diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy
index d25fc322..95389e19 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/inspect_her_body.rpy
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro:
     nar "Luna gives up to the sensation, and starts rubbing her ass against you... The tip of your cock sliding between her ass-cheeks with each thrust."
 
     gen "(If this keeps going, then this bitch in heat will make me bust before she does...)" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    lun "It think something is happening...{w=0.4} I feel woozy, [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "happyCl", "low", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "I think something is happening...{w=0.4} I feel woozy, [name_genie_luna]..." ("angry", "happyCl", "low", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_breasts_naked")
     nar "Luna slumps forward slightly...{w=0.4} Her ass-cheeks, now fully embracing the bottom of your shaft."
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro:
     lun "(Is...{w=0.4} Is that his...)" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush")
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_grope_breasts_naked")
-    nar "Arching her back up again, Luna's cheeks slides over your cock once more which is enough to bring you over the edge."
+    nar "Arching her back up again, Luna's cheeks slides over your cock once more, which is enough to bring you over the edge."
 
     gen "*ARGH*!!!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") #surprised
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro:
     call cum_block
 
     nar "And with a soft groan, you let out a final spurt, emptying your entire sack on the girl..."
-    nar "Your semen which reached all the way up onto her hair slowly begins sliding down her back."
+    nar "Your semen, which reached all the way up onto her hair, slowly begins sliding down her back."
 
     gen "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "[name_genie_luna], I think...{w=0.4} I feel a bit faint..." ("mad", "narrow", "low", "down", cheeks="blush")
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro:
     gen "Yes...{w=0.3} Actually it's very...{w=0.3} Very common..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "I wasn't expecting you to work it--{w=0.2} *Err*...{w=0.3} For it to work the first time!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "We'll just have to try it again some other time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    lun "So you're not disappointed in me [name_genie_luna]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "mid") #Looks down
+    lun "So you're not disappointed in me, [name_genie_luna]?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "worried", "mid") #Looks down
     gen "Of course not." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "(Quite the opposite...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Oh...{w=0.3} Okay." ("normal", "narrow", "worried", "down") #Looks down
@@ -601,7 +601,8 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E2_intro:
 
     lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.3} What was that cold feeling going down my spine?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid")
     gen "Oh...{w=0.3} That." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "*Err*...{w=0.3} I wouldn't worry about that [name_luna_genie], it happens sometimes... Your body can do all sorts of things when you're moments away from spurting." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "*Err*...{w=0.3} I wouldn't worry about that, [name_luna_genie]... It happens sometimes." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Your body can do all sorts of things when you're moments away from spurting." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "So we actually almost did it, [name_genie_luna]?" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "mid")
     gen "We almost did \"it\" alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "*Aww*...{w=0.3} Blithering Humdinger..." ("upset", "narrow", "annoyed", "downL")
@@ -739,7 +740,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
     nar "You unhook Luna's bra with ease, and let it drop to the floor, right in front of her."
     nar "She glances back at you, her cheeks flushed, and a look of surprise painted across her face, caused by your unusual dexterity."
 
-    lun "Have you ever done this before, [name_genie_luna]?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
+    lun "Have you done this before, [name_genie_luna]?" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Let's not make this about me, [name_luna_genie]. Free your mind of intrusive thoughts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Okay, I'll try." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
 
@@ -781,7 +782,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Mmmm*..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
-    nar "Luna getting more and more excited by your touch pushes her ass towards you once more."
+    nar "Luna, getting more and more excited by your touch pushes her ass towards you once more."
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_breasts_naked")
     nar "As it graces your cock, you struggle not to get hard..."
@@ -804,7 +805,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
     nar "A shudder passes through Luna's body from your initial touch."
     nar "You then begin moving your forefinger up and down her slit with increasing ease, as her pussy becomes wetter and wetter."
 
