Fixes and improvements

* Added strip sounds during Lockheart Tattoo public event.
* Removed bld and blktone in some places where it's replaced by inner thought and narrator character.
* Minor writing improvements/fixes.
* Doll positioning and posing improvements.
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Johnny28 2023-03-25 16:42:13 +01:00
parent 5a8e4d85ab
commit 641fc2fadb
10 changed files with 67 additions and 73 deletions

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@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label too_much:
"(*Hmm*... I guess it was a little too soon for that.)",
"(Did I say something wrong...?)",
"(Welp, was worth a shot I guess.)",
"(Perhaps I should rethink my appraoch...)",
"(Perhaps I should rethink my approach...)",
"(Judging by her reaction she's not yet ready for it...)"
]

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@ -96,15 +96,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_flirt:
# Inner monologue
if hg_pr_flirt.counter == 1:
show screen blktone
with d3
her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3)
her "(I'll need to read about this whole \"flirting\" thing...)" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "L")
hide screen blktone
with d3
call her_chibi("leave")
label .quick_end:
@ -245,6 +240,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E3:
call hg_pr_flirt_intro
her "Well, the Slytherin quidditch team was practising in the stadium today..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
gen "(Quidish... Team?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I thought I could sneak into the bleachers and cheer them on..."
her "But..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -332,7 +328,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E2:
her "Well..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "This morning I did flirt with this one guy..."
her "Then after the second period there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
her "Then after the second period, there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
her "And then something bizarre happened..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid")
play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
her "This angry-looking guy from Slytherin came up to me and asked me out on a date..."
@ -380,8 +376,8 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E3:
her "But I still refuse to change my opinion about the Slytherin house, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
gen "I'm not asking you to, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I am only doing this to help my own house!"
her "The proud house of \"Gryffndor\"!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "Alright, alright. Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "The proud house of {b}Gryffindor{/b}!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "Alright, alright... Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
jump end_hg_pr_flirt

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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher:
her "*huh*?!" ("open", "base", "angry", "mid")
her "Why would I want to flirt with the teach--" ("angry", "base", "angry", "mid")
her "O-oh... I see..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R")
gen "*huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "*Huh*?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "You are finally ready to investigate the teachers who made a habit out of buying favours from the students, aren't you?" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid")
her "I am honoured to pose as bait in this noble endeavour." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
gen "*Ehm*... Yeah, that's exactly what I'm doing." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E1: # Flitwick
show her_flirt_public_flitwick zorder 15 as cg with fade
her "So, I made my way to the front of the class, next to Professor Flitwick, and began casting the spell, making the feather float in the air."
her "So, I made my way to the front of the class, next to Professor Flitwick, and began casting the spell, making a feather float in the air."
her "But, as I was explaining the proper swishing and flicking motions, it is when I realized--"
gen "You weren't getting praised enough?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I had already showed the class how to cast that particular spell ages ago."
@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T1_E3: # Filch
her "And we did hit it off quite well too!"
her "He was surprisingly sweet."
her "But I don't think he is \"dirty\", [name_genie_hermione]."
gen "Gotcha... mister Filth is off the list then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Gotcha... Mister Filth is off the list then." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "It's \"mister Filch\", [name_genie_hermione]..." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid")
gen "What did I say?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "......." ("normal", "squint", "angry", "R")
@ -312,6 +312,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2:
play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME
if hermione.is_worn("robe"):
play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
$ hermione.strip("robe")
pause .8
her "Ah..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
@ -322,22 +323,22 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2:
gen "[name_hermione_genie]... What have you done to your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "What do you...{w=0.4} Oh, that..." ("mad", "base", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "Yes that..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "It's... it's nothing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
her "It's... It's nothing." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
if not hermione.is_worn("stockings"):
gen "The hell it is...{w=0.4} is that writing on your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I... yes..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "The hell it is...{w=0.4} Is that writing on your leg?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I... Yes..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Gil... Gilde--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "*sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
her "*Sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "Now that's dirty!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "What!?" ("clench", "base", "worried", "mid")
gen "Tagging the students... why didn't I think of that!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Tagging the students... Why didn't I think of that!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Sir, what are you on about?" ("annoyed", "squint", "base", "mid")
gen "Why else would he put his name there?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Sir, he's a famous author!" ("normal", "squint", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Doesn't give him the right to--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Oh... It's an autograph!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I... what else would it be?" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
her "I... What else would it be?" ("clench", "squint", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Nothing..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Here are your points..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Thank you, [name_genie_hermione]." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
@ -349,11 +350,13 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2:
pause.5
her "Here..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down",cheeks="blush")
play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
$ hermione.strip("bottom", "stockings")
with d3
pause .5
gen "Gil... Gilde--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "*sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
her "*Sigh*... Gilderoy Lockhart... [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
her "He very kindly gave me his autograph after today's lesson..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "And why would you want such a thing?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "He's a very popular and esteemed author, surely you know this..." ("annoyed", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
@ -370,7 +373,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2:
her "I had an amazing day, [name_genie_hermione]!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy")
gen "Do tell, [name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I had a class with professor Lockhart today..." ("grin", "base", "base", "R")
her "[name_genie_hermione] He is so charming and smart and..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "[name_genie_hermione], he is so charming and smart and--" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "And perfect..." ("base", "narrow", "base", "up")
gen "Please spare me your schoolgirl crush, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "He was even kind enough to give me his autograph..." ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", emote="happy")
@ -398,7 +401,9 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E2:
pause.5
her "Here..." ("disgust", "narrow", "base", "down",cheeks="blush")
play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
$ hermione.strip("bottom", "stockings")
with d3
pause .5
gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -433,7 +438,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_teacher_T2_E3: # Filch
call hg_pr_flirt_teacher_intro
play music "music/Chipper Doodle v2.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # HERMIONE'S THEME.
her "Well, I spent quite some time by flirting with mister Filch today." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid",xpos="right",ypos="base")
her "Well, I spent a fair bit of my time, flirting with mister Filch today." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
her "What a well-read and exceptionally well-mannered gentleman mister Filch is." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid")
gen "........" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "But I don't think anyone knows him like that..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")

