Proofreading
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@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
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hide hermione
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with fade
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her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff common-room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..."
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her "So, today I've been standing in one of the corridors near the entrance to the Hufflepuff Common Room, anticipating the moment he usually leaves for class..."
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her "As I waited, I started feeling increasingly worried that something might go wrong..."
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her "And, of course, as I would soon find out, everything that could - did..."
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her "I thought that I had everything planned perfectly, but when the moment of him walking down the corridor finally arrived..."
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with fade
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gen "*Hmm*..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "So, did the guy even see your tits or not?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Well, I think he may have seen the one..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
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her "Although, from the way he was looking at me..."
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gen "You've got one tit out at least. As a wise man once said--" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "{i}A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush.{/i}" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "Well... I don't know if he ever realised I was trying to do something for his benefit."
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her "......................" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "R")
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her "I'm sorry, [genie_name]..." ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
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gen "That's alright..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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gen "A tit in the hand is worth two in the bush." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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her "[genie_name]?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid")
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gen "I wouldn't expect you to perform perfectly this early in your training anyway..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
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