-    lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} [name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4}This feels a lot different to you--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Touching my breasts..." ("open", "wink", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} [name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} This feels a lot different to you--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Touching my breasts..." ("open", "wink", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
     gen "(You ain't seen nothing yet...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     nar "As you continue rubbing her, the excitement in her voice gnaws at your steadily decreasing patience..."
@@ -825,7 +826,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
     lun "..." ("scream", "wide", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush") #wide eyed
     lun "[name_genie_luna]!" ("scream", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
-    nar "As you penetrate Luna with your index finger she clenches her legs together in surprise."
+    nar "As you penetrate Luna with your index finger, she clenches her legs together in surprise."
 
     lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.4} Your finger slipped inside of me..." ("clench", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "I know..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -857,10 +858,10 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
 
-    nar "Luna now completely lost in pleasure begins shaking slightly, prompting you to pick up the pace even further."
+    nar "Luna, now completely lost in pleasure, begins shaking slightly, prompting you to pick up the pace even further."
 
     play background "sounds/slickloopveryfast.ogg"
-    lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.3} This... {w=0.3} is...{w=0.3} amazing...{w=0.3} I... {w=0.3} never...{w=0.3} thought--" ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "[name_genie_luna]...{w=0.3} This...{w=0.3} is...{w=0.3} amazing...{w=0.3} I... {w=0.3} never...{w=0.3} thought--" ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Then don't...{w=0.3} Focus on the feeling!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} Yes...{w=0.3} [name_genie_luna]." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
     lun "*N-n-ngh*!!!" ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -945,7 +946,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E3_intro:
         gen "Off you go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         lun "Yes [name_genie_luna], thank you [name_genie_luna]..." ("base", "wink", "base", "mid")
     else:
-        gen "Well then, it's getting late so you best head to your dorm [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Well then, it's getting late so you best head to your dorm, [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "Off you go." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         lun "Yes [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
         lun "Good night, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "wink", "base", "mid")
@@ -1029,7 +1030,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat:
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_vagina_naked")
     lun "Ooooh..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     nar "Luna shivers slightly as your hand graces her pussy..."
-    nar "You notice that she's already wet as your fingers slide across her with ease..."
+    nar "You notice that she's already wet, as your fingers slide across her with ease..."
     gen "Looks like someone's been looking forward to this..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Better not let you wait any further then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "I--" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
@@ -1071,7 +1072,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat:
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
-    nar "Taking it as a challenge you insert your fingers all the way in, which proves to be enough for the girl."
+    nar "Taking it as a challenge, you insert your fingers all the way in, which proves to be enough for the girl."
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_idle_naked")
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} No...{w=0.3} I'm cumming!!" ("clench", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -1096,7 +1097,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E4_repeat:
 
     $ luna.wear("all")
 
-    nar "Luna completely exhausted, slumps onto your desk once again."
+    nar "Luna, completely exhausted, slumps onto your desk once again."
     nar "You pull your chair back to give her some space."
 
     lun "*Mmm*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve)
@@ -1249,7 +1250,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat:
     lun "Oh... Right..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "downL", cheeks="blush")
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_grope_vagina_naked")
-    nar "You stick your hand down between Luna's legs and begin rubbing your fingers along her slit."
+    nar "You stick your hand down between Luna's legs, and begin rubbing your fingers along her slit."
 
     lun "*Ah*..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     nar "As you brush up against her, you notice how wet she is already."
@@ -1297,7 +1298,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat:
     nar "You start rubbing your thumb against Luna's clit as your fingers move rapidly inside her."
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("grin", "base", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     nar "Luna's moans reverberates around your office and you notice her legs beginning to shake slightly."
-    nar "Luna's moan suddenly stops and she clenches her thighs tight around your hand."
+    nar "Luna's moans suddenly stops, and she clenches her thighs tight around your hand."
 
     call lun_chibi_scene("inspect_lean_idle_naked")
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} I'm...{w=0.3} I'm cumming!!" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
@@ -1306,7 +1307,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat:
     play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg"
 
     lun "*AAAAAH*!!!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
-    nar "Your hand locked firmly between her thighs you still manage to keep your fingers going whilst pushing your thumb down on her."
+    nar "Even with your hand locked firmly between her thighs, you still manage to keep your fingers going."
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} I'm...{w=0.2} I'm--" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
 
@@ -1324,7 +1325,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat:
 
     nar "Luna's legs buckle completely as she puts her full weight onto your desk."
     nar "You watch her body move up and down for a while, her legs twitching slightly every now and then as liquid runs down her legs."
-    nar "After some time she manages to push herself up and get off your desk."
+    nar "After some time, she manages to push herself up and get off your desk."
 
