Hermione forest BJ proofreading and Lint fixes

* Proofread Hermione forest BJ.
* Fixed writing styling inconsistencies reported by Lint.
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Johnny28 2023-03-14 18:23:39 +01:00
parent af80afaaa6
commit 93d87717ac
9 changed files with 123 additions and 121 deletions

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@ -2270,7 +2270,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
pause.5
gen "Whoa, you're-"
gen "Whoa, you're--"
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_on_knees tonks_eyes_open_down tonks_mouth_lip_bite tonks_blush_heavy as cg
with d3
@ -2633,7 +2633,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor...\""
ton "\"Thank you coach, for being such a good mentor\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3
@ -2645,7 +2645,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me...\""
ton "\"I'll always be in your debt after everything that you've done for me\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3
@ -2657,7 +2657,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day...\""
ton "\"But I hope to be able to repay you some day\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3
@ -2669,7 +2669,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"With...\""
ton "\"With\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3
@ -2679,7 +2679,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"My...\""
ton "\"My\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_base cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3
@ -2689,7 +2689,7 @@ label cc_pf_strip_T3_intro_E3:
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_open cho_mouth_smile as cg
with d3
ton "\"Body...\""
ton "\"Body\"..."
show cho_strip_personal_t3_e3_lying tonks_mouth_smile cho_mouth_open as cg
with d3

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@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ label cc_pf_blowjob_T3_E2:
$ camera.set_image("cho_bj topless lick")
#Cho starts licking the tip a couple of times #looking at dick
gen "*Whoa*!"
gen "Whoa!"
call ctc

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@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ label gryffindor_match:
nar "Cho smacks Katie on her shapely bum."
"Katie" "*Owww*!!"
cho "*imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder!\""
cho "*Imitates Katie's voice* \"Ohh yes Alicia, please spank me harder\"!"
"Katie" "H-How--"
nar "Cho grins at her briefly, then swiftly flies away."
"Katie" "Why you little--"

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@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label hg_collars:
$ her_outfit_last.save() #Saves current clothing
if hermione.is_worn("robe"):
gen "Before what I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Before I show you what we're doing today... Why don't you take those robes off and make yourself comfortable." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Alright..." ("soft", "squint", "base", "mid")
play sound "sounds/cloth_sound3.ogg"
$ hermione.strip("robe")
@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ label slave_scene:
$ name_genie_hermione = "Master"
with flashbulb
her "It doesn't say slut does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
her "It doesn't say slut, does it?" ("open", "narrow", "base", "R")
gen "Don't be silly... Why would it say that,{w=0.5} slave?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Oh good..." ("base", "base", "worried", "mid")
her "Wait. What did you just call me?" ("upset", "wide", "base", "mid")
@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ label flasher_scene:
her "I..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
nar "The strings now completely stretched begin tugging on Hermione's nipples."
her "Alright I do enjoy it okay!" ("angry", "happyCl", "worried", "mid", cheeks="blush")
nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips the strings return to their dormant state"
nar "As the words leave Hermione's lips, the strings return to their dormant state."
her "*Phew*..." ("soft", "narrow", "worried", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "Now was that so hard?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "..." ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")

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@ -3497,7 +3497,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_public_return:
her "Why would I...--"
gen "Just say it...{w=0.4} I'll even give you some points if you do."
her "I--{w=0.4} I am a kinky girl..."
gen "\"That...\""
gen "\"That\"..."
her "That loves being edged..."
her "...and denied an orgasm..."
gen "Ten points to Gryffindor!"

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@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
gen "Could you put on this latex outfit for me?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
if her_whoring < 22:
her "Latex outfit?" ("open", "squint", "base", "mid")
her "*Whoa*... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
her "Whoa... This is skin tight!" ("clench", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "I know! Glad you're as excited as I am!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "I... How do you put this on?" ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "Using lots of patience I reckon..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ label her_reaction_equip_outfit(item):
elif item == her_outfit_poker: #Req 19 (panties, bra)
gen "I spent some tokens getting this outfit for you..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
if her_whoring < 22:
her "*Whoa*..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
her "Whoa..." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
gen "I know... Quite intricate is it not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "You... you want me to wear this?" ("normal", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "I mean, I am a winner after all..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ label lun_reaction_touch(what):
lun "Please... Help me get rid of them again..." ("crooked_smile", "narrow", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
elif lun_tier == 4:
random:
lun "*Whoa*... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
lun "Whoa... I didn't think just using your mouth could produce such a strong response." ("open", "wide", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
lun "*Ah*... It's almost like a ripple of water... Except running through my body..." ("soft", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
lun "*Mmm*... Those nasty Wrackspurts... I can feel them getting agitated already..." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "downR", cheeks="blush")
elif lun_tier == 3:

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@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_2:
her "No... But he was close enough for me to feel his..." ("mad", "squint", "worried", "up")
her "His..." ("base", "slit", "worried", "ahegao")
gen "His what, Miss Granger?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes" ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
her "His penis... It brushed up against the robes." ("annoyed", "closed", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "How did he manage that?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well... The boy wasn't there for the purpose of relieving himself... Well, at least not how one would expect it..." ("open", "closed", "angry", "mid", cheeks="blush")
gen "He was jacking it!?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")