed......?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
+    her "Squeezed......?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
-    gen "Come here, I'll show you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Come here, and I'll show you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "down")
 
     call her_walk("desk", "base", reduce=0.8)
@@ -281,8 +280,12 @@ label hg_pf_grope_T3_E1:
 
     menu:
         "\"I'm gonna molest your tits now.\"":
-            #nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her uniform..."
+            if hermione.is_worn("top"):
-            her "[name_genie_hermione].....?" ("disgust", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
+                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her clothes..."
+            elif hermione.is_worn("bra"):
+                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits through her bra..."
+            else:
+                nar "You reach out swiftly and grab both of her tits..." #Fallback, she'd usually wear a bra on this level.
 
             jump hg_pf_grope_breasts_T3
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/lets_have_sex.rpy

@@ -76,7 +76,6 @@ label hg_pf_sex:
 ### Fail Events ###
 
 label hg_pf_sex_fail:
-    call bld
     gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Why don't you come over here and I pound your pussy for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "With my cock!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -286,8 +285,7 @@ label hg_pf_sex_T6_intro_E3:
     hide screen blkfade
     with d5
 
-    call bld
+    gen "(*Hmm*... Now that I look at it, I feel like fucking her ass...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "*Hmm*... (Now that I look at it, I feel like fucking her ass...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     menu:
         gen "(Where should I put it in?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -356,8 +354,6 @@ label hg_pf_sex_T6_E3: # repeats
     hide screen blkfade
     with d5
 
-    call bld
-
     menu:
         gen "(How should I fuck her this time?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         "-Use her pussy!-":
@@ -704,8 +700,6 @@ label hg_sex_1:
     show her_sex_personal mouth_crooked_smile eyebrows_worried eyes_closed cheeks_blush as cg
     her "*Ah-a*...{heart}{w=0.2}I will go insane!{heart}{heart}{heart}"
     gen "{size=+7}*Grragh*!{/size}"
-    hide screen bld1
-    with d1
     call ctc
 
     show her_sex_personal mouth_angry eyebrows_worried eyes_wide_down cheeks_blush as cg
@@ -756,7 +750,6 @@ label hg_sex_1:
 
             show her_sex_personal mouth_soft eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_r cheeks_blush as cg
             her "You came all over me..."
-            hide screen bld1
             call ctc
 
             gen "Well, that was rather intense..."
@@ -770,8 +763,6 @@ label hg_sex_1:
             her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} yes...{heart}{heart}{heart}"
             show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_mid cheeks_blush as cg
             her "Although my legs are still shaking...{heart}"
-            hide screen bld1
-            with d1
             call ctc
 
             if game.daytime:
@@ -826,14 +817,10 @@ label hg_sex_1:
 
             show her_sex_personal mouth_open_tongue eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_down cheeks_blush as cg
             her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}{heart}{heart}"
-            hide screen bld1
-            with d1
 
             show her_sex_personal mouth_grin eyebrows_base eyes_base_mid cheeks_blush as cg
             her "You came inside of me..."
             gen "I sure did."
-            hide screen bld1
-            with d1
             call ctc
 
             show her_sex_personal mouth_soft eyebrows_base eyes_narrow_down cheeks_blush as cg

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_panties.rpy

@@ -57,15 +57,15 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties:
     else:
         her "It's getting pretty late, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
     her "Will this be all?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    gen "Yes, you can go now." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Yes, that shall do for now, you may leave." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     # Hermione stops at the door
     call her_walk("door", "base")
 
     # If Hermione is at tier 4+, she does not care/forgets about points.
     if states.her.tier >= 4:
-        her "What about my points..."
+        her "(What about my points...)"
-        her "Eh... Who cares..."
+        her "(*Eh*... Who cares...)"
 
     # Hermione leaves
     call her_chibi("leave")
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_intro_E1:
         gen "Take them off for me, yes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         gen "For Gryffindor, obviously." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "So I will get extra points for this?" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+        her "So, I will get extra points for this?" ("open", "closed", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Of course, you shall receive twenty extra points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "*Hmm*..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "R", cheeks="blush")
         her "For how long?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -347,10 +347,10 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_intro_E1:
         her "...{w=0.4} How much extra?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
         gen "Ten points." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "Just ten?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-        gen "Ten points not good enough for a quick glance of what's under those panties?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Is ten points not good enough for a quick glance of what's under those panties?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "It's not like I haven't gotten a good look already..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
-        her "I suppose... If it's just a quick glance..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
+        her "I suppose...{w=0.4} If it's just a quick glance..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
 
         $ current_payout += 10
 
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_intro_E1:
     her "Okay, that's{nw}" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
     $ hermione.wear("panties")
-    her "Okay, that's{fast} enough..." ("open", "squint", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    her "Okay, that's{fast} enough..."
 