 
     hide luna_main
@@ -1335,7 +1336,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T3_E1_repeat:
     with d5
 
     gen "How was that, [name_luna_genie]?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    lun "How did you do that [name_genie_luna]?" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve)
+    lun "How did you do that, [name_genie_luna]?" ("mad", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=False, trans=dissolve)
     gen "Do what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "The thing you did with your thumb." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Oh that...{w=0.4} Well I just called in an expert didn't I?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy
index 56c7c142..02e280f6 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/masturbate_for_me.rpy
@@ -62,13 +62,13 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     nar "Luna shifts her thighs together uncomfortably."
     lun "Yes..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid") #seductive
     gen "That's unfortunate..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "Well in that case I think it's time I teach you how to masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Well in that case, I think it's time I teach you how to masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "*Oooh*... I'm finally going to become a master baiter myself, [name_genie_luna]?" ("grin", "base", "raised", "mid")
     gen "That's right..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Marvellous!" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")
     lun "" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid")
     nar "Luna jumps happily on the spot, looking at you expectantly."
-    gen "Let's get going then shall we..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Let's get going then, shall we..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Thank you so much!" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
     gen "No need to thank me, [name_luna_genie], I'm simply doing what is necessary." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Now, come stand in front of my desk." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -96,11 +96,11 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     $ camera.set(zoom=0.5, pos=(-270, -150), t=5.0)
     lun "Is here okay?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid")
     gen "Perfect."
-    gen "I'll have to explain a few things before we get going so pay attention..."
+    gen "I'll have to explain a few things before we get going, so pay attention..."
     lun "Yes, [name_genie_luna]..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
     nar "Luna stares at you intently."
     gen "Good... Now--"
-    gen "Remember what we talked about... Locate the affected area then focus positive thoughts onto it.."
+    gen "Remember what we talked about... Locate the affected area, then focus positive thoughts onto it.."
     lun "Right." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down")
     gen "Have you found it?"
     lun "Yes..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down")
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
 
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} is this how it should be done?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-    gen "As long as it's feeling good then I'm sure it's working. Just keep going and you'll soon be rid of those nasty Wickerspoons."
+    gen "As long as it's feeling good, then I'm sure it's working. Just keep going and you'll soon be rid of those nasty Wickerspoons."
     lun "I'm glad..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     lun "Although it feels a bit different compared to when you helped me..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     gen "That's to be expected... Another person's touch will always feel different to your own."
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     lun "Really?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "It would seem that those nasty critters are trying to hide!"
     lun "Hide? But I thought touching myself would lure them--" ("mad", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
-    gen "Don't worry [name_luna_genie]... As long as you're still feeling that itch then they can't have gone far."
+    gen "Don't worry [name_luna_genie]... As long as you're still feeling that itch, then they can't have gone far."
     gen "Although this means you'll have to chase them down."
     lun "Chase them down?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     gen "I'll be here to guide you through it of course..."
@@ -223,8 +223,8 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     lun "*A-ah*..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "Yes..." ("grin", "closed", "low", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "*Ah*... *Ah*...{heart}" ("grin", "closed", "low", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-    lun "{size=+4}*Mmm*...{w=0.3} yes...{heart}{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
-    lun "{size=+8}*ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "{size=+4}*Mmm*...{w=0.3} Yes...{heart}{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "{size=+8}*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     gen "That's it--"
 
 
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     gen "Keep going, you're doing it!"
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes [name_genie_luna]...{heart}" ("crooked_smile", "happyCl", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4}" ("soft", "happyCl", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
-    lun "*Ngh*... It's... {w=0.3} I'm--" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "*Ngh*... It's...{w=0.3} I'm--" ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
     play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg"
     with kissiris
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     call weather_sound
 
     gen "Well, will you look at that... You're a natural..." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "So, the {i}wickspots{/i} have left you alone now I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "So, the {i}wickspots{/i} have left you alone now, I take it?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "I...{w=0.4} I believe so, [name_genie_luna]..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=dissolve)
     lun "At least that nasty itch appears to have gone away." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Excellent!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E1_intro:
     lun "I'm not sure exactly what you mean, [name_genie_luna]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Yes, Indeed... You still have more to learn before reaching your true potential..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "*Huh*?" ("upset", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-    gen "Once you've learned how to control the force I shall bestow on you my saber of light." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Once you've learned how to control the force, I shall bestow on you my saber of light." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "And as my meta chlorines flow through your body--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Oh yeah, that's not canon anymore is it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -329,16 +329,16 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     lun "But what if I don't do it right, [name_genie_luna]?" ("upset", "closed", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     lun "I wouldn't want to hurt myself..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     gen "*Hmm*... In that case, why don't you take your bottoms off this time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    gen "That way I can see a lot easier and make sure you don't hurt yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "That way I can see what you're doing a lot easier, and make sure you don't hurt yourself." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     lun "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     nar "Luna gives you a look of excitement from your proposition..."
 
