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* Minor writing fixes.
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Johnny28 2023-02-24 13:58:19 +01:00
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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/favors/inspect_her_body_tier2.rpy
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@ -158,8 +158,8 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T2_intro_E1:
cho "(...)" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "downR", cheeks="blush")
cho "Promise me you won't tell her!" ("quiver", "narrow", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Her?!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Madame Hooch, Sir." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Ah, the old, grey haired lady..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Madam Hooch, Sir." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Ah, that fit lady..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Yes, she's been eyeing me a lot lately..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "downR", cheeks="blush")
cho "Even more so after our recent game against Hufflepuff..." ("mad", "narrow", "worried", "R", cheeks="blush")
gen "I can't blame her... Your body is very pleasant to look at!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/gryffindor_match.rpy
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@ -2376,7 +2376,7 @@ label gryffindor_match_return:
cho "That's when I--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} When I realised that maybe I wanted more than just winning the cup." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "I mean, I didn't even think to go celebrate with my team. I instinctively went straight to your office." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "stare", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "And if there was any{w=0.2} *Ngh*...{w=0.4} Any doubt after that..." ("open", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "Getting--{w=0.2} *Mmm*...{w=0.4} Getting that broom from Madame Hooch just proved it to me even more..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "Getting--{w=0.2} *Mmm*...{w=0.4} Getting that broom from Madam Hooch just proved it to me even more..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "Since I really had to try and figure out what makes me tick if I wanted to win the cup." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "I couldn't help--{w=0.2}{nw}" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="heavy_blush")
cho "I couldn't help--{fast} *Ah*..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="heavy_blush")

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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/hufflepuff_match.rpy
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@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match:
# Start of the game
$ renpy.sound.play("sounds/referee.ogg")
play music "music/machinations-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1
">A Grey haired woman then throws the quaffle into the air -- which signals the start of the match -- and the players quickly take off!"
">A fit looking woman then throws the quaffle into the air -- which signals the start of the match -- and the players quickly take off!"
her "Oh, wow... They're going quite f-fast..." ("normal", "wide", "worried", "shocked", flip=True, xpos=290, ypos="base", trans=d3)
her "" ("normal", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match:
her "Surely that must be against some kind of regulation..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "mid")
gen "You tell me Miss Granger, you've got the rulebook right there..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "..." ("snape_13", ypos="head")
her "Perhaps I could get Madame Hooch to pause the game..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid")
her "Perhaps I could get Madam Hooch to pause the game..." ("open", "closed", "annoyed", "mid")
pause .1
call her_chibi("stand", flip=True)
@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ label hufflepuff_match:
sna "Knowing her, she's probably enjoying the sight of the Ravenclaw seeker rushing past her." ("snape_20", ypos="head")
sna "{size=-4}Odds are she's already tried to take a peek.{/size}" ("snape_20", ypos="head")
gen "{size=-4}Who's Madame Hooch?{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "{size=-4}Who's Madam Hooch?{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "{size=-4}It's that fit lady on the pitch who is seemingly unable to take her eyes off the underside of miss Chang's... undergarments.{/size}" ("snape_09", ypos="head")
sna "{size=-4}Great idea with the skirt, if I might add.{/size}" ("snape_13", ypos="head")
gen "{size=-4}You're welcome.{/size}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/quidditch/slytherin_match.rpy
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@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ label slytherin_match:
play bg_sounds "sounds/crowd_low.ogg" fadeout 1.0 fadein 3.0
$ renpy.sound.play("sounds/referee.ogg")
play music "music/machinations-by-kevin-macleod.ogg" fadein 1 fadeout 1
call nar(">The grey haired lady glances up to the podium, and gives Hermione a wink as she throws the quaffle into the air.")
call nar(">Madam Hooch glances up at the podium, and gives Hermione a wink as she throws the quaffle into the air.")
her "And we're off!" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid", trans=d3)
call nar(">Looking up, you can see Cho giving Malfoy a quick smirk as she darts off towards the Slytherin half of the pitch.")