     gen "Very well, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_E1:
             gen "I'm sure it does." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         "-Stare at her panties-":
             her "..." ("base", "squint", "base", "mid")
-            her "...{fast}..." ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid")
+            her "......" ("normal", "squint", "base", "mid")
             her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
             gen "Yes, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "Do you have to stare so intently at them?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid")
@@ -443,16 +443,28 @@ label hg_pf_admire_panties_T3_E1:
 
             play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
             $ hermione.strip("panties")
-            call ctc
+            with d3
 
-            her "There--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Looks away
+            her "" ("normal", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
-            nar "You stare intently at Hermione's exposed pussy."
+            pause 4
-            her "..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") #Looks at genie
+            her "" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+            pause 3
+
+            play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
+            $ hermione.wear("panties")
             her "Okay, that's--" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
             gen "Wait!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "[name_genie_hermione]?" ("angry", "squint", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             gen "I'm not done yet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-            her "But you said--" ("open", "squint", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+            her "But you said...{w} *Ugh*...{w=0.4} Fine...{nw}" ("angry", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
+
+            play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
+            $ hermione.strip("panties")
+
+            her "But you said... *Ugh*... Fine...{fast}"
+            her "Happy?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Looks away
+            nar "You stare intently at Hermione's exposed pussy."
+            her "Are you--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") #Looks at genie
             gen "Quiet." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "..." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
             call ctc

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/show_me_your_tits.rpy

@@ -34,6 +34,8 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts:
     hide screen blkfade
     if states.her.tier <= 2:
         her ".................." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
+    elif states.her.tier <= 3:
+        her "" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     elif states.her.tier <= 5:
         her "" ("base", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     else:
@@ -55,7 +57,7 @@ label hg_pf_admire_breasts:
         her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
 
     if game.daytime:
-        her "Now if you don't mind I'd better go. my classes are about to start."
+        her "Now if you don't mind, I'd better go... My classes are about to start."
     else:
         her "I'd better go now then. It's getting pretty late..."
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/suck_it.rpy

@@ -1471,7 +1471,6 @@ label hg_hidden_blowjob_cumming:
             call her_chibi("stand","desk","base")
             call gen_chibi("sit_behind_desk")
             hide screen bld1
-            hide screen blktone
             call hide_blkfade
             pause.5
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy

@@ -479,7 +479,6 @@ label hg_pf_talk_T3:
 
         stop music fadeout 1
         call hide_characters
-        hide screen bld1
         with d3
         call cum_block
         call gen_chibi("cum_behind_desk")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt:
 
     her "" (xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
     gen "[name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Yes?" ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
+    her "Yes?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
 
     #Intro.
     if hg_pr_flirt.counter == 0:
@@ -47,8 +47,9 @@ label hg_pr_flirt:
     else:
         if states.her.tier >= 3:
             gen "I need you to flirt with some boys from Slytherin today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-            her "I'll see what I can do, [name_genie_hermione]."
+            her "Right... I'll see what I can do, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R")
-            gen "Great. I'll be expecting your report today after classes." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "Great. I'll be expecting a report once your classes are done for the day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            her "Okay then..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
         elif states.her.tier >= 2:
             gen "I need you to go make some new friends at the Slytherin house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again [name_genie_hermione]?"
@@ -132,7 +133,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_intro:
 
     if hg_pr_flirt.counter == 1:
         her "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
-        her "So *Ehm*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
+        her "So...{w=0.4} *Ehm*." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
 
     gen "How many boys did you flirt with today, [name_hermione_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
@@ -422,12 +423,12 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T3_E2:
     call hg_pr_flirt_intro
 
     play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
-    her "Two dates, seven quite pleasant conversations..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
+    her "Two dates, and seven quite pleasant conversations..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
 
     if hg_pr_kiss.counter >= 1:
-        her "And I even let this one guy kiss me on the lips..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
+        her "I even let this one guy kiss me on the lips..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
     else:
-        her "And I even let this one guy kiss me on the cheek..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R")
+        her "I even let this one guy kiss me on the cheek..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R")
 
     gen "Quite impressive, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "I think so too, [name_genie_hermione]. Thank you." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
@@ -435,7 +436,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T3_E2:
     her "I tried to flirt with him too, but we ended up just chatting..."
     her "He kept calling me \"Miss Hermione\"..." ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
     her "So adorable..."
-    gen "Well, I didn't send you to harass people, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "I didn't instruct you to harass people, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "I didn't harass--" ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
     her "[name_genie_hermione]! Seven flirts and two dates amount to something, don't they?" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
     gen "Oh, absolutely." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -463,17 +464,17 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T3_E3:
             gen "No luck with the flirting today then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "Oh, quite the opposite, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
             play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
-            her "One of the boys actually took me to the Slytherin common room today..."
+            her "One of the boys actually brought me to an empty classroom room today..."
-            her "There were at least a dozen of them there..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
+            her "And there were at least a dozen more of them there..." ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
-            her "All of the boys knew who I was..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
+            her "All of them knew who I was for some reason..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
-            her "I was the centre of attention at first..."
+            her "And I was the centre of attention..."
-            her "And it felt sort of wonderful..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up")
+            her "I must say, it felt sort of wonderful..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up")
             play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
-            her "Then a bunch of those Slytherin harlots stumbled in and..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
+            her "But then a bunch of those Slytherin harlots stumbled in, and..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "mid_soft")
             gen "And?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "Well, they started saying stuff and doing things..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
-            gen "\"Doing Things\"? What kind of things?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+            gen "\"Stuff and things\"? What kind of things?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-            her "Anyway, I had to leave..."
+            her "I'm not sure I should--{w=0.2} Either way, I had to leave..."
             gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             gen "Well, I say you deserve your points anyway, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_intro:
             "\"Give me the details.\"":
                 pass
 