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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope:
her "It's a bit embarrassing..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
gen "Sure, I understand. I don't need to know the details..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "But here is what I need you to do today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} Or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her ".......?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "And let them touch you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -110,13 +110,8 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope:
# Inner monologue
if hg_pr_grope.counter == 1:
show screen blktone
with d3
her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
hide screen blktone
with d3
her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3)
call her_chibi("leave")
@ -131,10 +126,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope:
label hg_pr_grope_intro:
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Did you finish your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..."
her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
if hg_pr_grope.is_tier_complete():
menu:
@ -150,7 +145,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_intro:
her "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
her "I... *Uhh*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up, or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
return
@ -163,7 +158,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E1:
her "Well, there is not much to tell..."
her "I told that one guy I know that he could touch me a little if he wants..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "He thought I was joking at first..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
her "So embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "It was so embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "So, did he cop a feel or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
her "He did..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
@ -192,7 +187,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E2:
her "Then I let him rub my..."
her "... my c-crotch through my panties, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down")
gen "Very good... And what happened next?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "He just sort of started... Touching himself [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "He just sort of started... Touching himself, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "So, I decided to leave..."
gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "............." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")

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@ -208,13 +208,13 @@ label ss_he_story_E1:
sna "Or I could tell you some more about those ripe slytherin sluts..." ("snape_02")
gen "The latter, please." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "Great... Get a load of this then..." ("snape_13")
hide snape_main
call blktone
nar "You spend the evening by discussing all sorts of inappropriate things with Professor Snape."
nar "You feel a faint bond forming between you two..."
call sly_plus
call hide_blktone
jump end_snape_hangout_points
@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E4:
sna "Yes! Hermione Granger - the repulsive slut without any dignity! Yes, I like it!" ("snape_02")
gen "And what if in that other world the cheerful Severus teams up with some bizarre version of me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "And maybe together we train the slut Hermione to be a proper girl and a good student?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "Ha-ha-ha! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28")
sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28")
hide snape_main
@ -318,7 +318,6 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E5:
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape seems to feel awkward about benefiting from your misery..."
call notes
nar "The bond of friendship between you two strengthens slightly..."
call sly_plus
@ -437,7 +436,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E9: # Replace this event.
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape trusts you more than he used to..."
nar "(To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you)."
nar "To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you."
call sly_plus
@ -475,7 +474,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E10:
hide snape_main
nar "You spend the evening by skilfully avoiding a whole variety of similar questions."
nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again."
nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate, the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again."
call sly_plus
@ -532,7 +531,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E12:
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for (sort of) putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..."
nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for {i}sort of{/i} putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..."
nar "The bond of your friendship strengthens yet again..."
call sly_plus

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@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ label panty_raid:
play sound "sounds/gasp2.ogg"
"Katie" "Ahh!{heart} {w=0.5}So much better... {heart}{heart}{heart}"
"Katie" "I'll start moving now.{w=0.5} You ready?"
her "*nwh*!!!"
her "*Nwh*!!!"
play sound "sounds/giggle3.ogg"
"Katie" "I'll take that as a yes. {heart}{heart}{heart}"
play sound "sounds/jump_on_bed.ogg"