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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/manipulate_girls.rpy
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@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ label cc_pr_manipulate_girls_T3_angelina:
cho "I...{w=0.3} yes..." ("horny", "base", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush")
gen "I'm waiting [cho_name]... give me the {i}deets{/i}." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Of course!" ("open", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
cho "Well...{w=0.4} I went to see if I could catch Angelina talking to Madame Hooch again." ("soft", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
cho "Well...{w=0.4} I went to see if I could catch Angelina talking to Madam Hooch again." ("soft", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
cho "Determined to get the full context of what was going on this time!" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
cho "I immediately went and hid in the boys changing room as soon as they had gone for lunch to listen in." ("soft", "base", "base", "L", cheeks="blush")
cho "Although I got there a bit early and they were still in the showers, touching each other and gossiping.." ("upset", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")

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game/scripts/characters/cho/events/requests/spy_on_the_girls.rpy
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@ -409,13 +409,13 @@ label cc_pr_spy_girls_T3_angelina:
gen "The Referee?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Madam Hooch's office, [cho_genie_name]." ("soft", "base", "raised", "mid")
cho "I managed to eavesdrop on their conversation, although I only caught the tail end of it..." ("open", "base", "base", "L")
cho "I suspect Madame Hooch might know what they've been doing in the showers after the game..." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
cho "I suspect Madam Hooch might know what they've been doing in the showers after the game..." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
cho "Angelina was talking about how she couldn't believe that she and her friends were being spied on like that." ("open", "base", "base", "up")
cho "Madam Hooch just laughed it off and told her she should take it as a compliment." ("grin", "happyCl", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Good to know my staff knows how to diffuse a situation..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "Angelina sure didn't see it that way -- and stormed right out her office..." ("base", "narrow", "angry", "mid")
gen "You sure she wasn't talking about--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "[cho_genie_name]... If Madame Hooch is spying on them, then Angelina might get the idea to entice her into helping them during the finals!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid")
cho "[cho_genie_name]... If Madam Hooch is spying on them, then Angelina might get the idea to entice her into helping them during the finals!" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "mid")
gen "*Hmm*... Not a bad idea, now that I think about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "We should try that as well." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
cho "No! I don't want to win by cheating!" ("clench", "narrow", "angry", "mid")

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game/scripts/characters/susan/chitchat.rpy
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@ -48,11 +48,11 @@ label susan_chitchat:
sus "Surely only a piece of wood between you, and falling from the sky can't be safe..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "mid")
elif random_number == 6:
sus "Madame Hooch was keeping a close eye on me during the last flying lesson." ("open", "base", "base", "right")
sus "Madam Hooch was keeping a close eye on me during the last flying lesson." ("open", "base", "base", "right")
sus "I hope I'm not disappointing her too much..." ("open", "base", "sad", "downR")
elif random_number == 7:
sus "Madame Pomfrey once prescribed me a \"Draught of peace\" to drink the night before exams so I could get some sleep." ("open", "base", "base", "right")
sus "Madam Pomfrey once prescribed me a \"Draught of peace\" to drink the night before exams so I could get some sleep." ("open", "base", "base", "right")
sus "But even with her prescription, Snape wouldn't give one to me." ("open", "base", "sad", "downR")
elif random_number == 8:

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game/scripts/shops/dress/chitchats.rpy
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@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item):
elif item == her_outfit_fishnet_onepiece:
gen "I'm looking to require a one-piece fishnet outfit." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
maf "A fishnet outfit?"
gen "Yes, one-piece please Madame." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Yes, one-piece please Madam." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
maf "I see."
gen "Not the sea... For the bedroom." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
maf "Right... Well, you're the boss..."
@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ label purchase_outfit(item):
maf "Of course, sir."
maf "A set of lace underwear as a gift it is."
elif item == lun_outfit_bikini3:
gen "Could you make me a bikini, Madame?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Could you make me a bikini, Madam?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
maf "I can make anything, I'm an expert tailor."
gen "Great, then I'd like one that only covers what it needs to." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
maf "Oh, I'm not sure I have enough material sir..."