Fixes and improvements

Mirror of Erised:
* Set doll positioning at start of mirror stories to ensure dolls are correct.
* Adjusted Doll flip on "A booty at sea" story.
* Removed Doll Cum layers on "A booty at sea" story as genie cums inside/on her back.
* Improved "A bad time to disrobe" writing.

* "Flash your tits", Minor writing fix
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Johnny 2022-10-20 18:44:56 +02:00
parent d1c37b11eb
commit 0dada1d367
9 changed files with 145 additions and 136 deletions

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@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ label hg_pr_flash_T3_E2:
with d5 with d5
her "We were suddenly interrupted by the sounds of the other Hufflepuff students footsteps around the corner." her "We were suddenly interrupted by the sounds of the other Hufflepuff students footsteps around the corner."
her "So, before even got to properly take in his reaction, I had to put my clothes back into place, and quickly." her "So, before even getting the chance to properly take in his reaction, I had to put my clothes back into place, and quickly."
show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose3 eyes_clenched mouth_soft as cg show her_flash_public npc_pose3 hermione_pose3 eyes_clenched mouth_soft as cg
with d5 with d5

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@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2():
with d3 with d3
san2 "Now check out this girl!" san2 "Now check out this girl!"
ton "" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid", hair="happy", xpos="mid", trans=d3) ton "" ("horny", "narrow", "base", "mid", hair="happy", xpos="mid", ypos="base", trans=d3)
call ctc call ctc
hide tonks_main hide tonks_main
sna "Now that is a present!" ("snape_13", trans=d3) sna "Now that is a present!" ("snape_13", trans=d3)
@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ label a_christmas_tale2():
show ch_ton elf zorder tonks_chibi.zorder at Transform(pos=(750, 430), xzoom=1) show ch_ton elf zorder tonks_chibi.zorder at Transform(pos=(750, 430), xzoom=1)
with d3 with d3
her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush", trans=dissolve) her "" ("soft", "base", "base", "mid", cheeks="blush", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d3)
nar "In front of him a girl, no longer concealed." nar "In front of him a girl, no longer concealed."
nar "With a bow around her pussy and ribbons around her tits." nar "With a bow around her pussy and ribbons around her tits."

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@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ label a_white_christmas:
call ton_chibi("stand", xpos="far_right", ypos="base") call ton_chibi("stand", xpos="far_right", ypos="base")
with d3 with d3
ton "I want a clean match... No trickery!" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "L", ypos="base", trans=d3) ton "I want a clean match... No trickery!" ("open", "base", "annoyed", "L", xpos="base", ypos="base", trans=d3)
ton "Don't you dare to even grope!" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "L") ton "Don't you dare to even grope!" ("soft", "narrow", "annoyed", "L")
$ renpy.sound.play("sounds/crowd_stomping.ogg") $ renpy.sound.play("sounds/crowd_stomping.ogg")

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@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ label eating_for_pleasure:
gen "{size=+4}Come in!{/size}" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "{size=+4}Come in!{/size}" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
pause 0.5 pause 0.5
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="desk", ypos="base") call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="desk", ypos="base")
her "Your order, sir!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", trans=d3) her "Your order, sir!" ("smile", "happyCl", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3)
gen "What...{w=0.3} the hell...{w=0.3} is this!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What...{w=0.3} the hell...{w=0.3} is this!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "What do you mean... Did we get the wrong toppings?" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid") her "What do you mean... Did we get the wrong toppings?" ("annoyed", "base", "worried", "mid")
gen "Toppings?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Toppings?!" ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ label panty_raid:
call her_chibi("stand","mid","base") call her_chibi("stand","mid","base")
call hide_blkfade call hide_blkfade
her "Hello [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", flip=False) her "Hello [genie_name]." ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3, flip=False)
her "" ("base") her "" ("base")
gen "Good day [hermione_name]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Good day [hermione_name]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "How would you feel about going out and earning thirty-five points for your house today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "How would you feel about going out and earning thirty-five points for your house today?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label panty_raid:
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
her "Hello [genie_name], you called?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", flip=False) her "Hello [genie_name], you called?" ("open", "base", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3, flip=False)
her "" ("base") her "" ("base")
gen "Hello to you too, [hermione_name]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Hello to you too, [hermione_name]." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "Say...{w=0.3} would you like to earn some points today girl?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Say...{w=0.3} would you like to earn some points today girl?" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ label panty_raid:
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
gen "Well, well, well... if it isn't my favourite minx!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Well, well, well... if it isn't my favourite minx!" ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Good morning to you too, [genie_name]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", flip=False) her "Good morning to you too, [genie_name]." ("open", "closed", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3, flip=False)
her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("base", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "What brings you here this time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "What brings you here this time?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
her "Well... I..." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush") her "Well... I..." ("open", "base", "base", "R", cheeks="blush")
@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ label panty_raid:
call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base") call her_walk(action="enter", xpos="mid", ypos="base")
her "Hello, [genie_name].{heart}" ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid", flip=False) her "Hello, [genie_name].{heart}" ("smile", "wink", "base", "mid", xpos="right", ypos="base", trans=d3, flip=False)
her "" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid") her "" ("smile", "base", "base", "mid")
gen "[hermione_name]! My favourite slut." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "[hermione_name]! My favourite slut." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
gen "I have another riddle for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I have another riddle for you." ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ label suck_and_run:
call bld call bld
gen "Getting into the Halloween spirit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Getting into the Halloween spirit?" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
ton "Of course!" ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid", ypos="head", flip=False) ton "Of course!" ("grin", "wide", "base", "mid", xpos="base", ypos="head", flip=False)
ton "I've been looking forward to the Halloween feast ever since I got here." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid") ton "I've been looking forward to the Halloween feast ever since I got here." ("crooked_smile", "closed", "base", "mid")
ton "Brings back memories." ("base", "base", "base", "downR") ton "Brings back memories." ("base", "base", "base", "downR")
gen "*Ha-hah*, yeah... That food thing that I do all the time. Love it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "*Ha-hah*, yeah... That food thing that I do all the time. Love it!" ("base", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")

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@ -134,12 +134,16 @@ label room_of_requirement:
$ mirror_image = Null() $ mirror_image = Null()
call gen_chibi("stand", flip=True) call gen_chibi("stand_shocked", flip=True)
gen "A what?!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "A what?!" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "A porn creator. Well, technically it's used to let you live out your fantasies, be they impure or not. So not necessarily porn." ("snape_01") sna "A porn creator. Well, technically it's used to let you live out your fantasies, be they impure or not. So not necessarily porn." ("snape_01")
gen "And you didn't tell me a thing like this existed?" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "And you didn't tell me a thing like this existed?" ("open", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "Well, it didn't exist until I made it... and I thought it was moved or destroyed." ("snape_26") sna "Well, it didn't exist until I made it... and I thought it was moved or destroyed." ("snape_26")
call gen_chibi("stand", flip=False)
gen "Get out." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "Get out." ("angry", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "What?" ("snape_05") sna "What?" ("snape_05")
gen "I said get out, I found it so I get to keep it." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head") gen "I said get out, I found it so I get to keep it." ("grin", xpos="far_left", ypos="head")
sna "But, I thought maybe I could move..." ("snape_06") sna "But, I thought maybe I could move..." ("snape_06")