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* Fixed some narrator calls. * Minor writing improvements.
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@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event)
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# and so it does make sense from a narration standpoint.
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if not hermione.is_equipped_item(her_neckwear_whore_collar):
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play sound "sounds/collar_click.ogg"
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nar ">You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her."
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nar "You grab her by the collar, swiftly unlocking it and taking it off of her."
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hide screen blkfade
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with d3
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@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ label whore_scene: #(locked behind public reputation and last sex event)
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her "A present?" ("soft", "wink", "worried", "mid_soft", cheeks="blush", trans=d3)
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gen "Yes, it's a lovely piece of jewellery to commemorate your self-acceptance." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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nar ">You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago."
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nar "You present Hermione the collar you have taken off her neck a moment ago."
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her "The collar? You're giving it to me?" ("open", "happy", "base", "mid",cheeks="blush")
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her "And how is that supposed to be a piece of jewellery?" ("annoyed", "narrow", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
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@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
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her "No...{w=0.4} Are you sure you gave me the right potion--" ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down")
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her "**Eekh*!!!" ("clench", "wide", "base", "stare") #shocked
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nar ">Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom."
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nar "Hermione jumps as the potion begins to take effect, bouncing her bossom."
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gen "You were saying?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "This... It feels a bit strange..." ("angry", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
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@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
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her "Yes...{w=0.4} There's a slight tingling sensation..." ("angry", "narrow", "base", "down", cheeks="blush")
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gen "(Some side effect perhaps?)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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nar ">Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body."
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nar "Hermione's breasts expand as the potion spreads through her body."
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$ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1)
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play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg"
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@ -617,13 +617,13 @@ label her_potion_breasts_give:
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her "*Ah*...." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "up", cheeks="blush") #pleasure
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nar ">Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect."
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nar "Hermione shivers as the potion begins to take effect."
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gen "There it is..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Is--{w=0.2} Is it normal for the potion to make them so sensitive?" ("grin", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
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gen "Sounds like a side effect, but I'd call that better than advertised." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} What...{w=0.4} What's that supposed to mean?" ("smile", "narrow", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
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nar ">Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body."
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nar "Hermione's breasts bounces slightly as the potion spreads through her body."
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$ hermione.equip(her_chest_breasts1)
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play sound "sounds/boing02.ogg"
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@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ label luna_chitchat:
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block:
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lun "I had a strange dream last night..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
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lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
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lun "I was alone, sitting by a tree, when suddenly a rabbit carrying a pocket-watch jumped by..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
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lun "Must've been the cheese I ate before going to bed..." ("open", "base", "base", "down")
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block:
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@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
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if luna.is_worn("top"):
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gen "Now then..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Let's start with your breasts." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Take that top off for me will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Take that top off for me, will you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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lun "Of course, [name_genie_luna]." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
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#Luna takes top off
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@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
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lun "So...{w=0.4} Do you think this should work, [name_genie_luna]?" ("open", "base", "raised", "mid")
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gen "Oh...{w=0.4} It's working alright." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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nar "Focusing your attention on the girls breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..."
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nar "Focusing your attention on the girl's breasts, you feel your cock harden more and more with each stroke..."
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lun "Great! So what do I have to do to get the Wrackspurts out of them?" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")
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gen "*Mmm*...{w=0.4} The what, sorry?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ label ll_pf_inspect_T2_E1_intro:
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nar "Luna's cheeks burns with red as she keeps grinding on the edge of your desk."
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gen "(Poor girl is literally edging...)" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Alright, you have convinced me [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Alright, you have convinced me, [name_luna_genie]... I'll do it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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nar "Luna stops her grinding, and begins jumping happily on the spot. Her tits bouncing up and down as she does so."
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@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ label name_luna_genie:
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lun "Alright, I suppose I am a girl after all." ("grin", "narrow", "base", "mid")
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elif name_luna_genie == "Partner":
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lun "[name_luna_genie]?" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid")
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gen "Yes, we're partners in venture are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "Yes, we're partners in this venture, are we not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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lun "Oh right!" ("angry", "base", "base", "mid")
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lun "Of course, you can call me that!" ("grin", "base", "base", "mid")
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elif name_luna_genie == "Bimbo":
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