-    gen "Tell me, [name_hermione_genie], how many teachers did you flirt with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Tell me, [name_hermione_genie], which teachers did you flirt with?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     if hg_pr_flirt_teacher.counter == 1:
         her "*Ehm*... Okay..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T3_E1: # Filch
     her "......................." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
     gen "................?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "And then..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    her "Not sure if I should..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
+    her "Well, perhaps I shouldn't..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
     gen "[name_hermione_genie], if you are not going to speak up, you may as well leave." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME.
     her "He showed me his \"thing\", [name_genie_hermione]!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
@@ -498,8 +498,8 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T3_E1: # Filch
     her "His... manhood, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
     gen "Way to go, Janitor-guy!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "What?!" ("scream", "wide", "base", "mid")
-    gen "*Ahem* I mean, this is unspeakable!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "*Ahem*... I mean, this is unspeakable!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Yes... Vile crooked thing all covered in veins..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", tears="soft")
+    her "Yes... It was a vile, crooked thing, all covered in veins..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", tears="soft")
     gen "Spare me the grisly details, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Why would he do such a thing?" ("mad", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", tears="soft_blink")
     her "One second we were just talking and then..."
@@ -508,13 +508,14 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T3_E1: # Filch
     her "Professor, please wait." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", tears="soft")
     gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Well, aren't you going to do something about this?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    gen "Well..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Err..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "What if I am not the first victim...?" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid")
     her "Some unfortunate freshman could be traumatised for life!"
-    gen "And who wouldn't be really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Who wouldn't be, really?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Does this mean you will take action, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "*Ehm*... Yeah, sure..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "There! Putting it on my {i}to-do-list{/i}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    play sound "sounds/scribble.ogg"
     gen "\"Take care of the creepy janitor-guy and his crooked cock.\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Yes, first thing tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Thank you [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
@@ -592,14 +593,14 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T3_E3: # Lockhart
     her "Yes, I sort of cornered mister Lockhart today..." ("open", "base", "worried", "mid")
     her "And I also may have sort of made a pass at him..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Seriously?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Yes... Not sure what had gotten into me, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
+    her "Yes... I don't know what had gotten into me, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
     gen "Way to go, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Hear me out first [name_genie_hermione], please!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
     gen "My apologies. Please continue." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "Well, I always knew that mister Lockhart was a true gentleman and..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
+    her "Well, I always knew that mister Lockhart was a true gentleman, and..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
-    her "And... and I just wanted to clear his name from any suspicions once and for all..."
+    her "And... And I just wanted to clear his name from any suspicions once and for all..."
     her "..............." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
-    her "Well mister Lockhart did not reject me..."
+    her "Well, mister Lockhart did not reject me..."
     gen "You are killing me [name_hermione_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "He didn't reject you, he didn't do anything to you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "What the hell happened then?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_blowjob.rpy

@@ -110,15 +110,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_blowjob:
 
     # Inner monologue
     if hg_pr_blowjob.counter == 1:
-        show screen blktone
-        with d3
 
         her "(I did it...)" ("base", "narrow", "base", "dead", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
         her "(I sucked off one of my classmates...)" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "dead")
 
-        hide screen blktone
-        with d3
-
     call her_chibi("leave")
 
     label .quick_end:

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/give_a_handjob.rpy

@@ -120,16 +120,8 @@ label end_hg_pr_handjob:
     if hg_pr_handjob.counter == 1:
 
         her ".........." ("upset", "narrow", "angry", "R", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
-
-        show screen blktone
-        with d3
-
         her "(Do I really have to do this?)" ("upset", "closed", "angry", "mid")
-
+        her "*Sigh*" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid")
-        hide screen blktone
-        with d3
-
-        her "*sigh*" ("soft", "closed", "angry", "mid")
 
 
     call her_chibi("leave")
@@ -265,15 +257,13 @@ label hg_pr_handjob_T4_E3:
 
     gen "[name_hermione_genie], how did it--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     $ hermione.set_cum(hair="light")
-    show screen blktone
-    with d3
     her "" ("angry", "narrow", "angry", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d3)
-    gen "...-go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "-- Go..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
     her "Awful, [name_genie_hermione]. Simply awful..." ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
     gen "You've got something... in your hair there..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "*huh*?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid")
+    her "*Huh*?" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid")
     her "Oh, no! I thought I got it all off..." ("angry", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     her "One moment..."