     lun "Well, I do feel inclined to take you up on that offer." ("soft", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
-    gen "It's not an offer, [name_luna_genie]. If we are to make any progress then I require you to take off your bottoms so I can watch you masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "It's not an offer, [name_luna_genie]. If we are to make any progress, then I require you to take off your bottoms so I can watch you masturbate." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     lun "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
-    nar "Luna's body twitches slightly, looking at her face you get the feeling she's pondering on something."
+    nar "Luna's body twitches slightly, looking at her face, you get the feeling she's pondering on something."
 
     lun "My body appears to think it's the right decision, [name_genie_luna]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Your body?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -387,7 +387,6 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     gen "(And rather wet...)"
 
     play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
-    $ luna.set_cum(None)
     $ luna.strip("bottom", "panties")
     with d3
 
@@ -399,7 +398,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
 
     lun "*Ah*..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     lun "I've not been able to stop thinking about this since last time..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
-    lun "I worry those slimy wrackspurts have infested the dormitories because I'm having trouble sleeping as well..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "I worry those slimy wrackspurts have infested the dormitories, because I'm having trouble sleeping as well..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
     gen "That's quite possible..."
     lun "It's--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.3} It's weird...{w=0.3} I almost feel glad I've got them..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "Getting rid of them feels...{w=0.4} so...{w=0.3} so...{w=0.3}{nw}" ("angry", "closed", "low", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -425,7 +424,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     play sound "sounds/slick_02.ogg"
     with kissiris
 
-    lun "*Ah*...." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "*Ah*..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     lun "I...{w=0.3} I did it, [name_genie_luna]..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     gen "How does it feel?"
     lun "It...{w=0.3} Good...{w=0.5} Just a bit strange..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
@@ -439,7 +438,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "How--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} How is it looking?" ("soft", "closed", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Very good [name_luna_genie]... You're very pretty..."
-    lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} I'm... *Ah*...{w=0.3} I'm pretty [name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} I'm--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I'm pretty, [name_genie_luna]?" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Why yes, [name_luna_genie]. Your body is very nice..."
     lun "[name_genie_luna]--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} That's not what I--{w=0.4}{nw}" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "[name_genie_luna]-- *Ah*... That's not what I--{fast} *Ah*..." ("angry", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -448,11 +447,13 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} [name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Take your top off for me will you..."
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} Okay..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
-    lun "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
-    pause .8
 
     #Luna takes out finger
     stop background fadeout 2
+    lun "" ("base", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
+    $ luna.set_pose("default")
+    pause 1
+
     play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
     $ luna.strip("top", "bra")
     with d5
@@ -465,6 +466,8 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     gen "Now keep going, [name_luna_genie]..."
     lun "Yes [name_genie_luna]..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
 
+    $ luna.set_pose("hand_on_pussy_and_breast")
+
     #Luna rubs herself again
 
     lun "*Mmm*..." ("base", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -506,10 +509,6 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E2_intro:
     #Luna fingering
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*..." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-
-    $ luna.set_cum(pussy="wet")
-    with d3
-
     lun "[name_genie_luna]... *Ah*...{w=0.3} I feel them building up again..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Good girl, then try going a bit faster..."
     lun "Oh-- Okay..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -700,7 +699,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro:
     play background "sounds/slickloopveryfast.ogg"
 
     lun "" ("grin", "closed", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
-    nar "Luna revelling in your praise closes her eyes and begins furiously pumping her fingers in and out."
+    nar "Luna, revelling in your praise, closes her eyes and begins furiously pumping her fingers in and out."
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*..." ("grin", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush") #Eyes closed
     lun "{size=+4}*Mmm*...{w=0.4}{/size}{nw}" ("base", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
     lun "{size=+4}*Mmm*...{fast} Yes...{heart}{/size}" ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -710,7 +709,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro:
 
     lun "*Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.2} *Ah*...{heart}" ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
     gen "Good girl...{w=0.3} Now--"
-    lun "*AAAAH!!!*" ("scream", "happyCl", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
+    lun "*AAAAH*!!!" ("scream", "happyCl", "base", "up", cheeks="blush")
 
     play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg"
     #Luna Squirts
@@ -742,7 +741,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro:
     show screen blkfade
     with d5
 
