Minor fixes

* Fixed missing expression during "a bad time to disrobe" mirror story.
* Minor writing fixes.
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Johnny28 2023-03-08 16:12:03 +01:00
parent a84c8063df
commit fed21d20de
3 changed files with 4 additions and 4 deletions

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@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
with d3
pause 2
sna "The past several month were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26")
sna "The past several months were the best months of my life, Genie..." ("snape_26")
sna "Thank you for that...{w=0.3} you incredible traveller from another world..."
sna "Thank you, my friend..."
gen "I don't know what to say, Severus..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ label ball_ending_E1:
gen "Yes, \"Dear [word_01]\" fits perfectly..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
"*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
"*scribble-scribble-scribble*"
gen "...{w=0.4} \" it is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "...{w=0.4} \"It is time for me to go back\"..." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
call gen_chibi("paperwork_idle")
with d3
gen "What should I write now?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label ending_after:
her "I couldn't help having this bad feeling in my stomach the entire day." ("soft", "closed", "base", "stare", cheeks="blush")
her "It's stayed there up until now...{w} But now it's finally feeling as if the pain has started to go away..." ("upset", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
">Not knowing how to respond, you stand there in silence for a moment until Hermione pulls you towards her and you both begin moving along with the music once more."
">After what only feels like seconds the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you."
">After what only feels like seconds, the music comes to a close and Hermione takes a step back to look up at you."
gen "You look tired girl, you'd better head off to bed...{w=0.4} there's always tomorrow." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Oh, yes... I suppose so..." ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush")
her "Good night then..." ("base", "happy", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")

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@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ label a_bad_time_to_disrobe_part_1:
gen "How can you be naked...{w=0.2} --ish?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well, I had to keep my underwear on...{w=0.2} I'd get cold otherwise." ("soft", "narrow", "base", "R")
gen "Cold? How would you be cold with the cloak on?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "*Ehm*..." ("digust", "base", "base", "mid")
her "*Ehm*..." ("disgust", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "*Sigh*... Just tell me what happened next." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well, a few of the boys were in there." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
her "They were playing wizards chess..." ("base", "base", "base", "mid")