Posing

* Posed timer check dialogue in masturbate section of the 'dance for me' event.
* Minor fixes.

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/favors/dance_for_me_masturbate.rpy

@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
     her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Yes...{w=0.4}*Ah*..." ("smile", "narrow", "base", "up")
     her "[name_genie_hermione]{heart}... I'm--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} I'm cumming!{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead")
 
-    her "{heart}{heart}{heart}!!!{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead")
+    her @ cheeks blush "{heart}{heart}{heart}!!!{heart}{heart}{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "base", "dead")
     with kissiris
     with hpunch
     play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg"
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
 
     $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post")
 
-    her "*Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart}...{heart}" ("grin", "squint", "worried", "ahegao")
+    her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4}{heart}...{heart}" ("grin", "squint", "worried", "ahegao")
     with kissiris
     with hpunch
     play sound "sounds/slick_01.ogg"
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
 
     $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post")
 
-    her "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead")
+    her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("silly", "narrow", "annoyed", "dead")
     $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_transition")
     with kissiris
     with hpunch
@@ -803,8 +803,8 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
 
     $ hermione.set_cum(pussy="squirt_post")
 
-    her "*Mmmmmmh*!!!" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
+    her @ cheeks blush "*Mmmmmmh*!!!" ("grin", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
-    her "........................" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "up")
+    her @ cheeks blush "........................" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "up")
     stop background
 
     nar "You take your hands off Hermione pussy and then wipe her love-juices across the side of her leg."
@@ -816,27 +816,29 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
 
     if _time_difference < 60:
         gen "I'm not sure how you did it, but you finished in less than a minute." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "Whoa... Really?"
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Really?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid")
         gen "Yes... If I didn't see it happen myself, I would've thought you cheated somehow..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     elif _time_difference < 360:
-        gen "You finished in under six minutes... Very impresive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "You finished in under six minutes... Very impressive." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    elif _time_difference <= 720:
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down")
-        gen "Looks like you finished under your average time... Congratulations" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    elif _time_difference < 720:
-        her "Oh... *Ehm*... Thank you..."
+        gen "Looks like you finished under your average time... Congratulations." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down")
     elif _time_difference < 3600:
-        gen "Although... it appears you didn't beat your average time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "Good girl..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "Oh..."
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{w=0.4} Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid")
-        gen "No worries... There's always next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "That said... it appears you didn't beat your average time..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        her @ cheeks blush "Oh..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down")
+        gen "No worries...{w=0.4} There's always next time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     else:
         gen "I'm not exactly sure how this happened..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
         gen "But you were masturbating for over an hour..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "*Ah*... But... How is that even possible?"
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} But--{w=0.2} *Ah*...{w=0.4} How is that even possible?" ("base", "narrow", "base", "mid")
-        gen "I'm not sure... Maybe they just left for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+        gen "I'm not sure... Maybe the player just left for a bit..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-        her "Who's they, [name_genie_hermione]?"
+        her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} Who--{w=0.2} Who are you talking about, [name_genie_hermione]?" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "mid")
         gen "Don't worry about it..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
 
     gen "Alright then, [name_hermione_genie]... If you're finished..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-
     her @ cheeks blush "*Ah*...{w=0.4} *Ah*...{heart}" ("grin", "narrow", "worried", "dead")
     her @ cheeks blush "Yes...{w=0.4} yes, [name_genie_hermione]...{w=0.4} Just give me a moment...{heart}" ("base", "narrow", "base", "up")
     her @ cheeks blush "(How will I ever be able to achieve this... on my own...{heart})" ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_students.rpy

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt:
         else:
             if _events_filtered_completed_any:
                 gen "I need you to go make some new friends at the Slytherin house." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-                her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again [name_genie_hermione]?"
+                her "You mean you need me to flirt with the Slytherin boys again, [name_genie_hermione]?"
                 gen "That's exactly what I need you to do today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 gen "Just do it properly this time." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                 her "Must I really do this [name_genie_hermione]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E2:
     her "He called me a \"Patronising Gryffindor Whore\", [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid", emote="angry")
     gen "Did you threaten to report him as well?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Of course, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid")
-    gen "*sigh*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+    gen "*Sigh*" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Anything else?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     her "Well, there was one more incident but the outcome was pretty much the same..." ("annoyed", "squint", "angry", "mid")
     gen "\"Gryffindor whore\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E3:
     her "And one of them even exposed herself inappropriately to the players, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid")
     her "I cannot believe our school accepts such behaviour..."
     gen "So... how did this captivating drama end?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "I just left [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
+    her "I just left, [name_genie_hermione]..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
 
     menu:
         gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flirt_with_teachers.rpy

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_intro:
     her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
     gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
     gen "Did you complete your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
-    her "I did as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..."
+    her "I did as you asked, [name_genie_hermione]..."
 
     if _events_completed_all: # If you have seen all events in this tier once, you get the choice to skip it.
         menu:
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick
         "\"Here are your points though.\"":
             gen "Know that I am a merciful master-- I mean a headmaster." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
             her "Really?" ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid")
-            her "Thank you so much [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
+            her "Thank you so much, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
 
         "\"No points for you!\"":
 

game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/have_sex.rpy

@@ -91,14 +91,9 @@ label end_hg_pr_sex:
 
     # Inner monologue
     if _events_completed_all:
-        show screen blktone
-        with d3
 
         her "(I did it... I finally did it.)" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "dead", xpos="base", ypos="base", flip=True, trans=d3)
 
-        hide screen blktone
-        with d3
-
     call her_chibi("leave")
 
     label .quick_end:

game/scripts/characters/hermione/summon.rpy

@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ label hermione_favor_menu:
                         pass
             else:
                 if states.sna.level <= 10:
-                    gen "What do you mean in the lead?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
+                    gen "What do you mean \"in the lead\"?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                     gen "Explain yourself, [name_hermione_genie]!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
                     her "With the current points distribution, I am certain getting the house cup for Gryffindor will be just a formality." ("smile", "closed", "base", "mid")
                     her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione], but I don't need any more points." ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")