-    nar "Luna takes her fingers out and looks up at you with a happy smile spread across her face..."
+    nar "Luna takes her fingers out, and looks up at you with a happy smile spread across her face..."
     gen "Well done [name_luna_genie]."
 
     centered "{size=+7}{color=#cbcbcb}Some time later...{/color}{/size}"
@@ -798,9 +797,9 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E3_intro:
     lun "Oooh! What is it? Is it a new method of dealing with the Wrackspurts?" ("crooked_smile", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "Why yes indeed, [name_luna_genie]!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Marvellous!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
-    gen "Although it might be a hard one so I hope you're ready to take it on, [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "Although it might be a hard one, so I hope you're ready to take it on, [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Of course, as long as you're there to guide me..." ("grin", "wink", "base", "mid")
-    gen "(I'll be guiding something alright...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "{size=-4}I'll be guiding something alright...{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "[name_genie_luna]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid")
     gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "*Ahem*... I'll let you know once I'm ready to begin our next set of tests." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -864,7 +863,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat:
     lun "*Ehm*... It's a bit more hard than before..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down")
     gen "That's good, now try it a bit more gently and tell me if anything changes..."
     lun "Alright..." ("soft", "base", "base", "down")
-    nar "Luna pinches her nipple more carefully this time and an involuntary moan escapes her lips."
+    nar "Luna pinches her nipple more carefully this time, and an involuntary moan escapes her lips."
     lun "*Ah*..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "up")
     gen "So?"
     lun "It...{w=0.4} It's more sensitive than before." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "stare")
@@ -1030,7 +1029,7 @@ label ll_pf_masturbate_T3_E4_repeat:
     lun "The what? sorry?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "The perfect time to make the big life decisions..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "I'm not sure I understand what you mean, [name_genie_luna]." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid")
-    gen "It only gets more difficult at this point now that you've mastered the art of masturbation [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "It only gets more difficult at this point, now that you've mastered the art of masturbation [name_luna_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Mastered master baiting?" ("annoyed", "base", "raised", "mid") #confused
     gen "If we want to get rid of those spurts for good then we need to keep trying new methods." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Oh! Well I'm willing to do anything that it takes to save the school [name_genie_luna]!" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid")
diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy
index 360c76c7..fce82ee7 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/events/favors/talk_to_me.rpy
@@ -815,7 +815,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat:
             gen "That's the downside of being such a powerful wizard..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             gen "The more powerful you become, the larger the member... Yep... All that power goes straight to the head." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             lun "Oh, I think my dad told me something like that about the employees at the ministry." ("grin", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
-            gen "That would be the head above your shoulders, I'm still talking about the one between my legs."
+            gen "That would be the head above your shoulders, I'm still talking about the one between my legs." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         "-Play it down-":
             gen "Nah, it's tiny..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             lun "Really?" ("clench", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ label ll_pf_talk_T3_E1_repeat:
     call lun_chibi("stand", 230, 455, flip=True)
     with d3
 
-    lun "Wow... It went so far!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "L")
+    lun "Wow... They went so far!" ("smile", "wide", "base", "L")
     lun "Is that related to your wizarding powers too?" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "*Ah*...{w=0.3} *Ah*...{w=0.3} That's just sheer willpower... And a couple of Kegel exercises every now and then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     lun "Astonishing..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "downL")
diff --git a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy
index 7e59bb38..64e309fa 100644
--- a/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy
+++ b/game/scripts/characters/luna/summon.rpy
@@ -109,7 +109,6 @@ label update_lun_tier:
 
 label luna_level_up(tier=None):
 
-    call bld
     if tier == 1:
         gen "(I think it's about time to give her a proper inspection...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     elif tier == 2: