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LoafyLemon 2022-09-07 19:02:01 +01:00
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game/scripts/characters/hermione/events/requests/flash_your_tits.rpy
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@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
hide hermione hide hermione
with fade with fade
her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff common-room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..." her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff Common Room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..."
her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..." her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..."
her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..." her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..."
her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..." her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..."
@ -287,14 +287,13 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
with fade with fade
gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "So, did the guy even see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "You've got one tit out at least. As a wise man once said--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well, I think he may have seen the one..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") gen "{i}A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush.{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Although, from the way he was looking at me..."
her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit." her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit."
her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R") her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid") her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")