Fixes and improvements

* Added strip sounds during Lockheart Tattoo public event.
* Removed bld and blktone in some places where it's replaced by inner thought and narrator character.
* Minor writing improvements/fixes.
* Doll positioning and posing improvements.
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Johnny28 2023-03-25 16:42:13 +01:00
parent 5a8e4d85ab
commit 641fc2fadb
10 changed files with 67 additions and 73 deletions

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@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label too_much:
"(*Hmm*... I guess it was a little too soon for that.)",
"(Did I say something wrong...?)",
"(Welp, was worth a shot I guess.)",
"(Perhaps I should rethink my appraoch...)",
"(Perhaps I should rethink my approach...)",
"(Judging by her reaction she's not yet ready for it...)"
]

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@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ label hermione_intro_E1:
$ camera.set_image("CG her_intro hermione bendover")
with d5
nar " Hermione bends down again to pick up her book."
nar "Hermione bends down again to pick up her book."
her "--Just put your faith in me, professor."
@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ label ss_he_hermione_E1:
sna "Next time..." ("snape_38")
gen "Alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar " Your meeting comes to an end, and you decide to go to sleep."
nar "Your meeting comes to an end, and you decide to go to sleep."
$ ss_he.hermione_E1 = True

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@ -96,15 +96,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_flirt:
# Inner monologue
if hg_pr_flirt.counter == 1:
show screen blktone
with d3
her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
her "(........)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3)
her "(I'll need to read about this whole \"flirting\" thing...)" ("annoyed", "base", "angry", "L")
hide screen blktone
with d3
call her_chibi("leave")
label .quick_end:
@ -245,6 +240,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T1_E3:
call hg_pr_flirt_intro
her "Well, the Slytherin quidditch team was practising in the stadium today..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
gen "(Quidish... Team?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I thought I could sneak into the bleachers and cheer them on..."
her "But..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
gen "Yes?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -332,7 +328,7 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E2:
her "Well..." ("open", "base", "worried", "R")
her "This morning I did flirt with this one guy..."
her "Then after the second period there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
her "Then after the second period, there was this other guy..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
her "And then something bizarre happened..." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid")
play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
her "This angry-looking guy from Slytherin came up to me and asked me out on a date..."
@ -380,8 +376,8 @@ label hg_pr_flirt_T2_E3:
her "But I still refuse to change my opinion about the Slytherin house, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", emote="sweat")
gen "I'm not asking you to, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I am only doing this to help my own house!"
her "The proud house of \"Gryffndor\"!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "Alright, alright. Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "The proud house of {b}Gryffindor{/b}!" ("scream", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "Alright, alright... Calm down, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "" ("base", "happyCl", "base", "mid")
jump end_hg_pr_flirt

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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope:
her "It's a bit embarrassing..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
gen "Sure, I understand. I don't need to know the details..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "But here is what I need you to do today, [name_hermione_genie]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Go confront that boy...{w=0.5} Or a girl, you fancy. The one you think is \"just so dreamy\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her ".......?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "And let them touch you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -110,13 +110,8 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope:
# Inner monologue
if hg_pr_grope.counter == 1:
show screen blktone
with d3
her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="head", flip=False, trans=d3)
hide screen blktone
with d3
her "(Why did I agree to this...)" ("disgust", "base", "worried", "down", ypos="base", xpos="base", flip=True, trans=d3)
call her_chibi("leave")
@ -131,10 +126,10 @@ label end_hg_pr_grope:
label hg_pr_grope_intro:
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
her "Good evening, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "base", "base", "R", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Did you finish your task?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..."
her "I did, just as you asked [name_genie_hermione]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=fade)
if hg_pr_grope.is_tier_complete():
menu:
@ -150,7 +145,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_intro:
her "......" ("annoyed", "narrow", "angry", "R")
her "I... *Uhh*..." ("soft", "base", "base", "R")
gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Did you let some lucky guy feel you up, or what?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
return
@ -163,7 +158,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E1:
her "Well, there is not much to tell..."
her "I told that one guy I know that he could touch me a little if he wants..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
her "He thought I was joking at first..." ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
her "So embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "It was so embarrassing..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
gen "So, did he cop a feel or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
play music "music/(Orchestral) Playful Tension by Shadow16nh.ogg" fadein 1 if_changed # Music
her "He did..." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
@ -192,7 +187,7 @@ label hg_pr_grope_T2_E2:
her "Then I let him rub my..."
her "... my c-crotch through my panties, [name_genie_hermione]." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down")
gen "Very good... And what happened next?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "He just sort of started... Touching himself [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "He just sort of started... Touching himself, [name_genie_hermione]." ("open", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")
her "So, I decided to leave..."
gen "I see..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "............." ("normal", "happyCl", "worried", "mid")

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@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label summon_hermione:
jump hg_tutor_start
"-Tutoring-" (icon="interface/icons/small/book.webp", style="disabled") if game.daytime and her_tutoring < 15:
nar " Tutoring is available during the night only."
nar "Tutoring is available during the night only."
jump hermione_requests
"-Sexual favours-" (icon="interface/icons/small/condom.webp") if hermione_favors:

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@ -208,13 +208,13 @@ label ss_he_story_E1:
sna "Or I could tell you some more about those ripe slytherin sluts..." ("snape_02")
gen "The latter, please." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "Great... Get a load of this then..." ("snape_13")
hide snape_main
call blktone
nar "You spend the evening by discussing all sorts of inappropriate things with Professor Snape."
nar "You feel a faint bond forming between you two..."
call sly_plus
call hide_blktone
jump end_snape_hangout_points
@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E4:
sna "Yes! Hermione Granger - the repulsive slut without any dignity! Yes, I like it!" ("snape_02")
gen "And what if in that other world the cheerful Severus teams up with some bizarre version of me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "And maybe together we train the slut Hermione to be a proper girl and a good student?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "Ha-ha-ha! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28")
sna "*Ha-ha-ha*! That's hilarious!" ("snape_28")
hide snape_main
@ -318,7 +318,6 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E5:
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape seems to feel awkward about benefiting from your misery..."
call notes
nar "The bond of friendship between you two strengthens slightly..."
call sly_plus
@ -437,7 +436,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E9: # Replace this event.
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape trusts you more than he used to..."
nar "(To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you)."
nar "To the point where he doesn't think twice about sharing his weird-ass dreams with you."
call sly_plus
@ -475,7 +474,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E10:
hide snape_main
nar "You spend the evening by skilfully avoiding a whole variety of similar questions."
nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again."
nar "Despite your refusal to co-operate, the bond of friendship between you two strengthens yet again."
call sly_plus
@ -532,7 +531,7 @@ label ss_he_story_intro_E12:
hide snape_main
nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for (sort of) putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..."
nar "Professor Snape seems grateful to you for {i}sort of{/i} putting his concerns about Albus Dumbledore's well-being to rest..."
nar "The bond of your friendship strengthens yet again..."
call sly_plus

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@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ label twins_random_duel:
ger "You are broke, sir."
fre "Come back with your offer when you have more gold, professor."
gen "Fine.." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
nar " You return to your office."
nar "You return to your office."
jump main_room
ger "Acceptable..."
twi "Let's play."

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@ -161,11 +161,11 @@ label panty_raid:
gen "Ninety points to Gryffi--{w=0.5}{nw}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Ninety points to Gryffi--{fast} wait a second..." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")
nar " You take another look at the panties and notice something unusual."
nar "You take another look at the panties and notice something unusual."
her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
nar " Both panties and bra have a small piece of paper tied to them."
nar "Both panties and bra have a small piece of paper tied to them."
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "mid")
nar " You reach out and grab the closest pair of panties, then study the paper."
nar "You reach out and grab the closest pair of panties, then study the paper."
her "" ("normal", "base", "base", "R")
"8.99$\n{size=-3}Thank you for shopping with us and hope to see you back soon!{/size}\nMadam Mafkin{#LINT_IGNORE}"
gen "[name_hermione_genie]..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -598,31 +598,31 @@ label panty_raid:
her "We need to talk--"
"Katie" "I know exactly what we need. {heart}"
play sound "sounds/slap_03.ogg"
nar " Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{nw}"
nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{nw}"
play sound "sounds/door2.ogg"
nar " Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{fast}, then shuts the door."
nar "Katie grabs Hermione and pulls her in the room{fast}, then shuts the door."
pause 1.0
play sound "sounds/09_lock.ogg"
pause 0.5
her "Why did you lock the door...?!"
play sound "sounds/cloth_sound.ogg"
nar " Katie starts taking off her clothes."
nar "Katie starts taking off her clothes."
her "Wha-wha-what-t-t are you d-doing?!"
play sound "sounds/giggle.ogg"
"Katie" "Aren't you talkative today?{w=0.5} I would save my breath if I were you. {heart}{heart}{heart}"
"Katie" "I'm quite{w=0.2} {heart}horny{heart}{w=0.2} so you might be stuck here for a while."
play sound "sounds/push_on_bed.ogg"
nar " She pushes Hermione onto the bed." with vpunch
nar "She pushes Hermione onto the bed." with vpunch
her "{size=+4}W-wait?!{/size}"
play sound "sounds/sit_on_bed.ogg"
nar " Then she swiftly straddles her face in cowgirl position." with hpunch
nar "Then she swiftly straddles her face in cowgirl position." with hpunch
play sound "sounds/gltch.ogg"
her "..........!!!"
her "*Hmph*"
play sound "sounds/gasp2.ogg"
"Katie" "Ahh!{heart} {w=0.5}So much better... {heart}{heart}{heart}"
"Katie" "I'll start moving now.{w=0.5} You ready?"
her "*nwh*!!!"
her "*Nwh*!!!"
play sound "sounds/giggle3.ogg"
"Katie" "I'll take that as a yes. {heart}{heart}{heart}"
play sound "sounds/jump_on_bed.ogg"