* Fixed issues reported by Lint.
* Minor writing adjustments/fixes.
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Johnny28 2024-09-09 15:13:21 +02:00
parent 791457c884
commit 1571daa6f7
7 changed files with 19 additions and 21 deletions

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@ -2459,7 +2459,7 @@ label cho_quid_E14:
show cho_handjob eyes_open_narrow_forward as cg with d3
cho "Yes, you're completely right [name_genie_cho]..."
cho "Even though I didn't drink it, I lied, and made you believe that I did... Just so I could fulfill my desires..."
cho "Even though I didn't drink it, I lied, and made you believe that I did... Just so I could fulfil my desires..."
play sound "sounds/boing05.ogg"
show cho_handjob penis_hard as cg with vpunch

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@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ label hg_pf_strip_T6_fingering:
her "If you must know...{w=0.4} I was thinking about the time I corrected professor Snape on the ingredients of a \"Hiccoughing Solution\"." ("open", "narrow", "worried", "down")
gen "....." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
her "It was--{w=0.2} /shudder}*Ah*...{/shudder}{w=0.4} {heart} in front of the entire class as well." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
her "It was--{w=0.2} {shudder}*Ah*...{/shudder}{w=0.4} {heart} in front of the entire class as well." ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")
her "He refused to let me answer any questions for a week after that." ("base", "narrow", "worried", "down")
her "But it was worth it..." ("soft", "happy", "base", "R")
her "The look on his face when he realised he was wrong...{heart}" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "up")

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@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ label forest_BJ_3: #Complete BJ with Myrtle appearing after the cumshot
pause
her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*"
show her_forest bj h17 as cg
her {bounce}"*Ah*....{/bounce}{heart}{heart}{heart}"
her "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}{heart}{heart}{heart}"
her "I'm surprised how often we bump into each other out here, [name_genie_hermione]..."
show her_forest bj h16 as cg
her "*Glck* *Shlrp* *Gluck*"

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@ -1612,7 +1612,7 @@ label hg_vibrators_personal:
show her_vibrators_personal eyebrows_worried eyes_squint_crossed as cg with d5
her "{shake}*Aheeeee*!! [name_genie_hermione], I can't-{/shake}-"
her "{shake}*Aheeeee*!! [name_genie_hermione], I can't--{/shake}"
gen "Answer me!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "{shake}*Ahhh*...{w=0.2} *Ahee*...{w=0.2} I...{/shake}"
gen "Tell me you want to cum!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ label hg_pr_cumslut:
$ hermione.set_cum(hair="heavy")
gen "{/bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "{bounce}*Ah*...{/bounce}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her ".............." ("angry", "base", "worried", "mid")
call her_chibi_scene("hj_cum_on_done")

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@ -44,7 +44,6 @@ label jerk_off:
nar "You lack the item required for this option."
jump .choice
nar "You cum all over Hermione's panties, and then use them to wipe the cum off the floor..."
"-Think about Cho!-" if not states.cho.ev.panty_thief.acquired and states.cho.unlocked:
nar "You fantasise about Cho."
random:
@ -72,7 +71,6 @@ label jerk_off:
nar "You lack the item required for this option."
jump .choice
nar "You cum all over Cho's panties, and then use them to wipe the cum off the floor..."
"-Think about Luna!-" if states.lun.unlocked:
nar "You fantasise about Luna."
random:
@ -200,7 +198,7 @@ label jerk_off:
random: #Post orgasm dialogue
gen "(That's the stuff...)" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "(There we go... One nut a day keeps the existential dread at bay..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "(There we go... One nut a day keeps the existential dread at bay...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block:
gen "(...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "(This was a pretty sweet jerk-off session...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -39,10 +39,9 @@ label phoenix_feed:
random:
gen "I already fed it today." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "The poor thing doesn't even need more food today, it's all set." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Let's leave the Phoenix to its nap. It had enough for the day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Let's leave the phoenix to its nap... It had enough for the day." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "This phoenix prefers to take things slow and steady." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "It's full up and won't need to eat till tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I wonder if I pet you enough, would you magically transform into a sexy woman?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
pause .8
jump main_room_menu
@ -57,20 +56,20 @@ label phoenix_pet:
random:
gen "Who's a good bird?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
"*Pat* *Pat* *Pat*..."
"*Pat* *Pat* *Pat*"
gen "Glad you aren't as noisy as Iago..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Can't resist a little head scratch, eh?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Nice feathers, wouldn't want to pluck those out..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "See? I scratch your back, you scratch mine." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 20 > states.bird_petted_times > 10:
gen "I've petted you {number=states.bird_petted_times} times. Just a couple more, and I'm sure something will happen... Right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I've petted you {number=states.bird_petted_times} times... Just a couple more, and I'm sure something will happen...{w=0.4} Right?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 30 > states.bird_petted_times > 20:
gen "How many more times do I have to pet you for you to do something? It's been {number=states.bird_petted_times} already!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 40 > states.bird_petted_times > 30:
gen "Dear diary, it's been {number=states.bird_petted_times} pets since I landed here, yet that stubborn bird still refuses to talk to me." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 50 > states.bird_petted_times > 40:
gen "I pet you patiently, but all I get is silence. Wait, how many times was it again? {number=states.bird_petted_times}?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I pet you patiently, but all I get is silence... Wait, how many times was it again? {number=states.bird_petted_times}?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 60 > states.bird_petted_times > 50:
gen "I've read about talking birds, but you must have missed that chapter." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if 70 > states.bird_petted_times > 60:
@ -94,23 +93,23 @@ label phoenix_pet:
faw "..."
block if 300 > states.bird_petted_times > 200:
gen "Hello darkness my old friend..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "*cawk*"
faw "*Sqwawk*"
gen "There's no way that fucking worked!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Seriously, though, can you talk now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "..."
gen "... Just great." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
block if states.bird_petted_times > 300:
gen "I can't believe I'm still doing this." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "AHHHH AFTER TEN THOUSAND YEARS I'M FREE!"
gen "BY THE GREAT DESERT SANDS, IT FINALLY WORKED!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "But wait, I've only been doing this for {number=states.env.day}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "Oh, really? Well, I still have time for a nap then."
gen "WAIT A FUCKING—" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "{shake}Aahh!!! After ten thousand years, I'm free!{/shake}"
gen "{size=+4}By the great desert sands, it finally worked!{/size}" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Hold on... Ten thousand years? I've only been doing this for {number=states.env.day}..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
faw "Oh, really? Well, I still have some time for a nap then."
gen "{size=+4}Wait a fucking—-{/size}" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
call gen_chibi("sit_behind_desk")
with blackfade
gen "Ugh... I guess I must have fell asleep at some point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "*Ugh*... I guess I must have fell asleep at some point..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Was it all but a dream?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
jump main_room_menu
@ -124,5 +123,6 @@ label phoenix_pet:
gen "It's in a post-pet state, I should leave it alone." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I don't want to cause carpel-talon tunnel." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Gave that bird a good ruffling, now off to groom a griffin." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I wonder if I pet you enough, would you magically transform into a sexy woman?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
jump main_room_menu